Flying Pan wrote:
Hi, from my queue. Here's your order~Ura Oni00:02:995 (13) - change to k
00:03:770 (21) - ^
00:04:544 (29) - ^
then the kat heard at the stream sounds better
00:05:028 (34) - change to d Made (33) k for more emphasis on this one
00:09:673 (59,60) - swap
00:11:028 (72) - kInner Oniseems okayOni00:29:028 (178,179) - swap these to give better impact at the finisherMuzukashii00:19:737 (67) - K
00:24:770 (93) - k, i think there's a clap
00:26:802 (1) - this spinner override the slider. fix itFutsuu00:01:931 (2) - D, sounds better Really highpitched, keeping K
00:08:124 (9) - ^
00:17:415 (32) - ^ K feels better patternwise (consistent with the rest)
00:22:060 (47) - ^ ^^
00:23:608 (52) - ^ ^^Kantan00:01:931 (2) -D
00:16:641 (19) - k Following claps in music, no clap here -->d
00:20:899 (27) - move to 00:21:673 -
okay that's all. good luck~
-Sh1n1- wrote:
Hi bro~~ from M4M
[General][Kantan]
- you should finish with spin from 00:26:705 - to 00:31:350 - Slidersfeel better IMO, made them all slider+spinner
- You are overusing finishers, is not a good idea to start with K at 00:01:157 - because It is an extremely fine sound and you start with finish at 00:01:931 - different sound/different note.
- I can feel finishers only at 00:01:931 - 00:08:124 - 00:14:318 (1) -
- SB is annoying
[Futsuu]
- delete some finishers: 00:05:028 (4) - 00:05:802 (5) - 00:06:576 (6) - 00:07:350 (7) - 00:07:737 (8) -
- 00:11:221 (11,12) - remove finish here too
- 00:17:802 (21) - move to 00:17:028 - because you need breaks to add more emphasis on 00:17:415 - 00:18:189 - 00:18:963 - 00:19:737 -
- 00:19:350 (24) - delete if you follow my preview advice
[Muzukashii]
- remove more finishers: 00:01:157 (1) - 00:05:028 (4) - 00:05:802 (5) - 00:06:576 (6) - 00:06:963 (7) - 00:07:350 (8) - 00:11:221 (14) - 00:12:770 (19) - + all finishers on kiai except 00:23:608 (52) - 00:25:157 (56) - 00:25:931 (58) -
[Oni]
- 00:05:995 (16) - add a rest here
- 00:07:350 (20,21,22,23,24) - wtf? why finishers? orz
- Well remove finisher on kiai part too >.>
- 00:22:253 (79,80,81,82) - same as 00:20:705 (71,72,73,74) - previously you did 00:14:512 (43,44,45,46) - 00:16:060 (51,52,53,54) - They're all slightly higher pitched, thus different pattern
- 00:26:705 (103,1) - wth? xDD
[Inner Oni]
- 00:26:705 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,1) - delete all ._. As I said in General, this part is not good to map
- 00:05:318 - add a note here and 00:06:479 (33) - move to 00:06:092 - to keep consistency with the same sound
- I'm surprised, Idk what are you following? some patterns looks ramdomly, I can't see consistency, Finishers make me crazy. xDD
[Ura Oni]
- 00:04:157 (20) - delete It follows the sound better IMO
- 00:05:318 - add o to fix a better rhythm and delete 00:05:899 (33) - to keep consistency with the same sound
- 00:08:995 (55) - is more necessary at 00:08:802 - imo
- 00:09:673 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - and 00:10:447 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - and 00:11:221 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - have the same sound? please!! They do
- 00:26:705 - spin start here
Diffs need a lot of work imo, specially from Oni to Kantan, remap some parts and remove finishers please, This time I give a general mod but I'll mod again when you find more mods. Good Luck and ask again if this mapset can be ranked because ranked version from P o M u T a and Kuo Kyoka are not available
- 1.40 oki Keeping 1.60 as it's the highest diff after
- I like kiai part but intro is too overmaped bro, really
- from 00:05:028 - to 00:07:544 - I'm surprised again because in Inner Oni this part were over-over-over-overmapped and Ura Oni have a rest?
- 00:08:995 (52) - move to 00:08:802 -
- 00:26:705 - spin ._.
Thanks!!!!OzzyOzrock wrote:
Hey baraatjejejtjttej! Hey Ozzyzzyzzoz Short song, but doesn't mean I'll nit-pick, heh. Sorry if this clashes with the mod above, I didn't see it...
Song is rankable btw.
[Ura Oni]
1.6SV is so ugly to me ;_; Not to me
OD and HP should be at 6. Set at 7 because I deleted final stream
Why did you hitsound the intro stream? XD
The whole beginning stream part is more like dkkkdkkkdkkkdkkkd. Plus the streams you use from 00:08:899 () - to 00:12:770 () - are super similar to what you're already mapping in the kiai. Re-map the stuff before kiai to fit the song more? Streams like kkddk and ddkkdkk should be fitting for parts after 00:08:124 () so you don't have to map another long stream or something to fit the song.
00:16:834 (128) - k, since the pitch rises
00:20:415 (161) - ^, should be fine to keep the other ones the same though.
00:21:673 (166) - d here, because it's not particularly high Following claps
00:25:060 (199) - this should be a 'k', to make 00:25:157 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) a lot more clearer.
Normal people wouldn't touch that ending stream and leave it a spinner lol..but it's fun at this bpm. Decided to delete. Tbh, I only mapped it because I wanted a 1-2-3-4-5-6 star spred
Pretty steady diff, just the intro needs some uniqueness!
[Inner Oni]
OD 6 here too. It is O.o
Delete 00:04:157 (20) then 00:05:124 () - add a 'k'? This way you have a 7 stream, a little break, then the same 7 stream. It's just more structured. Clash with other mod
00:07:737 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - d d dddk? A simpler 1/6 pattern for this lower difficulty. d d kddk feels easier (instead of spamming d)
00:09:770 (62) - delete this so it's 5 7 5 7? Clash with other mod
00:11:221 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - how about mapping a simpler stream (like the drums) instead of one so close to the one currently in Ura Oni? Clash with other mod
00:16:834 (122) - k, for the higher pitch.
00:17:124 (124,125) - kd? 00:17:221 (125,126) - these are actually the same pitch
00:17:802 (129,135,141) - these 'd', so the last one can be dkkdk and compliment the higher note on that one? Following claps
00:21:866 (162) - d? it's the same pitch as the next note, and sounds better.
00:22:447 () - add d here? only place with 2 doubles in the song k for clap
00:23:415 (173) - same as 2 suggestions up
00:25:060 (188) - k for the same stream clarity reasons
00:26:705 () - I think this diff shouldn't have the 1/6 ending , but if you want to keep it, move the third 1/6 to 00:28:253 () - it's more musical.
Sloppy looking difffff (I think it could benefit from more doubles) but it's a pretty good difficulty fill.
[Oni]
OD 6 works fine.
00:15:673 (82) - d, to stop dk spam
00:16:834 (91) - k, ^
00:20:802 (117) - k probably works better here too
00:23:318 (136,137,138) - kd d?
00:25:737 (153) - removing this note works without bringing in an awkward feeling stream
00:26:705 () - Would really prefer this isn't mapped considering the only real sounds are the stream stuff, but if you really want to freestyle, this is probably beter lmao.
But diff is fine overall.
[Muzukashii]
00:14:318 (42) - past this note, I don't think you should add any more finishers in the kiai. It just clutters the map and makes it confusing for muzu players ;_; Clash with other mod
00:23:608 (86,91) - ...except for these, these are fine.
00:25:931 (101) - but this one especially not.
00:20:802 (72) - k?
00:26:705 (103,1) - what.... lmfao NO it's not ok lol XD, keep it a slider then a spinner?
But nice diff.
[Futsuu]
OD 5 is good for futsuu.
00:11:221 (14,19) - would recommend removing these finishers Clash with other mod
Same thing with big notes in the kiai. In lower diffs just because there are a lot more opportunities to use them doesn't mean they should be there
00:20:124 (41) - remove this note to make a break.
00:15:866 (27) - d? then the other ones after can be d d k and you can make 00:15:866 (27) - into just a k (remove the note in the middle). Futsuu is more stuff like this than 'k ddk d k ddk', it's simple patterns with breaks in between. ?? The note in the middle is one of the strongest sounds
00:23:220 (49,50,51) - k k d d should make this part more interesting
00:25:157 (55) - remove finish here? the last one being a big note is nice enough
[Kantan]
OD 4 is low enough for kantan
00:07:737 (8) - delete this, kantan plays will not be able to comprehend these ginormous faces Removed all finishes, so I think this is okay
00:13:544 (14) - ^ but because it just sounds better
00:18:963 (23,24,25) - k k k so it's not d k d 3 times? ;_; Clash with other mod
00:20:512 (26,27,28) - in the beginning, it's d d k d, here the onbeat starts with d k d. fix that? Clash with other mod, I think
00:24:382 (33) - k?
00:26:705 (36) - i think having it all a spinner fits kantan more Consistency
Sorry if this clashed with the mod above! Good luck!
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