1. Yonah (5.44 stars, 1511 notes)

Hercule wrote:

Waiting until this is ranked...

Dragon wrote:

Look what I found!

Dragon wrote:

I found your map while making my own Final Song osu map.

Here is some modding suggestions!

General

GENERAL

#1.Metainfo

• >The "Drakengard 3" is the source of this song, that's why it should be write down in Source insead of title. Caution: Upon editing this, all players who downloaded before need to redownload it.
  > And you should write down some tags, although its not mandatory.

#2.You might need to focus on how to place sliders or notes more fancy instead of a bunch of streaming.

• > For example, 01:07:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - and Part 4 (Three's theme) have this problem and the latter one is fatal.

#3.Follow the beat inside the song.

• > I've noticed that some notes in your map do not following any kind of instrument or sounds very weird while playing, this clearly can be found at 03:57:225 (5,6) - and 05:33:962 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Diff: Marathon

Diff: Marathon

P1 ZERO

• > 00:27:000 (1,2) - See GENERAL #3. Consider to remove it and cover the beat with slider 00:27:250 (3).
  > 00:35:000 (1,2) - ↑Same
  > 01:07:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - A really weird streaming I mentioned before. Replace them with some fancy notes!

P2 FIVE

• > 01:38:662 ( Entire part of Five's theme ) - You should change your Beat Snap Divisor to 1/3 and start mapping because this part of song is using 1/3 per beat insead of traditional 1/4. This problem is extremely lethal. Consider remap this part! My mistake. Nvm this. But I still recommend you map this part with 1/3 Beat Snap Divisor to follow the drum instrument.

P3 FOUR

• > I think you miseds a note at 02:48:358.

P4 THREE

• > The red line at 02:55:060 is not follwing the rhythm, both offset and BPM is incorrect. although its not big problem and not effect the following notes, but I suggest you fix it because you have a spinner 02:54:970 (1) - there.
  > 03:04:378 ( All remaining part start from here ) - See GENERAL #2. remap them with fancy notes!

P5 TWO

• > 03:41:127 (6,7) This two combo streaming sounds weird and not following the song's instrument, just playing their own rhythm. Consider another way to chain your notes.
  03:42:590 (6,7) - ↑Same
  03:44:054 (6,7) - ↑Same
  03:45:517 (6,7) - ↑And same....
  ....and so on.
  > 04:06:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - See GENERAL #2

P6 ONE

• > 04:16:631 (1) - You probably need to silent the end of this spinner, because its easy to mix the rhythm up with the following note 04:19:340 (1,2,3) -
  > 04:33:487 (4) - This slider makes me unconfortable while in playing.
  > This part all construct with jumping notes, from start to the end, which is monotonous. Why not add more sliders?

P7 ENSEMBLE

• > 05:41:228 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The weird streaming again. Fill them with sliders and notes instead of a long streaming.
  > 06:01:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ↑Same

P8 Slow down part

• > You might need some sliders because the bpm is changing all the time, a slider can help the player to judge the slow-down rhythm.
  > 06:42:640 (1) - This slider and its red-line is not following the rhythm ( 70ms earlier than the beat of song and BPM is incorrect ), And this slider should be ending around 06:44:782 to catch the beat.
  > 06:47:040 (1) - This slider should be ending around 06:49:648 to catch the voice caster.

First time to write a modding.
Glad there is a storyboard at the end of the song. Awesome!
Feed me a Kudosu if you think this article is helpful.

IMustTurd wrote:

Holy heck wow this is amazing. Thank you!
This is my first ever map on osu so yeah any suggestion is great! Im sorta a noob when it comes to editing and dont know many requirements and editing methods so any advice is great! Thank you.

Dragon wrote:

IMustTurd wrote:

Holy heck wow this is amazing. Thank you!
This is my first ever map on osu so yeah any suggestion is great! Im sorta a noob when it comes to editing and dont know many requirements and editing methods so any advice is great! Thank you.

You are welcome! Feed me a Kudosu if you think my modding is helpful!

BTW here is my Final Song osu map >>> . Feel free to write a modding or give a suggestion! Thank you!