[General] -> Delete silenthill - ture (huang99520).osb and full-submit (because it's not used) -> Silenthill is not an artist, and it should not be in the Artist field (but I don't know what is the real artist's name) -> Change source to Silent Hill 2 and remove video games in the tags. (Video Game will be set to this map's genre when this map gets ranked) -> This map is lacking of hitsounds, add more is better. -> Timing on the part after the break feels late, (maybe) it's 154.5 BPM. Not very sure though.
[Easy] 00:00:145 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps lower the volume gradually (100% -> 80% -> 60% -> 40%) using inheriting section? It gives more "dramatic" effect. (also apply on all difficulty if you want to) 00:06:378 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing? 00:09:495 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing? 00:14:170 (3) - I think you can add whistle/finish at the repeat and add whistle at end... Also, adjust with all parts like this. 00:18:846 (1,2,3) - No jumps on Easy! It's definitely too hard. 00:21:963 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:00:145 (1,2,3,4) 00:23:326 (x) - This break is too short, it's unnecessary I guess 00:25:469 (2) - Whistle at repeat? 00:27:028 (4) - ^ ...I won't mod hitsounds anymore. All you need is experiment with the hitsounds 00:37:937 (1) - Spacing? Also, it's too fast for a post-spinner notes in Easy. 00:50:015 (1) - Uh, it's too fast for a post-spinner notes too... Perhaps delete this and (3)?
Unfortunately I don't have much time, so I'll stop here Star!