Stonebank - The Pressure · forum

Asserin

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Asserin 2015-06-20T08:37:47+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3 stycznia 2016 at 19:00:44

Artist: Stonebank
Title: The Pressure
Tags: Hard dance SrSkyPlayer wa_ Come[Back]Home Single Monstercat 022 Contact EDM Electro
BPM: 170
Filesize: 3216kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2,51 stars, 184 notes)
CBH's Hard (3,52 stars, 251 notes)
Light Insane (3,75 stars, 271 notes)
Normal (1,56 stars, 101 notes)
Senhor's Insane (4,59 stars, 280 notes)
wa's Extra (4,8 stars, 296 notes)

Download: Stonebank - The Pressure
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Group:
wa_
SrSkyPlayer
Come[Back]Home

Special thanks to Krfawy who bubbled map and Baraatje123 for qualify map. Desperate-kun i love u too :3

Last edited by Asserin 2017-12-27T17:05:48+00:00, edited 183 times in total.

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2015-07-08T18:32:18+00:00

hi~

Normal

you must make consistent distance in Normal diff. check AImod(ctrl+shift+A), you can find issue there
1.4 SV is a bit fast for new player i guess
maybe it's now working on, please keep these in your mind to make

Hard

00:05:077 (3) - ctrl+g makes better flow
00:12:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - too big space for hard, make them more closer
00:19:724 (2,3,4) - ^
00:23:783 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:29:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:31:019 (7,8,9) - ^
00:35:430 (8) - add NC

Dance

00:04:372 (2) - add NC makes sense i guess
00:05:607 (2,3) - avoid misreading it as 1/4, stack them
00:08:430 (2,3) - ^
00:33:666 (4,5) - how about to make more big jump here?
00:38:077 (1) - remove NC and add it to 00:38:254 (2) -
00:48:842 (8) - add NC

good luck!

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2015-07-10T10:05:02+00:00

[General]
[*]Sound has always been 100% will be very noisy, Try to reduce
[*]Source there are some problems, It is incomplete
[Dance]
00:09:313 (6) - ctrl+g
00:27:666 (9,9,9,9) - NC please
00:34:724 (9) - ^
00:44:783 missing a note
00:45:313 ^
01:07:724 (6) - Stay away
01:12:136 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Although they are to follow the drum, But this place is not sufficient, then the distance.

[Soxis' Insane]
00:04:372 (1,6) - ~00:14:783 (6) - is unrankable，it at least two colors. and use white color is disqualifiedable
01:01:371 (1) - ~01:23:077 (5) - ^
00:22:724 - missing a note
00:25:195 - ^
00:26:607 (3) - ^
I know more than three are not to follow the rhythm of the drum, but the quality is not enough.

00:32:607 (4) - NC
00:40:901 (1,2) - exchange NC

[Hard]
Please check stack and blanket
00:12:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using this slider very dangerous, fix please
01:04:019 (1) - ~01:11:783 (27) - check NC
01:12:136 (1) - ~01:17:077 (1) - Insufficient quality
01:17:783 (2) - ~01:23:254 (15) - check NC

[Normal]
SV1.4 is so fast
check NC

Overall insufficient quality, need more practice

good luck！

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-07-11T17:42:01+00:00

Alright, I'm here to return the favor

[Normal]

00:06:842 (3) - hard to read for newbies
00:18:489 (2) - x = 194, y = 201
00:18:842 (3) - x = 147, y = 126
00:40:371 (5) - i recommend not doing hidden notes on easy/normal
01:05:783 (2) - for this better use 01:06:489 (1) - with ctrl + g
01:13:548 (3) - blanket
01:20:607 (3) - blanket, and while you'ree at it, you could also stack 01:22:019 (1) - with 01:19:195 (2) -

[Hard]

00:07:901 (3) - blanket
00:10:019 (1) - blanket
00:32:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - now that might be too hard for a hard
01:22:372 (2) - blanket
Hards pretty solid, congratz

[Soxis' Insane]

00:14:783 (1) - why end this ? I can understand, why you put a pause there, but this repeatslider while the vocals still going kind of feels misplaced
00:35:430 (1) - Please reduce the hitsounds. It might sound fine, if you use a skin with very low hitsounds, but there are people with normal loud hitsounds as well
01:23:077 (5) - do you really want to leave the note carrying the most impact in the whole song on the sliderend of a repeatslider ?
You could, for example make it a jump or something like that; with the slider Lenience you could even make it pretty far

[Dance]

00:06:048 (4) - x = 257, y = 321 (you can move it elsewhere, but please not in a straight line with the sliders)
cant really say anything against the deathstream, but, just hypothetically, if you remove it and make it a break this song is only 4 stars. Of course, difficulty and everything, but if the rest of your song, especially for a short map like this does not even come close to an element which gives it that much difficulty it might be hard to find an audience for it. Players who enjoy the map will die at the stream and pros, who can play the stream will get bored of the rest. just my opinion, either redo the whole stream section or make the whole map harder.
01:23:430 (8) - awesome end note usage, would recommend using a higher hitsound volume for it tho
Otherwise there isn't much; this is partially because it fits a 4.5 star map at most, it is simply too easy for a 5 star if you dont count the stream. BUT also the mapping in itself is really good imo. Good Job!

All in all, I can say, that i really like this map (except for the deathstream) and wish you good luck on ranking

PS: If you still have a free slot and want me (you have seen my mapping style) i would really appreciate being allowed to make a GD for you

I would make an extra (because I mostly cant do anything else if the song doesn't force me to) and would love to hear from you

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-07-14T16:10:43+00:00

Big Update on my Diff, fixed tons of unrankable issues

Asona's Dance

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:The Pressure
TitleUnicode:The Pressure
Artist:Stonebank
ArtistUnicode:Stonebank
Creator:Asserin
Version:Asona's Dance
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:737943
BeatmapSetID:325307

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.4
OverallDifficulty:8.3
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

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104,260,34459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,216,34548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,34636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,34724,5,4,0:0:0:0:
100,100,34812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,80,34901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,68,34989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,68,35077,2,0,L|300:76,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,220,35254,2,0,L|320:212,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,35430,6,0,L|264:260,1,25.0000000745058,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,35518,2,0,L|212:264,1,25.0000000745058
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156,194,52018,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,52195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,52371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,324,52548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,120,53430,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,344,53606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,272,53783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,200,53959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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350,164,57665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-07-14T16:12:46+00:00

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A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-07-28T14:44:33+00:00

Hi ~ :3
good songs !

I found a problem . Please use it as reference <3

(but I only understand few words in English. Sorry ;w;)

[General]

Tags
add stonebank
add Hard Dance
add the name of the guest mapper :3

[Easy]

Hit Sounds
00:42:842 (3) - Remove Clap
00:48:842 (4) - add Clap
00:53:783 (3) - ^
00:54:842 (4) - ^
01:00:136 (2) - Remove Finish
01:00:136 (2) - add Clap
01:05:783 (4) - Remove Whistle and Finish
01:05:783 (4) - add Clap
01:12:136 (1) - add Finish
01:17:783 (1) - ^
01:19:195 (1) - ^
01:20:607 (1) - ^
01:24:842 (2) - ^

[Normal]

NC
00:37:901 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:254 (6) - add NC
01:05:430 (1) - Remove NC
01:08:607 (1) - ^
01:09:313 (3) - add NC
01:10:724 (1) - Remove NC
01:14:960 (5) - add NC

Hit Sounds
00:41:430 (2) - add Clap
00:42:136 (3) - ^
00:45:313 (5) - ^
00:46:019 (6) - ^
00:49:548 ~ 00:59:077 add Hit sounds :3
01:12:136 ~ 01:23:430 ^

[Advanced]

Object
00:15:666 ~ 00:26:607 add object !
01:10:019 ~ 01:23:430 ^

00:06:489 (5) - It has jumped out from the frame
00:08:254 (2) - ^
00:11:783 (1) - ^
00:13:548 (4) - ^
00:41:430 (8) - ^
00:44:960 (4) - ^
00:49:548 (2) - ^
00:51:313 (5) - ^
00:54:136 (11) - ^
01:04:371 (4) - ^
01:04:724 (5) - ^
01:07:195 (7) - ^
01:08:960 (4) - ^

[Hard]

NC
00:12:489 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:901 (1) - ^
01:01:195 (1) - ^
01:04:019 (1) - ^
01:08:607 (1) -
00:12:842 (2) - Add NC
00:14:254 (2) - ^
00:25:548 (1) - ^
00:32:607 (2) - ^
00:41:077 (7) - ^
01:03:666 (10) - ^
01:05:077 (5) - ^
01:07:901 (6) - ^
01:09:313 (4) - ^

plz add Hit Sounds !

[Soxis' Insane]

NC
00:24:136 (7) - add NC

[Collab]

NC
00:15:313 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:313 (1) - ^
00:40:724 (1) - ^
01:03:313 (1) - ^
01:09:666 (2) - ^
01:10:371 (1) - ^
01:14:783 (1) - ^
01:16:018 (1) - ^
01:17:077 (1) - ^
01:20:783 (1) - ^

00:15:666 (2) - add NC
00:41:077 (10) - ^
00:58:019 (8) - ^
01:03:666 (2) - ^
01:09:313 (6) - ^
01:10:812 (2) - ^
01:14:959 (1) - ^
01:16:371 (3) - ^
01:20:606 (9) - ^
01:21:312 (3) - ^

plz add Hit Sounds !

[wa's Extra]
Oh Amazimg ... No problem

[Asona's Dance]
~~Crazy Streams Fooooooo!!~~

NC
00:05:783 (7) - add NC
00:11:430 (1) - ^
00:14:254 (2) - ^

00:06:136 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:077 (1) - ^

Very fun to watch !! Good Luck ~

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-07-28T15:10:12+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:
Hi ~ :3

[Asona's Dance]
~~Crazy Streams Fooooooo!!~~
NC
00:05:783 (7) - add NC
00:11:430 (1) - ^
00:14:254 (2) - ^

00:06:136 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:077 (1) - ^
All Applied

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Kobold84

Global Moderator

1,201 posts

Joined September 2013

Kobold84 2015-07-29T23:30:47+00:00

Hey there.
Check the AiMod. http://puu.sh/ji34Z/0bbaaae4e0.jpg

[Easy]
00:18:489 (2) - I'm not sure about this one, looks too boring for me. http://puu.sh/ji0dv/7d59ceea5b.jpg Maybe something like that?
00:24:842 (2) - same.
00:27:313 - about the break here. Maybe add some spinner, so new players can learn how to spin?
00:35:430 (1,1) - rhythm here isn't okay. It's easy, yes, but do you really need to ignore so much sounds? And slider (00:35:430 (1,1) - ) should starts from 00:38:254 - that time.

[Normal]
00:18:842 (3,4) - something is wrong with spacing here.
01:16:371 (3,4) - why these sliders so... straight. Make them just like 01:14:960 (1,2) - here.
01:22:019 (1,2) - hmm. I would make here one reverse slider till the end: http://puu.sh/ji1Rn/592e6c62db.jpg

[Advanced]
00:10:019 (4,5) - make the end of slider closer to the next slider please.
Also advanced has some weird spacing in the beginning (before the break), so please reconsider it.
00:10:019 (4,7) - ctrl+g?
00:30:842 (2,1,2) - hard to read that because of the spacing. Maybe make 00:30:842 (2) - little closer to the next circle?
00:37:548 (4) - really tough one. Try to do it with the same length as previous reverse sliders.
00:46:371 (7,8) - well. Maybe increase spacing? So it will be in the middle between 00:46:371 (7,9) - them.
00:52:195 (6) - same goes here, but reduce spacing.

[Hard]
00:15:666 (1,2,3,4) - how about making a square?
00:21:313 (1,2,3,4) - same.
00:42:313 (2,3) - hmm. Increase the spacing?
00:59:430 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read and looks sloppy.
01:04:371 (3,4,5) - reduce spacing, so 3 and 4 will be between sliders right in the middle. Aww, so beautiful.
01:10:724 (1,2) - too big spacing. And I'm not sure about the second slider, try to make him more similar to the previous one.

[Soxic' Insane:]
00:11:960 - pause?
00:12:489 - pause?!
There's music and vocal though, map something here.
00:25:195 (10) - new combo probably.
01:18:842 (4,5,6,7) - make the perfect square here please.

[Collab]
Ar9.2?.. It's only 170 bpm and map doesn't have really hard patterns, so I would recommend ar9.
00:26:959 (1,2) - spacing here is TOO big.
00:34:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - reduce the spacing since music hasn't changed a lot, but spacing has changed A LOT.
00:49:901 (1,2) - two circles on the same spot slows down the player and then BOOM! jump out of nowhere. 00:50:254 (2) - maybe make him far away?

[wa's Extra]
00:35:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - um... Music doesn't change SO much in that moment. And spacing at the end doesn't look good for me.

[Asona's Dance]
00:35:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - mhm...
00:36:930 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - oh. So, the flow in the both moments isn't good in my opinion.

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-07-30T00:16:54+00:00

Kobold84 wrote:
Hey there. Hey

[Asona's Dance]
00:35:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - mhm... Will stay for now, even though i will rework it if i get more complaints
00:36:930 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - oh. So, the flow in the both moments isn't good in my opinion. You are right, made it less static

New Diff

osu file format v14

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Marco

68 posts

Joined February 2012

Marco 2015-08-01T23:17:07+00:00

You asked me politely for a mod, so here it is. I am not really good at modding, i prefer giving feedback ingame, but let's try. I really suck at lower difficulties, so i can't really get into detail there. (Sorry)

[General]

You are creative with the slider shaped, i like that a lot. Keep up the good work.

You can use the AiMod(CTRL+Shift+A). It will tell you errors in your map. You can PM me ingame about it if you want.

I don't know if it is just me.. but it feels like your distance between some objects is sometimes a bit strange. It's not much or a major problem imo, but i can still kinda "feel" it.

About the Kiai sections.. make them all like in your collab or your normal/etc. But the second kiai section should start at 01:00:842 (1) - rather than 00:59:430 (1) -

Eespecially the lower difficulties it feels like it's all taking place only in the middle section of the map.

For example

Try to use the full grid for mapping, it's so much space and you can do so much better if you use it to it's full potential. Try to spread the circles on the whole grid as good as possible, instead of the whole action taking place in the middle and going in circles.

[Easy]
Sorry, not much to say here. I like it so far, and as i mentioned.. i suck at lower difficulties.

[Normal]
Same here. I like it and i think it's really okay so far.

[Advanced]
the break after 00:14:783 (6) - isn't really necessary. This part can be mapped really good, just use low distance snap and make it higher as the map gets more intense. But like this, the break is just too long for such a short map.
There are much better options that 00:35:077 (6,7) - and 00:36:842 (2,3,4) - , as it feels like it has no real connection to the map, it's just a filler. Could also probably just be my personal opinion, who knows.
I like the rest of the map tho.

[Hard]
00:10:724 (3,4) - i think you should put a circle in between them, it feels so empty.
00:35:430 (1) - i guess you can leave it like that, although it could also be mapped much more efficently for a hard difficulty.
01:12:136 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is getting boring after the 2 of them. Like mentioned before, it just feels like a filler and could be mapped much better.

[Soxis' Insane]
00:11:607 (4,5) - maybe a bit more distance between those two, because it's the same distance like before, but a longer time untill you can click it. Should be changed.
00:23:783 (5,6) - maybe stack these two
00:24:136 (1,2) - stack
00:25:901 (6,1) - the time "gap" between thos is a bit huge, at least place a circle in between and put 00:26:960 (1) - to a different position. It doesn't look good if they are just on top of each other.
00:32:607 (1) - you could make the following part much better. Like for example you could stack 00:32:960 (2,3) - and put the sliders to a different position and give them a shape.

Just an example what would look better imo, you don't need to change it if you don't want.

There also might be a few good parts for a jump or two. Also some sliders are a bit strange, but personally i like the slider creativity in the whole map and experimenting with them... because i have no creativity in sliders myself.

Add Kiai!

[Collab]
One General thing here, make distances higher when there are only little notes placed. Judging from the shortslider/stream part before the main part of the song, you were trying to make a difficult difficulty here, so make the players jump more! Like in parts like these 00:46:724 (1,2) - or 00:49:901 (1,2,3) - or 00:49:901 (1,2,3) - . Those are perfect for higher jumps on higher difficulties, maybe also screen jumps. But it can also just be my personal taste. Not much left to say here.

[wa's Extra]
I like this one the most. Just because the stream in the first part is just what i love about streams.. changing spacing and movement! well... even if the stream get's a little too spacy here at the end 00:36:135 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - but it's okay, it's an extra anyway.
But some spacings could be changed here and there. Making the spacing here and there a bit higher or lower can help, but there is nothing major to mention imo.
I like it.

[Asona's Dance]
I'm not good at playing such high dfficulties(or to be more precise, the patterns), neither am i good at modding these, but i will mention something anyway.
imo 00:35:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part is a little extreme... but well, it's an extreme difficulty. So it's just from my point of view.
Maybe it's mapped a little too much after the leading instruments, you could make it even better if you map after the background instruments more often.
For example, the Kiai section is the easiest part in this map, for me at least. This shouldn't be the case. The Kiai section needs the "wow" feeling, it usually has to be the hardest part, or the more intense part in the map, but here it is the exact opposite. If the map would be more focused on a specific stream part or something else, it would be okay. But i think the Kiai section here is the main part in the song, so it should be at least the "harder" part in the map, imo.

So, you asked, i delivered. If you have any questions, PM me and talk with me about it, i am bored 95% of the time anyway.

I hoped i could help you a little. But please keep in mind, these are all just my personal opinions. But after all, i liked the map a lot.

HF with mapping

Skubi

841 posts

Joined December 2013

Skubi 2015-08-07T13:27:20+00:00

M4M here

[General]

00:36:753 - preview point?

Also if there are any SV changes then they should be announced with NC

[Asona's Dance]

[General]

I really think that diff is just so bad... sooo... im really sorry man but its just bad

[wa's Extra]

[General]

00:25:370 - Why NC there :/
00:27:664 - these 2 sliders dont fit there because after that there are streams all the time
00:35:429 - from here, it's just too much imo
00:53:253 - circle
00:58:547 - that's definitely too much
01:00:488 - change to slider
01:05:782 - two sliders?
01:15:311 - CTRL+G and curve it to match the beat

[Collab]

[General]

00:04:371 - something is wrong here i think, same with other ones like this one
00:52:195 - too much? ;-;
01:05:783 (3) - unrankable
01:23:430 - lengthen it to 01:24:842 -

Have fun ^^ sorry for short mod but im not in mood :/ this temperature kills me

Seto Kousuke

osu! Alumni

610 posts

Joined June 2013

Seto Kousuke 2015-08-07T16:50:23+00:00

Heya <3

Tried my best to find stuff to help out, the mapset is really fun and looks wellmade overall, so...instead of talking as a mapper (which I still really weak and newbie)...I'll talk as a player trying to help

[Easy]

00:35:254 (1) - If i remember correctly, Easy diffs should be done 100% 1/1 , so I think this stack + time won't be possible
00:39:313 (3) - This stack might be a little weird for new players to understand, maybe change place of the slider?
01:12:136 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Atleast half of these NC could be merged i think

[Normal]
01:22:019 (1) - I think that's such a sad time consuming slider...maybe chage it for a spinner or a different pattern?

[advanced]
00:30:489 (1) - Remove nc ? If so: remove here 00:30:842 (2) - and here 00:31:019 (1) -
01:17:783 (1,1) - The maps really entertaining until here, I think you can make more enjoyable patterns for this end

[Asona's Dance]
Personal note: I think this diff should be adjusted in several places...as a huge fan of sliders and reading maps (which i love to play and yes, I have more than enough skill level to play this stuff ), this diff looks and plays kinda ''weird''...sometimes it looks like it's a huge overkill....and then randomly looks like a cute cat heavily nerfed....but it's a fun map overall xD
00:05:430 (5,6,1,2) - imo this is a little too much overmaped, unecessary stacks of kick sliders imo...maybe changing it for something more simple? the song barely started x]
00:35:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Isn't this a little too much? I mean, it's kinda OverKill xD ...it's only the beggining, maybe doing something like the previous streams would be enough
01:03:312 (3) - Because of sliders like this and all the repetitive easy jumps I feel like the Kiai is the easiest part of the whole song...and not ''almost the easiest part'' but as ''is this the same map?'' , which I think it's kinda weird...if you put even half of the effort you used during the whole map until now, i think this could be way different

Going to give 2 stars because of the really nice mapset and because you didn't kill me yet asserin <3

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-08-23T13:40:51+00:00

Seems quite a mess, fix these to clear some the clutter:

You got inconsistencies in a few things, like countdown, tags, Letterboxes, as well as your Uninherited timing point (Red Line) <- this is crucial

Don't forget your preview points as well.

Do use custom combo colours to better fit your BG

and especially referring to the highest difficulty, NC for slider velocity changes, they are big changes and should be shown/expressed with changes

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-08-26T17:32:11+00:00

Hope

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:The Pressure
Artist:Stonebank
ArtistUnicode:Stonebank
Creator:Asserin
Version:Asona's Dance
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Well, guess i made it harder overall...
Remapped parts with professional help, hopefully one can see that
Also kept mods in mind while redoing parts

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Asserin 2015-08-26T17:46:27+00:00

neonat wrote:
Seems quite a mess, fix these to clear some the clutter:

You got inconsistencies in a few things, like countdown, tags, Letterboxes, as well as your Uninherited timing point (Red Line) <- this is crucial

Don't forget your preview points as well.

Do use custom combo colours to better fit your BG

and especially referring to the highest difficulty, NC for slider velocity changes, they are big changes and should be shown/expressed with changes

Right ,completely forgot about it >< .I'll try fix this ^^

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Asserin 2015-08-26T17:47:23+00:00

Asonate wrote:

Hope

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:The Pressure
TitleUnicode:The Pressure
Artist:Stonebank
ArtistUnicode:Stonebank
Creator:Asserin
Version:Asona's Dance
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:737943
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231,32,40724,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,256,40901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,196,41077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,92,41254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,332,41430,2,0,P|179:168|183:140,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,32,41783,2,0,P|288:196|284:224,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,65,42136,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,215,42312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,240,42489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,48,42665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,332,42842,2,0,P|152:368|92:340,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,43195,2,0,P|172:176|232:204,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,43548,2,0,L|256:260,1,75.0000030845403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,168,43901,6,0,P|406:136|302:136,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,332,44254,2,0,P|290:303|343:214,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,70,44606,2,0,B|222:94|226:136|226:136|195:214|154:149,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,44959,6,0,L|313:145,1,25.0000000745058,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,284,45136,2,0,P|384:352|348:392,1,125.000000372529,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,324,45665,2,8,B|244:324|212:344|212:344|128:304|116:172,1,300.000012338161
117,185,46371,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,80,46548,6,0,P|196:120|208:232,1,200.000000596046
258,295,47430,6,0,P|292:190|260:84,1,225.000009253621
344,84,48136,6,0,P|364:148|360:248,1,150.000006169081
436,224,48489,2,0,P|437:149|416:72,1,150.000006169081
460,292,48842,6,0,P|488:272|504:244,1,50.0000001490115
460,292,49195,2,0,B|376:240|304:240|304:240|308:268|336:288,1,200.000000596046
372,325,49548,6,0,P|399:271|391:175,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,183,49901,2,0,P|109:257|140:325,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,50254,2,0,P|256:160|188:188,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,50606,6,0,L|216:284,1,25.0000000745058,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,325,50783,2,0,B|388:343|428:350|428:350|431:322|424:284,1,125.000000372529,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,51312,2,8,B|380:224|308:204|308:204|200:224|136:184,1,300.000012338161
156,194,52018,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,52195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,52371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,324,52548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,52724,2,0,B|388:78|348:56|348:56|436:44|440:80,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,194,53077,2,0,B|152:244|192:266|192:266|104:278|100:242,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,53430,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,344,53606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,272,53783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,200,53959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,180,54136,6,0,P|449:150|464:80,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,19,54489,2,0,P|326:49|312:120,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,235,54842,2,0,P|386:174|388:100,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,278,55195,6,0,P|170:329|244:336,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,235,55548,2,0,P|291:183|217:177,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,336,55901,2,0,P|412:344|428:268,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,56254,6,0,L|384:140,1,25.0000000745058,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,56430,2,0,B|192:88|156:92|156:92|164:124|180:136,1,125.000000372529,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,124,56959,2,8,B|261:216|341:248|341:248|361:171|340:128,1,300.000012338161
350,164,57665,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,272,57842,6,0,P|424:248|452:128,1,200.000000596046
270,271,58724,6,0,B|312:240|360:272|360:272|356:348|248:360,1,225.000009253621
270,271,59430,6,0,L|216:284,1,37.5000015422702,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,59606,6,0,L|73:132,1,37.5000015422702,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,59783,6,0,L|81:324,1,37.5000015422702,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,60,59959,6,0,L|197:72,1,37.5000015422702,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,60136,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,120,60224,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,176,60312,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,232,60401,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,312,60489,6,0,P|336:340|288:348,1,75.0000002235173
256,340,60842,5,4,0:0:0:0:
56,44,61195,1,4,0:0:0:0:
80,272,61548,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,61724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,112,61901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,287,62077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,62254,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,220,62606,1,4,0:0:0:0:
48,352,62959,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,63136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,356,63312,2,0,P|240:360|288:348,1,75.0000002235173
316,332,63665,5,4,0:0:0:0:
472,32,64018,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,280,64371,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,64548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,64724,2,0,P|416:248|388:260,1,75.0000002235173
348,268,65077,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,268,65606,2,0,L|356:304,1,25.0000000745058
348,268,65783,2,0,P|304:276|264:264,1,75.0000002235173,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,66136,2,0,P|316:148|356:160,1,75.0000002235173,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,66489,5,4,0:0:0:0:
56,296,66842,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,340,67195,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,72,67371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,350,67548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,61,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,128,67901,5,4,0:0:0:0:
292,300,68254,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,212,68606,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,296,68783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,280,68959,2,0,P|416:248|424:224,1,75.0000002235173
428,184,69312,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,84,69665,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,300,70018,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,32,70195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,70371,2,0,P|168:336|208:348,1,75.0000002235173
240,348,70724,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,208,70901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,208,70989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,208,71077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,84,71254,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,220,71430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,220,71518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,220,71606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,300,71783,6,4,P|480:192|396:80,1,200.000000596046
196,112,72136,6,0,P|144:172|132:240,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,335,72489,2,0,P|367:275|379:207,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,72842,2,0,P|256:44|184:40,1,150.000006169081,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,152,73195,6,0,L|56:168,1,25.0000000745058,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,296,73371,2,0,P|124:344|192:352,1,125.000000372529,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,352,73901,2,8,B|260:312|276:240|276:240|324:188|452:212,1,300.000012338161
421,207,74606,5,0,0:0:0:0:
154,98,74783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,74959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,56,75136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,207,75312,6,0,P|349:263|289:231,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,207,75665,2,0,P|163:263|223:231,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,180,76018,5,0,0:0:0:0:
265,374,76195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,292,76371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,98,76548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,180,76724,6,0,P|408:156|444:68,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,77077,2,0,P|283:104|247:192,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,276,77430,2,0,P|188:348|116:352,1,150.000006169081,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,77783,6,0,L|188:164,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,120,78136,2,0,L|324:220,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,280,78489,2,0,L|196:180,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,78842,2,0,L|316:204,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,284,79195,6,0,P|256:332|240:328,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,100,79548,2,0,P|256:52|272:56,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,284,79901,2,0,P|272:332|256:328,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,100,80254,2,0,P|236:52|252:56,1,100.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,244,80606,6,0,P|120:280|140:296,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,272,80783,2,0,P|268:236|248:220,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,100,80959,2,0,P|132:136|152:152,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,81136,2,0,P|280:92|260:76,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,100,81312,6,0,L|64:128,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,81489,2,0,L|188:260,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,100,81665,2,0,L|448:128,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,81842,2,0,L|324:260,1,50.0000001490115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,68,82018,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,82195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,82283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,82371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,68,82548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,82724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,82812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,82901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,83077,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,336,83254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,188,83430,6,0,B|444:128|424:80|424:80|368:116|272:124|268:64|312:40|340:52|340:76|324:88,1,300.000000894069,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Well, guess i made it harder overall...
Remapped parts with professional help, hopefully one can see that
Also kept mods in mind while redoing parts

Thanks !

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

ZLOdeuka- 2015-08-31T11:34:47+00:00

hello~ from ingame req.

[General]

• Size BG does not comply rules. You need a resolution of 1366x768 in this case, you can use it http://puu.sh/jUUbu/88c7a34228.jpg
• The tags - do not need a point and commas. remove it, it should look like continuous text. btw, Tags must be specified in every difficulty, but tags are only in the Collab.
and further: delete Stonebank and Pressure from the tags. They are not needed. it is already there in the title map.

in their names Asonate and wa_ - misprints. and lacking nickname SrSkyPlayer. In short your tags completely wrong. Use these: Hard Dance SrSkyPlayer Soxis wa_ Asonate - for ALL diffs.

• your map is not set preview. set it here 00:37:901 ( for all diffs )
• set the same color for the new combo for all diffs - but not in those that e.g. Advanced - there incorrect color combos. they merge with each other. I suggest it

SPOILER

Combo1 : 192,245,167
Combo2 : 255,139,83
Combo3 : 244,182,250
Combo4 : 15,122,240
Combo5 : 192,129,129
Combo6 : 251,98,98

• Kiai time should be the same in all your Diffs ( Gd diffs may vary but it is better to make them the same ) I offer this option:
00:38:254 - start kiai ~ 00:38:607 - end kiai. 01:00:842 - start kiai ~ 01:10:724 - end kiai.
btw, Kiai must begin with a strong beat.
• do the same Offset for all differential. they not may be different

I was surprised to see so much. I looked up the mods that people wrote earlier, but you have not corrected nothing. You're asking for a mod for stars? I hope that you will correct it all. Because otherwise the card will not be ranked. because it does not comply with rules rank. I hope that I could help you :<

Correct this please and I will return and I will finally end your mod!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2015-08-31T11:42:42+00:00

hey o/

[General]

Previously pointed out by neonat, you NEED to fix the inconsistencies between each difficulty. I will list down exactly what you have to do;

Change the offset (the red timing point) to 2959 for the following difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- Asona's Dance
The reason why this is required is to fulfill the ranking criteria:
Timing
◾Uninherited (red) Timing Sections should be used to accurately map the song's timing. They should synchronize to the beats of the song as accurately as possible and use the correct time signature whenever possible. If an incorrect time signature would last for more than 2 bars, add another timing section to fix it. Please see this thread for more information on downbeats.
Combo colours also must be consistent throughout the entire mapset. Although not mentioned in the ranking criteria, it is HIGHLY recommended for consistency. To do this, copy the following and replace the section in each .osu file so it looks something similar to this: image
SPOILER
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,228,109
Combo2 : 190,245,193
Combo3 : 213,155,247
Combo4 : 226,88,241
Combo5 : 88,183,239
Combo6 : 40,90,208
Combo7 : 205,48,147
Combo8 : 123,234,137
```
Disable countdown in the following difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Collab
- Asona's Dance
This will improve consistency, also countdowns are kinda old-fashioned (2008)
Disable Widescreen support in the following difficulties (all):
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
- Asona's Dance
Again, this isn't included in the RC, but it's just to improve consistency. It's only really needed if you have a storyboard, which you don't have.
Disable Letterbox during breaks for the following difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
None of the difficulties have breaks, so this option is unnecessary to enable.
Add the following line to the tags field of the following diffs (Soxis Asonate SrSkyPlayer wa_ Hard Dance)
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
- Asona's Dance
Guest Difficulty mapper's names must be listed in the tags field of every difficulty if they have a guess difficulty in that mapset. RC says so:
The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.
Also, tags like "Stonebank" and "Pressure" are not required (they are redundant) as the Artist and Title field respectively already mention those two words
Set the preview point to 00:38:254 - for the following (all) difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
- Asona's Dance
You need osu to preview a good part of the song when the player selects the song. also required in RC

I'll be giving you some pointers as you still have a lot of work to do if you want to get this mapset into ranked condition

[Easy]

The Distance spacing of easy diffs must be consistent throughout the entire difficulty. That means for example at points like 00:36:842 (2) - , that slider must be spaced out a little bit further. The spacing in an easy diff should correspond to the rhythm of the song. Refer to this image for more info.
00:07:195 (1,2) - why not use the same rhythm as 00:04:372 (1,2,3) - ? The change in rhythm isn't really needed
00:09:666 (3) - delete this. You don't have a circle in this part of the section for any other section of the diff. eg. you have nothing at 00:12:489 or 00:15:313
NC every 2 full measures. This rule should apply to the entire diff
00:22:371 (3,1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead
00:27:136 (1) - shorten to 00:29:783 - . There needs to be at least a 2 measure recovery time after a spinner in Easy

[Normal]

NC every 2 full measures. This rule should apply to the entire diff. eg. remove NC at 00:05:783 (3) - , 00:11:430 (1) - and 00:15:313 (1) - . Add NC at 00:12:842 (1) - and 00:15:666 (2) - . You should be able to see the trend here.
Same thing about distance spacing, mentioned in the easy section. eg, 00:06:842 (3,1) -
00:12:842 (5,7) - avoid overlapping like this. When this is being played, the sliders are on top of each other. This is both messy and hard to read

yeah.. however if you have any questions at all feel free to ask me in-game if I'm available.

To be brutally honest, this mapset is still a huge while away from getting ranked. You have some very good ideas forming, but they are kinda poorly executed. I suggest asking an experienced mapper (like someone with a ranked mapset) for a crash course

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Asserin 2015-08-31T13:07:22+00:00

ZLOdeuka-'s Mod

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
hello~ from ingame req.

[General]

• Size BG does not comply rules. You need a resolution of 1366x768 in this case, you can use it http://puu.sh/jUUbu/88c7a34228.jpg
• The tags - do not need a point and commas. remove it, it should look like continuous text. btw, Tags must be specified in every difficulty, but tags are only in the Collab.
and further: delete Stonebank and Pressure from the tags. They are not needed. it is already there in the title map.

in their names Asonate and wa_ - misprints. and lacking nickname SrSkyPlayer. In short your tags completely wrong. Use these: Hard Dance SrSkyPlayer Soxis wa_ Asonate - for ALL diffs.

• your map is not set preview. set it here 00:37:901 ( for all diffs )
• set the same color for the new combo for all diffs - but not in those that e.g. Advanced - there incorrect color combos. they merge with each other. I suggest it
SPOILER
Combo1 : 192,245,167
Combo2 : 255,139,83
Combo3 : 244,182,250
Combo4 : 15,122,240
Combo5 : 192,129,129
Combo6 : 251,98,98
• Kiai time should be the same in all your Diffs ( Gd diffs may vary but it is better to make them the same ) I offer this option:
00:38:254 - start kiai ~ 00:38:607 - end kiai. 01:00:842 - start kiai ~ 01:10:724 - end kiai.
btw, Kiai must begin with a strong beat.
• do the same Offset for all differential. they not may be different

I was surprised to see so much. I looked up the mods that people wrote earlier, but you have not corrected nothing. You're asking for a mod for stars? I hope that you will correct it all. Because otherwise the card will not be ranked. because it does not comply with rules rank. I hope that I could help you :<

Correct this please and I will return and I will finally end your mod!

Thanks ! You are really helpful <3

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Asserin 2015-08-31T13:10:21+00:00

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[ Rizen ] wrote:
hey o/

[General]

Previously pointed out by neonat, you NEED to fix the inconsistencies between each difficulty. I will list down exactly what you have to do;
Change the offset (the red timing point) to 2959 for the following difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- Asona's Dance
The reason why this is required is to fulfill the ranking criteria:
Timing
◾Uninherited (red) Timing Sections should be used to accurately map the song's timing. They should synchronize to the beats of the song as accurately as possible and use the correct time signature whenever possible. If an incorrect time signature would last for more than 2 bars, add another timing section to fix it. Please see this thread for more information on downbeats.
Combo colours also must be consistent throughout the entire mapset. Although not mentioned in the ranking criteria, it is HIGHLY recommended for consistency. To do this, copy the following and replace the section in each .osu file so it looks something similar to this: image
SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,228,109
Combo2 : 190,245,193
Combo3 : 213,155,247
Combo4 : 226,88,241
Combo5 : 88,183,239
Combo6 : 40,90,208
Combo7 : 205,48,147
Combo8 : 123,234,137
Disable countdown in the following difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Collab
- Asona's Dance
This will improve consistency, also countdowns are kinda old-fashioned (2008)
Disable Widescreen support in the following difficulties (all):
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
- Asona's Dance
Again, this isn't included in the RC, but it's just to improve consistency. It's only really needed if you have a storyboard, which you don't have.
Disable Letterbox during breaks for the following difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
None of the difficulties have breaks, so this option is unnecessary to enable.
Add the following line to the tags field of the following diffs (Soxis Asonate SrSkyPlayer wa_ Hard Dance)
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
- Asona's Dance
Guest Difficulty mapper's names must be listed in the tags field of every difficulty if they have a guess difficulty in that mapset. RC says so:
The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.
Also, tags like "Stonebank" and "Pressure" are not required (they are redundant) as the Artist and Title field respectively already mention those two words
Set the preview point to 00:38:254 - for the following (all) difficulties:
- Easy
- Normal
- Advanced
- Hard
- Soxis' Insane
- Collab
- Senhor's Insane
- wa's Extra
- Asona's Dance
You need osu to preview a good part of the song when the player selects the song. also required in RC
I'll be giving you some pointers as you still have a lot of work to do if you want to get this mapset into ranked condition

[Easy]
The Distance spacing of easy diffs must be consistent throughout the entire difficulty. That means for example at points like 00:36:842 (2) - , that slider must be spaced out a little bit further. The spacing in an easy diff should correspond to the rhythm of the song. Refer to this image for more info.
00:07:195 (1,2) - why not use the same rhythm as 00:04:372 (1,2,3) - ? The change in rhythm isn't really needed
00:09:666 (3) - delete this. You don't have a circle in this part of the section for any other section of the diff. eg. you have nothing at 00:12:489 or 00:15:313
NC every 2 full measures. This rule should apply to the entire diff
00:22:371 (3,1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead
00:27:136 (1) - shorten to 00:29:783 - . There needs to be at least a 2 measure recovery time after a spinner in Easy
[Normal]
NC every 2 full measures. This rule should apply to the entire diff. eg. remove NC at 00:05:783 (3) - , 00:11:430 (1) - and 00:15:313 (1) - . Add NC at 00:12:842 (1) - and 00:15:666 (2) - . You should be able to see the trend here.
Same thing about distance spacing, mentioned in the easy section. eg, 00:06:842 (3,1) -
00:12:842 (5,7) - avoid overlapping like this. When this is being played, the sliders are on top of each other. This is both messy and hard to read
yeah.. however if you have any questions at all feel free to ask me in-game if I'm available.

To be brutally honest, this mapset is still a huge while away from getting ranked. You have some very good ideas forming, but they are kinda poorly executed. I suggest asking an experienced mapper (like someone with a ranked mapset) for a crash course

Yea you have right ! Thank you so much :3 Im so bad in general thing .-.

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2015-09-04T16:07:32+00:00

Ayy

[Easy]
Easy Needs Consistent Spacing. All Notes' Distance Between Them Should Be Even
^ I Think Stacks Is Unrankable In Easy

This Maybe Needs Some More Slider Shape In This Part 00:04:370 - 00:26:606
00:20:960 (1) - This Combo Is Too Long For Easy imo. Add NC At 00:24:135 (5)
01:03:666 (1) - Move Its Tail To Where (2) Was And Move (4) To Fix The Spacing
01:23:429 - I Think This Should Be Spinner

[Normal]

00:05:783 (1) - Overlap
00:06:842 (3,1,2,3) - I Think This Pattern Is Bit Too Hard For A Normal Diff
00:15:313 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Fix The Jump Pattern. Especially This 00:15:666 (2,1)
00:20:607 (6) - Put Its Head Where (4) Was
00:57:666 (1,2) - I Think It Should Be Like x296 y257
01:23:429 - This Should Be A Circle

[Adv.]

This Shouldn't Have A Break Since The Easier Diffs Dont Have Any Breaks
00:06:488 (5) - Slider Shape Like This Is Weird imo
00:32:960 (2,3,4) - Make Spacing Even
00:37:901 (1) - Too Long Combo. Divide To 2 Or 3 If Possible
00:43:195 (1) - ^
00:48:842 (1) - ^
01:00:841 - Kiai Should Start Here

[Hard]

00:10:018 (1) - Looks Better If Its Copy Of 00:10:724 (2)
00:18:842 (4,1) - I Think Anti Jumps Shouldn't Be Used In Hard
01:02:253 (6) - Add NC
01:12:136 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This Should Better Mapped Following The Background Rhythm / Beats Like 01:00:841 - ....

Don't Wanna Mess With GDs

Good Luck With Your Mapset :3

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