This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 14. Juli 2015 at 22:20:44

Artist: Ayumi Hamasaki
Title: LABYRINTH
Tags: chivacookie relaxing relax no vocal
BPM: 156
Filesize: 2837kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:

1. Insane (4,04 stars, 251 notes)
2. Normal (1,97 stars, 149 notes)
3. toybot's Hard (2,95 stars, 193 notes)

Download: Ayumi Hamasaki - LABYRINTH
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I didn't map this because I wanted to I was forced. This was pure evil....elvis also

hitsounds by EvilElvis.


Normal -> me
Hard -> toybot
Insane -> me

YOU SHOULD BE HAPPY THAT I FORCING YOU TO DO STUFF U KNOW

Hi M4M

[General]

• Oh the mapset isn't complete yet so okay alright

1. Colour Combo 3 is just ruining the whole thing. Suggestion: Blue > Green
2. Always check the AiMod so ya
   

[Normal]

1. The number of spinners should be as the Insane diff for all difficulties, which is only the one at 01:34:098 (1). The others should be mapped imo
2. 00:17:079 (2) - tbh moving the circle down and blanket w/ 00:17:464 (1) would help in flow and design much idk
3. 00:19:771 (1) - Making it flat improves flow in this case
4. 00:23:233 (3) - NC
5. 00:26:694 (3) - ^
6. 00:25:540 (1) - Making the slider flat looks better in design imo
7. 00:33:233 (3,1) - Blanket could improve design more
8. 00:38:233 (1,2) - Fix imperfect blanket
9. 00:41:694 (1,2) - ^
10. 00:50:540 (3,1) - ^
11. 00:57:848 (1) - Move to x:348 y:144 so that slider heads and tails are parallel and vertical
12. 01:01:310 (3) - NC
13. 01:02:464 (1,2) - Nazi for blanket
14. 01:10:348 (4,1,2) - The flow here is quite not smooth. Suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269862
15. 01:10:925 (2,3,1) - Make them collinear and perfect horizontal
16. 01:15:156 (1,2) - Still nazi for blanket
17. 01:23:617 (1,2,3) - ^
18. 01:30:156 (1,2) - ^
19. 01:34:002 (1) - Why not stack w/ 01:33:233 (4)?

[Insane]

1. 00:20:925 (1) with 00:21:694 (3) - Fix blanket
2. 00:22:464 (5) - Separate from 00:23:233 (1) a little or just perfect blanket them better imo just for design stuffs
3. 01:07:079 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket

Good luck

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hi M4M

[General]

• Oh the mapset isn't complete yet so okay alright

1. Colour Combo 3 is just ruining the whole thing. Suggestion: Blue > Green hm maybe you're right. i thought blue would fit with the background because it's really green but.. hm... not sure. maybe i'll fix
2. Always check the AiMod so ya there is a normal under 2.0 so it's okay. i put in a preview point + fixed the mp3 though
   

[Normal]

1. The number of spinners should be as the Insane diff for all difficulties, which is only the one at 01:34:098 (1). The others should be mapped imo i'll consider it if others say the same
2. 00:17:079 (2) - tbh moving the circle down and blanket w/ 00:17:464 (1) would help in flow and design much idk i think it's okay. It's a straight line with 3 circles and it works fine.
3. 00:19:771 (1) - Making it flat improves flow in this case fixed
4. 00:23:233 (3) - NC fixed
5. 00:26:694 (3) - ^ fixed
6. 00:25:540 (1) - Making the slider flat looks better in design imo ok
7. 00:33:233 (3,1) - Blanket could improve design more ugh ok
8. 00:38:233 (1,2) - Fix imperfect blanket ugh ok
9. 00:41:694 (1,2) - ^ ugh ok
10. 00:50:540 (3,1) - ^ ugh ok
11. 00:57:848 (1) - Move to x:348 y:144 so that slider heads and tails are parallel and vertical no because 00:56:310 (3,1) - would touch
12. 01:01:310 (3) - NC ok
13. 01:02:464 (1,2) - Nazi for blanket ok
14. 01:10:348 (4,1,2) - The flow here is quite not smooth. Suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269862 i think it's okay i don't want a stack in my normal
15. 01:10:925 (2,3,1) - Make them collinear and perfect horizontal ok
16. 01:15:156 (1,2) - Still nazi for blanketok
17. 01:23:617 (1,2,3) - ^ ok
18. 01:30:156 (1,2) - ^ ok
19. 01:34:002 (1) - Why not stack w/ 01:33:233 (4) i don't want to increase the difficulty?

[Insane]

1. 00:20:925 (1) with 00:21:694 (3) - Fix blanket not supposed to really blanket. it won't change the experience while playing
2. 00:22:464 (5) - Separate from 00:23:233 (1) a little or just perfect blanket them better imo just for design stuffs i think it's fine
3. 01:07:079 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket fixed.

Good luck

thanks

hi. from your queue

[General]

1. Make Easy and Hard diff

[Hitsounds]

1. About that normal hitsounds, I don't think that it is fitable for the song
2. Rather than using finish, try to use whistle instead

[Normal]

1. 00:16:310 (1) - aim the tail to (2)
2. 00:37:464 (2,3) - (2) should be 256|300, then (3) must copy paste from (1) to make it symmetrical pattern
3. 00:49:002 and 00:49:387 - you should add a note here
4. 01:11:502 (3) - 284|68 to make it better

idk the rest of the problems. GL!

-Hakurei- wrote:

hi. from your queue

[General]

1. Make Easy and Hard diff hard will be a gd, i don't need an easy because the normal is below 2 stars.

[Hitsounds]

1. About that normal hitsounds, I don't think that it is fitable for the song i like them
2. Rather than using finish, try to use whistle instead i think it's okay

[Normal]

1. 00:16:310 (1) - aim the tail to (2) changed in a different way
2. 00:37:464 (2,3) - (2) should be 256|300, then (3) must copy paste from (1) to make it symmetrical pattern fixed
3. 00:49:002 and 00:49:387 - you should add a note here i think it's okay
4. 01:11:502 (3) - 284|68 to make it better hm ok

idk the rest of the problems. GL!

thanks.

Hey~
M4M from my modding queue, really nice map!

General

- Here's a cookie
- Disable "Widescreen Support" on Normal & toybot's Hard, it's only used for storyboards

Normal

- 00:21:694 (2) - This object touches the accuracy on a 4:3 screen
- 00:54:002 (2) - This object touches the scorebar on a 4:3 screen
This stuff look useless but your map can be unranked just for that
There's a lot of NCs here, why don't you delete 1/2 of them ? Examples: 00:12:848 (1) - 00:15:156 (1) - etc.
- 00:38:233 (1,2) - Improve this blanket
- 01:30:156 (1,2) - Can be a bit nicer

toybot's Hard

- 00:30:156 (1,3) - Overlap
- 00:34:002 (4,5,1) - Improve this blanket
- 00:55:348 (7,1) - ^
- 00:59:002 (1) - Sliderwaves are made like that
- 01:06:117 - Why not on this order ?
- 01:11:694 (1,2,3) - Improve this blanket
- 01:32:464 (1,2) - ^

Insane

- 00:19:002 (2) - It touches the acc on a 4:3 screen
- I don't see anything else, I'm pretty bad at mapping 4+ stars, so I let the others see about that ^.^

Here's a kudo' for your map, bye

Z e r s s wrote:

Hey~
M4M from my modding queue, really nice map!

General

- Here's a cookie
- Disable "Widescreen Support" on Normal & toybot's Hard, it's only used for storyboards

Normal

- 00:21:694 (2) - This object touches the accuracy on a 4:3 screen
- 00:54:002 (2) - This object touches the scorebar on a 4:3 screen
This stuff look useless but your map can be unranked just for that
There's a lot of NCs here, why don't you delete 1/2 of them ? Examples: 00:12:848 (1) - 00:15:156 (1) - etc.
- 00:38:233 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a bit
- 01:30:156 (1,2) - Can be a bit nicer hm... yeah...

toybot's Hard

- 00:30:156 (1,3) - Overlap
- 00:34:002 (4,5,1) - Improve this blanket
- 00:55:348 (7,1) - ^
- 00:59:002 (1) - Sliderwaves are made like that
- 01:06:117 - Why not on this order ?
- 01:11:694 (1,2,3) - Improve this blanket
- 01:32:464 (1,2) - ^

Insane

- 00:19:002 (2) - It touches the acc on a 4:3 screen fiexed
- I don't see anything else, I'm pretty bad at mapping 4+ stars, so I let the others see about that ^.^

Here's a kudo' for your map, bye

thanks i fixed the 4:3 issues

Hello! From my queue

General

1. Not everyone understands this, but the bpm should be halved. It is correct that the time signature is 3/4. however, the 3 "beats" of that signature are like this. You can kinda hear it in the song (more in the kiai and after, the start of the song might trick you), but you can also feel it.
   
   Halving the bpm would make a lot more sense, because the 3 "beats" you can feel will be the beats of the metronome in the editor. I recommend you to change this, don't forget to double the slider velocity to 3.2
2. Nice song

Insane

1. Clean map, fun to play, well done.
2. Maybe a custom diff name if you can think of one

00:19:002 (2,4,6) - I don't really hear a reason to use finishes here
00:23:810 (2,3) - It would be more logical for a smaller distance between 00:23:233 (1,2) - , and a larger distance here, which will follow the same spacing of the previous measures
00:25:348 (6) - Drum finish doesn't really fit here. I'm not sure if you're trying to add your own elements to the song regarding hitsounds
00:39:387 (4,5) - This jump is quite large. I suggest rotating 00:39:771 (5,6) - a little clockwise and moving it closer to 00:39:387 (4) -
00:42:079 (5) - I suggest moving this next to the slider-end (on the right side), because the stack kinda forces spacing to be small here, which doesn't really follow your increased spacing for the piano note structure. You will still be able to emphasize the note on 00:42:271 (6) -
01:01:694 (6,7) - Just a suggestion: 01:01:694 (6,7) - Ctrl+g, and move 01:01:887 (7) - (or (9) if you want to reverse the pattern) beneath 01:01:310 (4) - . This will you will emphasize the sound in the song you used the finish for, instead of a jump which isn't really mapped to anything as strong
01:06:694 (8,9,1) - The pattern is really building up here, which is nice. However, currently the jump between 01:06:694 (8,9) - is bigger than between 01:06:887 (9,1) - , which is kinda weird considering it's the start of a new part in the song. A shape like this will work out perfectly in this scenario
01:07:464 (2) - this is the only thing that really bothered me. Why not ctrl+G this slider? It will play sooo much better D:
01:17:464 (3) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody
01:17:848 (4,5,1) - Either consistent spacing or move (5) closer to (4) so (1) will be emphasized
01:29:002 (1,2) - Why a different pattern here from all the surrounding ones? This beat doesn't have anything special

toybot's Hard

00:56:310 (3,4,1) - Consistent spacing or a larger distance between 00:56:694 (4,1) - would make more sense here
00:49:771 (1) - and 00:59:002 (1) - maybe circles would work out better here, because of the stronger beat (which the finish on the slider-end indicates). You did a similar thing here 01:03:617 (1,2,3,4) -
01:24:579 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - With this patter, you will emphasize the wrong circles (or at least the way you intended, looking at the combo colors). I tried to make it clear http://puu.sh/iXQJT/953d8911b4.jpg. Red circle=the way your pattern currently emphasizes the circle. Blue circle= The circles that actually should be emphasized. You could easily shift the NCs, but I recommend a change of pattern, maybe a similar one, that will fit better, like this.
01:34:194 (1) - I see the spinner is ending earlier in you diff (it's not really clear where the violin starts fading away) but I recommend moving the inherited point with the lower volume so your spinner-end will be soft as well. (I think that was the intention of the inherited point you added, but you forgot to change the volume

Normal

00:27:848 (1,1) - I'm sure this is going to cause you a DQ. The time between the spinner and the slider is quite small, and the slider is also already visible for a long time while the spinner is busy (unless the spinner overlaps that, but then the player will have a very short time to react). I recommend mapping some sliders/circles like you did in the insane diff
01:04:387 (3) - Because of the chord change and the downbeat, this slider does not really fit . Why not make a pair of 3 circles, followed by the slider on the downbeat?
01:07:079 (1,2,3,1,2) - The music pairs the notes per 2 in this section so the sliders are in the wrong spot. I recommend you to use a rhythm like this instead. It's kinda hard to explain sometimes, but I hope you can hear what I mean. Btw you did it perfectly here 01:11:694 (1,2,1,2) -
01:17:464 (1) - Circle + 1/1 slider? That way you can emphasize the sound in the song you used the finish for. (and kinda the same reason as 01:07:079 (1,2,3,1,2) - )
01:22:079 (1,2) - And same situation here. A rhythm like This would fit a lot better

Good luck with the mapset!
Have a star

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue

General

1. Not everyone understands this, but the bpm should be halved. It is correct that the time signature is 3/4. however, the 3 "beats" of that signature are like this. You can kinda hear it in the song (more in the kiai and after, the start of the song might trick you), but you can also feel it.
   
   Halving the bpm would make a lot more sense, because the 3 "beats" you can feel will be the beats of the metronome in the editor. I recommend you to change this, don't forget to double the slider velocity to 3.2 i think it's okay with that bpm. it fits the rhythm and you won't hear anything of it later. halving it would just make a lot of work
2. Nice song

Insane

1. Clean map, fun to play, well done.
2. Maybe a custom diff name if you can think of one i think insane is fine

00:19:002 (2,4,6) - I don't really hear a reason to use finishes here
00:23:810 (2,3) - It would be more logical for a smaller distance between 00:23:233 (1,2) - , and a larger distance here, which will follow the same spacing of the previous measures
00:25:348 (6) - Drum finish doesn't really fit here. I'm not sure if you're trying to add your own elements to the song regarding hitsounds i think drum is fine
00:39:387 (4,5) - This jump is quite large. I suggest rotating 00:39:771 (5,6) - a little clockwise and moving it closer to 00:39:387 (4) - i think a big jump is okay because this part is where it starts building up
00:42:079 (5) - I suggest moving this next to the slider-end (on the right side), because the stack kinda forces spacing to be small here, which doesn't really follow your increased spacing for the piano note structure. You will still be able to emphasize the note on 00:42:271 (6) -
01:01:694 (6,7) - Just a suggestion: 01:01:694 (6,7) - Ctrl+g, and move 01:01:887 (7) - (or (9) if you want to reverse the pattern) beneath 01:01:310 (4) - . This will you will emphasize the sound in the song you used the finish for, instead of a jump which isn't really mapped to anything as strong
01:06:694 (8,9,1) - The pattern is really building up here, which is nice. However, currently the jump between 01:06:694 (8,9) - is bigger than between 01:06:887 (9,1) - , which is kinda weird considering it's the start of a new part in the song. A shape like this will work out perfectly in this scenario
01:07:464 (2) - this is the only thing that really bothered me. Why not ctrl+G this slider? It will play sooo much better D:
01:17:464 (3) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody
01:17:848 (4,5,1) - Either consistent spacing or move (5) closer to (4) so (1) will be emphasized
01:29:002 (1,2) - Why a different pattern here from all the surrounding ones? This beat doesn't have anything special

toybot's Hard

00:56:310 (3,4,1) - Consistent spacing or a larger distance between 00:56:694 (4,1) - would make more sense here
00:49:771 (1) - and 00:59:002 (1) - maybe circles would work out better here, because of the stronger beat (which the finish on the slider-end indicates). You did a similar thing here 01:03:617 (1,2,3,4) -
01:24:579 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - With this patter, you will emphasize the wrong circles (or at least the way you intended, looking at the combo colors). I tried to make it clear http://puu.sh/iXQJT/953d8911b4.jpg. Red circle=the way your pattern currently emphasizes the circle. Blue circle= The circles that actually should be emphasized. You could easily shift the NCs, but I recommend a change of pattern, maybe a similar one, that will fit better, like this.
01:34:194 (1) - I see the spinner is ending earlier in you diff (it's not really clear where the violin starts fading away) but I recommend moving the inherited point with the lower volume so your spinner-end will be soft as well. (I think that was the intention of the inherited point you added, but you forgot to change the volume

Normal

00:27:848 (1,1) - I'm sure this is going to cause you a DQ. The time between the spinner and the slider is quite small, and the slider is also already visible for a long time while the spinner is busy (unless the spinner overlaps that, but then the player will have a very short time to react). I recommend mapping some sliders/circles like you did in the insane diff
01:04:387 (3) - Because of the chord change and the downbeat, this slider does not really fit . Why not make a pair of 3 circles, followed by the slider on the downbeat?
01:07:079 (1,2,3,1,2) - The music pairs the notes per 2 in this section so the sliders are in the wrong spot. I recommend you to use a rhythm like this instead. It's kinda hard to explain sometimes, but I hope you can hear what I mean. Btw you did it perfectly here 01:11:694 (1,2,1,2) -
01:17:464 (1) - Circle + 1/1 slider? That way you can emphasize the sound in the song you used the finish for. (and kinda the same reason as 01:07:079 (1,2,3,1,2) - )
01:22:079 (1,2) - And same situation here. A rhythm like This would fit a lot better

Good luck with the mapset!
Have a star

thanks for the star =) everything not red is changed

Hard wrote:

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue

General

1. Not everyone understands this, but the bpm should be halved. It is correct that the time signature is 3/4. however, the 3 "beats" of that signature are like this. You can kinda hear it in the song (more in the kiai and after, the start of the song might trick you), but you can also feel it.
   
   Halving the bpm would make a lot more sense, because the 3 "beats" you can feel will be the beats of the metronome in the editor. I recommend you to change this, don't forget to double the slider velocity to 3.2 i think it's okay with that bpm. it fits the rhythm and you won't hear anything of it later. halving it would just make a lot of work

Actually you would just have to halve the bpm and double the SV (doesn't seem like a lot of work). You won't hear the difference, but some things like the kiai effect or the osu! logo are affected by this. Anyway I was looking at it from a musical perspective, but you're right that it won't affect the map that much when playing
Good luck! (again)

Z e r s s wrote:

Hey~
M4M from my modding queue, really nice map!

General

- Here's a cookie
- Disable "Widescreen Support" on Normal & toybot's Hard, it's only used for storyboards

toybot's Hard

-
- 01:06:117 - Why not on this order ? - because it's a hard, not a light insane

Here's a kudo' for your map, bye

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue

toybot's Hard

00:49:771 (1) - and 00:59:002 (1) - maybe circles would work out better here, because of the stronger beat (which the finish on the slider-end indicates). You did a similar thing here 01:03:617 (1,2,3,4) - did 1/2 slider + circle, yeah

Good luck with the mapset!
Have a star

thanks for the mods https://0paste.tk/7707.txt

btw please add my name to tags

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