GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size)

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Starfy

bbj0920 wrote:

starfy
00:13:548 (1) - finish doesn't fit at all, for a calmful piano
00:19:548 (1) - ^
00:25:548 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1) - offscreen
01:17:673 (2) - ^ - yes, a bit
All fixed
http://puu.sh/n3KKz/e48b8610d2.zip
Topic Starter
HonKAn
2/12 UPDATE
Niedola
[Zerss' Normal]

00:37:548 (1) - Put the note inside 00:35:673 (2) - . it is just suggestion.

[Insane]

00:03:423 (1) - 완전 스택 시키지 마시고 옆으로 약간 빼는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요.
00:09:423 (1) - 그다지 상관 없기야 하겠지만. 너무 애매하게 붙어있는 게 아닐까요? DS 0.7 정도가 더 좋을 것 같아요.
00:30:423 (1) - 뉴콤 해제하셔야 할듯...
00:37:173 (1) - 혹시 리딩을 위해 뉴콤을 넣으신 거라면 빼도 상관 없을 것 같아요.
00:38:298 (1) - 슬라 꼬리 완전 덮으면 안될 것 같아요. 인센이니까 상관 없을지도 모르겠는데. 제가 보기에는 안 좋아보이네요.
01:11:673 (2) - ^
01:23:298 (2) - ^ 위 두개는 몰라도 이건 특히...
00:58:548 (1) - 나오는 음이 강렬할 편이니까 완전히 떨어뜨리는 게 더 멋질 것 같아요.




열심히 보긴 봤는데 다른 다른 난이도는 잘 안보이네요 ㅜㅠ
IntellectualBoy
M4M

[General]

Normal diff name is wrong. Please change this.
Zerss' Normal -> Zerss's Normal


[Zerss' Normal]

■ 00:26:673 (1,2,3,4) I think, this part rhythm a little strange here... so I recommend this part to follow lyrics


[Insane]

뉴콤보 문제가 너무많습니다, 인세인이라고해서 뉴콤보를 이런식으로 과하게 사용하는건 굉장히 노트 리딩이 어려워질뿐더러 플레이어 입장에선 굉장히 난감한 상황들이 발생합니다. 그리고 뉴콤보는 일관성있게 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그러니 꼭 수정해주세요

00:02:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:423 (1) - ^
00:04:173 (1) - ^
00:05:673 (1) - ^
00:06:423 (1) - ^
00:07:173 (1) - ^
00:07:548 (1) - Add NC
00:08:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:423 (1) - ^
00:10:173 (1) - ^
00:11:673 (1) - ^
00:23:110 (1) - ^
00:23:485 (1) - ^
00:24:798 (1) - ^
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:173 (1) - ^
00:30:423 (1) - ^
00:30:798 (1) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^
00:33:798 (1) - ^
00:36:423 (1) - ^
00:36:985 (1) - ^
00:37:173 (1) - ^
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:39:423 (1) - ^
00:40:923 (1) - ^
00:42:423 (1) - ^
00:43:173 (1) - ^
00:45:423 (1) - ^
00:46:360 (1) - ^
00:46:548 (2) - Add NC
00:48:235 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:798 (1) - ^
00:50:110 (1) - ^
00:50:673 (1) - ^
00:51:798 (1) - ^
00:54:048 (1) - ^
00:59:298 (1) - ^
01:00:235 (1) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - ^
01:02:673 (1) - ^
01:03:798 (1) - ^
01:05:110 (1) - ^
01:06:235 (1) - ^
01:08:110 (1) - ^
01:08:673 (1) - ^
01:09:798 (1) - ^
01:11:110 (1) - ^
01:12:798 (1) - ^
01:14:110 (1) - ^
01:14:673 (1) - ^
01:15:798 (1) - ^
01:17:110 (1) - ^
01:17:673 (1) - ^
01:18:423 (1) - ^
01:20:673 (1) - ^
01:21:235 (1) - ^
01:21:798 (1) - ^
01:23:110 (1) - ^


곡이 잔잔하고 맵도 괜찮아서 딱히 잡을게 없었네요 Good Luck ~
rui

bbj0920 wrote:

rui
AR7 fits way better IMO changed AR7.5
00:12:423 - mute from here to 00:12:798 - , these sounds have nothing to do with the song changed volume 10%
00:48:798 (3) - has to be notes, drum on 00:48:985 - definitely needs to be emphasized
neat I see. this placement change
Thank you bbj0920
Dailycare


[starfy's Easy]
00:14:673 (2) - Fix blanket
00:25:548 (1) - ^
01:20:673 (2) - ^

[Zerss' Normal]
00:06:798 (5,1,2) - imo it's better

[rui's Hard]
why did you use small CS as old-style beatmaps?

00:56:673 (2,2,2) - Move to (268, 104)

[Insane]
00:37:173 (1) - 뉴콤 해제
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음은 점점 상승하는데 슬라이더 속도는 점점 느려지네요.. 속도 역시 0.5에서 점점 상승하도록 하는게 어떨까요
01:13:548 (1) - 모양 맞추기보단 비슷한 파트처럼 앞선 노트와 거리를 벌리는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:17:110 (1,2) - 슬라-서클보단 앞처럼 서클-슬라가 좋을 것 같네요
Zerss

Moly wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]

00:37:548 (1) - Put the note inside 00:35:673 (2) - . it is just suggestion. if you mean, make a blanket with (2), then flow would be broken

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]

■ 00:26:673 (1,2,3,4) I think, this part rhythm a little strange here... so I recommend this part to follow lyrics are you talking about 00:25:548 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:28:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Because it was right in the middle of them xD

Dailycare wrote:

[Zerss' Normal]
00:06:798 (5,1,2) - imo it's better Well, it's following the piano, so i guess it's right
okay, no changes, waiting for Gloria Guard's answer
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Moly wrote:

[Insane]

00:03:423 (1) - 완전 스택 시키지 마시고 옆으로 약간 빼는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요. (ok)
00:09:423 (1) - 그다지 상관 없기야 하겠지만. 너무 애매하게 붙어있는 게 아닐까요? DS 0.7 정도가 더 좋을 것 같아요.(ok)
00:30:423 (1) - 뉴콤 해제하셔야 할듯... (ok)
00:37:173 (1) - 혹시 리딩을 위해 뉴콤을 넣으신 거라면 빼도 상관 없을 것 같아요. (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - 슬라 꼬리 완전 덮으면 안될 것 같아요. 인센이니까 상관 없을지도 모르겠는데. 제가 보기에는 안 좋아보이네요.
01:11:673 (2) - ^
01:23:298 (2) - ^ 위 두개는 몰라도 이건 특히... (ok)
00:58:548 (1) - 나오는 음이 강렬할 편이니까 완전히 떨어뜨리는 게 더 멋질 것 같아요. (ok)

Gloria Guard wrote:

M4M

[General]
Normal diff name is wrong. Please change this.
Zerss' Normal -> Zerss's Normal (ok)


[Insane]

뉴콤보 문제가 너무많습니다, 인세인이라고해서 뉴콤보를 이런식으로 과하게 사용하는건 굉장히 노트 리딩이 어려워질뿐더러 플레이어 입장에선 굉장히 난감한 상황들이 발생합니다. 그리고 뉴콤보는 일관성있게 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그러니 꼭 수정해주세요네.

00:02:298 (1) - Remove NC (ok)
00:03:423 (1) - ^
00:04:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:05:673 (1) - ^
00:06:423 (1) - ^
00:07:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:07:548 (1) - Add NC (ok)
00:08:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:423 (1) - ^
00:10:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:11:673 (1) - ^
00:23:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:23:485 (1) - ^
00:24:798 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:173 (1) - ^
00:30:423 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:30:798 (1) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^
00:33:798 (1) - ^
00:36:423 (1) - ^
00:36:985 (1) - ^
00:37:173 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:39:423 (1) - ^
00:40:923 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:42:423 (1) - ^
00:43:173 (1) - ^
00:45:423 (1) - ^
00:46:360 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:46:548 (2) - Add NC (ok)
00:48:235 (1) - Remove NC (ok)
00:48:798 (1) - ^
00:50:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:50:673 (1) - ^ (ok)
00:51:798 (1) - ^
00:54:048 (1) - ^
00:59:298 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:00:235 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:02:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:02:673 (1) - ^
01:03:798 (1) - ^
01:05:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:06:235 (1) - ^
01:08:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:08:673 (1) - ^
01:09:798 (1) - ^
01:11:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:12:798 (1) - ^
01:14:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:14:673 (1) - ^
01:15:798 (1) - ^
01:17:110 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:17:673 (1) - ^
01:18:423 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:20:673 (1) - ^
01:21:235 (1) - ^ (ok)
01:21:798 (1) - ^
01:23:110 (1) - ^ (ok)

Dailycare wrote:

[Insane]
00:37:173 (1) - 뉴콤 해제 (ok)
00:38:298 (1) - ^
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음은 점점 상승하는데 슬라이더 속도는 점점 느려지네요.. 속도 역시 0.5에서 점점 상승하도록 하는게 어떨까요
01:13:548 (1) - 모양 맞추기보단 비슷한 파트처럼 앞선 노트와 거리를 벌리는게 좋을 것 같아요 (ok)
01:17:110 (1,2) - 슬라-서클보단 앞처럼 서클-슬라가 좋을 것 같네요 (ok)
감사합니다.
depzdai
#modreq. Wow, the map is good...
- 00:29:673 (7) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rc9jV/710fe4ecbe.png
- 00:37:548 (1,2) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rc8vw/8bbd21de46.png
- 00:52:548 (1) - A map would be more interesting with some slight changes of a pattern. https://puu.sh/rcbGq/6a8f596c28.png
- 00:17:673 (2) - ctrl+g. A pattern with lots of ways to play with always makes the players less bored.
- 00:49:173 (2,1) - Blanket.
- 01:04:923 (2,3) - Can it be blanket? https://puu.sh/rcacr/3674b0deac.png
Topic Starter
HonKAn

depzdai wrote:

#modreq. Wow, the map is good...

- 00:17:673 (2) - ctrl+g. A pattern with lots of ways to play with always makes the players less bored. ( A really good way.)
- 00:49:173 (2,1) - Blanket. nope
- 01:04:923 (2,3) - Can it be blanket? https://puu.sh/rcacr/3674b0deac.png nope
Thanks you modding
rui

depzdai wrote:

#modreq. Wow, the map is good...
- 00:29:673 (7) - Blanket. fixed https://puu.sh/rc9jV/710fe4ecbe.png
- 00:37:548 (1,2) - Blanket. fixed https://puu.sh/rc8vw/8bbd21de46.png
- 00:52:548 (1) - A map would be more interesting with some slight changes of a pattern. keep https://puu.sh/rcbGq/6a8f596c28.png
Thank you!

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32,224,40548,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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360,88,41673,2,0,P|364:176|276:248,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,42798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,200,43173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,284,43548,6,0,P|216:244|232:180,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,44298,2,0,P|321:207|409:259,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,292,45423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,312,45798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,268,46173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,46548,6,0,P|388:76|388:20,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,72,47110,2,0,P|488:124|488:180,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,47673,2,0,P|408:252|416:288,1,52.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,48048,6,0,L|300:336,1,52.5
332,268,48423,2,0,L|272:260,1,52.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,48798,2,0,L|284:188,1,52.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,120,49173,2,0,L|312:112,1,52.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,160,49548,6,0,P|412:176|460:200,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,260,50110,2,0,P|448:276|400:300,1,105
340,340,50673,2,0,P|288:324|240:300,1,105,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,224,51423,1,0,0:1:0:0:
144,80,51798,2,0,P|200:64|260:64,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,52548,6,0,P|352:136|392:68,1,157.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,44,53298,2,0,P|280:84|252:132,1,105,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
120,184,54048,2,0,P|149:261|188:329,1,157.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,279,54798,2,0,P|230:224|202:176,1,105,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
152,112,55548,5,2,0:1:0:0:
276,132,55923,1,2,0:1:0:0:
116,119,56298,5,2,0:1:0:0:
267,116,56673,1,2,0:1:0:0:
61,130,57048,5,2,0:1:0:0:
253,93,57423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
12,159,57798,5,2,0:1:0:0:
232,76,58173,1,2,0:1:0:0:
448,168,58548,6,0,L|344:184,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,188,59110,6,0,L|324:244,1,52.5,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,296,59673,6,0,L|136:280,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,276,60235,6,0,L|116:220,1,52.5,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
56,144,60798,6,0,L|8:120,2,52.5,2|2|0,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,56,61548,6,0,P|176:32|240:40,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,100,62110,1,2,0:1:0:0:
268,100,62298,2,0,P|324:108|380:136,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
488,216,63048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,204,63423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
280,324,63798,2,0,P|224:320|164:308,1,115.50000352478,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,172,64548,6,0,P|140:152|208:156,1,115.50000352478,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,65110,1,2,0:1:0:0:
252,96,65298,2,0,P|304:112|376:120,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
496,212,66048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,66423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
244,136,66798,2,0,P|192:104|132:84,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
204,236,67548,6,0,P|256:240|320:208,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,68110,1,2,0:1:0:0:
372,160,68298,2,0,P|356:100|320:52,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
168,16,69048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,120,69423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
76,280,69798,2,0,P|128:300|192:300,1,115.50000352478,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,164,70548,6,0,P|221:184|162:202,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,120,71110,2,0,P|135:170|101:221,1,115.50000352478,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,144,71673,2,0,P|68:202|65:263,1,115.50000352478,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,72235,1,2,0:1:0:0:
176,260,72423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
336,248,72798,2,0,P|328:192|324:120,1,115.50000352478,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,36,73548,6,0,P|213:93|199:153,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,164,74110,1,2,0:1:0:0:
120,164,74298,2,0,P|148:214|175:269,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
312,352,75048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,75423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
304,192,75798,2,0,P|253:165|192:150,1,115.50000352478,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,12,76548,6,0,P|64:28|-8:40,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,104,77110,1,2,0:1:0:0:
52,104,77298,2,0,P|108:114|164:130,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
288,236,78048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,164,78423,1,2,0:1:0:0:
292,88,78798,2,0,P|236:84|184:116,1,115.50000352478,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
40,180,79548,6,0,P|64:230|118:259,1,115.50000352478,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,280,80110,2,0,P|191:305|170:326,2,57.7500017623902,2|8|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,80673,2,0,P|360:249|344:168,1,173.250005287171,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
328,104,81423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,180,81798,2,0,P|148:236|148:296,1,115.50000352478,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,378,82548,6,0,P|339:320|327:263,1,115.50000352478,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,248,83110,2,0,P|236:190|248:133,1,115.50000352478,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,24,83673,2,0,B|329:70|329:126|329:126|305:198|317:270|317:270|320:320|296:368|248:376|200:356|176:296|236:248,1,519.750015861512,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85548,12,0,90048,0:0:0:0:
Nyantiaz
alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this:

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff

Normal:
change ar to 4, od to 4 and hp can stay the same
00:02:298 - try not to put notes on top of sliders in normal diffs
00:06:798 - ^
00:24:798 - ^
00:28:173 - ^
ok when you see a note on top of slider just fix that anywhere else

Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother

Insane:
nothing wrong with this! nice job!

well that's it, nice map though 8-)
-NeBu-
Hey, just some shitty Insane mod:

00:30:423 (4) - remove this one and make 00:29:673 (3) - longer - I think it fits better here, you can hear vocal until this point and ignore the background sound.
00:33:423 (2) - make the distance snap look like 00:33:798 (1,2) -
00:40:923 (2) - [suggestion] maybe overlap this on 00:41:673 (4) -
00:43:173 (1) - kinda random NC for me
01:00:985 (2) - I don't feel this slider, I would make it shorter to red tick into Kiai
01:20:110 (2,3,4) - maybe just make it equilateral triangle, cuz for me its kinda weird to play (maybe just only me)

overall, the map is very cool, I like the song and the way you mapped it. hope you can rank it, gl!
Topic Starter
HonKAn

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!


Insane:
nothing wrong with this! nice job!

well that's it, nice map though 8-)

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Hey, just some shitty Insane mod:

00:30:423 (4) - remove this one and make 00:29:673 (3) - longer - I think it fits better here, you can hear vocal until this point and ignore the background sound. ok
00:33:423 (2) - make the distance snap look like 00:33:798 (1,2) - ok
00:40:923 (2) - [suggestion] maybe overlap this on 00:41:673 (4) - nope
00:43:173 (1) - kinda random NC for me ok
01:00:985 (2) - I don't feel this slider, I would make it shorter to red tick into Kiai
01:20:110 (2,3,4) - maybe just make it equilateral triangle, cuz for me its kinda weird to play (maybe just only me) A good point.

overall, the map is very cool, I like the song and the way you mapped it. hope you can rank it, gl!
Thanks~ modding!
rui

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!
Hard:
change to cs4
00:11:673 - this slider shape is weird, like hollow wings' sliders in genryuu kaiko (im kidding im kidding)
00:22:548 - put these sliders a little closer to eachother
Sorry all not fixed. Thank you mod.
Starfy

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
Topic Starter
HonKAn

StarForYou wrote:

Nyantiaz wrote:

alright huehuehue lets go!

Easy:
00:02:673 - slider shape seems weird pls fix I don't think this is weird, no change here
00:14:673 - eh this slider is okay but like fix the shape JUST A LITTLE BIT Fixed
00:31:173 - you might want to remove this note and do this: I don't think this kind of rhythm is applicable for a Easy diff

00:58:548 and 00:59:673 - these type of sliders should not be in an easy diff Why? That such strong beat cannot be ignore
Thanks for mod
http://puu.sh/ruLf2/28b41f1efe.rar
2016/10/03 last
bbu
2018-05-18 21:22 bbu: 저같으면 00:20:673 (2) - 를 오버랩시키지않고 00:19:548 (1) - 꼬리에 블랭킷을 시키지않았을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 가끔 bn들이 저런 오버랩 잡는경우가 많아서
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 00:23:110 (2) -
2018-05-18 21:23 bbu: 이 피아노음이랑
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 00:23:485 (1) - 이쪽 보이스까지 다 잡으려고 하시는것 같은데
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: https://puu.sh/Aotal/e858ebd6a6.jpg
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 이 박자 추천드려요
2018-05-18 21:24 bbu: 적용해보니 상당히 잘어울리네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 앞에 흰틱음무시한게 좀 불편하네요
2018-05-18 21:25 bbu: 보이스맞춘거라 어쩔수없는면도 있긴하지만 .. 이건 마음대로 하시길
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 뉴콤의시작은 00:34:548 (1) - 여기가아니라
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 00:34:173 (2) - 여기부터입니다
2018-05-18 21:26 bbu: 보이스를 잘 들어주세요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:27:610 (2) - 생각해보니 여기 앞 흰틱 음은없는데
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 00:33:798 (1) - 똑같은음인데도 불구하고 여긴 노트가있네요
2018-05-18 21:27 bbu: 마음대로 하셔도 괜찮긴하지만 의외로 이런거 지적많이당해요 :)
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 개인적으로
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 00:39:423 (1,2,3) - 00:42:423 (1,2,3) - 00:45:423 (1,2,3) - 이런부분은
2018-05-18 21:28 bbu: 디스턴트를 맞춰줬으면 좋겠다는 생각이랄까
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 00:46:360 (4) -
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 이거 오버매피인거아시죠 ?
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: *오버매핑
2018-05-18 21:29 bbu: 지워주세요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 맵 비트가 거의 빠진곳없이 촘촘히흘러가는데 00:50:110 (2) - 갑자기 앞흰틱 비어지는거 좀아쉬ㅏ워요 ㅠㅠ
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 저같으면 https://puu.sh/AotjV/e9623cf23c.jpg 이렇게 모든보이스를 다 잡지않을까 싶네요
2018-05-18 21:30 bbu: 00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ㅆㅌㅊ 이거 좋은듯
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 00:58:735 (2,3) - 이거
2018-05-18 21:31 bbu: 01:00:235 (2,3) - 이거랑 디스턴트 맞춰도 이쁠것같아요
2018-05-18 21:32 bbu: 끝
Riana
00:05:673 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:08:298 (2) - ^
00:10:923 (2,1) - 오버랩 좀 애매한거같네요
00:22:548 (1,2) - 여긴 앞엔 보컬 아무것도 안했는데 00:28:173 (1,2,1,2) - 여긴 서클 2개쓰셨네요
00:23:485 (1) - 뉴콤 오프?
00:26:673 (1) - ^
00:28:548 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:548 (1,2,3,1) - 좋으신쪽으로 일관성있게 리듬해주시는게 좋을거같네요
00:46:360 (4) - 소리 안나는거같네요
00:52:360 (2) - 여기도 소리 없는거같네요

뉴콤 좀 주기가 짧은거같아요 대체로 ㄷ
Reillia
[rui]
00:02:298 (3) - how about change to 2 circles? cuz 00:02:673 - this rhythm is much stronger than 00:02:298 -
00:05:298 (3,3) - same ^
00:37:548 (1,2,3) - why ds change between these notes? there's any rhythm change on song 00:40:923 (1,2) - u use 1.0x ds here
01:11:673 (3,4) - this jump is a little bit huge for rhythm imo
01:14:298 (3,3) - same with 00:02:298 (3) -

[insane]
00:07:173 (3,1) - 블랭킷을 더 잘 씌워볼수 있다고 생각합니다 :D
00:46:548 (1,2,3,4) - 별다른 강조되는 음도 없는데 DS가 뜬금없이 너무 커진것 같네용 굉장히 이상하게 느껴졌습니다..
00:55:548 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 음악은 점점 강해지는 분의기인데 SV는 점점 줄어드는게 좀 어색하게 느껴지네요
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