Cosmic Castaway - Electrasy

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Zetsubou Sensei
I'll do my mod later...Once SapphireGhost fixes up his diffs...

Better to do it all one time =3
Leorda
Hi

[Cosmic~]
*) Rename to "Cosmic~" please
*) If this a easy or normal diff, don't use jumps. Example 00:17:121 (2,3), you have to fix those spacing, otherwise the new player will difficult of this
*) Are you using distance snap? If not, use distance snap please
*) If this a easy or normal diff, remove the object if the object at red tick, because it's very difficult for new player

00:25:101 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern are hard to see, especially for easy diff
00:54:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

01:13:216 (1) - The slider is ugly, I guess......

[SapphireGhost's Hard]
*) If this hard diff, please increase the slider velocity, but please don't too high
*) Use Grid Level 3, because it's really easy to mapped this
*) Both kiai time is not fit

00:29:795 (6,7) - This jump is evil
00:56:552 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammmmer, remove it pleaseeeee


[SapphireGhost's Extra]
Why this diff has no background???
You might want delete this shit

00:34:254 (10) - Unrankable slider (Don't overlap the slider themself)
00:36:132 (2) - DELETE THIS!!!! It's very difficult while the slider are going
00:37:540 (4) - ^
00:57:490 (1) - Unrankable spinner (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, try extend it or replace with slider)
01:09:461 (2) - Ugly slider

02:05:791 (1,1,1,1) - Combine into one?
02:24:567 (3) - End at 02:27:384

I will recheck this if you already fix them all
Nice song
STAR

P.S lizzehb's diff is better than SapphireGhost diff 0.0
Topic Starter
Lizzehb

Leorda wrote:

Hi

[Cosmic~]
*) Rename to "Cosmic~" please
*) If this a easy or normal diff, don't use jumps. Example 00:17:121 (2,3), you have to fix those spacing, otherwise the new player will difficult of this Done.
*) Are you using distance snap? If not, use distance snap please
*) If this a easy or normal diff, remove the object if the object at red tick, because it's very difficult for new player

00:25:101 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern are hard to see, especially for easy diffDone
00:54:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^[/color]Done
01:13:216 (1) - The slider is ugly, I guess...... [/color]

[SapphireGhost's Hard]
*) If this hard diff, please increase the slider velocity, but please don't too high
*) Use Grid Level 3, because it's really easy to mapped this
*) Both kiai time is not fit

00:29:795 (6,7) - This jump is evil
00:56:552 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammmmer, remove it pleaseeeee


[SapphireGhost's Extra]
Why this diff has no background???
You might want delete this shit

00:34:254 (10) - Unrankable slider (Don't overlap the slider themself)
00:36:132 (2) - DELETE THIS!!!! It's very difficult while the slider are going
00:37:540 (4) - ^
00:57:490 (1) - Unrankable spinner (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, try extend it or replace with slider)
01:09:461 (2) - Ugly slider

02:05:791 (1,1,1,1) - Combine into one?
02:24:567 (3) - End at 02:27:384

I will recheck this if you already fix them all
Nice song
STAR

P.S lizzehb's diff is better than SapphireGhost diff 0.0
Jarby
Yeah this song doesn't really need kiai. Remove it.

Cosmic:

00:19:937 (5,6,7) - Move one grid to the right to align with the circles underneath properly.
00:31:907 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:663 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:183 (4) - New combo.
00:39:418 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:05:705 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:461 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:981 (4) - New combo.
01:13:216 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:16:971 (3) - New combo.
01:17:910 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:360 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:29:176 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:50:769 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:464 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
02:02:974 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:556 (5) - New combo.
02:17:057 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:25:037 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:262 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.

SapphireGhost's Hard:

00:33:550 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:786 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:226 (5) - New combo.
01:16:737 (9) - New combo.
02:02:974 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.

SapphireGhost's Extra:

No background? Or did you change that and I have an old version?
00:34:254 (10) - That overlaps itself and is a nuisance to read.
00:36:132 (2,1,4,3) - This sort of slider trickery is unrankable.
00:56:552 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:490 (1) - Really short and ninja. I'd extent it 1/1 and delete the upcoming note.
Topic Starter
Lizzehb

Jarby wrote:

Yeah this song doesn't really need kiai. Remove it.

Cosmic:

00:19:937 (5,6,7) - Move one grid to the right to align with the circles underneath properly. Done.
00:31:907 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
00:35:663 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
00:39:183 (4) - New combo.Done.
00:39:418 (1,1) - Remove new combo. Done.
01:05:705 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:09:461 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:12:981 (4) - New combo.There's no 4 there...But um I know what your saying.
01:13:216 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:16:971 (3) - New combo.Done.
01:17:910 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:26:360 (1) - Remove new combo. Done.
01:29:176 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:50:769 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:55:464 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:02:974 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:05:556 (5) - New combo.Done.
02:17:057 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:25:037 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:29:262 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo. Done.

SapphireGhost's Hard:

00:33:550 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:786 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:226 (5) - New combo.
01:16:737 (9) - New combo.
02:02:974 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.

SapphireGhost's Extra:

No background? Or did you change that and I have an old version?
00:34:254 (10) - That overlaps itself and is a nuisance to read.
00:36:132 (2,1,4,3) - This sort of slider trickery is unrankable.
00:56:552 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:490 (1) - Really short and ninja. I'd extent it 1/1 and delete the upcoming note.
Decay
uhh.... star

-is unhelpful- :(
iMuffin
Well I'm no pro tier critic but here's some input

Cosmic~:

it was a fun play, I liked how you did the sliders. It's a great difficulty for newbies or thouse that just wat a fun easy play

SapphireGhost's Hard:

I liked the spacing and the timing was great. I also like the star at the end was a nice touch.

SapphireGhost's Extra:

Ummm yeah not much to say here

anyway Star time
Topic Starter
Lizzehb
Next time I submit I'm going to get rid of the 2 guest difficulties.
Sorry, but I need someone active to work with me to get this ranked!
SapphireGhost
Eek! Long overdue spacing update.

Hoping it's not too weird, though...
Some parts look really ugly now that the spacing is through.

The star slider has stayed. I'm sorry. But it'll stay for a while unless an overwhelming amount of people say it's terrible.

Download: Electrasy - Cosmic Castaway (lizzehb) [SapphireGhost's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Lizzehb
Awesome! Now as soon as I get the part for my laptop and it's back in commision then I'll submit this!

EDIT: Turns out I can submit from different computers, awesome. xD
SapphireGhost
Changes here and there. Some new combo/not new combos were added... a few teensy changes with some sliders.
The evil jump of evil is gone now :)

Overall difficulty, circle size... blah blah blah has been made a touch easier.

Work on Extra has been discontinued. Sorry for adding that piece of crap.

By the way, sorry for being absent for so long... hope activity will pick up again now that Hard is being modded.

(This getting ranked would be ultra-cool, by the way)

Download: Electrasy - Cosmic Castaway (lizzehb) [SapphireGhost's Hard].osu
IceBeam
Add "sapphire ghost" to Tags,cause he's guest difficulty mapper.

[Cosmic~]
The beggining killed me.It's not easy at all :o I suggest you to fill it with sliders mostly.Also,you could remove some notes.
I suggest you to increase HP Drain Rate,but reduce AP/OD at least by 1 tick.
00:19:937 (5) - Remove this note.
00:20:406 (7) - ^
Ah..use Distance Snap,please,it's easy,it must have straight distance,or choose your own,but it must have sense.
00:33:785 (1) - It's so close,and newbies may click too early,and they will miss it.
00:41:296 (1) - ^ Same one.
00:43:173 (1) - Place it further,why it's hidden under the slider?
00:44:581 (5) - Fairly,I've missed here.You should fix distance,place it further.
00:54:439 - You don't need this repeat.
00:56:317 (4) - Remove this note and start spinner from here up to 00:58:195.
01:07:583 (1) - Distance,increase it.
01:11:338 (1) - ^
01:12:981 (1,2) - ^
01:17:910 (2) - ^
01:28:003 (1,2) - ^
01:31:523 (1,1,1,1,1) - I'm sure this pattern will be difficult for beginners.
01:54:525 (3) - Wait,it's hidden,isn't it too cruel?
02:10:954 (3,4) - Spacing doesn't make sense here,I can't read it.
02:11:189 (4) - Finish this slider at 02:11:893,add a stacked note to 02:12:128 and remove 02:12:363 (5),please.
02:23:159 (1) - This spinner is too short.
02:24:333 (1) - Don't place objects right after the spinner,it's too hard for Easy.
02:26:914 (1) - Again this spinner is way short.

[SG's Hard]
00:33:784 (4) - Unrankable,delete this note.
Well,technically it's fine,don't have much to suggest.

Work harder,good luck~
wmfchris
[hard]
0:21:580 (2) left 1 grid
0:24:162 (8) right 1 grid
0:33:785 (4,5) unrankable stuff, delete (4)
0:38:479 (4) that's not on spacing... fine for me
0:54~0:57 don't stack too many things together
1:04:297 (8,9) spacing

[Cosmic]
much better :3
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Use 65471 as preview point for all the difficulties.
  2. Tags must be the same for all the difficulties.


Cosmic
  1. ~
  2. Ok let's make this difficulty look better (Suggestions to improve the look of the map).
  3. 00:16:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same alignment of (1)(2)(3) for (4)(5)(6) & align (7) with (4) (Vertical)
  4. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move (2) 1 grid left and 1 grid up then align (4)(6)(7) with (2).
  5. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also align (3)(5) with (1).
  6. 00:43:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it look like this:
  7. 00:51:153 (3) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down.
  8. 00:51:388 (4,5,6) - This looks kinda messy for [Easy] try to change it.
  9. 00:55:378 (4) - Move it 1 grid left
  10. 00:55:613 (1,2,3,4) - Ermm, Copy 00:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - then use Ctrl+R, Select all the stream and place it next to the last one.
  11. 01:00:307 (7,8) - Move them 1 grid up.
  12. 01:00:776 (9) - Move it 1 grid right and 2 grids up.
  13. ~
  14. 00:25:101 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.
  15. 00:58:899 (1) - ^
  16. 01:07:583 (1) - Fix Spacing (Using 1.0x distance spacing)
  17. 01:07:583 (1,1) - ^
  18. 01:09:460 (2,1) - ^
  19. 01:38:095 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.
  20. 02:15:179 (1) - Remove New Combo
  21. 02:24:333 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners. [!!]
  22. 02:28:323 (1) - ^


SapphireGhost's Hard
  1. 00:28:621 (1,8,9,10,11) - Align (8)(9)(10)(11) with (1).
  2. 00:33:784 (4,5) - There are 2 notes spotted in the same place Orz.
  3. 00:52:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - TOO messy, please align the notes.
  4. 00:57:021 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 00:57:490 (1) - ^
  6. 00:57:960 (1) - ^
  7. 01:02:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - TOO messy, Suggestion: try to make a different alignment.
  8. 02:08:607 (5) - Delete 2 repeats, and add a circle here: 02:09:546.
  9. 02:17:057 (1) - Funny, I like it in SOME way.


Call me for Re-check once you have all the difficulties, Have a star for now~
SapphireGhost
LOTS of ugly parts were deleted! Yay!
That stupid, idiotic, how the heck did it get there circle gor deleted! Yay!

Overall, we're doing lots better. Thanks for your modding everyone!

Download: Electrasy - Cosmic Castaway (lizzehb) [SapphireGhost's Hard].osu
SapphireGhost
P.S. to lizzehb: Here's some advice for Cosmic

0:28:856 (2) - The whistle here feels a bit awkward... perhaps add whistles to 4 and 6 as well?
0:44:112 (4), (5), (6) - Not sure what you were going for here but the spacing definitely isn't comfortable.
0:52:796 (1) Needs to be one rebound shorter, I think.
2:22:219 (5) The slider here is a little weird for Easy+

Overall, very good!
Topic Starter
Lizzehb
Thanks for the mods guys but it's 3am here. Will do them soon!
I will kudosu you AFTER I mod.
Topic Starter
Lizzehb

IceBeam wrote:

Add "sapphire ghost" to Tags,cause he's guest difficulty mapper.

[Cosmic~]
The beggining killed me.It's not easy at all :o I suggest you to fill it with sliders mostly.Also,you could remove some notes.Aww q.q okay I did repeat sliders.
I suggest you to increase HP Drain Rate,but reduce AP/OD at least by 1 tick. Increased it by one tick. Do I need more HP drain up? Done.
00:19:937 (5) - Remove this note. This was all remapped.
00:20:406 (7) - ^This was all remapped.
Ah..use Distance Snap,please,it's easy,it must have straight distance,or choose your own,but it must have sense. It looked really nice though! But I changed it :(
00:33:785 (1) - It's so close,and newbies may click too early,and they will miss it. It's been a while since I was a nwebie. xD Done.
00:41:296 (1) - ^ Same one. done.
00:43:173 (1) - Place it further,why it's hidden under the slider?Oops, done.
00:44:581 (5) - Fairly,I've missed here.You should fix distance,place it further.Done.
00:54:439 - You don't need this repeat. Do you mean lessen the repeat slider? If so done.
00:56:317 (4) - Remove this note and start spinner from here up to 00:58:195. Done.
01:07:583 (1) - Distance,increase it. Done
01:11:338 (1) - ^ Done
01:12:981 (1,2) - ^ Done
01:17:910 (2) - ^ Done
01:28:003 (1,2) - ^ Done
01:31:523 (1,1,1,1,1) - I'm sure this pattern will be difficult for beginners. Done
01:54:525 (3) - Wait,it's hidden,isn't it too cruel? Done
02:10:954 (3,4) - Spacing doesn't make sense here,I can't read it. Done
02:11:189 (4) - Finish this slider at 02:11:893,add a stacked note to 02:12:128 and remove 02:12:363 (5),please. Done
02:23:159 (1) - This spinner is too short. Done
02:24:333 (1) - Don't place objects right after the spinner,it's too hard for Easy. Done
02:26:914 (1) - Again this spinner is way short. Done

[SG's Hard]
00:33:784 (4) - Unrankable,delete this note.
Well,technically it's fine,don't have much to suggest.

Work harder,good luck~
Ty, Kudosued.
Topic Starter
Lizzehb

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Use 65471 as preview point for all the difficulties.
  2. Tags must be the same for all the difficulties.


Cosmic
  1. ~
  2. Ok let's make this difficulty look better (Suggestions to improve the look of the map).
  3. 00:16:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same alignment of (1)(2)(3) for (4)(5)(6) & align (7) with (4) (Vertical) These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  4. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move (2) 1 grid left and 1 grid up then align (4)(6)(7) with (2).These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  5. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also align (3)(5) with (1).These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  6. 00:43:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it look like this:These notse were removed from a mod from above.
  7. 00:51:153 (3) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down. Done.
  8. 00:51:388 (4,5,6) - This looks kinda messy for [Easy] try to change it.Done.
  9. 00:55:378 (4) - Move it 1 grid leftDone.
  10. 00:55:613 (1,2,3,4) - Ermm, Copy 00:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - then use Ctrl+R, Select all the stream and place it next to the last one. Done.
  11. 01:00:307 (7,8) - Move them 1 grid up.Done.
  12. 01:00:776 (9) - Move it 1 grid right and 2 grids up. Done.
  13. ~
  14. 00:25:101 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.Done.
  15. 00:58:899 (1) - ^Done.
  16. 01:07:583 (1) - Fix Spacing (Using 1.0x distance spacing)Done.
  17. 01:07:583 (1,1) - ^Done.
  18. 01:09:460 (2,1) - ^Done.
  19. 01:38:095 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.Done.
  20. 02:15:179 (1) - Remove New ComboDone.
  21. 02:24:333 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners. [!!]Done.
  22. 02:28:323 (1) - ^


SapphireGhost's Hard
  1. 00:28:621 (1,8,9,10,11) - Align (8)(9)(10)(11) with (1).
  2. 00:33:784 (4,5) - There are 2 notes spotted in the same place Orz.
  3. 00:52:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - TOO messy, please align the notes.
  4. 00:57:021 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 00:57:490 (1) - ^
  6. 00:57:960 (1) - ^
  7. 01:02:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - TOO messy, Suggestion: try to make a different alignment.
  8. 02:08:607 (5) - Delete 2 repeats, and add a circle here: 02:09:546.
  9. 02:17:057 (1) - Funny, I like it in SOME way.


Call me for Re-check once you have all the difficulties, Have a star for now~
Thank you! kudosu <3
Tatsuo
Okay, back for a recheck.
Oh boy.

[Overall]
You uhh... have two .osb's in your song folder. Delete both then full submit.
Remove English, Pop, and Rock from the tags since Pop or Rock can be set as the genre when this is ranked, and English is... well just remove it.

[Cosmic~]
Why the ~ in the difficulty name?
Oh god raise that slider velocity to at least 1.0. It's really slow, even for an easy.
00:26:744 - 00:28:152 - Boring with no notes there. Add some to create flow.
00:30:030 - 00:31:438 - ^
00:50:684 - 00:52:327 - This is so cramped together, but that's because of your low slider velocity. Fix the slider velocity and then they will space out a bit more. Less clutter.
00:54:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Okay what? This has inconsistent spacing with 00:52:327. Keep your spacing consistent
01:13:216 - This is an ugly slider. Remake it.
02:22:220 (4) - This slider is hidden under (3). It's hard to tell that there's a slider underneath it for beginners. Might want to move that somewhere else.
AIMod is your friend here for the spacing issues.

[SG's Hard]
Okay, seriously. A slider velocity of 0.8 with a BPM THAT low is horrendous. You REALLY NEED to raise your slider velocity. There is no way this can get ranked with a slider velocity THAT LOW for a hard difficulty. This will cause you to remap your difficulty, since this changes spacing AND slider length. I am reluctant to mod your difficulty since you will need to remap. I'll look over it.
00:33:785 (4,5) - Unrankable. Hit circle overlaps slider start on timeline. Remove one.
00:54:674 - 00:57:960 - You can definitely map this some other way. It just feels bad to have that many hit objects on top of one space.
02:17:057 (1) - I still hate this slider.
Same advice here too. AIMod is your friend, except for those nice jumps that you put in manually.

No star. This will require another recheck. As always, come back when you have things fixed up more.
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