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Marika Suzuki - Brave Icon [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
-Tenshi-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 28 octobre 2015 at 17:27:29

Artist: Marika Suzuki
Title: Brave Icon
Source: Monster Hunter
Tags: Brachydios Monster Hunter Ultimate Capcom ????????? ??????????? ??????2012?
BPM: 144
Filesize: 2061kb
Play Time: 01:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1,91 stars, 132 notes)
  2. Kantan (1,28 stars, 72 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2,51 stars, 206 notes)
  4. Oni (3,11 stars, 282 notes)
Download: Marika Suzuki - Brave Icon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~One of the best monster theme from Monster Hunter ! I hope you will enjoy it~

Kantan By me
Futsuu By me
Muzukashii By me
Oni By me

Shiroi Hiroshi
hello '_' newbie modder here
Take from mod req
General : remove letterbox and countdoun on taiko map

Kantan :
00:08:020 (4) - add finish ? (suggestion)
00:11:353 (7) - ^
00:14:687 (11) - ^
00:18:020 (14) - ^
00:23:853 (21) - ^
00:31:353 (30) - ^
00:37:187 (37) - ^ add finish and remove whistle
00:40:520 (41) - ^
00:43:853 (45) - ^
00:47:187 (49) - ^
00:49:687 (53) - ^
00:54:687 (60) - add finish
01:04:687 (74) - ^



Futusuu

00:08:020 (9) - add finish (suggestion)
00:11:353 (17) - ^
00:14:687 (25) - ^
00:19:478 (37) - ^
00:21:145 (43) - ^
00:22:812 (49) - ^
00:26:145 (61) - ^
00:27:812 (67) - ^

Muzukashii
00:17:603 (41) - remove finish , kinda annoying
00:30:103 - just suggestion maybe D K D better ?
00:35:416 - just suggestion againw K K maybe better ?
00:49:062 (170) - remove whistle and add finish
00:59:062 (212) - add finish

Oni : MASTERPIECE ;-; wow you are elite mapper on my hearth
just maybe : 01:04:687 (279) - remove whistle , its kinda annoying
Goodluck ;-;
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-
SPOILER

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

hello '_' newbie modder here
Take from mod req
General : remove letterbox and countdoun on taiko map

Kantan :
00:08:020 (4) - add finish ? (suggestion) Added
00:11:353 (7) - ^ Added
00:14:687 (11) - ^ Added
00:18:020 (14) - ^ Added
00:23:853 (21) - ^ Added
00:31:353 (30) - ^ Added
00:37:187 (37) - ^ add finish and remove whistle Added
00:40:520 (41) - ^ Added
00:43:853 (45) - ^ Added
00:47:187 (49) - ^ Added
00:49:687 (53) - ^ Added
00:54:687 (60) - add finish Added
01:04:687 (74) - ^ Added



Futusuu

00:08:020 (9) - add finish (suggestion) Added
00:11:353 (17) - ^ Added
00:14:687 (25) - ^ Added
00:19:478 (37) - ^ Added
00:21:145 (43) - ^ Added
00:22:812 (49) - ^ Added
00:26:145 (61) - ^ Added
00:27:812 (67) - ^ Added

Muzukashii
00:17:603 (41) - remove finish , kinda annoying Added
00:30:103 - just suggestion maybe D K D better ? Yes!
00:35:416 - just suggestion againw K K maybe better ? Mmh, I don't know ._.
00:49:062 (170) - remove whistle and add finish Added
00:59:062 (212) - add finish Added


Oni : MASTERPIECE ;-; wow you are elite mapper on my hearth
just maybe : 01:04:687 (279) - remove whistle , its kinda annoying Added
Goodluck ;-; Thanks!
Thanks for the mod, it helps me a lot ♥
Blanc Kisaragi
I suggest you to post your map at modding queue
it'll help you to get your map ranked
bananannian

I am pretty thorough, so don't be annoyed if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
Difficulty: In terms of difficulty, this spread is a bit... stunted? The spread spikes at Futsuu difficulty, details of which I will explain below. A 2.94 stars Oni would probably be the easiest Oni in the game if this is ranked as well. That being said though, I do not know if forcibly increasing the difficulty would be a good idea or not; I personally believe that you can definitely increase the note density for Oni by quite a considerable amount, but BNs and QATs might disagree. Your choice!

[Kantan]
The main problem here is finisher usage, i.e. D and K placements.

00:04:687 (1) - change to D; there is a significant strings build-up in the music before this note, and it will be consistent with 00:08:020 (4,7,11), which are all D
00:23:853 (21,22) - change to d K; the first note is at the middle of the melody's phrase, and doesn't deserve that much of an emphasis, while the second note being K would match the entry of the brass
00:37:187 (37) - change to K for better matching hitsounds, a heavy drum hit doesn't match horn riff well imo
00:37:187 (37) - again, middle of the phrase, doesn't deserve a D, d is fine, and would also contrast with 00:43:853 (45)
00:44:687 (46) - start of kiai, change to D?
00:52:187 (56) - change to K would be consistent with your previous usage of big notes (one on the start of every 3 bars)

Other than that, I don't really understand your note placement that well, so I'm going to refrain from making any more suggestions.

[Futsuu]
Slight difficulty issue here:
There are two things to consider when deciding on a spread's difficulty. One is its objective difficulty rating, i.e. basically its star rating. For Futsuu, this ranges from the high ends of 1 stars to anywhere in the 2 stars (although beyond 2.5 or so is stretching it). For this, your Futsuu meets the requirements.

However, one must also consider a specific difficulty's position relative to the map's other difficulties. In this case, a 0.8* gap between Kantan and Futsuu is considerably more than the 0.4* gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii. Gameplay-wise, this gap is also quite apparent; you have used both offbeat patterns (00:05:520 (2,3,4,5) etc.) and offbeat note placements (00:19:478 (37,43,49) etc.) in your Futsuu which contrasts greatly from the simple single notes in Kantan.

I would suggest you nerfing this a bit, to maybe slightly below 2 stars even, which would make the curve smoother. Of course, this is entirely up to you.

Other than that, I could only find one more change that I would make:
00:04:687 (1) - like Kantan, change to D
...and the rest is good. :D :D :D

[Muzukashii]
00:06:562 (7) - change to d would be consistent with 00:13:228 (27), which also has the heavier lower strings backing up the beat
00:16:562 (39) - in contrast, this changed to k would be consistent with 00:09:895 (17), which DOESN'T have the heavier lower strings in the music
(I know how you have 00:06:145 (6,7) being the same as 00:09:478 (16,17), and 00:12:812 (26,27) the same as 00:16:145 (38,39), but I feel that my grouping matches the music better. Your choice though, of course. :3)
00:37:187 (124) - change to K to match the horn?
00:42:812 - changing this stream to this:

would again, match the horn while making it different from the three previous streams.
00:49:062 (172) - change to d; while I get that you feel this note deserves an additional emphasis, I believe the pause between the three notes are enough to convey that sense of build-up from the strings in the music
00:53:437 (192,193) - ^
00:59:062 (214) - ^ (and also sounds pretty weird, having abruptly a D between two streams)

[Oni]
Difficulty again; I don't know, I like this Oni as how it is currently, and remapping it would take a new concept entirely, but an ideal star rating for this spread for me would be something like: 1.4* --> 1.95*--> 2.5* --> 3.5*
(Note: emphasis on for me; this may not be the case for BNs or QATs, or most importantly, you.)

00:18:020 (52) - if you're going to use D at 00:17:187 (50,51), NOT having a D here is kinda a let down
00:23:853 (83,84,85) and 00:25:520 (91,92,93) - I get that you're trying to vary up the patterns a bit, but I like the ddk's waayyy more than dkd to match the strings
00:53:437 (216,219) - ddD is unrankable. Don't ask me why, it just is. Yes, we can play them just fine. Yes, it is ridiculous.
00:44:687 - note placement for the entire kiai seems kinda random to me; I won't suggest any changing, specifically because I don't understand it, just wanted to let you know how I feel about this section.
[]

There you go! Enjoyable song and enjoyable mapset. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping! :3
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

bananannian wrote:


I am pretty thorough, so don't be annoyed if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
Difficulty: In terms of difficulty, this spread is a bit... stunted? The spread spikes at Futsuu difficulty, details of which I will explain below. A 2.94 stars Oni would probably be the easiest Oni in the game if this is ranked as well. That being said though, I do not know if forcibly increasing the difficulty would be a good idea or not; I personally believe that you can definitely increase the note density for Oni by quite a considerable amount, but BNs and QATs might disagree. Your choice!

[Kantan]
The main problem here is finisher usage, i.e. D and K placements.

00:04:687 (1) - change to D; there is a significant strings build-up in the music before this note, and it will be consistent with 00:08:020 (4,7,11), which are all D Done
00:23:853 (21,22) - change to d K; the first note is at the middle of the melody's phrase, and doesn't deserve that much of an emphasis, while the second note being K would match the entry of the brass Done
00:37:187 (37) - change to K for better matching hitsounds, a heavy drum hit doesn't match horn riff well imo Done
00:37:187 (37) - again, middle of the phrase, doesn't deserve a D, d is fine, and would also contrast with 00:43:853 (45) Done
00:44:687 (46) - start of kiai, change to D? Done
00:52:187 (56) - change to K would be consistent with your previous usage of big notes (one on the start of every 3 bars) Done

Other than that, I don't really understand your note placement that well, so I'm going to refrain from making any more suggestions. Oh really? For me the notes match the song pretty well.

[Futsuu]
Slight difficulty issue here:
There are two things to consider when deciding on a spread's difficulty. One is its objective difficulty rating, i.e. basically its star rating. For Futsuu, this ranges from the high ends of 1 stars to anywhere in the 2 stars (although beyond 2.5 or so is stretching it). For this, your Futsuu meets the requirements.

However, one must also consider a specific difficulty's position relative to the map's other difficulties. In this case, a 0.8* gap between Kantan and Futsuu is considerably more than the 0.4* gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii. Gameplay-wise, this gap is also quite apparent; you have used both offbeat patterns (00:05:520 (2,3,4,5) etc.) and offbeat note placements (00:19:478 (37,43,49) etc.) in your Futsuu which contrasts greatly from the simple single notes in Kantan.

I would suggest you nerfing this a bit, to maybe slightly below 2 stars even, which would make the curve smoother. Of course, this is entirely up to you. True, i'm gonna nerf it, I wasn't sure if it was too much for a futsuu, but now I know, thanks.

Other than that, I could only find one more change that I would make:
00:04:687 (1) - like Kantan, change to D Done
...and the rest is good. :D :D :D

[Muzukashii]
00:06:562 (7) - change to d would be consistent with 00:13:228 (27), which also has the heavier lower strings backing up the beat Done
00:16:562 (39) - in contrast, this changed to k would be consistent with 00:09:895 (17), which DOESN'T have the heavier lower strings in the music Done
(I know how you have 00:06:145 (6,7) being the same as 00:09:478 (16,17), and 00:12:812 (26,27) the same as 00:16:145 (38,39), but I feel that my grouping matches the music better. Your choice though, of course. :3) I find it better too
00:37:187 (124) - change to K to match the horn? Done
00:42:812 - changing this stream to this:

would again, match the horn while making it different from the three previous streams. Done
00:49:062 (172) - change to d; while I get that you feel this note deserves an additional emphasis, I believe the pause between the three notes are enough to convey that sense of build-up from the strings in the music Done
00:53:437 (192,193) - ^ Done
00:59:062 (214) - ^ (and also sounds pretty weird, having abruptly a D between two streams) Done

[Oni]
Difficulty again; I don't know, I like this Oni as how it is currently, and remapping it would take a new concept entirely, but an ideal star rating for this spread for me would be something like: 1.4* --> 1.95*--> 2.5* --> 3.5*
(Note: emphasis on for me; this may not be the case for BNs or QATs, or most importantly, you.) I know, but I don't feel like overmapping this, I tried to put a bit more difficulty with those streams in the second kia time that you find random (And for me too, some of them sounds a bit random I have to assume it.) I'm not gonna put notes only for difficulty unless this oni is unrankable.

00:18:020 (52) - if you're going to use D at 00:17:187 (50,51), NOT having a D here is kinda a let down Done
00:23:853 (83,84,85) and 00:25:520 (91,92,93) - I get that you're trying to vary up the patterns a bit, but I like the ddk's waayyy more than dkd to match the strings Done, I love the way it sounds.
00:53:437 (216,219) - ddD is unrankable. Don't ask me why, it just is. Yes, we can play them just fine. Yes, it is ridiculous. Done, changed to kkd
00:44:687 - note placement for the entire kiai seems kinda random to me; I won't suggest any changing, specifically because I don't understand it, just wanted to let you know how I feel about this section. Tried to put some difficulty since the map was already pretty low in star rating.
[]

There you go! Enjoyable song and enjoyable mapset. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping! :3


Thanks a lot for the mod, it was really helpful~
Edit: Futsuu nerfed, 1,93*
[R]
hi, come from queue

[General]
First check AiMod (ctrl+A) it much have problem

solve:
- Cut your MP3 to 01:05:937 -
- Too long kiai, search other mod to help it
- imo the right offset in 00:01:355 - just opinion
- Press F4 and uncheck all in design tab
- kiai time in Oni diff not need a modify timing, you can delete it
- in tags " bêbête " change to " bebete " unicode in tags maybe not good
[Futsuu]
00:13:853 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - change this pattern for preparing next beat, i suggest


00:30:937 (38) - k , emphasize

00:38:853 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - try this sphread to make not monotoune
00:42:187 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - same above

[Muzukashii]
00:17:603 - k ,for emphasize
00:33:020 - delete ,sounds weird if here not empty
00:36:353 - delete ,^

00:38:228 - add kat ,make not monotoune
00:38:437 - add don ,^
00:38:853 (129,130,131) - kk k ?
00:39:687 - delete

00:41:562 - to 00:43:020 - same like 4 lines above


all of this diff is good, just some monotoune pattern
sorry if not much bt hope helpfull
Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

[R] wrote:

hi, come from queue

[General]
First check AiMod (ctrl+A) it much have problem

solve:
- Cut your MP3 to 01:05:937 - Done
- Too long kiai, search other mod to help it The solution would be to delete 1 kiai time I guess.
- imo the right offset in 00:01:355 - just opinion It's the same
- Press F4 and uncheck all in design tab
- kiai time in Oni diff not need a modify timing, you can delete it
- in tags " bêbête " change to " bebete " unicode in tags maybe not good I delete it since it was just a private joke with a friend.
[Futsuu]
00:13:853 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - change this pattern for preparing next beat, i suggest Done


00:30:937 (38) - k , emphasize Done

00:38:853 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - try this sphread to make not monotoune Done
00:42:187 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - same above Done

[Muzukashii]
00:17:603 - k ,for emphasize Done
00:33:020 - delete ,sounds weird if here not empty Done
00:36:353 - delete ,^ Done

00:38:228 - add kat ,make not monotoune Done
00:38:437 - add don ,^ Doesn't sounds good to me.
00:38:853 (129,130,131) - kk k ? I don't get what you want me to do here, sorry.
00:39:687 - delete Done

00:41:562 - to 00:43:020 - same like 4 lines above Done, same as above.


all of this diff is good, just some monotoune pattern
sorry if not much bt hope helpfull
Good Luck ~
Thanks for the mod~
Kazaze
Hello !

As you requested, here is my mod for the Muzukashii and Oni difficulties.

This mod is entirely based on my opinion, you can disagree on it. :3

Muzukashii

Your Muzukashii is pretty solid! :)
But here are the few changes I would make:

00:14:322 (30) - I would change this one to a k
00:14:739 (33) - And this one to a d
00:25:155 (79,80) - Change these two to k
00:33:280 (108,111) - These two to k too
00:58:280 (210) - Change to k and 00:58:489 (211) - Change to d

My mod would raise the difficulty by 0,03 stars
That's all I have to say about the Muzukashii :)

Oni

00:08:489 (15) - Change to k
00:15:989 (51) - Change this one to d and 00:16:197 (52) - to a k
00:21:405 (81) - Change to k and 00:21:614 (82) - to d

-What do you think about this:
00:31:718 (135) - Add a d here 00:31:926 (136) - and here
00:35:051 (151) - Add a d here 00:35:259 (152) - and here
00:38:384 (167) - Add a d and 00:38:593 (168) - Add a d
00:41:718 (183) - Add a d and 00:41:926 (184) - Add a d

00:46:197 (205) - Change to k
00:46:405 (206) - Change to d
00:46:614 (207) - Change to k
00:46:822 (208) - Change to d
00:47:030 (209) - Change to k

And that's it ! It would raise the difficulty to 3,15 stars. :oops:

I hope my mod will help you !
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

Kazaze wrote:

Hello !

As you requested, here is my mod for the Muzukashii and Oni difficulties.

This mod is entirely based on my opinion, you can disagree on it. :3

Muzukashii

Your Muzukashii is pretty solid! :)
But here are the few changes I would make:

00:14:322 (30) - I would change this one to a k Done.
00:14:739 (33) - And this one to a d Done.
00:25:155 (79,80) - Change these two to k Done.
00:33:280 (108,111) - These two to k too Done.
00:58:280 (210) - Change to k and 00:58:489 Done. (211) - Change to d No, k is better for me.

My mod would raise the difficulty by 0,03 stars
That's all I have to say about the Muzukashii :)

Oni

00:08:489 (15) - Change to k Done.
00:15:989 (51) - Change this one to d and 00:16:197 (52) - to a k Done.
00:21:405 (81) - Change to k and 00:21:614 (82) - to d Done.

-What do you think about this:
00:31:718 (135) - Add a d here 00:31:926 (136) - and here It's horrible to my ears, doesn't match the rythm at all.
00:35:051 (151) - Add a d here 00:35:259 (152) - and here ^
00:38:384 (167) - Add a d and 00:38:593 (168) - Add a d ^
00:41:718 (183) - Add a d and 00:41:926 (184) - Add a d ^

00:46:197 (205) - Change to k Done.
00:46:405 (206) - Change to d Done.
00:46:614 (207) - Change to k Done.
00:46:822 (208) - Change to d Done.
00:47:030 (209) - Change to k Done.

And that's it ! It would raise the difficulty to 3,15 stars. :oops:

I hope my mod will help you !
Thanks a lot, mods always help ♥
Surono
i am here, sry for late.. i am human and have rl too lol

[General]
- Dont Forget to remove this, in every diff

- 00:33:905 - u add note in here.. but hmm.. this wrong sound place.. *problem is song* rightly place in 00:33:853 - *in yellow tick, yeah maybe need add new offset.. so find a Pro Timing to fix this.. is weird lel.. or u can place thats all sound in 1/8 *lol bad ww

[Kantan]
- 00:34:739 (34) - give this finish because this powerfull pitch too, and for consistency 00:31:405 (30) - this..
- 00:38:072 (38) - ^ same
- 00:40:572 (41) - is weird Finish, remove and give 00:41:405 (42) - this Finish, this get better and fit with song
- 00:43:905 (45) - please remove finish, not powerfull pitch..
- 00:47:239 (49) - remove finish for consistency
- 00:52:239 (56) - ^ same
- 00:53:489 (58) - give finish, have powerfull pitch
- 00:56:405 (62) - change kat?
- okay just it well, maybe its about weird song or weird finisher. idk~

[Futsuu]
- well mappped nice. with repetitive pattern.. just give finish in Powerful pitch

[Muzukashii]
- 00:14:530 (31,32,33) - lol i dont like muzukashii with this pattern.. hard to play, so 00:14:634 (32) - delete this, Muzukashii is Perfect with less Easy STREAM
but u must thinking.. its just suggestion llalalal XD
- well mapped nice

[Oni]
- 00:06:718 (8,9) - lol wat this? i really hear this not have pitch sound.. so delete confirmed *in begining is not gud to give pattern like this.. is forcing and overmapped if not have sound
- 00:10:989 (24,25,26,27) - delete this, and 00:10:676 - add don, 00:10:884 - add don, 00:10:989 - add kat, and 00:11:405 (25) - give this finish
- 00:14:634 (40) - move to 00:14:218 (37) - here, change 00:14:530 (40) - this don, and 00:14:739 (41) - give this finish
- okay from kiai until end is better imo.. maybe lol

Just it, this Song weird to mapped.. so, recommend to find pro timing and Many Modders to improve this Beatmap, G'Luck :lol:
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

Surono wrote:

i am here, sry for late.. i am human and have rl too lol

[General]
- Dont Forget to remove this, in every diff Done.

- 00:33:905 - u add note in here.. but hmm.. this wrong sound place.. *problem is song* rightly place in 00:33:853 - *in yellow tick, yeah maybe need add new offset.. so find a Pro Timing to fix this.. is weird lel.. or u can place thats all sound in 1/8 *lol bad ww Are you sure? This sounds weird to me on the yellow tick.

[Kantan]
- 00:34:739 (34) - give this finish because this powerfull pitch too, and for consistency 00:31:405 (30) - this.. Done.
- 00:38:072 (38) - ^ same Done.
- 00:40:572 (41) - is weird Finish, remove and give 00:41:405 (42) - this Finish, this get better and fit with song Done.
- 00:43:905 (45) - please remove finish, not powerfull pitch.. Done.
- 00:47:239 (49) - remove finish for consistency Done.
- 00:52:239 (56) - ^ same Done.
- 00:53:489 (58) - give finish, have powerfull pitch Done.
- 00:56:405 (62) - change kat? Done.
- okay just it well, maybe its about weird song or weird finisher. idk~

[Futsuu]
- well mappped nice. with repetitive pattern.. just give finish in Powerful pitch Done.

[Muzukashii]
- 00:14:530 (31,32,33) - lol i dont like muzukashii with this pattern.. hard to play, so 00:14:634 (32) - delete this, Muzukashii is Perfect with less Easy STREAM Done.
but u must thinking.. its just suggestion llalalal XD Good suggestion :p
- well mapped nice

[Oni]
- 00:06:718 (8,9) - lol wat this? i really hear this not have pitch sound.. so delete confirmed *in begining is not gud to give pattern like this.. is forcing and overmapped if not have sound Done.
- 00:10:989 (24,25,26,27) - delete this, and 00:10:676 - add don, 00:10:884 - add don, 00:10:989 - add kat, and 00:11:405 (25) - give this finish Done.
- 00:14:634 (40) - move to 00:14:218 (37) - here, change 00:14:530 (40) - this don, and 00:14:739 (41) - give this finish Done.
- okay from kiai until end is better imo.. maybe lol

Just it, this Song weird to mapped.. so, recommend to find pro timing and Many Modders to improve this Beatmap, G'Luck :lol:
Very helpful mod, thank you~
HashishKabob
I love these maps and I love your style, but it's still got a bit to go before rank. Good luck!


[Kantan]
00:13:905 - Change to kat?
00:17:239 - Change to kat.
00:18:072 - Change to kat.
00:37:239 - Unnecessary finisher.
00:44:739 - Change to kat?
00:47:239 - Change to kat.
00:56:405 - Change to don.
00:57:239 - Change to kat.
I highly recommend either changing 01:04:114 to a kat or 01:04:739 .


[Futsuu]
Your ending section feels slightly too complicated for Futsuu. I would recommend maybe removing some of the 3-plet patterns altogether to make them off beat patterns similar to the section around 00:25:155 . Here's a quick mock-up I tested on my own to give you an idea of what I mean. @ 00:46:405 -


[Muzukashii]
00:25:780 - Change to don.
00:33:072 - Add kat.
00:36:405 - Add kat? Something needs to be here.
00:38:280 - Remove beat unless you plan on following this style where you missed it (00:31:614 and 00:34:947)


[Oni]
00:07:239 - I would add some 1/4th notes along here like you did ahead at 00:13:905 .
00:13:905 - I would change this to something like kddkkkd because you're missing some beats that could easily be filled in with a simple pattern.
00:19:530 - Change to kat to match higher harmony pitch?
00:21:197 - Same^
00:21:405 - Change to don.
00:30:364 - Finisher to keep consistent with your previous pattern of following harmony/symbols before.
00:30:989 - Same^
00:31:822 - Add don.
00:32:134 - Unnecessary kat?
00:35:155 - Add don.
00:35:468 - If you're going to follow this style, keep it consistent and make it a kat like before at (^mentioned above^)
00:38:489 - Add don.
00:41:822 - Add don.
00:45:572 - Change to kat.
00:48:280 (205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - This piece right here should be changed to either a dkddkddk or kdkkdkkd pattern.
00:50:572 - Change to kat.
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

HashishKabob wrote:

I love these maps and I love your style, but it's still got a bit to go before rank. Good luck!


[Kantan]
00:13:905 - Change to kat? Done.
00:17:239 - Change to kat. Done.
00:18:072 - Change to kat. Done.
00:37:239 - Unnecessary finisher. Done.
00:44:739 - Change to kat? Don is better here imo.
00:47:239 - Change to kat. Done.
00:56:405 - Change to don. Done.
00:57:239 - Change to kat. Done.
I highly recommend either changing 01:04:114 Done, i choose this one. to a kat or 01:04:739 .


[Futsuu]
Your ending section feels slightly too complicated for Futsuu. I would recommend maybe removing some of the 3-plet patterns altogether to make them off beat patterns similar to the section around 00:25:155 . Here's a quick mock-up I tested on my own to give you an idea of what I mean. @ 00:46:405 - Done, I changed all partern because i find this one really good.



[Muzukashii]
00:25:780 - Change to don. Done.
00:33:072 - Add kat. Done, I added it to the other similar patern too.
00:36:405 - Add kat? Something needs to be here. Done ^.
00:38:280 - Remove beat unless you plan on following this style where you missed it (00:31:614 and 00:34:947) Done, I removed all of them.


[Oni]
00:07:239 - I would add some 1/4th notes along here like you did ahead at 00:13:905 . For now i like how it is, no change here, maybe i'll add it later.
00:13:905 - I would change this to something like kddkkkd because you're missing some beats that could easily be filled in with a simple pattern. Done, really nice.
00:19:530 - Change to kat to match higher harmony pitch? Done.
00:21:197 - Same^ Done.
00:21:405 - Change to don. Done.
00:30:364 - Finisher to keep consistent with your previous pattern of following harmony/symbols before.
00:30:989 - Same^ Done.
00:31:822 - Add don. Done.
00:32:134 - Unnecessary kat? Done, changed to d.
00:35:155 - Add don. Done.
00:35:468 - If you're going to follow this style, keep it consistent and make it a kat like before at (^mentioned above^) I changed all parterns to dd k.
00:38:489 - Add don. Done.
00:41:822 - Add don. Done.
00:45:572 - Change to kat. Done.
00:48:280 (205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - This piece right here should be changed to either a dkddkddk or kdkkdkkd pattern. I don't really get what i should do here, everything i tried with this sounds wrong.
00:50:572 - Change to kat. Done.


Thanks a lot, that was a really helpful mod~
HashishKabob
I appreciate the compliment, thank you.

As far as that pattern at 00:48:280, if it sounds wrong to you, it is wrong.
The only way I've fixed this kind of thing of my own is to wipe the entire part and start from scratch. Pain in the ass, but it works almost every time.

I still say simply changing those notes to my suggestion would fit nicely, but it's up to you.
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-
I mean, i'm not really sure of what you want me to do here, if you could post a screenshot of it it would be really cool :3.
Surono

-Tenshi- wrote:

Are you sure? This sounds weird to me on the yellow tick.

ahhh comeon, i am not recommend to yellow tick, JUST need new Offset to fix this.. *go find timing pro i guess* yeah really weird if not give new offset for sound like that. is not lie haha :lol:
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-
Oh yes i'm sorry, my bad, i'm gonna do this then :3.

Edit: Offset fixed, set to 00:04:775 - Big thanks to Aex3 for the help.
Raiden
Morning o/. From my queue

[General]
  1. Try offset 4783 (add +8ms to all timing points and notes)

[ Kantan]
  1. There is a very small amount of notes. Change HP to 9-10 or else the player can sit idle for 90% of the song, play the last notes and still pass.
  2. 00:14:775 (11) - The pitch definetely goes up at this point. Change to k?
  3. 00:19:566 (16,18,20,24,26,28) - They should be finishers I think
  4. Using 1/2 to map a Kantan is usually a bad idea, but I think you nailed it on this one ;)

[ Futsuu]
  1. Same HP suggestion than in Kantan
  2. 00:05:608 (3,10,2,13) - Changing these to k would give more consistency to the rhythm I think
  3. 00:19:566 (17,21,25,29,37,42) - These sound definetely like K instead of D
  4. 00:34:358 (50,51,52) - ddK or dkK fits better than dkD in my opinion and makes the pattern a bit easier
  5. I can't really understand the rhythm you're using from 00:45:191 - to 01:02:691 - , I suggest remapping that part or fixing the patterns a bit.

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:108 (41,49,58,67,76,101,102) - These definetely would sound better if they were k
  2. 00:33:108 (107) - Remove, there are too many notes for a non-kiai part
  3. 00:36:441 (119) - ^
  4. 00:39:775 (131) - ^
  5. 00:43:108 (143) - ^
  6. From 00:42:900 - to 00:48:525 - there are too many notes and not a single break, consider removing some of them
  7. 00:49:775 - 00:53:525 - ^
  8. 00:54:775 - 00:58:525 - ^
  9. 00:59:775 - 01:03:525 - ^
[ Oni]
  1. OD6 would be better I think.
  2. I really think the SV changes are unnecessary. Maybe that one at the kiai, but the others?????
  3. 00:13:941 (38) - This one should be a d to be consistent with other difficulties
  4. 00:13:941 (134,135,149,150,164,165,179,180) - These doublets I think they don't fit at all into the rhythm
  5. I have found many little pattern mistakes that could be fixed but I'm not going to tell you all because that'd take a whole day. Try to listen to the song at lower speeds, compare the rhythms you use in all difficulties, provide small breaks in non-kiai parts, etc.
That's all, I think you need to improve your patterning on higher difficulties but that can be easily improved. Good luck on your rank and have a nice day!
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

Raiden wrote:

Morning o/. From my queue

[General]
  1. Try offset 4783 (add +8ms to all timing points and notes)
Tried and added.


[ Kantan]
  1. There is a very small amount of notes. Change HP to 9-10 or else the player can sit idle for 90% of the song, play the last notes and still pass. What? No change on this, I never seen a ranked kantan with HP9/10.
  2. 00:14:775 (11) - The pitch definetely goes up at this point. Change to k? Done.
  3. 00:19:566 (16,18,20,24,26,28) - They should be finishers I think Done, I just wanted to avoid too much finisher in katan but since there's already lots of finisher in the map, i add them.
  4. Using 1/2 to map a Kantan is usually a bad idea, but I think you nailed it on this one ;)



[ Futsuu]
  1. Same HP suggestion than in Kantan Same as Kantan.
  2. 00:05:608 (3,10,2,13) - Changing these to k would give more consistency to the rhythm I think Done.
  3. 00:19:566 (17,21,25,29,37,42) - These sound definetely like K instead of D Done.
  4. 00:34:358 (50,51,52) - ddK or dkK fits better than dkD in my opinion and makes the pattern a bit easier Changed to ddD because D sounds better to me.
  5. I can't really understand the rhythm you're using from 00:45:191 - to 01:02:691 - , I suggest remapping that part or fixing the patterns a bit.
Fixed some patern here, it took me very long to find something good ._.


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:108 (41,49,58,67,76,101,102) - These definetely would sound better if they were k Done.
  2. 00:33:108 (107) - Remove, there are too many notes for a non-kiai part Removing this note would make sound the whole pattern really weird.
  3. 00:36:441 (119) - ^ ^
  4. 00:39:775 (131) - ^ ^
  5. 00:43:108 (143) - ^ ^
  6. From 00:42:900 - to 00:48:525 - there are too many notes and not a single break, consider removing some of them Same here, I think i can't remove any notes without making it sound weird, so no change, and i like how it is so.
  7. 00:49:775 - 00:53:525 - ^ ^
  8. 00:54:775 - 00:58:525 - ^ ^
  9. 00:59:775 - 01:03:525 - ^ ^
[ Oni]
  1. OD6 would be better I think. Done.
  2. I really think the SV changes are unnecessary. Maybe that one at the kiai, but the others????? But I love them~
  3. 00:13:941 (38) - This one should be a d to be consistent with other difficulties Done.
  4. 00:13:941 (134,135,149,150,164,165,179,180) - These doublets I think they don't fit at all into the rhythm Removed.
  5. I have found many little pattern mistakes that could be fixed but I'm not going to tell you all because that'd take a whole day. Try to listen to the song at lower speeds, compare the rhythms you use in all difficulties, provide small breaks in non-kiai parts, etc.
I'll do this later, I need a rest right now :p

That's all, I think you need to improve your patterning on higher difficulties but that can be easily improved. Good luck on your rank and have a nice day!
Thanks a lot for the mod~
TwilightForest
Tiny mod, tiny sugestions. I hope my mod was helpful! :3 I have little problems with modding slow/easy maps!
Muzukashii

00:20:408 (53,54) - maybe swap them (ctrl + g)
00:30:824 - you can add d here
00:51:866 (183,184) - swap them

Oni

00:14:158 (40) - can be k
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

TwilightForest wrote:

Tiny mod, tiny sugestions. I hope my mod was helpful! :3 I have little problems with modding slow/easy maps!
Muzukashii

00:20:408 (53,54) - maybe swap them (ctrl + g) After remmaping a bit these two notes are d now so i can swap them but... :p
00:30:824 - you can add d here No change, i reserve this note for Oni
00:51:866 (183,184) - swap them Done, on both diffs

Oni

00:14:158 (40) - can be k No change here


Thanks for the little mod~
xtrem3x
Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue

_____________________________________________________

General:

Just Muzukashii and Oni as requested .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

00:08:949 - repeat dddk as 00:05:616-

00:10:408 - k (have sound)

00:18:116 - this sequence is too long .. go for delete notes... 00:19:783- , 00:21:449- , 00:23:116-

00:33:116 - this part needs break ... delete (?)
00:36:449 - Same

00:44:574 - Delete (mini breaks)
00:46:449 - Same
00:51:449 - Same
00:56:449 - Same
01:01:449 - Same

_____________________________________________________

Oni:

00:13:949 - dddkkkd -> ddddkkk (is better about progressive high sound in this part)

00:46:762 - add note (a triple is good)
00:51:762 - same
01:01:762 - same

_____________________________________________________
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue

_____________________________________________________

General:

Just Muzukashii and Oni as requested .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

00:08:949 - repeat dddk as 00:05:616- Done.

00:10:408 - k (have sound) Done.

00:18:116 - this sequence is too long .. go for delete notes... 00:19:783- , 00:21:449- , 00:23:116- Done, after skiping this sugestion a lot of time, i'll finaly did it.

00:33:116 - this part needs break ... delete (?) Done.
00:36:449 - Same Done.

00:44:574 - Delete (mini breaks) Done.
00:46:449 - Same This doesn't sounds good here but i've deleted a 2 other notes in this partern for mini breaks.
00:51:449 - Same ^
00:56:449 - Same ^
01:01:449 - Same ^

_____________________________________________________

Oni:

00:13:949 - dddkkkd -> ddddkkk (is better about progressive high sound in this part) Done but changed to dddkkkk instead.

00:46:762 - add note (a triple is good) Done.
00:51:762 - same Done.
01:01:762 - same Done.

_____________________________________________________
Thanks for the mod, that was very helpful~
Nyan
[General]

-23ms to all offset. This is really important.

Make timing point 00:44:760 - which has 3 / 4 (waltz) or 6 / 4 metronome. This is also really important.

[Kantan]

Because the last part has waltz rhythm, patterns below can change like this:


Available patterns

00:45:593 (47,48,49) -
00:50:593 (54,55,56) -
00:55:593 (61,62,63) -
01:00:593 (68,69,70) -

You can put some variations.

[Futsuu]

You can add Finish on
00:06:218 (4) -
00:09:551 (11) -
00:12:885 (3) -
00:16:218 (10) -

Last part can be changed similar as Kantan:


[Muzukashii]

Muzukashii usually not use 1/4 with different colors. (only 20/59 Muzukashii 8 star songs on Taiko uses 1/4 with different colors)
You can keep those if you want. But always keep in mind using 1/4 with different color makes the Muzukashii diff hard.

[Oni]

Oni is fine
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

Nyan wrote:

[General]

-23ms to all offset. This is really important. Done.

Make timing point 00:44:760 - which has 3 / 4 (waltz) or 6 / 4 metronome. This is also really important. Done.

[Kantan]

Because the last part has waltz rhythm, patterns below can change like this: Done.


Available patterns

00:45:593 (47,48,49) - Done.
00:50:593 (54,55,56) - Done.
00:55:593 (61,62,63) - Done.
01:00:593 (68,69,70) - Done.

You can put some variations.

[Futsuu]

You can add Finish on No changes here because i don't like that much finish notes on those notes.
00:06:218 (4) -
00:09:551 (11) -
00:12:885 (3) -
00:16:218 (10) -

Last part can be changed similar as Kantan: Well, i changed a bit this part.


[Muzukashii]

Muzukashii usually not use 1/4 with different colors. (only 20/59 Muzukashii 8 star songs on Taiko uses 1/4 with different colors)
You can keep those if you want. But always keep in mind using 1/4 with different color makes the Muzukashii diff hard. I prefer to keep it like this, and this is allowed in muzukashii so no change here.

[Oni]

Oni is fine
Thanks for the mod, it was really helpful~
HashishKabob
I went through to check for it to paint you a picture.. I couldn't find it again, so good job! xD
-Sh1n1-

Taiko mod from Simple Taiko Modding queue


About


  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

Kantan


  1. since 00:24:760 - have another sound, is not the same as 00:22:885 - 00:21:218 - ... to make this diff fun you should change 00:24:760 (22) - 00:26:218 (24) - 00:27:885 (26) - 00:29:551 (28) - to D
  2. 00:48:510 (52) - should be d, because is the same sound as 00:49:135 (53) -
  3. mmmm I'm not sure about 00:46:843 (49,50) - I believe that you will follow my previous advice because is really necessary and this dk will be weird because 00:48:093 (51,52) - don't have the same sound, to make this change I will give you 2 options: dd or kk
  4. and don't forget to keep consistency with the next part, example: 00:53:510 (60) - should be k I can't hear a strong beat like 00:54:760 -

Futsuu


  1. 00:17:260 (11) - should be k to keep consistency with Kantan and sounds better imo.
  2. 00:24:760 (29) - As I said on Kantan here Start a new kind of sound and should be D like 00:26:218 -
  3. 00:27:885 (37) - change to D, same as above
  4. from 00:31:426 - to 00:44:760 - I like because you did something different at 00:38:926 -, actually you did something like that: first with d (from 00:32:260 - to 00:34:760 - ), second with d (from 00:35:593 - to 00:38:093 - ), thirth with k (from 00:38:926 - to 00:41:426 - ) and fourth with k (from 00:42:260 - to 00:44:760 - ) right?, I modded maps like this before and Is more fun if you make first part d, second k thirth d, fourth k.

Muzukashii


  1. 00:15:176 (34) - should be k, after first D you did d: 00:05:176 (2) - them k: 00:08:510 (12) - them d: 00:11:843 (23) - them should be k: 00:15:176 (34) - right?
  2. 00:27:260 (84,85,86) - avoid ddk or kkd pattern on Muzukashii, in this case will be better if you make kkk or ddd
  3. 00:28:927 (91,92,93) - same as above
  4. 00:27:676 (87) - should be d, It feels better, same as 00:29:343 (94) -
  5. 00:33:301 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - avoid long combos on Muzu, in this case I'll recommend you to delete 00:34:135 (107) -
  6. 00:37:468 (118) - same as above
  7. 00:39:760 (125) - 00:40:801 (130) - delete both
  8. 00:43:093 (137) - move to 00:43:718 -
  9. 00:54:968 (181,182,183) - 00:59:968 (200,201,202) - As I said about ddk and kkd pattern on Muzu. In these cases kkk is the best option to add variety on this part

Oni


  1. 00:13:405 (35) - delete is not necessary,
  2. 00:15:385 (47) - delete to keep consistency with previous patterns: 00:05:593 (3,4,5,6) - 4 notes, 00:08:926 (15,16,17,18) - 4 notes, 00:12:260 (30,31,32,33) - 4 notes, 00:15:176 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - 6 notes?
  3. you forgot to add notes at 00:26:426 - 00:28:093 - ? or you forgot to delete the following notes 00:18:301 (63) - 00:19:760 (71) - 00:21:426 (80) - 00:23:093 (89) - ? it's up to you, choose one.
  4. 00:31:843 - did you miss a note here?
  5. you didn't keep consistency since 00:54:551 - to 01:04:760 - with previous patterns, I'll recommend you to delete 00:55:697 (246) - 01:00:697 (274) - and move 00:56:530 (251) - to 00:56:739 - and then change to d

GL~~
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Taiko mod from Simple Taiko Modding queue


About


  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

Kantan


  1. since 00:24:760 - have another sound, is not the same as 00:22:885 - 00:21:218 - ... to make this diff fun you should change 00:24:760 (22) - 00:26:218 (24) - 00:27:885 (26) - 00:29:551 (28) - to D Yes, I should've changed that before because I've already did this in muzu and oni.
  2. 00:48:510 (52) - should be d, because is the same sound as 00:49:135 (53) - I changed it to k Because 00:49:135 (53) - is a k, I think you made a mistake here by puting d instead of a k.
  3. mmmm I'm not sure about 00:46:843 (49,50) - I believe that you will follow my previous advice because is really necessary and this dk will be weird because 00:48:093 (51,52) - don't have the same sound, to make this change I will give you 2 options: dd or kk Done, put both dd and kk to make some variety in partterns.
  4. and don't forget to keep consistency with the next part, example: 00:53:510 (60) - should be k I can't hear a strong beat like 00:54:760 - Done.

Futsuu


  1. 00:17:260 (11) - should be k to keep consistency with Kantan and sounds better imo. Done.
  2. 00:24:760 (29) - As I said on Kantan here Start a new kind of sound and should be D like 00:26:218 - Done, same reason as Kantan.
  3. 00:27:885 (37) - change to D, same as above ^
  4. from 00:31:426 - to 00:44:760 - I like because you did something different at 00:38:926 -, actually you did something like that: first with d (from 00:32:260 - to 00:34:760 - ), second with d (from 00:35:593 - to 00:38:093 - ), thirth with k (from 00:38:926 - to 00:41:426 - ) and fourth with k (from 00:42:260 - to 00:44:760 - ) right?, I modded maps like this before and Is more fun if you make first part d, second k thirth d, fourth k. Changed because it makes it less boring to play (So more fun you're right :3)

Muzukashii


  1. 00:15:176 (34) - should be k, after first D you did d: 00:05:176 (2) - them k: 00:08:510 (12) - them d: 00:11:843 (23) - them should be k: 00:15:176 (34) - right? You're right, changed it.
  2. 00:27:260 (84,85,86) - avoid ddk or kkd pattern on Muzukashii, in this case will be better if you make kkk or ddd Well, I already disagreed to this in another mod, but since it's the second request for this, I will change them.
  3. 00:28:927 (91,92,93) - same as above ^
  4. 00:27:676 (87) - should be d, It feels better, same as 00:29:343 (94) - Done.
  5. 00:33:301 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - avoid long combos on Muzu, in this case I'll recommend you to delete 00:34:135 (107) - Done.
  6. 00:37:468 (118) - same as above Done.
  7. 00:39:760 (125) - 00:40:801 (130) - delete both Done.
  8. 00:43:093 (137) - move to 00:43:718 - Done.
  9. 00:54:968 (181,182,183) - 00:59:968 (200,201,202) - As I said about ddk and kkd pattern on Muzu. In these cases kkk is the best option to add variety on this part Done.

Oni


  1. 00:13:405 (35) - delete is not necessary, No change here, I'll keep it like this.
  2. 00:15:385 (47) - delete to keep consistency with previous patterns: 00:05:593 (3,4,5,6) - 4 notes, 00:08:926 (15,16,17,18) - 4 notes, 00:12:260 (30,31,32,33) - 4 notes, 00:15:176 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - 6 notes? Yes, 6 notes to make it feel a bit harder because kiai is coming.
  3. you forgot to add notes at 00:26:426 - 00:28:093 - ? or you forgot to delete the following notes 00:18:301 (63) - 00:19:760 (71) - 00:21:426 (80) - 00:23:093 (89) - ? it's up to you, choose one. No to both, everything here is intentional, and are not going to change.
  4. 00:31:843 - did you miss a note here? Oh yes you're right.
  5. you didn't keep consistency since 00:54:551 - to 01:04:760 - with previous patterns, I'll recommend you to delete 00:55:697 (246) - 01:00:697 (274) - and move 00:56:530 (251) - to 00:56:739 - and then change to d Only changed the last suggestion, because it's intentional to make the second part a bit harder.

GL~~
Thanks a lot, very helpful mod, agreed to lot of suggestions~
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-
My map isn't dead at all, i just can't update it because my computer is dead :s
Surono

-Tenshi- wrote:

My map isn't dead at all, i just can't update it because my computer is dead :s
Niceu reasun dezu.. wot e4 just make thiz rankud,
Topic Starter
-Tenshi-

Surono wrote:

-Tenshi- wrote:

My map isn't dead at all, i just can't update it because my computer is dead :s
Niceu reasun dezu.. wot e4 just make thiz rankud,
So funny zzzzzz
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