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Mozaik Role - Soraru

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kuyukiP
No no, the title is "Mosaik Role" for a reason. DECO_27 said on his twitter it was "Mosaik Role" himself, and it's on the video, so~
lovhin456

Krisom wrote:

They should not be unrankeable, In fact, they are not, I've done these kind of sliders many times alredy (though with a different sliderbody) and they are completely readeable from what I can tell

(also, yeah, Mosaic Roll should be the title :/)

EDIT: Baka
Ohh okk, thanks Krisom! :3
Garven

kuyukiP wrote:

No no, the title is "Mosaik Role" for a reason. DECO_27 said on his twitter it was "Mosaik Role" himself, and it's on the video, so~
The original video does not have the English subtitles, though I did find his tweet.

DECO_27 wrote:

"it's Mozaik Role!!! RT @zeopower6 @DECO27 What is the romanized version of モザイクロール? MOSAICROLL or Mosaicroll? Mosaic Roll?"
So there you have it Mosaik Role. Mosaik. Ugh. Ah well, hehe.
Darcsol

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[darksol's imitation]
00:32:080 (4) - move to the next blue tick on the timeline It's fine. I mapped most of the song with 1/2 divider.
As for then I've made a few small changes.

Download: Soraru - Mosaik Role (kuyukiP) [Darcsol's Imitation].osu
nonoh_old
starr~
I can't help but notice your spinner meter still spells Mosaic Roll. Unnoticeable, don't know why I kept staring at that :o

Fake notes always makes me think I missed.. I see no reason to delete though
banvi
Great!! I hope thismap is ranked soon!! :)

P.S.
Deco*27 → DECO*27 ???
IceBeam
You asked for modding,but I've already modded it,my star is right below 3kd stars.

Still looks solid,rank it already.
Good luck.
Dangaard
[general]
  1. Double check the green lines on all difficulties, especially Kiai sections should be spot-on.
[Scissors]
  1. You got some few whistles placed here, sometimes only on the sliderslides. They seem a bit random
  2. 00:57:942 (3) - This is a bit too close to (2). You should space this with 1.0x distance and make the (3) barely touch the (2).
  3. 02:30:631 (1) - You don't need both green lines at the end, right?
[Glasses]
  1. Also here your whistles seem very inconsistent.
  2. 00:40:149 (1) - Make the volume fade gradually on the whole lenght of the spinner (e.g. every 2nd white tick reduce by 10%), right now you hear the full sound of spinning when it suddenly switches to complete silence (check it on testmode, spinner-spin is silenced in edit mode). Or silence the spinner from the beginning.
[Darcsol's Imitation]
  1. 01:09:942 (1) - add a green line 1/4 or 1/2 before that switches to the destinated volume of your kiai sections. Kiai must be spot on, but hitsounds are affected by the playing, so hitting it too early would make the player hear this beat in the previous sound section.
[lovhin's Mirrored Self]
  1. The very first section is louder than the rest (e.g. the section at 00:16:045), so you might want to fix this.
  2. Some sliders don't have the correct length they are supposed to have, you can set beat snap divisor to 1/4 and then recalculate slider lengths, you should double check the whole map after this. Alternatively I pointed out the wrong sliders so that you can manually fix them by moving the sliderendpint a bit.
  3. 00:50:080 (1,2,3) - extend sliders to the red ticks
  4. 00:51:321 (4) - The change to soft section should be made between the 1st and 2nd beat of the slider (compare to 00:44:700 (3)).
  5. 01:21:528 (3) - extend slider to the red tick
    02:00:838 (5,6) - extend sliders to the red ticks
  6. 02:32:804 (15) - You should remove this beat or put it 1/4 later.
  7. 02:48:838 (1) - I would move this whole combo a bit up.
  8. 02:53:700 (3,4,5) - This stream doesn't fit well to the rest of the streams (I would make it a triplet starting 1/4 later).
  9. In general there are quite some streams in this difficulty that don't follow the music well, consider changing them.
[Lan's Evil Self]
  1. 02:42:838 (3) - Make this stack to the orange beat before?
  2. 02:43:666 (3) - this as well?
Nice rhythm in this difficulty, though I think you overused claps a bit.
Lanttu

Dangaard wrote:

[Lan's Evil Self]
  1. 02:42:838 (3) - Make this stack to the orange beat before?
  2. 02:43:666 (3) - this as well?
Nice rhythm in this difficulty, though I think you overused claps a bit.
Yosh, I had horrible time when hitsounding my diff. @_@
Didn't do the green line checking, maybe KuyukiP should do that..

Download: Soraru - Mosaik Role (kuyukiP) [Lan's Evil Self].osu
lovhin456
Fixed ... I guess ... I'm seriously thinking about re-mapping my diff ... :<

Download: Soraru - Mosaik Role (kuyukiP) [lovhin's Mirrored Self].osu
Darcsol

Dangaard wrote:

[Darcsol's Imitation]
  1. 01:09:942 (1) - add a green line 1/4 or 1/2 before that switches to the destinated volume of your kiai sections. Kiai must be spot on, but hitsounds are affected by the playing, so hitting it too early would make the player hear this beat in the previous sound section.
Fixed.
Download: Soraru - Mosaik Role (kuyukiP) [Darcsol's Imitation].osu
Mafiamaster
[Darcsol]
01:22:356 (5) - Add a new combo.

[lovhin]
02:42:218 (6) - New combo.
02:31:873 (6) - ^
02:32:804 (10) - Delete this note or move this 1/4 of a tick forward and move it somewhere else. (New combo it as well)

[lan]
The preview point is different than the others. This has (69925) while the other difficulties have (69947).
01:20:700 (5) - New combo so it signifies jumps.
Haneii
General:
-The osu logo’s with your names can’t be seen really well at the beginning since its black and it blends in with her skirt in the video. Why not give them all a white outline glow like this:
-Kiai times need to be the same for all difficulties! (ie: Start at the same time and end at the same time)


Just suggestions (can be discarded if you want :P), couldn't find anything wrong with this set. Good Job guys ;)

~Glasses ~
00:58:976 – add a note here or extend the slider till this point?
00:59:597 – add a note here? (or you can delete (1) and have a slider going from 00:59:390-00:59:597). This part just feels empty to me.


~Twinkle twinkle little star ~
lovhin456

Mafiamaster wrote:

[lovhin]
02:42:218 (6) - New combo.
02:31:873 (6) - ^
02:32:804 (10) - Delete this note or move this 1/4 of a tick forward and move it somewhere else. (New combo it as well)
Done ~ :3
Download: Soraru - Mosaik Role (kuyukiP) [lovhin's Mirrored Self].osu
Topic Starter
kuyukiP
Thank you! I'll fix this all when I get home :)
Darcsol

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Darcsol]
01:22:356 (5) - Add a new combo. Fixed.
Download: Soraru - Mosaik Role (kuyukiP) [Darcsol's Imitation].osu
NatsumeRin
..you remember sth wrong. orz.

...checked. so.

don't kudosu.

Topic Starter
kuyukiP
Oh...but doesnt the video say mosaik role? Or am I just really bad at this...
Garven

kuyukiP wrote:

Oh...but doesnt the video say mosaik role? Or am I just really bad at this...
Well, if we're going off the tweet, then it'll be Mozaik. I even missed reading the 'z' when I pasted the tweet earlier in the thread. orz
NatsumeRin

Garven wrote:

kuyukiP wrote:

Oh...but doesnt the video say mosaik role? Or am I just really bad at this...
Well, if we're going off the tweet, then it'll be Mozaik. I even missed reading the 'z' when I pasted the tweet earlier in the thread. orz
same thing even happen to me. but when i printscreen then i found that..
so i guess it should be changed.
nadihko-chan
You has nadi's star~
Topic Starter
kuyukiP
I changed it~
eveless
:) all thing is fine

like lanttu's diff 8-)
Topic Starter
kuyukiP
Thank you for your star! :D
lovhin456
Because I felt like doing this, mod time ~ <3

General;
- You have 2 osb files, are the two necessary ?? If not, remove one ~

Skin;
- Nice, maybe now that we know the real name of the song, chang the words on the spinner-metre ??
- The hitcircle should be in a grayscale but it looks good as it is now too
- Oh, here have a hitcircle in a grayscale and also the spinner-osu fixed, since it was "Mosaic Role!" and not "Mozaik Role!" and my diff too, I changed some things ~
Download: Soraru - Mozaik Role.rar
Download: Soraru - Mozaik Role (kuyukiP) [lovhin's Mirrored Self].osu

Scissors;
- Check AIMod, you have some spacing errors
- 00:28:562 >> Move it in the playfield between (1) and (2), that would look better, also, there's no need to make a lot of points for a good slider, just do this

And the slider will look just fine without all those points ~
- 00:29:804 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:31:873 >> Try to curve this like I said ^ and place it better ??
- 00:33:114 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:36:425 >> ^
- 00:53:700 >> Remove new combo
- 00:56:080 >> New combo
- 01:16:562 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 02:21:114 >> Remove new combo
- 02:28:976 >> New combo ??

Glasses;
- Check AIMod for spacing errors
- 00:33:114 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:38:287 >> Make this a Bezier not catmull slider ??
- 00:40:149 >> Why the end of this spinner is silence not like in Scissors, but is okk ~
- 00:59:390 (1,2,3,4) >> This looks a bit messy
- 01:11:183 >> Remove new combo
- 01:16:562 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 01:46:356 >> Remove new combo
- 02:23:942 >> Remove new combo
- 02:39:321 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 02:55:873 >> Add finish at the start
- 02:57:528 >> ^
- 02:58:562 >> Add a whistle ??

Darcsol’s Imitation;
- 02:32:700 >> I was thinking that the 0.5x section would end here but it continued …

Lan’s Evil Self;
- Is okk ~

* By the way Kuyuki can you mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21222 ?? Count this as a mod4mod but no kudosu please ~


Topic Starter
kuyukiP

lovhin456 wrote:

Because I felt like doing this, mod time ~ <3

General;
- You have 2 osb files, are the two necessary ?? If not, remove one ~

Skin;
- Nice, maybe now that we know the real name of the song, chang the words on the spinner-metre ??
- The hitcircle should be in a grayscale but it looks good as it is now too
- Oh, here have a hitcircle in a grayscale and also the spinner-osu fixed, since it was "Mosaic Role!" and not "Mozaik Role!" and my diff too, I changed some things ~
[attachment=2:c3efe]Soraru - Mozaik Role.rar[/attachment:c3efe]
[attachment=1:c3efe]Soraru - Mozaik Role (kuyukiP) [lovhin's Mirrored Self].osu[/attachment:c3efe]

Scissors;
- Check AIMod, you have some spacing errors
- 00:28:562 >> Move it in the playfield between (1) and (2), that would look better, also, there's no need to make a lot of points for a good slider, just do this
[attachment=0:c3efe]placeee.png[/attachment:c3efe]
And the slider will look just fine without all those points ~
- 00:29:804 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:31:873 >> Try to curve this like I said ^ and place it better ??
- 00:33:114 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:36:425 >> ^
- 00:53:700 >> Remove new combo
- 00:56:080 >> New combo
- 01:16:562 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 02:21:114 >> Remove new combo
- 02:28:976 >> New combo ??

Glasses;
- Check AIMod for spacing errors
- 00:33:114 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:38:287 >> Make this a Bezier not catmull slider ??
- 00:40:149 >> Why the end of this spinner is silence not like in Scissors, but is okk ~
- 00:59:390 (1,2,3,4) >> This looks a bit messy
- 01:11:183 >> Remove new combo
- 01:16:562 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 01:46:356 >> Remove new combo
- 02:23:942 >> Remove new combo
- 02:39:321 >> Remove new combo then new combo to the next note
- 02:55:873 >> Add finish at the start
- 02:57:528 >> ^
- 02:58:562 >> Add a whistle ??

Darcsol’s Imitation;
- 02:32:700 >> I was thinking that the 0.5x section would end here but it continued …

Lan’s Evil Self;
- Is okk ~

* By the way Kuyuki can you mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21222 ?? Count this as a mod4mod but no kudosu please ~
I will fix this all and mod yours tomorrow. :) Thank you very much again for your help!
Darcsol

lovhin456 wrote:

Darcsol’s Imitation;
- 02:32:700 >> I was thinking that the 0.5x section would end here but it continued … It's on purpose.
As for then, I might redo the Hitsounds. I don't like what I've done.
Topic Starter
kuyukiP
Okay, I updated all that was needed to be updated in my opinion from lovhin's mod. Full submission as well.
Also, I think it's okay to have the SB pieces have different version names of "Mozaik Role", since technically we found out that DECO*27, on his twitter, wrote "Muzik" (Or "Musik", I can't remember) as a reply to someone in English, so... ;)
And Darcsol, I actually really like the hitsounds you've done, but it's your choice. 8-)

And also, Darcsol and Lanttu, are you guys going to map until the end of the song?
Garven

kuyukiP wrote:

And also, Darcsol and Lanttu, are you guys going to map until the end of the song?
I wouldn't worry about that unless there are score/difficulty issues since they are guest difficulties.

Oh, and I'm haunting all of the Mozaik Role maps~

[Skin]
The center of the spinner circle is ever-so-slightly off-center. It's hardly noticeable, but I figure that I'll mention it.

[Scissors]
00:52:769 (1,2) - Check your spacing here
In the beginning here, you switch around from adhering strictly to following the vocal, then go to a loose version of the rhythm. It can be rather confusing for newer players, so I would suggest that you stick to one rhythm or the other. Also applies to the second verse.
Example: Compare 00:56:080 (1,2) - to 00:59:597 (1,2,3,4) - to 01:03:321 (1,2) -
01:03:735 (2) - This whistle doesn't sound good to me.
01:06:218 (1) - This spinner feels like it starts a little early for the music, but if you started it where it would feel best, it feels a little short for the difficulty. You may be best off mapping through it.
01:09:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you think you could configure these more pleasant-looking? Right now it's just kind of straight lines that are kind of positioned slightly off. Maybe go for something more curvy?
01:16:562 (6) - New combo here, remove new combo from the next note
01:19:873 (5) - ^
01:41:804 (4) - This whistle doesn't sound good to me.
01:43:045 (1) - Soft finish on start of slider?
01:45:942 (4) - New combo
02:31:769 - Move this green timing section to the end of the spinner. You don't need it slightly off any more, and the way it is now, you get a blast of the spinner sound right before the big "nante!" (and don't forget to move the one currently on the end of the spinner a bit forward as well)
02:42:631 (5) - New combo here, remove new combo from the next note
02:46:356 - Just map through this break.
02:58:356 (1) - Really felt like this slider would be better starting on 02:58:149 - but it would be too close to the spinner... which is also fairly short. I don't know if you want to map through that, or just delete these last notes and extend the final spinner all the way to the last note at 02:58:976 - for a better effect, imo.

[Glasses]
The beginning of this kind of has the same thing happening from the beginning of Scissors, though comparing 00:26:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - to 00:33:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , the latter plays muuuch better.
00:38:080 (4) - This kept catching me off guard considering that you were trying to follow the lyrics pretty heavily up to here, so I was expecting this to hit where the 5 slider starts. I guess this is continuing from the consistency thing though.
01:41:390 (1) - Remove new combo
02:00:838 (1,2,3) - This felt a little crowded.
02:02:907 - Spinner feels like it should start here.
02:05:390 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a normal. End it at 02:04:562 -
02:19:459 (1) - Add a finish
02:22:769 (5) - New combo
02:46:045 (1) - Start this on the red tick. Feels artificially soon for this OD.
02:58:873 - Unneeded timing section.

[Darcsol's Imitation]
00:23:183 (7,1) - This spacing intentional? It read okay, but the pattern that you have doesn't suggest an anti jump
00:40:149 (1) - Add a soft finish on this
01:19:045 (8,1) - Spacing?
01:22:356 (1,2) - Maybe use the soft hit sound set for these so you don't that that little popping sound that normal does at that low of volume?
02:32:700 - Take off the .5x bpm section here and restore it to 1x. Doesn't make sense having it slow for the first two beats of the intense ending.

[lovhin's Mirrored Self]
00:28:562 (1) - Remove new combo
00:29:804 (4) - New combo
00:39:425 (1) - This feels better starting at 00:40:149 -
01:02:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - These feel out of place with how you mapped this part of the song up until now.
01:16:562 (1) - Finish on start of slider
01:54:218 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Can you spruce this part up rhythmically? It's just that it turns into just on the beat hits for awhile and is kinda boring for this level of difficulty.
02:02:493 (1) - This feels like it would be better starting at 02:02:907 - and maybe have a silenced end, or a soft-hitnormal
02:31:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I foresee a lot of deaths at this part considering the level of difficulty up until here. :<
02:39:114 (8,9,1,2,3) - This part... might be better with a small stream of 3 instead of 5.

[Lan's Evil Self]
I think the only complaint I have is that the verses seem to be a lot more intense than the choruses. Otherwise, finely mapped.
Sekuyi
(No kudosu for this please...this is like nothing :s)

Nice song^^, some suggestions:

[Scissors]
Everything fine!

[Glasses]
- 01:37:666 to 01:39:321 ~ maybe change this part like this?

- 01:44:287 ~ maybe same here?

Have a star^^*
Fight69
Everything looks ok :

~Star !
Darcsol

Garven wrote:

[Darcsol's Imitation]
00:23:183 (7,1) - This spacing intentional? It read okay, but the pattern that you have doesn't suggest an anti jump Yes it is intentional.
00:40:149 (1) - Add a soft finish on this
01:19:045 (8,1) - Spacing?
01:22:356 (1,2) - Maybe use the soft hit sound set for these so you don't that that little popping sound that normal does at that low of volume?
02:32:700 - Take off the .5x bpm section here and restore it to 1x. Doesn't make sense having it slow for the first two beats of the intense ending. Fixed all above.
Download: Soraru - Mozaik Role (kuyukiP) [Darcsol's Imitation].osu
lovhin456

Garven wrote:

[lovhin's Mirrored Self]
00:28:562 (1) - Remove new combo Okk
00:29:804 (4) - New combo Okk
00:39:425 (1) - This feels better starting at 00:40:149 - Okk
01:02:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - These feel out of place with how you mapped this part of the song up until now. Okk
01:16:562 (1) - Finish on start of slider Okk
01:54:218 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Can you spruce this part up rhythmically? It's just that it turns into just on the beat hits for awhile and is kinda boring for this level of difficulty. Okk
02:02:493 (1) - This feels like it would be better starting at 02:02:907 - and maybe have a silenced end, or a soft-hitnormal Okk
02:31:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I foresee a lot of deaths at this part considering the level of difficulty up until here. :< I actually like this part so I'll leave it for now ... if someone else says something I'll change it
02:39:114 (8,9,1,2,3) - This part... might be better with a small stream of 3 instead of 5. Okk ... I guess
My diff + New rule says that mp3 can't be higher than 192 kbps ): So...
http://puu.sh/lkW
There we go ~ I'm not sure of the offset will change but when I changed the mp3 for one of my maps it still had the same offset ...

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Good news ~ Already submitted maps don't have to follow this rule I think so, no need to change the mp3
Download: Soraru - Mozaik Role (kuyukiP) [lovhin's Mirrored Self].osu
Topic Starter
kuyukiP
Fixed all of Garven's mod, and followed Sekuyi's suggestion. Thanks guys! :D
Lanttu
DJPop
- Scissors -
00:30:218 (1) - add clap at middle
00:33:528 (1) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:06:631 (5) - add hitfinish at start
01:14:907 (4) - add clap at middle
02:34:356 (5) - add clap at the end
02:37:252 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)

- Glasses -
Fine.

- Darcsol's Imitation -
01:38:080 (4) - add clap at the end
01:45:114 (8) - add clap at start
01:48:011 (5) - add clap at middle

- lovhin's Mirrored Self -
00:39:114 (6) - remove hitfinish
00:55:045 (6) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:06:218 (1) - add hitfinish

- Lan's Evil Self -
01:13:252 (2) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:19:045 (7) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star
lovhin456
Okk ~ Everything DJPop said was fixed ~
Download: Soraru - Mozaik Role (kuyukiP) [lovhin's Mirrored Self].osu
Darcsol

DJPop wrote:

- Darcsol's Imitation -
01:38:080 (4) - add clap at the end
01:45:114 (8) - add clap at start
01:48:011 (5) - add clap at middle
All added.
Download: Soraru - Mozaik Role (kuyukiP) [Darcsol's Imitation].osu
Verdisphena
Lan's Evil Self:

01:12:631 (7) - 1 grid down

lovhin's Mirrored Self:

01:21:114 (1) - Add whistle
01:21:321 (2) - ^

Darcsol's Imitation:
Fine

Glasses:

00:29:804 (1) - Ugly slider
00:36:425 (1) - ^
01:01:666 (1) - ^
01:05:287 (6,7) - 1 grid up
01:43:356 (3) - ^
01:49:976 (3) - ^

Scissors:

00:59:597 (1,2,3,4) - Better like this
01:17:390 (2) -The slider finish in 01:18:218

Sorry for my bad modding
Topic Starter
kuyukiP

Verdisphena wrote:

Glasses:

00:29:804 (1) - Ugly slider
00:36:425 (1) - ^
01:01:666 (1) - ^
01:05:287 (6,7) - 1 grid up
01:43:356 (3) - ^
01:49:976 (3) - ^

Scissors:

00:59:597 (1,2,3,4) - Better like this
http://puu.sh/t6T
01:17:390 (2) -The slider finish in 01:18:218

Sorry for my bad modding
Not bad modding at all. :) Thank you very much, your suggestions were used.
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