1. Undefeatable (6.13 stars, 1554 notes)

Lemmmy wrote:

00:09:901 (5) - Play around with the shape of the loop, it feels faster than the rest of the slider it definitely feels faster. changed into 0.75 slider with different pattern

00:22:274 (2,3,4) - Stack looks odd, place all in same coordinate would be confusing since other triplets aren't placed at the same coordinate. Fixed by lining the triplets instead of making it 'curve'
00:40:198 (7) - Slider is not snapped fixed
00:42:613 (9) - New combo at start of stream or midway through (like 00:43:121 (15) - here) added new combo at start of the stream and at 00:43:460 - . don't know if it's a good idea
01:33:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds mistimed, play around with the offset heard it over 5 times but I just can't see it :/
02:13:282 (4) - careful with the change in slider velocity will change it if more people think it's too sudden/fast
02:21:418 (5) - same here eeh it's fine
02:24:469 (1) - slider tick is offbeat it's for the next part which is 145 BPM. I can't see the mistimed section though :/
02:45:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - timing is wrong for this entire section I knew I eas wrong at this timing. Fixed
03:25:846 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - careful with timing here I'm considering changing this as 1/2 slider but I don't know. we'll see if more people bring this up

04:00:432 (1) - slider velocity change
04:06:453 (1) - ^
05:04:758 (1) - ^
it's fine

05:04:758 (1,2,3,4) - all these sliders end too late fixed
05:15:405 (2) - mistimed moved

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

[Undefeatable]
well.. some sliders are bad looking.. it's everyone's opinion so I won't complain

00:05:833 (1,2,3,4) - larger DS.make them like 00:03:121 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:00:410 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know why I did that, fixed
00:09:562 (4,5) - x172 y224 -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3290358
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3290401 alright

00:12:613 (7) - NC
00:15:325 (6) - ^
*I want to make a NC every 8 beats at the slow part because I think it fits the song pretty well

00:17:359 (1) - move NC I removed it

00:18:037 (3) - NC
00:20:748 (2) - ^
*

00:23:291 (1) - move NC
00:23:460 (2) - ^
moved

00:26:172 (5) - NC
00:26:850 (13) - ^
fixed

.................... omg so many NC problems..
plz NC on white line,many of the diff's NC are on the red line..
I'm currently revising some NC that aren't really supposed to be there

00:39:732 (1) - do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3290423 nice, I never thought of that,I implemented it with a different pattern
01:40:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ I don't think that will work
00:46:511 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3290430 fixed

in fact, KIAI time is best of the map Thanks!

you can change to AR0-AR3 to find something can make the map more good looking I'll try that

just my opinion, keep your own mind and...

sorry my poor English QAQ If everyone can understand it, it's good!

[ Ryuu ] wrote:

Return of mod for mod; Take what I say as MY OPINION, it's what I personally think would improve the map, You can ignore me if you want xD

00:20:748 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing on these notes especially between 7,8 fixed
00:22:104 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing for this jump, it's really sudden and out of place remapped
00:22:613 (5) - Adding on to above the flow of this part is a little off, try working in some kind of pattern to make it flow seemlessly remapped
00:30:748 (4,5) - Reduce spacing, again really large jump, with no change in music and the flow is off remapped
00:33:969 (7) - Reverse this slider then adjust the following pattern of 00:34:308 (1,2,3,4) - to accomodate - Example: http://puu.sh/iEmqT/51f9dff89c.png flipped the slider so the flow at 00:33:630 (6,7) - is "linear"
01:13:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Flow here really bad, and feels no good to play the flow at 01:13:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is intended to be "jerky", I changed (6) slider to emphasize it
01:14:812 (1,2) - This also feels really awkward to play intended "jerk" flow
03:25:674 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I understand you're trying to follow the song but this sounds awful... Maybe consider a remap of this section or a way to make it sound better through hitsounding fixed

Becareful with your streams, some of them have extremely high spacing, which reduce the overall quality of a map when used in abudance IMO
Some of them are also very sharp or double back on themselves (example: 03:27:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - and 03:31:364 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - )

This can really suck to play, Although some players love that kind of stuff xD

Remember players are human! We need to be able to read the maps!
I'm sure that most of 6 star players will able to handle that, but I'll find a workaround if more people bring this up

Also consider halving the NC on your streams, or breaking them up into 7-9 combos y'know for readability. will consider

Other than that, map looks good

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Hi. Random Tiiming Check

Keihatan timing sih agak pas tapi setelah gua periksa ada yang salah, bagian awal sampe akhir bener timingnya bener.
Tapi pas gua periksa di bagian terakhir gua rasa kok ada yang salah yah...

Jadi, yaudah gua periksa aja...

Alhasil...

[Sebelum]
05:04:758 - 44.37
05:15:349 - 177

[Sedudah]
05:04:758 - 111.125 ✓

Coba periksa lagi, bang/mba lagunya
Udah segitu aja
Makasih

Redemption wrote:

This is just my opinion, if you don't agree with it pls tell me kindly

02:21:418 (5,1) - After playing this like 100times i've come to the conclusion that one big, well formed Reverse Slider might fit better here even though there are 2 different tones. I changed it

03:38:018 (6) - Try to move this one just a little bit so it's between 03:37:949 (5) - and 03:38:088 (1) - even though it didn't make the stream harder to read or something just because it looked odd. (Other Examples: 00:21:172 (7,8) - and 01:03:964 (15,16,1) - ...) I see what you mean. Fixed

04:58:572 (8) - Maybe try to have the stream change direction here? (according to the lyrics) Just a personal favor :3 I'll keep it for now

04:41:962 (4,5) - I don't know why you did that I don't see anything wrong with it so...

00:54:643 - Maybe turn the volume down just a little bit but from 50% in the part before to 100% feels kinda strange maybe 80% so you can chnage it to 100% in the final stream part it's fine

02:42:675 (4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe try to map to the e-guitar like you did on the 3 Objects before and on the few after, just a personal favor again. remapped

00:18:206 - This pause fills kinda strange i know you're trying to make it fit to the lyrics but it felt strange remapped some of the part and increased spacing between pause

Pls be kind on my Mod i just want to help out If there are any misunderstandings feel free to pm me ingame.
Have a great day and good luck with your Map

1. 00:09:901 (5) - I'm not really good at making blanket but I'm pretty sure that it will look much sexy if like This? (My blanket was bad there lmao)
2. 00:14:477 (2) - overlap with 00:13:969 (1) - maybe your first slider should move to left and maybe reduce DS here for fix them right > 00:12:952 (8,9,10,11) - (especially 00:13:799 (11) - has uneven space between the prev. and next note.)
3. 00:21:257 (8) - I heard some symbal sound in 00:21:765 - consider to trim the slider and put note in 00:21:935 -
4. 00:46:172 (7) - need more curve to make blanket with next slider. Here's example :>
5. 01:00:066 (9) - Nc for even Stream count in previous notes
6. 01:12:270 (5) - maybe CTRL + G? The flow seems unnatural. Looks very sexy in 01:12:948 (7,8) - so yeah. I'm just suggestin'
7. 01:15:490 (3) - move it further. Spacing between prev: 0.47x and next: 3.18x is pretty bad imo
8. 01:41:422 (4) - move lower a bit for avoid stack/overlap with 01:40:744 (1) -
9. 02:06:503 (4) - Same here, some overlap things
10. 02:13:282 (4) - uhm... NC? And this slider structure is not recommended lol (you're pulling them by force just to make that shape)
11. 04:34:928 (1,2,3,4) - looks better if symmetrical
12. 04:59:843 (5,7) - overlap here
13. 05:02:047 (1) - it should look at the right for better flow with next stream (I can see that 05:02:894 (1) - did right)
14. 05:10:157 (6) - looks very creative, but I think it's better to blanket the 05:08:942 (5) - in head part so it looks more sexy Example here.

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

As you requested my crappy mod yay /o/

1. 00:09:901 (5) - I'm not really good at making blanket but I'm pretty sure that it will look much sexy if like This? (My blanket was bad there lmao) I will consider this
2. 00:14:477 (2) - overlap with 00:13:969 (1) - maybe your first slider should move to left and maybe reduce DS here for fix them right > 00:12:952 (8,9,10,11) - (especially 00:13:799 (11) - has uneven space between the prev. and next note.) moved 1 slightly to the left and adjusted spacing
3. 00:21:257 (8) - I heard some symbal sound in 00:21:765 - consider to trim the slider and put note in 00:21:935 - I don't think that will work, it's fine
4. 00:46:172 (7) - need more curve to make blanket with next slider. Here's example :> yes
5. 01:00:066 (9) - Nc for even Stream count in previous notes
6. 01:12:270 (5) - maybe CTRL + G? The flow seems unnatural. Looks very sexy in 01:12:948 (7,8) - so yeah. I'm just suggestin' I've been thinking this. Yes
7. 01:15:490 (3) - move it further. Spacing between prev: 0.47x and next: 3.18x is pretty bad imo spacing increased from 3.18x to 3.55x. It's fine
8. 01:41:422 (4) - move lower a bit for avoid stack/overlap with 01:40:744 (1) - yes
9. 02:06:503 (4) - Same here, some overlap things changed things
10. 02:13:282 (4) - uhm... NC? And this slider structure is not recommended lol (you're pulling them by force just to make that shape) intended. But oh well, fixed :^).
11. 04:34:928 (1,2,3,4) - looks better if symmetrical will consider changing it if this get mentioned again
12. 04:59:843 (5,7) - overlap here yes
13. 05:02:047 (1) - it should look at the right for better flow with next stream (I can see that 05:02:894 (1) - did right) intended flow
14. 05:10:157 (6) - looks very creative, but I think it's better to blanket the 05:08:942 (5) - in head part so it looks more sexy Example here.I followed your suggestions. how2slider

Goodluck /o/

1. add tag'Maximum Overload' so, album name.

1. please check Aimod! so, many unsnap note orz... please fix it.
2. 00:00:410 ~ 00:10:918 - white tick add whistle? nothing hitsound is sad x.x
3. 00:21:172 (7) - nothing sound. overmapped. please delete this! 25% speed listen please.
4. 00:47:867 (3,1) - close spacing.. so, try perfect stack. more easy read.
5. 01:15:490 (3) - very close spacing..
6. 03:00:848 (1) - add finish slider head.
7. 03:05:399 (4) - ^ slider head.
8. 03:06:020 (2,3,5,9) - ^
9. 04:59:843 (5,7) - make blanket here?

P o M u T a wrote:

#modreqs

[General]

1. add tag'Maximum Overload' so, album name. added

[Undefeatable]

1. please check Aimod! so, many unsnap note orz... please fix it. geez I didn't even realised. Fixed!
2. 00:00:410 ~ 00:10:918 - white tick add whistle? nothing hitsound is sad x.x whistle every white tick is is!
3. 00:21:172 (7) - nothing sound. overmapped. please delete this! 25% speed listen please. you're right. There's nothing to map at that time. Fixed
4. 00:47:867 (3,1) - close spacing.. so, try perfect stack. more easy read. looks good now
5. 01:15:490 (3) - very close spacing.. increased spacing for 01:14:812 (1,2,3,4) -
6. 03:00:848 (1) - add finish slider head. I'm terrible at hitsounding (fixed)
7. 03:05:399 (4) - ^ slider head. (fixed)
8. 03:06:020 (2,3,5,9) - ^ yes!
9. 04:59:843 (5,7) - make blanket here? nah it's fine

good luck!