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Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~ (TV size)

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EvianBubble
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August-24-10 at 1:03:11 PM

Artist: Yuuki Aira
Title: LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~ (TV size)
Source: Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu
Tags: The Legend of Legendary Heroes DenYuuDen
BPM: 139
Filesize: 10957kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hero (3.06 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Legend (4.24 stars, 137 notes)
  3. Legendary Hero (4.83 stars, 207 notes)
  4. Traveller (2.14 stars, 92 notes)
Download: Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~ (TV size)
Download: Yuuki Aira - LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~ (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th beatmap created. 2nd beatmap submitted + ranked

August 24th, 2010: RANKED. My thanks go out to everyone who helped, especially to mrtn and Alace!

If you have a slow / low - end machine, you might want to download without the video, just in case

ADDITIONAL INFO:
I bring to you LAMENT ~??????~ (LAMENT ~Yagate Yorokobi wo~) by Y?ki Aira, the OP / opening theme for the summer 2010 season (currently airing) anime Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu (The Legend of the Legendary Heroes). If you're not watching it, GO WATCH IT. It's good

July 19th, 2010: Initial submission
July 21st: Put in some hitsounds, still working on Legendary Hero (will do tomorrow, too tired tonight)
July 22nd: Finished hitsounds, fixed spacing, changed beginning and sliders / hit circles around. Moved to pending
July 23rd: Fixed loads of things (spacing, design, hitsounds, combos), deleted short break in all difficulties, fixed difficulty name
July 24th: Added / fixed lots of hitsounds, spacing, and volume, replaced some sliders with circles, removed letterbox and countdown
July 25th: Mainly minor fixes (spacing, hitsounds, notes), changed OD+1 in Legend, changed source and tags
July 26th: Changed some more spacing and designs
July 27th: Spacing, changed a few notes around, deleted .osb file
July 28th: Did some spacing, hitsound and note fixes, added to Legendary Hero
July 29th: Fixed a LOT of spacing
July 31st: Changed some more spacing, notes / sliders, tags
August 2nd: Spacing fixed, changed ending rhythm in Legendary Hero
August 5th: Changed hitsounds in Traveller
August 7th: More hitsound changes (Legendary Hero)
August 8th: Added more hitsounds in all difficulties
August 9th: Spacing fixes, added another note in ending of Legend
August 11th: Spacing fix in Legendary Hero, lowered OD in Traveller
August 12th: Mostly hitsound additions, fixed design on Legend
August 15th: More spacing fixes, adjusted offset
August 18th: Snapped bookmarks etc., added hitsounds, changed slider in Legendary Hero
August 20th: Fixed offset, spacing, tags, changed hitsounds, added "(TV size)" to title
August 22nd: Hitsound changes
August 23rd: New (and hopefully better) video
August 24th: New Traveller .osu to try and fix a problem
Lanttu
I can't download your map. D: Try full upload?
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Lanttu wrote:

I can't download your map. D: Try full upload?
Re - uploaded. Apologies for the trouble :S
Lanttu

EvianBubble wrote:

Re - uploaded. Apologies for the trouble :S
I still can't download it. ;_; Maybe check the folder if there's something unnecessary? I once had this same problem and the reason it failed to load was one spelling mistake in skinning image. ^^;
Topic Starter
EvianBubble
Uploaded again, hope it works this time D:
Lanttu
Still nothing. ;_;

(But I guess I could say this even if I can't download the map yet, maybe change source to just "Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu" without the english translation?)
Topic Starter
EvianBubble
Actually now that I check the actual folder has Japanese in it ... maybe that's it? Is there a way to change the name of the folder? I tried before but it just gave me an error when uploading :S

EDIT: Someone online downloaded my map and they were able to open it, so it should be OK now
NaomiMinette
Yeah, it works fine now :) Anyway,

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
* The two red combo colors (1st and 4th) being used look similar... Either change one of them to another color or make them more distinctive.
* 00:42:130 through 00:55:512 (or around that general section) - Err... I don't hear any audio cues for a slowdown...

[Traveler]
00:16:879 (4,5) - Might wanna make these into a slider instead. I doubt beginners will be able to hit these easily, especially since they're stacked.
00:20:332 (4,5) - ^
00:35:224 (1,2) - Change these into a slider; it's confusing to hit the second note, even moreso for beginners.
00:36:950 (4,5) - ^
00:39:325 (8,9) - Same case as 00:16:879's comment
00:55:943 (2,3,4) - Either make these into a normal or repeating slider.
01:20:979 (3) - This slider looks like a bad idea, especially since it overlaps itself...

[Hero]
00:00:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Deja vu...
01:20:979 (4) - Same case as Traveler

[Legend]
00:00:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Am I watching Haruhi Suzumiya's second season? (Go look it up if you don't get it.)
00:22:490 (3) - Shouldn't this be on a blue tick (00:22:598)?
01:20:979 (4) - Okay, this is REALLY bad now; a slider start and end shouldn't stack on each other. Furthermore, this is still a bad idea for a slider.

[Legendary Hero]
Finally, a different beginning... Anyway, where are the hitsounds?

00:17:742 (1) - Just make this into two separate notes?
01:02:634 (1) - ^
01:20:979 (6) - Same case as Traveler and Hero

I await the fixes.
Vikon
[General]
1) The size of your BG is 500 x 350, try to use a 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead ? (to get a better resolution)
2) seems you don't need to add "anime" in tag, it will show in the Genre of the song
3) may be add 1 more second for audio lead-in ? it's a bit in hurry.

[Traveler]
00:36:950 (4) new combo ? ( the combo is too long)
00:55:943 (2,3,4) 1/4 combos should not appear in [Easy], may be change them to slider ?
00:50:763 (3,4) move them away from 00:49:037 (1,2) ? it seems they are too close.

[Hero]
00:22:598 (3) 1/4 note should not appear in [Easy] or [Normal], use a slider to replace them ?
00:50:548 (3) move away from (2) ?
00:59:397 (1,2,3) use a slider with reverse to replace these notes? ( 2 is a 1/4 note)
01:04:576 (4,5,6) ^
01:06:303 (2,3,4,5) use 2 sliders to replace ?

[Legend]
seems there are too many jumps or some spacing problems in this diff.
00:19:253 (5,6) spacing ?
00:21:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) the spacing confused me, (2,3) should have the same spacing with (4,5) and (7,8) , (3,4) should match with (6,7) , but the map isn't like that.
00:41:699 (1,2,3) spacing?
01:20:979 (4) the start of the slider should not stack with the end, it's confusing.
01:26:591 add a note with whistle here ? ( the original pattern have already repeated in the previous diff, so try a new pattern to avoid boredom ?)
01:19:468 (1,2,3,4) spacing?

[Legenary Hero]
lack of hitsound?
01:26:375 (1,2) change the pattern .?

star.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Blazevoir wrote:

Yeah, it works fine now :) Anyway,

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
* The two red combo colors (1st and 4th) being used look similar... Either change one of them to another color or make them more distinctive. First one is now darker, I think it's noticeable enough
* 00:42:130 through 00:55:512 (or around that general section) - Err... I don't hear any audio cues for a slowdown... I think it's a slow section ... :S

[Traveler]
00:16:879 (4,5) - Might wanna make these into a slider instead. I doubt beginners will be able to hit these easily, especially since they're stacked. Okay done
00:20:332 (4,5) - ^
00:35:224 (1,2) - Change these into a slider; it's confusing to hit the second note, even moreso for beginners. Fixed, switched around sliders and hit circles
00:36:950 (4,5) - ^
00:39:325 (8,9) - Same case as 00:16:879's comment Changed
00:55:943 (2,3,4) - Either make these into a normal or repeating slider. Done
01:20:979 (3) - This slider looks like a bad idea, especially since it overlaps itself... I like this slider D:

[Hero]
00:00:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Deja vu... First two changed into sliders
01:20:979 (4) - Same case as Traveler

[Legend]
00:00:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Am I watching Haruhi Suzumiya's second season? (Go look it up if you don't get it.) Added more stuffs
00:22:490 (3) - Shouldn't this be on a blue tick (00:22:598)? AHAHAHA FAIL. Fixed thanks
01:20:979 (4) - Okay, this is REALLY bad now; a slider start and end shouldn't stack on each other. Furthermore, this is still a bad idea for a slider. No wonder, it's a beat longer than all the others

[Legendary Hero]
Finally, a different beginning... Anyway, where are the hitsounds? Done

00:17:742 (1) - Just make this into two separate notes? I'll keep these for "variation" lol
01:02:634 (1) - ^
01:20:979 (6) - Same case as Traveler and Hero

I await the fixes.
Thankies, I'm going to PM you for a recheck? :O

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) The size of your BG is 500 x 350, try to use a 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead ? (to get a better resolution) I can't really find any others ... so it'll have to do :S At least it's not that detailed
2) seems you don't need to add "anime" in tag, it will show in the Genre of the song Ah okay, thanks
3) may be add 1 more second for audio lead-in ? it's a bit in hurry. Changed to 1.5 secs

[Traveler]
00:36:950 (4) new combo ? ( the combo is too long) Okay done
00:55:943 (2,3,4) 1/4 combos should not appear in [Easy], may be change them to slider ? Fixed as well
00:50:763 (3,4) move them away from 00:49:037 (1,2) ? it seems they are too close. Oops, done, thanks. Moved two grids up and one left, I believe

[Hero]
00:22:598 (3) 1/4 note should not appear in [Easy] or [Normal], use a slider to replace them ? I think this one is fine ... :S
00:50:548 (3) move away from (2) ? I think distance snap failed on me here O_O
00:59:397 (1,2,3) use a slider with reverse to replace these notes? ( 2 is a 1/4 note) I'll keep this but ...
01:04:576 (4,5,6) ^ ... change this
01:06:303 (2,3,4,5) use 2 sliders to replace ?

[Legend]
seems there are too many jumps or some spacing problems in this diff.
00:19:253 (5,6) spacing ? Rest of combo moved left one grid
00:21:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) the spacing confused me, (2,3) should have the same spacing with (4,5) and (7,8) , (3,4) should match with (6,7) , but the map isn't like that. This was an error on my part, I put (3) too early, but the spacing is: 3/4 beat has one grid in between outer circles, half beat they are touching
00:41:699 (1,2,3) spacing? (1) is still part of normal timing, spacing for (2) and (3) is for half timing
01:20:979 (4) the start of the slider should not stack with the end, it's confusing. Fixed
01:26:591 add a note with whistle here ? ( the original pattern have already repeated in the previous diff, so try a new pattern to avoid boredom ?)
01:19:468 (1,2,3,4) spacing? *facepalm* FAIL. Fixed, thanks (made first slider into 3 beats so spacing would work better)

[Legenary Hero]
lack of hitsound? Done ehehehe
01:26:375 (1,2) change the pattern .? I don't really see a way around this ... :S

star.
Thank you! :D
NaomiMinette
Nah, don't PM me. I was gonna do a recheck anyway :P

[General]
I guess those star sliders can stay for now.

[Traveler]
Fine~

[Hero]
00:59:397 (1,2) - Maybe make these into a slider?
01:06:303 (2,3) - ^
01:07:166 (4,5) - ^

[Legend]
Fine~

[Legendary Hero]
Also fine~

★ for you~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Blazevoir wrote:

Nah, don't PM me. I was gonna do a recheck anyway :P

[General]
I guess those star sliders can stay for now. Lol yea, but if a lot of people disagree with them I guess they'll hafta go :S

[Traveler]
Fine~

[Hero]
00:59:397 (1,2) - Maybe make these into a slider? I think I'll keep this (since it's surrounded by so many sliders)
01:06:303 (2,3) - ^ I think there's more emphasis if it's single circles, so kept for now
01:07:166 (4,5) - ^]

[Legend]
Fine~

[Legendary Hero]
Also fine~

★ for you~
Thank you very much! :D Which reminds me, I probably have something to do a recheck on as well ...
Powerdrone
Traveler:

00:35:224 (1) - I'd say round this slider out a little. It won't affect any spacing and it'll look nicer. =P
01:08:030 (5,6) - Personally, I don't know if I'd stack these...
01:20:979 (3) - I believe it was mentioned that this slider overlaps and stuff... it /should/ be okay to leave it I think, it's not hard to read.

Hero:

00:16:663 (6,7,8) - This feels tricky... Fine to leave it how it is but just pointing it out to you. ^_^
00:42:130 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - These are all too close together. Either that or the slow down is doing weird things to me. Because they're so close together I kept hitting them early and couldn't get the knack of it while playing. You might want to move them a little farther apart, just a smidge.

Legend:


00:22:922 (4) - The spacing here is VERY off.

Try and fix the star. It seems a little misshapen in regards to the left "arm". The distance between the start and end point is farther than the other diffs.


Legendary Hero:


Let me just say... the opening for this diff is AMAZING! <3

The only thing I noticed is that the start and end point of the star are closer in this diff than in the others. I /think/ moving the right "leg" a little over will fix it.


And about your other map. I starred it, but didn't really find anything helpful to give you for a mod. Glad it got ranked!

STAR!
_llkey_18
hii lets start ^^ ( its just sugguestion feel free to ignore it ^^)

Traveler
01:01:123 - shorten one tick , let finish on 01:01:986 and add note 01:02:418 ? for me its better :P
01:04:576 - add whistle same as 01:02:850 1,2?
other thing fine ^^

Hero
00:00:692 - add finish
00:02:418 - ^
00:49:037 - ^ ( sounds better with the "bum" :))
00:50:763 - ^
01:04:576 - 4 - finish there 01:05:440
other thing fine ^^

Legend
00:21:735 - add clap?
fine ^^

Legendary Hero
00:04:145 - add whistle
00:05:008 - ^
00:05:871 - finish
00:27:670 - add note? stack with 3
good ^^
Faust
For now.

Legendary Hero:
- 00:02:850 - Here's what I suggest.
I opened AImod and I "corrected" the note placements, I'm sure the distance you put previously were on purpose but I think this is more intuitive than sudden note patterns.
- 00:33:929 - Another suggestion.
-00:34:792 - You can choose not to follow these or not.
- 00:35:979 - I strongly suggest this one. It gives the map better flow since the notes follow through better with the music and end more appropriately than at the previous section, which does so quite suddenly imo.
- 00:36:950 - Her voice pauses a for a small while at that part, I think it would the overall feel of the map would be better if you made a few adjustments to the spacing here, or at similar parts.
- 00:42:562 - Flows better with the half-speed.
- 00:43:425 - I suggest this.
- 00:44:504 - And this.
- 00:46:555 - And again. Here's what I think it should look much better as.

As for the rest of the map, Try applying the same distance consistency throughout. It will help a lot with the flow.
I will mod the rest soon.
choche_old
Hi! :) I'm going to start with the mod :P

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Nice map ;)

[Traveler]

00:39:756 - This break is too short (delete it)

No problems, nice difficult.

[Hero]

00:40:188 - Remove this break (It's too short)
00:46:447 (2) - Start this slider on the previous red tick (?)
01:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe order those like this (?)


[Legend]

00:40:188 - Delete this break.
No more problems.

[Legendary Hero]

00:40:188 - Delete this break.
No more problems.

Good luck with this beatmap, is very nice ^^

*star*
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
The video is too big, try to reduce it's bitrate, also why are there black letterboxes on all 4 sides?

[General]
The video is causing lag, and videos have never lagged me before o.o

[Legendary Hero]
Considering you have 4 difficulties i was expecting this to be an Insane, however it felt too easy for an Insane, in fact, it felt like a Normal.

[Legend]
00:23:785 (6) - Mapping to silence?
00:42:130 (2,3) - Spacing

[Hero]
00:23:569 (5,6) - Mapping to silence?

[Traveler]
Fine

Ionno, but this feels like a ENNN diff spread to me so... yeah, no star yet
Leorda
Hi hi

[General]
Your bg (dyd_toplogo1.png) need to resize to 800x600 or find another bg (current 500x350)

[Traveler]
00:19:684 (3,4) - Spacing error
00:39:864 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
00:45:584 (6) - New combo, very long for easy diff
00:49:900 (2,3) - Spacing error
00:55:943 (2,3) - ^


[Hero]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern? It's seems not like a triangle
00:40:188 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?

[Legend]
00:24:217 (7) - New combo?
00:40:296 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:16:663 (1) - Make symetric?
01:17:526 (2) - ^

[Legendary Hero]
00:06:303 (1) - Finish?
00:40:404 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?

Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Powerdrone311 wrote:

Traveler:

00:35:224 (1) - I'd say round this slider out a little. It won't affect any spacing and it'll look nicer. =P Lol okay, I tried XD (silly sliders so short ...)
01:08:030 (5,6) - Personally, I don't know if I'd stack these... I think I'll keep this for "emphasis"
01:20:979 (3) - I believe it was mentioned that this slider overlaps and stuff... it /should/ be okay to leave it I think, it's not hard to read. Yayyy :D lol

Hero:

00:16:663 (6,7,8) - This feels tricky... Fine to leave it how it is but just pointing it out to you. ^_^ Yea I think I'll leave it, it feels fine to me :S
00:42:130 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - These are all too close together. Either that or the slow down is doing weird things to me. Because they're so close together I kept hitting them early and couldn't get the knack of it while playing. You might want to move them a little farther apart, just a smidge. Okay, the sliders one beat apart have their white ends overlapping slightly, (1 - 3) are approx. one grid away

Legend:


00:22:922 (4) - The spacing here is VERY off. Moved left and up a bit. Should be the same distance between (1, 2) now (I hope ...)

Try and fix the star. It seems a little misshapen in regards to the left "arm". The distance between the start and end point is farther than the other diffs. Attempted to make it look prettier :P


Legendary Hero:


Let me just say... the opening for this diff is AMAZING! <3 Lol, thanks XD

The only thing I noticed is that the start and end point of the star are closer in this diff than in the others. I /think/ moving the right "leg" a little over will fix it. Moved it over a grid


And about your other map. I starred it, but didn't really find anything helpful to give you for a mod. Glad it got ranked! Aweh, that's so nice, thanks! *tear*

STAR!
Thanks so much :)

_llkey_18 wrote:

hii lets start ^^ ( its just sugguestion feel free to ignore it ^^)

Traveler
01:01:123 - shorten one tick , let finish on 01:01:986 and add note 01:02:418 ? for me its better :P Agreed, changed
01:04:576 - add whistle same as 01:02:850 1,2? I purposely left the whistle out here so it'll sound "softer"
other thing fine ^^

Hero
00:00:692 - add finish I think finish sounds too heavy here ... I'll add whistle instead :P
00:02:418 - ^
00:49:037 - ^ ( sounds better with the "bum" :)) It does sound good here ... but I feel there's too much finish in this area already D: So kept :S
00:50:763 - ^
01:04:576 - 4 - finish there 01:05:440 I think what I have now feels better ... it's the same timing as before (1, 2) and if I extended the slider the repeat wouldn't land on the "bou" word :S
other thing fine ^^

Legend
00:21:735 - add clap? Okay, done
fine ^^

Legendary Hero
00:04:145 - add whistle Done, don't know why this wasn't here already XD
00:05:008 - ^
00:05:871 - finish Added
00:27:670 - add note? stack with 3 Don't think this really fits here :S
good ^^


Thank you! :D
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

OH-SHI- wrote:

For now.

Legendary Hero:
- 00:02:850 - Here's what I suggest. Okay done, but moved the combos around a bit to fix spacing
I opened AImod and I "corrected" the note placements, I'm sure the distance you put previously were on purpose but I think this is more intuitive than sudden note patterns.
- 00:33:929 - Another suggestion. I think I'll keep this one, because if I change it I'd have to mess with spacing with (1) and it wouldn't look as nice, IMO :S
-00:34:792 - You can choose not to follow these or not. Yea I think it looks better with what I have now
- 00:35:979 - I strongly suggest this one. It gives the map better flow since the notes follow through better with the music and end more appropriately than at the previous section, which does so quite suddenly imo. Ehrm, did you forget to link a picture here? Do you want me to add a note here? I'll leave this until I know for sure what you're suggesting :S
- 00:36:950 - Her voice pauses a for a small while at that part, I think it would the overall feel of the map would be better if you made a few adjustments to the spacing here, or at similar parts. Okay done, just hope nobody will chew me out for ZOMG WTF SPACING lol
- 00:42:562 - Flows better with the half-speed. Okay, except I put (4) between (3) and (5), not stacked
- 00:43:425 - I suggest this. Done
- 00:44:504 - And this. I think this one is fine, so I'll leave this
- 00:46:555 - And again. Here's what I think it should look much better as. Spaced it out more

As for the rest of the map, Try applying the same distance consistency throughout. It will help a lot with the flow.
I will mod the rest soon.
Thanks, I did use most of your suggestions but I'm not quite sure about the spacing changes is all :S

choche wrote:

Hi! :) I'm going to start with the mod :P

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Nice map ;)

[Traveler]

00:39:756 - This break is too short (delete it) Okay, done

No problems, nice difficult.

[Hero]

00:40:188 - Remove this break (It's too short) Sure thing
00:46:447 (2) - Start this slider on the previous red tick (?)
01:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe order those like this (?)[/color] Ehrm I can't really find the difference between your screenshot and what I have now X_X

[Legend]

00:40:188 - Delete this break. Done
No more problems.

[Legendary Hero]

00:40:188 - Delete this break. Lalalalala
No more problems.

Good luck with this beatmap, is very nice ^^

*star*
Thank you very much! :D
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
The video is too big, try to reduce it's bitrate, also why are there black letterboxes on all 4 sides? I don't know, the video just is like that I guess :S The video is under 20MB so it's OK right? O_O

[General]
The video is causing lag, and videos have never lagged me before o.o Eh, really? It's fine for me ... O_O

[Legendary Hero]
Considering you have 4 difficulties i was expecting this to be an Insane, however it felt too easy for an Insane, in fact, it felt like a Normal. Ah ... I'm sorry about this, personally I find this difficulty quite hard (but I'm not a pro player or anything lol) (actually I can't even pass this difficulty :S) - I'm better at making easy / normal difficulties IMO, so if you have any suggestions I'll take a look at them ^_^

[Legend]
00:23:785 (6) - Mapping to silence? Ehrm, I don't quite know what you mean here :S
00:42:130 (2,3) - Spacing Moved up one grid

[Hero]
00:23:569 (5,6) - Mapping to silence? Yea I don't really know what you mean D:

[Traveler]
Fine

Ionno, but this feels like a ENNN diff spread to me so... yeah, no star yet
Ah okay, I don't really play insane difficulties much so I don't make them very well :S So any suggestions you have I'll look at :P

Leorda wrote:

Hi hi

[General]
Your bg (dyd_toplogo1.png) need to resize to 800x600 or find another bg (current 500x350) Like I said, I would happily do this except I can't find another image that size :S

[Traveler]
00:19:684 (3,4) - Spacing error Moved one grid right
00:39:864 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Done
00:45:584 (6) - New combo, very long for easy diff Okay, changed
00:49:900 (2,3) - Spacing error I think this is fine ... do you think it's too close or too far?
00:55:943 (2,3) - ^[/color] I used distance snap for these so it should be OK ...

[Hero]
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern? It's seems not like a triangle That's because it's not supposed to be a triangle, lol
00:40:188 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Done

[Legend]
00:24:217 (7) - New combo? I think it's fine like this, kept
00:40:296 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Yes
01:16:663 (1) - Make symetric? Okay, done
01:17:526 (2) - ^

[Legendary Hero]
00:06:303 (1) - Finish? Added
00:40:404 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? Done

Nice song
STAR
Thanks! :)
aRiskOfRain
Traveler;

Should be called "Traveller".
01:20:979 (3) - Make this a linear slider.

Hero;

01:06:950 (?) - Note here?
01:20:979 (4) - Make this a linear slider.

Legend;

00:23:785 (6) - What is this supposed to be following?
01:20:979 (6) - Make this a linear slider.

Legendary Hero;

00:57:670 (8) - 1/4 earlier, extend by 1/4?
01:11:483 (6) - ^
01:20:979 (6) - You know the drill
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

DiamondCrash wrote:

Traveler;

Should be called "Traveller". Fixed
01:20:979 (3) - Make this a linear slider. I think it looks better as Catmull, personally :S Leave it for now, but if more people say so then I'll change it

Hero;

01:06:950 (?) - Note here? I think it's OK like this
01:20:979 (4) - Make this a linear slider.

Legend;

00:23:785 (6) - What is this supposed to be following? It's helping the line flow better, much like (3) in the two previous combos. Otherwise there'd be a random gap between (5) and (7). I felt here it's better to place this on a half beat not the white line
01:20:979 (6) - Make this a linear slider.

Legendary Hero;

00:57:670 (8) - 1/4 earlier, extend by 1/4? Hmm, the "wo" does kind of come in between the blue and white line, but I'll keep this for now
01:11:483 (6) - ^ Yes here, done
01:20:979 (6) - You know the drill I think this is fine as well
Thank yous! :D
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
500*350 a BG is a little poor man... find a 800*600 or 1024*768 one, or at least a 640*480 one?
better to switch combo color 3 and 4 since from 4 to 1 the color is similar (especially in kiai)
when you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add whistle on every beats plz. (ignore this if you add them in purpose, but i guess not XD)
you'll be blamed for the file size of video, though i like it for its quality XD
emmm... and, ANSWER TO THE MAPPER:NO. if you want more ticks during 0.5x pattern you have to have more ticks at 1x too...

[Traveller]
00:00:692 (1,2,4) - whistle?
00:15:368 (2,3) - whistle at the end and remove (5)'s whistle.
00:17:958 (1) - whistle
00:25:727 (1) - the volume increase too much here (i'd like it to be about 80, not 100) this problem appears in all diffs.
00:29:181 (2) - whistle at the end.
00:38:677 (4,5) - better to whistle at 4's end instead of 5's.
00:42:130 (2) - whistle at the start
00:43:857 (3) - remove slider whistle, and make the hitsounds: normal-whistle-normal.
01:02:850 (1) - remove sliderwhistle.
01:04:576 (3) - whistle at the reverse.
01:14:936 (4) - remove slierwhistle.
01:20:979 (3) - whistle at the start.
emm... just use this diff as a hitsound sample since i can't find something wrong XD, and the reason i won't upload a [Traveller hitsounds] is i guess you'd like to change it yourself...won't point much in other diffs... anyway try to avoid meaningless sliderwhistles = =

[Hero]
00:29:181 (3) - remove sliderwhistle, remove whistle at the last beat, and add whistle at 6.
00:45:584 (1,2) - why not repeat once to follow the vocal exactly? don't worry it will be a little harder. better than it sounds strange
00:54:217 (5) - new combo to make these two beats more obvious? (or say powerful..? sorry for my poor english), and other diffs too...forget to say this when modding [Traveller]

[Legend]
what happened to the spacing...
00:21:735 (2,3,4,5) - TBH i can't read that correctly.
00:37:598 (2,3,4,5) - same. the difference between 3/4 and 1/2 is too small.
00:42:130 (2) - new combo to imply a 0.5x's start.
01:04:576 (2) - whistle at the reverse.
01:08:030 (4) - new combo?
01:20:979 (6) - whistle at the start.

[Legendary Hero]
not Heroes..? (according to the title in the BG?)
01:08:030 (8) - new combo?
01:19:684 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing probelem, 2-3 =!= 3-4
01:20:979 (6) - whistle at the start XD
Kurai
Hi~

[Traveller]

00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Finish ?
00:34:361 (5) - Remove clap at end and add clap at begin
00:35:224 (1) - Extand by 1/4
00:36:950 (1) - ^


[Hero]

00:17:094 (8) - Remove clap and add whistle ?
00:20:548 (7) - Add whistle ?
00:22:274 (2) - Remove whistle
00:22:598 (3) - Add whistle
00:24:001 (6) - Add finish ?
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:584 (1) - Extand by 1/4
00:46:447 (2) - ^
01:06:950 (x) - Add note ?

[Legend]

00:04:145 (1) - Whistle at end
00:05:008 (2) - ^
00:21:735 (2) - Move 1/4 later and reduce by 1/4, remove clap at begin and ad whistle
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Add finish ?

[Legendary Hero]

00:06:303 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4 ?

Fine, Star~
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Traveller:
00:16:879 (4) - Slightly too far from previous object, move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
00:17:958 (1) - Too close to previous object.
00:18:821 (2) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) right so that it lines up with (1).
00:20:332 (4) - Slightly too far from previous object, move it one grid (lvl 3) down.
00:21:411 (1) - Ugly slider shape. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18265
00:22:274 (2) - Slightly too far from previous object. Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
00:22:706 (3) - ^

00:23:138 (4) - Too far from previous object.
00:24:217 (5) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) left.
00:30:044 (3) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) down and left.
00:31:339 (5) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.

00:36:087 (2) - ^
00:37:814 (2) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
Recheck all your map using distance snapping, there are a lot of small spacing errors and a few important.
01:20:979 (3) - Use Linear slider curve type for this one. (select it, Compose > Slider Curve Type > Linear): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18267


Hero:
00:02:418 (2) - Move it slightly to the left so that its end stacks perfectly with (1)'s end.
00:04:145 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) up and left.
00:05:871 (5) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) up and right.

Recheck all the map using distance snapping.
00:16:663 (6,7,8) - Stack those.
01:20:979 (4) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.


Legend:
00:23:138 (5) - Too far from previous object.
00:38:677 (5) - ^

01:20:979 (6) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.

Lengendary Hero:
01:20:979 (6) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.
Mianki
Couldn't find anything :P
Star~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
500*350 a BG is a little poor man... find a 800*600 or 1024*768 one, or at least a 640*480 one? Derp! Trying, but seriously, there's like NOTHING for this show T_T
better to switch combo color 3 and 4 since from 4 to 1 the color is similar (especially in kiai) Made 1 a shade darker, I think it's OK ... D:
when you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add whistle on every beats plz. (ignore this if you add them in purpose, but i guess not XD) Lol, thanks, that'll save me time haha. Sometimes I only want it on beginning / end / middle though, so yea :P
you'll be blamed for the file size of video, though i like it for its quality XD Took me forever to get it under 20MB ... it was at like 70MB for the longest time D:
emmm... and, ANSWER TO THE MAPPER:NO. if you want more ticks during 0.5x pattern you have to have more ticks at 1x too... Aweh ... well then, I suppose nothing can be done about this :S

[Traveller]
00:00:692 (1,2,4) - whistle? Added
00:15:368 (2,3) - whistle at the end and remove (5)'s whistle. Okay, and I'm assuming you mean (4) right?
00:17:958 (1) - whistle
00:25:727 (1) - the volume increase too much here (i'd like it to be about 80, not 100) this problem appears in all diffs. Fixed
00:29:181 (2) - whistle at the end. Done
00:38:677 (4,5) - better to whistle at 4's end instead of 5's. I added to the beginning of (4), but kept the one on (5)
00:42:130 (2) - whistle at the start Okay
00:43:857 (3) - remove slider whistle, and make the hitsounds: normal-whistle-normal. Done, but do you want this for (3, 4) or (3) only? I made it (3, 4) for now, but if this isn't what you meant, tell me please :P
01:02:850 (1) - remove sliderwhistle. Removed
01:04:576 (3) - whistle at the reverse. Okay, done
01:14:936 (4) - remove slierwhistle. Fixed
01:20:979 (3) - whistle at the start. Done
emm... just use this diff as a hitsound sample since i can't find something wrong XD, and the reason i won't upload a [Traveller hitsounds] is i guess you'd like to change it yourself...won't point much in other diffs... anyway try to avoid meaningless sliderwhistles = = Lol okay ... I like whistles :P

[Hero]
00:29:181 (3) - remove sliderwhistle, remove whistle at the last beat, and add whistle at 6. Done
00:45:584 (1,2) - why not repeat once to follow the vocal exactly? don't worry it will be a little harder. better than it sounds strange Haha true, fixed
00:54:217 (5) - new combo to make these two beats more obvious? (or say powerful..? sorry for my poor english), and other diffs too...forget to say this when modding [Traveller] I think it's okay like this, so kept for now

[Legend]
what happened to the spacing... It died. I killed it :(
00:21:735 (2,3,4,5) - TBH i can't read that correctly. Fixed, hopefully
00:37:598 (2,3,4,5) - same. the difference between 3/4 and 1/2 is too small. Okay, made spacing for 3/4 2 grids away instead of only 1
00:42:130 (2) - new combo to imply a 0.5x's start. Well it's like this in all the other difficulties so I'll keep this
01:04:576 (2) - whistle at the reverse. Okay, done
01:08:030 (4) - new combo? I think I'll leave this too
01:20:979 (6) - whistle at the start. Added

[Legendary Hero]
not Heroes..? (according to the title in the BG?) I think Hero is fine, since Heroes is plural it just doesn't sound as good to me IMO :S
01:08:030 (8) - new combo? Keeping this as well :S
01:19:684 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing probelem, 2-3 =!= 3-4 Yea, sometimes the stupid grid doesn't make shapes nicely lol. Fixed w/o grid snap
01:20:979 (6) - whistle at the start XD Done
Thanks so much! :D

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Traveller]

00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Finish ? Too much finish IMO ... I'll leave it (especially since (1) of next combo has finish too)
00:34:361 (5) - Remove clap at end and add clap at begin Okay
00:35:224 (1) - Extand by 1/4 I think these are OK as it is
00:36:950 (1) - ^


[Hero]

00:17:094 (8) - Remove clap and add whistle ? Don't know why I used clap here actually ... fixed
00:20:548 (7) - Add whistle ? Done
00:22:274 (2) - Remove whistle I like the whistle here so keeping it
00:22:598 (3) - Add whistle Okay, worrying about whistle overload haha but I think it's fine :P
00:24:001 (6) - Add finish ? Don't think this really fits here
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:584 (1) - Extand by 1/4 They repeat now so it sounds better
00:46:447 (2) - ^
01:06:950 (x) - Add note ? I think it's OK like this as well ...

[Legend]

00:04:145 (1) - Whistle at end Okay, added
00:05:008 (2) - ^
00:21:735 (2) - Move 1/4 later and reduce by 1/4, remove clap at begin and ad whistle Kept timing but changed clap to whistle
00:25:727 (1,2,3) - Add finish ?

[Legendary Hero]

00:06:303 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4 ? Okay, done

Fine, Star~
Thanks! :)
Rest of mods, I'll get to you later ... feeling a bit tired now :S
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Traveller:
00:16:879 (4) - Slightly too far from previous object, move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
00:17:958 (1) - Too close to previous object. Whoops, wasn't lined up with (2), moved one grid left
00:18:821 (2) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) right so that it lines up with (1). Fixed by above movement
00:20:332 (4) - Slightly too far from previous object, move it one grid (lvl 3) down. Done
00:21:411 (1) - Ugly slider shape. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18265 Fixed, thanks
00:22:274 (2) - Slightly too far from previous object. Move it one grid (lvl 3) right. Okay
00:22:706 (3) - ^[/color]
00:23:138 (4) - Too far from previous object. (4) moved right to fix both this and the one under
00:24:217 (5) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) left.
00:30:044 (3) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) down and left.
00:31:339 (5) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.[/color] This one seems fine to me
00:36:087 (2) - ^ Okay, fixed
00:37:814 (2) - ^ Move it one grid (lvl 3) right.
Recheck all your map using distance snapping, there are a lot of small spacing errors and a few important.
01:20:979 (3) - Use Linear slider curve type for this one. (select it, Compose > Slider Curve Type > Linear): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18267[/color] I think it looks better with catmull, so I'm going to leave these :S

Hero:
00:02:418 (2) - Move it slightly to the left so that its end stacks perfectly with (1)'s end.
00:04:145 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) up and left.
00:05:871 (5) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) up and right.[/color] Fixed I think
Recheck all the map using distance snapping. I used it mostly for the smaller time intervals, but for the larger ones I moved it closer so it's semi - used throughout
00:16:663 (6,7,8) - Stack those.
01:20:979 (4) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.[/color]

Legend:
00:23:138 (5) - Too far from previous object.
00:38:677 (5) - ^[/color] Moved one grid right as well
01:20:979 (6) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.

Lengendary Hero:
01:20:979 (6) - Use Linear Curve Type for it.
Thank you for your help! :)

Mianki wrote:

Couldn't find anything :P
Star~
Ah, thank you very much! :D
Eddotan
[Overall]
- try reduce size of video file. i suggest you encode it with avi(xvid: 971kbps)
- uncheck the "letterbox during breaks" and "enable countdown"

[Traveller]
- 00:35:224 (1) - you can align this slider better
- 00:36:950 (1) - ^
- 00:57:670 (4) - ^

[Hero]
All Fine

[Legend]
All Fine, well mapped.

[Legendary Hero]
- 00:39:540 (8) - Extend the slider to next white tick (00:40:404)
- 00:48:821 (1) - i think this slider is too short, you can put there two circles instead
- 00:50:548 (1) - ^

nice map~ i didnt see any major errors on this map :P
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Eddotan wrote:

[Overall]
- try reduce size of video file. i suggest you encode it with avi(xvid: 971kbps) Okay, will do soon (after I find some tech help *cough* Google *cough*
- uncheck the "letterbox during breaks" and "enable countdown" Done

[Traveller]
- 00:35:224 (1) - you can align this slider better Okay, I tried :P
- 00:36:950 (1) - ^ Slider end moved one grid up
- 00:57:670 (4) - ^

[Hero]
All Fine

[Legend]
All Fine, well mapped.

[Legendary Hero]
- 00:39:540 (8) - Extend the slider to next white tick (00:40:404) Done
- 00:48:821 (1) - i think this slider is too short, you can put there two circles instead Okay, fixed
- 00:50:548 (1) - ^

nice map~ i didnt see any major errors on this map :P
Thank you! :D
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