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Oh thanks for the quick check Blocko.
I'll apply them soon - them snaps seem like a problem so I'll probably use a somewhat-polyrhythmic structure in order to not completely butcher the patterns in those sections. (It'll be a lot harder to read but blorp).
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Phenomenal.
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so long :( please rank this
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Blocko wrote:

oh hey


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[Lv.06]
00:46:586 - Follow the synth here? Feels kinda empty if you just use one LN all the way. I think I'll keep this - I want to keep the LN here but adding a synth on 3 columns sounds kinda irregular.

00:49:033 (49033|0) - Turn this into a regular note instead so it's just like Lv.08? It already is, wat

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[Lv.08]
00:46:586 - Same suggestion as on Lv.06. It'd be more fitting for this difficulty to get the hands moving.

01:01:507 (61507|3) - Kinda unsure about this. At 00:51:402 (51402|3) - there's a kick to follow, but on this one, it's a synth that should've started at 01:01:454 (61454|3) - . Fixed!

01:19:665 to 01:20:296 - A bit denser than the build-up from 01:20:296 - onwards. Decrease the density a bit? Done

01:21:559 to 01:22:823 - Maybe you could add a note on 01:21:717 - , 01:21:954 - , 01:22:191 - , and 01:22:428 - so it challenges a bit of reading and playing here, and to make this part more unique from Lv.04 and Lv.06. Sure, done something similar to your suggestion
Kinda like this: http://puu.sh/kcK5f/27e205869f.jpg

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[Lv.10]
01:01:507 (61507|2) - Same suggestion as on Lv.08. There's a kick to follow at 00:51:402 (51402|3) - , but not on this. Fixed!

01:03:875 (63875|2,63915|3,63954|1,63994|0) - Suggesting to switch to 1/6 here instead of 1/8 for the click sounds. This note 01:03:915 (63915|3) - doesn't really follow anything at this particular snap.
Either this or remove 01:03:915 (63915|3) - so you're following the synth instead of the clicks.

01:08:928 (68928|0,68967|1,69007|3,69046|2) - Same suggestion as above.

01:07:981 (67981|3,68020|2,68059|1,68099|0) - Use 1/6 here if you're following the clicks.
Also a snapping conflict with Lv.08, so check that out if you haven't yet.

01:31:507 - Add a note here for consistency with 01:30:244 - and 01:28:981 -

01:40:349 - Same as above

01:40:507 (100507|2,100507|3,100507|0) - A 1/2 LN 2-note chord should be enough to emphasize the slight shift in music. Change this to that? Fixed everything here. Some really nice catches, thanks Blocko <3


blorp same
Updated! Thanks a lot for the mod Blocko~
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okay, recheck

1234
no kiai?

[Lv.02]
00:34:191 (34191|0) - this should be clap
00:26:770 (26770|0) - same here
00:42:086 - add a long note on here and end in 00:42:402 - ? it would be great
00:45:402 (45402|2) - 00:50:454 (50454|1,50612|2) - 00:55:507 (55507|2,55665|1) - sound hard for beginner
00:49:507 (49507|0,49981|2) - switch the column ? because 00:49:033 (49033|0,49507|0) - maybe too hard
01:31:981 (91981|2) - how about move this to 01:31:902 - follow instrument in here, like 01:36:954 -
01:42:086 (102086|1) - do thsi too if you agree

[Lv.04]
00:42:086 - same reason on Lv.02
00:45:402 (45402|2,45481|3) - Ctrl + G, this would be nice for hand
if you agree, move this to 4 00:45:875 (45875|2) -

[Lv.06]
perfect

[Lv.08]
01:47:691 (107691|3) - it's diffrent sound type, 01:47:691 - and 01:47:770 - to 01:48:086 - is different

Left: Lv.08 | Right: Lv.06

[Lv.10]
01:47:691 (107691|3) - same problem as Lv.08

the map is so good, so enjoyable
please call me back after you done
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

okay, recheck

1234
no kiai?

[Lv.02]
00:34:191 (34191|0) - this should be clap oops, sure
00:26:770 (26770|0) - same here done
00:42:086 - add a long note on here and end in 00:42:402 - ? it would be great I follow drums only here :c
00:45:402 (45402|2) - 00:50:454 (50454|1,50612|2) - 00:55:507 (55507|2,55665|1) - sound hard for beginner I think I'll keep it, since Lv.04 uses 1/4 (and a few people who testplayed didn't struggle here)
00:49:507 (49507|0,49981|2) - switch the column ? because 00:49:033 (49033|0,49507|0) - maybe too hard done
01:31:981 (91981|2) - how about move this to 01:31:902 - follow instrument in here, like 01:36:954 - Actually 01:36:954 - is misplaced xD I want to follow mainly drums here otherwise it'll be a bit too confusing on a sightread
01:42:086 (102086|1) - do thsi too if you agree

[Lv.04]
00:42:086 - same reason on Lv.02
00:45:402 (45402|2,45481|3) - Ctrl + G, this would be nice for hand
if you agree, move this to 4 00:45:875 (45875|2) - hmm, I'm thinking to keep it, I know what you mean, but I think this way has the most hand balance

[Lv.06]
perfect

[Lv.08]
01:47:691 (107691|3) - it's diffrent sound type, 01:47:691 - and 01:47:770 - to 01:48:086 - is different Ooh nice, fixed both here and Lv.10

Left: Lv.08 | Right: Lv.06

[Lv.10]
01:47:691 (107691|3) - same problem as Lv.08

the map is so good, so enjoyable
please call me back after you done
Thanks KK <3 Updated~

Thanks
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A perfect map for ranking, some changes here and there and ...
Bubbled!

Congratulations, good luck!
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go go
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need dat sweet pp
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I think this is good to go now, so let's get this moving!

Qualified!

Congratulations, Starry-!
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my dick
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bigger than a bridge
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camellia <3 wee good luck on qualification \w/
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wow as usual, starry always making a comfortable pattern for us

grats \o/
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Grz! :)
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gratz
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