Eri Sasaki - Ring of Fortune · forum

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-06-17T14:58:52+00:00

[General]

請統一全部難度的WidescreenStoryboard，沒有SB就關掉吧

[Insane]

00:04:137 (1) - 這個既然不屬於連打部分那就放遠點吧
00:08:504 (3,4,5) - 可以放個正三角形
00:56:447 - 這可以加個圓圈，然後00:56:542 (2,4) - 4的可以放去2原本的位置
01:07:269 - 同上
01:19:042 (3) - 這個我覺得overmap了

[Ren's Normal]

人哥在量產低難度嗎，我都摸了4個有Ren's Easy和Normal的圖了XD
00:09:263 (5,1) - NM轉盤隔1拍
00:59:200 (4) - 這個換成滑條會好點
01:17:428 (6) - 同上
01:26:731 (6,1) - 轉盤隔1拍

我盡力了，圖質量很好，抱歉只能摸這麼點x.x

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2015-06-17T15:03:09+00:00

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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-06-17T15:50:47+00:00

Ren's Easy

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TitleUnicode:Ring of Fortune
Artist:Eri Sasaki
ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
Creator:Crystal
Version:Ren's Easy
Source:プラスティック・メモリーズ
Tags:Anime op opening Plastic Memories
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Ren's Normal

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ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
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EncoreW

833 posts

Joined June 2013

EncoreW 2015-06-17T16:07:31+00:00

[General]

combo color 的话我还是觉得偏暗一点的更加适合，粉色似乎有点太亮

[Insane]

00:03:794 (4,5,6,1) - 1/4和1/2用一样的间距，虽然能毫无问题的接上去，但是在edit里面还是看着有点奇怪

00:10:212 - 00:10:592 - 这一段我听到了乐器的声音虽然我不知道这乐器叫什么名字但是我觉得你应该把这一段加个这种乐器的音效进去，因为这一段的声音听上去和转盘的其他地方的差距有点大，其他难度也一样，这段话是口胡

00:27:491 (4,5) - 这个blanket我觉得可以松一点不用那么紧，和00:27:491 (4) - 拉开一点，这样看着舒服而且对难度没有影响

00:31:478 (2,3,4) - 分开放？因为00:29:959 (2,3,4) - 这里就是这样的，00:28:440 (1,2,3) - 这里虽然是叠起来的但是不是voval，但是00:31:478 (2,3,4) - 这个地方是，vocal 和vocal 的话我还是坚持用差不多的做法

00:37:174 - 00:37:554 - 这可是两根白线也其中一根还是大白线也

00:56:731 (3) - →（204，184）

00:56:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - 比如这样？ahgiyagrag

[Hard]

CS3.5？CS4的话跟主难度一样大了而且NM是CS3

00:32:997 (2,3) - blanket

噫没做完

[打包人格]

00:09:453 (1) - 和Insane一样

别的没啥说的感觉就是似乎有点挤

祝你提前射精再见

liangv587

472 posts

Joined April 2013

liangv587 2015-06-18T02:17:59+00:00

clap声音太闷了，应该选个明亮点的

[Inasne]
01:22:934 (1,2) - 做成圈+1/2滑条的样式，这样区别于hard
01:24:833 - 这里可以放个5连

[Hard]
00:28:820 - 这里加个1/1滑条，补充节奏
00:46:668 (1) - 3/4 overmap

没了

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-18T02:39:40+00:00

ken2010123 wrote:
[General]
請統一全部難度的WidescreenStoryboard，沒有SB就關掉吧好
[Insane]
00:04:137 (1) - 這個既然不屬於連打部分那就放遠點吧没有必要因为这边间距近似于1/4
00:08:504 (3,4,5) - 可以放個正三角形我喜欢这个;w;
00:56:447 - 這可以加個圓圈，然後00:56:542 (2,4) - 4的可以放去2原本的位置我觉得这样好一点想突出的不是背景鼓点
01:07:269 - 同上
01:19:042 (3) - 這個我覺得overmap了没有有音的
我盡力了，圖質量很好，抱歉只能摸這麼點x.x 谢谢

tm1209 wrote:
[General]

combo color 的话我还是觉得偏暗一点的更加适合，粉色似乎有点太亮背景就比较暗所以用亮点的

[Insane]

00:03:794 (4,5,6,1) - 1/4和1/2用一样的间距，虽然能毫无问题的接上去，但是在edit里面还是看着有点奇怪并不是1/2 这里变bpm了

00:10:212 - 00:10:592 - 这一段我听到了乐器的声音虽然我不知道这乐器叫什么名字但是我觉得你应该把这一段加个这种乐器的音效进去，因为这一段的声音听上去和转盘的其他地方的差距有点大，其他难度也一样，这段话是口胡啊转盘有这种所谓么;w;

00:27:491 (4,5) - 这个blanket我觉得可以松一点不用那么紧，和00:27:491 (4) - 拉开一点，这样看着舒服而且对难度没有影响好

00:31:478 (2,3,4) - 分开放？因为00:29:959 (2,3,4) - 这里就是这样的，00:28:440 (1,2,3) - 这里虽然是叠起来的但是不是voval，但是00:31:478 (2,3,4) - 这个地方是，vocal 和vocal 的话我还是坚持用差不多的做法但是这里不太好改和前后衔接上总会有问题而且这个叠的本身问题就不大的感觉如果你能提供一个好些的方案我可能会改

00:37:174 - 00:37:554 - 这可是两根白线也其中一根还是大白线也但是并没有音

00:56:731 (3) - →（204，184）啊 1grid有事么我这个是直接stack的

00:56:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - 比如这样？ahgiyagrag 不了并没有多少问题

[Hard]

CS3.5？CS4的话跟主难度一样大了而且NM是CS3 3-3-4-4不是挺好的么

00:32:997 (2,3) - blanket 好

噫没做完噫已经做完了

祝你提前射精再见真是恶俗

liangv587 wrote:
clap声音太闷了，应该选个明亮点的还好的感觉

[Inasne]
01:22:934 (1,2) - 做成圈+1/2滑条的样式，这样区别于hard 好
01:24:833 - 这里可以放个5连改了个三连

[Hard]
00:28:820 - 这里加个1/1滑条，补充节奏好
00:46:668 (1) - 3/4 overmap 滑条尾巴没关系的

没了

thanks!!

Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2015-06-18T03:27:16+00:00

应援

Insane

00:03:186 (2,3,4) - ds没看懂
00:06:035 (2) - 建议和1放近一点然后和3再远一点
00:06:415 (4) - 没什么音建议ds1.0
00:06:795 (5,6,7) - 往右偏感觉好一点
00:12:491 (2,3,4) - 建议统一ds
00:19:896 (2) - 这个不和3包么
00:23:314 (3,4) - ctrl+G
00:24:833 (4,5,1) - 建议统一ds
00:26:921 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:010 (2,3) - ^
00:50:276 (3) - ctrl+G

hard

00:58:630 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 为啥不统一一下ds
01:26:731 (6) - 这个是重音的话推荐往远了放诶，而不是中间

Normal

好多梗感觉不好看比如00:25:402 (4,5,6) - 比如00:31:478 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
别的摸不动

EZ

00:13:061 (1,2) - 目测放偏了
01:05:086 (3,4) - 根据缩圈看也偏了

没什么营养的水摸，骗个kd好了

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-06-18T08:26:31+00:00

ken2010123

ken2010123 wrote:
[Ren's Normal]
人哥在量產低難度嗎，我都摸了4個有Ren's Easy和Normal的圖了XD 毕竟善良，赠送diff

00:09:263 (5,1) - NM轉盤隔1拍物件后转盘无所谓的
00:59:200 (4) - 這個換成滑條會好點好
01:17:428 (6) - 同上这个不好，因为前面一串都是1/2.要适当空一下，不然对新手不友好
01:26:731 (6,1) - 轉盤隔1拍 ^
我盡力了，圖質量很好，抱歉只能摸這麼點x.x[/notice]

他妈1209

tm1209 wrote:
[打包人格]

00:09:453 (1) - 和Insane一样 easy和normal都加了finish并且降低了音量

别的没啥说的感觉就是似乎有点挤

Euphoria

Euphoria wrote:
好多梗感觉不好看比如00:25:002 (4,5,6) - 比如00:31:478 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 还好吧，能看就行了
别的摸不动

00:13:061 (1,2) - 目测放偏了好
01:05:086 (3,4) - 根据缩圈看也偏了好

EZ

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Thanks for mod!!

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2015-06-18T08:51:24+00:00

in一开始好奇怪哦……

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-18T10:57:53+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
in一开始好奇怪哦……

;w;??

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2015-06-18T12:24:49+00:00

M4M
摸图水平太差...
凑乎看吧，全盘无视也无所谓啦>.<
[Insane]

00:00:957 (1,2) - 没包好
00:00:957 (1,2,3,1) - 间距不等是故意的？前面DS ×1.2 后面×1.1
00:07:744 (1,2,3,4) - 这种往返我个人不是很喜欢
00:09:358 (1) - 感觉这个转盘盖掉了很多有趣的节奏
00:13:820 - 虽然好像有个音，但听来听去还是感觉这拍空掉比较好，前面换成滑条加note
00:26:921 (3) - 配合前面我感觉这个flow向右好些
00:30:719 (4,1) - 我比较偏向stack 位置就不知道了
00:32:997 (2,3) - 包（还是说故意的？）
00:37:174 - 加个note
00:50:276 (3) - 这位置感觉不好尤其vocal还突出了一下
00:53:124 (2,3) - 为何我感觉应该stack
01:07:744 (1) - 弯点好些吧
01:18:377 (1,2) - 这个形状的flow接后面感觉不太好
01:19:896 (9) - 可以再高点
[Hard]

01:22:554 (3,4,5) - 有点微妙...都再弯点？
[Ren's Normal]

~~00:22:744 (3,4) - 感觉容易读错把前一个滑条尾的音读成后一个滑条头的音（至少我只是看就看错了）~~
看了后面感觉都是类似的节奏，果然是我的原因Orz 读不懂这种节奏的图
[Ren's Easy]

00:03:186 (2) - 这个压红线...我觉得压前后哪跟白线都好点...
00:12:871 (1) - ^

...这摸得有点水啊，本身就不擅长摸图，而且也不会打这种低速各种空拍的的图，看不懂的说
但是感觉整体很流畅
嗯祝好运啦

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-06-18T13:13:37+00:00

ZZZZZ，刚睡一觉起来

[General]

统一''Widescreen Support'',只是为了严谨的话

[Ren's Easy]
00:10:972 (2) - 按Flow走向来说，我觉得这个滑条往左边偏一点会更好。大概就是Ctrl+H然后放回原来的位置吧。

[Ren's Normal]
00:32:997 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跟前面部件之间的衔接感觉很糟糕，大概这样？起码让第一个滑条和前面的滑条平行。
SPOILER
00:51:035 (1) - 中间偏左加个白点。略微加一点弧度会更好
01:26:352 (5) - 叠到01:25:212 (2) - 上，然后01:26:731 (6) - 放到x372 y184? 觉得这样的Flow应该会更好。

[Insane]
HP5? 考虑+1或是+2，没必要这么送分。

除了我觉得有些空的节奏有一点点奇怪，其他应该没有什么特别危险的地方，射颗星吧。好运

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-18T14:50:03+00:00

Euphoria wrote:
应援

Insane
00:03:186 (2,3,4) - ds没看懂没有关系
00:06:035 (2) - 建议和1放近一点然后和3再远一点感觉这样比较顺
00:06:415 (4) - 没什么音建议ds1.0 为啥;w;
00:06:795 (5,6,7) - 往右偏感觉好一点顺着flow来的
00:12:491 (2,3,4) - 建议统一ds 不必要
00:19:896 (2) - 这个不和3包么不用这差距有点大了
00:23:314 (3,4) - ctrl+G 没懂
00:24:833 (4,5,1) - 建议统一ds
00:26:921 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:010 (2,3) - ^ 没必要
00:50:276 (3) - ctrl+G 好

hard
00:58:630 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 为啥不统一一下ds 跟着感觉来的
01:26:731 (6) - 这个是重音的话推荐往远了放诶，而不是中间好

没什么营养的水摸，骗个kd好了

Misure wrote:
M4M
摸图水平太差...
凑乎看吧，全盘无视也无所谓啦>.< w
[Insane]

00:00:957 (1,2) - 没包好 fixed
00:00:957 (1,2,3,1) - 间距不等是故意的？前面DS ×1.2 后面×1.1 感觉没事而且有变速
00:07:744 (1,2,3,4) - 这种往返我个人不是很喜欢还好
00:09:358 (1) - 感觉这个转盘盖掉了很多有趣的节奏我觉得这里还是转盘最可以烘托气氛
00:13:820 - 虽然好像有个音，但听来听去还是感觉这拍空掉比较好，前面换成滑条加note 先keep吧
00:26:921 (3) - 配合前面我感觉这个flow向右好些但是往右没有地方了呀0.0
00:30:719 (4,1) - 我比较偏向stack 位置就不知道了不需要的感觉
00:32:997 (2,3) - 包（还是说故意的？）稍微改了一下不知道可不可以
00:37:174 - 加个note 这里完全是跟背景没有管vocal
00:50:276 (3) - 这位置感觉不好尤其vocal还突出了一下前面的摸改了
00:53:124 (2,3) - 为何我感觉应该stack 这无所谓吧
01:07:744 (1) - 弯点好些吧稍微弯了一些
01:18:377 (1,2) - 这个形状的flow接后面感觉不太好能告诉我怎么改吗;w;
01:19:896 (9) - 可以再高点好
[Hard]

01:22:554 (3,4,5) - 有点微妙...都再弯点？咦?

...这摸得有点水啊，本身就不擅长摸图，而且也不会打这种低速各种空拍的的图，看不懂的说
但是感觉整体很流畅
嗯祝好运啦谢谢~

Frey wrote:
ZZZZZ，刚睡一觉起来

[General]
统一''Widescreen Support'',只是为了严谨的话好

[Insane]
HP5? 考虑+1或是+2，没必要这么送分。 +1了
除了我觉得有些空的节奏有一点点奇怪，其他应该没有什么特别危险的地方，射颗星吧。好运 确实开始的地方那么平静不太好做但是我感觉做得没有什么问题

thanks~~

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-06-19T01:35:51+00:00

m4m

[General]

timing不对啊，你确定你timing是准的？专业乐队不会这样变速的

[Ren's Easy]

00:17:807 (2) - 这里应该nc作为新的section，后面的cancle，听音乐以此类推

[Ren's Normal]

00:40:402 (3,1) - nazi，碰了
00:49:516 (4) - 我觉得这里更适合直线滑条，音乐是两个单独的鼓

[Hard]

00:07:174 (4,5,1) - 真正有1/4鼓点的是从红线开始的三个snare drum，你这个显得有点overmap而且听起来比较奇怪，虽然是ins但是其实ins是1/2然而你不是，我建议你还是跟鼓点
00:58:630 (6) - 丑，而且放这里我觉得不怎么合适，这里没什么特殊需求
01:19:516 (4,5,1) - 其实不好看，干脆全1.3

[Insane]

00:01:565 (2) - 几把滑条overused，dqed
00:03:794 (4,5,6,1) - 我要你查timing的原因就是这个，因为我在滑条跟连打之间很清楚的听到了5个音而你这个只有4个
00:53:883 (3,4,5,6) - 这好明显的overmap，我什么都没听到啊

没什么大问题啊，觉得ready了可以叫我

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

sodarose 2015-06-19T05:13:49+00:00

from req

人格改ID了 tags那里是不是要改一下好好的ren改什么ID

[Insane]
00:19:326 (1,3) - 没Stack是故意的吗？
01:18:377 (1) - 尾巴那里可以弯一弯，现在看起来像是完全直的

[Hard]
00:26:921 (4,5,6) - 感觉这样放不是很顺手，我喜欢放上面。不过这个影响不大
00:42:871 (3) - 这个Blanket好像歪了
00:58:630 (6) - 结尾那里拉的不是很好可以微调下

NM好像很多变距不知道有没有影响

原来楼上是李师傅
都是神马坡看不出什么了
美丽

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-19T06:09:13+00:00

Mackenzie wrote:
m4m
[General]
timing不对啊，你确定你timing是准的？专业乐队不会这样变速的我找别人check一下
[Hard]
00:07:174 (4,5,1) - 真正有1/4鼓点的是从红线开始的三个snare drum，你这个显得有点overmap而且听起来比较奇怪，虽然是ins但是其实ins是1/2然而你不是，我建议你还是跟鼓点和后面保持一致去掉了这里的单点
00:58:630 (6) - 丑，而且放这里我觉得不怎么合适，这里没什么特殊需求改了
01:19:516 (4,5,1) - 其实不好看，干脆全1.3 全1.1了
[Insane]
00:01:565 (2) - 几把滑条overused，dqed 爷爷我倒是觉得还好
00:03:794 (4,5,6,1) - 我要你查timing的原因就是这个，因为我在滑条跟连打之间很清楚的听到了5个音而你这个只有4个 check完了timing再看看怎么改吧
00:53:883 (3,4,5,6) - 这好明显的overmap，我什么都没听到啊改了
没什么大问题啊，觉得ready了可以叫我

sodarose wrote:
from req

人格改ID了 tags那里是不是要改一下好好的ren改什么ID 好

[Insane]
00:19:326 (1,3) - 没Stack是故意的吗？是不过改了
01:18:377 (1) - 尾巴那里可以弯一弯，现在看起来像是完全直的改了个炫酷的形状

[Hard]
00:26:921 (4,5,6) - 感觉这样放不是很顺手，我喜欢放上面。不过这个影响不大好
00:42:871 (3) - 这个Blanket好像歪了改了
00:58:630 (6) - 结尾那里拉的不是很好可以微调下改了形状

原来楼上是李师傅
都是神马坡看不出什么了
美丽

thanks!!!

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2015-06-19T12:45:13+00:00

我还是觉得4秒的地方是1/6

[Insane]
01:05:276 (4) - 这个调整一下到x168 y48左右吧，现在这个样子没有重上位置也不太好
01:16:288 (3) - 顺时针旋转10°试试，应该好看一些。

我……第一次感觉摸不出东西来……
就这样拿去rank非常好。

[Hard]
00:20:466 (3) - x280 y324然后00:20:845 (1) - x160 y384 00:21:605 (2,3,1) - 这三个再调整右边一点吧（…………
00:23:124 (2) - ctrl+G

[Easy]
01:15:339 (1,2) - 这种可以问一下吗，我觉得有点危险……
00:37:554 (3) - 第一个白点的弧度稍微大一点

[Normal]
00:30:529 (2) - 方向朝正上或者偏右上会更好
01:16:478 (3,4) - 还是改滑条吧..

为什么不可以直接rank
为什么不可以直接rank
为什么不可以直接rank
为什么不可以直接rank
为什么不可以直接rank

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-06-19T14:22:29+00:00

Misure

Misure wrote:
[Ren's Normal]

~~00:22:744 (3,4) - 感觉容易读错把前一个滑条尾的音读成后一个滑条头的音（至少我只是看就看错了）~~
看了后面感觉都是类似的节奏，果然是我的原因Orz 读不懂这种节奏的图看不懂为啥会读错。。
[Ren's Easy]

00:03:186 (2) - 这个压红线...我觉得压前后哪跟白线都好点... 先不改，跟的vocal
00:12:871 (1) - ^ ^，而且这还有个钢琴音

Mackenzie

Mackenzie wrote:
[Ren's Easy]
00:17:807 (2) - 这里应该nc作为新的section，后面的cancle，听音乐以此类推唔，这里我理解，但是好难改，改了前后就乱了，但是后面的感觉没什么问题啊，先放着
[Ren's Normal]
00:40:402 (3,1) - nazi，碰了好，然后我改了一大片
00:49:516 (4) - 我觉得这里更适合直线滑条，音乐是两个单独的鼓好

Hakurei Yoru

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
[Easy]
01:15:339 (1,2) - 这种可以问一下吗，我觉得有点危险…… 为啥危险
00:37:554 (3) - 第一个白点的弧度稍微大一点那太几把了，会被干

[Normal]
00:30:529 (2) - 方向朝正上或者偏右上会更好不太好
01:16:478 (3,4) - 还是改滑条吧.. Normal想难点

update:

Karen's Easy

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Title:Ring of Fortune
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ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
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Version:Karen's Normal
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我用屁股想了一会，觉得还是用我现在的名字做diff名好了

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2015-06-19T15:20:43+00:00

00:04:137 (1) - 我一更就看见没对准时间轴？

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-20T11:38:37+00:00

@Hakurei Yoru: all fixed including the unsnapped slider. thanks!!

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2015-06-20T14:40:18+00:00

As requested
Video http://puu.sh/iw2Vm/b651a23f3c.flv
Hopefully to see this get ranked soon

Good luck~

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-06-20T16:12:45+00:00

No Kds
did some recheck with Crystal,fixed some small issues
waiting for Karen to apply the changes

irc

08:37 Mackenzie: 那来irc
08:37 Crystal: 厚
08:40 Mackenzie: 00:22:755 (3,4) - 
08:40 Mackenzie: normal
08:40 Mackenzie: 我觉得遮的太重
08:40 Crystal: 啊
08:41 Crystal: 我思考一下
08:41 Mackenzie: 实在不行叫夏恋改
08:41 Crystal: 夏恋说感觉不遮
08:42 Crystal: 我试着该协议啊
08:42 Crystal: 改写一些
08:42 Crystal: 改一下
08:42 Mackenzie: 这都遮一半了还不遮
08:43 Mackenzie: 避免滑条体的overlap啊
08:43 Crystal: 这个先留着吧 等明天夏恋来改
08:43 Crystal: 因为我也不知道怎样改
08:44 Mackenzie: 01:19:337 (3) - 
08:44 Mackenzie: http://puu.sh/iw6gt/63b9a4a9a3.jpg
08:44 Mackenzie: 我觉得这样更好
08:44 Crystal: 的确
08:45 Mackenzie: vocal也是两端
08:45 Mackenzie: ins也是
08:46 Crystal: 好 改了
08:46 Mackenzie: 接下来hard
08:46 Mackenzie: 00:42:502 (2,3) - 
08:47 Mackenzie: http://puu.sh/iw6qg/fa3ee25c6d.jpg
08:47 Mackenzie: 考虑这样下？
08:47 Mackenzie: 因为你前面都跟的vocal
08:48 Mackenzie: 应该是说这里vocal比较明显吧
08:48 Crystal: 这里的鼓是一分的 我比较想凸显鼓
08:49 Crystal: 而且改成那样的话 00:42:882 就空出来了
08:51 Mackenzie: 也行
08:52 Mackenzie: 01:24:654 (1) - 
08:52 Mackenzie: 考虑加入1/4？
08:52 Crystal: 那样的话00:07:185 (4) - 也要加吧
08:52 Crystal: 可能和insane 节奏区分一下比较好0.0
08:53 Mackenzie: 0.0
08:53 Mackenzie: 也有道理
08:53 Crystal: www
08:55 Mackenzie: 01:11:932 (3,4) - 
08:55 Mackenzie: insane
08:55 Mackenzie: 这个叠不怎么合曲啊
08:56 Mackenzie: 两个鼓的音效是不一样的
08:57 Crystal: 有道理
08:58 Crystal: 怎样改好一些呀
09:00 Mackenzie: 我吃个饭你等下
09:00 Mackenzie: 真是不好意思
09:00 Crystal: 好
09:00 Crystal: 没事
09:02 Mackenzie: 以吃完
09:02 Crystal: 那我也先去洗个澡
09:02 Crystal: 好 那我不洗了
09:02 Mackenzie: gg
09:03 Crystal: 咦?
09:03 Mackenzie: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3279464
09:04 Mackenzie: 可以这样？
09:04 Mackenzie: 或者你觉得怎样跳好
09:04 Crystal: 看起来挺爽的
09:05 Crystal: 好
09:05 Crystal: 这个好
09:05 Mackenzie: 其他没什么问题
09:05 Mackenzie: 你有metadata prove吗
09:05 Crystal: 我找了球哥 但是球哥还没来
09:05 Mackenzie: combo color能不能麻烦用4个
09:06 Crystal: 等明天吧 正好夏恋也要改
09:06 Crystal: 好
09:06 Mackenzie: 哦对，音效我看看
09:07 Mackenzie: 吧soft hitclap后面多余的一堆空白剪掉吧
09:07 Crystal: 这个要找下别人 明天改吧
09:08 Crystal: 手上暂时没工具
09:08 Mackenzie: bg 1023x168
09:08 Mackenzie: 。。。
09:08 Mackenzie: 找个人改成1024吧
09:08 Mackenzie: 768*
09:09 Crystal: 好 我再重新裁一下..

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2015-06-21T02:36:51+00:00

sorry这两天实在是太忙看来是准备泡了还需要摸吗

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-06-21T04:44:58+00:00

biu

osu file format v14

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MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-06-21T05:42:32+00:00

I personally is very against speed ranking
but seems like i have no reason to stop this from ranking
good job crystal, you deserve my bubble
bubbled

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-21T05:46:18+00:00

really thank you Mackenzie :3

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-06-24T00:52:55+00:00

很早就想做这首了，但又懒得再开个set。。。刚刚做完一个light insane不知道给谁好了。。。

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-06-24T04:40:43+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
很早就想做这首了，但又懒得再开个set。。。刚刚做完一个light insane不知道给谁好了。。。

泡图就不接新diff了 lol

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-06-24T10:15:45+00:00

well, the bg is low quality (blurry, an artifact of poor resizing perhaps), 4:3 (while the original was nearly 16:9), and almost half of the .osz's data (1.8 MB of the 4 MB archive).

of course, none of those are unrank-level issues, even if they are gross. but still, it seems better to fix it before it's qualified.

this image is a bit too tall to be resized straight to 1366x768, so either a bit has to be cropped off the top or off the bottom. I made one of each.

cropped off bottom (loses the artist's sig)

cropped off top (loses "plasticmemories" text)

no kds

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-06-24T12:59:49+00:00

[general]

using this as your normal-hitnormal would allow for a lot more audible feedback. (it's your current file + a lower volume soft-hitnormal)
moving your offsets by like -6 sounds better. also omitting the first bar line for the second red line is a good idea
ringating's background is pretty cooooooooool right yes

[easy]

00:14:780 (3) - current sliderend is snapped to nothing. ending it 1/2 earlier would be cool http://puu.sh/iAPK5/4fda03ff86.jpg
00:03:578 (3,1) - using 1/2 spacing on an easy at this bpm isn't really acceptable as seen in some recent dqs, especially when this is the only one. would be better to just shorten (3) by 1/2 http://puu.sh/iAPEL/9f246eba8d.jpg
00:54:274 (1,2,3) - should really have the red tick at 00:55:603 - covered since it's more powerful than the downbeat. you covered it fine at 01:07:755 (2) - and the music is pretty much the same so yea

[normal]

00:00:957 (1,2,3) - both of these are 1/1 gaps within the same section, so their spacing should be pretty much the same. right now 2->3 is way bigger than 1->2.
00:03:768 (4,1) - 00:06:616 (5,1) - 0.8x spacing right
00:49:527 (4,5,6) - a lot easier to see which object comes next if both are not underneath the slidertail of (4). ideally only (5) should be. do i need a picture i guess so lol http://puu.sh/iAQlf/d0d4ba2638.jpg
01:08:325 (4,5,1) - 01:25:603 (3,5) - having objects fade in while underneath other objects isn't really the best thing to do on normals for readability reasons. there's countless options of what you can do aside from these two overlapping locations, such as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296008 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296014 being possibilities (although you can find something better probably)
01:16:860 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - whole section here is pretty squished + 01:17:809 (7,1) - is missing the usual 0.8x 1/2 spacing. arranging stuff in a way that's not so compact would make it a lot more comfortable and allow for expected spacing

[hard]