Blazevoir wrote:

Nah, don't PM me. I was gonna do a recheck anyway

[General]
I guess those star sliders can stay for now. Lol yea, but if a lot of people disagree with them I guess they'll hafta go :S

[Traveler]
Fine~

[Hero]
00:59:397 (1,2) - Maybe make these into a slider? I think I'll keep this (since it's surrounded by so many sliders)
01:06:303 (2,3) - ^ I think there's more emphasis if it's single circles, so kept for now
01:07:166 (4,5) - ^]

[Legend]
Fine~

[Legendary Hero]
Also fine~

★ for you~

Powerdrone311 wrote:

Traveler:

00:35:224 (1) - I'd say round this slider out a little. It won't affect any spacing and it'll look nicer. =P Lol okay, I tried XD (silly sliders so short ...)
01:08:030 (5,6) - Personally, I don't know if I'd stack these... I think I'll keep this for "emphasis"
01:20:979 (3) - I believe it was mentioned that this slider overlaps and stuff... it /should/ be okay to leave it I think, it's not hard to read. Yayyy lol

Hero:

00:16:663 (6,7,8) - This feels tricky... Fine to leave it how it is but just pointing it out to you. ^_^ Yea I think I'll leave it, it feels fine to me :S
00:42:130 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - These are all too close together. Either that or the slow down is doing weird things to me. Because they're so close together I kept hitting them early and couldn't get the knack of it while playing. You might want to move them a little farther apart, just a smidge. Okay, the sliders one beat apart have their white ends overlapping slightly, (1 - 3) are approx. one grid away

Legend:

00:22:922 (4) - The spacing here is VERY off. Moved left and up a bit. Should be the same distance between (1, 2) now (I hope ...)

Try and fix the star. It seems a little misshapen in regards to the left "arm". The distance between the start and end point is farther than the other diffs. Attempted to make it look prettier


Legendary Hero:

Let me just say... the opening for this diff is AMAZING! <3 Lol, thanks XD

The only thing I noticed is that the start and end point of the star are closer in this diff than in the others. I /think/ moving the right "leg" a little over will fix it. Moved it over a grid


And about your other map. I starred it, but didn't really find anything helpful to give you for a mod. Glad it got ranked! Aweh, that's so nice, thanks! *tear*

STAR!

_llkey_18 wrote:

hii lets start ^^ ( its just sugguestion feel free to ignore it ^^)

Traveler
01:01:123 - shorten one tick , let finish on 01:01:986 and add note 01:02:418 ? for me its better Agreed, changed
01:04:576 - add whistle same as 01:02:850 1,2? I purposely left the whistle out here so it'll sound "softer"
other thing fine ^^

Hero
00:00:692 - add finish I think finish sounds too heavy here ... I'll add whistle instead
00:02:418 - ^
00:49:037 - ^ ( sounds better with the "bum" ) It does sound good here ... but I feel there's too much finish in this area already D: So kept :S
00:50:763 - ^
01:04:576 - 4 - finish there 01:05:440 I think what I have now feels better ... it's the same timing as before (1, 2) and if I extended the slider the repeat wouldn't land on the "bou" word :S
other thing fine ^^

Legend
00:21:735 - add clap? Okay, done
fine ^^

Legendary Hero
00:04:145 - add whistle Done, don't know why this wasn't here already XD
00:05:008 - ^
00:05:871 - finish Added
00:27:670 - add note? stack with 3 Don't think this really fits here :S
good ^^

OH-SHI- wrote:

For now.

Legendary Hero:
- 00:02:850 - Here's what I suggest. Okay done, but moved the combos around a bit to fix spacing

SPOILER

I opened AImod and I "corrected" the note placements, I'm sure the distance you put previously were on purpose but I think this is more intuitive than sudden note patterns.
- 00:33:929 - Another suggestion. I think I'll keep this one, because if I change it I'd have to mess with spacing with (1) and it wouldn't look as nice, IMO :S

SPOILER

-00:34:792 - You can choose not to follow these or not. Yea I think it looks better with what I have now

SPOILER

- 00:35:979 - I strongly suggest this one. It gives the map better flow since the notes follow through better with the music and end more appropriately than at the previous section, which does so quite suddenly imo. Ehrm, did you forget to link a picture here? Do you want me to add a note here? I'll leave this until I know for sure what you're suggesting :S
- 00:36:950 - Her voice pauses a for a small while at that part, I think it would the overall feel of the map would be better if you made a few adjustments to the spacing here, or at similar parts. Okay done, just hope nobody will chew me out for ZOMG WTF SPACING lol

SPOILER

- 00:42:562 - Flows better with the half-speed. Okay, except I put (4) between (3) and (5), not stacked

SPOILER

- 00:43:425 - I suggest this. Done

SPOILER

- 00:44:504 - And this. I think this one is fine, so I'll leave this

SPOILER

- 00:46:555 - And again. Here's what I think it should look much better as. Spaced it out more

SPOILER

As for the rest of the map, Try applying the same distance consistency throughout. It will help a lot with the flow.
I will mod the rest soon.

choche wrote:

Hi! I'm going to start with the mod

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Nice map

[Traveler]

00:39:756 - This break is too short (delete it) Okay, done

No problems, nice difficult.

[Hero]

00:40:188 - Remove this break (It's too short) Sure thing
00:46:447 (2) - Start this slider on the previous red tick (?)
01:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe order those like this (?)[/color] Ehrm I can't really find the difference between your screenshot and what I have now X_X

[Legend]

00:40:188 - Delete this break. Done
No more problems.

[Legendary Hero]

00:40:188 - Delete this break. Lalalalala
No more problems.

Good luck with this beatmap, is very nice ^^

*star*

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
The video is too big, try to reduce it's bitrate, also why are there black letterboxes on all 4 sides? I don't know, the video just is like that I guess :S The video is under 20MB so it's OK right? O_O

[General]
The video is causing lag, and videos have never lagged me before o.o Eh, really? It's fine for me ... O_O

[Legendary Hero]
Considering you have 4 difficulties i was expecting this to be an Insane, however it felt too easy for an Insane, in fact, it felt like a Normal. Ah ... I'm sorry about this, personally I find this difficulty quite hard (but I'm not a pro player or anything lol) (actually I can't even pass this difficulty :S) - I'm better at making easy / normal difficulties IMO, so if you have any suggestions I'll take a look at them ^_^

[Legend]
00:23:785 (6) - Mapping to silence? Ehrm, I don't quite know what you mean here :S
00:42:130 (2,3) - Spacing Moved up one grid

[Hero]
00:23:569 (5,6) - Mapping to silence? Yea I don't really know what you mean D:

[Traveler]
Fine

Ionno, but this feels like a ENNN diff spread to me so... yeah, no star yet

Leorda wrote:

Hi hi

[General]
Your bg (dyd_toplogo1.png) need to resize to 800x600 or find another bg (current 500x350) Like I said, I would happily do this except I can't find another image that size :S

[Traveler]
00:19:684 (3,4) - Spacing error Moved one grid right
00:39:864 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Done
00:45:584 (6) - New combo, very long for easy diff Okay, changed
00:49:900 (2,3) - Spacing error I think this is fine ... do you think it's too close or too far?
00:55:943 (2,3) - ^[/color] I used distance snap for these so it should be OK ...

[Hero]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern? It's seems not like a triangle That's because it's not supposed to be a triangle, lol
00:40:188 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Done

[Legend]
00:24:217 (7) - New combo? I think it's fine like this, kept
00:40:296 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Yes
01:16:663 (1) - Make symetric? Okay, done
01:17:526 (2) - ^

[Legendary Hero]
00:06:303 (1) - Finish? Added
00:40:404 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Done

Nice song
STAR

DiamondCrash wrote:

Traveler;

Should be called "Traveller". Fixed
01:20:979 (3) - Make this a linear slider. I think it looks better as Catmull, personally :S Leave it for now, but if more people say so then I'll change it

Hero;

01:06:950 (?) - Note here? I think it's OK like this
01:20:979 (4) - Make this a linear slider.

Legend;

00:23:785 (6) - What is this supposed to be following? It's helping the line flow better, much like (3) in the two previous combos. Otherwise there'd be a random gap between (5) and (7). I felt here it's better to place this on a half beat not the white line
01:20:979 (6) - Make this a linear slider.

Legendary Hero;

00:57:670 (8) - 1/4 earlier, extend by 1/4? Hmm, the "wo" does kind of come in between the blue and white line, but I'll keep this for now
01:11:483 (6) - ^ Yes here, done
01:20:979 (6) - You know the drill I think this is fine as well

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
500*350 a BG is a little poor man... find a 800*600 or 1024*768 one, or at least a 640*480 one? Derp! Trying, but seriously, there's like NOTHING for this show T_T
better to switch combo color 3 and 4 since from 4 to 1 the color is similar (especially in kiai) Made 1 a shade darker, I think it's OK ... D:
when you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add whistle on every beats plz. (ignore this if you add them in purpose, but i guess not XD) Lol, thanks, that'll save me time haha. Sometimes I only want it on beginning / end / middle though, so yea
you'll be blamed for the file size of video, though i like it for its quality XD Took me forever to get it under 20MB ... it was at like 70MB for the longest time D:
emmm... and, ANSWER TO THE MAPPER:NO. if you want more ticks during 0.5x pattern you have to have more ticks at 1x too... Aweh ... well then, I suppose nothing can be done about this :S

[Traveller]
00:00:692 (1,2,4) - whistle? Added
00:15:368 (2,3) - whistle at the end and remove (5)'s whistle. Okay, and I'm assuming you mean (4) right?
00:17:958 (1) - whistle
00:25:727 (1) - the volume increase too much here (i'd like it to be about 80, not 100) this problem appears in all diffs. Fixed
00:29:181 (2) - whistle at the end. Done
00:38:677 (4,5) - better to whistle at 4's end instead of 5's. I added to the beginning of (4), but kept the one on (5)
00:42:130 (2) - whistle at the start Okay
00:43:857 (3) - remove slider whistle, and make the hitsounds: normal-whistle-normal. Done, but do you want this for (3, 4) or (3) only? I made it (3, 4) for now, but if this isn't what you meant, tell me please
01:02:850 (1) - remove sliderwhistle. Removed
01:04:576 (3) - whistle at the reverse. Okay, done
01:14:936 (4) - remove slierwhistle. Fixed
01:20:979 (3) - whistle at the start. Done
emm... just use this diff as a hitsound sample since i can't find something wrong XD, and the reason i won't upload a [Traveller hitsounds] is i guess you'd like to change it yourself...won't point much in other diffs... anyway try to avoid meaningless sliderwhistles = = Lol okay ... I like whistles

[Hero]
00:29:181 (3) - remove sliderwhistle, remove whistle at the last beat, and add whistle at 6. Done
00:45:584 (1,2) - why not repeat once to follow the vocal exactly? don't worry it will be a little harder. better than it sounds strange Haha true, fixed
00:54:217 (5) - new combo to make these two beats more obvious? (or say powerful..? sorry for my poor english), and other diffs too...forget to say this when modding [Traveller] I think it's okay like this, so kept for now

[Legend]
what happened to the spacing... It died. I killed it
00:21:735 (2,3,4,5) - TBH i can't read that correctly. Fixed, hopefully
00:37:598 (2,3,4,5) - same. the difference between 3/4 and 1/2 is too small. Okay, made spacing for 3/4 2 grids away instead of only 1
00:42:130 (2) - new combo to imply a 0.5x's start. Well it's like this in all the other difficulties so I'll keep this
01:04:576 (2) - whistle at the reverse. Okay, done
01:08:030 (4) - new combo? I think I'll leave this too
01:20:979 (6) - whistle at the start. Added

[Legendary Hero]
not Heroes..? (according to the title in the BG?) I think Hero is fine, since Heroes is plural it just doesn't sound as good to me IMO :S
01:08:030 (8) - new combo? Keeping this as well :S
01:19:684 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing probelem, 2-3 =!= 3-4 Yea, sometimes the stupid grid doesn't make shapes nicely lol. Fixed w/o grid snap
01:20:979 (6) - whistle at the start XD Done

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Traveller]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Finish ? Too much finish IMO ... I'll leave it (especially since (1) of next combo has finish too)
00:34:361 (5) - Remove clap at end and add clap at begin Okay
00:35:224 (1) - Extand by 1/4 I think these are OK as it is
00:36:950 (1) - ^


[Hero]
00:17:094 (8) - Remove clap and add whistle ? Don't know why I used clap here actually ... fixed
00:20:548 (7) - Add whistle ? Done
00:22:274 (2) - Remove whistle I like the whistle here so keeping it
00:22:598 (3) - Add whistle Okay, worrying about whistle overload haha but I think it's fine
00:24:001 (6) - Add finish ? Don't think this really fits here
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:584 (1) - Extand by 1/4 They repeat now so it sounds better
00:46:447 (2) - ^
01:06:950 (x) - Add note ? I think it's OK like this as well ...

[Legend]
00:04:145 (1) - Whistle at end Okay, added
00:05:008 (2) - ^
00:21:735 (2) - Move 1/4 later and reduce by 1/4, remove clap at begin and ad whistle Kept timing but changed clap to whistle
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Add finish ?

[Legendary Hero]
00:06:303 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4 ? Okay, done

Fine, Star~

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Traveller:
00:16:879 (4) - Slightly too far from previous object, move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
00:17:958 (1) - Too close to previous object. Whoops, wasn't lined up with (2), moved one grid left
00:18:821 (2) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) right so that it lines up with (1). Fixed by above movement
00:20:332 (4) - Slightly too far from previous object, move it one grid (lvl 3) down. Done
00:21:411 (1) - Ugly slider shape. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18265 Fixed, thanks
00:22:274 (2) - Slightly too far from previous object. Move it one grid (lvl 3) right. Okay
00:22:706 (3) - ^[/color]
00:23:138 (4) - Too far from previous object. (4) moved right to fix both this and the one under
00:24:217 (5) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) left.
00:30:044 (3) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) down and left.
00:31:339 (5) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.[/color] This one seems fine to me
00:36:087 (2) - ^ Okay, fixed
00:37:814 (2) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
Recheck all your map using distance snapping, there are a lot of small spacing errors and a few important.
01:20:979 (3) - Use Linear slider curve type for this one. (select it, Compose > Slider Curve Type > Linear): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18267[/color] I think it looks better with catmull, so I'm going to leave these :S

Hero:
00:02:418 (2) - Move it slightly to the left so that its end stacks perfectly with (1)'s end.
00:04:145 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) up and left.
00:05:871 (5) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) up and right.[/color] Fixed I think
Recheck all the map using distance snapping. I used it mostly for the smaller time intervals, but for the larger ones I moved it closer so it's semi - used throughout
00:16:663 (6,7,8) - Stack those.
01:20:979 (4) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.[/color]

Legend:
00:23:138 (5) - Too far from previous object.
00:38:677 (5) - ^[/color] Moved one grid right as well
01:20:979 (6) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.

Lengendary Hero:
01:20:979 (6) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.

Mianki wrote:

Couldn't find anything
Star~

Eddotan wrote:

[Overall]
- try reduce size of video file. i suggest you encode it with avi(xvid: 971kbps) Okay, will do soon (after I find some tech help *cough* Google *cough*
- uncheck the "letterbox during breaks" and "enable countdown" Done

[Traveller]
- 00:35:224 (1) - you can align this slider better Okay, I tried
- 00:36:950 (1) - ^ Slider end moved one grid up
- 00:57:670 (4) - ^

[Hero]
All Fine

[Legend]
All Fine, well mapped.

[Legendary Hero]
- 00:39:540 (8) - Extend the slider to next white tick (00:40:404) Done
- 00:48:821 (1) - i think this slider is too short, you can put there two circles instead Okay, fixed
- 00:50:548 (1) - ^

nice map~ i didnt see any major errors on this map

• - Decide to put Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu either The Legend of the Legendary Heroes for the source, and put the other one to tags
  - Should the BG color be white?

• - Correct lead-in seconds to 1500 in .osu file.

• 00:22:274 (2) - remove whistle
  01:06:950 - add a note here?
  
  
  Legend
  [list:15705]- OAD+1

• - spacing changes are confusing imo D: others are fine

Sekuyi wrote:

Heyho, some mods:

[Traveller]
Everything fine!

[Hero]
- 01:06:950 ~ add a note here? Originally I was going to leave it, but since you're the third person to suggest this, added
-- 01:07:490 ~ (6) clap here Okay
-- 01:07:814 ~ (7) remove clap Done

[Legend]
- 00:02:418 ~ new combo? Okay, changed

[Legendary Hero]
Everything fine!


No major erros in your maps. Get them ranked *

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Traveller]
00:42:130 (2) - Using 0.5x(2x) BPM in Easy..it's just..bad,you know.Bad for ranking criteria.So,it's up to you.But be warned that BATs may ask you to remove this stuff. Ah, really? Okay, I'll think about this ... but wouldn't it be weird NOT to have this here but in all the other difficulties?

[Hero]
00:02:418 (2) - Maybe allign with (1)? It IS aligned, I think ... I flipped copypasted (1) and flipped it :O

It's almost perfect.Good job,star~

Pokie wrote:

General

• - Decide to put Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu either The Legend of the Legendary Heroes for the source, and put the other one to tags Done
  - Should the BG color be white? Okay sure, changed

Traveller

• - Correct lead-in seconds to 1500 in .osu file. Fixed

00:19:684 (3,4) - move it like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18430 Changed ... I think
00:39:540 ~ 00:41:699 - insert a break time here? There was one originally, but a few other modders told me it was "too short", so I removed it
01:20:979 (3) - D: I'm not sure is it rankable for a 2.5 bar length slider ;_; ...maybe use a spinner instead? I'm HOPING it's okay ... maybe I'll go ask a BAT :S


Hero

• 00:22:274 (2) - remove whistle D: I like the whistle here
  01:06:950 - add a note here? Added XD
  
  
  Legend
  [list:a35c0]- OAD+1 Done

00:42:130 (1) - new combo? I think I'll leave this


Legendary Hero

• - spacing changes are confusing imo D: others are fine Do you mean during the slow section? I'll take another look at that

Vass_Bass wrote:

hi~
It's too short and small mod =) Lol, don't worry about it XD
Traveller
00:44:720 (4,5) - 1 grid down I think it aligns better as it as well ... so leaving this too
Hero
00:54:217 (5,6) - 1 grid up This was purposefully done like this, so leaving it
Legendary Hero
00:33:497 (5,6) - 2 grid up Done
nice map, star

EvianBubble wrote:

QUESTION TO MODDERS: For the slow section (0.5 inherited), is there a way to increase slider tick rate? I think it only does a tick every 2 beats instead of every 1 ... can I change this?

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Traveller:
00:17:958 (1) - Move three grids (lvl 3) left.
00:19:684 (3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) up. This seems OK to me
00:22:706 (3) - Move one grid (lvl 3) right. Kept this but ...
00:23:138 (4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down and right. Might have to move it a little more if you fixed ^. ... changed this
00:24:217 (5) - Move one grid (lvl 3) right. Done as well
00:24:864 (6) - ^
00:30:044 (3) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down. Okay
01:20:979 (3) - Move the end point four grids (lvl 3) up and one left so that the star is perfectly symmetrical (you'll have to use a storyboarded arrow to tell which way the slider's going to though). And make it linear ç_ç[/color] Oh snap, I think I'll just leave this ... I have NO experience with storyboarding whatsoever X_X

Hero:
^

Legend:
^

Legendary Hero:
^

That's a lot better than when I modded it first ! Star.

Kecco wrote:

Hello.
I'm a bit worried about the timing. Ask someone who is good in those stuff. Done, PMed someone

•Insane•
The beginning is eggpain-like! Is this a good or a bad thing? XD
00:16:728 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid up? O_O? I don't have that number or timing in my map ... perhaps you typed the wrong thing? :S

I can keep to modding it, the timing's issues are A LOT, you should ask Lybydose or ask in #modHelp to find a better timing.
When you get it, PM me and I'll remod this map.

I give you star.

Garven wrote:

EvianBubble wrote:

QUESTION TO MODDERS: For the slow section (0.5 inherited), is there a way to increase slider tick rate? I think it only does a tick every 2 beats instead of every 1 ... can I change this?

Nope. Darn. Well, thanks for answering :S

As per your request:

[General]
You have soft whistles on sliderslides that I really don't like the sound of. Others may, but I don't. I'd remove them, but I'll just leave this note and move on. I'll keep an ear out for them ...

[Traveller]
Just at first glance, all I see is a break right at the beginning. :/ Ah well ... not quite sure what else I could do here, and there probably should be a break in a song, right?
00:42:130 (2) - I don't like seeing .5 sections in easy modes, tbh Yea, I PMed Alace about this, I've got it covered (hopefully) XD
There are some semi-complex rhythms in here... but it's not bad enough to complain, really. This is my pro mapping skillz at work. Ahahahaha (... thanks?)

[Hero]
Yeah, I'm not liking that beginning break. :S
In general, fine, though I still don't like the .5 section in this one too. Just makes it feel really cramped and kind of boring to play. :(

[Legend]
00:28:102 (1,2) - Doesn't look very good. :/ Maybe do them in a straight line, curve the slider? Well it's a diagonal straight line, and I WOULD curve the slider but it's kind of short to be curved, IMO

[Legendary Hero] Running out of diff names? Though I guess when the subtext is the Legend of the Legendary Heroes... Shhhh, don't spill all my secrets! D:
00:06:195 (1) - Holy crap, a spinner! Woo! Inorite!? I was debating this actually, but I figured ... well, why not? XD
Nothing terrible, but nothing that stands out to me.

I guess, for the most part, I just really don't like the .5 sections in any of these diffs. It just kills the pace. Maybe I should have thought it through a bit more :S It just sounded like a slow section to me, is all

Garven wrote:

Maybe increase the distance snap a little bit for the .5 sections instead of just letting it do half? Ah well, they were just my thoughts on it anyway, hehe. No need to follow unless you actually agree with me (for some odd reason ).

aesopl19193 wrote:

[General]
Delete the .osb file and full-upload , since you don't need it Oh right, thanks

[Legendary Hero]
00:14:936 (4) - too close (compare with (1,2,3) ) Moved one grid down
00:15:368 (5,6,7) - ^ Moved one grid right
00:35:548 (2) - move to 00:35:656 to fit the vocal? It's on the vocal now, it's on "no" I think
00:42:130 (3) - add finish..? I don't think it really fits here :S
01:04:576 (7) - new combo I don't think this combo is too long, so I'll leave it

Other diff seem fine.
star

In my view , you should make some creation into your rhythm.
It is quite boring if you just follow the vocal.

roflninja wrote:

hi,

[hero]
00:02:418 (2) - stack the end with the end of (1) a bit better? I tried, but you know how the ends of slider don't really fit on the grid so ... not much to be done here unfortunately :S

only that one suggestion, awsome map

animelover1432 wrote:

here's my mod...

?=suggestion

Traveler:
00:21:411 (1): move a little further from 00:20:332 (4) ? Moved the beginning slider point one down and one right
00:24:217 (5): one grid down so it aligns with (4) Well (4 - 6) all supposed to all go up one grid, so I'm leaving it
00:33:497 (4): ^ Ehm ... I think the spacing here is fine O_O
00:34:361: if you do ^ move other notes so they still fit
00:44:720 (4,5,1): move one grid up Done, moved (2, 3) as well so spacing isn't weird
00:55:943 (2): add another repeat? Don't think this fits, IMO
01:08:893: add a note here with finish sound? (6) already has finish ... I think this would be overdoing it :S
01:09:756 (2): align with (1)? I think this is OK


Hero:
00:02:418 (2):redo this slider so its aligned with (1)? I flipped (1), so it should be aligned
01:08:030 (8):stack under (7)? This is just me but I'm not a big fan of stacking notes and sliders, so I'm keeping it


Legend:
00:06:303: add a spinner lasting until 00:07:166? There's one in Legendary Hero ... okay that's not a good reason, but no :S
00:40:404: add a spinner lasting until 00:41:699 and delete the slider? This is supposed to be sort of a mini break, since it's too short for an actual one, so I want this here
00:54:217 (7,8): move 1 grids to the left? I feel this part should be "messy" so I'll keep it

legendary Hero
00:14:936 (4):align with the last slider? Actually I find it looks better like this, (3) is kind of curving and pointing towards (4), so I think it'd feel better
00:16:231 (8): align with the last circle? (5 - 7) are already in a straight line ... I don't want it to feel too "fixed" (left right, up down, etc.)
00:18:389: add a note? Uhm, there already IS a note here O_O
00:18:605: spacing? There's er ... nothing here?
00:20:332 (9,10): i think this would look better stacked with the last slider Yea, this is just me again with my stacking slider / note thing :S
00:41:699 (1): move so its above 2? This is me again not wanting it to be "fixed"
00:48:821 (1,2,3): 1 grid to the left? Okay, done
00:50:332 (6): i find this note very hard to see, change it into a slider lasting from 00:49:900-00:50:332 I think it's OK ... this is supposedly an "insane" anyway (another bad excuse ... what's wrong with me?!) but if too many other people are against it then I'll change it I suppose

there's an OSB file, but there's no storyboard, so delete that and full submit (I think) Done

great map ^.^
*star*

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~here's the mod!
They're just my opinions, so feel free to take some or ignore them~
Now let's go!

General:

SPOILER

1.Set a preview point: timing->set current position as preview point O_O I thought I did already, but did again just to make sure
2.You may not always use the same pattern at every diffs, such as 01:20:979(3). Other than that, all diffs are still too similar. Try to be more creative. Okay, I will look to expand my horisons! *shot* I like the slider, but will try to change the patterns and such
3.Try to add at least 1 spinner at each diff. O_O I'm not a big fan of spinners, is all. I don't really think there's a place to put it either ... I guess that's just me, though

Traveller

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I find you using different distance snap (like 0.8x and 0.9x). Since it's an Easy, You'd better keep one distance snap and move all the notes to the correct place. Er, well I may have changed it for smaller vs. larger time intervals, because otherwise I thought it was too cluttered, but I'll take note of this, thanks
And as an easy diff, I strongly suggest you not to follow the song lyrics. NOT to follow the lyrics?! O_O Uh, okay then ...
00:00:692(1) remove whistle and add finish This is just me again, but I don't like overusing finishes. I feel whistle is better here
00:02:418(2) remove whistle Okay
00:04:145(3) add whistle Added
00:16:879(4) I suggest you to remove this short slider then add a note at 00:17:094, since you just don't follow the song lyrics in other places(and as an Easy, you may not have so many 1/2 notes. The point is, I feel you just using a standard Easy-style in some place, which don't focus on the song lyrics, but then you change to another style which focus on song lyrics. I think you'd better just keep the style consistent). Then you may add clap on that note. I kind of get what you're trying to say, but I think just a note here wouldn't fit as well. I think the slider is better here
00:20:332(4) ^
00:21:411(1) shorten this slider to 00:21:843 I'm going to keep this but ...
00:24:217(5) move the note to 00:24:433 ... I'll do this
00:24:864(6) lengthen this slider to 00:25:296 I don't like this :S
00:29:181(2) same as 00:21:411
00:30:692(4) move this to 00:30:476 then lengthen to 00:30:907 This doesn't really fit with me either
00:35:224(1) lengthen this to 00:35:656 Okay
00:36:950(1) ^
00:39:325(5) remove this slider, then add a reverse at 00:38:677(4) Ehrm, no :S
00:44:720(4) remove this note then lengthen 00:43:857 so that the reverse at 00:44:289 and the end at 00:44:720, the remove the whistle. I think this is fine as well. 1/2 beats aren't going to kill. They're even overlapping O_O
00:49:900(2) remove the note then lengthen the shorten 00:49:037(1) to 00:49:468, then add a reverse on it. I think this is better, what you suggested isn't as interesting IMO
00:50:332(x) add note with clap I actually really like this idea and would add it in, but I want this part to be "calmer"
00:51:627(3) remove the note, then lengthen 00:50:763(2) to 00:51:627
00:52:058(x) add note with clap
00:55:943(2) lengthen this slider so that the reverse is at 00:56:375, the end is at 00:56:807 I don't really see a reason for this, it fits the words perfectly
01:03:713(2) same as 00:49:900(2)
01:05:440(2) ^
01:05:871(x) add note I don't think I need to, it doesn't "feel" good to me
01:09:756(2) same as 00:55:943(2)
01:19:253(x) add note?

This diff is meant as an easy, not a beginner one note every bar difficulty. 1/2 beats aren't that hard. I asked my bro, who has played Osu! pretty much twice before (also when playtesting for me, actually) and asked his opinion, and he said it was fine. Personally I think it's pretty easy as well, but each to their own, I suppose

Hero:

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I still find you using different distance snap. An easy or a normal should not use random spacing. You'd better keep one distance snap and move all the notes to the correct place. This might come as a shock, but I really don't like distance snap (okay, not that much of a shock). I only use it for more than one beat away. I do the shorter ones manually, because I feel I have greater control over what I'm doing. Again, just my personal preference
I still suggest you to keep a consistent style when adding notes. I do think if you want to follow the song lyrics, follow them from the beginning to the end. Otherwise it will be very strange when playing. I do think that I followed the lyrics pretty much all the way through ...
Other than that, this diff is much better.
00:00:692(1) add finish at the start Yea, I don't really like the start with finish, so ... :S
00:02:418(2) close grid snap then try to make the end stack perfectly with slider1's end. Okay, done ... or at least I tried >_<
00:04:145(3) add whistle Okay, added
00:05:008(4) ^

Legend:

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In my opinion, still too many random spacing, though it's a hard. I feel weird when playing. I strongly suggest you to use new combo to let people pay attention when changing the spacing. I actually think I'm pretty consistent ... I mean, even if it's werid, at least it's CONSISTENTLY weird, you know?
00:00:692(1) add finish at the start
00:17:850(x) add note? This is for "variety"
00:23:785(6) move this note to 00:23:569 It feels better on an offbeat here to me
00:24:217(7) new combo I don't think so, no
00:41:699(T) 0.5x bpm should start here Actually this feels like more of a pickup to the 0.5x to me ... but since timing is pretty important, if others think so as well I'll change it
00:41:699(1) combine this slider with the next slider to a long slider. I want to distinguish between the pickup and the slow section so no, but again if others feel otherwise, I suppose it'll have to change :S
01:19:900(x) add note I think it's OK ... :S

Legendary Hero:

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This diff is the best of 4 imo.
00:00:692(1) add finish
And I suggest to think about some patterns to put the notesin a more beautiful way. I'm not the greatest at patterns >_< I'll try though!

I think the map needs a lot more work....But it has the potential.
Go on~star.