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15:54 Frostcage: 00:11:499 - shouldn't be double
15:54 Valentrixe: nice catch btw
15:55 Valentrixe: my friend says it fine lol
15:55 Valentrixe: kay i'm delete those 2
15:55 Frostcage: not a ghost note but 00:22:115 - I'd make one of those notes an ln :3
15:55 Frostcage: a short one tho
15:56 Valentrixe: i already did before
15:56 Valentrixe: it's not compatible with the SV
15:56 Valentrixe: unreadable release
15:56 Frostcage: 00:34:269 (34269|1,34346|2,34423|0,34423|3,34499|1,34576|2,34576|3) - what is this mess
15:57 Valentrixe: probably unaudible
15:57 Valentrixe: but there's still sound there
15:57 Frostcage: unaudible?
15:58 Valentrixe: inaudible*
15:58 Frostcage: that's not what I meant
15:58 Valentrixe: then?
15:58 Frostcage: it doesn't sound like THAT many notes are there..
15:58 Frostcage: I dunno maybe I'm deaf lol
15:58 Frostcage: or really tired.. like usual
15:58 Valentrixe: actually
15:59 Valentrixe: i'm thinking there's 1/6 here
15:59 Valentrixe: 00:34:423 -
15:59 Valentrixe: for piano?
15:59 Valentrixe: dunno
16:00 Frostcage: I hear a note here 00:34:192 - and here 00:34:269 -
16:01 Valentrixe: 00:34:346 - here too
16:02 Frostcage: 01:01:499 (61499|1,61499|3) - make this triplet OR 01:01:961 (61961|3,61961|1) - remove on one note from this
16:02 Valentrixe: still good if i get rid the notes in 00:34:269 - and 00:34:346
16:02 Valentrixe: what do you think?
16:03 Valentrixe: 01:01:961 (61961|3,61961|1) - why should i remove one note in this point?
16:04 Frostcage: I said "OR"
16:04 Frostcage: it's because both of those are different sounds and have the same notes
16:04 Valentrixe: hmm kay
16:05 Valentrixe: changed to triplets then
16:05 Valentrixe: oh wait
16:05 Valentrixe: i'm trying to avoiding any 1/4 jack in this map
16:05 Valentrixe: so..
16:06 Frostcage: it's not really too hard though
16:06 Frostcage: and only one note of jack
16:06 Valentrixe: 01:01:961 (61961|3,61961|1) - i think this one is louder than 01:01:499 (61499|3,61499|1)
16:06 Frostcage: but the finish hitsound changes everything
16:07 Valentrixe: so one note for finish you'd say?
16:07 Frostcage: huh
16:08 Frostcage: no I'm saying 3 notes for finish
16:08 Frostcage: like a triple
16:08 Valentrixe: i mean adding one note for finish
16:08 Valentrixe: x'D
16:08 Frostcage: oh >< yeah
16:08 *Valentrixe slap Frosty with a slice of bacon
16:09 Frostcage: I think it should be on 1 though
16:09 Frostcage: and thanks for yummy snack
16:09 Frostcage: 01:09:499 (69499|0) - remove that
16:09 Frostcage: little ghost
16:10 Valentrixe: uhh
16:10 Frostcage: 01:19:346 (79346|2) - same here
16:10 Valentrixe: okay
16:11 Frostcage: 01:32:730 (92730|2,92807|0,92884|2,92961|0,93038|3,93115|0,93192|3,93269|0,93346|2,93423|0) - what is this
16:12 Valentrixe: i'm trying to suit it with synth
16:12 Frostcage: 01:38:499 (98499|2,98576|1,98653|3,98730|2,98807|1) - and this 01:38:961 (98961|1,99038|2,99115|3,99192|1,99269|2) - and this
16:13 Valentrixe: okay orz
16:13 Valentrixe: so what should i do with them?
16:13 Valentrixe: leave that part empty?
16:14 Frostcage: map them how you mapped everything else
16:15 Valentrixe: LNs ?
16:15 Frostcage: remove all of these, move notes to make patterns, make doubles/trples as necessary
16:15 Frostcage: 01:32:807 (92807|0,92961|0,93115|0,93269|0,93423|0) -
16:17 Frostcage: yeah everything is else good. I suck with SV changes so :x
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schwarzvgrune wrote:

move to 1 3 00:04:884 (4884|3,4884|1) -
no reason to keep it the same, pitch of the chord is different.
00:11:038 (11038|1,11038|3,11653|3,11653|0) - change to 1 3, 2 4. for PR and hand balance, current arrangement unreasonable.
00:11:038 (11038|1,11038|3,11653|3,11653|0) - << no reason to put it the same place here, since pitch is different.

00:12:730 - add a note, beat emphasis.
00:15:192 - ^^^
00:14:730 - add for every 4/4 red lines there you can recognise the beat difference. i tried and your diff becomes 1.91 which is still below the 2.00 limit set for RC.

00:17:692 - same reaeson
00:31:961 (31961|0,34423|3) - LN should be snapped until the end, they do not end there.
00:38:115 (38115|2,40576|3) - same
00:41:807 - until 01:01:499 - arrangement is illogical, revamp the whole pattern. you need to take PR into consideration to make it more logical and readable since this is normal and there are not a lot of notes there to be pressed at the same time, which imo, should not be a problem for you to follow PR accurately.
so rearrange.
i'll give you some example.
00:42:730 (42730|0,42884|1,43038|2,43653|1) - should be 2 4 3 2
00:48:576 (48576|0) - should be 4, etc.
00:49:192 (49192|1,50423|3) - should be 3, then 2
01:35:346 (95346|3) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance, unreasonable jack at 4
01:40:576 (100576|0,100730|1) - move to 2 3 no reason to jack
00:06:115 (6115|0,6115|3,6730|3,6730|0,7346|0,7346|3) - there is only piano instrument and stream here, its illogical to not include pitch relevancy into consideration when mapping. your current arrangement only take hand balancing and patterning into consideration, please revamp these part to make it much more appropriate and logical.
00:03:653 (3653|2,3653|3,4884|2,4884|3) - this is also illogical, rearrange according to the pitch.
00:08:576 (8576|3,8576|0,9807|3,9807|2) - ^
00:10:038 (10038|3,10269|2) - move to 2 and 4, PR. current arrangement is not logical.
00:11:038 (11038|0,11038|3,11269|1,11499|2,11653|0) - should consistently utilise 2 notes here, same exact emphasis, there is piano chord AND melody here. so readjust.
00:11:653 (11653|0,11961|0,12115|1) - this as well.

00:12:269 (12269|2,12269|3,12730|1,12730|0) - there is that emphasised beat, illogical to only put 2 notes, especially since this is insane, add another note as well to give emphasis.
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2) - LN is consistently 2/4 here, follow only 1 sound,
00:13:499 (13499|0,13807|2,14115|3,14115|1,14269|2,14423|3,14423|0,14576|1) - this is 1 phase, follow them consistently, at the moment you're switching to that 2/4 sustained sound at the middle after those 2 4/4 lns. its inconsistent.

00:14:730 (14730|3,14730|2,15192|1,15192|2,15653|0,15653|1,16115|1,16115|2,16576|3,16576|2) - much better to utilise 2 notes here, the beat justify it. this is also to keep it consistent and reflects the song much more accurately.
00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - same issue, you're not following the sound consistently,
there should be an LN here 00:17:499 - so add one.

00:17:192 (17192|0,17653|3,17961|0,18269|3) - this is not following anything, or you're mixing them up, revamp this LN, this is what i would define as LN abuse. please follow whatever it is that you're trying to follow accurately.

00:19:884 (19884|2) - inconsistent, change this into LN. unreasonable LN placement that you have now, why only 00:19:653 (19653|3,20115|0) - ? the sustained pitch continues.

00:21:423 (21423|2,21499|2) - 1/4 jack at 195? well this is 4star so i dont mind, but just ask others for clarification.

in which case if you decide to keep that jack, then
00:31:961 - use 3 nnotes here, obvious phase change and emphasised beat, no reason not to use 3 notes. this will make 1 note pattern into jack, but as you did that previously there is no reason for you not to do that as well here,
for example here, in which you follow the emphasise correctly 01:35:884 (95884|2,95961|1,95961|2,95961|0) -

00:32:115 (32115|1,32115|3,32269|0,32269|3,32423|0,32423|2,32576|0,32576|3,32730|1,32730|3,32884|0,32884|3,33038|0,33038|2) - bad mapping, there are 2 main sounds here, the 4/4 beat and the 2/4 pitch. why you use 2 notes for everything? obviously lines where the beat exist should have more notes. current arrangement only take into consideratioon pattern and hand balance, and the emphasise is completely ignored, revamp this.
00:34:730 (34730|0,34730|3,34884|2,34884|0,35038|1,35038|3,35192|0,35192|2,35346|1,35346|0,35499|1,35499|2) - same reason as above.
00:37:038 (37038|0,37038|3,37192|3,37192|1,37346|0,37346|2,37499|1,37499|3,37653|0,37653|2,37807|3,37807|0,37961|2,37961|1) - same reason as above.
00:39:423 (39423|1,39499|3,39499|2,39653|1,39653|3,39807|3,39807|0,39961|0,39961|2,40115|1,40115|0,40269|0,40269|2,40423|0,40423|3) - ^^^^


00:33:192 - should use 2 notes, just like 00:33:499 (33499|3,33499|1,33807|1,33807|2,34115|3,34115|2) -
that LN is following other sound, doesn't represent the beat, so keep it consistent.
00:35:653 - same reason as above.
00:38:115 - ^^^
00:40:576 - ^

00:41:807 - utilise 3 notes, you jack at earlier pattern, no reason not to jack here, this also gives emphasis. the phase change here with that emphasised beat.

00:42:423 - should be only 1 note, this beat is much fainter than 00:43:346 (43346|3,43346|1,43961|0,43961|3) -
keep your pattern consistent, this is still in one phase.
00:42:884 (42884|1) - wrong, delete. no pitch here. there is that faint BG instrument that you are NOT following. thus no reason to add this here, the one that you're following is the MAIN instrument.
00:47:807 (47807|1) - same reason as above.
00:52:730 (52730|1) - ^^ same reason.
or if you decide to follow it, then make it into 1/4 LN, it should be staccati there. not full 2/4 length.
for example, that pitch, is of different length with this one 00:54:423 (54423|1) - . so you shouldnt map both with 2/4 LNs.


00:42:730 (42730|3) - this is a 2/4 staccati, there should not be another 2/4 LN after this, check your LN carefully across the whole diffs, you abuse the LNs a lot.
furthermore since your LN follows that sustained instrument, you should have take PR into consideration. current arrangement ignored PR alltogether. it doesn't make much sense to me. and also there are not a lot of notes (i.e. note density is not high on this phase) so there is no reason for you not to follow the pitch accurately.

00:44:884 (44884|2,45192|1) - jack them for PR, make the lower LNs into 3/4 instead of 4/4. this is the correct snap. this is 4star+ insane, there should not be a reason to simplify the pitch snap for simplicity since 4star is not simple at all.

01:02:423 (62423|0) - what are you following? the BG piano chord? if yes then the end is wrong, should be 4/4 line longer, until the next chord spam.
at 01:06:423 - here
01:07:346 (67346|3) - same reason
01:12:269 (72269|0) - ^^^
01:17:192 (77192|3) - ^^

inappropriate overmap, there are a lot of ghost notes from this point onward
01:21:192 - until 01:28:576 - . i will point out to you SOME of them.
01:21:269 (81269|1) -
01:21:576 (81576|2) -
01:21:884 (81884|1) -
01:22:192 (82192|3) -
01:22:499 (82499|2) -
and so on. should be 3 notes stream. not full 1/4 stream.


01:31:038 - new phase, no reason not to use 3 notes, add to 1. (and also emphasised beat)
01:31:499 (91499|3,91499|0,91499|1) - << exactly the same with this here so keep it consistent.
01:42:115 - add a note to 1 for phase change and beat emphasis
01:42:423 (102423|0,102423|2,102576|2,102576|0) - should have 3 notes in total. same emphasis as
01:42:884 (102884|0,102884|1,102884|3) -
01:44:269 (104269|2,104269|1,104423|3,104423|0,104576|2,104576|1,104576|3) - 3 notes, beat emphasis.

01:47:038 - 3 notes, new phase and emphasised beat.
01:49:499 - ^^^^
01:50:730 - ^^^

01:51:961 (111961|0,111961|1,112269|2,112269|3,112423|3,112423|1,112730|1,112730|0) - should have 3 notes, beat emphsis.
01:53:653 (113653|3,113653|1,113961|0,113961|2,114115|2,114115|1,114269|0,114269|3) - 3 notes
01:54:423 (114423|2,114423|1,114423|0,114730|0,114730|2,114730|3,114884|3,114884|0,114884|2) - like this here

01:55:192 (115192|3,115192|0,115192|2,115192|1,115499|3,115499|1,115499|2,115499|0) - inconsistent and unreasonable, the pitch raise, but no increase in emphasis, no reason to utilise 4. 3 is enough just like the other nnotes before and after. revamp.
01:56:730 (116730|1,116730|3,116884|3,116884|0) - should be 3 notes, keep it consistent.

accepted all your mods, thank you
my map improved a lot
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schwarzvgrune wrote:

your beginning is great, you take into account the difference in chord pitch and differentiate your 2 notes chord placement. :)
00:12:269 - how about utilising 3 notes? this is a new phase with emphasised beat. much more appropriate imo.
00:17:192 - ^same reason
00:21:346 (21346|0,21499|1) - wrong snap. should be 3/4 x 2. not 2/4 and 4/4. rearrrange.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3,22115|0) - there are only LNs here, so take PR into consideration. current arrangement only takes care of hand balancing which is, illogical.
00:20:884 (20884|1,21115|2,21346|0,21499|1,21730|2,21961|3) - so change this to,
3 2 4 1 2 3
00:22:423 - new phase with emphasised beat, use 3 notes to signify. be careful with your emphasise, please take note of that.

00:31:961 - new phase, add to 4, should have 3 notes here to signify
00:41:807 - same reason
00:43:961 (43961|2) - move to 1, no reason to jack at 3 for 3times
00:48:269 (48269|0) - move to 4, same reason
00:51:653 - add a note to 1, phase change with emphasised beat.

00:54:423 (54423|2,54730|2,55346|2,55653|2,56269|2,56576|2) - pattern very heavy on 3 and 4, rearrange to make them more balanced.
00:58:115 (58115|2,58423|2,58730|2,59038|2) - rearrange, no reason to do this. hand balancing is not very well spread in this phase.
00:59:192 (59192|1,59346|1,59499|1,59807|1,59961|1,60115|1) - this is also unreasonable, rearrange your pattern.
01:00:653 (60653|1,60807|1,60961|1,61115|1,61269|1,61423|1) - this too, you leave 4 column blank, rearrange for balance.
01:01:499 - phase change, ought to have 3 notes to denote and signify
01:25:499 (85499|3,85653|2,85807|1,85961|2,86115|1,86115|3,86269|2,86423|1) - 1 is empty, rearrange, not very balanced.

01:31:038 - phase change with emphasised beat, 3 notes ought to be here.
01:35:961 - ^^^
01:38:423 - ^^
01:42:115 - should be 3 notes here same reason
01:43:807 (103807|3,103807|0,103807|1) - unreasonable, should be 2, you've been using two for the whole phase. the emphasis is the same, either use 3 for everything or use 2, and only use 3 for the place where i mentioned (more emphasised because of 4 x 4/4 beat signifier)
01:53:653 (113653|0,113653|3,113653|2) - ^

01:47:038 - add to 3 notes here
01:48:115 (108115|2) - move to 2 for hand balance
01:49:499 - add to 1, phase change, should be emphasised with 3 notes.
01:50:115 - add a note, inconsistnet with the rest of the pattern.

01:56:884 - phase change, should be 3 notes, rearrange.

01:57:961 (117961|1) - mvoe to 3 for hand balance.
01:59:346 (119346|2,119499|2,119653|2,119807|2,119961|3,120115|3,120269|0,120269|3,120423|0,120576|0) - bad chord pattern, rearrange everything. very heavy on jack that is unneccessary.



accepted all your mods, thank youuu ;w; <3
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Hi! Mod from M4M request!!

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[General]
BG: 1366x768 No problem
MP3: 128kbps No problem
Spread: Fine
AI mod: Seems No problem
Audio and Hitsound: Just "Hit" sound haven't anything sound. It can be unrankable issue. Hitsound should can listen.
Timing: Seems good
Etc: Please turn off Widescreen support If you don't use SB
HCH's Hard has problem about HP and OD. Hp lower than Normal. I suggest make this OD:7.5 HP:7.5 or OD:7 HP:8 remember. It can be unrankable issue too.

[Normal]
00:14:730 ~ 00:16:884 - It's too hard in Normal. too heavy in 2.3 column.

00:19:423 - You can add note in here. has a sound.

00:31:961 ~ 00:36:884 - This part is too boring. you can add notes in white line.

00:44:730 (44730|1,45269|1) - Please don't think only pitch. It's kinda hard.

01:41:653 (101653|3) - How about change to LN? And finish that 01:41:807 - Here.

01:45:346 ~ 01:47:961 - 4 column seems lonely.

[HCH's Hard]

Patterns are repeat periodically. It will make players boring. ;w; Please consider it

00:16:884 - How about this? It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419629

00:31:038 (31038|1) - Move to 4 for balance.

01:01:192 - It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419636

01:50:730 - 2 notes pattern should be start in here. 01:49:499 -

01:50:730 - 01:51:346 - Why just used only two note? Same pitch with 01:49:499

[Insane]
This diff has some unnecessary LNs. Please becareful Some peoples think this overmapping ;w; Please consider it
00:19:346 (19346|3,19423|2,19499|1,19576|0) - It don't have to LN. Please change to just NM notes.

00:20:884 ~ 00:22:115 - About this pattern. 1.4 ->23 pattern should be start in here 00:21:499 (21499|0,21499|1) - It's very awkward If you play this. So... 00:21:499 (21499|1) - How about move to 4?

01:27:346 - This timing has some change the flow.

01:51:346 - Add one has finish sound.

02:01:192 (121192|3,121269|0,121346|3,121423|0,121499|2,121576|1,121653|2,121730|0) - It seems unnecessary LN.

It seems Nice map :3

Good luck
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_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi! Mod from M4M request!!

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[General]
BG: 1366x768 No problem
MP3: 128kbps No problem
Spread: Fine
AI mod: Seems No problem
Audio and Hitsound: Just "Hit" sound haven't anything sound. It can be unrankable issue. Hitsound should can listen. | we already discuss this in IRC
Timing: Seems good
Etc: Please turn off Widescreen support If you don't use SB | okay
HCH's Hard has problem about HP and OD. Hp lower than Normal. I suggest make this OD:7.5 HP:7.5 or OD:7 HP:8 remember. It can be unrankable issue too. | okay

[Normal]
00:14:730 ~ 00:16:884 - It's too hard in Normal. too heavy in 2.3 column. | revamp this part

00:19:423 - You can add note in here. has a sound. | i think it's too hard for NM, so i'll keep this for now

00:31:961 ~ 00:36:884 - This part is too boring. you can add notes in white line. | added

00:44:730 (44730|1,45269|1) - Please don't think only pitch. It's kinda hard. | it's not that hard, i'll keep this

01:41:653 (101653|3) - How about change to LN? And finish that 01:41:807 - Here. | changed

01:45:346 ~ 01:47:961 - 4 column seems lonely. | it's not lonely anymore ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[Insane]
This diff has some unnecessary LNs. Please becareful Some peoples think this overmapping ;w; Please consider it | okay probably you right
00:19:346 (19346|3,19423|2,19499|1,19576|0) - It don't have to LN. Please change to just NM notes. | changed

00:20:884 ~ 00:22:115 - About this pattern. 1.4 ->23 pattern should be start in here 00:21:499 (21499|0,21499|1) - It's very awkward If you play this. So... 00:21:499 (21499|1) - How about move to 4? | great! changed

01:27:346 - This timing has some change the flow. | ohh you right

01:51:346 - Add one has finish sound. | added

02:01:192 (121192|3,121269|0,121346|3,121423|0,121499|2,121576|1,121653|2,121730|0) - It seems unnecessary LN. | deleted

It seems Nice map :3 thank you :P

Good luck

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00:41:961 - add note to 3 | why? no
00:42:576 - add note to 2 and 4 | ^
00:43:192 - add note to 3 | ^
00:43:499 - add note to 3 | ^
00:43:807 - add note to 2 | ^
00:44:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:44:423 - add note to 2 | ^
00:44:730 (44730|1) - kalau bisa end nya di 00:45:192 tapi sebelum itu pindahin 00:45:269 (45269|1) - startnya ke 00:45:346 | itu udah bener tempat nya, coba aku tanya pendapat dari modder lain
00:45:038 - add note to 3 | no
00:45:653 - add note to 3 | ^
00:45:961 - add note to 4 | ^
00:46:269 - add note to 3 | ^
00:46:884 - add note to 3 | ^
00:47:192 - add note to 1 | ^
00:47:499 - add note to 1 | ^
00:48:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:48:423 - add note to 4 | ^
00:48:730 - add note to 4 | ^
00:49:038 - add note to 4 | ^
00:49:346 - add note to 3 | ^
00:49:653 - add note to 1 | ^
00:49:961 - add note to 1 | ^
00:50:269 - add note to 3 | ^
00:50:576 - add note to 3 | ^
00:50:884 - add note to 4 | ^
00:51:423 - remove | why?
00:51:576 - remove | ^
00:51:807 - add note to 2 | no
00:52:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:52:423 - add note to 2 | ^
00:53:038 - add note to 3 | ^
00:52:884 (52884|0) - pindahin end nya ke 00:53:346 | ^
00:53:384 (53384|1) - pindahin startnya ke - 00:53:346 | ^
00:53:653 - add note to 3 | ^
00:53:961 - add note to 4 | ^
00:54:269 - add note to 4 | ^
00:54:884 - add note to 4 | ^
00:55:192 - add note to 4 | ^
00:55:499 - add note to 4 | ^
00:55:807 - add note to 3 | ^
00:56:115 - add note to 2 | ^
00:56:423 - add note to 1 | ^
00:56:730 - add note to 2 | ^
00:57:038 - add note to 4 | ^
00:57:346 - add note to 4 | ^
00:57:653 - add note to 3 | ^
00:57:961 - add note to 3 | ^
00:58:269 - add note to 2 | ^
00:58:576 - add note to 1 | ^
as mastah said:
00:20 Rido: kalo ngemap jgn dimasukin semua elemen2nya
00:20 Rido: kadang2 itu bikin map bosenin

thank you for the mod, but at least give the proper reason with your mod kay ;)
waiting huwat for update :|
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Hi, Dari Queueku ;)

4K Key : |1|2|3|4|


just little mod NM, plus HD dan Insane belum bisa aku mod (masih belajar kaka :) )

00:37:038 (37038|0) - hapus, ngga ada suara sama sekali disini
00:39:499 (39499|3) - ^
00:44:730 (44730|1) - move to 1
00:48:576 (48576|2) - move to 4
01:44:884 (104884|1,105038|2) - ctrl+J


semoga membantu dan GL~~
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Hi, Dari Queueku ;)

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just little mod NM, plus HD dan Insane belum bisa aku mod (masih belajar kaka :) ) | okay

00:37:038 (37038|0) - hapus, ngga ada suara sama sekali disini | synth nya jelas di sana
00:39:499 (39499|3) - ^ | ^
00:44:730 (44730|1) - move to 1 | uhh sebener nya ini buat pitch, tapi yasudahlah, banyak yang protes. moved
00:48:576 (48576|2) - move to 4 | okay
01:44:884 (104884|1,105038|2) - ctrl+J | kay


semoga membantu dan GL~~ | makasi
updated
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_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi! Mod from M4M request!!

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[General]
BG: 1366x768 No problem
MP3: 128kbps No problem
Spread: Fine
AI mod: Seems No problem
Audio and Hitsound: Just "Hit" sound haven't anything sound. It can be unrankable issue. Hitsound should can listen.
Timing: Seems good
Etc: Please turn off Widescreen support If you don't use SB
HCH's Hard has problem about HP and OD. Hp lower than Normal. I suggest make this OD:7.5 HP:7.5 or OD:7 HP:8 remember. It can be unrankable issue too.

[Normal]
00:14:730 ~ 00:16:884 - It's too hard in Normal. too heavy in 2.3 column.

00:19:423 - You can add note in here. has a sound.

00:31:961 ~ 00:36:884 - This part is too boring. you can add notes in white line.

00:44:730 (44730|1,45269|1) - Please don't think only pitch. It's kinda hard.

01:41:653 (101653|3) - How about change to LN? And finish that 01:41:807 - Here.

01:45:346 ~ 01:47:961 - 4 column seems lonely.

[HCH's Hard]

Patterns are repeat periodically. It will make players boring. ;w; Please consider it

00:16:884 - How about this? It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419629

00:31:038 (31038|1) - Move to 4 for balance.

01:01:192 - It's more be unaffected. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3419636

01:50:730 - 2 notes pattern should be start in here. 01:49:499 -

01:50:730 - 01:51:346 - Why just used only two note? Same pitch with 01:49:499

[Insane]
This diff has some unnecessary LNs. Please becareful Some peoples think this overmapping ;w; Please consider it
00:19:346 (19346|3,19423|2,19499|1,19576|0) - It don't have to LN. Please change to just NM notes.

00:20:884 ~ 00:22:115 - About this pattern. 1.4 ->23 pattern should be start in here 00:21:499 (21499|0,21499|1) - It's very awkward If you play this. So... 00:21:499 (21499|1) - How about move to 4?

01:27:346 - This timing has some change the flow.

01:51:346 - Add one has finish sound.

02:01:192 (121192|3,121269|0,121346|3,121423|0,121499|2,121576|1,121653|2,121730|0) - It seems unnecessary LN.

It seems Nice map :3

Good luck
thank youuu ;w; <3
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hai mz m4m nyaa~

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Ranked
00:17:192 - why there's 3 note?
00:12:269 - ^
00:04:884 - http://puu.sh/jiAJB.png better flow
00:25:807 - try this http://puu.sh/jiACm.png better flow
01:00:115 (60115|3) - move to 3
01:00:269 - http://puu.sh/jiAXz.png
01:21:653 (81653|2,81807|3) - ctrl+g
01:23:653 - http://puu.sh/jiB2O.png
01:41:807 (101807|0) - change LN with circle
01:44:884 (104884|1) - move to 1
01:54:730 (114730|2) - move to 4
02:00:576 - http://puu.sh/jiBe6.png
00:22:423 - http://puu.sh/jiC8a.png
00:40:576 (40576|0) - remove
00:51:576 (51576|2,51653|1) - ctrl + g
01:27:346 - http://puu.sh/jiBGZ.png
01:31:653 (91653|2,91807|1) - ctrl + g
01:41:807 (101807|2) - move to 1
01:44:576 (104576|2) - remove?
01:44:884 (104884|1,104884|3) - move 1 column left


Udah segitu :P
Maaf modnya sedikit :(
Bingung gw, map nya udah bagus >,<
Goodluck :D
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Adtw_ wrote:

00:17:192 - why there's 3 note? | karena disuruh /? :'v ok deh diganti~
00:12:269 - ^ | ^
00:04:884 - http://puu.sh/jiAJB.png better flow
00:25:807 - try this http://puu.sh/jiACm.png better flow
01:00:115 (60115|3) - move to 3
01:00:269 - http://puu.sh/jiAXz.png
01:21:653 (81653|2,81807|3) - ctrl+g
01:23:653 - http://puu.sh/jiB2O.png
01:41:807 (101807|0) - change LN with circle
01:44:884 (104884|1) - move to 1
01:54:730 (114730|2) - move to 4
02:00:576 - http://puu.sh/jiBe6.png
MAKASEHH MZZ :**************
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i saw ur mod got rejected by Another Lie
but dont worry i take this map

Mod Requested From:

00:06:115 (6115|0) - move to 2
01:24:115 (84115|3,84269|2,84423|1) - move one column to the left <--
01:25:807 (85807|2,85807|2,85961|3) - ctrl + G
02:00:730 (120730|0,120884|2,121038|0,121192|2,121346|0,121499|2,121653|0) - remove all of this and replace with LN at - 02:00:576 (120576|2) - del and add LN at 1 - 02:01:807 - LN end here

i recommend to you to add some note at LN like
00:49:192 (49192|1) - this part
00:13:807 (13807|3) - what this LN for? it seems ghost to me
00:36:269 (36269|2) - to 1..try to balance it
00:59:653 (59653|3) - to 3
01:00:576 (60576|2,60653|1,60730|0,60807|3,60884|2,60961|1,61038|0) - ctrl + G then 01:01:192 (61192|2) - to 1
02:00:653 (120653|2,120730|1,120807|2,120884|3,120961|2,121038|1,121115|0,121192|1,121269|0,121346|1,121423|2,121499|3,121499|1,121576|2,121576|0,121653|1,121653|3,121730|0,121730|2,121807|1,121807|3) - pattern inconsistent..please rearrange
00:42:730 (42730|3) - true end are 00:42:884 - here
00:42:884 (42884|2) - ^ - 00:43:038 - ^
00:46:423 (46423|3,46576|2) - follow above
00:47:653 (47653|3,47807|2) - ^
etc...
01:21:192 - to - 01:31:038 - please rearrange...pattern out of flow


Good Luck :D
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Mod Requested From:


00:13:807 (13807|3) - what this LN for? it seems ghost to me | nope, thats not a ghost
00:36:269 (36269|2) - to 1..try to balance it | ~
00:59:653 (59653|3) - to 3 | ~
01:00:576 (60576|2,60653|1,60730|0,60807|3,60884|2,60961|1,61038|0) - ctrl + G then 01:01:192 (61192|2) - to 1 | ~
02:00:653 (120653|2,120730|1,120807|2,120884|3,120961|2,121038|1,121115|0,121192|1,121269|0,121346|1,121423|2,121499|3,121499|1,121576|2,121576|0,121653|1,121653|3,121730|0,121730|2,121807|1,121807|3) - pattern inconsistent..please rearrange | ~



Thank youuu ;w;
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Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

i saw ur mod got rejected by Another Lie
but dont worry i take this map

Mod Requested From:

00:42:730 (42730|3) - true end are 00:42:884 - here
00:42:884 (42884|2) - ^ - 00:43:038 - ^
00:46:423 (46423|3,46576|2) - follow above
00:47:653 (47653|3,47807|2) - ^
etc... | they're called staccati, already explained in schwarzvgrune mod
01:21:192 - to - 01:31:038 - please rearrange...pattern out of flow | rearranged
everything else were accepted


Good Luck :D
phew, 1 month delay..
updated with some remaked pattern, hitsounds & background
posted
hi
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[HCH's Hard]
OD=8 (AiMod suggestion)

00:22:423 - add note in column 2 (for beat) and:
* 00:22:576 (22576|1) - move to column 3

00:23:192 (23192|2) - move to column 2

00:24:576 (24576|0) - move to column 2 and:
* 00:24:884 (24884|3) - move to first column
* 00:25:038 (25038|0) - move to column 4

00:26:115 - add note (for beat)
00:26:730 - ^

00:28:576 (28576|3) - move to column 1 and:
* 00:28:730 (28730|2,28884|3) - ctrl+G (only change of position)

00:30:115 (30115|1) - move to colum 4
00:33:807 (33807|1) - ^
00:57:192 (57192|2) - move to column 1

01:31:499 - add note because in this part 01:31:038 - are 3 notes
01:33:499 - ^
01:33:961 - ^
01:34:423 - ^
01:34:884 - ^
01:35:346 - ^
01:36:423 - ^
01:38:884 - ^
01:39:346 - ^

01:46:961 (106961|2) - delete this note (ghost note?)
01:53:499 (113499|1) - ^
01:58:269 (118269|1) - ^

GL :D
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Hi Val!~

here's my mod, sorry for delay xD
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[Normal]
- 00:19:884 - add? cuz you followed this sounds 00:18:576 - etc.
- 00:41:499 - add note, same sound with 00:40:884 - and
- also add here 00:41:807 - cymbals
- 01:22:423 (82423|3,82576|1) - move to left for balance and better flow and also to follow some pitch
- 01:27:807 (87807|0) - move to 2, not same sound with 01:27:499 (87499|0) -
- 01:42:423 (102423|2,102576|2) - move to 4 for balance
- 01:46:576 (106576|1) - move to 1 for balance and pitch
[Hard]
- 00:19:653 (19653|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable flow
- 00:37:346 (37346|2) - move to 2 for balance
- 00:41:807 (41807|2) - move to 4 for comfortability also
- 00:45:807 (45807|2) - move to 4 to reduce the weight in the left side
- 00:52:269 (52269|2) - ^
- 01:30:038 (90038|0,90269|1) - ctrl + h suits better with the pitch
- 01:43:499 (103499|1) - remove, not that loud
- 01:53:346 (113346|2) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:52:576 - 00:47:653 - why this has 2 notes while 00:42:730 - 00:46:423 - has 3 notes? wats the correct one?
- 01:30:038 (90038|0) - move to 3 for pitch
- 01:40:730 (100730|3) - remove not that loud
- 01:48:576 (108576|3) - move to 1 for balance
- 01:50:576 (110576|3) - ^ (jacks at col 4 makes it imbalance
- 01:51:499 (111499|3,111499|0) - make it [23]?
- 01:54:115 (114115|3) - move to 2, different pitch
- 02:01:499 (121499|1) - you can remove this, causing imbalance pattern and too crowded on the left side

Nice Map ^^
Good Luck!
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Janko wrote:

hi
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[HCH's Hard]
OD=8 (AiMod suggestion) | how about 7.5?

00:22:423 - add note in column 2 (for beat) and:
* 00:22:576 (22576|1) - move to column 3

00:23:192 (23192|2) - move to column 2

00:24:576 (24576|0) - move to column 2 and:
* 00:24:884 (24884|3) - move to first column
* 00:25:038 (25038|0) - move to column 4

00:26:115 - add note (for beat)
00:26:730 - ^

00:28:576 (28576|3) - move to column 1 and:
* 00:28:730 (28730|2,28884|3) - ctrl+G (only change of position)

00:30:115 (30115|1) - move to colum 4
00:33:807 (33807|1) - ^
00:57:192 (57192|2) - move to column 1

01:31:499 - add note because in this part 01:31:038 - are 3 notes
01:33:499 - ^
01:33:961 - ^
01:34:423 - ^
01:34:884 - ^
01:35:346 - ^
01:36:423 - ^
01:38:884 - ^
01:39:346 - ^

01:46:961 (106961|2) - delete this note (ghost note?)
01:53:499 (113499|1) - ^
01:58:269 (118269|1) - ^

GL :D
Thank youuuuu ;w;
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-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Val!~

here's my mod, sorry for delay xD
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[Normal]
- 00:19:884 - add? cuz you followed this sounds 00:18:576 - etc.
- 00:41:499 - add note, same sound with 00:40:884 - and
- also add here 00:41:807 - cymbals
- 01:22:423 (82423|3,82576|1) - move to left for balance and better flow and also to follow some pitch
- 01:27:807 (87807|0) - move to 2, not same sound with 01:27:499 (87499|0) -
- 01:42:423 (102423|2,102576|2) - move to 4 for balance
- 01:46:576 (106576|1) - move to 1 for balance and pitch
[Hard]
- 00:19:653 (19653|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable flow
- 00:37:346 (37346|2) - move to 2 for balance
- 00:41:807 (41807|2) - move to 4 for comfortability also
- 00:45:807 (45807|2) - move to 4 to reduce the weight in the left side
- 00:52:269 (52269|2) - ^
- 01:30:038 (90038|0,90269|1) - ctrl + h suits better with the pitch
- 01:43:499 (103499|1) - remove, not that loud
- 01:53:346 (113346|2) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:52:576 - 00:47:653 - why this has 2 notes while 00:42:730 - 00:46:423 - has 3 notes? wats the correct one?
- 01:30:038 (90038|0) - move to 3 for pitch
- 01:40:730 (100730|3) - remove not that loud
- 01:48:576 (108576|3) - move to 1 for balance
- 01:50:576 (110576|3) - ^ (jacks at col 4 makes it imbalance
- 01:51:499 (111499|3,111499|0) - make it [23]?
- 01:54:115 (114115|3) - move to 2, different pitch
- 02:01:499 (121499|1) - you can remove this, causing imbalance pattern and too crowded on the left side

Nice Map ^^
Good Luck!
thank youuuuuuuuu
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