Hi bro~~ from M4M
[General]
[General]
- you should finish with spin from 00:26:705 - to 00:31:350 - in all diffs to keep a general consistency
- You are overusing finishers, is not a good idea to start with K at 00:01:157 - because It is an extremely fine sound and you start with finish at 00:01:931 - different sound/different note.
- I can feel finishers only at 00:01:931 - 00:08:124 - 00:14:318 (1) -
- SB is annoying
- delete some finishers: 00:05:028 (4) - 00:05:802 (5) - 00:06:576 (6) - 00:07:350 (7) - 00:07:737 (8) -
- 00:11:221 (11,12) - remove finish here too
- 00:17:802 (21) - move to 00:17:028 - because you need breaks to add more emphasis on 00:17:415 - 00:18:189 - 00:18:963 - 00:19:737 -
- 00:19:350 (24) - delete if you follow my preview advice
- remove more finishers: 00:01:157 (1) - 00:05:028 (4) - 00:05:802 (5) - 00:06:576 (6) - 00:06:963 (7) - 00:07:350 (8) - 00:11:221 (14) - 00:12:770 (19) - + all finishers on kiai except 00:23:608 (52) - 00:25:157 (56) - 00:25:931 (58) -
- 00:05:995 (16) - add a rest here
- 00:07:350 (20,21,22,23,24) - wtf? why finishers? orz
- Well remove finisher on kiai part too >.>
- 00:22:253 (79,80,81,82) - same as 00:20:705 (71,72,73,74) - previously you did 00:14:512 (43,44,45,46) - 00:16:060 (51,52,53,54) -
- 00:26:705 (103,1) - wth? xDD
- 00:26:705 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,1) - delete all ._. As I said in General, this part is not good to map
- 00:05:318 - add a note here and 00:06:479 (33) - move to 00:06:092 - to keep consistency with the same sound
- I'm surprised, Idk what are you following? some patterns looks ramdomly, I can't see consistency, Finishers make me crazy. xDD
- 00:04:157 (20) - delete
- 00:05:318 - add o to fix a better rhythm and delete 00:05:899 (33) - to keep consistency with the same sound
- 00:08:995 (55) - is more necessary at 00:08:802 - imo
- 00:09:673 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - and 00:10:447 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - and 00:11:221 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - have the same sound? please!!
- 00:26:705 - spin start here
- 1.40 oki
- I like kiai part but intro is too overmaped bro, really
- from 00:05:028 - to 00:07:544 - I'm surprised again because in Inner Oni this part were over-over-over-overmapped and Ura Oni have a rest?
- 00:08:995 (52) - move to 00:08:802 -
- 00:26:705 - spin ._.