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alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this:

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff

Normal:
change ar to 4, od to 4 and hp can stay the same
00:02:298 - try not to put notes on top of sliders in normal diffs
00:06:798 - ^
00:24:798 - ^
00:28:173 - ^
ok when you see a note on top of slider just fix that anywhere else

Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother

Insane:
nothing wrong with this! nice job!

well that's it, nice map though 8-)
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Hey, just some shitty Insane mod:

00:30:423 (4) - remove this one and make 00:29:673 (3) - longer - I think it fits better here, you can hear vocal until this point and ignore the background sound.
00:33:423 (2) - make the distance snap look like 00:33:798 (1,2) -
00:40:923 (2) - [suggestion] maybe overlap this on 00:41:673 (4) -
00:43:173 (1) - kinda random NC for me
01:00:985 (2) - I don't feel this slider, I would make it shorter to red tick into Kiai
01:20:110 (2,3,4) - maybe just make it equilateral triangle, cuz for me its kinda weird to play (maybe just only me)

overall, the map is very cool, I like the song and the way you mapped it. hope you can rank it, gl!
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Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!


Insane:
nothing wrong with this! nice job!

well that's it, nice map though 8-)

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Hey, just some shitty Insane mod:

00:30:423 (4) - remove this one and make 00:29:673 (3) - longer - I think it fits better here, you can hear vocal until this point and ignore the background sound. ok
00:33:423 (2) - make the distance snap look like 00:33:798 (1,2) - ok
00:40:923 (2) - [suggestion] maybe overlap this on 00:41:673 (4) - nope
00:43:173 (1) - kinda random NC for me ok
01:00:985 (2) - I don't feel this slider, I would make it shorter to red tick into Kiai
01:20:110 (2,3,4) - maybe just make it equilateral triangle, cuz for me its kinda weird to play (maybe just only me) A good point.

overall, the map is very cool, I like the song and the way you mapped it. hope you can rank it, gl!
Thanks~ modding!
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Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!
Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother
Sorry all not fixed. Thank you mod.
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Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
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StarForYou wrote:

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
2016/10/03 last
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2018-05-18 21:22 bbu: 저같으면 00:20:673 (2) - 를 오버랩시키지않고 00:19:548 (1) - 꼬리에 블랭킷을 시키지않았을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 가끔 bn들이 저런 오버랩 잡는경우가 많아서
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 00:23:110 (2) -
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 이 피아노음이랑
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 00:23:485 (1) - 이쪽 보이스까지 다 잡으려고 하시는것 같은데
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: https://puu.sh/Aotal/e858ebd6a6.jpg
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 이 박자 추천드려요
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 적용해보니 상당히 잘어울리네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 앞에 흰틱음무시한게 좀 불편하네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 보이스맞춘거라 어쩔수없는면도 있긴하지만 .. 이건 마음대로 하시길
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 뉴콤의시작은 00:34:548 (1) - 여기가아니라
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 00:34:173 (2) - 여기부터입니다
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 보이스를 잘 들어주세요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 생각해보니 여기 앞 흰틱 음은없는데
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:33:798 (1) - 똑같은음인데도 불구하고 여긴 노트가있네요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 마음대로 하셔도 괜찮긴하지만 의외로 이런거 지적많이당해요 :)
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 개인적으로
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 00:39:423 (1,2,3) - 00:42:423 (1,2,3) - 00:45:423 (1,2,3) - 이런부분은
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 디스턴트를 맞춰줬으면 좋겠다는 생각이랄까
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 00:46:360 (4) -
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 이거 오버매피인거아시죠 ?
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: *오버매핑
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 지워주세요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 맵 비트가 거의 빠진곳없이 촘촘히흘러가는데 00:50:110 (2) - 갑자기 앞흰틱 비어지는거 좀아쉬ㅏ워요 ㅠㅠ
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 저같으면 https://puu.sh/AotjV/e9623cf23c.jpg 이렇게 모든보이스를 다 잡지않을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ㅆㅌㅊ 이거 좋은듯
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 00:58:735 (2,3) - 이거
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 01:00:235 (2,3) - 이거랑 디스턴트 맞춰도 이쁠것같아요
2018-05-18 21:32 bbu: 끝
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00:05:673 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:08:298 (2) - ^
00:10:923 (2,1) - 오버랩 좀 애매한거같네요
00:22:548 (1,2) - 여긴 앞엔 보컬 아무것도 안했는데 00:28:173 (1,2,1,2) - 여긴 서클 2개쓰셨네요
00:23:485 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:548 (1,2,3,1) - 좋으신쪽으로 일관성있게 리듬해주시는게 좋을거같네요
00:46:360 (4) - 소리 안나는거같네요
00:52:360 (2) - 여기도 소리 없는거같네요

뉴콤 좀 주기가 짧은거같아요 대체로 ㄷ
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[rui]
00:02:298 (3) - how about change to 2 circles? cuz 00:02:673 - this rhythm is much stronger than 00:02:298 -
00:05:298 (3,3) - same ^
00:37:548 (1,2,3) - why ds change between these notes? there's any rhythm change on song 00:40:923 (1,2) - u use 1.0x ds here
01:11:673 (3,4) - this jump is a little bit huge for rhythm imo
01:14:298 (3,3) - same with 00:02:298 (3) -

[insane]
00:07:173 (3,1) - 블랭킷을 더 잘 씌워볼수 있다고 생각합니다 :D
00:46:548 (1,2,3,4) - 별다른 강조되는 음도 없는데 DS가 뜬금없이 너무 커진것 같네용 굉장히 이상하게 느껴졌습니다..
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음악은 점점 강해지는 분의기인데 SV는 점점 줄어드는게 좀 어색하게 느껴지네요
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[C u r i] wrote:

[rui]
00:02:298 (3) - how about change to 2 circles? cuz 00:02:673 - this rhythm is much stronger than 00:02:298 - I don't think keep.
00:05:298 (3,3) - same ^ same
00:37:548 (1,2,3) - why ds change between these notes? there's any rhythm change on song 00:40:923 (1,2) - u use 1.0x ds here Oops...I mistook it. fixed
01:11:673 (3,4) - this jump is a little bit huge for rhythm imo fixed
01:14:298 (3,3) - same with 00:02:298 (3) - same
Thank you [C u r i]
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bbu wrote:

2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 00:34:173 (2) - 여기부터입니다
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 보이스를 잘 들어주세요 OK

Riana wrote:

00:05:673 (1) - 뉴콤 오프? OK
00:08:298 (2) - ^ OK
00:23:485 (1) - 뉴콤 오프? OK
00:26:673 (1) - ^ OK

뉴콤 좀 주기가 짧은거같아요 대체로 ㄷ

[C u r i] wrote:

[insane]
00:07:173 (3,1) - 블랭킷을 더 잘 씌워볼수 있다고 생각합니다 :DOK
Thanks for your modding .
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Your soft-hitfinish has delay >5 ms

starfy
00:36:798 (3) - not sure what this slider is starting on? maybe can just map a circle at 00:37:548 - instead
01:24:798 (3) - ^

Zess
00:26:298 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/AoZT2/87277ed193.png try this rhythm instead? atm im not sure what exactly you are following since to me 00:27:048 (3) - this starts on nothing important
00:48:048 (2) - maybe follow vocal instead? ie map 00:48:235 - circle here instead since following on from 00:46:548 (1) - which follows vocals
01:19:548 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/AoZY4/c2601a311b.png something like this to follow vocals a bit more closely?

rui
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound

HonKAn
Your map must end at 01:30:048

Ranking Criteria:A mapset host must have mapped equal or more drain time than any guest difficulty mappers. This is to provide credit where credit is due.

00:19:548 (1,2) - why no jump here like in 00:16:548 (1,2) - 00:13:548 (1,2) - ?
01:02:298 (3,4) - 01:08:298 (3,4) - 01:14:298 (5,1) - 01:17:298 (3,1) - etc space these out further similar to 01:05:110 (3,4) - ?
~

get someone to translate if you dont understand.
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kwk wrote:

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rui
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano I see. fiexd
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound ok
get someone to translate if you dont understand.
Thank you for mooding kwk :3
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kwk wrote:

Zess
00:26:298 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/AoZT2/87277ed193.png try this rhythm instead? atm im not sure what exactly you are following since to me 00:27:048 (3) - this starts on nothing important yup.
00:48:048 (2) - maybe follow vocal instead? ie map 00:48:235 - circle here instead since following on from 00:46:548 (1) - which follows vocals erm, not sure about it since compared to the other moments, drums grows way bigger than usual and i wanted to make it noticeable throughout the mapset
01:19:548 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/AoZY4/c2601a311b.png something like this to follow vocals a bit more closely? i believe using blue ticks without reverses on normal isnt something that fits so good so i kept the first object but the rest feels better
thanks for the mod, have a nice day
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kwk wrote:

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Your soft-hitfinish has delay >5 ms I confirmed.

HonKAn
Your map must end at 01:30:048

Ranking Criteria:A mapset host must have mapped equal or more drain time than any guest difficulty mappers. This is to provide credit where credit is due.
I confirmed.
00:19:548 (1,2) - why no jump here like in 00:16:548 (1,2) - 00:13:548 (1,2) - ?00:16:548 (1,2) - 00:13:548 (1,2) Remove the jump.
01:02:298 (3,4) - 01:08:298 (3,4) - 01:14:298 (5,1) - 01:17:298 (3,1) - etc space these out further similar to 01:05:110 (3,4) - ? 01:05:110 (3,4) - Remove the jump.
~

get someone to translate if you dont understand.
Thanks! kwk!
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kwk wrote:

starfy
00:36:798 (3) - not sure what this slider is starting on? maybe can just map a circle at 00:37:548 - instead It sounds so empty if there is no object to connect the sound so I prefer keep the slider for better connection
01:24:798 (3) - ^ Fixed
Thanks for mod!
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Starfy wrote:

kwk wrote:

starfy
00:36:798 (3) - not sure what this slider is starting on? maybe can just map a circle at 00:37:548 - instead It sounds so empty if there is no object to connect the sound so I prefer keep the slider for better connection
01:24:798 (3) - ^ Fixed
Thanks for mod!

Zerss wrote:

kwk wrote:

Zess
00:26:298 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/AoZT2/87277ed193.png try this rhythm instead? atm im not sure what exactly you are following since to me 00:27:048 (3) - this starts on nothing important yup.
00:48:048 (2) - maybe follow vocal instead? ie map 00:48:235 - circle here instead since following on from 00:46:548 (1) - which follows vocals erm, not sure about it since compared to the other moments, drums grows way bigger than usual and i wanted to make it noticeable throughout the mapset
01:19:548 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/AoZY4/c2601a311b.png something like this to follow vocals a bit more closely? i believe using blue ticks without reverses on normal isnt something that fits so good so i kept the first object but the rest feels better
thanks for the mod, have a nice day

rui wrote:

kwk wrote:

~
rui
00:28:548 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/Ap04h/a85bdf0c31.png maybe this rhythm? i think switching to following vocal is a bit strange when the rest of the section is following piano I see. fiexd
00:51:048 - maybe make this clickable? its loud sound ok
get someone to translate if you dont understand.
Thank you for mooding kwk :3
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