GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size)

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rui

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!
Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother
Sorry all not fixed. Thank you mod.
Starfy

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
Topic Starter
HonKAn

StarForYou wrote:

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
2016/10/03 last
bbu
2018-05-18 21:22 bbu: 저같으면 00:20:673 (2) - 를 오버랩시키지않고 00:19:548 (1) - 꼬리에 블랭킷을 시키지않았을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 가끔 bn들이 저런 오버랩 잡는경우가 많아서
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 00:23:110 (2) -
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 이 피아노음이랑
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 00:23:485 (1) - 이쪽 보이스까지 다 잡으려고 하시는것 같은데
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: https://puu.sh/Aotal/e858ebd6a6.jpg
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 이 박자 추천드려요
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 적용해보니 상당히 잘어울리네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 앞에 흰틱음무시한게 좀 불편하네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 보이스맞춘거라 어쩔수없는면도 있긴하지만 .. 이건 마음대로 하시길
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 뉴콤의시작은 00:34:548 (1) - 여기가아니라
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 00:34:173 (2) - 여기부터입니다
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 보이스를 잘 들어주세요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 생각해보니 여기 앞 흰틱 음은없는데
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:33:798 (1) - 똑같은음인데도 불구하고 여긴 노트가있네요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 마음대로 하셔도 괜찮긴하지만 의외로 이런거 지적많이당해요 :)
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 개인적으로
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 00:39:423 (1,2,3) - 00:42:423 (1,2,3) - 00:45:423 (1,2,3) - 이런부분은
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 디스턴트를 맞춰줬으면 좋겠다는 생각이랄까
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 00:46:360 (4) -
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 이거 오버매피인거아시죠 ?
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: *오버매핑
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 지워주세요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 맵 비트가 거의 빠진곳없이 촘촘히흘러가는데 00:50:110 (2) - 갑자기 앞흰틱 비어지는거 좀아쉬ㅏ워요 ㅠㅠ
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 저같으면 https://puu.sh/AotjV/e9623cf23c.jpg 이렇게 모든보이스를 다 잡지않을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ㅆㅌㅊ 이거 좋은듯
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 00:58:735 (2,3) - 이거
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 01:00:235 (2,3) - 이거랑 디스턴트 맞춰도 이쁠것같아요
2018-05-18 21:32 bbu: 끝
Riana
00:05:673 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:08:298 (2) - ^
00:10:923 (2,1) - 오버랩 좀 애매한거같네요
00:22:548 (1,2) - 여긴 앞엔 보컬 아무것도 안했는데 00:28:173 (1,2,1,2) - 여긴 서클 2개쓰셨네요
00:23:485 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:548 (1,2,3,1) - 좋으신쪽으로 일관성있게 리듬해주시는게 좋을거같네요
00:46:360 (4) - 소리 안나는거같네요
00:52:360 (2) - 여기도 소리 없는거같네요

뉴콤 좀 주기가 짧은거같아요 대체로 ㄷ
Reillia
[rui]
00:02:298 (3) - how about change to 2 circles? cuz 00:02:673 - this rhythm is much stronger than 00:02:298 -
00:05:298 (3,3) - same ^
00:37:548 (1,2,3) - why ds change between these notes? there's any rhythm change on song 00:40:923 (1,2) - u use 1.0x ds here
01:11:673 (3,4) - this jump is a little bit huge for rhythm imo
01:14:298 (3,3) - same with 00:02:298 (3) -

[insane]
00:07:173 (3,1) - 블랭킷을 더 잘 씌워볼수 있다고 생각합니다 :D
00:46:548 (1,2,3,4) - 별다른 강조되는 음도 없는데 DS가 뜬금없이 너무 커진것 같네용 굉장히 이상하게 느껴졌습니다..
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음악은 점점 강해지는 분의기인데 SV는 점점 줄어드는게 좀 어색하게 느껴지네요
rui

[C u r i] wrote:

[rui]
00:02:298 (3) - how about change to 2 circles? cuz 00:02:673 - this rhythm is much stronger than 00:02:298 - I don't think keep.
00:05:298 (3,3) - same ^ same
00:37:548 (1,2,3) - why ds change between these notes? there's any rhythm change on song 00:40:923 (1,2) - u use 1.0x ds here Oops...I mistook it. fixed
01:11:673 (3,4) - this jump is a little bit huge for rhythm imo fixed
01:14:298 (3,3) - same with 00:02:298 (3) - same
Thank you [C u r i]
Topic Starter
HonKAn

bbu wrote:

2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 00:34:173 (2) - 여기부터입니다
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 보이스를 잘 들어주세요 OK

Riana wrote:

00:05:673 (1) - 뉴콤 오프? OK
00:08:298 (2) - ^ OK
00:23:485 (1) - 뉴콤 오프? OK
00:26:673 (1) - ^ OK

뉴콤 좀 주기가 짧은거같아요 대체로 ㄷ

[C u r i] wrote:

[insane]
00:07:173 (3,1) - 블랭킷을 더 잘 씌워볼수 있다고 생각합니다 :DOK
Thanks for your modding .
kwk
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Your soft-hitfinish has delay >5 ms

starfy
00:36:798 (3) - not sure what this slider is starting on? maybe can just map a circle at 00:37:548 - instead
01:24:798 (3) - ^

Zess
00:26:298 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/AoZT2/87277ed193.png try this rhythm instead? atm im not sure what exactly you are following since to me 00:27:048 (3) - this starts on nothing important
00:48:048 (2) - maybe follow vocal instead? ie map 00:48:235 - circle here instead since following on from 00:46:548 (1) - which follows vocals
01:19:548 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/AoZY4/c2601a311b.png something like this to follow vocals a bit more closely?

rui
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound

HonKAn
Your map must end at 01:30:048

Ranking Criteria:A mapset host must have mapped equal or more drain time than any guest difficulty mappers. This is to provide credit where credit is due.

00:19:548 (1,2) - why no jump here like in 00:16:548 (1,2) - 00:13:548 (1,2) - ?
01:02:298 (3,4) - 01:08:298 (3,4) - 01:14:298 (5,1) - 01:17:298 (3,1) - etc space these out further similar to 01:05:110 (3,4) - ?
~

get someone to translate if you dont understand.
rui

kwk wrote:

~
rui
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano I see. fiexd
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound ok
get someone to translate if you dont understand.
Thank you for mooding kwk :3
Zerss

kwk wrote:

Zess
00:26:298 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/AoZT2/87277ed193.png try this rhythm instead? atm im not sure what exactly you are following since to me 00:27:048 (3) - this starts on nothing important yup.
00:48:048 (2) - maybe follow vocal instead? ie map 00:48:235 - circle here instead since following on from 00:46:548 (1) - which follows vocals erm, not sure about it since compared to the other moments, drums grows way bigger than usual and i wanted to make it noticeable throughout the mapset
01:19:548 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/AoZY4/c2601a311b.png something like this to follow vocals a bit more closely? i believe using blue ticks without reverses on normal isnt something that fits so good so i kept the first object but the rest feels better
thanks for the mod, have a nice day
Topic Starter
HonKAn

kwk wrote:

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Your soft-hitfinish has delay >5 ms I confirmed.

HonKAn
Your map must end at 01:30:048

Ranking Criteria:A mapset host must have mapped equal or more drain time than any guest difficulty mappers. This is to provide credit where credit is due.
I confirmed.
00:19:548 (1,2) - why no jump here like in 00:16:548 (1,2) - 00:13:548 (1,2) - ?00:16:548 (1,2) - 00:13:548 (1,2) Remove the jump.
01:02:298 (3,4) - 01:08:298 (3,4) - 01:14:298 (5,1) - 01:17:298 (3,1) - etc space these out further similar to 01:05:110 (3,4) - ? 01:05:110 (3,4) - Remove the jump.
~

get someone to translate if you dont understand.
Thanks! kwk!
Starfy

kwk wrote:

starfy
00:36:798 (3) - not sure what this slider is starting on? maybe can just map a circle at 00:37:548 - instead It sounds so empty if there is no object to connect the sound so I prefer keep the slider for better connection
01:24:798 (3) - ^ Fixed
Thanks for mod!
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Starfy wrote:

kwk wrote:

starfy
00:36:798 (3) - not sure what this slider is starting on? maybe can just map a circle at 00:37:548 - instead It sounds so empty if there is no object to connect the sound so I prefer keep the slider for better connection
01:24:798 (3) - ^ Fixed
Thanks for mod!

Zerss wrote:

kwk wrote:

Zess
00:26:298 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/AoZT2/87277ed193.png try this rhythm instead? atm im not sure what exactly you are following since to me 00:27:048 (3) - this starts on nothing important yup.
00:48:048 (2) - maybe follow vocal instead? ie map 00:48:235 - circle here instead since following on from 00:46:548 (1) - which follows vocals erm, not sure about it since compared to the other moments, drums grows way bigger than usual and i wanted to make it noticeable throughout the mapset
01:19:548 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/AoZY4/c2601a311b.png something like this to follow vocals a bit more closely? i believe using blue ticks without reverses on normal isnt something that fits so good so i kept the first object but the rest feels better
thanks for the mod, have a nice day

rui wrote:

kwk wrote:

~
rui
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano I see. fiexd
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound ok
get someone to translate if you dont understand.
Thank you for mooding kwk :3
update
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kwk
wau
Zerss
:D~
Topic Starter
HonKAn
OMG~~~ :):)
Niedola
꺄아아아악 버블이야!!!!!
Realazy
You must not silence both slider ticks and slider slides together. insane does this a lot of times and even uses muted sliderends on top of that, so what's the point of ending these sliders so late then. if you dislike the sound of ticks so much, you may use tick rate 0.5 or a silent file for soft-slidertick, but you may not use 5% volume lines to achieve that

여보세요!

[Zerss's Normal]

00:07:173 (1,2,3) - i wouldn't really use this kind of variation here as it causes the stronger downbeat to be on a sliderend instead of emphasizing it properly like 00:01:173 (1,2,3,4) - does
00:35:673 (2,2) - this overlap can be pretty confusing since the 2nd slider appears before the first one has even ended, would be nice to at least unstack it from the sliderend
00:50:673 (2) - you should consider unstacking this since you don't use stacks for 3/4 rhythms and it could be very confusing with the 1/2 stack right before at 00:46:173 (4,1) - and the 1/1 stack right after at 00:52:548 (1,2) -
01:10:548 (4) - missed NC i assume? nc patterns in the kiai aren't that long

[rui's Hard]

you should consider lowering the AR here, 8 seems really over the top given how slow the song is and how simple is the map... 6 or7 would feel much better here imo

00:38:298 (2) - i don't really agree with this slider skipping a strong beat at 00:38:673 - considering both the guitar note and vocals, it would be nice if you could map this red tick in some way, like with a repeat slider, or 1/2 slider + circle, anything really

[Insane]

i really don't think you should use as many muted sliderends because you're muting both sliders which end on nothing, and sliders which end on actual sounds in the music... a clear example would be 00:38:298 (1,2) - where there are vocals on 1's sliderend, but it's muted, and there is nothing on 2's sliderend, which is also muted. it ignores the music a lot, and i don't agree with it

same concern as rui's diff, ar8.3 seems pretty high for this map, i think you should really consider lowering the AR here too, like 7.5 would be much better imo

00:34:173 (1) - i don't really understand why this has an NC, if you follow stuff like 00:30:798 (1,2) - then you should remove the NC on 00:34:173 (1) -
00:40:548 (1,2) - it would be better to swap NCs here since the vocals start on 2, not on 1
00:43:173 (1) - i don't understand why this is NC either
01:23:673 (1) - i don't think the spinner starts in a good spot here, it's going through 2 distinct sounds, and it would be better to start the spinner on 01:25:548 - and map a slider on 01:23:673 - for example, like the other diffs did

call me back once the things in bold are fixed and everyone has replied
rui

Realazy wrote:

[rui's Hard]

you should consider lowering the AR here, 8 seems really over the top given how slow the song is and how simple is the map... 6 or7 would feel much better here imo
OK. changed AR7

00:38:298 (2) - i don't really agree with this slider skipping a strong beat at 00:38:673 - considering both the guitar note and vocals, it would be nice if you could map this red tick in some way, like with a repeat slider, or 1/2 slider + circle, anything really
fixed. used note + 1/2 slider pattern.
Thank you Realazy
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