1. Hard (4.98 stars, 430 notes)
2. Lunatic (5 stars, 701 notes)
3. Normal (3.12 stars, 174 notes)

Mianki wrote:

Normal:

00:22:159 (2) 1 grid up?
01:45:326 (2) Align with (1)?
02:27:493 (2) 1 grid up?

Hard:

00:26:076 (2) 1 grid up?
01:02:826 (4) 1 grid right?
01:05:659 (3) 1 grid down?
02:16:826 (2.4) (2) 1 grid right and 2 down. (4) 1 grid left
02:38:715 (5.6.7) All 1 grid up

all done

Lunatic:

00:42:326 (6) New combo?
dont think so 0 0

That's pretty much it . Awesome map ^^
Star~

arsrun wrote:

[hard]
00:51:243 spinner why don't you start this at 00:51:326?
01:15:159 (1)~01:19:159(4) notes were not snapped.changed timing as [lunatic].
01:20:493 (1)~01:24:493(7) ^
02:29:826 (1)~02:39:159(7) ^
00:45:326 这里的建议是连着排(不然感觉破坏节奏,打着也特别扭) 00:46:826只是一个结束顿音而已:

[lunatic]
00:26:159 (1,3) 2条SL在白线结束更适当一些. 其他不少3/4拍的SL也显得有些奇怪和别扭(个人意见,可以再问问BAT啊什么之类的3>)
00:42:409 (7) delete this note.
00:44:659 偶100%会在这里加note 3>
00:47:159 (1) delete this note.
02:00:997 这里和hard某处一样奇怪(也和前面设的节奏不同D:) (3,4)各提前1/2拍,顿尾音可加可不加.
02:01:830 (1) delete this note.
03:09:835 (1)~ 最后一段不开DS的话有点那啥了......(当然你要鬼畜也行>_<)

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
好多地方没音效>_>
Normal和Hard的timing和Lunatic的不一致啊._.

-Normal-
00:36:159 (2) - 既然前面哪段同样的位置是按DS放的这个也按DS放吧 ._.

-Lunatic-
好多地方摆的位置不太正 不是太美观>___,>
00:43:159 (1) - 往左边放一点>_.>
01:13:659 (3) - 往右放一格美观一些?
01:13:659 (3) - 把这些摆得对称一些 >_>像这样:

SPOILER

01:18:270 (3) - 往上1格 往右2格
01:18:492 (4,5) - 再调整下这2个 都往右移一格._.
01:23:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里同上 ._.
01:28:326 (9) - 往右1格
01:34:159 (2) - 先往右移1格 然后把结尾的点往左移1格
01:44:159 (6) - 往右上方移一格 (和2对称)
01:44:326 (7) - 右移2格上移1格
01:44:826 (3) - 往右1格
02:30:492 (4) - 左移1格
02:31:381 (2,4) - 左移2格
02:32:714 (2,4) - ^
02:32:937 (3) - 往右上移一格
02:33:381 (5) - 往左上移一格
下面的不说了 我改掉算了>_>

*star x3*

James2250 wrote:

Maximum size for sb is 800x600 so resize "Mini Light"
Go through and make sure that every timing section that changes the audio or hitsounds is placed 1/4 earlier (I saw lots of them that weren't like this)
Delete any really short breaks unless you think they are needed

Normal:
01:57:58 timing section not needed?
01:57:83 timing section not needed?
00:39:160 (3) - new combo (to match ones before it)
00:40:493 (3) - ^
02:13:159 (2) - stack end with 6
02:13:826 (1,2) - align
seems odd to have a break at the end just for a spinner, can you map the break or something?

Hard:
02:08:49 timing section not needed?
00:11:159 (6) - new combo
00:18:326 - is tiny break needed (hp drain isn't thattt high)
00:23:743 - ^
01:08:993 - ^
01:19:826 - I guess keep this one so people can rest for a second
01:25:076 - delete this one?
02:34:493 - ^
still don't like the long break basically just for a spinner

Lunatic:
check through to make sure all the timing sections are being used
Again I would remove most of the small breaks
00:15:493 (2,6) - stack these
01:02:492 (3,4) - could be stacked slightly better

nicely done
*star*

Mafiamaster wrote:

SB items should be no bigger than 800x600 dimension-wise.

Lunatic is the only difficulty without letterboxing enabled. Either disable them on all difficulties or enable it on this difficulty.