1. Hard (2.99 stars, 460 notes)
2. Insane (3.7 stars, 606 notes)
3. Normal (1.99 stars, 305 notes)
4. Shad012ha's Easy (1.49 stars, 189 notes)

CSLM wrote:

1st post!
can i make a diff?

tutuhaha wrote:

CSLM wrote:

1st post!
can i make a diff?

_(:зゝ∠)_gero is already ask for a GD so....

CSLM wrote:

i know that, but for another diff, can't i?

Beren wrote:

Do you want me?

P o M u T a wrote:

I Really Like You

tutuhaha wrote:

Don't like osu! anymore, no more maps from me

Battle wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:718 (2,3) - Blanket can improve a little ok

Ni-ma wrote:

00:20:030 (1) - 这个滑条的位置有点别扭，感觉稍微往上移动一点会舒服些？ 差不多
01:15:112 (3) - 这个滑条也是一样的(感觉我有点不习惯这种滑条之间的重叠。 To Gero: modder do not like the overlap... but I think it's ok

Shad0w1and wrote:

Battle wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:718 (2,3) - Blanket can improve a little ok

Ni-ma wrote:

00:20:030 (1) - 这个滑条的位置有点别扭，感觉稍微往上移动一点会舒服些？ 差不多
01:15:112 (3) - 这个滑条也是一样的(感觉我有点不习惯这种滑条之间的重叠。 To Gero: modder do not like the overlap... but I think it's ok

http://puu.sh/m9cBN/a4ea904a27.osu
还有要不小问题2ha你直接改吧，不然反而麻烦 _(:3
tag?

1. The BG thing as Battle mentioned.
2. Put tags please.
3. SB Load exceeded 5.00 at some points in kiai, not sure if this is rankable.

1. Some spacings should be fixed. > 00:26:915 (20,21) - 01:38:718 (89,90) - 03:06:873 (29,30) .
2. 00:30:849 (4,1) - The flow looks weird tho, maybe sth like this? > http://puu.sh/ma9tM/691e0002aa.jpg
3. 02:01:833 (3) - Move this down a bit? > http://puu.sh/ma9AG/141524140d.jpg

1. 00:23:472 (3,1,2) - Linear flow here feels weird imo.
2. 02:50:398 (4) - Not sure if this is too hard for Normal tho, but I'll mention this just in case.

1. 00:25:440 (4) - I would ctrl+G this since the spacing after 00:24:948 (3) is kinda confusing imo.

Battle wrote:

It's nice to see you mapping again, hope to see extras from you in the future~

[General]
So like, the background isn't like 1366x768 but here's a resized background that is it doesn't said background must be 1366x768 right :O?
Also, here is a version of the mp3 that is 192 kpbs click (I just used audacity to do it so I'm pretty sure that it should have same offset n stuff)


[Easy]
00:08:718 (2,3) - Blanket can improve a little
01:30:849 (3,1,2) - Personally, I kinda find the overlap for 3,1 pretty messy since it's kinda like, gigantic and there, but besides that, I don't really understand why there isn't a note at 01:34:292 - , since EVERYTHING before this has a consistent base (not including breaks where there's like a lyric or sth) so, idk, it just seems inconsistent
fix al
[Normal]
01:29:374 (2,3,4) - So like, for 3,4 you can slightly repostion it so that 4 is right above 2, with ds it shouldn't really be an issue since it comes out pretty nicely without having to repostion anything else

[Hard]
00:23:472 (3) - Everything before this had the downbeat clickable so maybe make the downbeat on 00:23:964 - clickable?
01:28:390 (3) - Kinda same thing, but at this point you've had a couple of instances where you had the downbeat isn't clickable so I dunno, it's structured at this point if you don't change above
02:43:758 (2,3,4) - I dunno, these just being in a straight line compared to like everything else in the map kinda strikes me as odd

[Insane]
00:23:964 (1) - This is like, the first time that you put a finish on this beat lol, you might want to apply a finish to this on the other diffs as well

I kinda don't have too much experiences with low bpm insanes like this so I think i'll stop my mod there, since it plays fine anyways

Hope that this mod helps at least, and gl~

Dono027 wrote:

♫ I really really really really really really like you ! ♫

--- SB ---

Some moves of the characters are very strange xD
Why not add fades for make the SB better again

Without this, Beautiful SB.

--- Skin ---

The files

-Sliderb0
-Sliderb1
-Sliderb2
-Sliderb3

Make something really strange, that's not really beautiful to see because the effect is behind the snowflake and we think the game lag xD

Gerow1and's Easy

01:32:817 (1) - Move this slider.

Add the little breaks (we see the breaks in all the other diffs)

Normal

For me, looks fine, but, you NEED to use 1/4 sliders ?

Hard

00:43:145 (4) - 2 circles sound better

00:46:587 (2) - Uh... What ?

01:07:612 - Add circle

01:17:571 (1) - Don't stack
fix all
Insane

If we can have more streams with Circles :3 That can be better.

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From My Queue!
I've seen you before in the world of mapping!

G's Easy

[General]
Nothing. Just DS
[Modding Itself]
01:21:997 (3,4) - Get rid of these because they don't resemble earliers patterns.
01:32:817 (1,2) - Add a circle in between for beat.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

1. The BG thing as Battle mentioned.
2. Put tags please.
3. SB Load exceeded 5.00 at some points in kiai, not sure if this is rankable.

I ask sber help to check and they said is fine.

[Easy]

1. Some spacings should be fixed. > 00:26:915 (20,21) - 01:38:718 (89,90) - 03:06:873 (29,30) .
2. 00:30:849 (4,1) - The flow looks weird tho, maybe sth like this? > http://puu.sh/ma9tM/691e0002aa.jpg
3. 02:01:833 (3) - Move this down a bit? > http://puu.sh/ma9AG/141524140d.jpg

[Normal]

1. 00:23:472 (3,1,2) - Linear flow here feels weird imo.
2. 02:50:398 (4) - Not sure if this is too hard for Normal tho, but I'll mention this just in case.

[Hard]

1. 00:25:440 (4) - I would ctrl+G this since the spacing after 00:24:948 (3) is kinda confusing imo.

fix

Sorry bro I think I can't mod Insane. I FAILED IT But tbh, I think AR8 fits better than 8.5 .
Anyway, sorry for a late mod and good luck~

Reditum wrote:

ur ok i guess

Skin:
You should make your snowflake spin right now. Right now it just looks REALLY akward
Insane:
00:17:079 (1,2,3,4) - This stream seems really out of place, and with no drums to give it validity, it's just overmapped,
I'm not going to point out every instance, but a lot of 1/4 stuff here seems really out of place. There's not even really a backing 1/4 beat, it just seems like the map shouldn't be as hard as it is right now. Nothing else wrong with the map, I just feel that there's just WAY Too much happening for this style of song.

Hard:
would have loved it if this was the hardest diff

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
So the main issue here isn't so much in the mapping, because as a standalone map it's fine, but like the spread between this and normal are REALLY large. You have 01:28:882 - for instance, where in normal there's a lot of 1/2 and even a 1/4 slider, but this is just like really long sliders. It's a HUGE jump that many QATs will probably get mad over. There's a lot more instances of these that definitely should be looked at. It may be neccessary to make Normal a little calmer and bump up parts of the easy diff.
Also, a storyboarding of the collaber's names would be really helpful, so people can identify who made what

Sorry for the shitty mod, lol. there really aren't a lot of surface level things that neccessarily need to be pointed out, it's a lot of bigger picture things

kds stars because I feel bad for not saying much lol

Gero wrote:

I'll check the mods later.

smallboat wrote:

我竟然之前忘了，sorry啊

[General]

1. Ger0w1and應該是Gero和壓制哥做的? 那gd名要加上tag啊 (看看能不能再加一些標籤使搜尋容易點)

[Ger0w1and's Easy] (不知道哪邊是誰做的所以我用中文，另外要不要在CW標明一下做的時間部分)

1. 02:33:431的紅線重疊綠線，聽人哥說好像不能這樣加 (其他難度同樣，但綠線sv有改的話就可以重疊紅綠線) : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4738949
2. 00:14:128 (1) - 在Easy diff的NC不用這麼頻繁，可以每2大白線1NC (後面也改改吧不多說)
3. 00:25:931 (1) - 同上
4. 01:38:718 (1,2) - 這可以移動一點保持相同間距，建議動一下

[Normal] SV怎麼跟Easy一樣啊?

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  [ *]

1. 00:22:981 (2) - 在Normal放1/4 tick有種會被挑的感覺 (後面同樣的也是，可以考慮一下)
2. 00:29:866 (1) - 快靠邊了不往上一點嗎

[Hard]

1. 00:46:587 (2) - Unsnapped
2. 01:51:505 (2) - The same as above
3. 03:12:529 (4,1) - 感覺有一點遠

[Insane]

1. 00:08:224 (1) - Unsnapped
2. 00:44:374 (4) - 兩個vocal看要不要換成2note，play會很有感覺
3. 00:52:243 (4) - 同上 (後面同樣也考慮一下)
4. 00:57:776 (2,1) - 有種好容易斷的坑 (應該是我打圖不足)
5. 02:32:940 (1) - 既然用了新NC，試試看減速? 感覺符合VOCAL
6. 03:04:660 (4,5,1) - 真的尾殺，確定沒問題?

修好再叫我。

smallboat wrote:

OKAY 看上去都fine Bubbled

1. What does the background/storyborad have to do with the song? I'm predicting an angry Loctav here lol

1. Generally I don't like how randomly you use so many 1/4-sliders for these barely audible background-sounds (dunno how to describe them, I hope you know what I mean) but mostly ignore the really strong drums almost all the time I honestly didn't even notice those sounds they are mapped to at all while playing, and while I notices them in the editor some still really seem rather overmapped, like 00:20:399 (3) - being one of the extremes. I thought that drum-hitfinish and drum-hitnormal fit the song extremely well and if you actually mapped the drums then those would be so good! Just to support my generaly point here some more, at some places like 00:29:251 there is nothing audible at all while 00:29:497 really calls for being mapped but you almost never mapped it and instead made some parts really 'clustered' with sliders, which all in all I just really don't understand Like, I understand you emphasize vocals at 00:17:079 (1,2,3,4) and I'm totally fine with that, but mapping 00:14:005 makes it just unnecessarily clustered imo. 00:37:366 really calls to be mapped, especially when the previous seven notes are all circles, while mapping 01:42:038 is basically the opposite extreme of this section as it is full-sliders because of this overmap, and it makes it seem very imbalanced to me. And mapping those 1/6-sliders at the end of these patterns seems really weird too as the last note is not different to any previous beats at all, and if these didn't exist I would suggest delaying the break until 00:37:735 in all diffs but it's impossible in the Insane because of this. Sorry for rambling so much, but this is what actually made me mod this map, it just doesn't seem true to the song for me : \ Now for some less-angry points:
2. 02:12:530 (2) - This is one of only two offbeat-kicksliders afaik, which generally feels really weird because nobody expects them and it feels very forced, and for this one in particular I see zero reason at all - 02:12:653 is a really strong beat which is not emphasized at all on the tail, while the head is just one of the hundreds of random sounds that are sometimes mapped and sometimes not with nothing making it particularly intense. 02:48:308 (1) is the other offbeat-kickslider which I highly recommend to change too, you never mapped this pattern like that, so why did you do it here
3. 00:19:5380 and 3:12:283 - Both drums and vocals have a really strong note on these, I don't think mapping slidertails there fits at all
4. 03:20:152 (1) - The sound lasts until 03:20:644 why did you end it earlier lol

1. 00:23:472 (3) - How about making this a 1/4-slider or a circle and adding one at 00:23:595 so it doesn't end on pretty much the most important beat here, even supported by the storyboard? Feels weird to only have a slidertail there and it messes up the NC too obviously (would ofc also apply to similar parts like 00:47:079 (3) -)
2. 00:26:423 (2) and 00:30:358 (2) - The vocals have a different rhythm here having a really strong not on the tail of these sliders - You added random rhythmic variety at places like 00:31:833 (1,2) where it isn't called for at all as the vocals just have the standard rhtythm, but here, where it is actually called for, you didn't which seems weird / random. Applies to many other sections
3. 00:43:390 (5,1,2) - How about making this a reverse-1/2-slider because the whole Kiai is basically 'aiming' to the note on (5) (together with (4)) and having yet another circle directly afterwards takes all the tension from it. Also, having 00:51:259 on a tail is even worse imo, this note really deserves to be clickable. Applies for all similar sections
4. 00:55:440 - Basically the same as the very first point for this diff, but here it is even more extreme because a really strong vocal taht even calls for a 1/1-slider imo starts there but the slider ends there which makes zero sense at all, and the sliderbody isn't even Kiai so I don't understand why you emphasized it like that
5. 01:02:694 - Why do you map this, there is nothing there and it takes all the emphasis from the next note, while you left out 01:02:202 which would emphasize the vocals really nicely if it were mapped instead of this note
6. Why not just put a circle at 01:16:341 -? Ending the break at 01:16:095 makes no sense as there is nothing new there that hasn't been there before, it makes not mapping the voals in-between appear very random, and you did it differently in the Insane so why not here too?
7. 01:22:735 - This deserves to be clickable too imo, just make 01:21:997 (2,3) to a slider instead of this one
8. 01:27:653 - Why suddenly the gap here, you never did that before, what's different here

Bonsai wrote:

Hey there! I saw this in #modreqs a long time ago and wanted to map it bc I like having a map for this song, but I wasn't motivated to actually mod it until now, sorry ^^
hi, Thankyou for your mod but sounds this map is already bubble so I wouldn't do any change if is “must be” :> sorry about that
General

1. What does the background/storyborad have to do with the song? I'm predicting an angry Loctav here lol

I thinks is work for all song, so I believe no one will be angry with that. And for this map, I really want to get it rank also because the sb, like 50% for song and 50% for sb you know ：p
and example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/170540
Insane

1. Generally I don't like how randomly you use so many 1/4-sliders for these barely audible background-sounds (dunno how to describe them, I hope you know what I mean) but mostly ignore the really strong drums almost all the time I honestly didn't even notice those sounds they are mapped to at all while playing, and while I notices them in the editor some still really seem rather overmapped, like 00:20:399 (3) - being one of the extremes. I thought that drum-hitfinish and drum-hitnormal fit the song extremely well and if you actually mapped the drums then those would be so good! Just to support my generaly point here some more, at some places like 00:29:251 there is nothing audible at all while 00:29:497 really calls for being mapped but you almost never mapped it and instead made some parts really 'clustered' with sliders, which all in all I just really don't understand Like, I understand you emphasize vocals at 00:17:079 (1,2,3,4) and I'm totally fine with that, but mapping 00:14:005 makes it just unnecessarily clustered imo. 00:37:366 really calls to be mapped, especially when the previous seven notes are all circles, while mapping 01:42:038 is basically the opposite extreme of this section as it is full-sliders because of this overmap, and it makes it seem very imbalanced to me. And mapping those 1/6-sliders at the end of these patterns seems really weird too as the last note is not different to any previous beats at all, and if these didn't exist I would suggest delaying the break until 00:37:735 in all diffs but it's impossible in the Insane because of this. Sorry for rambling so much, but this is what actually made me mod this map, it just doesn't seem true to the song for me : \ Now for some less-angry points:
2. 02:12:530 (2) - This is one of only two offbeat-kicksliders afaik, which generally feels really weird because nobody expects them and it feels very forced, and for this one in particular I see zero reason at all - 02:12:653 is a really strong beat which is not emphasized at all on the tail, while the head is just one of the hundreds of random sounds that are sometimes mapped and sometimes not with nothing making it particularly intense. 02:48:308 (1) is the other offbeat-kickslider which I highly recommend to change too, you never mapped this pattern like that, so why did you do it here
3. 00:19:5380 and 3:12:283 - Both drums and vocals have a really strong note on these, I don't think mapping slidertails there fits at all
4. 03:20:152 (1) - The sound lasts until 03:20:644 why did you end it earlier lol

I am following the vocal.
The rhythm I was useing in this diff is existence, I may ignore the really strong drums but it just because I choose to use another soft drums.You may don't like what i did, but you can't say it is not existence ╮(╯_╰)╭.
Hard

1. 00:23:472 (3) - How about making this a 1/4-slider or a circle and adding one at 00:23:595 so it doesn't end on pretty much the most important beat here, even supported by the storyboard? Feels weird to only have a slidertail there and it messes up the NC too obviously (would ofc also apply to similar parts like 00:47:079 (3) -)
2. 00:26:423 (2) and 00:30:358 (2) - The vocals have a different rhythm here having a really strong not on the tail of these sliders - You added random rhythmic variety at places like 00:31:833 (1,2) where it isn't called for at all as the vocals just have the standard rhtythm, but here, where it is actually called for, you didn't which seems weird / random. Applies to many other sections
3. 00:43:390 (5,1,2) - How about making this a reverse-1/2-slider because the whole Kiai is basically 'aiming' to the note on (5) (together with (4)) and having yet another circle directly afterwards takes all the tension from it. Also, having 00:51:259 on a tail is even worse imo, this note really deserves to be clickable. Applies for all similar sections
4. 00:55:440 - Basically the same as the very first point for this diff, but here it is even more extreme because a really strong vocal taht even calls for a 1/1-slider imo starts there but the slider ends there which makes zero- sense at all, and the sliderbody isn't even Kiai so I don't understand why you emphasized it like that
5. 01:02:694 - Why do you map this, there is nothing there and it takes all the emphasis from the next note, while you left out 01:02:202 which would emphasize the vocals really nicely if it were mapped instead of this note
6. Why not just put a circle at 01:16:341 -? Ending the break at 01:16:095 makes no sense as there is nothing new there that hasn't been there before, it makes not mapping the voals in-between appear very random, and you did it differently in the Insane so why not here too?
7. 01:22:735 - This deserves to be clickable too imo, just make 01:21:997 (2,3) to a slider instead of this one
8. 01:27:653 - Why suddenly the gap here, you never did that before, what's different here

it will be really boring if you dont make some different.
Some of suggestion i understand what's your point, but still, I keep what i have because I dont think my choose is wrong right now ：)
It just because the different select bewteen us, like you may want it more sweet, but i love spicy.
Yeah basically all this stuff keeps repeating so I'll stop here, and in the Normal I only have similar rhythmic issues but I don't want to list them all since it's more or less in the same manner as the stuff I pointed out in the higher diffs. (and I never mod Easy-diffs because I generally hate them all, no offense to this one since I didn't look at it lol sry)