Sayaka- 毁灭世界 *shot*
[General]
add "MAXXXBURNING!!!!" to tags? it's the name of the album from which this song appears in.
[Oni]
(which btw seems too hard to be an Oni but since you have deaf-mutes already we'll just go with that).
00:24:709 (177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185) - I think this pattern starts to get boring after the break, maybe vary it a bit by deleting (181)? feels too much like jehovah's yahveh..
00:26:459 (192) - same thing.
00:27:792 (204) - ^
00:29:125 (215) - ^
00:36:542 (281) - could probably remove the finisher on this one, the bell sound is not really distinctively loud, also might help to change 00:36:709 (282) - to d.
00:39:209 (301) - same as above, and change back to kat to match the bell sound (I know I said just then that it isn't distinct, but it's for consistency lol)
00:51:209 - maybe you could add some SV change here, make it slower from here and make it gradually increase (to match the music)
00:54:625 (16) - change to kat = more appropriate. matches the sound better, I think this part would be nice if it were consistent with the first part after the spinner (just so you know what I'm talking about, I consider this the "third part".
01:09:709 (126,127,128) - change to all k? would be good to break away from the ddk ddk repetitve parts from before and it matches the sound.
01:16:209 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181) - change to all d? I feel there is only one tone of drum sound
01:26:875 (273,274,275,276,277,278) - same^
01:35:209 (344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356) - those are some really nice patterns, but I think it would make more sense if you swapped this combo with 01:33:875 (330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342) - . It seems to fit the music better.
01:37:875 (372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384) - same here, do whatever with 01:36:542 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370) - to reflect the choice made above
01:40:542 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412) - ^ with 01:39:209 (386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398) -
01:49:542 (499) - change to d? seems to fit the 1/6 drums better, but is still equally fine if you leave it.
02:38:042 (931) - to 02:57:875 (1169) - most ridiculous pattern ever lol. It's good but maybe you could add some gradual SV change here to reflect the buildup in the music?
03:17:625 - add a note here? may help lead into the 1/6 part immediately afterwards.
03:44:875 (1571,1572) - ctrl + g? music
03:45:125 (1573,1574) - change to double d?
03:45:375 (1575) - change to d as well - that way I think this part mirrors 03:42:042 (1550,1551,1552,1553,1554,1555,1556,1557,1558) - better.
03:55:542 (1670,1671,1672,1673,1674,1675) - same ^
04:21:875 (1894,1895,1896,1897,1898) - add finishers? these isolated sounds make it seem appropriate for them.
04:27:542 (1928,1929,1930,1931,1932,1933) - same as before with a similar pattern regarding the double notes.
idk what else to say. though it's very challenging, it's a very high quality map nevertheless.
Good luck with it!
m4m accomplished orz