Leorda wrote:

Hi

[Cosmic~]
*) Rename to "Cosmic~" please
*) If this a easy or normal diff, don't use jumps. Example 00:17:121 (2,3), you have to fix those spacing, otherwise the new player will difficult of this Done.
*) Are you using distance snap? If not, use distance snap please
*) If this a easy or normal diff, remove the object if the object at red tick, because it's very difficult for new player

00:25:101 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern are hard to see, especially for easy diffDone
00:54:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^[/color]Done
01:13:216 (1) - The slider is ugly, I guess...... [/color]

[SapphireGhost's Hard]
*) If this hard diff, please increase the slider velocity, but please don't too high
*) Use Grid Level 3, because it's really easy to mapped this
*) Both kiai time is not fit

00:29:795 (6,7) - This jump is evil
00:56:552 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammmmer, remove it pleaseeeee

[SapphireGhost's Extra]
Why this diff has no background???
You might want delete this shit

00:34:254 (10) - Unrankable slider (Don't overlap the slider themself)
00:36:132 (2) - DELETE THIS!!!! It's very difficult while the slider are going
00:37:540 (4) - ^
00:57:490 (1) - Unrankable spinner (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, try extend it or replace with slider)
01:09:461 (2) - Ugly slider
02:05:791 (1,1,1,1) - Combine into one?
02:24:567 (3) - End at 02:27:384

I will recheck this if you already fix them all
Nice song
STAR

P.S lizzehb's diff is better than SapphireGhost diff 0.0

Jarby wrote:

Yeah this song doesn't really need kiai. Remove it.

Cosmic:

00:19:937 (5,6,7) - Move one grid to the right to align with the circles underneath properly. Done.
00:31:907 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
00:35:663 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
00:39:183 (4) - New combo.Done.
00:39:418 (1,1) - Remove new combo. Done.
01:05:705 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:09:461 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:12:981 (4) - New combo.There's no 4 there...But um I know what your saying.
01:13:216 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:16:971 (3) - New combo.Done.
01:17:910 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:26:360 (1) - Remove new combo. Done.
01:29:176 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:50:769 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
01:55:464 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:02:974 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:05:556 (5) - New combo.Done.
02:17:057 (1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:25:037 (1,1) - Remove new combo.Done.
02:29:262 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo. Done.

SapphireGhost's Hard:

00:33:550 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:786 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:226 (5) - New combo.
01:16:737 (9) - New combo.
02:02:974 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.

SapphireGhost's Extra:

No background? Or did you change that and I have an old version?
00:34:254 (10) - That overlaps itself and is a nuisance to read.
00:36:132 (2,1,4,3) - This sort of slider trickery is unrankable.
00:56:552 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:490 (1) - Really short and ninja. I'd extent it 1/1 and delete the upcoming note.

1. Use 65471 as preview point for all the difficulties.
2. Tags must be the same for all the difficulties.

1. ~
2. Ok let's make this difficulty look better (Suggestions to improve the look of the map).
3. 00:16:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same alignment of (1)(2)(3) for (4)(5)(6) & align (7) with (4) (Vertical)
4. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move (2) 1 grid left and 1 grid up then align (4)(6)(7) with (2).
5. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also align (3)(5) with (1).
6. 00:43:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it look like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:153 (3) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down.
8. 00:51:388 (4,5,6) - This looks kinda messy for [Easy] try to change it.
9. 00:55:378 (4) - Move it 1 grid left
10. 00:55:613 (1,2,3,4) - Ermm, Copy 00:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - then use Ctrl+R, Select all the stream and place it next to the last one.
11. 01:00:307 (7,8) - Move them 1 grid up.
12. 01:00:776 (9) - Move it 1 grid right and 2 grids up.
13. ~
14. 00:25:101 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.
15. 00:58:899 (1) - ^
16. 01:07:583 (1) - Fix Spacing (Using 1.0x distance spacing)
17. 01:07:583 (1,1) - ^
18. 01:09:460 (2,1) - ^
19. 01:38:095 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.
20. 02:15:179 (1) - Remove New Combo
21. 02:24:333 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners. [!!]
22. 02:28:323 (1) - ^

1. 00:28:621 (1,8,9,10,11) - Align (8)(9)(10)(11) with (1).
2. 00:33:784 (4,5) - There are 2 notes spotted in the same place Orz.
3. 00:52:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - TOO messy, please align the notes.
4. 00:57:021 (1) - Remove New Combo.
5. 00:57:490 (1) - ^
6. 00:57:960 (1) - ^
7. 01:02:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - TOO messy, Suggestion: try to make a different alignment.
8. 02:08:607 (5) - Delete 2 repeats, and add a circle here: 02:09:546.
9. 02:17:057 (1) - Funny, I like it in SOME way.

IceBeam wrote:

Add "sapphire ghost" to Tags,cause he's guest difficulty mapper.

[Cosmic~]
The beggining killed me.It's not easy at all I suggest you to fill it with sliders mostly.Also,you could remove some notes.Aww q.q okay I did repeat sliders.
I suggest you to increase HP Drain Rate,but reduce AP/OD at least by 1 tick. Increased it by one tick. Do I need more HP drain up? Done.
00:19:937 (5) - Remove this note. This was all remapped.
00:20:406 (7) - ^This was all remapped.
Ah..use Distance Snap,please,it's easy,it must have straight distance,or choose your own,but it must have sense. It looked really nice though! But I changed it
00:33:785 (1) - It's so close,and newbies may click too early,and they will miss it. It's been a while since I was a nwebie. xD Done.
00:41:296 (1) - ^ Same one. done.
00:43:173 (1) - Place it further,why it's hidden under the slider?Oops, done.
00:44:581 (5) - Fairly,I've missed here.You should fix distance,place it further.Done.
00:54:439 - You don't need this repeat. Do you mean lessen the repeat slider? If so done.
00:56:317 (4) - Remove this note and start spinner from here up to 00:58:195. Done.
01:07:583 (1) - Distance,increase it. Done
01:11:338 (1) - ^ Done
01:12:981 (1,2) - ^ Done
01:17:910 (2) - ^ Done
01:28:003 (1,2) - ^ Done
01:31:523 (1,1,1,1,1) - I'm sure this pattern will be difficult for beginners. Done
01:54:525 (3) - Wait,it's hidden,isn't it too cruel? Done
02:10:954 (3,4) - Spacing doesn't make sense here,I can't read it. Done
02:11:189 (4) - Finish this slider at 02:11:893,add a stacked note to 02:12:128 and remove 02:12:363 (5),please. Done
02:23:159 (1) - This spinner is too short. Done
02:24:333 (1) - Don't place objects right after the spinner,it's too hard for Easy. Done
02:26:914 (1) - Again this spinner is way short. Done

[SG's Hard]
00:33:784 (4) - Unrankable,delete this note.
Well,technically it's fine,don't have much to suggest.

Work harder,good luck~

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Use 65471 as preview point for all the difficulties.
2. Tags must be the same for all the difficulties.

Cosmic

1. ~
2. Ok let's make this difficulty look better (Suggestions to improve the look of the map).
3. 00:16:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same alignment of (1)(2)(3) for (4)(5)(6) & align (7) with (4) (Vertical) These notse were removed from a mod from above.
4. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move (2) 1 grid left and 1 grid up then align (4)(6)(7) with (2).These notse were removed from a mod from above.
5. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Also align (3)(5) with (1).These notse were removed from a mod from above.
6. 00:43:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it look like this:These notse were removed from a mod from above.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:153 (3) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down. Done.
8. 00:51:388 (4,5,6) - This looks kinda messy for [Easy] try to change it.Done.
9. 00:55:378 (4) - Move it 1 grid leftDone.
10. 00:55:613 (1,2,3,4) - Ermm, Copy 00:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - then use Ctrl+R, Select all the stream and place it next to the last one. Done.
11. 01:00:307 (7,8) - Move them 1 grid up.Done.
12. 01:00:776 (9) - Move it 1 grid right and 2 grids up. Done.
13. ~
14. 00:25:101 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.Done.
15. 00:58:899 (1) - ^Done.
16. 01:07:583 (1) - Fix Spacing (Using 1.0x distance spacing)Done.
17. 01:07:583 (1,1) - ^Done.
18. 01:09:460 (2,1) - ^Done.
19. 01:38:095 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners.Done.
20. 02:15:179 (1) - Remove New ComboDone.
21. 02:24:333 (1) - Too close to the end of the last spinner therefore too hard for beginners. [!!]Done.
22. 02:28:323 (1) - ^

SapphireGhost's Hard

1. 00:28:621 (1,8,9,10,11) - Align (8)(9)(10)(11) with (1).
2. 00:33:784 (4,5) - There are 2 notes spotted in the same place Orz.
3. 00:52:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - TOO messy, please align the notes.
4. 00:57:021 (1) - Remove New Combo.
5. 00:57:490 (1) - ^
6. 00:57:960 (1) - ^
7. 01:02:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - TOO messy, Suggestion: try to make a different alignment.
8. 02:08:607 (5) - Delete 2 repeats, and add a circle here: 02:09:546.
9. 02:17:057 (1) - Funny, I like it in SOME way.

Call me for Re-check once you have all the difficulties, Have a star for now~