Sonic The Hedgehog - Carnival Night Zone Act 1 · forum

MaybeLater_x

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MaybeLater_x 2008-05-28T16:46:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 July 2008 at 21:21:11

Artist: Sonic The Hedgehog
Title: Carnival Night Zone Act 1
BPM: 109.98
Filesize: 3172kb
Play Time: 01:05
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.36 stars, 70 notes)
Normal (4.02 stars, 108 notes)
Hard (4.87 stars, 181 notes)

Download: Sonic The Hedgehog - Carnival Night Zone Act 1
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I wasn't quite sure what to do with this Beatmap. After the half way point the song loops, so I only did the first half of the song.

Adding other difficulties now. Awaiting feedback.

Edited: Changed couple things Dakeyrus mentioned on Hard.

Edited: Added in some graphics + increased circle size and decreased drain rate and overall difficulty

Edited: Offsets changed, BMP for Hard changed.

Last edited by MaybeLater_x 2008-07-17T20:19:40+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

ROMaster2

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ROMaster2 2008-06-18T21:57:36+00:00

Osu server error (I think), try reuploading again.

awp

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awp 2008-06-23T18:38:17+00:00

MaybeLater_x wrote:
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 June 2008 at 22:55:58

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move failed

Well that's interesting. I take it you didn't read the announcement and did a Standard Submission.

MaybeLater_x

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MaybeLater_x 2008-06-28T16:51:16+00:00

Bump.

I think I've finished tinkering and adding difficulties and such now.
Any feedback?

Dakeyrus

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Dakeyrus 2008-06-29T19:40:43+00:00

Hmm, this is a pretty damn good map. A little boring graphics wise (Hint, hint), but pretty solid nonetheless

. I'd like to see a background and some custom colours!

Only a couple spacing issues I've noticed, but not *technically* wrong I don't think. I'm just being picky:

00:26:65 - (1,2,3,4,5) - The green ones, (3) is spaced furthur away from the rest of them but the timing is consistent all the way through. I'd consider moving it on the grid to a bit closer. Might need to up your grid level for this, not sure what you've got it set at.

This happen for a lot of those streams from that part to about 00:33:14. Take a look and you'll see what I mean. Like I said, not sure the spacing is WRONG, just picky :C.

00:43:55 - (1,2) - (2) has a very close hit timing to the end of (1), should be closer.

I loved the triplets at the end. Good job man. Very good map. Looking forward to the other difficulties.

Dakeyrus

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Dakeyrus 2008-06-29T20:41:27+00:00

Hmm that was odd, I only got Hard Mode when I downloaded. Just noticed there are 2 other difficulties. My feedback from before was for Hard, I'll go over the rest in a bit. Just heading into town for a couple hours, remind me when I get back if you're around

peppy

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peppy 2008-07-01T21:06:46+00:00

Pretty cool map.

I would suggest increase the circle size on hard 1 notch, and decreasing overall difficulty.... and drain rate

. At the moment those difficulty settings are really drawing attention away from the difficulty of the actual beat placement in the map.

Starred

MaybeLater_x

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MaybeLater_x 2008-07-01T21:20:48+00:00

Fixed up all pointers; added custom spinner, background image and colour sets for all 3 difficulties.

Dakeyrus wrote:
Hmm that was odd, I only got Hard Mode when I downloaded. Just noticed there are 2 other difficulties. My feedback from before was for Hard, I'll go over the rest in a bit. Just heading into town for a couple hours, remind me when I get back if you're around

I should hope there isn't a problem with normal/easy being downloaded... everything's had a full submission now so I should think that it would all work fine. Maybe it was just a one-off.

Thanks for the feedback btw. :] Much appreciated.

Dakeyrus

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Dakeyrus 2008-07-02T06:34:12+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MaybeLater_x

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MaybeLater_x 2008-07-02T22:17:33+00:00

I agree, the spinner is ugly.

That's what happens when you leave me to do the graphics.
Do you think I should take the spinner out and just leave it as the default?

Tapdancingmetroid

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Tapdancingmetroid 2008-07-02T23:30:35+00:00

The beatmap looks great. I couldn't find any problems. :3
Whether or not you want to keep the spinner is up to you.
*bubbled

machol30

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machol30 2008-07-04T01:56:08+00:00

This is one my favorites. I didn't find anything wrong with it either.
except... Easy: 00:39:24: needs break.

I'll give you this time to get of the spinner if you want before it's ranked.

Also, you should know, I've already mapped a remix of this here.

Gemi

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Gemi 2008-07-06T00:14:59+00:00

The spinner looks good imo. Life drain is pretty heavy, but it's ok too. The timing seems to be a bit off. I had to click just a little too early, probably 3-6ms. Fix that and I'm ok with the map.

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Saturos 2008-07-06T21:09:14+00:00

Offset 4340. Change the BPM in Hard to 109.98 to match Easy and Normal. Currently it's at 109.95 for some reason. Resnap with 1/4 divisor and switch to 1/6 to fix that final stream at 01:03:81 (2,8).

Dropping to star for now.

MaybeLater_x

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MaybeLater_x 2008-07-06T21:15:47+00:00

I've decided I'm going to keep the spinner in because it doesn't look quite as bad I originally thought it did.

As requested, a break has been added for the easy difficulty.
Hard's BMP has been corrected and the notes have been resnapped.
All offsets have been adjusted.

Is everything all right now?