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The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude

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Topic Starter
Mortem

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Sleep dream w/
:3
Come[Back]Home
Chibi's Easy

00:07:700 (2,3,4) Hmm, i think you could improve the flow by doing this. 00:14:900 (2,3,4) I suggest you move 00:14:900 (2) too 288/280 (3) too 180/296 and (4) too 104/216 for a better flow
00:22:100 (2,3) I think this could be a slider to fill the emptiness
00:42:900 (1) You could move this too 292/128 for a perfect square with 00:40:500 (2,3,4)
00:53:300 (2) This one looks outta place, you should have it like (1) so it'll fit more
01:07:700 (4) Move this one too 148/208 for a perfect triangle with 01:06:100 (2,3)
01:10:900 (1,2) Same as 00:53:300 (2)

Goku's Normal

General
It may just be me, but i think sv 2,00 is a bit too high because Easy has 1,00

00:06:500 (3,1) Improve blank
00:12:900 (4,1) ^
00:14:900 (3) Move it too 88/236 and 00:15:300 (4) too 44/312 for a better flow
00:25:700 (3,1) Improve blank
00:37:300 (2) Curvy and blank with the slider before (1) would look nice, example 01:16:900 (4,1) Improve blank

Dream

00:06:500 (5) I think this one should repeat till here 00:06:800 since theres a sound too
00:12:900 (4) Same till 00:13:200
00:19:300 (3) ^
00:25:700 (4) ^
00:32:100 (4) ^
00:38:500 (5) ^
00:39:100 You could add a circle here since theres a sound
00:51:300 (4) Same as 00:38:500 (5)
00:51:700 (1,2,3) I think the change of ds is a bit confusing
00:57:700 (4) Same as 00:38:500 (5)
01:10:500 (4) ^
01:16:900 (5) ^

You just have to enlarge all repeatsliders ive pointed out 1 tick

Good Luck, and cool SB~
Topic Starter
Mortem
@Come[Back]Home Fixed all mentioned things. Thank you.
Kyouren
Fixed all etc. 00:37:300 (2), Reason: That have a instrumental music, so No!
Thanks for mod~

Goku's Normal
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TitleUnicode:Sleep Prelude
Artist:The Ghost Of 3.13
ArtistUnicode:The Ghost Of 3.13
Creator:Pjecoo
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Source:
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YellowManul
myu~ (>owo)>


Chibi's Easy
00:38:900 (1,2) - fix blanket owo
00:42:900 (1) - fix that overlap :<
00:57:700 (1,2) - blanket?
01:02:500 (5) - you should copy 01:01:300 (4) - here, it will be more beautiful ;w;
01:17:300 (1,2) - blanket?
01:21:900 (1) - your spinner should be on the end of the tick, and i suggest start spinner here 01:21:900


Dream
It's better to put AR7, not 7,6. owo\
00:16:500 (1) - I'd make this curve. (Like: http://puu.sh/iDgrZ/9cda5bfd49.jpg or blanket owo)
00:24:100 (2,3) - very nazi thing, but i WANT them to look like this: http://puu.sh/iDgus/5331cd1130.jpg
01:15:300 (2,3,4) - sudden jump owo\
same with spinner



ok short mod
u know
#blamemanul


goodluck owo/// :)
Snaggletooth
M4M! Sorry for the delay. You know what I've been doing.

  1. Check your Tags! Goku's Normal has diffrent Tags.
  2. Please consider silencing your slider-slide. It sounds really cringy to have
    a constant relatively loud drum-roll while playing this song. http://puu.sh/iEnt6/57b02858c8.wav

[Chibi's Easy]
  1. 01:22:900 (1) - As long as that spinner ends off-beat it's unrankable. Please shorten
    the spinner to 01:32:500 and silence it.

  2. Placement Issues:
    1. 00:07:700 (2) - I highly suggest you stretch the slider-path a bit more. Havin it crunched like that
      can result in some confusion for new players. They might release earlier because they thought it was
      only a short slider, while it was in fact a 1/1 slider. You're also not highlighting anything with this
      shape, so I don't really see a reason to keep it that way. 00:10:900 (4) - Something like that
      would be totally fine.
    2. 00:42:900 (1,2) - The overlap is bugging me, but more importantly, the DS is messed up here.
      That's a jump and on easier difficulties it's not allowed. Please fix this.

[Goku's Normal]
  1. 01:22:900 (1) - Since Easy had an unrankable issue (and perhaps shortened the spinner) I suggest
    you do the same to keep consistency. Shorten the spinner to 01:32:500 and silence it.

  2. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 00:34:700 (4) - Is there a particular reason as to why you start your slider on a blue tick? There
      is no no bell, sound or anything on the blue tick. I highliy
      suggest you set this slider to 00:34:900
    2. 00:46:900 (4) - Considering that this song has a very low 'beat'-density, it is important to catch
      as much as possible to acctually... well... Play. You're missing a bell on 00:47:100 which can be
      fixed with a little change in rhythm and as far as I know, I havent seen a 'missed' bell anywhere
      else in your map.


[Dream]
  1. 01:22:900 (1) - As long as that spinner ends off-beat it's unrankable. Please shorten
    the spinner to 01:32:500 and silence it.

  2. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 00:45:000 (6) - Consider removing this circle. It dosn't hit any noise other than the
      glitch-bell (Yes, that what we shall call it) which already starts on 00:44:900 - this makes
      it play very awkward since theres no real tune to orient on. Acctually, why don't
      you use a 1/16 slider here? It would fix the consistency with 00:38:500 (5) - ect ect

    2. 01:04:100 (5,6,7) - ^ //Consistency
    3. 01:15:900 (3,4) - I really, really don't know how to describe this other than 'It
      plays reeeeally off while playing'. Considering that this whole map focuses on the bells, mapping
      such a faint drum-rim sound is not a good idea. The sample-set drowns it out anyways, making
      it a bit 'useless'. You could simply use one circle on 01:16:000 or use a 1/8 slider here.
  3. Placement Issues:
    1. 00:12:900 (4) - I don't see a problem using DS 0.9x here. This will take care of the ovelap and
      considering that the rest of the map is really really easy (+ it's supposed to be a 'hard' Difficulty),
      this should be an easy and acceptable fix.
    2. 00:24:700 (3) - ^
    3. 00:34:500 (5) - ^
    4. 00:38:900 (1,2,3) - ^
    5. 00:41:100 (6) - ^ // Even if you decide to not use 0.9x, fix the DS with 0.7x as it is
      messed up here anyways.
    6. 00:44:100 (3,4) - ^
    7. 00:49:700 (2,3) - ^
    8. 00:52:300 (2,3) - ^
  4. Hitsound Issues:
    1. 00:06:500 (5) - Consider using only 5-8% volume on this hold-slider. The current volume is to
      big and drowns out the really calm and quiet song.
    2. 00:12:900 (4) - ^
    3. 00:19:300 (3) - ^
    4. 00:25:700 (4) - ^
    5. 00:32:100 (4) - ^
    6. 00:38:500 (5) - ^
    7. 00:51:300 (4) - ^
    8. 00:57:700 (4) - ^
    9. 01:10:500 (4) - ^
    10. 01:16:900 (4) - ^
    11. 00:34:100 (4) - Consider removing whistle from the slider tracks here. You never use it anywhere
      else, the other difficulties don't use it either making this inconsistent. Besides that, it really dosn't harmonize
      with the song and drowns it out, more than highlight anything.

Good luck
Topic Starter
Mortem
@Snaggletooth: Fixed all you've mentioned. Also about hitsounds and stuff, I asked Sieg for hitsounds, so I'll apply your hitsound suggestions after he'll finish it.
@YellowManul: Fixed.

Thanks you two~ ♥
Sieg
http://puu.sh/iFOmC/cff4efbeb8.zip
just a sketch, all changes up to you
Topic Starter
Mortem

Sieg wrote:

just a sketch, all changes up to you
Thanks c:
Kyouren
Fixed all, thanks for mod~ :3
Update!

Goku's Normal
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448,236,81300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,148,81700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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riffy
Hello there, as promised. Please note that all the things listed here are just suggestions, you are NOT obligated to follow any of these.

[Storyboard]
  1. noise(n).png files have no code in your .osb, therefore they're unused and should be either removed or codded. :)
  2. You can avoid unnecessary M code.
    How do I do that?
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"sb/kotatko.png",320,240
    M,0,19700,,300,419
    We can clearly see that those objects appear in the centre of the window (x320y240)and then they're moved to x300y419. So, we edit the first line to make objects appear where we want them to and remove unnecessary M command.
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"sb/kotatko.png",300,4190
    Don't forget to do the same with the girl's silhouette.
  3. An epilepsy warning might be necessary due to quickly flashing elements (noise).
[General]
  1. Instead of slightly pink combo colours I'd recommend to use something sepia-like to make it match better with the main theme of the set.
    Colors
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 177,177,137
    Combo2 : 192,192,192
    Combo3 : 179,181,157
    Combo4 : 128,128,128
  2. The spinner in the end feels pretty long, maybe we could amake it shorter nand fin ish it on the downbeat, so that it makes more sense with the track and doesn't exhaust players with endless spinning.
[Chibi's Easy]
  1. 00:04:500 (4,1) - try to avoid spacing changes like this one, they can be easily misread as 3/2 patterns.
  2. 00:07:700 (2) - minor - the song itself is very calm and soft, in addition to this - this is the easiest diff. I would highly recommend to avoid any forced and self-overlapping curves as they might confuse some newbies. This or a simple straight slider would do better, I believe.
  3. 00:10:100 - the stronger beat (which is placed on a downbeat, by the way) is unclickable here. It might lower playability of the difficulty, as the players can't feel the strongest beats of the track. Why don't we try a rhythm like this instead?
    Note: 00:32:500 - -similar with the suggestion above, I think.
  4. 00:40:500 (2,3) - as the beats are quite weak, I'd recommend to use a slider here, instead of two circles.

    The difficulty is not bad, but I would say it needs some more mods on its appearance and maybe a few fixes in terms of its rhythm.
[Goku's Normal]
  1. Circle size of 3,9 or 4 would make much more sense and improve the balance of the spread
  2. 00:30:500 - I am pretty sure that the beat here is a strong one and should have more emphasis on it. So, how about a rhythm like this instead?
  3. 01:13:700 (1) - as the beats here are really weak, this slider feels really forced. I'd say it feels much better without the slider here.

    I'd recommend to get a few more opinions just to be sure about the diffs as I feel quite uncomfortable with a few patterns here. But overall, that is fine.
[Mysterious]
I thought a diffname like this would be a little more suitable for this song. Just my vision of the song, though.
  1. 00:02:500 (4,5) - there is a beat ignored in the next white tick, and it sounds stronger than the ones you have mapped. What do you think about this?
  2. 00:04:900 - I can hardly hear anything strong enough to begin a sllider here. I'd probably remove the slider and focus on the main stuff. example
  3. 00:09:100 (5) - might work better as an 1/4 slider. Check it out, it should perfectly represent a suddden stop at the white tick.
  4. 00:26:100 (1) - shouldn't this one be finished at 00:26:300 - where the beat actually is? It is a weak, but audible one.
  5. 00:30:900 (3) - try to add a repeat here, this would sound so much better. Why? Because there is a stop on the red tick, which is begging to have a slidertail on it, I believe.
  6. 00:32:500 (1,2) - another one, the stronger beat is left out and mapped with a slidertail. Have a look at this and let me know what do you think about this!
  7. 00:56:300 (2) - sounds like this little guy does not really follow anything. Probably it's better if we get him out of the playfield.
  8. 01:04:100 (5,6,7) - I'd suggest to use sliders instead of triplets, so, the spread will work slightly better. And what's more, players will have a chance to relax and feel the song as an actual "Sleep Prelude"

    Just a few more fixes in terms of rhythm and this will be a great diff!
What do we have here? A pretty nice and almost good-to-go set with a few fixes/mods required.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Kyouren
Fixed all, but I change CS, HP, AR, OD +0.5~ :3
Thanks for mod~, Update!

Goku's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: sleep prelude.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70500
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Sleep Prelude
TitleUnicode:Sleep Prelude
Artist:The Ghost Of 3.13
ArtistUnicode:The Ghost Of 3.13
Creator:Pjecoo
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:
Tags:Old Lost Unfinished Broken
BeatmapID:723847
BeatmapSetID:325816

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4.5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4.5
ApproachRate:5.5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"8QpQ8p5giz4.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
500,800,4,2,1,14,1,0
78900,-100,4,2,1,16,0,0
82100,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 216,175,204
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 192,173,192
Combo4 : 128,128,128

[HitObjects]
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Euny
as your request! sorry for delay dom!


  • Chibi's Easy
  1. 00:07:700 (2) - flow feels bit uncomfortable for me. how about this?
  2. 00:06:900 (1,2,3,4) - these are pretty weird timeline imo. lets makes these more easier.
  3. i'm not sure its fine or not. just i recommend keep ds. these objects are too close or far. please recheck some..
    00:24:100 (3,1)
    00:44:100 (2,1)
    01:02:500 (5,1)
  • Goku's Normal
  1. 00:16:500 (1) - how about change for more curvy? it will be better flow for next object.
  2. 00:17:300 (2) - change volume or additions. i feel bit loud this normal finish.
  3. 01:12:500 (3) - this additions again. please less volume. like 01:18:900 (3) - this
  • Dream
  1. 00:16:500 (1) - how about change shape like this? i feel looks better.
  2. 00:17:300 (2) - this sound bit loud for music imo. lets less volume
  3. 00:30:900 (3) - i think reverse doesnt fit to this. cause 00:31:300 (4) - here is no sound. i recommend to remove reverse.
  4. 00:32:500 (1,2) - flow feels bit uncomfortable for me. 00:32:500 (1) - rotate this slider with -22 degrees(with selection centre) and move 00:33:300 (2) - this bit close. much pretty.
  5. 00:34:100 (4) - i think this object bit far with 00:34:500 (5) - this. lets less distance. like this.
  6. 00:44:100 (3,4) - how about change these for 1/8 slider? i saw you already using for similar parts. that tapping too harsh.
  7. 01:06:100 (4,5) - hmm,, isnt they are too close?
  8. 01:12:500 (3) - same reason by 00:17:300 (2) -this. less volume bit..
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
Topic Starter
Mortem
@Euny Fixed everything except: 00:30:900 (3) - & 00:44:100 (3,4) -. Thank you.
MoodyRPG
Random mod.

General
  1. ~
Chibi's Easy
  1. 00:13:300 (1) - Make this slider on the other side, like this
Goku's Normal
  1. Keep the consistency in Slider Tick like the others difficulties, use 1, not 2
Dream
  1. 00:15:700 (5) - Just a suggestion, stack this note with the previous slider?
  2. 00:38:900 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern more curved
Only suggestions, perfect map and nice song of 3.13 :), I hope this will get ranked

Good luck Pjecoo o\
Kyouren
Not fixed about change volume, reason: i don't listening a hitsound, so is fixed and slider tick, reason: because this song is slow, so it's okay :3
Thanks for mod~ :3
Upgrade!

Goku's is a evill wolf!
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: sleep prelude.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70500
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Sleep Prelude
TitleUnicode:Sleep Prelude
Artist:The Ghost Of 3.13
ArtistUnicode:The Ghost Of 3.13
Creator:Pjecoo
Version:Goku's Normal
Source:
Tags:Old Lost Unfinished Broken Chibichan10 gokugohan12468
BeatmapID:723847
BeatmapSetID:325816

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"8QpQ8p5giz4.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
500,800,4,2,1,14,1,0
78900,-100,4,2,1,16,0,0
82100,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
82900,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 216,175,204
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 192,173,192
Combo4 : 128,128,128

[HitObjects]
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Anyway, here is a better slider~ :3
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Topic Starter
Mortem

MoodyRPG wrote:

Dream
  1. 00:15:700 (5) - Just a suggestion, stack this note with the previous slider? - Leaving like it is.
  2. 00:38:900 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern more curved - Fixed.
Only suggestions, perfect map and nice song of 3.13 :), I hope this will get ranked

Good luck Pjecoo o\
- Thanks c:
Kyouren
Thanks for mod, Geronimma~ :3
Upgrade!
Goku's want crying ;w;
osu file format v14

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Lethargy
Yo

Easy and Dream IRC mod
19:21 Pjecoo: ahoj.
19:21 Pjecoo: kdy bys mi to mohl modnout?
19:21 *Pjecoo is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723609 The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude [Dream]]
19:21 Geronimaa: yo
19:21 Geronimaa: jo a jo
19:21 Geronimaa: sry
19:21 Geronimaa: zapomnel jsem
19:21 Geronimaa: udelam to tedka
19:21 Pjecoo: ok
19:22 Pjecoo: U Easy to opravím já, jelikož chibi je na dovolené
19:22 Geronimaa: ok
19:22 Geronimaa: takze jen dream a easy?
19:22 Pjecoo: Udělej i Normal.
19:22 Pjecoo: počkej
19:22 Pjecoo: já se ho zeptám.
19:22 Pjecoo: budeš dělat IRC?
19:23 Geronimaa: muzu
19:23 Pjecoo: Ok.
19:24 Pjecoo: Máš mu prý pak napsat ohledně toho.
19:24 Pjecoo: on je online
19:24 Geronimaa: okej
19:24 Pjecoo: takže když budeš chtít něco změnit tak se obrať na něj s Normálem.
19:24 Pjecoo: ok
19:24 Pjecoo: you can start. :)
19:25 Geronimaa: ty chces taky irc?
19:25 Pjecoo: Uděláme to tady a hned.
19:25 Geronimaa: ok
19:25 Pjecoo: At nezmatkujem.
19:25 Geronimaa: jasne
19:26 Geronimaa: /np
19:26 *Geronimaa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723609 The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude [Dream]]
19:26 Geronimaa: 00:18:100 (3) -
19:26 Pjecoo: mm-hmm
19:26 Geronimaa: tohle by mohlo by lip umisteny
19:27 Geronimaa: tohle je docela tezky 00:44:100 (3,4) -
19:27 Geronimaa: kdyz berem v potaz jakej to ma star rating
19:28 Pjecoo: Takže u toho dát třeba slider nebo tak?
19:28 Geronimaa: ay
19:28 Geronimaa: slider
19:28 Geronimaa: jj
19:28 Pjecoo: 00:44:100 (3,4) -
19:28 Geronimaa: tam by mozna sel i rovnou tirple
19:28 Geronimaa: v tomhle pripade kickback
19:28 Geronimaa: protoze tam "jakoby je" sound co se da zmapovat za tim
19:29 Pjecoo: ;ok je to tam.
19:29 Geronimaa: a nebo
19:29 Geronimaa: treba tohle http://puu.sh/iUg27/a970e6c6d0.png
19:29 Pjecoo: já tam dal prostě 1/8 slider.
19:29 Geronimaa: btw je normalni
19:29 Geronimaa: ok
19:29 Geronimaa: ze mi zacne mizet SB a BG v editu?
19:29 Pjecoo: To se stane.
19:29 Pjecoo: Osu bug.
19:29 Geronimaa: ty peppy
19:29 Geronimaa: 00:53:300 (4,5) -
19:30 Geronimaa: jeden z tech slideru by mohl byt cuver
19:30 Geronimaa: curved
19:30 Geronimaa: treba takto http://puu.sh/iUg68/e8f86c2a76.jpg
19:30 Geronimaa: imo to vypada lip
19:30 Geronimaa: a tenhle by zas sel ctrl j
19:30 Geronimaa: 00:56:500 (2) -
19:31 Geronimaa: nejak takhle http://puu.sh/iUg8x/775ce96ba8.jpg
19:31 Geronimaa: stihas to?
19:31 Pjecoo: jj
19:31 Pjecoo: opraveno
19:31 Pjecoo: oboje
19:31 Geronimaa: alright
19:32 Geronimaa: tyhle bych unstacknul 01:02:500 (3,4) -
19:32 Geronimaa: a dal treba vedle sebe
19:32 Geronimaa: jelikoz ten zvuk tam stoupa
19:32 Geronimaa: a neni stejnej
19:32 Pjecoo: ok
19:32 Pjecoo: fixed.
19:33 Geronimaa: nebylo by lepsi udelat tyhle 01:15:300 (2,3) -
19:33 Geronimaa: jakoze by byly rovnobezny
19:33 Geronimaa: a ta 3 by mohla byt vic nahore http://puu.sh/iUgiB/87fb3caa02.jpg
19:34 Geronimaa: dal
19:34 Geronimaa: bych mozna trochu rozlisil barvy 2 a 4
19:34 Geronimaa: jelikoz jsou hodne podobny
19:34 Geronimaa: teda pokud to neni intended
19:34 Geronimaa: pockat wtf
19:34 Geronimaa: ta mapa je od chibichan
19:35 Geronimaa: ty cesky?
19:35 Pjecoo: ok
19:35 Pjecoo: ano
19:35 Geronimaa: lolwut
19:35 Geronimaa: posledni dobou se tu objevuje cim dal vic lidi v cesku co mapujou
19:35 Pjecoo: ona začala už dávno
19:35 Pjecoo: se mě zeptala, jestli by mohla zkusit easy.
19:35 Geronimaa: ale ze ja to o tom nemel tuseni
19:36 Pjecoo: udělala ho celkem v klidu až na pár věcí ale to se spraví.
19:36 Pjecoo: xD
19:36 Geronimaa: jj :D
19:36 Geronimaa: you and your low bpm songs with insane SV
19:36 Geronimaa: no jako
19:36 Geronimaa: takhle
19:36 Geronimaa: ten easy neni spatnej
19:36 Geronimaa: ale
19:37 Geronimaa: ta mapa z esteticky stranky je pro me takovej trn do oka
19:37 Pjecoo: chápu
19:37 Pjecoo: je to takové trochu matouc umístěné.
19:37 Geronimaa: takze jako
19:37 Geronimaa: ja bych predelal hodne veci co se tyce note placementu a slidershapu
19:38 Pjecoo: jasně mno.
19:38 Pjecoo: já mám u tohohle volnou ruku
19:38 Geronimaa: tady by se dal vytvorit triangle na konci 00:02:100 (2,3,4) -
19:38 Pjecoo: takže řekni a já opravím.
19:38 Geronimaa: okej
19:38 Geronimaa: jakoby triangle tam je
19:38 Geronimaa: ale krivej :D
19:39 Geronimaa: ale spis nez triangle bych tam udelal
19:39 Geronimaa: neco takovyho http://puu.sh/iUgDo/93d51dbc8c.jpg
19:39 Geronimaa: to vypada lip podle me
19:39 Geronimaa: nebo rovnou http://puu.sh/iUgEz/7ed5a031b2.jpg
19:40 Geronimaa: blanket pls 00:08:500 (2,3) -
19:41 Geronimaa: tady bych dal rovnej slider 00:13:300 (1) -
19:41 Geronimaa: treba takto http://puu.sh/iUgL4/2c5b550855.png
19:41 Geronimaa: 5 trochu vic dolu
19:41 Geronimaa: 00:18:100 (5) -
19:41 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iUgMD/c0596a0cd5.jpg
19:42 Geronimaa: tenhle slider 00:19:700 (1) - by sel stacknout s
19:42 Pjecoo: počkej
19:42 Pjecoo: jdu na wc
19:42 Geronimaa: 00:18:100 (5) -
19:42 Geronimaa: okej
19:44 Pjecoo: dal jsem to níž
19:44 Geronimaa: ok
19:46 Geronimaa: 00:22:100 (2) -
19:46 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iUh2F/50d2cc47e0.jpg
19:46 Geronimaa: mozna jeste trochu vic zaoblit
19:47 Pjecoo: kvůli DS jsem (1) posunul dolů a http://puu.sh/iUh3Y.jpg
19:47 Geronimaa: ok
19:47 Geronimaa: 00:27:700 (2) -
19:47 Geronimaa: nejak zhruba takhle ? http://puu.sh/iUh6W/219dbb57da.jpg
19:48 Geronimaa: 00:34:500 (3) -
19:48 Geronimaa: tohle lehce zaoblit
19:48 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iUh8Y/0ac084a8c6.jpg
19:49 Geronimaa: mozna bych dal sem kolecko 00:37:300 (5) -
19:49 Geronimaa: nebo nejakym zpusobem zmapoval
19:50 Geronimaa: 00:37:300 (5,1,2) -
19:50 Geronimaa: 00:38:900 (1,2) - *
19:50 Geronimaa: s temahle by to chtelo neco udelat
19:50 Geronimaa: DS 00:44:100 (2,1) -
19:52 Geronimaa: tyhle by sli mozna trochu zakroutit
19:52 Pjecoo: ok
19:52 Pjecoo: done.
19:52 Geronimaa: pls no overlap 01:04:500 (1,4) -
19:52 Geronimaa: 01:12:500 (2) - tohle by slo udelat takhle http://puu.sh/iUhq4/37e64ba65d.jpg
19:52 Pjecoo: done
19:53 Geronimaa: blanket pls 01:17:300 (1,2) -
19:53 Geronimaa: well
19:53 Geronimaa: thats it
19:54 Pjecoo: ok
19:54 Geronimaa: ted za tim goku?
19:54 Pjecoo: jj
19:54 Geronimaa: to je gokugohan?
19:54 Pjecoo: an
19:54 Pjecoo: *ano
20:06 Geronimaa: hele
20:06 Geronimaa: proc goku nevi co je blanket
20:07 Pjecoo: lol až tak?
20:07 Geronimaa: no
20:07 Pjecoo: pošli mu stránku z wiki a pochopí
20:07 Geronimaa: jakoby on zna vyznam
20:07 Pjecoo: bad english.
20:07 Geronimaa: ale kdyz jsem mu napsal aby si opravil tenhle blanket http://puu.sh/iUinw/f48a3e71c4.jpg
20:08 Geronimaa: tak mi napsal ze ejk v pohode
20:08 Pjecoo: aha
20:08 Geronimaa: a moje OCD je dost silny na to
20:08 Geronimaa: abych mu to proste napraskal do hlavy :D
20:09 Pjecoo: xD
20:28 Pjecoo: on je v prdeli z tvého modu xD
20:28 Geronimaa: proc :D
20:28 Pjecoo: tak mi předává štafetu
20:28 Geronimaa: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z9Nvgf_lNTQ
20:29 Pjecoo: http://puu.sh/iUjFi.jpg
20:29 Geronimaa: lol
20:29 Geronimaa: snazi se rict
20:29 Geronimaa: ze mu jeho diff udelam horsi
20:30 Geronimaa: jestli jsem to pochopil spravne
20:30 Pjecoo: ano
20:30 Geronimaa: shotsfired
20:30 Geronimaa: SHOTS FUCKIN FIRED
20:30 Geronimaa: KLUK SI ZACAL VALKU
20:30 Geronimaa: DO KUNDY TO NECHCE

Goku's Normal IRC MOD
19:54 Geronimaa: yo
19:55 gokugohan12468: Yo~ w/
19:55 Geronimaa: lets mod your map
19:55 *Geronimaa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723847 The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude [Goku's Normal]]
19:56 *gokugohan12468 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723847 The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude [Goku's Normal]]
19:56 Geronimaa: alright so
19:56 Geronimaa: first
19:56 Geronimaa: enable epilepsy warning
19:56 Geronimaa: since other diffs have it
19:56 Geronimaa: and yours doesnt
19:56 gokugohan12468: Why?
19:56 Geronimaa: becuase easy and dream have it
19:57 Geronimaa: it should be same for every diff
19:57 gokugohan12468: sorry, i think you said check or not use epilespy warning
19:57 gokugohan12468: okay, done!
19:57 Geronimaa: alright
19:58 Geronimaa: there should be a note here 00:02:100 (4) -
19:58 Geronimaa: same here 00:04:500 (2) -
19:58 Geronimaa: here could be as well 00:10:900 (3) -
19:59 Geronimaa: blanket 00:06:500 (4,1) -
19:59 Geronimaa: 00:06:500 (4,1,2) - triangle
19:59 Geronimaa: blanket 00:12:900 (5,1) -
19:59 Geronimaa: blanket 00:14:900 (3,4) -
19:59 gokugohan12468: well, 00:02:100 (4) - that already have a note
20:00 Geronimaa: nope
20:00 gokugohan12468: 00:10:900 (3) - nope
20:00 Geronimaa: i dont see anything here http://puu.sh/iUhSw/252c611768.jpg
20:01 Geronimaa: blanket 00:25:700 (3,1) -
20:01 gokugohan12468: stop plz
20:01 Geronimaa: why
20:01 gokugohan12468: let me answer first
20:01 Geronimaa: your answers take too long
20:02 Geronimaa: i dont have that much time
20:02 gokugohan12468: 00:02:500 (4) - that have a slider, so is okay to me
20:02 Geronimaa: these two are overlaping 00:00:500 (1,4) -
20:02 gokugohan12468: Trying you use 25% playback
20:02 gokugohan12468: That have sa sound
20:02 gokugohan12468: a*
20:02 gokugohan12468: about blanket, that is done for blanket, so nope
20:03 Geronimaa: what
20:03 gokugohan12468: about overlaping, so?
20:03 Geronimaa: those blankets are terribad
20:03 Geronimaa: is this blanket to you? http://puu.sh/iUi6e/5c259a1218.jpg
20:04 gokugohan12468: yes
20:04 Geronimaa: NO ITS NOT
20:04 Geronimaa: its a very bad blanket
20:04 gokugohan12468: That my style
20:04 gokugohan12468: --"
20:04 Geronimaa: oh
20:04 Geronimaa: your style
20:04 gokugohan12468: not really
20:04 Geronimaa: i understand
20:04 Geronimaa: im sorry
20:04 Geronimaa: i didnt think this atrocity is your style
20:04 Geronimaa: but ok
20:04 gokugohan12468: I ask other mapping, they said it's okay
20:04 Geronimaa: its your style
20:04 gokugohan12468: it's can be blanket -w-
20:05 gokugohan12468: About blanket, my style is same like bakari diff, so why not? :/
20:05 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iUidR/9ed86bed4e.jpg
20:05 Geronimaa: taken from modhelp
20:06 gokugohan12468: i see --"
20:09 Geronimaa: 00:42:900 (2,3) -
20:09 Geronimaa: blanket
20:09 Geronimaa: 00:48:900 (1,2) - blanket
20:10 Geronimaa: blanket 00:52:900 (3,4) -
20:10 Geronimaa: these are very closoe to HP bar
20:10 Geronimaa: consider putting it lower
20:10 gokugohan12468: like this can?
20:10 gokugohan12468: http://puu.sh/iUire/c3e35f9c1e.jpg
20:11 Geronimaa: do you know how to make blankets?
20:11 Geronimaa: but yea
20:11 Geronimaa: tahts fine
20:12 Geronimaa: better flow pls 01:08:500 (2,3) -
20:12 Geronimaa: blanket 01:10:500 (4,1) -
20:13 Geronimaa: pls no overlaps 01:19:700 (5,3) -
20:13 Geronimaa: thats it
20:13 gokugohan12468: about flow, i can't because distance snap pt that
20:14 Geronimaa: you can improve flow
20:14 Geronimaa: just by making that slider curved
20:14 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iUiNe/a4d24d339e.jpg
20:14 gokugohan12468: i think i just following a music
20:15 gokugohan12468: what is overlaps?
20:16 Geronimaa: when tumpang tindih
20:16 Geronimaa: tumpang tindih
20:17 gokugohan12468: holy shit, you speak a Indonesian D:
20:17 Geronimaa: google translate
20:18 gokugohan12468: please to not use google translate
20:18 gokugohan12468: 90% is wrong
20:18 gokugohan12468: I think
20:19 gokugohan12468: http://puu.sh/iUj0C/fd94122cca.jpg
20:19 gokugohan12468: Is okay if that not blanket
20:23 Geronimaa: sure
20:24 gokugohan12468: Done?
20:25 gokugohan12468: Because your mod is too faster and conjuring
20:25 gokugohan12468: make me dizzy ;w;
20:26 Geronimaa: ok
20:30 gokugohan12468: Okay, you cn post in Pjecoo's forum
20:30 gokugohan12468: Thanks for mod~ :3
20:30 Geronimaa: you are welcome
CerealeKiller
Hi hi

Just before anything, is it just me or the volume is lower than all average mapsets ? Dunno if it's something to mention and I know that the song is really calm, but if all maps have a different volume it would be a pain for the player to change it all the time when he plays different maps.

[Dream]

00:15:300 (4,5) - That overlap doesn't look good imo, I would either separate completely both elements or either place at least 50% of the 5 in the slider's end
00:17:300 (2) - You could make that slider smoother by using more points and even a red one, like this
00:40:500 (5,6) - perhaps you could improve flow a bit... but that's not important
00:43:700 (2) - I don't really like that slider being straight, I'd like it more like this
00:53:300 (4,5,6) - I don't like those overlaps, Here also I would separate the elements
01:12:500 (3) - Very simple slider for a long one, wouldn't be bad to make something more... complex

[Goku's Normal]

I don't have much to say, that diff is clean, the only thing that I see to be improved are the blankets that aren't always perfect.

[Chibi's Easy]

There are few things that you could improve, especially concerning flow and blankets
Blankets : 00:06:900 (1,2,3) - 00:16:500 (4,5) - 00:22:100 (2,3) - 01:17:300 (1,2) -
Flow : 00:19:700 (1,2) - 00:40:500 (2,3,4) - 00:57:700 (1,2,3) - 01:06:900 (3,4) -
00:00:500 (1,2) - I would curve those less so they have a better flow (like here 00:51:700 (1,2) - )
00:32:500 (1,2) - Higher DS here
00:45:300 (1) - That slider is short to make a such curved S, try to curve it less and it will look sexier


Aaaand, I think that's all, good luck for ranking this :)
Topic Starter
Mortem
@CerealeKiller - Fixed everything you mentioned + applied on Easy diff. (With Chibi's permission). Thank you.
Wafu
IRC modded, here are just few things on other diffs:

  • Chibi's Easy
  1. 00:30:500 (4) - This rhythm is not really cool for easy, please end this slider on place which is more audiable. Respectively, you end sliders on low volume places kind often, but you actually if you have the option, should map it to the most significant sound. Thus, in this case it should end on 00:30:500 (4) - or similar.
  2. 00:32:500 (1) - Same as above, this should actually end on 00:33:100 - to provide clearer rhythm.
  3. 00:51:700 (1) - Same as above.
  4. 00:32:500 (1) - Same as above.
  5. 01:06:900 (3) - Please, remove this note, because it is not mapped to any sound, which doesn't play nice.
  6. Also I don't see any reason why this diff is using different combo color while the SB and BG are same.
Call me back.
Topic Starter
Mortem
Chibichan told me to fix everything in her difficulty so I did. And also fixed everything in other diffs. - Updated.
Wafu
Seems better, we also fixed a little spread issue, should be good enough to go.
Krfawy
Tylko dam tutaj sprawdzanie IRC i mogę dać ranka. \o3o/

#RAK
21:00 Pjecoo: We're not alone~ ♪
21:00 Krfawy: OMG you know this map? o3o
21:00 Pjecoo: Actually I don't
21:00 Krfawy: XDDD
21:00 Krfawy: Bakari-chan's mapset
21:00 Pjecoo: But i remember our conversation and you've mentioned.
21:01 Krfawy: oh yeah
21:01 Krfawy: true xD
21:42 Pjecoo: Just wanted to ask you, if you are going to check the Sleep Prelude...I know, i shouldn't annoy you with this...But you told me that you'll take a look today. :x
21:43 Krfawy: oh true
21:48 Pjecoo: I'll link it here, and feel free to check it, whenever you want.
21:48 *Pjecoo is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723648 The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude]
21:54 Krfawy: well the very first point is the thing there's no audioleadin ;w;
21:54 Krfawy: when the maps start at the very beginning
21:54 Pjecoo: It's automatically generated if i'm not mistaken.
21:55 Krfawy: welp not on my PC xD
21:55 Krfawy: it's just like not even a one second and I have to click
21:55 Pjecoo: We had a similar issue with Stay With Me. But in the rules is, that I shouldn't edit AudioLeadIn.
21:55 Krfawy: so still I recommend audioleadin :C
21:55 Krfawy: what rules
21:56 Pjecoo: At least someone from nominators told me to.
21:56 Pjecoo: Nvm.
21:56 Pjecoo: How many?
21:56 Pjecoo: 500 AudioLeadIn.
21:56 Pjecoo: Or less/mroe?
21:56 Krfawy: I think like 1500-2500 should be ok
21:56 Pjecoo: *more?
21:57 Pjecoo: Fixed.
21:58 Pjecoo: Update or should I wait?
21:58 Krfawy: wait a second
21:58 Krfawy: next thing is those green like colours are too similar =w=
21:59 Krfawy: they are almost the same D:
21:59 Pjecoo: I did change them.
21:59 Krfawy: K
21:59 Pjecoo: They were similar yea, but i made a less contrasted.
21:59 Pjecoo: *made them...
22:00 Krfawy: kotatko <3
22:00 Pjecoo: ♥
22:07 Krfawy: you know to be honest
22:07 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723609 The Ghost Of 3.13 - Sleep Prelude [Dream]]
22:07 Krfawy: I would suggest waaaaay lower AR, like AR6 ;3;
22:07 Pjecoo: hm?
22:08 Krfawy: I know it's SV3.1 but it's still very calm and relaxing D:
22:08 Pjecoo: I would like to keep it like it is... :x
22:08 Krfawy: ;3;
22:08 Krfawy: OKAY .3.
22:08 Krfawy: updaterino pls o3o
22:09 Pjecoo: Updated
22:09 Pjecoo: AudioLeadIn changed to 1500 as you said.
22:11 Krfawy: are you sure you uploaded changes?
22:11 Pjecoo: Yes I'm sure.
22:11 Krfawy: there's no audioleadin and changed colour xD
22:11 Pjecoo: Wtf.
22:11 Krfawy: in any of the diffs
22:11 Pjecoo: I'm sure that I've changed that.
22:12 Krfawy: well maybe it just didn't get it got saved
22:12 Krfawy: happens very often at my PC D:
22:12 Pjecoo: oh hold on
22:12 Krfawy: ? :3
22:12 Pjecoo: i'll do it once more.
22:12 Pjecoo: http://puu.sh/iVyQW.png
22:12 Krfawy: K
22:12 Pjecoo: correct colors?
22:12 Krfawy: that would be a perfect palette :D
22:13 Pjecoo: so it's okay...?
22:13 Krfawy: well when I see it at my PC then yeah
22:13 Krfawy: because for now I still see almost the same colours X'D
22:13 Pjecoo: ok i'll apply them.
22:13 Krfawy: but the presented ones by you are very good \w/
22:14 Pjecoo: ok
22:14 Pjecoo: I edited the AudioLeadIn
22:14 Pjecoo: But it comes back to 0
22:14 Pjecoo: I guess I'll leave it like it is.
22:14 Krfawy: wtf
22:14 Krfawy: are you sure you're saving it in the notepad
22:14 Pjecoo: Yes.
22:15 Krfawy: and then not saving it in the osu!
22:15 Krfawy: XD
22:15 Pjecoo: And I also did Reverting The Last Save.
22:15 Pjecoo: It worked for me when I played it.
22:15 Pjecoo: But it came to 0.
22:15 Pjecoo: Updated.
22:16 Krfawy: I really want audioleadin to be 1500 : /
22:16 Pjecoo: Colors should be ok and the AudioLeadIn - dunno man, I was told to not to change it. :x
22:16 Krfawy: I don't want it 0 XD
22:16 Krfawy: BTW those colours are great o3o
22:16 *Pjecoo shrugs
22:16 Krfawy: Pjecoo pls
22:16 Pjecoo: Thanks~ ♥
22:16 Krfawy: I've been changing audioleadin for like 9 months
22:16 Krfawy: if not for a year
22:17 Krfawy: and none of my ranked maps got unranked for using audioleadin
22:17 Krfawy: BTW who was that BN who said it
22:17 Pjecoo: I'll change it once again.
22:18 Pjecoo: Now it should be.
22:18 Pjecoo: Updating.
22:18 Pjecoo: Updated.
22:18 Pjecoo: There should be AudioLeadIn Now.
22:18 Krfawy: yeah now it's working \w/
22:19 Krfawy: ARE YOU READY!?!?1/1!?!?!ONE
22:19 Pjecoo: Yea.
Euny
congra dom
meii18
yay gratz Pjecoo but sorry if I didn't bubbled/qualified it ;w;
MoodyRPG
I was waiting this map, gratz Pjecoo :3
Kyouren
Gratzz~ :3 Why not ByBy_ChAn ;w;
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