Hi~~
Thanks for pointing out so many things!
Lets see...
wow, that's a one long mod
but it makes so maaany good changes. Thank you so much!
Thanks for pointing out so many things!
Lets see...
SPOILER
newyams99 wrote:
Hi from queue~
General
Your BPM is correct and the offset is technically correct, but where it starts should be at 00:01:084. The first of four beats should start close to the first sound of your song. Move your timing point to 00:01:084. This is an issue that should be fixed. Also, it sounds better. Changed. yes, it sounds better
01:22:751 - I personally think that ending the kiai time here isn't necessary at all. It's perfectly fine as one long kiai time. Removed
Kantan
Suggestions:
00:03:417 (4) - Move to 00:03:750. I like this better. Okay. that's good
00:12:583 (16) - How about moving this hit to 00:12:583 (16)? Although it may be a a bit hard I think it would sound nice. If you're going to do this, move 00:13:417 (17) to 00:13:083, and add a k at 00:13:750. Kind of like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3308576 changed into 00:12:083 (16) - 00:12:750 (17) - 00:13:417 (18) - instead
00:24:250 (30) - Move this hit to 00:24:417. You don't want to have too many off beat hits in a Kantan. moved to 00:24:083 moving it to 00:24:417 is a bit off
00:25:751 (32) - Change to d. okay
00:32:584 (39) - Move this hit to 00:32:917. nice one
00:34:751 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - All of these hits I think should be moved one beat forward. For example, 00:34:751 (40) should be moved to 00:34:751 (40) and so on. Having hits on non-stressed beats sounds a bit off imo. moved some notes one beat and some other two beat forward. and add some note too. i found it difficult to make it sounds better
00:53:751 (61) - Change this hit to a d, then move it to 00:54:417. ok
00:56:084 (63,64) - Move these hits one beat backwards. Overall in the Kantan, you put too many hits on non-stressed beats (beats 2 and 4 of each measure) and having hits shows that there's emphasis at these points, when I don't think there really isn't. As a result, it feels a bit weird to play. I'd suggest moving most of these hits on beats 2 and 4 forwards or backwards (whichever sounds better to you) to beats 1 and 3 instead. There's some spots like this after too, so I'd suggest moving those. I'm not going to mention any more, but there is still many more that you could change to make it sound better. Of course, it's your choice. Tell me if you don't understand what I'm saying, because I think this'll make this difficulty sound much much better. good point. thanks for noticing this
01:09:917 (80) - Move this hit to 01:09:917 (80). Add a hit of your choice at 01:10:417. You don't always have to match the vocals or instrumentals precisely in the Kantan, or else all Kantans would be very complex on timing. moved it one beat forward and add k
01:43:584 (119) - ^ Move to 01:43:750. good
Optional:
00:21:584 (27,28) - It might not be a good idea to put two hits in a row on an off beat. Rather than this, maybe move 00:21:583 (27) to 00:21:083. better
00:40:751 (47) - Change to d. changed
and i also moved some notes as you suggest.why it is so difficult to make it sounds righti will try to make a better kantan
ah, and suggestion for you, i am a bit confused when you say to move this to that while it have same time. so, please recheck your typing before posting. thanks
Futsuu
Suggestions:
00:03:417 (5) - A better rhythm might be deleting this hit, then moving 00:04:084 (6) to 00:03:751. good
00:24:084 (44) - Move this hit to 00:24:251. You did a very precise job on matching the hits with the instrumentals and vocals. Same thing with 00:34:751 (64). moved thanks!
00:24:751 (45,46,47,48,49) - Move these hits a beat forward. I think this sounds better. movedwhy didn't i realized it earlier?nvm
00:35:417 (65,66,67,68) - ^ moved too and delete 00:38:083 (68) -
00:40:084 (73) - Delete this hit. It seems out of place. nice one
00:40:751 - Adding a d here could be better. ^
00:42:084 (76,77,78,79,80) - Delete hit 80, then move all the hits one beat forward. Change 00:43:417 (78) to d. ^
00:48:084 (87,88) - Move these two hits half a beat forward. This matches the vocals better. moved and delete note at 00:49:417 -
00:55:917 (104,105) - Delete hit 104. better
00:56:417 - Add a hit of your choice here. Add a d at 00:56:584. nope. moved three notes one beat backward instead
01:00:751 (114) - Delete this hit. It seems out of line with both the instrumentals and the vocals. deleted
01:01:250 (115,116,117) - This rhythm is fine, but I think it'd be better by placing a d at both 01:01:417 and 01:01:751 to match with the instrumentals, like you did in the Muzukashii. This might be a bit hard for Futsuu, but it's definitely possible. good. changed
01:03:751 (122) - This is ok here, but I've noticed you really like to match with the vocals or instrumentals, so maybe move this hit to 01:03:584. moved
01:12:751 (141) - Move this hit to 01:12:751 (141). Alternatively, just add a hit there instead. you mean to 01:13:083 - ? yes. moved
01:16:084 (149) - You're putting emphasis on the vocals here, so this hit seems awkwardly placed among the rest of the hits. Move to 01:15:584, or delete. deleted
01:24:751 (167) - This hit also sounds awkward with all the other hits around it focusing on the vocals. Move to 01:25:084. moved
and add a note at 01:24:583 -
01:27:417 - It wouldn't hurt to add a d here. i hope so.. added
01:36:084 (193) - I think it sounds better to move this hit to 01:36:417. good
01:38:584 (199) - Delete this hit. It sounds out of place. deleted
01:40:084 (202,203,204) - Move these three hits backwards by one beat. okay
01:43:917 (210) - This rhythm in this area might be a bit difficult. Delete this hit if you want to. i'll keep it
01:44:917 (214) - Move to 01:45:084 to match vocals. moved
Optional:
00:12:417 (22,23,24,25) - This rhythm is 100% fine, but I have a different rhythm that might be good too. Move the two blue hits to 00:13:751 and 00:14:084, then move 00:13:084 (24) to 00:13:084 (24), and add a d at 00:13:417. just moved a note from 00:12:750 - to 00:14:083 -
there are also a lot of changes in futsuu. phew...
i also made some other changes.
Muzukashii
Suggestions:
00:13:917 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - This is getting pretty close to the limit on how long you can make 1/2 patterns. Remove hit 00:14:584 (55). Then, I'd suggest removing these two hits of the dddtriplet 00:15:584 (60,61) (This part is optional. If you don't like it, don't do it). just remove 00:14:584 (55) -
00:19:417 - In both this difficulty and Oni, it slows down then speeds up in a very short amount of time. I don't think that the amount of contrast in the song is worth putting that in there. In other words, remove the inherited points that slow down the SV in this section. Same at 00:31:084. okay. removed
00:24:917 - Add a hit of your choice here. It sounds a bit empty. added k
00:31:084 (119,120) - Ctrl + G - I think this sounds better. good
00:35:917 (134) - Delete this hit. It doesn't really match with the vocals (when you're matching the hits around it to the vocals), and it adds for a short break. deleted
00:54:501 (205,206) - You should have a bit of a bigger break in this area. Remove these two hits.wait, when i add that note?removed
01:17:584 - Adding a d here might be good.( i hope i not too hard.) added
01:39:834 (410) - Remove this hit. I think it would sound better if you matched this precisely with the vocals. yes
01:42:251 - Add a d here. i knew it!
01:43:084 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430) - This part is exactly the same as the Futsuu. Try changing it a bit. added d at 01:43:250 - 01:44:250 - 01:44:583 -
Optional:
00:10:084 (35) - Remove this hit. It's possible to keep it, but it's a bit hard for the beginning section overall. okay
00:47:584 (177) - Change to k. It might match better with the vocals. changed
01:31:917 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - This pattern is too long imo. Remove one hit in the middle. as i thought it is too long. removed
okay, that's good
Oni
Suggestions:
00:06:417 (27) - Change this hit to k. You made it like that in every other difficulty, and it sounds better. ah, i see. changed (sorry if i change it back from your suggestion, [R])
00:09:834 (46) - Add a d here. yes
00:13:417 (67,68) - Delete hit 68 and change hit 67 to k. It better matches the instrumentals. ctrl + G instead
00:16:334 (85) - Move this hit to 00:16:167. This keeps it consistent with the pattern you used at 00:15:584 (79,80,81). Same thing for 00:16:834 (89), move to 00:16:667. moved the first one keep the second as ddk for transition
00:20:751 - Add a d here. no. i'll keep it as is
00:20:834 - ^ This and the suggestions above will create a ddk triplet. ^
00:21:084 (111,112,113,114,115) - I don't really like this rhythm. Change hit 111 to k and hit 113 to d. good!
00:24:667 (129) - Delete this hit; it doesn't match the instrumentals very much. I'd put a d at 00:24:834 and at 00:25:001 to create a ddddd rhythm. okay
00:41:001 - You can add a d here. nope. i prefer triplet
00:48:751 - Add a d here and at 00:48:834 to create a ddd triplet. It matches the instrumentals. good
01:03:251 (326) - Change to k. good one
01:03:417 (327,328,329) - Change this kkd to ddk. sounds better
01:13:084 (389) - This finisher seems out of place to me. Remove if you want to. If you do, put a d at 01:12:834 and at 01:13:001 to create a ddddk. i'll keep the finisher
01:28:251 (474) - Change to d. I think this matches the vocals better. i'll keep it as k
01:29:584 - Add a hit of your choice here. This space seems empty. it feels weird to have a note here
01:34:417 (514) - Delete this hit, and move 01:34:584 (515,516,517,518,519) to 01:34:417. Then, add a d at 01:34:917. I think this rhythm is more fitting. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3313825 done as you say, except at 01:34:917 i put K D K
01:38:751 (541) - Change to d. The stream feels a bit weird. good!
01:39:001 (544) - ^_^
01:42:251 - Add a d here, and at 01:42:334 to create a ddd. nope
01:51:751 - Add hits and change colours. An example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3313830 just change colours
01:55:001 (646) - Same thing as mentioned for 00:16:334 (85). same
01:55:501 (650) - ^_^
01:57:418 (663,664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671) - This stream sounds a bit weird. Maybe just make it a kkkkddddk. changed
i think making an oni before a kantan/futsuu makes me placed a lot off-beat notes. i'll keep that in mind
That's all. Sorry if this mod was too focused on rhythms or you don't like the rhythms. It's a good song though. Good luck on rank
wow, that's a one long mod
but it makes so maaany good changes. Thank you so much!