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zyqzyq

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Just a quick suggestion;
- Use 0.9x distance snap in AkaShitsuji
- 1.2x or 1.1x distance snap in ShiroShitsuji
- You have a scorebar-ki but you have to have a scorebar-kidanger and scorebar-kidanger2 too.
- Make a scorebar-bg ??
- That's all ~
Oh,I forgot the kidanger!THX for your remind.
After I fix the map problems,I'll check the skin all over.
And I'll try your distance suggestion~~
THX again!
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Selee wrote:

NR好像在mod, 咱就只给星了 =w=
;) ;) 其实你能来我就觉得很惊喜啦~~
话说把你贴吧里的问题贴变成了modding queue,真是很不好意思的说。。
你前几天还在置顶帖里回答了我的问题,帮了我很多啊!
谢谢你的star~~
NatsumeRin
有slider的各点也可以加,稍微高级些的技巧是可以用slider tick(即滑条上的白点)来加。
方法是用你的clap复制一个命名为soft-slidertick.wav,在到达这个点之前把音效换为C1,之后换为C2,这样在滑过这个点时,使用的是C1效果音,即slidertick.wav。
用一个本人的图作为参照好了(虽然用的不多)http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15737,Komari难度。
另外就是一般都是先用C1再用C2的。。。你这样蛮奇怪。。。
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

NatsumeRin wrote:

有slider的各点也可以加,稍微高级些的技巧是可以用slider tick(即滑条上的白点)来加。
方法是用你的clap复制一个命名为soft-slidertick.wav,在到达这个点之前把音效换为C1,之后换为C2,这样在滑过这个点时,使用的是C1效果音,即slidertick.wav。
用一个本人的图作为参照好了(虽然用的不多)http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15737,Komari难度。
另外就是一般都是先用C1再用C2的。。。你这样蛮奇怪。。。
原来是这样啊~~
其实做那张map的时候完全不懂hitsound是怎么回事,不然肯定不会做自己没法加音效的slider。。是之前有人mod的时候告诉我要加,那个C2也是他给的。。
我回头再好好研究一下,等改好了给您看成果~~~ ;) ;)
另外我把前两个diff的难度降低了点。。jump什么的,尽量没那么jump了~~0.5x也基本上全去掉了,果然舒服了许多! :) :)
还有是第二段副歌的开头,我按照你的提议试了一下,那个渐响的音效。。可能是背景乐里的节奏太强了,感觉效果不是很明显,也可能是我加的不好吧。。我会再试试的!
皮肤也暂时还没时间改。。第二个难度的break我保留了,毕竟也不长,实在是section-pass的少爷太萌了。。要这么舍弃他是在于心不忍。。第一和第三个难度的break都map掉了~~
最后还是必须再说一声谢谢! ;)
Kurai
Hi~

[General]
spinner-background.png and spinner-metre.png must be 1024x768

[Akashitsuji]
00:43:468 (3) - Add clap at end

[Shiroshitsuji]
00:19:406 (5) - The reverse sound off, I think that'll better if you change this slider by a spinner
01:10:620 (4) - Spacing error, I know that's for the design but that's bad :<

[Kuroshitsuji]
00:26:691 (6) - Remove and extand 00:26:470 (5) by 1/4
00:55:388 (3) - Add clap at begin ?

Star~
choche_old
Hi! I'm going to start with the mod ok? ^^

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Good ;)

[Akashitsuji]

No problems here ;)

[ShiroShitsuji]

No problems too :D

[KuroShitsuji]

No problems too (T.T I couldn't mod this, is perfect, sorry)

*star*
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Kurai_ wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~

[General]
spinner-background.png and spinner-metre.png must be 1024x768

[Akashitsuji]
00:43:468 (3) - Add clap at end

[Shiroshitsuji]
00:19:406 (5) - The reverse sound off, I think that'll better if you change this slider by a spinner
01:10:620 (4) - Spacing error, I know that's for the design but that's bad :<

[Kuroshitsuji]
00:26:691 (6) - Remove and extand 00:26:470 (5) by 1/4
00:55:388 (3) - Add clap at begin ? I add clap at the 1st and 3rd white line,while this note is locatd at the 4th one..also the background sound is very loud at this point,so..maybe it doesn't matter if kept original.
Star~
Welcome~~and THX for your modding and star.
I'll fix the problems in a minute!
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

choche wrote:

SPOILER
Hi! I'm going to start with the mod ok? ^^

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)

[General]

Good ;)

[Akashitsuji]

No problems here ;)

[ShiroShitsuji]

No problems too :D

[KuroShitsuji]

No problems too (T.T I couldn't mod this, is perfect, sorry)

*star*
It's really encouraging!
THX so much~~ ;) ;)
aRiskOfRain
General;

Get someone to check the offset, I think it might be a little off.
Make the breaks the same in all the difficulties?
Make the second kiai last the whole chorus?

Easy;

01:02:011 (4,1) - Spacing.

Normal;

00:14:329 (8,1) - Spacing.
00:19:406 (5) - This repeat doesn't fall on anything.
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Get someone to check the offset, I think it might be a little off.
Make the breaks the same in all the difficulties? is this a rule?I mean I don't want to remove the section-pass skin..but if so ,I'll map over the second diff's break...
Make the second kiai last the whole chorus? OIC..it's a mistake.
Easy;

01:02:011 (4,1) - Spacing.

Normal;

00:14:329 (8,1) - Spacing.
00:19:406 (5) - This repeat doesn't fall on anything.
Thank you for your star and modding~~
Many people have told me to map over the breaks..but I still keep the second diff's break,maybe it's time to say goodby to my section-pass and fail skin..
In terms of the offset.I'll try to find someone to fix this,thank you for finding out the problem.
THX again!
NatsumeRin
我那贴不应该给kud的,没什么实际东西,以及3页最后那个也不该给。。。
之前忘了写了。。。不过提醒下,以后不要什么mod都给kud,一旦人家看到你的map写一行和写一页都是一个kud,没人愿意费心思看图。
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

NatsumeRin wrote:

我那贴不应该给kud的,没什么实际东西,以及3页最后那个也不该给。。。
之前忘了写了。。。不过提醒下,以后不要什么mod都给kud,一旦人家看到你的map写一行和写一页都是一个kud,没人愿意费心思看图。
哦。。我明白了!
居然犯了这样的错误,下次不会了。。
谢谢你的提醒啊~~
Daerren
Goku Modding!

[Akashitsuji]:
00:07:706 (1-3): looks too scrunched together.

[Shiroshitsuji]:
all looks fine.

[Kuroshitsuji]:
00:30:223 (6): perhaps new combo.


That's it for me.
star~
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Daerren wrote:

Goku Modding!

[Akashitsuji]:
00:07:706 (1-3): looks too scrunched together.

[Shiroshitsuji]:
all looks fine.

[Kuroshitsuji]:
00:30:223 (6): perhaps new combo.


That's it for me.
star~
Thank you for your modding and star~~
I've fixed them!
lovhin456
Hi! I don't know why I felt like modding this again~

General;
- Kiai time has to start and end with notes !! Check this in all difficulties~

AkaShitsuji;
- 00:09:693 >> add whistle
- 00:10:355 (1)(2)(3) >> ^
- 00:11:459 >> move to 00:11:238
- 00:15:874 (1)(2) >> add whistle, remove clap from (2)
- 00:18:523 >> add clap
- 01:22:320 >> add whistle and remove clap
- 01:24:527 (1)(2)(3) >> add whistle

ShiroShitsuji;
- 00:08:148 >> remove clap

KuroShitsuji;
- Is okk~

:D
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! I don't know why I felt like modding this again~

General;
- Kiai time has to start and end with notes !! Check this in all difficulties~ fixed

AkaShitsuji;
- 00:09:693 >> add whistle
- 00:10:355 (1)(2)(3) >> ^
- 00:11:459 >> move to 00:11:238
- 00:15:874 (1)(2) >> add whistle, remove clap from (2)
- 00:18:523 >> add clap
- 01:22:320 >> add whistle and remove clap
- 01:24:527 (1)(2)(3) >> add whistle
all fixed ,except the clap ones...

ShiroShitsuji;
- 00:08:148 >> remove clap
it's my mistake..i didn't even notice it ,Thank you for pointing it out!

KuroShitsuji;
- Is okk~

:D
It's so kind of you to mod again! thank you so much~~ :) :)
I've fixed the kiai time,and the whistles really better the map!
in terms of the clap,i put it at the 1st and 3rd white line of each beat,so if remove or add an extra one will disorganize the hitsound i think.
But I'll think it over~~
thanks again!!
lovhin456

zyqzyq wrote:

It's so kind of you to mod again! thank you so much~~ :) :)
I've fixed the kiai time,and the whistles really better the map!
in terms of the clap,i put it at the 1st and 3rd white line of each beat,so if remove or add an extra one will disorganize the hitsound i think.
But I'll think it over~~
thanks again!!
No problem~ this song is awesome and I want you to have it ranked ;) And yeah, the claps here are really hard to place perfectly :? :D Good Luck !!
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

lovhin456 wrote:

zyqzyq wrote:

It's so kind of you to mod again! thank you so much~~ :) :)
I've fixed the kiai time,and the whistles really better the map!
in terms of the clap,i put it at the 1st and 3rd white line of each beat,so if remove or add an extra one will disorganize the hitsound i think.
But I'll think it over~~
thanks again!!
No problem~ this song is awesome and I want you to have it ranked ;) And yeah, the claps here are really hard to place perfectly :? :D Good Luck !!
i know,i've tried hard to place the claps properly,even use the slidertick!
your words are very encouraging! I wish it could come true~~
i have made some maps just for fun ,now i see how hard it is to get a map ranked!
Dotsu
Hi~

我的建议:

[General]


  • Timing明显有点问题
    另外Timing Point里C2完全没有必要 都取消好了
    Slidertick应该和Hitclap保持一致
    另外三个难度最后转盘结束时间不一致 建议改成一致
[AkaShitsuji]


  • 00:29:340 (5): 开头处+Finish
    00:57:596 (5): Finish
[ShiroShitsuji]


  • 00:18:964 (1): 转盘后忘记恢复音量了?
    00:29:340 (4): 开头处+Finish
    00:57:596 (5): ^
[KuroShitsuji]


  • 00:29:340 (4): 开头处+Finish
    00:57:596 (1): Finish
Good map~

※ STAR ※
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
1) Don't use gray combo color, because it's same with multiplayer when player gets failed
2) Delete section-pass, section-fail, and play-warningarrow. Since that not appear in gameplay
3) You need a scorebar-bg, it's ugly without them!
4) Maybe, it's nice if sliderball if rotating

[AkaShitsuji]
Overall Difficulty is too high, IMO

00:06:382 (1) - I think is really confusing with 0.5x slider, especially the slider is too short, that slider makes confusing for new player

00:39:936 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
00:43:468 (3) - Finish at start?
00:50:532 (5) - ^
01:11:724 (4) - ^
01:18:788 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 3 at end
01:22:320 (4) - ^

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:18:081 (2,3) - Spacing error
00:21:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Why the object is silence?
01:00:245 (2,3) - Spacing error


[KuroShitsuji]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

我的建议:

[General]


  • Timing明显有点问题 之前也有人指出过offset好像不太对,自己试了几次也没法确定,现在在找人帮忙ing...
    另外Timing Point里C2完全没有必要 都取消好了 其实C2是clap音啊,C1才是slidertick。。有点奇怪哈~~音效方面我是彻头彻尾的新手,很多都不懂的说。。弱弱地问,取消了之后clap音不也没了吗?
    Slidertick应该和Hitclap保持一致 确实是同一个音效,通过复制粘贴得来的,但是听起来就是不一样,别人说需要混一下音什么的。。其实我也不知道应该怎么办
    另外三个难度最后转盘结束时间不一致 建议改成一致 fixed
[AkaShitsuji]


  • 00:29:340 (5): 开头处+Finish
    00:57:596 (5): Finish 这5个note当时是根据别人的建议做了渐响的效果,所以到(5)的时候音效已经挺响的,因为我的clap音效本身就轻所以不明显,但是一加finish感觉音效就一下子太响了。。

[ShiroShitsuji]


  • 00:18:964 (1): 转盘后忘记恢复音量了?我太粗心了。。
    00:29:340 (4): 开头处+Finish
    00:57:596 (5): ^
[KuroShitsuji]


  • 00:29:340 (4): 开头处+Finish
    00:57:596 (1): Finish
Good map~

※ STAR ※
谢谢你的建议~~我会好好改一下timing的!
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
1) Don't use gray combo color, because it's same with multiplayer when player gets failed now it's brown.
2) Delete section-pass, section-fail, and play-warningarrow. Since that not appear in gameplay long long ago,there's break in this map...
3) You need a scorebar-bg, it's ugly without them! I'll make one later
4) Maybe, it's nice if sliderball if rotating pretty right!

[AkaShitsuji]
Overall Difficulty is too high, IMO

00:06:382 (1) - I think is really confusing with 0.5x slider, especially the slider is too short, that slider makes confusing for new player

00:39:936 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
both fixed
00:43:468 (3) - Finish at start?
00:50:532 (5) - ^
01:11:724 (4) - ^
the finish sounds too loud in this map,i think..
01:18:788 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 3 at end
01:22:320 (4) - ^
it's so attentive of you to find this error..i've no idea whether i use the proper word,english chatting is a big challenge for me...

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:18:081 (2,3) - Spacing error
00:21:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Why the object is silence? I forgot to recover the volumn,for the former spinner is silence..now fixed!
01:00:245 (2,3) - Spacing error[/color] it's kinda a design,i want to make it symmetrical,together with the former two sliders.

[KuroShitsuji]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR
THX for your modding and star!
it really helps~~ :) :)
by the way,what a nice greeting!
Sakura
[Notes]
Weird, but the video doesnt appear on the editor, only on play.

[General]
No Tags?
When you switch instruments and vocals you need to put a new combo

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[KuroShitsuji]
Lots of awkward mapping and mapping to silence, i only point them out on the next diff tho.
01:11:724 (1,2,3,4) - There is nothing in the song that hints me towards this jump.
00:22:276 (3,4,5) - Spacing

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:11:459 (4) - Expected it to end at: 00:12:342
00:14:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section feels odd, specially the part where it says "Warui yume" looks like Yume should have its own repeat slider, or at least the Yu part should be longer than the i part.
00:16:757 (5) - Use sliders for sustained notes like this one instead of 2 separate circles.
00:21:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Why is all this silent?
00:24:262 (4) - Mapping to silence?
00:32:872 (3) - Should be longer.
00:34:638 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Both combos should be 2 sliders on the same combo instead.
00:36:404 (4,5,6) - Could have been a spinner or a longer slider.
00:39:715 (5,6,7,8) - Probably another spinner
00:41:702 (1,2,3) - Dont know what are you following here.
00:44:130 (4,5,6) - ^
00:50:090 (4,5,6) - Sounds weird.
01:04:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1 slider or spinner?
01:14:152 (4,5) - Now this is a good spot to use those Slider, Circle, Slider that you like so much
01:24:527 (1) - This spinner could be split into more notes.

[AkaShitsuji]
Many awkward notes once again.

This will need more work before i can star it
_llkey_18
hii some suguestion

easy
00:57:596 - add finish?

normal
00:02:187-1,2 - add whistle?
00:03:953 - ^
00:05:719 - ^
00:29:340 - add finish?
01:03:777 - how about with repeat? and delete this note?

hard
00:12:121 - addd note
00:29:340 - add finish?
00:31:768 - add note?

well pretty nice song/map ^^ star
roflninja
hi,

[AkaShitsuji]
00:55:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these a diamond shape?
01:21:216 (3) - kinda noisy imo

[KuroShitsuji]
01:14:814 (4) - has to be farther from (3)'s end?

nice map
DJPop
BPM: 136
Offset: 1,128



- Some timing sections are exactly on the notes, fix them.
- Use soft-hitclap as the slidertick, not normal-hitclap.

~AkaShitsuji~
00:27:574 (1) - add hitfinish
00:29:340 (5) - add hitfinish at start
01:10:841 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:21:547 - I guess you forgot to add timing section here

~ShiroShitsuji~
00:18:964 (1) - start on right white tick
00:28:015 (1,4) - add hitfinish at start
00:38:832 (3) - add clap at slidertick
01:21:216 (1) - add clap at middle

~KuroShitsuji~
00:26:470 (5) - add clap at the end
00:27:574 (1) - add hitfinish
00:29:340 (5) - add hitfinish at start


+Star
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Sakura301 wrote:

[Notes]
Weird, but the video doesnt appear on the editor, only on play.

[General]
No Tags? I can't think any more tags besides the title,artist,source..
When you switch instruments and vocals you need to put a new combo got it!

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[KuroShitsuji]
Lots of awkward mapping and mapping to silence, i only point them out on the next diff tho.
01:11:724 (1,2,3,4) - There is nothing in the song that hints me towards this jump. fixed
00:22:276 (3,4,5) - Spacing fixed

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:11:459 (4) - Expected it to end at: 00:12:342
00:14:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section feels odd, specially the part where it says "Warui yume" looks like Yume should have its own repeat slider, or at least the Yu part should be longer than the i part.
00:16:757 (5) - Use sliders for sustained notes like this one instead of 2 separate circles.
all fixed
00:21:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Why is all this silent? I forgot to recover the volumn as the former spinner is slience,now fixed..
00:24:262 (4) - Mapping to silence? it's on the red line..
00:32:872 (3) - Should be longer. but it should be symmetrial..IMO
00:34:638 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Both combos should be 2 sliders on the same combo instead.
00:36:404 (4,5,6) - Could have been a spinner or a longer slider. is it too short for a spin..and it'll be hard to shape such a long slider..
00:39:715 (5,6,7,8) - Probably another spinner
00:41:702 (1,2,3) - Dont know what are you following here. the beat..i think..
00:44:130 (4,5,6) - ^
00:50:090 (4,5,6) - Sounds weird. but,beside the clap there's no other hitsound..
01:04:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1 slider or spinner?
01:14:152 (4,5) - Now this is a good spot to use those Slider, Circle, Slider that you like so much right
01:24:527 (1) - This spinner could be split into more notes. fixed

[AkaShitsuji]
Many awkward notes once again.
in this diff,the notes are following the beat,not the vocals..maybe it's the reason to the awkward notes.

This will need more work before i can star it

THX for your professional suggestion!
i'm a beginner,such suggestion really helps a lot..
it may take time to fix all the "awkward notes"..and i'm not sure whether i can do it.
when i fixed them all ,i'll PM you to recheck..
thanks again~~
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

DJPop wrote:

BPM: 136
Offset: 1,128

THX for your timing~~it really helps!!

- Some timing sections are exactly on the notes, fix them.
- Use soft-hitclap as the slidertick, not normal-hitclap.
i remember i use the soft hitsound..i've no idea why it sounds normal...in fact,when I resubmited it yesterday,it's still soft,i didn't make any change to the timing section,why it sounds normal now.. :? :?

~AkaShitsuji~
00:27:574 (1) - add hitfinish
00:29:340 (5) - add hitfinish at start
01:10:841 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:21:547 - I guess you forgot to add timing section here right..XD
all fixed

~ShiroShitsuji~
00:18:964 (1) - start on right white tick
00:28:015 (1,4) - add hitfinish at start
00:38:832 (3) - add clap at slidertick
01:21:216 (1) - add clap at middle
all fixed

~KuroShitsuji~
00:26:470 (5) - add clap at the end
00:27:574 (1) - add hitfinish
00:29:340 (5) - add hitfinish at start
all fixed

+Star
THX again~~for your timing help..and giving those suggestions!
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

_llkey_18 wrote:

hii some suguestion

easy
00:57:596 - add finish?

normal
00:02:187-1,2 - add whistle?
00:03:953 - ^
00:05:719 - ^
00:29:340 - add finish?
01:03:777 - how about with repeat? and delete this note? i've changed bpm and offset,so i'm not sure which note you mean..

hard
00:12:121 - addd note
00:29:340 - add finish?
00:31:768 - add note?

well pretty nice song/map ^^ star
THX for your hitsound's suggestion~~
all fixed
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

roflninja wrote:

hi,

[AkaShitsuji]
00:55:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these a diamond shape? it makes the circles look better~~
01:21:216 (3) - kinda noisy imo

[KuroShitsuji]
01:14:814 (4) - has to be farther from (3)'s end?

nice map
all fixed!
THX for your modding and star~~
Vass_Bass
Hi, nice map =)
don't see any problemsб expect
normal: 01:07:745 (4,5) - move it between sliders + spacing
01:08:958 (7) - move it to 01:09:069 + spacing
hard: 00:16:569 (3,4) - 1 grid up
star
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi, nice map =)
don't see any problemsб expect
normal: 01:07:745 (4,5) - move it between sliders + spacing
01:08:958 (7) - move it to 01:09:069 + spacing
hard: 00:16:569 (3,4) - 1 grid up
star
all fixed.
THX~~
IceBeam
[AkaShitSuji]
00:29:363 (5) - New combo?
00:55:833 (1) - Increase volume by 1 tick?
00:57:598 (5) - New combo?

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:02:892 (5) - New combo.
00:29:363 (4) - New combo?
00:57:598 (5) - ^

[KuroShitsuji]
00:29:363 (5) - New combo?
00:32:892 (1) - Fix distance.Put futher.

The NC suggestions I marked with questions are about starting New Combo with Kiai.Just looks better to me.

Well,not much mistakes.Good job.

Star~
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

SadKangaroo wrote:

[AkaShitSuji]
00:29:363 (5) - New combo?
00:55:833 (1) - Increase volume by 1 tick?
00:57:598 (5) - New combo?

[ShiroShitsuji]
00:02:892 (5) - New combo.
00:29:363 (4) - New combo?
00:57:598 (5) - ^

[KuroShitsuji]
00:29:363 (5) - New combo?
00:32:892 (1) - Fix distance.Put futher.

The NC suggestions I marked with questions are about starting New Combo with Kiai.Just looks better to me.

Well,not much mistakes.Good job.

Star~
all fixed!
THX~~~
l3lueskyiiz
ฺbeautiful song ..

and great beatmap :)
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

ฺbeautiful song ..

and great beatmap :)

THX~~ :) :)
Garven
As per your request:

[Skin]
Um, your slider ball animation... does it actually animate? I'm not seeing any difference in the images - just delete them all except for sliderb0
With the black hitcircleoverlay, I'd do black slider tracks as well.
Reduce tick rate to .5 It sounds much better at that.
The video wasn't playing for me. :/

[Red]
No breaks? ._.
Up HP drain by 1 or two. 0 is just stupid.
00:10:392 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly with the strong syncopation with the vocalist, which you were following right up until this point. Try something else.
00:27:598 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set.

[White]
Still no breaks. ._.
Feels really samey to Red due to the very similar spacing. Everything feels really cramped. I'd suggest upping that a little bit, but that's your call. Otherwise I'd just kind of complain about everything being so close to each other for the mod. :P

[Black]
00:26:054 (3,4) - Just do these as single notes.

I kind of feel that the easiest of the set is a tad difficult, and the Normal/hard is kind of samey feeling. Otherwise this is okay.
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Skin]
Um, your slider ball animation... does it actually animate? I'm not seeing any difference in the images - just delete them all except for sliderb0
With the black hitcircleoverlay, I'd do black slider tracks as well.
i'll fix the skin problems.THX for pointing them out~~
Reduce tick rate to .5 It sounds much better at that. i use 2 tick rate because there're some sliderticks..though they couldn't be hear clearly.
The video wasn't playing for me. :/ :? :? i've no idea..

[Red]
No breaks? ._. there used to be a break..i even made a section-pass/fail skin...but many people suggested me to map it over,so...
Up HP drain by 1 or two. 0 is just stupid. fixed
00:10:392 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly with the strong syncopation with the vocalist, which you were following right up until this point. Try something else. this part has been motified for many times..i'll try to fix it
00:27:598 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set. fixed

[White]
Still no breaks. ._.
Feels really samey to Red due to the very similar spacing. Everything feels really cramped. I'd suggest upping that a little bit, but that's your call. Otherwise I'd just kind of complain about everything being so close to each other for the mod. :P
uh..it's really cramped. are there too many notes or the slider velocity should be increased?

[Black]
00:26:054 (3,4) - Just do these as single notes. fixed

I kind of feel that the easiest of the set is a tad difficult, and the Normal/hard is kind of samey feeling. Otherwise this is okay.
maybe such feeling is my style? :D :D
in terms of the easiest diff,i want to put every note following the beat,IMO it'll make it easy..but it causes awkward feeling,as you say,in those parts with strong syncopation with the vocalist..so as a mapper beginner, i feel difficult to handle this problem..but i'll try my best
THX for your modding and star!!
ouranhshc
Kuro
00:15:907 (2) - place the start of the slider on (6) of the previous combo
00:20:760 (2,4) - one grid right
01:15:245 (6) - disable grid snap and center between (4) and (5)
01:24:951 (2) - place on x-axis? and make (3) symmetrical to (1)?

Shiro
00:12:819 (5) - new combo
01:02:892 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - what happened to the drums
Topic Starter
zyqzyq

ouranhshc wrote:

Kuro
00:15:907 (2) - place the start of the slider on (6) of the previous combo fixed
00:20:760 (2,4) - one grid right but the (3.5) will move..maybe i should disable grid?
01:15:245 (6) - disable grid snap and center between (4) and (5) fixed
01:24:951 (2) - place on x-axis? and make (3) symmetrical to (1)? fixed

Shiro
00:12:819 (5) - new combo
01:02:892 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - what happened to the drums
both fixed

THX for your modding and star~~
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