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Senritsu

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-06-25T14:29:40+00:00

Prophecy wrote:
M4M / Special Mod Requested by Senritsu

[Taiko]
00:17:429 (48) - d i want to maintain the consistency, as well as the music suits kk kk though ovo
00:17:644 (49) - d ^
00:24:287 (74,75) - d d ^
00:38:001 (127,128) - d d ^
00:45:394 (159) - d following the instrument (piano? or w/e there) so no change
01:38:322 - delete uhm no, will keep it for now since it follows the drum. but may be considered in the future~
01:39:608 - d im following the vocal so no change~
01:46:251 - k changed 01:46:144 (119) - instead
02:59:965 - Strange here i think it's not though ;;; following the ambience, i make a new rhythm that compatible with it, and i come up with this ;v;
04:02:322 - k (Vocal: koi.... - high tones) nah im following drum
04:02:537 - ^ ^
04:06:608 - d keeping the current one since it suits better .w.
04:13:358 - delete noo im following the drum on the back ;v;
04:53:751 (25,26) - ctrl+g im following the drum and cymbal, so no change
04:57:501 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) -
TRY THIS
changed by myself~

Seems good. need more mod! Good Luck for Approval

Thanks for mod~

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2015-06-27T10:23:06+00:00

Hi, from my queue. ini pesanannya~

Despair

00:02:965 (6) - ganti jadi d? pitchnya emang tinggi, tp d bisa jadi intro yang enak buat pattern selanjutnya
00:05:322 (13,14) - bisa dituker dengan alasan yang sama
00:08:751 (22,23) - ^
00:12:179 (31,32) - ^
untuk 00:26:322 - 00:28:037 bila mengikuti instrumennya tampaknya pattern seperti dibawah ini lebih pas

00:28:465 (90,91,92,93) - trus ini diganti jadi dk kd
00:32:536 (104) - ganti jadi k? menurutku terdengar lebih baik
00:35:965 (119) - ^
00:39:394 (132) - ^
00:41:537 (141) - menurutku lebih baik dihapus karena gak ada suara drum disini, terus 00:41:322 (140) - ini diganti jadi d
01:10:679 (265) - ini kalo dipindah ke 01:10:894 dan ini 01:11:751 (269) dihapus akan lebih cocok dengan drumnya
01:17:965 (298,299,300) - ganti jadi DDk
01:18:929 - tambah d disini agar jadi kdd?
01:23:858 - tambah k mungkin?
01:28:144 - tambah k disini, ada suara clap yang cukup menonjol
01:39:179 (81) - ganti jadi d

rasanya kekosongan di 01:52:894 di 01:57:608 sama di 01:59:751 cukup awkward deh. setidaknya menurutku sih.
02:17:108 (287,288) - tukar, instrumennya emang pitchna turun tapi drumnya lebih menonjol
02:21:072 (306) - hapus? ada finisher di akhir dan keberadaan not ini membuat mukul finishernya susah setengah mati
02:45:072 (417) - ini juga

02:21:715 (312) - pindah ke 02:21:608 lebih pas
02:25:251 (323) - ganti k
02:32:537 (353,354) - tukar dan tambah k di 02:32:215

di tengah2 enak

03:50:322 - tambah d
04:08:108 (59,60,61) - ganti jadi dkd?

sisanya juga enak

sekian dulu dari saya. semoga membantu

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-06-28T15:06:39+00:00

Flying Pan wrote:
Hi, from my queue. ini pesanannya~ hello~

Despair
00:02:965 (6) - ganti jadi d? pitchnya emang tinggi, tp d bisa jadi intro yang enak buat pattern selanjutnya nggak deh, untuk perubahan nadanya gw ambil dd kk jadi perubahannya signifikan (rendah -> tinggi)
00:05:322 (13,14) - bisa dituker dengan alasan yang sama ^
00:08:751 (22,23) - ^ uu~
00:12:179 (31,32) - ^ nyaa!
untuk 00:26:322 - 00:28:037 bila mengikuti instrumennya tampaknya pattern seperti dibawah ini lebih pas lebih pas yang sekarang imo, karena di 00:27:179 (85,86,87) - juga gw consider instrumennya
00:28:465 (90,91,92,93) - trus ini diganti jadi dk kd ngikutin musik ;v;
00:32:536 (104) - ganti jadi k? menurutku terdengar lebih baik ^
00:35:965 (119) - ^ ^
00:39:394 (132) - ^ ^
00:41:537 (141) - menurutku lebih baik dihapus karena gak ada suara drum disini, terus 00:41:322 (140) - ini diganti jadi d gw ngikutin piano rip ;v;
01:10:679 (265) - ini kalo dipindah ke 01:10:894 dan ini 01:11:751 (269) dihapus akan lebih cocok dengan drumnya bahkan di 01:10:894 kosong dan gaada instrumen lain, cuma vokal bekas perpanjangan dari 01:10:679 (265) -
01:17:965 (298,299,300) - ganti jadi DDk simbalnya lebih ngecrash di sana, dan lebih ngikutin vokalnya imo
01:18:929 - tambah d disini agar jadi kdd? dan atas alasan apa gw harus ganti itu ke kdd? imo vokalnya udah berdiri sendiri dan instrumennya juga berdiri sendiri
01:23:858 - tambah k mungkin? ^
01:28:144 - tambah k disini, ada suara clap yang cukup menonjol okaay~
01:39:179 (81) - ganti jadi d ngikutin vokal so nope~

sekian dulu dari saya. semoga membantu

ty for mod~
waiting for hinsdur who will check all mods tmr >_>
mentang" indihome lmao

OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 2015-06-30T03:43:43+00:00

Hey!

[despair]
01:39:394 (81,82,83,84) - 'ddk d' here instead? plays nicer imo
02:20:751 (303,304,305,306,307) - kkk D instead? since normally notes kinda stop after a 1/4 big note
02:24:608 (321) - compared to the big notes before, this one really doesn't compare with the impact made haha
02:51:608 (453,454,455) - though it's been ddd k k d for a bit, this is the most important part to end on k k D
03:23:537 (71) - should stay 'd'
03:21:394 (56,57,58) -
03:23:108 (68,69,70) - you can't hear the snare hits on these, so maybe just kkk to make them different?
03:37:251 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - ddk ddk d d K d should fit more here

03:50:322 () - add d? randomly empty ;w;
04:25:679 (23) - d? the ddk just works nicer, similar to early in the mod

Good relaxing map! GL!

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-06-30T14:42:20+00:00

OzzyOzrock wrote:
Hey! hi~

[despair]
01:39:394 (81,82,83,84) - 'ddk d' here instead? plays nicer imo changed to kkd k
04:25:679 (23) - d? the ddk just works nicer, similar to early in the mod done

Good relaxing map! GL!

thanks for mod~

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-06-30T17:18:46+00:00

wah iki :\|
weh.

[kesper, bemper]
weh ini tohok.. wew ok

00:45:179 (158) - gimana kat? weh ga bisa jelasin aku `L_`
00:47:751 (168) - kat buat nendang, duar.. don monoton.. buat music... eh forjet.. .. enak juga kan buat msk di stream ini 00:47:965 - *suaranya sama.. kalau ini kan.. 00:51:179 (182) - beda dari.. lupakan *surono berupaya di accept modnya *bad moddar.
00:59:108 (220) - ini add note ga? kat or blah XD
01:38:108 (75) - ini kat, 01:39:179 (81) - ini don. *done, ini permen mints.
01:41:965 (98) - kat. `_L`
01:56:108 (173) - don, aku terlalu sering melihat kdk ~_~
02:02:965 (212,213,214,215,216,217) - ctrl g? dibalik biar sama kek sebelum ddk, kdk yg disini juga pas... `L_`
03:05:108 (33,34,35) - kkd, yah karna d nya itu beda ~w~
02:58:894 - from here...... dem nice.. okay,
03:20:108 (47) - kat
03:32:858 (121) - ~~kat?~~
dah gini aja.. payah bener akyu.

hati2 ya.. mungkin mod ku sedang jelek lagunya.. lupakan, semoga bermanfaat

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-06-30T17:34:09+00:00

Surono wrote:
wah iki :\|
weh.

[kesper, bemper]
weh ini tohok.. wew ok lol
00:45:179 (158) - gimana kat? weh ga bisa jelasin aku `L_`eue gw ngikutin drum sama vokalnya di sini, kesannya lebih rendah gitu + drumnya juga keras
00:47:751 (168) - kat buat nendang, duar.. don monoton.. buat music... eh forjet.. .. enak juga kan buat msk di stream ini 00:47:965 - *suaranya sama.. kalau ini kan.. 00:51:179 (182) - beda dari.. lupakan *surono berupaya di accept modnya *bad moddar. 00:47:751 (168,169) - pitchnya beda jauh, pianonya i mean so no change
00:59:108 (220) - ini add note ga? kat or blah XD there's a note placed already..
01:38:108 (75) - ini kat, 01:39:179 (81) - ini don. *done, ini permen mints. imo yang sekarang udah follow vocal.. but ditampung dulu deh~
01:41:965 (98) - kat. `_L` dengan alasan? kayanya udah cocok sama vokal + drumnya sih..
01:56:108 (173) - don, aku terlalu sering melihat kdk ~_~im not Hinsvar but i doubt he will accept this karena dia ngikutin musiknya yang emang repetitive gitu but.. idk :>
03:05:108 (33,34,35) - kkd, yah karna d nya itu beda ~w~ imo mirip sama 03:04:251 (29,30,31) - kok..
02:58:894 - from here...... dem nice.. okay, thanks :>
dah gini aja.. payah bener akyu. nggak kok :3

hati2 ya.. mungkin mod ku sedang jelek lagunya.. lupakan, semoga bermanfaat

ty for mod~!

BSS WHYYYYYYY QAQ

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-06-30T17:41:21+00:00

`L_` wat de hell komanya.. i mean mod ku yg jelek.. kok lagunagwya KNM<WGJFBMNG ~~:V:v;:V;v~~

Backfire

3,204 posts

Joined February 2010

Backfire 2015-07-02T07:11:28+00:00

despair - (try to use a capital D, with lower-case it looks quite bad.)

00:07:037 - Definitely not needed right here, this 1/4. It feels forced.

01:41:858 - Try a kat here, for me it really fit quite well.

01:50:537 - I would add a note here, don or kat either way, to fill this weird spot.

02:17:108 - I would make this don and this kat 02:17:322 - , it works much better as a flow, too.

02:29:537 - Maybe a spinner?

03:38:108 - For me, the music ends. No more notes, really, until 03:40:037 - , so you could replace it with a spinner.

04:01:037 - Try to do something which is more smooth with the volume. Like a 5% increase on every note, not every other note.

04:40:679 - kkddk or kkdkd is much better here.

05:00:822 - Again, do more smoother volume change.

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-02T09:08:38+00:00

Backfire wrote:
despair - (try to use a capital D, with lower-case it looks quite bad.) it's actually intentional but.. okay

00:07:037 - Definitely not needed right here, this 1/4. It feels forced. i dont see why it's forced, it follows the ambience well, the music there, idk what music it's, but im keeping it for now

01:41:858 - Try a kat here, for me it really fit quite well. agree

04:01:037 - Try to do something which is more smooth with the volume. Like a 5% increase on every note, not every other note. hell hard work. okay lol

05:00:822 - Again, do more smoother volume change. sure

thanks for mod o/

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-07-02T09:35:23+00:00

a reminder to myself to stop being lazy already

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-02T10:10:20+00:00

i will slap you on LINE, Skype, FB, Twitter, and osu! if you're still being lazy today, so dw about that

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-07-02T13:30:15+00:00

Senritsu wrote:
i will slap you on LINE, Skype, FB, Twitter, and osu! if you're still being lazy today, so dw about that

thank you

Prophecy wrote:
M4M / Special Mod Requested by Senritsu

[Taiko]02:15:394 - k ok
02:30:608 - add d Nope; I'd like to keep the silence here.
02:30:822 - add d ^
03:15:394 (16,17,18) - kkk kdd insteed
03:22:251 - delete for break There is a quite notable sound that I can't ignore here.
03:37:787 - ^ ok
03:41:751 (7) - move to 03:41:537 Dunno why, but I feel that it... just doesn't fit.
03:41:965 - add k ^
04:13:358 - delete I'm sure this rhythm fits, though.[/box]

Seems good. need more mod! Good Luck for Approval

Flying Pan wrote:
Hi, from my queue. ini pesanannya~

Despair
rasanya kekosongan di 01:52:894 di 01:57:608 sama di 01:59:751 cukup awkward deh. setidaknya menurutku sih. Ini buat break, dan buat saya sih oke ya... Lihat aja pendapat yang lain nanti.
02:17:108 (287,288) - tukar, instrumennya emang pitchna turun tapi drumnya lebih menonjol Oke.
02:21:072 (306) - hapus? ada finisher di akhir dan keberadaan not ini membuat mukul finishernya susah setengah mati ^
02:45:072 (417) - ini juga ^

02:21:715 (312) - pindah ke 02:21:608 lebih pas ^
02:25:251 (323) - ganti k ^
02:32:537 (353,354) - tukar dan tambah k di 02:32:215 02:32:537 - di sini instrumennya memiliki pitch yang lebih tinggi, dan saya merasa... kurang pas ditambahin note di sana.

di tengah2 enak

03:50:322 - tambah d Done.

sisanya juga enak

sekian dulu dari saya. semoga membantu

OzzyOzrock wrote:
Hey!

[despair]
02:20:751 (303,304,305,306,307) - kkk D instead? since normally notes kinda stop after a 1/4 big note I feel that kdd is better to emphasize the decreasing pitchc.
02:24:608 (321) - compared to the big notes before, this one really doesn't compare with the impact made haha There is still an impact to be made, though, so there's that.
02:51:608 (453,454,455) - though it's been ddd k k d for a bit, this is the most important part to end on k k D Ah yes.
03:23:537 (71) - should stay 'd' Yep.
03:21:394 (56,57,58) - ? lol
03:23:108 (68,69,70) - you can't hear the snare hits on these, so maybe just kkk to make them different? I don't really think it fits, to be honest. It's hard to explain, but it just... doesn't work. 03:23:215 (69) - changed this to d instead.
03:37:251 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - ddk ddk d d K d should fit more here ...Did something else.
03:50:322 () - add d? randomly empty ;w; Sure.

Good relaxing map! GL!

Surono wrote:
wah iki :\|
weh.

[kesper, bemper]
weh ini tohok.. wew ok
01:56:108 (173) - don, aku terlalu sering melihat kdk ~_~ Ya gimana, di sini emang pasnya kdk sih...
02:02:965 (212,213,214,215,216,217) - ctrl g? dibalik biar sama kek sebelum ddk, kdk yg disini juga pas... `L_` ^
03:20:108 (47) - kat Pitch-nya lebih tinggi di 03:20:215 (48).
03:32:858 (121) - ~~kat?~~ ok

hati2 ya.. mungkin mod ku sedang jelek lagunya.. lupakan, semoga bermanfaat

Backfire wrote:
01:50:537 - I would add a note here, don or kat either way, to fill this weird spot. Added a kat.

02:17:108 - I would make this don and this kat 02:17:322 - , it works much better as a flow, too. Done.

02:29:537 - Maybe a spinner? ...I'll ask Senritsu for this.

03:38:108 - For me, the music ends. No more notes, really, until 03:40:037 - , so you could replace it with a spinner. Okay.

04:01:037 - Try to do something which is more smooth with the volume. Like a 5% increase on every note, not every other note.

04:40:679 - kkddk or kkdkd is much better here. kkdkd it is

Thanks!

yay

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128,192,216929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,217037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,217251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,217358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,217465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,217679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,217787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,217894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,218108,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,218322,12,0,219394,0:0:0:0:
128,192,219608,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,220037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,220679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,221322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,221751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,222394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,223037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,223465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,224108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,224751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,225394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,225608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,225822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,226465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,226894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,227322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,227537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,228179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,229037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,229251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,230322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,230965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,231608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,231822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,232679,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,233108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,233322,1,0,0:0:0:0:

384,192,275322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,275537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,275751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,275858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,275965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,276179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,276394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,276608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,276715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,276822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,277037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,277251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,277465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,277572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,277679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,277894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,278108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,278322,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,192,278537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,278751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,278965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,279179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,279287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,279394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,279608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,279822,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,280037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,280144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,280251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,280465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,280679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,280787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,280894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,281001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,281108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,281322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,281537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,281751,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,192,282179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,282394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,282608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,282715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,282822,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,283037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,283251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,283358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,283465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,283572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,283679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,283894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,284108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,284322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,284429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,284537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,284751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,284965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,285179,1,6,0:0:0:0:
128,192,285394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,285608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,285822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,285929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,286037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,286144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,286251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,286465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,286679,1,6,0:0:0:0:
128,192,287108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,287322,1,6,0:0:0:0:
384,192,287537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,287644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,287751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,287965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,288179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,288394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,288501,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-07-02T22:18:35+00:00

*edit: postnya mz hinsper kesper enam sembliman.

.. \( `_J`)\

wew.
,

ben tujuh tujuh.

Last edited by Surono 2015-07-04T03:14:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-03T08:30:31+00:00

kk updated all

Surono wrote:

.. \( `_J`)\

wew.
,

~~\Firce intensifies/~~

[R]

1,050 posts

Joined November 2013

[R] 2015-07-08T05:36:51+00:00

from queue
every "?" lines just an opinion

[Despair]

no comment = following vocal/music

00:34:251 - d ?
00:41:537 - delete ? buat spacing pindah ke beat selanjutnya
01:01:679 - d
01:02:001 - k
01:02:322 - kenapa engga K ?
01:37:465 (72,73,74) - ctrl+G , maybe disini 01:37:465 - suaranya high
01:39:608 - d

02:50:322 (96,97,98) - triplet ini rasanya weird jadi,
02:50:429 - move 02:50:215 -
02:50:537 - d

03:48:608 - add d ?
03:49:037 - k ?
03:52:894 - add k

maap tanpa komentar, kurang pandai buat beatmap ini apalagi 5 menit -/\-

Good Luck ~

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-08T07:47:03+00:00

[R] wrote:
from queue
every "?" lines just an opinion

[Despair]
no comment = following vocal/music

00:34:251 - d ? nope, buat ngikutin pianonya juga
00:41:537 - delete ? buat spacing pindah ke beat selanjutnya ^
01:01:679 - d ok
01:02:001 - k changed to kkk
01:02:322 - kenapa engga K ? soalnya drumnya lebih dominan di sini, dan drumnya berat so~
01:37:465 (72,73,74) - ctrl+G , maybe disini 01:37:465 - suaranya high changed stuff
01:39:608 - d vokal, no change .w.
maap tanpa komentar, kurang pandai buat beatmap ini apalagi 5 menit -/\-

Good Luck ~

makasih~ \ o /

Nishizumi

1,092 posts

Joined March 2013

Nishizumi 2015-07-08T21:09:27+00:00

Hi senrichuu~ o/ as you requested via chat ingame

[Despair]

OMGGGGG NIH LAGU BANYAK AMAT SUARA SIMBALNYAAAAAA @_@

00:03:608 (8,9,10,11) - ganti ke kd dk ? entah kenapa semua bagian kaya begini kalo 1 warna rasanya agak aneh imo, soalnya pitch (9,10) - jelas banget beda imo
00:51:501 - move ke 00:51:929 - ? soalnya musik buat streamnya mulai dari 00:51:608 -
01:10:679 - move ke 01:10:894 - ? dari 01:09:179 - sampe sini kamu ngikutin drumnya kan bukan vokalnya ? sedangkan kalo note di 01:10:679 - malah tiba tiba jadi ngikutin vokalnya, ga ada suara drum di situ
01:17:322 - add finish ? konsisten sama 01:10:465 - walaupun di bagian ini suara simbalnya lebih kecil daripada 01:10:465 - tapi gw rasa masih pas kok
01:17:537 - sama kaya 01:10;679 -, move ke 01:17:751 - ?
02:17:537 - delete aja ? kamu ngikutin suara drum kan ? ga ada suara drum disini
02:26:965 - remove finish ? ga ada suara simbal di sini ga kaya sebelumnya, juga ga terlalu nekenin banget musiknya buat big note
02:29:322 - ganti ke d ? suara drumnya sama kaya 02:29:108 - imo
03:16:037 - ganti ke d ? suara drumnya sama musiknya sama kaya 03:15:822
03:19:787 (45,46) - swap ? kedengarannya dari tinggi ke rendah, dan juga (46) pitchnya sama kaya note selanjutnya
03:22:679 - agak aneh deh kalo di sini dibiarin kosong soalnya ada suara musiknya, tambahin d ? atau pindahin dari 03:22:787 - ke 03:22:679 ?
03:28:144 - sama kaya di atas, tambahin d ?
03:36:608 - dari yang gw liat sebelum-sebelumnya setiap ada suara simbal (kalo bukan di bagian stream) pasti dikasih big note, kok ini ngga ?
04:04:679 (44,45,46,47,49,50) - remove finish ? suara drumnya ga terlalu nekenin banget imo
04:48:608 - remove finish ? personally ga suka big note di dalam stream, tapi terserah sih ._.
05:00:822 (72,73,74,75,76,77) - dari 72 sampe 76 - itu sama semua penekanan drumnya, tapi kenapa yang dikasih big note cuma 75 sama 76 doang ? kasih finish di (72,73,74) - atau remove finish di (75,76)

semoga membantu, good luck for approved~

Prophecy

1,794 posts

Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2015-07-09T13:50:04+00:00

Seems the quailty is high, take my star

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-10T17:10:24+00:00

Nishizumi wrote:
Hi senrichuu~ o/ as you requested via chat ingame

[Despair]

OMGGGGG NIH LAGU BANYAK AMAT SUARA SIMBALNYAAAAAA @_@

00:03:608 (8,9,10,11) - ganti ke kd dk ? entah kenapa semua bagian kaya begini kalo 1 warna rasanya agak aneh imo, soalnya pitch (9,10) - jelas banget beda imo no. why. gw gapaham kenapa orang" pada ga suka kk kk di sini. D: menurut gw sama, break di 00:03:822 buat emphasize nada yang ilang itu, bukan pitchnya beda
00:51:501 - move ke 00:51:929 - ? soalnya musik buat streamnya mulai dari 00:51:608 - gw ikut musiknya yang kek kk kk tadi sih, jadi keep aja
01:10:679 - move ke 01:10:894 - ? dari 01:09:179 - sampe sini kamu ngikutin drumnya kan bukan vokalnya ? sedangkan kalo note di 01:10:679 - malah tiba tiba jadi ngikutin vokalnya, ga ada suara drum di situ vokal? qwq why? ;w;
01:17:322 - add finish ? konsisten sama 01:10:465 - walaupun di bagian ini suara simbalnya lebih kecil daripada 01:10:465 - tapi gw rasa masih pas kok removed finish yang sebelumnya
01:17:537 - sama kaya 01:10;679 -, move ke 01:17:751 - ? nuu why ;vv;get musiknya buat big note
04:04:679 (44,45,46,47,49,50) - remove finish ? suara drumnya ga terlalu nekenin banget imoagak setuju sih, gw pikir dulu deh, soalnya ambiencenya berat .w.
04:48:608 - remove finish ? personally ga suka big note di dalam stream, tapi terserah sih ._. #blamehinsvar2015 nanti kita diskusiin
05:00:822 (72,73,74,75,76,77) - dari 72 sampe 76 - itu sama semua penekanan drumnya, tapi kenapa yang dikasih big note cuma 75 sama 76 doang ? kasih finish di (72,73,74) - atau remove finish di (75,76) karena drum di 05:01:465 (75,76) - terkesan lebih kuat dan sama kaya 05:01:894 (77) - dibanding dengan not lainnya jadi gw kasih finish di sana
semoga membantu, good luck for approved~ ty for mod

and thanks Prophecy for the star~ :3

Koucha-

53 posts

Joined April 2013

Koucha- 2015-07-11T12:27:16+00:00

Permisii~

Numpang lewat (Random Mod)
hai Senritsu!

[Despair]

01:24:822 - d
01:33:501 - tambah d. biar sama kayak yg lainnya
01:38:965 (80,81,82,83) - kkd d
01:48:179 - lebih pas k disini
02:12:715 - d. disini ga ada nada kyk dkk di sekitarnya
02:25:037 - tambah d
03:05:965 - pindah ke 03:06:179 - terus ganti d
03:22:787 - ke 03:22:679 - terus 03:22:894 - d
03:24:822 (81,83,85) - ctrl+G
04:19:037 - d
04:26:108 - d

sekian \ /
maaf jika sama sekali gak membantu. (maklum mod pertama)
Good luck for rank!

Coro

2,394 posts

Joined September 2010

Coro 2015-07-21T13:33:15+00:00

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Despair]
03:10:465 (63) - change to d? The synthesizer pitches down here

...and that's all I can find, so sorry ._.
Very nice use of the timing points to adjust volume

good luck for rank~

streeteelf

439 posts

Joined May 2013

streeteelf 2015-07-21T16:14:01+00:00

From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue

Sry for being so lazy with modding.

[General]

Try all changing all timing points' volume by -20%

[Despair]

00:03:608 (8,10) - d?

00:07:037 (17,18,19) - ^
00:10:465 (26,28) - ^
00:13:894 (35,36,37) - ^
00:20:751 (61,62,63) - d
00:51:394 (183,184,185,186,187) - I suggest kkddk here, IMO sounds better
01:01:894 (230,231,232) - ddk
01:20:537 and 01:20:751 - why no timing points like previous dons?
01:42:501 (101) - d
02:12:608 (265) - k
02:37:572 (33) - k
03:53:751 (1) - K
04:54:072 (32,33) - Ctrl+G

Really nice map, I'm surprised. o_0 But still I'd change these points I wrote.

Good luck~ :3

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-21T16:51:18+00:00

YalEdo wrote:
Permisii~ Numpang lewat (Random Mod)
hai Senritsu!

[Despair]

01:24:822 - d ngikutin vokal sih, no change
01:33:501 - tambah d. biar sama kayak yg lainnya musiknya kosong D:
01:38:965 (80,81,82,83) - kkd d changed kdd d instead
01:48:179 - lebih pas k disini nggak kok, ambiencenya di sana terkesan lebih berat owo
03:05:965 - pindah ke 03:06:179 - terus ganti d oh okay
04:19:037 - d ngikutin clapnya sih eue
04:26:108 - d uhm no change for now, ngikutin vokalnya sih..

sekian \ /
maaf jika sama sekali gak membantu. (maklum mod pertama) nope, it's helpful (:
Good luck for rank!

Coro wrote:
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Despair]
03:10:465 (63) - change to d? The synthesizer pitches down here im pretty sure the pitch is same with 03:10:358 (62) - , and to differ 03:10:465 (63,64) - :3

...and that's all I can find, so sorry ._.
Very nice use of the timing points to adjust volume thank you so much~

good luck for rank~

streeteelf wrote:
From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue

Sry for being so lazy with modding.

[General]

Try all changing all timing points' volume by -20% current is already suits the music, lowering it will make it lose to the music
[Despair]

00:03:608 (8,10) - d? why people keep telling me this Q_Q no change, i will keep it as a k and i wont change it.
00:07:037 (17,18,19) - ^ ~
00:10:465 (26,28) - ^ ^
00:13:894 (35,36,37) - ^ ~
00:20:751 (61,62,63) - d ^
00:51:394 (183,184,185,186,187) - I suggest kkddk here, IMO sounds better im following the music, and i think it follows the vocal which is lowering at 00:51:822 (187) - ? so no change for now
01:01:894 (230,231,232) - ddk im following the drum qwq
01:20:537 and 01:20:751 - why no timing points like previous dons? the volume is strong already, and 01:20:322 (307,308,309) - somehow have the same strength, so i make the same
01:42:501 (101) - d im following the drum ;v;
04:54:072 (32,33) - Ctrl+G ^
Really nice map, I'm surprised. o_0 But still I'd change these points I wrote. Good luck~ :3

thanks for mod QwQ

Hinsvaaaaaarrrrrr pleaseeeeeee i want to updaaaaateeeeeeee Q______Q

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-07-21T17:18:08+00:00

~~soon (tm)~~

[R] wrote:
from queue
every "?" lines just an opinion

[Despair]
no comment = following vocal/music

02:50:322 (96,97,98) - triplet ini rasanya weird jadi,
02:50:429 - move 02:50:215 - ok
02:50:537 - d ok

03:48:608 - add d ? ok
03:49:037 - k ? Pitch lebih rendah daripada 03:49:251.
03:52:894 - add k Ga ada yang bisa di-map.
maap tanpa komentar, kurang pandai buat beatmap ini apalagi 5 menit -/\-

Good Luck ~

Nishizumi wrote:
Hi senrichuu~ o/ as you requested via chat ingame

[Despair]

OMGGGGG NIH LAGU BANYAK AMAT SUARA SIMBALNYAAAAAA @_@

02:17:537 - delete aja ? kamu ngikutin suara drum kan ? ga ada suara drum disini Ga juga sih... cukup susah dijelasin, to be honest, tapi saya merasa ini bakal kosong banget kalau ga ada note...
02:26:965 - remove finish ? ga ada suara simbal di sini ga kaya sebelumnya, juga ga terlalu nekenin banget musiknya buat big note Ada kok; jelas banget ini o.o
02:29:322 - ganti ke d ? suara drumnya sama kaya 02:29:108 - imo Nope; di sini lebih tinggi.
03:16:037 - ganti ke d ? suara drumnya sama musiknya sama kaya 03:15:822 Done.
03:19:787 (45,46) - swap ? kedengarannya dari tinggi ke rendah, dan juga (46) pitchnya sama kaya note selanjutnya Nggak ah; kerasa banget ini dari rendah ke tinggi.
03:22:679 - agak aneh deh kalo di sini dibiarin kosong soalnya ada suara musiknya, tambahin d ? atau pindahin dari 03:22:787 - ke 03:22:679 ? Oke, ditambahin d.
03:28:144 - sama kaya di atas, tambahin d ? ^
03:36:608 - dari yang gw liat sebelum-sebelumnya setiap ada suara simbal (kalo bukan di bagian stream) pasti dikasih big note, kok ini ngga ? Yang ini terlalu kecil.
semoga membantu, good luck for approved~

YalEdo wrote:
Permisii~ Numpang lewat (Random Mod)
hai Senritsu!

[Despair]

02:12:715 - d. disini ga ada nada kyk dkk di sekitarnya ok
02:25:037 - tambah d ^
03:22:787 - ke 03:22:679 - terus 03:22:894 - d 03:22:679 - ddk deh di sini; IMO pas kok ._.
03:24:822 (81,83,85) - ctrl+G Err? Ujungnya bakal sama aja kok.

sekian \ /
maaf jika sama sekali gak membantu. (maklum mod pertama)
Good luck for rank!

streeteelf wrote:
From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue

Sry for being so lazy with modding.

[General]

Try all changing all timing points' volume by -20%
[Despair]

02:12:608 (265) - k IMO the pitch here is still pretty low.
02:37:572 (33) - k ok sure
Really nice map, I'm surprised. o_0 But still I'd change these points I wrote. Good luck~ :3

Thanks!

lel

384,192,110537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,110751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,110858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,110965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,111179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,111394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,111501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,111715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,111822,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,112037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,112144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,112251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,112358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,112465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,112679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,113108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,113322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,113429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,113537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,113751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,113965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,114072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,114287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,114394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,114608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,114822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,114929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,115037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,115251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,115465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,115572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-07-23T08:24:09+00:00

(`L_` ) kena FELet ane....

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-24T12:19:57+00:00

updated

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2015-07-24T23:36:06+00:00

placeholder i guess

Prophecy

1,794 posts

Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2015-07-28T16:54:13+00:00

I love this song :3

OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 2015-07-31T07:25:37+00:00

Greetings!

[General]

Unsnapped preview point.

[Inner Oni]

00:55:465 (203) - This is the only K for a while... make it a D to stay consistent?
02:11:751 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273) - This part is pretty dense for no real reason, how about just kddkk d kkd d?
02:29:108 (355) - May as well make this k no? Shouldn't do anything but make it fit the song more.
02:36:608 (27,28,29,30) - dkd k fits the drums nicer while making the dk kd feel much less awkward to play.
02:44:215 (64,65) - Both k? No harm in mapping closer to drums.
03:02:751 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - For this whole part, (02:59:537 to 03:12:608) I like what you did here the most. If you can structure the area around this to be similar, that'd help a lot, because currently this is the weirdest freestyle I've seen haha.
03:14:537 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Sounds more like kdk ddk kkk no? Considering you map katus to the snares in most parts here. I can see the balance in mapping the light keyboard AND the drums, but some parts are really hurt by the inconsistency.
But to be honest, I'd recommend re-mapping this part more lightly, as the song is clearly giving off really simply vibes compared to the next part at 03:26:322 where the instruments pick up. Ignore the little keyboard sounds and keep it simple.
03:32:537 (121) - k? Flows into dkd much nicer.
03:37:894 (156) - d? Fits more, doesn't play bad.
03:38:322 (1) - End spinner at 03:39:822 , deleting 03:39:608 (1) - ? Starting on the onbeat is much better since you're too late to start on the vocals anyways (not like you're mapping to them).
04:02:537 (34) - This note was left out of the volume increase parade? :p
04:32:322 to 04:34:894 - What happened here? Notes gone missing? Hopefully not intentional.

I'll re-check after and we can hope for a bubble! :B

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

Senritsu 2015-07-31T09:36:30+00:00

OzzyOzrock wrote:
Greetings! Hello again~

[General]
Unsnapped preview point. my bad, fixed now.
[Inner Oni]
00:55:465 (203) - This is the only K for a while... make it a D to stay consistent? but i don't see any problem with this being a K tbh. Furthermore, it suits how the claps crash and strong there, so i will keep this for now
03:02:751 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - For this whole part, (02:59:537 to 03:12:608) I like what you did here the most. If you can structure the area around this to be similar, that'd help a lot, because currently this is the weirdest freestyle I've seen haha. i changed some parts a little bit, hopefully you had this in mind lol
04:02:537 (34) - This note was left out of the volume increase parade? :p intentionally did this. strong stuff starts on 04:02:751 (35,36,37) - so i let the part before it follows the nearest part of it lol
04:32:322 to 04:34:894 - What happened here? Notes gone missing? Hopefully not intentional. wtf seems like i was in hurry when copying Hinsvar's part lol mapped again >___>
I'll re-check after and we can hope for a bubble! :B thank you so much~

now waiting for Hinsvar _(:3
Which will probably take some time~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-08-03T15:10:09+00:00

OzzyOzrock wrote:
Greetings!

[General]
Unsnapped preview point.
[Inner Oni]
02:11:751 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273) - This part is pretty dense for no real reason, how about just kddkk d kkd d? I only removed 02:12:287 (267); I'm still sure enough that the current rhythm is really fitting with the instruments.
02:29:108 (355) - May as well make this k no? Shouldn't do anything but make it fit the song more. The pitch here is noticeably lower than 02:29:322 (357).
02:36:608 (27,28,29,30) - dkd k fits the drums nicer while making the dk kd feel much less awkward to play. Done.
02:44:215 (64,65) - Both k? No harm in mapping closer to drums. ^
03:14:537 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Sounds more like kdk ddk kkk no? Considering you map katus to the snares in most parts here. I can see the balance in mapping the light keyboard AND the drums, but some parts are really hurt by the inconsistency.
But to be honest, I'd recommend re-mapping this part more lightly, as the song is clearly giving off really simply vibes compared to the next part at 03:26:322 where the instruments pick up. Ignore the little keyboard sounds and keep it simple. I removed a few notes here.
03:32:537 (121) - k? Flows into dkd much nicer. Done.
03:37:894 (156) - d? Fits more, doesn't play bad. Actually, I decided on making 03:37:787 (150) a k to follow the keyboards.
03:38:322 (1) - End spinner at 03:39:822 , deleting 03:39:608 (1) - ? Starting on the onbeat is much better since you're too late to start on the vocals anyways (not like you're mapping to them). Done.
I'll re-check after and we can hope for a bubble! :B

Thanks!

:)

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Surono

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Surono 2015-08-03T17:09:07+00:00

ayo ngefelet. `L_` coepoe amat.

Senritsu

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Senritsu 2015-08-05T10:51:50+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
OzzyOzrock wrote:
03:38:322 (1) - End spinner at 03:39:822 , deleting 03:39:608 (1) - ? Starting on the onbeat is much better since you're too late to start on the vocals anyways (not like you're mapping to them). Done.
I'll re-check after and we can hope for a bubble! :B
Thanks!

sangatlah done awkawkawk

aand updated

OzzyOzrock

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OzzyOzrock 2015-08-05T17:42:38+00:00

Looks great!

Bubble #1!

Senritsu

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Senritsu 2015-08-05T23:40:27+00:00

Yay thank you~ :3/

tasuke912

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tasuke912 2015-11-06T12:54:02+00:00

Hi.
[

General]

This diff name is not recommended... p/4422562

[

Oni]

00:05:751 -, 00:09:179 -, 00:12:608 -, Consider adding d notes for better consistency with 00:02:322 (4) -. (or deleting this note)
00:48:394 (172) - k would more fit to the vocal. maybe you did put d to follow the low pitch drums, but k would also fit to it imo.
01:19:679 (304,305,306,307) - move green lines to 1/4 tick left. if hit notes before green line, it does not reflect.
01:22:465 (311) -, 02:31:037 (1) - ^ and 50% is too small, please consider changing to 70. same as 04:07:037 (56) -
03:12:608 - move green line to 1/4 tick left. similar reason as above.
03:38:322 - 04:01:037 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - , 05:00:822 (72,73,74,75,76,77) - ^
04:06:394 - ^ maybe 60%?

overall seems good.
You may call me back when you are done.

Surono

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Surono 2015-11-07T15:51:49+00:00

yo malem mbak, ~~english ya biar tau Ingris gw jelek, .,. , .~~

>General

Position of BG need to maor nice, ganti 0,50 ke 0,100. ini bagus. pas dengan wajah si Yuuka (`w`)b

>Putus Asa Tacotok

Jangan Lupa buat fix point2 yang di bilang si Tasuke di 1st Green Line, bolong2 *pasti sudah dilakukan weka weka*
00:21:179 - lebih emphasize ke don Finisher, karena nada penting berasa fadeout trus ini bass drum juga (biar konsisten dengan finisher selanjutnya)
00:27:822 - di detik 48, tasuke bilang ini kat biar cocok.. don aja cukup sih. karna bass drum
00:34:679 - keep? atau sama kek di atas? (maksudnya di ganti don, biar konsisten sama di atas)
01:20:322 (307,308,309) - mau penekanan pake kat? 02:28:894 (355,356,357) - biar kek ini, atau samain kek ini
02:23:537 - ada drum kicknya ini finisher (kasih kat)? mau di tekenin? 02:26:965 - biar sama
02:37:037 - lupa kick drumnya ini, kasih kat
02:39:608 (43,44) - ctrl g, ga terlalu kaut buat vocalnya.. lebih smooth pake don, dan katnya cocok buat si kick drum
02:46:679 - kalau ngikut vokal, 02:47:108 - ini juga harus di kasih kat. atau 02:46:465 (76,77) - ctrl g ini biar konsisten sama 80
02:58:465 - forget adding finisher?
03:33:394 (121,122,123) - ddk lebih cocok, atau dkk kalau ttp mau ikut sertain si 122 (03:35:537 - tapi dkk udah ada disni, jadi ddk aja deh)
03:36:608 - simbal, tapi nada penting ga ada. mau kasih finisher?
04:38:537 - keknya ini bisa jadi rest? di selanjutnya juga ada. tapi ga tau ini ngikut flow atau emang ini lupa jadi rest.
~~eh aku mundur lagi.. 03:07:894 - mau kasih kat? 03:11:322 - biar ikut ini dan sela--- DOR~~ canda mas mbak, keep aja :U kwkwk

yo segara di kualifi ini map :^) maaf juga kalau modnya ada kata2 membujuk.. tapi emang seadanya kek gitu ._. kalau yg strike itu contoh orang neko2 (kurang kerjaan, yang bisa ngerusak style mapnya :U)

GLuck!

EDIT:
buat mas Hinsper, jgn sampe kehipnotis kata2nya dek Senrithug h3ueh3euheu (abis ngedit mod gw, pake more penjelasan di tanda kurung). /me still run

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Senritsu

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Senritsu 2015-11-07T16:13:44+00:00

tasuke912 wrote:
Hi. hi hello~
[ General]
This diff name is not recommended... p/4422562 to avoid any conflicts, i changed the diff to Taiko Oni
[ Oni]
00:05:751 -, 00:09:179 -, 00:12:608 -, Consider adding d notes for better consistency with 00:02:322 (4) -. (or deleting this note) adding on 00:09:179 only so the pattern will be dk - k - dk - k
00:48:394 (172) - k would more fit to the vocal. maybe you did put d to follow the low pitch drums, but k would also fit to it imo. i think he's following the drum here, so ignoring the vocal might be intentionally
01:19:679 (304,305,306,307) - move green lines to 1/4 tick left. if hit notes before green line, it does not reflect. i'm still considering this, but.. i think it doesn't matter that much. idk about what the others might think though lol, i will keep this for now
01:22:465 (311) -, 02:31:037 (1) - ^ and 50% is too small, please consider changing to 70. same as 04:07:037 (56) - the 50 is intentionally.. hard to explain lol but i wont change. as for the other one, changed somehow but keeping the D 50%
03:12:608 - move green line to 1/4 tick left. similar reason as above. discussed earlier with Hinsvar and we decided to keep it here, because we think it's unnecesarry to do
03:38:322 - 04:01:037 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - , 05:00:822 (72,73,74,75,76,77) - ^ ^
04:06:394 - ^ maybe 60%? changed 50% rising to 60%
overall seems good.
You may call me back when you are done.

thank you!

Surono wrote:
yo malem mbak, ~~english ya biar tau Ingris gw jelek, .,. , .~~ haha haihai~

>General
Position of BG need to maor nice, ganti 0,50 ke 0,100. ini bagus. pas dengan wajah si Yuuka (`w`)b imo terlalu ke bawah, jadi bagian tubuhnya kurang keliatan, gini aja sih lebih proporsional menurut gw
>Putus Asa Tacotok
Jangan Lupa buat fix point2 yang di bilang si Tasuke di 1st Green Line, bolong2 *pasti sudah dilakukan weka weka* no lol
00:21:179 - lebih emphasize ke don Finisher, karena nada penting berasa fadeout trus ini bass drum juga (biar konsisten dengan finisher selanjutnya) idk gw lagi ngantuk mungkin
00:27:822 - di detik 48, tasuke bilang ini kat biar cocok.. don aja cukup sih. karna bass drum emang ga gw change kok xD
00:34:679 - keep? atau sama kek di atas? keep
01:20:322 (307,308,309) - mau penekanan pake kat? 02:28:894 (355,356,357) - biar kek ini, atau samain kek ini ndak, itu emang gw bikin jadi raising dan puncaknya di K, lalu satunya beda part lol (02:28:894 - beda jenis lol)
yo segara di kualifi ini map :^) maaf juga kalau modnya ada kata2 membujuk.. tapi emang seadanya kek gitu ._. kalau yg strike itu contoh orang neko2 (kurang kerjaan)

GLuck!

oke makasih qwq
sekarang tinggal nunggu si hinsvar doang

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2015-11-07T16:29:04+00:00

Surono wrote:
>Putus Asa Tacotok
02:23:537 - ada drum kicknya ini finisher (kasih kat)? mau di tekenin? 02:26:965 - biar sama sure
02:37:037 - lupa kick drumnya ini, kasih kat ^
02:39:608 (43,44) - ctrl g, ga terlalu kaut buat vocalnya.. lebih smooth pake don, dan katnya cocok buat si kick drum Bagian sini ngikutin instrumen sih.
02:46:679 - kalau ngikut vokal, 02:47:108 - ini juga harus di kasih kat. atau 02:46:465 (76,77) - ctrl g ini biar konsisten sama 80 ^
03:33:394 (121,122,123) - ddk lebih cocok, atau dkk kalau ttp mau ikut sertain si 122 (03:35:537 - tapi dkk udah ada disni, jadi ddk aja deh) ddk oke
03:36:608 - simbal, tapi nada penting ga ada. mau kasih finisher? Boleh.
04:38:537 - keknya ini bisa jadi rest? di selanjutnya juga ada. tapi ga tau ini ngikut flow atau emang ini lupa jadi rest. Instrumen di sini terasa lumayan kuat, jadi aneh aja kalau ditinggalin...

Thanks

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