Dellvangel wrote:

Hi Kruzon

General

Normal diff >1.5 stars ( N icon ). slow songs like this tend to have lesser diff, i could not just over-map this because of the difficulty spread. Besides, I have seen a song with difficulties that disregard the diff tag, and I've discussed about this matter beforehand with people in #osumania, therefore I will keep my difficulties within spread but disregarding the diff tag
Hard diff >2.25 stars ( H icon ).
Add some kiai time, you can add it here 01:20:560 - to 01:43:417 - ; 02:29:132 - to 02:51:989 - ; 03:51:989 - to 04:14:846 - thanks for the kiai, will add soon
Uncheck "Widescreen support". okay

Normal

00:00:560 - to 00:10:560 - (optional) i think you should add some note here. I decided to leave them blank
00:12:703 - (optional) add 1 note, since you do it at 00:24:132 (24132|3,24132|0) - fixed
00:14:132 - ^ fixed
00:15:560 - ^ fixed
00:18:417 - ^ fixed
00:19:132 - ^ no thanks
00:19:846 - ^ fixed
00:21:275 - ^ fixed
01:08:060 (68060|1) - move to 1 ( balance with 01:06:275 (66275|6) - ) nice catch, fixed
01:28:775 - to 01:29:132 - same with 01:25:917 (85917|0,86096|1,86275|2) - thank you for noticing me senpai, fixed
02:17:346 (137346|0) - change this to DN is better i think. yes, you are right. Perhaps ln at this point is not suitable for normal diff, fixed
02:19:846 (139846|4,140560|5) - swap colom for better flow. I swapped to column 7, nice catch, fixed
02:29:489 (149489|6,149489|4) - i think this part isnt loud enough, delete one. fixed
02:29:846 - add note. fixed
02:42:346 (162346|3) - move to 3 for better flow. nice one, fixed
03:14:310 (194310|4) - move to 4. fixed

btw, nice song! hope it ranked godspeed

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

M4M Arrived :3
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[General]
Great. No problem :3 when I see

[Normal]

00:11:453 ~ 00:20:203 - 1 col is very bored XDD yes, you are right, thank you for noticing this. Fixed
I suggest rearrange 6 col with 1 col :3
00:34:132 (34132|3,34489|3) - It's one star map. it's kinda hard trill because. here's use spacebar. So. I suggest
00:34:132 (34132|3) - Move to 6 col Fixed
00:41:989 (41989|3) - Move to 7 col. Fixed
00:46:275 (46275|6,46989|6,47703|6,48417|6) - here andI separate 1 of the note to other col. Fixed
00:46:632 (46632|2,47346|2,48060|2,48775|2) - here. It's kinda long XD I separate 1 of the note to other col. Fixed
00:56:989 - add one for pitch other same sounds has 2 notes. this is intentional because i am avoiding rigidness and giving more emphasizes on 00:57:346 (57346|2,57346|6) - which has loud drum playing
00:58:775 - missed note? intentional
01:01:632 , 01:03:060 - Why empty...? o.o intentional
01:06:632 - ^
01:08:775 (68775|2,68953|1,69132|0) - Actually. this part is really hard.(1->2->3 it's more better but 1<-2<-3 it's kinda hard) I suggest 01:08:953 (68953|1) - move to 7 yes, you are right. considering most players are right handed this could be awkward, so i fixed this by moving them to the right side
01:09:846 - add one for pitch hmm.. I'll think about it
01:16:989 - add one for pitch same
01:19:667 (79667|3) - This is right timing but. It will make confused. I suggest remove this or change to NM yes, thanks for noticing me senpai. Fixed (btw this IS normal lol)
01:40:560 ~ 01:43:417 - 7 col looks bored XD true, fixed
01:53:596 (113596|5) - I suggest remove this yes, perhaps this is too hard for normal, i agreed to your suggestion. Fixed
01:57:525 (117525|0,117703|1) - Move to 1 col -> this way i moved 01:57:703 (117703|1) - instead to col 2
02:21:632 - missed note? intentional, actually im mapping the guitar and depending on vocal's pitch, means im mapping this difficulty by following the obvious sound
02:48:060 (168060|1) - Move to 4 col Fixed
02:48:418 (168418|2,168418|4) - Move to 5,7 col Nice catch. Fixed
02:57:346 (177346|5,177525|6) - Ctri+g Fixed
03:20:025 (200025|5) - wrong timing. It's 1/3 03:20:084 - Thank you for noticing me senpai, very nice! Fixed
03:21:275 - add one for pitch i intend to focus on guitar stream, considering its normal i tried to avoid instrument layering
03:22:703 - ^ same reason
03:26:989 - Why empty? reason same
03:34:132 - ^ same reason
03:46:632 (226632|1,226989|1,227346|1,227703|1) - It's hard I promise. should be arrange XD no, it's not. the bpm is slow, and it should be easy to catch it. I have asked several to test play as well, and they did splendid on this part
04:01:275 -~04:10:918 - col 1 is empty. fixed
04:14:132 (254132|2,254310|4,254489|2) - move to -> 1col. it's a form of pattern, im keeping this for pattern variation purpose
and If you follow this. 04:14:846 (254846|5) - move to 7 yes, nice solution. Moved to 7, fixed
04:22:703 (262703|0,262703|2) - Amm...Why added 2 notes? i dont know maybe im sleepy that time haha.. thanks for noticing, fixed

Nice map! :3
Good luck! XD Godspeed

[Baim] wrote:

hi here my mod ><
sorry for late coz im busy ~
dell mean delete
ok here i go

1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

normal

01:58:060 - add 1 note i hear the sound there i could not use that kick sound you suggested because i follow guitar stream 01:57:525 (117525|0,117703|2) - here, and allowing some spaces in between to avoid confusion when playing
02:05:025 (125025|4) - dell 1 coz it's not vocal song there ._. ... use drum it was intentional, you may have noticed that i use sound layering here and made a pattern out of it. yes, i use semi vocal throughout the pattern, and also i dont want to break my pattern here 02:03:060 (123060|5,123239|4,123417|3) -
01:57:525 (117525|0) - dell use drum no thanks, the guitar sound is apparent and readable even for new player as well. moreover, it's a slow jam song which is why it won't throw off players while jumping from one to another instrument layer
01:58:060 - add 1 noticed that in between 01:56:989 (116989|3,118417|1) - of the guitar notes, im giving spaces to make player easily read the upcoming notes ahead, that's why the area is intentionally left empty
02:10:382 (130382|4) - dell that will break my consistency, i could not do that
02:15:203 - add 1 same reasoning on the above statements, it was intentional
02:16:096 (136096|1) - dell same reasoning on the above statements, it was intentional
02:21:632 - add note well, same reasoning
02:31:096 (151096|3) - dell it's kick sound for her vocal, it was also necessary since my pattern include 1 l 2 l 3 flow occasionally
02:57:525 (177525|5) - dell it's intentional
03:57:168 (237168|4) - dell intentional, and follow sound
04:11:632 (251632|5) - ^ listen carefully, i am following a certain sound here, it's also obvious sound
04:17:525 (257525|2) - dell Nice catch! thanks for noticing this
04:23:596 (263596|3) - dell intentional, and there is sound

ok GL ^^ godspeed. I also hope you understand my reasoning on why I declined your suggestions, and perhaps it might be of help to you for future reference when modding

Kruzon wrote:

[Baim] wrote:

hi here my mod ><
sorry for late coz im busy ~
dell mean delete
ok here i go

1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

normal

01:58:060 - add 1 note i hear the sound there i could not use that kick sound you suggested because i follow guitar stream 01:57:525 (117525|0,117703|2) - here, and allowing some spaces in between to avoid confusion when playing
02:05:025 (125025|4) - dell 1 coz it's not vocal song there ._. ... use drum it was intentional, you may have noticed that i use sound layering here and made a pattern out of it. yes, i use semi vocal throughout the pattern, and also i dont want to break my pattern here 02:03:060 (123060|5,123239|4,123417|3) -
01:57:525 (117525|0) - dell use drum no thanks, the guitar sound is apparent and readable even for new player as well. moreover, it's a slow jam song which is why it won't throw off players while jumping from one to another instrument layer
01:58:060 - add 1 noticed that in between 01:56:989 (116989|3,118417|1) - of the guitar notes, im giving spaces to make player easily read the upcoming notes ahead, that's why the area is intentionally left empty
02:10:382 (130382|4) - dell that will break my consistency, i could not do that
02:15:203 - add 1 same reasoning on the above statements, it was intentional
02:16:096 (136096|1) - dell same reasoning on the above statements, it was intentional
02:21:632 - add note well, same reasoning
02:31:096 (151096|3) - dell it's kick sound for her vocal, it was also necessary since my pattern include 1 l 2 l 3 flow occasionally
02:57:525 (177525|5) - dell it's intentional
03:57:168 (237168|4) - dell intentional, and follow sound
04:11:632 (251632|5) - ^ listen carefully, i am following a certain sound here, it's also obvious sound
04:17:525 (257525|2) - dell Nice catch! thanks for noticing this
04:23:596 (263596|3) - dell intentional, and there is sound

ok GL ^^ godspeed. I also hope you understand my reasoning on why I declined your suggestions, and perhaps it might be of help to you for future reference when modding

Thank you for your help! I really appreciate it, Thanks!

Updaterino

Kaito-kun wrote:

Here's the irc chat, anything else you need, call me anytime

IRC Mod

18:57 Kaito-kun: you free right now, right?
18:57 Kruzon: yes
18:57 Kruzon: would you like m4m then?
18:58 Kaito-kun: if you'll like, tho I don't mind if it's a NM
18:58 Kaito-kun: anyways, if you want, we can do a irc mod right now
18:59 Kruzon: ah, then later on you post on my map thread, is that okay?
18:59 Kruzon: i am looking for modder not only to improve my map, but to raise priority and mod count as well.
19:00 Kaito-kun: center on improving your map, not on priority or mod count
19:00 Kruzon: i know right
19:00 Kaito-kun: mapset is easy, so it wouldn't last long to get ranked
19:00 Kruzon: im merely taking every opportunity i got, gotta catch em all ya' know
19:00 Kaito-kun: so improving your map goes first, since it also helps for the future
19:01 Kaito-kun: lol, i know XD
19:01 Kruzon: alright, you may start the irc modding session now
19:01 Kruzon: oh, and do not mod hard
19:01 Kaito-kun: anyways, I'm currently playing Normal, I'll tell you my thought first when I finish playing it
19:01 Kruzon: sure, take your time
19:06 Kaito-kun: liked the map
19:06 Kaito-kun: I'll check it out on the editor now
19:06 Kruzon: thank you, sure
19:07 Kaito-kun: first, why didn't you mapped the piano at the start? is there a specific reason?
19:07 Kruzon: yes, because i want it to start from the vocal
19:07 Kruzon: thats why i left it blank
19:07 Kaito-kun: ok then
19:08 Kaito-kun: 00:17:346 (17346|0,17525|2,17703|4) - These notes are following vocals?
19:09 Kruzon: yes
19:09 Kaito-kun: it sort of feels weird to do a sudden change from instruments to vocals imo
19:10 Kruzon: how did you felt when you stream through that part?
19:10 Kruzon: during testing
19:10 Kaito-kun: it was one of the few parts it felt weird
19:11 Kaito-kun: it's like you are paying attention to the instruments, but then comes a stair, but no instrument is there
19:12 Kruzon: hmmm
19:13 Kruzon: it was intended for variation purposes, and there's several around the map
19:13 Kruzon: you are right, but let me think again
19:13 Kaito-kun: I noticed while playing, and I understand the reason for it being there
19:14 Kruzon: i for one am one of the modder who map vocal and instrument alike
19:14 Kruzon: i guess thats why you see my mapping style kinda weird ww
19:15 Kaito-kun: you can try to emphasize vocals more throught the song, there would be no problem if they are mapped alike
19:15 Kaito-kun: because vocals are mapped in specific sections, and that's what makes it weird
19:15 Kaito-kun: mapping vocals is pretty normal, and doesn't exactly lowers a map's quality
19:16 Kruzon: yes, i am aware following vocal on a mania map would make it weird
19:16 Kaito-kun: as I said, it doesn't
19:16 *Kaito-kun is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232356 Rissyu - uni]
19:17 Kaito-kun: ^This map follows beat and vocals alike, and it's one of my favorite maps
19:17 Kruzon: well for my map, i might have mapped the vocal part mistakenly
19:18 Kruzon: for the previous weird part you said, does it make sense despite being weird
19:18 Kruzon: or would you like me to change it to instrument stream instead?
19:18 Kaito-kun: add some more emphasis to the vocals throught the song, that can make it more comfortable
19:19 Kruzon: i am not sure if its enough or not, but i did pattern repetition following vocal to emphasize it
19:19 Kruzon: for example, 00:20:203 (20203|0,20382|1,20560|2) -
19:19 Kruzon: this is vocal follow up after the previous one
19:20 Kaito-kun: yeah
19:20 Kaito-kun: ask for some testplays, and ask for their opinion regarding that subject (but later lol)
19:21 Kruzon: so far there's 8 testplayers
19:21 Kruzon: ofc that's normally come first in my mind
19:22 Kaito-kun: if I'm not the only one pointing it out, then it must need a change
19:23 Kruzon: yes, i am keeping in mind every suggestion you has, and will judge one more time when the map come across other's modding
19:23 Kruzon: to be honest, i am indecicive at this point, that's why i need more info
19:24 Kaito-kun: honestly speaking, you solve that problem, and some minor adjustements, and map is ready to go
19:24 Kaito-kun: at least imo
19:24 Kruzon: there should be some i didn't see
19:24 Kruzon: for example, the one you told me
19:24 Kruzon: are you sure only that?
19:25 Kruzon: i really think there might be more hidden flaw
19:25 Kaito-kun: that's the only "big" problem of your map, rest would be to make map more balanced, some few patterns here and there, but nothing that changes the whole map itself
19:26 Kruzon: oh, is there some part when you played, felt uncomfortable? perhaps on long note or something?
19:26 Kruzon: for example, hmm let's see..
19:27 Kruzon: this one 01:30:560 (90560|4,91453|5,91632|3) -
19:27 Kruzon: what do you think
19:27 Kaito-kun: Long note is ok, you used it to avoid doing a trill, which would cause a difficulty spike
19:28 Kaito-kun: but maybe you should make them shorter, since you map the end of the trill
19:28 Kruzon: yes exactly,
19:28 Kaito-kun: let's say, up to here 01:31:453 - 
19:28 Kruzon: thanks, this is one of the flaw you dig up
19:29 Kruzon: alright, now how about starting here
19:29 Kruzon: 01:51:989 (111989|5) -
19:29 Kruzon: to  01:54:489 (114489|1) -
19:29 Kruzon: do you think it's comfortable enough for a normal?
19:30 Kaito-kun: it didn't felt hard for me
19:30 Kaito-kun: so it's ok to leave it like that for now
19:31 Kruzon: alright
19:31 Kaito-kun: about the first LN you showed me, make sure to fix them on all of them, not just that one
19:31 Kruzon: hmm
19:31 Kruzon: 02:06:989 (126989|3,126989|1,127346|0,127703|2,128060|0,128417|3,128417|1,128775|2,129132|4) -
19:31 Kruzon: yes
19:32 Kaito-kun: 00:21:989 (21989|4) - 
19:32 Kaito-kun: ^This is one
19:32 Kruzon: nice catch
19:32 Kruzon: fixed*
19:34 Kruzon: what do you think if i moved 01:19:846 (79846|5) -  to 1?
19:35 Kaito-kun: on that little trill, the first note is instrument and the other 3 are vocals, right?
19:35 Kruzon: oh wait, i found better solution.. hmm
19:35 Kruzon: yes
19:36 Kruzon: 01:20:203 (80203|5,80382|2,80560|3,80560|6) -  are vocals
19:36 Kaito-kun: then moving it would be better
19:36 Kruzon: idk if i should map drum roll here or not on normal
19:37 Kruzon: or better just put sn
19:37 Kruzon: this actually represent the end part of the drum roll 01:19:846 (79846|5) -
19:38 Kaito-kun: I sort of noticed it, since I heard some sounds before the note appeared
19:40 Kruzon: 01:45:917 (105917|5,106096|4,106275|6) -  this are weird imo, what do you think
19:40 Kruzon: these*
19:41 Kaito-kun: they do look weird
19:41 Kruzon: i see
19:41 Kaito-kun: maybe do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3268419
19:42 Kruzon: yes, quite legit long note to represent the guitar
19:43 Kruzon: though its longer than you thought
19:43 Kaito-kun: if you think it's shorter/longer, adjust it to how you think it is
19:43 Kruzon: thanks to the echo
19:44 Kaito-kun: well, I sort of considered echo and the note that was going next to the LN, but I may be wrong
19:45 Kaito-kun: apply the same thing here too 01:48:953 -
19:45 Kaito-kun: delete these two notes 01:48:953 (108953|3,109132|6) - and make an LN starting 01:48:953 - and ending 01:49:489 -
19:46 Kaito-kun: I suggest you make it on column 1, since it's mainly empty
19:47 Kruzon: sure
19:47 Kaito-kun: and do the same with the sections you find similar too
19:48 Kaito-kun: I'll check balancing
19:48 Kruzon: alright
19:49 Kaito-kun: Column 1 is empty from 00:24:132 - up to 00:29:846 -, so move 00:26:989 (26989|5) - to column 1
19:50 Kaito-kun: Move 00:35:203 (35203|2) - to column 1, same reason
19:50 Kruzon: fixed
19:51 Kaito-kun: 00:51:275 (51275|3) - move to column 7
19:52 Kaito-kun: 01:01:989 (61989|5) - to column 7
19:52 Kaito-kun: 01:02:703 (62703|3) - to column 6
19:53 Kruzon: fixed
19:54 Kaito-kun: 01:12:703 (72703|4) - to column 4
19:55 Kruzon: nice catch, fixed
19:55 Kaito-kun: 01:34:846 (94846|3) - to column 2
19:56 Kaito-kun: keep in mind that I'm only trying to fill the column you left empty for a long period of time, if you want to keep a pattern, don't change it
19:56 Kruzon: i think i will keep it
19:56 Kruzon: sure
19:56 Kaito-kun: ok
19:58 Kaito-kun: 02:03:775 (123775|4,124489|4) - move to 7 (trying not too break the pattern)
19:59 Kruzon: i did not move 02:03:775 (123775|4) -  but i move 02:04:489 (124489|4) -  to 7, considering its pitch
20:00 Kaito-kun: ok then
20:01 Kaito-kun: 02:23:775 (143775|2) - column 1
20:02 Kruzon: sure, fixed
20:03 Kaito-kun: you need to add some notes on column 1 from 02:18:060 - to 02:31:632 -, it's completely empty (excluding the new change)
20:03 Kruzon: yea, thats look horrible oh god lol
20:03 Kruzon: thanks, i'll try to move some to 1
20:03 Kaito-kun: np
20:06 Kaito-kun: 02:38:060 (158060|6) - to column 5
20:06 Kaito-kun: wait, no
20:06 Kaito-kun: that would leave column 7 more empty
20:07 Kruzon: maybe moev 02:35:560 (155560|5,155560|4) -  to 7
20:07 Kruzon: i mean this one 02:35:560 (155560|5) -
20:08 Kaito-kun: move the one you said, and then move the one I pointed out to column 5
20:08 Kaito-kun: that would be better
20:10 Kruzon: alright
20:12 Kaito-kun: column 6 is empty from 03:25:739 - to 03:31:275 -
20:12 Kaito-kun: and column 7 is also empty there
20:12 Kruzon: 03:27:346 (207346|1,207525|0) -  moved to 6 and 7
20:14 Kaito-kun: 03:31:275 (211275|1) - move to column 1
20:15 Kruzon: moved
20:15 Kaito-kun: done checking balance
20:16 Kaito-kun: one question, have you asked someone to check timing? (not saying something is wrong, just want to know)
20:17 Kruzon: yes, i asked bn to check timing lol
20:17 Kruzon: thanks a lot kaito kun, very helpful balance check
20:17 Kruzon: oh, please post this conversation of ours to the map thread
20:17 Kruzon: the least i can do is give you kudosu, you're big help
20:18 Kaito-kun: sure, anytime
20:18 Kaito-kun: if you need anything else, you can PM me
20:20 Kaito-kun: I'll post this conversation on the thread then

Good Luck with your beatmap Godspeed

Frim4503 wrote:

M4M
my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322571
col.1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General

1. dont forget about hs
2. try make this kiai time

11989,-100,4,1,0,15,0,1
34846,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0
80560,-100,4,1,0,15,0,1
103417,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0
149132,-100,4,1,0,15,0,1
171989,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0
231989,-100,4,1,0,15,0,1
254846,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0

Normal

00:23:417 (23417|2) - make double for cymbal. it's faint but i can hear it xD yes, i can hear it too, but i intentionally make it 1 note like others 00:24:846 (24846|6) - and 00:27:703 (27703|6,28060|2) - and many more. I am avoiding over-mapping on this normal difficulty and are following certain consistency if you actually see carefully on my patterning
00:33:417 (33417|4,33417|2) - why making it double ? i think it's same like 00:31:989 (31989|4) - Nice catch! Fixed

00:36:632 (36632|5) - move to 1 Fixed
00:50:203 (50203|1) - ^3 Fixed
01:12:346 (72346|0) - ^6 no thanks
01:26:632 (86632|0) - ^5 i would like to keep the current zig zag flow
02:24:846 (144846|3,144846|5) - why this double ? nice one, fixed
^also 02:25:560 (145560|2) - single ? fixed

02:33:775 (153775|6) - move to 6 no thanks, well i move it to 3 instead for pattern flow
02:38:060 (158060|4,158418|5) - move 1 col. to right moved, fixed
02:40:560 (160560|5) - move to 5 good one, fixed

tbh, it's hard to mod dif like that -_- cuz you didnt follow the hit hat nd some audible other sound
bu. well, maybe it's your style i am following the rhythm but probably because i follow semi vocal make it seems weird looking. Also, this map is intend for relaxing purposes, especially with its slow bpm, i don't think i wanna over-mapped it with consecutive notes one after another, but I chose to follow the obvious sound instead. My mapping style might be weird but I don't intend to give up on it! Also, for some other audible sound, yes it exist but it's guitar stream, which is inconsistent and unpredictable to follow for a normal difficulty, so there's no way I'm going to plot note completely based on it, but only if it's on obvious part of the song Godspeed.

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M~

Col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General

You Should add kiai

Normal

01:51:989 (111989|5) - follow voice right? 01:52:346 - end here nice one, fixed
01:53:417 (113417|3) - That LN - 01:53:775 - end here you're right, fixed
01:53:953 (113953|6) - about this LN the correct LN end are 1/6 snap..but idk if 2 star diff can add 1/6 snap about this, i asked peeps in osumania channel and apparently it's okay as long its within reason and correct snap, so i decided to use 1/6 snap as you told me
02:39:132 (159132|6) - LN - 02:39:846 - end here no thanks, actually the long note is not following vocal, but other instrument sound (idk what that instrument is called owo)
02:53:418 (173418|5,173418|3,174132|5,174132|3) - this pattern was same try change it yeah, it looks rather bland, thanks for noticing it. Fixed
02:54:846 (174846|2,174846|4,175560|2,175560|4,176275|2,176275|4,176989|4,176989|2) - this too Fixed
03:37:168 (217168|3) - LN - 03:37:346 - end here I decided to change it into single note, instead
03:45:025 - add note? guitar sound I use short long note instead, and placed it 1/4 below your suggested place
04:01:989 (241989|4) - That LN - 04:02:703 - end here for the sake of balance, i will use your suggestion. Fixed
04:30:749 (270749|5) - ghost note...doest hit that last piano sound nice catch! to solve this, i made it into 1/6 note, to sync it along the piano. Fixed
04:31:070 (271070|3,271070|1) - i think offset for this BPM are incorrect..cause this note doest hit the beatit's correct, it's my fault on misplacing the notes

Sorry if my mod doest helpful cause im just know a little about 7K pattern It's very helpful, especially your suggestions on long notes length and snaps. These are kinda hard to detect yet you did, so I'm really thankful for your help!
Good Luck Godspeed

Kruzon wrote:

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M~

Col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General

You Should add kiai

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01:51:989 (111989|5) - follow voice right? 01:52:346 - end here nice one, fixed
01:53:417 (113417|3) - That LN - 01:53:775 - end here you're right, fixed
01:53:953 (113953|6) - about this LN the correct LN end are 1/6 snap..but idk if 2 star diff can add 1/6 snap about this, i asked peeps in osumania channel and apparently it's okay as long its within reason and correct snap, so i decided to use 1/6 snap as you told me
02:39:132 (159132|6) - LN - 02:39:846 - end here no thanks, actually the long note is not following vocal, but other instrument sound (idk what that instrument is called owo)
02:53:418 (173418|5,173418|3,174132|5,174132|3) - this pattern was same try change it yeah, it looks rather bland, thanks for noticing it. Fixed
02:54:846 (174846|2,174846|4,175560|2,175560|4,176275|2,176275|4,176989|4,176989|2) - this too Fixed
03:37:168 (217168|3) - LN - 03:37:346 - end here I decided to change it into single note, instead
03:45:025 - add note? guitar sound I use short long note instead, and placed it 1/4 below your suggested place
04:01:989 (241989|4) - That LN - 04:02:703 - end here for the sake of balance, i will use your suggestion. Fixed
04:30:749 (270749|5) - ghost note...doest hit that last piano sound nice catch! to solve this, i made it into 1/6 note, to sync it along the piano. Fixed
04:31:070 (271070|3,271070|1) - i think offset for this BPM are incorrect..cause this note doest hit the beatit's correct, it's my fault on misplacing the notes

Sorry if my mod doest helpful cause im just know a little about 7K pattern It's very helpful, especially your suggestions on long notes length and snaps. These are kinda hard to detect yet you did, so I'm really thankful for your help!
Good Luck Godspeed

Thank you for your help! I really appreciate it, Thanks!

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