1. EruJazz's Normal (1,97 stars, 98 notes)
2. Insane (3,15 stars, 139 notes)
3. Inyus' Easy (1,28 stars, 46 notes)
4. Railgun's Hard (2,77 stars, 132 notes)
5. Shiro's Hollow (3,78 stars, 154 notes)

1. As much as this contradicts the above. Notes like 00:10:474 (4) - don't really have a purpose in the song. They just feel like extras.
2. 00:31:343 (3) - If you're going to have 2/1 sections like 00:27:691 (1,2) - then you should keep it consistent. This should be removed if 00:29:256 - isn't mapped.
3. 00:42:821 (2,3) - Might as well just put a circle at 00:43:343 - to maintain the 2/1 rhythm you have going instead of changing it halfway through. It's literally the same as 00:39:169 (2) - However, due to density issues with the Normal. I would suggest using more 1/1 here instead of changing this into 2/1.

1. 00:09:952 (3,4) - this overlap isn't really appealing. I would personally just run the (4) off the end of (3)'s tail. It kind of also throws off the distancing. A player might assume the overlapping one is 1/4 while the gap is 1/2 as an example.
2. 00:26:648 (3) - end this 1/2 earlier so there's a proper gap. The vocals are more dominant on the downbeat anyways, as the next vocals are just lead-in.
3. 00:34:995 (4,5) - you really don't need to map 00:35:778 - In fact, why not remove (4) and move (5) back 1/2? I figure you want to map the clock noise. If not, then a 1/1 slider also works very well when starting where (4) is.
4. 00:46:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is confusing. You've been following the vocals the whole time, but here you change. Why not continue to follow the vocals? Simple as using the rhythm of 00:42:300 (1,2,3) -

1. 00:02:648 (1,2,3) - You should really use the approach circle to help create a nice blanket around these notes.
2. 00:13:343 (1,2) - are you sure? This is really exaggerated. A little jump wouldn't hurt, but I really don't see this big one fitting.
3. 00:21:169 (4,1) - Jump is too big. x320 y88 feels more appropriate for the (1)
4. 00:44:387 (1) - do like the rest of your sliders and move it out a bit. 00:09:952 (3,1) - for example.

1. 00:21:170 (8,1) - A bit overexaggerated. I personally think what you do with 00:23:257 (8,1) - would suit this as well. This will let your momentum go from slow -> medium -> fast instead of slow -> fast. 00:19:343 (1,2,3) - is another example of good build-up that you do.
2. 00:27:169 (7,8,1) - The momentum change from 7->8 and then 8->1 is a bit much. I would personally recommend about 3.5 DS from 8->1 or increase the spacing from 7->8 a little bit more.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

A petición de ErunamoJAZZ

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General

1. Such as weird names to set in the diffs. They are not, they make sense with the lyrics of the song.
2. Why do Erujazz's nomal and Inyus' easy end on a different point of the others? Will leave that to Erunamo and Ike
3. Why you set your diff as Code? Isn't the map yours? You don't need to put codes, I guess. I don't see any rule againts it.
4. EruJAZZ's normal has conflicts in the letterbox with the rest of the diffs. fixed.
5. Does this mapset has hitsounds? o.o I didn't notice them lol. yeah, and they're perfect
6. Neh! Everything is so well mapped here. That's why I don't have such as stuffs to complain.

CodeS Hard REM

GENERAL: Teach me how to make jumps. ;__; They are perfect!

1. 00:04:734 (5) NC? or just this is intentional. There is no need to add NC here
2. 00:09:952 (3,1) Shouldn't these slider be in the same place? or didn't you want to overlap them? Exactly
3. 00:28:213 (2,3,4,5,6,1) This "star" pattern doesn't look symmetric, because the DS between this 00:28:734 (3,4) and 00:29:256 (5,6) Isn't the same. Moved a bit
4. 00:36:039 (1,3) Fix the shape of these slider. They look weird. They don't for me
5. 00:45:691 (4,1) Why are they so close to each other? Even knowing the DS you manage in this part 00:45:169 (2,3,4) ? Moved

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Lanturn wrote:

[CodeS]

1. 00:02:648 (1,2,3) - You should really use the approach circle to help create a nice blanket around these notes. Moved a bit
2. 00:13:343 (1,2) - are you sure? This is really exaggerated. A little jump wouldn't hurt, but I really don't see this big one fitting. will wait for more feedback, this is low BPM low AR, I don't see any problem with giving it a bit more of challenge.
3. 00:21:169 (4,1) - Jump is too big. x320 y88 feels more appropriate for the (1) Nerfed to x3.20, to fit with the other.
4. 00:44:387 (1) - do like the rest of your sliders and move it out a bit. 00:09:952 (3,1) - for example. Done!

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Good luck~

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[notice]

Shiro's Hollow

GENERAL: Neh. I don't find anything wrong. I'm a bad modder.

1. 00:17:256 (9) NC? or this is just intentional?
2. 00:18:821 (14) ^

While you're right in thinking it's inconsistent (it is), those combos are purposely long to go with the long sentence in the vocals !

Lanturn wrote:

[Shiro]
pretty cool. huh, thanks

1. 00:21:170 (8,1) - A bit overexaggerated. I personally think what you do with 00:23:257 (8,1) - would suit this as well. This will let your momentum go from slow -> medium -> fast instead of slow -> fast. 00:19:343 (1,2,3) - is another example of good build-up that you do.
   This is actually a very good point. I changed it to make this jump smaller.
2. 00:27:169 (7,8,1) - The momentum change from 7->8 and then 8->1 is a bit much. I would personally recommend about 3.5 DS from 8->1 or increase the spacing from 7->8 a little bit more. Made both 3.0ish spacing

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HappyRocket88 wrote:

General

1. Why do Erujazz's nomal and Inyus' easy end on a different point of the others? lol fixed. Now as Inyus nap.

EruJazz' Light Normal

1. 00:33:952 (1,2,3,4,5) This doesn't look so blanket and symmetric. the space between 00:33:952 (1) and 00:34:474 (2) doesn't look as the rest. Without mention that you don't manage the same DS in this part. nahh, i dont want this... will be too close.
2. 00:42:300 (1,3) Couldn't you use the same shape in the slider for this patter? the flow is better like is now :/

Lanturn wrote:

small quick mod.
Compared to the Easy, Normal is really dense. You'll need to remove some stuff in Normal, or add a new diff between these.
Im not agree. If you see the spread gap, normal is fine, Hard maybe will be more easily, but the normal dont have problem.

http://www.wolframalpha.com/input/?i=%281.25,2.03,3.2,3.78%29

I did the normal in this way precisely in order to adjust mapset spread!
Compared to the hard level, this is far too. Honestly I think it's fine. Although I do not see where simplify things without ruining the spread



[EruJazz]

1. 00:09:952 (3,4) - this overlap isn't really appealing. I would personally just run the (4) off the end of (3)'s tail. It kind of also throws off the distancing. A player might assume the overlapping one is 1/4 while the gap is 1/2 as an example. Okay, bc i dont overlap in 00:45:431 (3,4) - , i fix it.
2. 00:26:648 (3) - end this 1/2 earlier so there's a proper gap. The vocals are more dominant on the downbeat anyways, as the next vocals are just lead-in. The slider tick in 00:27:169 - support the voice, and i want to make more intence in 00:27:691 - , so, not changed.
3. 00:34:995 (4,5) - you really don't need to map 00:35:778 - In fact, why not remove (4) and move (5) back 1/2? I figure you want to map the clock noise. If not, then a 1/1 slider also works very well when starting where (4) is. Not changed. Im following the bells
4. 00:46:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is confusing. You've been following the vocals the whole time, but here you change. Why not continue to follow the vocals? Simple as using the rhythm of 00:42:300 (1,2,3) - it was bc i copy the rhythm from 00:10:995 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - xDD, fixed... i think...

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Inyus' Easy Nap

GENERAL: Everything is blanket. The flow is perfect. Good job. as always

1. 00:13:082 (3) Put this slider here x=264 | y=72to keep the lineal following points in this pattern 00:10:995 (1,2,3) Current line is straight enough imo, I prefer to leave this note more to the center.
2. 00:19:343 (1,3) I'd say that you can use the same shape for these two sliders. Why so? There is more variety and the flow is better like this actually.
3. 00:23:517 (1) Shouldn't this circle be exactly on the head of this slider 00:19:343 (1)? Which means here x=256 | y=92 Yep.
4. 00:50:648 (3,4) I don't know why Aimod suggests to fix the DS of this objects. lol Me neither, they should be fine.
5. 00:51:691 (1) Why this spinner doesn't end in a white tick? Rip 10k in spinner. Maybe because it finishes where should do it? There's no music at white tick.

Lanturn wrote:

small quick mod.
Compared to the Easy, Normal is really dense. You'll need to remove some stuff in Normal, or add a new diff between these.

[Inyus]

1. As much as this contradicts the above. Notes like 00:10:474 (4) - don't really have a purpose in the song. They just feel like extras. Hm, honestly I don't feel like that... Rhythms are fine for Easy, I just saw Eru's diff and maybe you're right and the mapper should add another diff between them, Eru's diff looks more like Advanced.
2. 00:31:343 (3) - If you're going to have 2/1 sections like 00:27:691 (1,2) - then you should keep it consistent. This should be removed if 00:29:256 - isn't mapped. I prefer to keep it, 00:27:691 (1) - this was to "emphasize" the sound you can listen there (idk how to call it), then I can follow vocals normally afterwards.
3. 00:42:821 (2,3) - Might as well just put a circle at 00:43:343 - to maintain the 2/1 rhythm you have going instead of changing it halfway through. It's literally the same as 00:39:169 (2) - However, due to density issues with the Normal. I would suggest using more 1/1 here instead of changing this into 2/1. I don't get this ;_;

CSLM wrote:

hi, random mod

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

1. ok, primero que nada, la metadata esta mal:
   
   Ese es el album desde la pagina original
   Como puedes ver, el artista no es Yura Hatsuki, sino Roses Epicurean (Roses Epicurean no Epicurian, no se que paso ahi lol..) asi que deberias quitar el source y colocarlo como artista
   ademas, segun una imagen fisica del album:
   
   el septimo track (el de la cancion) da un titulo romanizado.
   entonces, la metadata seria:
   Artist: Roses Epicurean
   Romanized Artist: Roses Epicurean
   Title: Yoru no Kodomo tachi => viewtopic.php?p=1475438#p1475438
   Romanized Title: 夜の子供たち
   para mas info, ve este post: viewtopic.php?p=4065610#p4065610
2. hay 2 archivos .osb:
   
3. desactiva en todas las diffs el "Letterbox in Breaks" no hay breaks en ninguna de las diffs

Done All

CodeS

1. 00:04:474 (4) - borra esta nota, la siento innecesaria y sigue mas la vocal No, tiene base
2. 00:09:952 (3) - solo sugiero, pero porque no stackeas este slider con 00:09:169 (6) - y 00:08:908 (5) - ? Nope, estaba asi antes, era confuso
3. 00:30:300 (2) - stack con 00:28:995 (4) - ? Nope, no me gusta el flow
4. 00:36:039 (1) - mmm, este slider lo hiciste a proposito? deberias bajar el primer punto un poco, asi parece mas simetrico y pulido (claro si no lo hiciste a proposito) A proposito
5. 00:37:082 (3) - ^
6. 00:47:256 (4,5) - mejora el blanket Hecho

[/notice]

very nice mapset
GL with rank
choo choo~

CSLM wrote:

Eru

1. 00:10:474 (4) - no se si sea buena idea dejarlo de esta manera, este pattern lo he visto solo en hards lol... que te parece un pattern asi: http://puu.sh/iMi4A/1af818c3a0.jpg es mas simple y apropiado para un normal imo Gracias, pero no es lo que qusiera para esta parte.
   00:16:213 (4,5) - deberias mover (5) hacia x196 y340 o cercano, mejora el flow ya que como esta ahora es muy feo y recto imo ok, changed.

1. I noticed there's no Hard difficulty to bridge the Insane(s) and the easier difficulties. >< You may want to map one.
2. There's a section of the song that I think sound be kiai'd. It starts at 00:19:343 - and ends at 00:34:995 -

1. 00:27:169 (5,2) - It feels like an uneven blanket between the notes despite them being far apart in the song.
2. 00:29:256 - Missing note?

1. I think this would be more proper as a Hard instead of just Advanced. ><

1. 00:13:343 (1,2) - This jump looks too far that it feels really out of place. ><
2. 00:39:169 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't look right to me. :s Maybe have the notes curve towards the slider? Like a rough example:
   
   Example~

   

Victorica wrote:

[Shiro's Hollow]
This difficulty is amazingly mapped! >< I couldn't find anything to suggest or any parts that feels off~ ^^

Victorica wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue~ ^^

[Notes]

1. I noticed there's no Hard difficulty to bridge the Insane(s) and the easier difficulties. >< You may want to map one. I don't see the need, the spread is fine, I might have to nerf my insane a bit yeah, but the gap between the normal and easy is as big as the normal and insane and insane and Shiro's
2. There's a section of the song that I think sound be kiai'd. It starts at 00:19:343 - and ends at 00:34:995 - We are using the SB to put emphasis in the "intense" parts, no need for Kiais.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:343 (1,2) - This jump looks too far that it feels really out of place. >< Nerfed
2. 00:39:169 (1,2,3,4) - This part doesn't look right to me. :s Maybe have the notes curve towards the slider? Like a rough example:
   
   Example~

   
   Fixed

That's all I could suggest. xD Other than that, this is a pretty map. :3


I hoped my mod helped! >< I'm a bit inexperienced with modding so I may have missed some stuff!