This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 Januari 2016 at 19:02:34

Artist: Duca
Title: Jewel Days
Source: ゴールデンマリッジ -Jewel Days-
Tags: Eroge Golden Marriage -Jewel Days- lotta toara_fict Canvas
BPM: 180
Filesize: 14430kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (2,18 stars, 239 notes)
2. Kantan (1,07 stars, 130 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,81 stars, 492 notes)
4. Oni (3,8 stars, 677 notes)
5. Toara's Oni (3,61 stars, 642 notes)

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Golden Marriage -Jewel Days- OP
My 2nd map

I really finished it in 1 day
Okay, that was a bad idea.

Toara's Oni by toara_fict
Other diff by me
Ready for mod!
٩(๑>◡<๑)۶

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setiap baris "?" haya bersifat opini

[General]

boleh add "lotta" ,karena sebagai komposer music
source

[Muzukashii]

00:03:084 - delete, ga denger sound
00:06:417 - ganti d better sound, triplet dilanjutkan K apalagi perubahan SV = ga recommended banget
00:09:084 - d, supaya konsisten dengan yang diatas
00:11:751 (43,44) - ^ and better sound
00:53:917 (203,205) - delete, ga denger vokal triplet
00:54:501 - add k, kedengeran triplet disini
00:54:584 - ^
00:55:251 - ganti d ?
00:57:834 - pindah 00:58:001 - sama add d 00:58:084 -

[Oni]

00:04:751 - pindah 00:04:584 - ? konsisten 00:01:917 -
00:06:417 - ganti d
00:08:167 - delete ?
00:11:751 (58,59,60) - ctrl+G ?
00:17:834 - d aja, ngikutin flow
00:19:001 - delete aja terlalu maksa, better sound
00:20:917 (112,113) - ctrl+G aja rasanya weird, kyak ini bagus soundnya 00:31:751 (164,165,166,167,168) -
01:13:251 (392,393) - pindah 01:13:167 - and 01:13:501 - delete , better sound
01:34:501 - add k
01:56:418 (657,658,659) - sama kayak note 112,113

maap kalo amburegul
Good luck

First mod in the morning..

[R] wrote:

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setiap baris "?" haya bersifat opini

[General]

boleh add "lotta" ,karena sebagai komposer music -added
source

[Muzukashii]

00:03:084 - delete, ga denger sound -oke
00:06:417 - ganti d better sound, triplet dilanjutkan K apalagi perubahan SV = ga recommended banget -SV off. biar tetep K
00:09:084 - d, supaya konsisten dengan yang diatas -oke
00:11:751 (43,44) - ^ and better sound -oke
00:53:917 (203,205) - delete, ga denger vokal triplet -oke 00:54:417 (205) - tetep
00:54:501 - add k, kedengeran triplet disini good
00:54:584 - ^ good
00:55:251 - ganti d ? -oke
00:57:834 - pindah 00:58:001 - sama add d 00:58:084 -yeah

[Oni]

00:04:751 - pindah 00:04:584 - ? konsisten 00:01:917 - -umm, no. lebih pas yg sebelumnya
00:06:417 - ganti d -oke
00:08:167 - delete ? mantep
00:11:751 (58,59,60) - ctrl+G ? diubah 00:12:084 (59) - d sama 00:12:251 (60,61,62) - ctrl+G
00:17:834 - d aja, ngikutin flow -oke
00:19:001 - delete aja terlalu maksa, better sound -oke
00:20:917 (112,113) - ctrl+G aja rasanya weird, kyak ini bagus soundnya 00:31:751 (164,165,166,167,168) - that's good
01:13:251 (392,393) - pindah 01:13:167 - and 01:13:501 - delete , better sound -hm? maksudmu dijadikan kdddk kan? 01:13:501 - disini kosong. karena ada K tak jadikan K ddk
01:34:501 - add k - eh? ada K didepannya lho
01:56:418 (657,658,659) - sama kayak note 112,113 tak samakan 00:17:751 (95,96,97,98,99) - ddd jadi dkk

maap kalo amburegul
Good luck

Thank you for the mod!

Hi from queue~

General

Your BPM is correct and the offset is technically correct, but where it starts should be at 00:01:084. The first of four beats should start close to the first sound of your song. Move your timing point to 00:01:084. This is an issue that should be fixed. Also, it sounds better.

01:22:751 - I personally think that ending the kiai time here isn't necessary at all. It's perfectly fine as one long kiai time.

Kantan

Suggestions:

00:03:417 (4) - Move to 00:03:750. I like this better.

00:12:583 (16) - How about moving this hit to 00:12:583 (16)? Although it may be a a bit hard I think it would sound nice. If you're going to do this, move 00:13:417 (17) to 00:13:083, and add a k at 00:13:750. Kind of like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3308576

00:24:250 (30) - Move this hit to 00:24:417. You don't want to have too many off beat hits in a Kantan.

00:25:751 (32) - Change to d.

00:32:584 (39) - Move this hit to 00:32:917.

00:34:751 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - All of these hits I think should be moved one beat forward. For example, 00:34:751 (40) should be moved to 00:34:751 (40) and so on. Having hits on non-stressed beats sounds a bit off imo.

00:53:751 (61) - Change this hit to a d, then move it to 00:54:417.

00:56:084 (63,64) - Move these hits one beat backwards. Overall in the Kantan, you put too many hits on non-stressed beats (beats 2 and 4 of each measure) and having hits shows that there's emphasis at these points, when I don't think there really isn't. As a result, it feels a bit weird to play. I'd suggest moving most of these hits on beats 2 and 4 forwards or backwards (whichever sounds better to you) to beats 1 and 3 instead. There's some spots like this after too, so I'd suggest moving those. I'm not going to mention any more, but there is still many more that you could change to make it sound better. Of course, it's your choice. Tell me if you don't understand what I'm saying, because I think this'll make this difficulty sound much much better.

01:09:917 (80) - Move this hit to 01:09:917 (80). Add a hit of your choice at 01:10:417. You don't always have to match the vocals or instrumentals precisely in the Kantan, or else all Kantans would be very complex on timing.

01:43:584 (119) - ^ Move to 01:43:750.

Optional:

00:21:584 (27,28) - It might not be a good idea to put two hits in a row on an off beat. Rather than this, maybe move 00:21:583 (27) to 00:21:083.

00:40:751 (47) - Change to d.

Futsuu

Suggestions:

00:03:417 (5) - A better rhythm might be deleting this hit, then moving 00:04:084 (6) to 00:03:751.

00:24:084 (44) - Move this hit to 00:24:251. You did a very precise job on matching the hits with the instrumentals and vocals. Same thing with 00:34:751 (64).

00:24:751 (45,46,47,48,49) - Move these hits a beat forward. I think this sounds better.

00:35:417 (65,66,67,68) - ^

00:40:084 (73) - Delete this hit. It seems out of place.

00:40:751 - Adding a d here could be better.

00:42:084 (76,77,78,79,80) - Delete hit 80, then move all the hits one beat forward. Change 00:43:417 (78) to d.

00:48:084 (87,88) - Move these two hits half a beat forward. This matches the vocals better.

00:55:917 (104,105) - Delete hit 104.

00:56:417 - Add a hit of your choice here. Add a d at 00:56:584.

01:00:751 (114) - Delete this hit. It seems out of line with both the instrumentals and the vocals.

01:01:250 (115,116,117) - This rhythm is fine, but I think it'd be better by placing a d at both 01:01:417 and 01:01:751 to match with the instrumentals, like you did in the Muzukashii. This might be a bit hard for Futsuu, but it's definitely possible.

01:03:751 (122) - This is ok here, but I've noticed you really like to match with the vocals or instrumentals, so maybe move this hit to 01:03:584.

01:12:751 (141) - Move this hit to 01:12:751 (141). Alternatively, just add a hit there instead.

01:16:084 (149) - You're putting emphasis on the vocals here, so this hit seems awkwardly placed among the rest of the hits. Move to 01:15:584, or delete.

01:24:751 (167) - This hit also sounds awkward with all the other hits around it focusing on the vocals. Move to 01:25:084.

01:27:417 - It wouldn't hurt to add a d here.

01:36:084 (193) - I think it sounds better to move this hit to 01:36:417.

01:38:584 (199) - Delete this hit. It sounds out of place.

01:40:084 (202,203,204) - Move these three hits backwards by one beat.

01:43:917 (210) - This rhythm in this area might be a bit difficult. Delete this hit if you want to.

01:44:917 (214) - Move to 01:45:084 to match vocals.

Optional:

00:12:417 (22,23,24,25) - This rhythm is 100% fine, but I have a different rhythm that might be good too. Move the two blue hits to 00:13:751 and 00:14:084, then move 00:13:084 (24) to 00:13:084 (24), and add a d at 00:13:417.

Muzukashii

Suggestions:

00:13:917 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - This is getting pretty close to the limit on how long you can make 1/2 patterns. Remove hit 00:14:584 (55). Then, I'd suggest removing these two hits of the dddtriplet 00:15:584 (60,61) (This part is optional. If you don't like it, don't do it).

00:19:417 - In both this difficulty and Oni, it slows down then speeds up in a very short amount of time. I don't think that the amount of contrast in the song is worth putting that in there. In other words, remove the inherited points that slow down the SV in this section. Same at 00:31:084.

00:24:917 - Add a hit of your choice here. It sounds a bit empty.

00:31:084 (119,120) - Ctrl + G - I think this sounds better.

00:35:917 (134) - Delete this hit. It doesn't really match with the vocals (when you're matching the hits around it to the vocals), and it adds for a short break.

00:54:501 (205,206) - You should have a bit of a bigger break in this area. Remove these two hits.

01:17:584 - Adding a d here might be good.

01:39:834 (410) - Remove this hit. I think it would sound better if you matched this precisely with the vocals.

01:42:251 - Add a d here.

01:43:084 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430) - This part is exactly the same as the Futsuu. Try changing it a bit.

Optional:

00:10:084 (35) - Remove this hit. It's possible to keep it, but it's a bit hard for the beginning section overall.

00:47:584 (177) - Change to k. It might match better with the vocals.

01:31:917 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - This pattern is too long imo. Remove one hit in the middle.

Oni

Suggestions:

00:06:417 (27) - Change this hit to k. You made it like that in every other difficulty, and it sounds better.

00:09:834 (46) - Add a d here.

00:13:417 (67,68) - Delete hit 68 and change hit 67 to k. It better matches the instrumentals.

00:16:334 (85) - Move this hit to 00:16:167. This keeps it consistent with the pattern you used at 00:15:584 (79,80,81). Same thing for 00:16:834 (89), move to 00:16:667.

00:20:751 - Add a d here.

00:20:834 - ^ This and the suggestions above will create a ddk triplet.

00:21:084 (111,112,113,114,115) - I don't really like this rhythm. Change hit 111 to k and hit 113 to d.

00:24:667 (129) - Delete this hit; it doesn't match the instrumentals very much. I'd put a d at 00:24:834 and at 00:25:001 to create a ddddd rhythm.

00:41:001 - You can add a d here.

00:48:751 - Add a d here and at 00:48:834 to create a ddd triplet. It matches the instrumentals.

01:03:251 (326) - Change to k.

01:03:417 (327,328,329) - Change this kkd to ddk.

01:13:084 (389) - This finisher seems out of place to me. Remove if you want to. If you do, put a d at 01:12:834 and at 01:13:001 to create a ddddk.

01:28:251 (474) - Change to d. I think this matches the vocals better.

01:29:584 - Add a hit of your choice here. This space seems empty.

01:34:417 (514) - Delete this hit, and move 01:34:584 (515,516,517,518,519) to 01:34:417. Then, add a d at 01:34:917. I think this rhythm is more fitting. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3313825

01:38:751 (541) - Change to d. The stream feels a bit weird.

01:39:001 (544) - ^

01:42:251 - Add a d here, and at 01:42:334 to create a ddd.

01:51:751 - Add hits and change colours. An example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3313830

01:55:001 (646) - Same thing as mentioned for 00:16:334 (85).

01:55:501 (650) - ^

01:57:418 (663,664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671) - This stream sounds a bit weird. Maybe just make it a kkkkddddk.

That's all. Sorry if this mod was too focused on rhythms or you don't like the rhythms. It's a good song though. Good luck on rank

Hi~~
Thanks for pointing out so many things!
Lets see...

wow, that's a one long mod
but it makes so maaany good changes. Thank you so much!

Hi, from my modding queue. Ini pesanannya~



segitu aja ya? ngemod jam 5 pagi nih. good luck~

Hi~

Flying Pan wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue. Ini pesanannya~

Kantan

Strukturnya masih amburadul. pada beberapa bagian tidak konsisten. kurang 4/1 break dan malah banyak break yang membingungkan buat pemain baru. berikut saran yang sebaiknya diikuti
Sesuai dugaanku, kantan masih perlu banyak perbaikan

00:05:084 (6) - pindah ke 00:05:417 - supaya konsisten dengan yang pertama, okelah
00:05:750 (7) - kemudian ini dihapus ^

00:07:083 (8) - hapus untuk memberikan break lebih lama hapused

00:08:082 (8,9,10) - geser 1/1 ke kiri (ke garis putih sebelah kirinya. karena membingungkan buat newbie kalo dimulai dari tengah2 gitu) done
00:10:082 (11,12,13) - kalo yang ini geser 1 garis putih ke kanan ^
00:12:083 (14) - lalu ini dihapus ^^
newyams99 juga bilang gitu. kantan banyak nada yg kelewat ato telat 1/1

00:20:417 (23) - hapus, seperti yang kamu lakukan di 00:31:083 oke

00:23:084 (27) - pindah ke 00:23:583 tidak diubah. untuk memberi break
00:24:083 (28) - dan ini pindah ke 00:24:250 , karena disana ada penekanan terhadap ritmenya ^

00:25:751 (30) - hapus, kasih break good
00:27:084 (32) - ganti jadi d changed

00:29:417 (34) - pindah ke 00:28:917 dimana ada penekanan oke

lakukan seperti itu untuk sisanya
yah.. itu artinya masih banyak masalah konsistensi

intinya: diremap

ow..
yeah. gonna remap it soon

Futsuu

Sama seperti kantan, ada beberapa masalah konsistensi. Mungkin kamu pengen variasi, tapi beberapa tidak pas dan justru membingungkan.

00:05:750 (9) - gak ada suara apapun disini. hapus. kenapa aku bisa masang note disitu? dihapus

00:11:417 (18) - hapus untuk memberi break oke
00:13:083 (21) - pindah ke 00:12:917 - supaya konsisten dengan yang pertama (dan emang bunyinya sebenernya disitu) oke. padahal maunya ga banyak-banyak 1/2, tapi kedengarannya malah gak enak ya...
00:13:583 - tambah k ditambah di 00:13:417 -
00:14:083 (22) - hapus oke

00:20:417 (34) - hapus good

00:28:084 (47) pindah ke 00:28:583 - kamu melakukannya pada bagian lain yang seperti ini, seperti di kiai (dan lebih enak juga menurut saya) oke.terus 00:28:917 - saya beri k

00:35:750 (62) - pindah ke 00:35:583 moved
00:37:750 (65) - pindah ke 00:37:583 ^

00:45:084 (76) - hapus oke
00:50:417 (85) - ganti jadi d good
00:54:751 (93) - pindah ke 00:54:917 - ^

01:01:250 (105) - ganti jadi d dan pindah ke 01:00:917 feel better

01:05:417 (116) - hapus oke mungkin waktu ngemap aku terpengaruh sama oni ya...
01:09:417 (125) - pindah ke 01:09:583 good
01:11:751 (129) - ganti jadi d ^

01:32:083 (175,176) - geser 1 garis putih ke kanan. gak pas tuh okee~
01:33:417 (177) - trus ini diapus aja sama

01:38:751 (190) - pindah ke 01:39:083 good
01:51:750 (217) - pindah ke 01:51:583 oke. aku juga pindah 01:52:749 (213) - ke 01:52:083 -

saran kalo ngemap kantan dan futsuu, bayangin kamu baru pertama kali main taiko. jari masih kaku, mata masih berkunang-kunang, telinga masih budeg, dan feeling masih kacau. jadi jangan kasih pola yang terlalu rapat, kasih cukup break, tapi bisa bikin pengen main terus (ngomong gampang tapi pas ngemap pasti susah. haha)

terima kasih sarannya!
segitu aja ya? ngemod jam 5 pagi nih. good luck~

ngemod pagi pagi nih...
terima kasih pesanannya!

Hi! :3

[Oni]
00:20:417 (109) - Start slowdown part here? I think it's better, like in 00:31:084 (162) - .

00:09:584 (44) - k? so not just don, and also fits music
00:10:251 (49) - big note here maybe?
00:21:084 (111) - i think 'd' feels better
00:22:583 () - add 'd'?
- 00:22:751 (119) - then here k?
00:23:584 (125) - big note here? fits the music
00:24:083 (127) - i think remove finish here, should stay small note
00:24:251 (128) - but maybe also finish here?
I think a lot of parts need finishers, but it's your choice!

00:26:417 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - make (d d k d d k) here? fits nice
00:33:251 (170,171,172) - change to 'd k'?
00:33:834 (174) - remove, then 00:34:084 (176) - remove, and 00:34:251 (177) - change to big note? makes good emphasis
00:42:417 (220,221,222,223,224) - (d d k d d k) here too?
00:47:584 (242,245,250) - sounds like big notes
00:59:417 (306) - k? follows vocal and plays nice
01:21:583 () - add d?
01:22:250 () - add k?
01:30:250 () - add k? plays nice, and helps seperate the small patterns
01:42:084 (566,567) - k kkd D, then 01:42:584 (568,569) - delete? better with the song i think ;o;

Good diff!
[Muzukashii]
00:37:417 (139,140) - k d? fits vocals better
00:38:251 (142,143,144,145) - k k d k, fits more, I think
00:42:750 (160,162,164) - 'k' is for these notes, 00:43:084 (161,163,165) - and 'd' for these? follows drums
01:18:417 (312,313,314,315,316,317) - d k d k d k d k fits drums more!
01:27:584 (352) - d? so not k d 2 times

good job!
[Futsuu]
01:01:250 (107,108,109) - move to white tick before? 01:01:083 () ?
01:06:917 (122) - remove finish, not needed here
01:11:751 (131) - d?
01:25:584 (161) - remove finish, you usually have only 2 big notes here

rest is good!
[Kantan]
00:34:417 (41) - d?
00:38:083 (46,47) - move these two up, 00:38:417 () and 00:39:083 ()
01:00:750 (71) - move to 01:01:083 ()
01:04:417 (76) - move note to 01:04:417 (), and remove finisher? confusing rhythm.
01:43:084 (118) - d?

Very weird rhythms, sometimes you need to ignore the song and make simple rhythms for kantan. I think it's ok here.

GL with the set!

Hi~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hi! :3

[Oni]
00:20:417 (109) - Start slowdown part here? I think it's better, like in 00:31:084 (162) - . good idea!

00:09:584 (44) - k? so not just don, and also fits music i think 00:09:417 - is better
00:10:251 (49) - big note here maybe? i don't think so.
00:21:084 (111) - i think 'd' feels better okay, that's good
00:22:583 () - add 'd'? ^
- 00:22:751 (119) - then here k? ^
00:23:584 (125) - big note here? fits the music nope. it already have a big note nearby sounds good
00:24:083 (127) - i think remove finish here, should stay small note ^
00:24:251 (128) - but maybe also finish here? nice one!
I think a lot of parts need finishers, but it's your choice!
i'd like to. but putting too much finishers annoys me feels a bit weird.
anyway,thanks!

00:26:417 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - make (d d k d d k) here? fits nice good
00:33:251 (170,171,172) - change to 'd k'? sounds better
00:33:834 (174) - remove, then 00:34:084 (176) - remove, and 00:34:251 (177) - change to big note? makes good emphasis except big note, yes
00:42:417 (220,221,222,223,224) - (d d k d d k) here too? good too
00:47:584 (242,245,250) - sounds like big notes wow, it's really good
00:59:417 (306) - k? follows vocal and plays nice yes. sounds better
01:21:583 () - add d? nope.
01:22:250 () - add k? ^
01:30:250 () - add k? plays nice, and helps seperate the small patterns this is good
01:42:084 (566,567) - k kkd D, then 01:42:584 (568,569) - delete? better with the song i think ;o; except big note, yes.and i change 01:42:750 - to k and 01:42:917 - to d

Good diff!
Thank you!
[Muzukashii]
00:37:417 (139,140) - k d? fits vocals better good one!
00:38:251 (142,143,144,145) - k k d k, fits more, I think ^
00:42:750 (160,162,164) - 'k' is for these notes, 00:43:084 (161,163,165) - and 'd' for these? follows drums ^
01:18:417 (312,313,314,315,316,317) - d k d k d k d k fits drums more! nice why i have it in reversed color??
01:27:584 (352) - d? so not k d 2 times yeah, right

good job!
[Futsuu]
01:01:250 (107,108,109) - move to white tick before? 01:01:083 () ? good
01:06:917 (122) - remove finish, not needed here yeah, it sounds weird (and difficult maybe)
01:11:751 (131) - d? done
01:25:584 (161) - remove finish, you usually have only 2 big notes here okay, that's good

rest is good! thank goodness
[Kantan]
for a notice, your mod is posted when i remapping kantan
00:34:417 (41) - d? i already moved it to 00:34:750 -
00:38:083 (46,47) - move these two up, 00:38:417 () and 00:39:083 () okay
01:00:750 (71) - move to 01:01:083 () i'll keep it there
01:04:417 (76) - move note to 01:04:417 (), and remove finisher? confusing rhythm. okay
01:43:084 (118) - d? ^

Very weird rhythms, sometimes you need to ignore the song and make simple rhythms for kantan. I think it's ok here.
as i thought, kantan needs many changes.

GL with the set!

a very good mod! Thank You!

Okay, remap done!

duh kena galat SSL, remod lagi.. malasnya..

[Oni]

1. 00:17:417 (93) - ganti don
2. 00:18:251 (99,100) - ctrl g
3. 00:20:250 (109) - don
4. 00:24:917 (133) - kat
5. 00:30:917 (163) - don
6. dah segini aja

maaf cuma bisa segini.. post hilang mau apa lagi.. lupa copaste.. dan juga males buat ngemodding kek beatmap gini.. ini setail mapping ya.. males ngerubah2.. cuma bisa suggest.. *dont kd, not really need...

Surono wrote:

duh kena galat SSL, remod lagi.. malasnya..
mampus lu gua kena juga
[Oni]

1. 00:17:417 (93) - ganti don woke
2. 00:18:251 (99,100) - ctrl g yeh
3. 00:20:250 (109) - don no...
4. 00:24:917 (133) - kat no...
5. 00:30:917 (163) - don nope
6. dah segini aja

yah... gpp deh (`L_` )

maaf cuma bisa segini.. post hilang mau apa lagi.. lupa copaste.. dan juga males buat ngemodding kek beatmap gini.. ini setail mapping ya.. males ngerubah2.. cuma bisa suggest.. *dont kd, not really need...

okelah, makasih.

General -
Disable widescreen support on all diffs.

Kantan -
00:02:750 - Move this to here 00:03:083 -
00:05:417 - Same with this, its better here 00:05:750 -
00:17:083 - Perhaps change it to don?
00:28:583 - move this 00:28:917 -
00:33:750 - remove and put k here 00:34:250 - 00:34:917 - 00:35:583 - , removing all of the surrounding kats.
01:04:917 (69) - kat should be here

Futsuu -
00:12:750 - Move to 00:12:917 -
00:27:083 - Don I think is better here.
01:00:917 - I think there should be a note here.
Quite a nice diff.

Muzu -
00:03:083 - Definitely needs a note here.
00:24:667 - move to 00:24:833 - maybe?
00:27:417 - kkk maybe?
00:44:750 - kat?
I don't know if speed ups like the kiai are allowed on muzu.

Oni -
All of the sv things need to be gotten rid of.
00:20:750 - ddddk 00:21:417 - k
For me this is the best diff in the set, the style is so good and not overdone, only the things I pointed out feels out of place. Good job.

Backfire wrote:

General -
Disable widescreen support on all diffs. okay

Kantan -
00:02:750 - Move this to here 00:03:083 - good
00:05:417 - Same with this, its better here 00:05:750 - ^
00:17:083 - Perhaps change it to don? changed
00:28:583 - move this 00:28:917 - moved
00:33:750 - remove and put k here 00:34:250 - 00:34:917 - 00:35:583 - , removing all of the surrounding kats. okay
01:04:917 (69) - kat should be here added


Futsuu -
00:12:750 - Move to 00:12:917 - hm? i already moved it
00:27:083 - Don I think is better here. changed
01:00:917 - I think there should be a note here. added d
Quite a nice diff. Thanks

Muzu -
00:03:083 - Definitely needs a note here. it seems i have a note there before added d
00:24:667 - move to 00:24:833 - maybe? no. i prefer like this
00:27:417 - kkk maybe? no.
00:44:750 - kat? good
I don't know if speed ups like the kiai are allowed on muzu. i'll remove it. after looking for info, i think sv change is not good for taiko

Oni -
All of the sv things need to be gotten rid of. okay
00:20:750 - ddddk 00:21:417 - k nice
For me this is the best diff in the set, the style is so good and not overdone, only the things I pointed out feels out of place. Good job.

Thank you for the mod!

Wew... Here's my mod... ^^
Berjuang do.. [Y^.^]Y

truth revealer wrote:

Wew... Here's my mod... ^^

Oni

00:03:917 -> delete. ddd_d_kdk is more cathcy than ddd_ddkdk. ^^ oke gan. manteb
00:41:083 -> Beat 212 - 228, A nice common beats... ^^ But 224, 225, 226 doesn't match the beat I think. Change it to d_k_ddk_ddkd_dk_d_kd_dkd good one!
00:50:083 -> change it to k then add d at 00:50:250 and change 00:50:417 to k because you follow the drum beat at 249 and 250. changed 00:50:583 - instead
01:40:417 - 01:41:917 -> Change it to d_kdk_k_d ?. i dont think it fit

Muzukashii

00:09:083 - 00:10:250 -> Change it to k_k_kd_k to match the guitar sound, because I think you follow the guitar. changed to d k kd k instead
00:25:083 - 00:27:417 -> d_k_d_k_d_k_d is boring. Change it to d_k_ddk_d_k_kdk. i'll keep it for now. it will be one point for adjusting diff spread
00:41:750 - 00:44:083 -> Gak enak dengernya do. Kalau pas lagunya kalem gitu tidak pas do. tumben bahasa Indonesia... :v gantien d_k_d_-_d_k_d_-_ dia mulai lelah bung... yg belakangnya aja. tak ganti d d k
00:55:917 - 00:56:083 -> kenapa ddd? gantien jadi d_k. ddd saja tidak pas untuk ngisi. Kalau beatnya itu ddd_d_k_d_k_d_k masih pas, kalau ddd_-_k_d_k_d_k tidak pas do. oke, nice one
01:47:750 - 01:48:917 -> Change it to k_k_kd_k to match the guitar sound, because I think you follow the guitar. aaannnd, back to english.except first k, Yes

Kantan

Maaf tidak bisa banyak bantu yang ini do. Moodku untuk mod rusak pas mod kantan. Yaa... kita lihat aja nanti... :v Powermu udah ilang. bmku bisa menguras tenagamu
Aku kasih yang aku coba buat itu ya do. Untuk referensi aja. Semoga ini membantu do... ^^ oke, i'll check it later

SPOILER

[truth's Kantan]
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Futsuu

Sudah tidak mood lagi untuk mod. Maaf.
Nih, makan snickers!.jpeg istirahat sono. jangan 20 jam hedsetan(lol)

Berjuang do.. [Y^.^]Y

Thank You for the Mod!

suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup

Kantan & Futsuu mod as suggested here

[ General]

1. Looks fine to me

[ Kantan]

1. Highly suggest SV1.2
2. HP should be way higher, click here to see why

My mod on Kantan will be mainly about consistency. I'll give you some examples and you can work on them on your own, no need to point out all of them

1. 00:01:084 (1,2,3) - Take for example this pattern here. Listen to it closely. You've chosen to follow this rhythm and not any other. Ask yourself why, and then apply the logic to ALL the song.

00:03:750 (4,5) - <----- Here , inmediately after you chose the rhythm, you change it! That is what we call "inconsistency". Pick something and stick with it during the parts that sound the same. I'll give you a hint: move 00:05:750 (6) - to 00:05:083 - and hear from the beginning. Doesn't consistency sound good? Do not misunderstand: consistency does not mean "boring patterns always the same" at all; consistency means doing the map intuitive for new players and maintaining a well structured beatmap, which is extremely necessary for a rank.
00:08:083 (9) - This note here for example too, is totally out of place if you consider the rhythm you've chosen to follow!
00:10:750 (12) - This, too, and on and on and on...
00:13:417 (15) - Every third note looks like it is...!
You should maintain the 3 note - break pattern until you arrive at the vocals start in 00:19:750 - , in which you can start a new rhythm!

I think you already know where I'm going to with this, don't you?

However, feel free to go freestyle in the Kiai time as long as it fits the music. (that's what I do always on my maps)

I hope you understand what I wanted to mean. Otherwise just PM me ingame and we can discuss it with more detail!

[ Futsuu]

1. Same HP suggestion
2. The start part I suggest you to move 00:02:751 (4) - to 00:03:083 - , and so with all the parts that are like this if you keep the consistency until the vocal starts.
3. The patterns are good, but as I told you in Kantan's mod, work on consistency in all of them. That's all I can say

I can't stress enough how necessary consistency is for lower difficulties, so keep improving on it!

I hope this has been useful for you.


Good luck on the rank ╭( ･ㅂ･)و

The pattern almost have no errors. But I suggest tons of Finish suggestion. You can accept or not because all of Finish suggestion is just suggestion.

[Kantan]

Change Slider Velocity to 1.20.

00:14:417 (16) - can add Finish
00:24:083 (26) - few possible suggestions

or

or


00:47:084 (50) - can be moved to 00:47:583 -
01:09:750 - can add a kat

01:40:417 - , 01:41:083 - can add d, k
01:43:583 (109) - k
01:45:083 - add a don or move 01:44:750 (110) - to here and make it don
01:53:083 (119) - can add Finish

[Futsuu]

00:07:584 (11) - can add Finish
00:10:251 (16) - can add Finish
00:12:917 (20) - can add Finish
00:13:417 (21) - move to 00:13:583 and add Finish if you accepted suggestions above
00:23:584 (38,39) - can add Finish
00:33:751 (56,57) - dd
00:34:251 (58,59,60) - can add Finish
00:37:583 (63) - can add Finish
00:38:917 - add a kat

00:44:417 (73) - can be slider if you fit this pattern at vocal
00:47:584 (77,78) - can add Finish
00:49:084 (80) - can add Finish
00:54:417 (89,92) - can add Finish

01:05:750 - add a don
01:07:584 (119) - can add Finish
01:10:251 (124) - can add Finish
01:13:417 (129,130) - delete first one, and add Finish to second one
01:16:250 - can add Big Don

01:25:417 (155,156) - delete first one, and add Finish to second one
01:27:417 (160,161,162) - delete first one, and make second one to don
01:28:917 (166) - can add Finish
01:31:584 (171) - can add Finish
01:34:751 (176,177) - delete first one, and add Finish to second one

01:45:083 (201) - add Finish
01:46:250 (203) - can add Finish
01:48:917 (208) - can add FInsih
01:51:583 (213) - can add Finish
01:52:083 (214) - move to 01:52:250 and add Finish if you accepted suggestions above
01:53:083 (215) - can add Finish

[Muzukashii]

00:05:917 (17,18,19,20) - delete except 00:06:084 (18) -
00:07:584 (26) - add Finish
00:10:251 (36) - add FInish
00:12:917 (47) - add Finish
00:13:584 (50) - add Finish
00:14:417 (54) - add Finish

00:21:084 (83) - add Finish
00:23:584 (90,93) - add Finish
00:28:251 (107) - add Finish
00:34:251 (127,130,133) - add Finish
00:38:917 (146,147,148) - add Finish
00:47:584 (176,178,181) - add Finish
00:52:917 (197) - add Finish
00:54:417 (203,207) - can add Finish
01:00:917 (229) - add Finish
01:07:584 (259) - add Finish
01:13:584 (288) - add Finish
01:16:251 (300) - add Finish

01:21:583 - can add a don

01:28:917 (358) - add Finish
01:34:917 (385) - add Finish
01:37:583 (397) - add Finish

01:45:083 - add big Don or Kat

01:46:250 (434) - add Finish
01:48:917 (444) - add Finish
01:51:583 (455,458,462) - add Finish

[Oni]

00:07:084 (28,29,30,31,32) - k ddd K
00:10:250 (48) - add Finish
00:12:917 (64,67,71) - add Finish
00:20:917 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115) - suggestion below


00:27:417 (143,144) - can be kkkkk
00:28:251 (148,149,150) - K _ K
00:34:250 (175,180,183) - add Finish
00:37:584 (192) - add Finish
00:38:917 (199,200,201) - add Finish
00:49:583 - can add a don
00:51:167 (255) - k
00:52:917 (265) - add Finish
00:54:417 (272) - add Finish
00:55:584 (278) - add FInish
01:00:917 (314) - add Finish

01:13:583 (394) - add Finish
01:16:251 (408) - add Finish
01:28:917 (480) - add Finish
01:39:251 (548) - remove Finish

01:45:750 (591,592,593,594,595) - k ddd K
01:48:917 (611) - add Finish
01:51:583 (627,630,634) - add Finish
01:58:084 (672) - remove Finish

Guuuyyys,,, thanks for the mod.
i'm sorry for being unable to reply your mod as soon as you post it. i'm sooo busy with IRL things right now.

i will reply your mod after all IRL things done (about 2-3 weeks). so please wait patiently.

i really appreciate your mods. thanks!

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Kantan]
Kantan is a little easy compared to Futsuu, consider adding more notes
00:11:750 (13) - add finish
00:51:750 (55) - add finish

[Futsuu]
no issues~

[Muzukashii]
no issues~

[Oni]
00:20:917 (109,110,111,112,113) - this doesn't quite match the drum right, consider moving 00:20:917 (109,110,111) - to 00:20:750 and 00:21:167 (112) - to 00:21:083

good luck for rank~