Thank you for mooding kwk :3
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano I see. fiexd
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound ok
get someone to translate if you dont understand.