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Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Use 65471 as preview point for all the difficulties.
  2. Tags must be the same for all the difficulties.


Cosmic
  1. ~
  2. Ok let's make this difficulty look better (Suggestions to improve the look of the map).
  3. 00:16:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same alignment of (1)(2)(3) for (4)(5)(6) & align (7) with (4) (Vertical) These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  4. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move (2) 1 grid left and 1 grid up then align (4)(6)(7) with (2).These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  5. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also align (3)(5) with (1).These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  6. 00:43:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it look like this:These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  7. 00:51:153 (3) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down. Done.
  8. 00:51:388 (4,5,6) - This looks kinda messy for [Easy] try to change it.Done.
  9. 00:55:378 (4) - Move it 1 grid leftDone.
  10. 00:55:613 (1,2,3,4) - Ermm, Copy 00:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - then use Ctrl+R, Select all the stream and place it next to the last one. Done.
  11. 01:00:307 (7,8) - Move them 1 grid up.Done.
  12. 01:00:776 (9) - Move it 1 grid right and 2 grids up. Done.
  13. ~
  14. 00:25:101 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.Done.
  15. 00:58:899 (1) - ^Done.
  16. 01:07:583 (1) - Fix Spacing (Using 1.0x distance spacing)Done.
  17. 01:07:583 (1,1) - ^Done.
  18. 01:09:460 (2,1) - ^Done.
  19. 01:38:095 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.Done.
  20. 02:15:179 (1) - Remove New ComboDone.
  21. 02:24:333 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners. [!!]Done.
  22. 02:28:323 (1) - ^


SapphireGhost's Hard
  1. 00:28:621 (1,8,9,10,11) - Align (8)(9)(10)(11) with (1).
  2. 00:33:784 (4,5) - There are 2 notes spotted in the same place Orz.
  3. 00:52:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - TOO messy, please align the notes.
  4. 00:57:021 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 00:57:490 (1) - ^
  6. 00:57:960 (1) - ^
  7. 01:02:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - TOO messy, Suggestion: try to make a different alignment.
  8. 02:08:607 (5) - Delete 2 repeats, and add a circle here: 02:09:546.
  9. 02:17:057 (1) - Funny, I like it in SOME way.


Call me for Re-check once you have all the difficulties, Have a star for now~
Thank you! kudosu <3
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Okay, back for a recheck.
Oh boy.

[Overall]
You uhh... have two .osb's in your song folder. Delete both then full submit.
Remove English, Pop, and Rock from the tags since Pop or Rock can be set as the genre when this is ranked, and English is... well just remove it.

[Cosmic~]
Why the ~ in the difficulty name?
Oh god raise that slider velocity to at least 1.0. It's really slow, even for an easy.
00:26:744 - 00:28:152 - Boring with no notes there. Add some to create flow.
00:30:030 - 00:31:438 - ^
00:50:684 - 00:52:327 - This is so cramped together, but that's because of your low slider velocity. Fix the slider velocity and then they will space out a bit more. Less clutter.
00:54:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Okay what? This has inconsistent spacing with 00:52:327. Keep your spacing consistent
01:13:216 - This is an ugly slider. Remake it.
02:22:220 (4) - This slider is hidden under (3). It's hard to tell that there's a slider underneath it for beginners. Might want to move that somewhere else.
AIMod is your friend here for the spacing issues.

[SG's Hard]
Okay, seriously. A slider velocity of 0.8 with a BPM THAT low is horrendous. You REALLY NEED to raise your slider velocity. There is no way this can get ranked with a slider velocity THAT LOW for a hard difficulty. This will cause you to remap your difficulty, since this changes spacing AND slider length. I am reluctant to mod your difficulty since you will need to remap. I'll look over it.
00:33:785 (4,5) - Unrankable. Hit circle overlaps slider start on timeline. Remove one.
00:54:674 - 00:57:960 - You can definitely map this some other way. It just feels bad to have that many hit objects on top of one space.
02:17:057 (1) - I still hate this slider.
Same advice here too. AIMod is your friend, except for those nice jumps that you put in manually.

No star. This will require another recheck. As always, come back when you have things fixed up more.
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Lizzehb, the weird unrankable note was taken out of the beatmap, as well as the weird stacking part.

The slider velocity problem...

Aw... I'm really not looking forward to having to remap. :(
I'll try 1.6x velocity...

...meanies...(just kidding)

Download: Electrasy - Cosmic Castaway (lizzehb) [SapphireGhost's Hard].osu
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1.6x slider velocity.
The star is gone.
I hope you're happy! :):):)

Download: Electrasy - Cosmic Castaway (lizzehb) [SapphireGhost's Hard].osu
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I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Okay, back for a recheck.
Oh boy.

[Overall]
You uhh... have two .osb's in your song folder. Delete both then full submit.
Remove English, Pop, and Rock from the tags since Pop or Rock can be set as the genre when this is ranked, and English is... well just remove it.

[Cosmic~]
Why the ~ in the difficulty name?
Oh god raise that slider velocity to at least 1.0. It's really slow, even for an easy. Done.
00:26:744 - 00:28:152 - Boring with no notes there. Add some to create flow. Done
00:30:030 - 00:31:438 - ^ Done
00:50:684 - 00:52:327 - This is so cramped together, but that's because of your low slider velocity. Fix the slider velocity and then they will space out a bit more. Less clutter. Done lol
00:54:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Okay what? This has inconsistent spacing with 00:52:327. Keep your spacing consistent Done
01:13:216 - This is an ugly slider. Remake it. Done
02:22:220 (4) - This slider is hidden under (3). It's hard to tell that there's a slider underneath it for beginners. Might want to move that somewhere else. Done
AIMod is your friend here for the spacing issues.

[SG's Hard]
Okay, seriously. A slider velocity of 0.8 with a BPM THAT low is horrendous. You REALLY NEED to raise your slider velocity. There is no way this can get ranked with a slider velocity THAT LOW for a hard difficulty. This will cause you to remap your difficulty, since this changes spacing AND slider length. I am reluctant to mod your difficulty since you will need to remap. I'll look over it.
00:33:785 (4,5) - Unrankable. Hit circle overlaps slider start on timeline. Remove one.
00:54:674 - 00:57:960 - You can definitely map this some other way. It just feels bad to have that many hit objects on top of one space.
02:17:057 (1) - I still hate this slider.
Same advice here too. AIMod is your friend, except for those nice jumps that you put in manually.

No star. This will require another recheck. As always, come back when you have things fixed up more.
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?!? The artist name and song name is interchanged orz

[hard]
0:27:682 (9) up 1 grid
1:03:328 (6,7) left+down 1 grid
1:56:402 (3,4,5) uneven spacing

[easy]
1:00:776 (9,10) spacing?

spacing much better than before~
find others to mod ya :D
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Well,you asked to recheck...

As I see you've fully remapped the beginning,and fixed spacing as I asked.
Looks much better now.

You don't have Kiai in your difficulty at all,however,they should be the same in all diffs.
They also seem wrong to me,I think the right time for Kiai is: 00:31:907 - 00:44:816.Similar moments will do.

[Cosmic]
Volume is too loud,reduce please,also I want to see more hitsounds.
00:52:796 (1) - Remove last repeat?
01:12:981 (1,2) - Distance =p A bit close to previous one.
01:15:094 (3) - Copy from 01:13:216 (2) and make vertically flip? You could stack them then.
01:26:360 (1) - Distance.
01:58:280 (5) - New combo.
02:25:037 (3) - Spacing mistake.Distance between (2) and (3) is similar to (1) - (2) - that's wrong,(3)-rd should be further.

[SG'Hard]
00:37:540 (3) - Why don't you just continue this slider up to 00:38:479? Sounds awkward atm.
00:56:317 - You should add a note here.
Some patterns are close to the previous,but Approach Rate makes it visible and readable,so it doesn't really deals any major troubles to the gameplay,but better fix it,anyway.

Ah,and ask someone who's good at timing,it seems a bit out to me(maybe it's because of loud hitsounds).
Wish you best luck,again.
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wmfchris wrote:

?!? The artist name and song name is interchanged orz

[hard]
0:27:682 (9) up 1 grid
1:03:328 (6,7) left+down 1 grid
1:56:402 (3,4,5) uneven spacing

[easy]
1:00:776 (9,10) spacing? Didn't notice that lol :P. Fixed.

spacing much better than before~
find others to mod ya :D
Ty. <3
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IceBeam wrote:

Well,you asked to recheck...

As I see you've fully remapped the beginning,and fixed spacing as I asked.
Looks much better now.

You don't have Kiai in your difficulty at all,however,they should be the same in all diffs.
They also seem wrong to me,I think the right time for Kiai is: 00:31:907 - 00:44:816.Similar moments will do.

[Cosmic]
Volume is too loud,reduce please,also I want to see more hitsounds. It's 2 ticks less now.
00:52:796 (1) - Remove last repeat? Done.
01:12:981 (1,2) - Distance =p A bit close to previous one. Moved it as far away as DS will allow me to.
01:15:094 (3) - Copy from 01:13:216 (2) and make vertically flip? You could stack them then. I mirrored them verticlly instead.
01:26:360 (1) - Distance.Done.
01:58:280 (5) - New combo.Lol oops done.
02:25:037 (3) - Spacing mistake.Distance between (2) and (3) is similar to (1) - (2) - that's wrong,(3)-rd should be further.Changed. :D

[SG'Hard]
00:37:540 (3) - Why don't you just continue this slider up to 00:38:479? Sounds awkward atm.
00:56:317 - You should add a note here.
Some patterns are close to the previous,but Approach Rate makes it visible and readable,so it doesn't really deals any major troubles to the gameplay,but better fix it,anyway.

Ah,and ask someone who's good at timing,it seems a bit out to me(maybe it's because of loud hitsounds).
Wish you best luck,again.
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I'm only doing Cosmic (Why's the "~" gone D:) because I'm not much of a fan of guest difficulties.

01:17:910 (2,3) - If you're trying to make a heart, shouldn't it be right-side up? :P
01:19:084 (3) - Move to the White tick on the right?
01:50:769 (2) - End this on the next white tick.
01:58:280 (1) - ^
02:17:057 (2) - End this on the previous white tick (unless you're doing something with that I can't see).
02:26:445 (1) - Start this on the next white tick (Keep end same). Also, I don't think this should be a new combo.

Going great so far, keep it up :D
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nickopet2007 wrote:

I'm only doing Cosmic (Why's the "~" gone D:) because I'm not much of a fan of guest difficulties.

01:17:910 (2,3) - If you're trying to make a heart, shouldn't it be right-side up? :PIt's a pear. xD
01:19:084 (3) - Move to the White tick on the right? Done.
01:50:769 (2) - End this on the next white tick.Done.
01:58:280 (1) - ^Done.
02:17:057 (2) - End this on the previous white tick (unless you're doing something with that I can't see). Done.
02:26:445 (1) - Start this on the next white tick (Keep end same). Also, I don't think this should be a new combo.Done.

Going great so far, keep it up :D
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Here, have a star.
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Hi There Lizzehbb
Sorry If I M Late ~.~

Btw, Here Is My Mod

Easy
00:17:825 (2) - Add Clap ?
00:17:825 (2) - ^ ?
00:18:294 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:18:529 (3) - ^ ?
00:19:229 (1) - Add Clap ?
00:21:111 (3) - ^ ?
00:26:744 (3) - ^ ?
00:28:628 (1) - Remove Clap ?
00:29:091 (2) - Add Clap ?
00:31:907 (2) - Add Finish ?
00:32:846 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:34:724 (3) - Add Clap ?
00:35:653 (2) - Add Finish ?
00:36:601 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:37:540 (3) - Add Finish ?
00:40:357 (2) - Add Clap ?
00:41:296 (3) - Add Whistle ?
00:43:643 (3) - ^ ?
00:52:796 (1) - Add A Clap here And At 00:53:735 ?
From 00:50:684 To 01:01:011 - Try To Easy It A Bit ( Make It A Slider ? )
01:05:705 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:08:509 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:10:399 (1) - ^ ?
01:12:244 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:13:216 (2) - ^ ?
01:16:032 (3) - ^ ?
01:16:971 (1) - Remove Clap ?
01:17:910 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:24:482 (1) - Repair The Slider Like This ?

01:26:360 (1) Remove New Combo And Repair Like This ?

Other Is Fine :D!

SapphireGhost's Hard
00:35:663 (2) - Repair The Slider Like This ?

00:37:540 (3) - Repair Slider Like This ?

02:02:974 (1) - Remove New Combo ?
02:03:913 (1) - ^ ?
02:04:858 (1) - ^ ?
02:09:546 (1) - ^ ?
Uhm, Fix Some Slider Part's But You Do Well In HitSound !
Good !

Okay, That's All Hope You Like It. Thank You ~
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Hey lizzehb? Are you still working on this one?

Download: Electrasy - Cosmic Castaway (lizzehb) [SapphireGhost's Hard].osu
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