Hi, from PM.
Sorry I'm not interested in modding your map because i'm too lazy. Maybe a bit because I don't really enjoy the song too much too, and because I have a crap ton of things to do irl aside of Osu! ... Who knows...
Anyways. Still checked it, it's pretty cool for one of your first maps ^^
A few things I noticed though :
00:36:980 (1) - Move the preview time here? At least put it after the timming point, or time the first part as variable BPM (but good luck on that).
Hard - 01:00:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That feels weird, and is not really fitted for a Hard diff. Also that's really hard to read because of ar, maybe you don't realize it since you know your pattern by heart by know ^^
Hard - AR 7 maybe?
Hard - 5notes Streams are a bit rough for a hard diff right? I mean, why not, but...
Hard - 01:13:940 (1) - Make a jump here
Hard - 01:15:380 (1) - Same
Hard - 01:18:020 (5) - Move this to 244/280 ?
Hard - 01:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Nope.
Hard - 01:44:900 (5) - Move this further.
Hard - 01:45:980 - Add a note here.
Hard - 01:51:380 (1,2,3) - Nope.
Hard - 01:52:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Open that strem a bit more and move 01:53:780 (1,2) - somewhere where you see it. Maybe also... Streams in hard, really?
Hard - 02:08:420 (7) - Angle that slider at 02:08:660 instead?
Hard - 02:09:380 - Add a note or a triplet here
Hard - 02:16:580 (1) - no nc
Normal - 00:40:820 (1) - No anti jump plz
Normal - 00:43:700 (7,1) - Same, fix position too plz, it might be clipping in the hud in some skins.
Normal - 00:47:300 (6) - make that note closer? prev 1.79 is too much.
Normal - 00:47:540 (7,1) - No anti jump plz,, I'll stop telling you for each one but please fix them.
Normal - 00:55:940 (2) - Pos snap on the slider plz
Normal - 01:12:980 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Nope.
Normal - 01:20:660 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe try to stay under prev 1.50, this is too much for meh ><
Easy - This is weird... Maybe you should try to distance snap a bit more, godd easy maps are boring. No seriously, that's a way to say things, but you should try to make your map interesting more by using cool sliders patterns and not anti-jump. Easy is harder to map than it seems ^^'
Your spinner placement are a bit off, I think long sliders shoild be better. Also thing should not be approximative, like this slider 02:21:620 (3) - height </troll>.
Anyways. This looks like a mod in the end... >> I guess that's what I get for wandering around on the internet ... ^^'
Sorry I'm not interested in modding your map because i'm too lazy. Maybe a bit because I don't really enjoy the song too much too, and because I have a crap ton of things to do irl aside of Osu! ... Who knows...
Anyways. Still checked it, it's pretty cool for one of your first maps ^^
A few things I noticed though :
00:36:980 (1) - Move the preview time here? At least put it after the timming point, or time the first part as variable BPM (but good luck on that).
Hard - 01:00:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That feels weird, and is not really fitted for a Hard diff. Also that's really hard to read because of ar, maybe you don't realize it since you know your pattern by heart by know ^^
Hard - AR 7 maybe?
Hard - 5notes Streams are a bit rough for a hard diff right? I mean, why not, but...
Hard - 01:13:940 (1) - Make a jump here
Hard - 01:15:380 (1) - Same
Hard - 01:18:020 (5) - Move this to 244/280 ?
Hard - 01:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Nope.
Hard - 01:44:900 (5) - Move this further.
Hard - 01:45:980 - Add a note here.
Hard - 01:51:380 (1,2,3) - Nope.
Hard - 01:52:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Open that strem a bit more and move 01:53:780 (1,2) - somewhere where you see it. Maybe also... Streams in hard, really?
Hard - 02:08:420 (7) - Angle that slider at 02:08:660 instead?
Hard - 02:09:380 - Add a note or a triplet here
Hard - 02:16:580 (1) - no nc
Normal - 00:40:820 (1) - No anti jump plz
Normal - 00:43:700 (7,1) - Same, fix position too plz, it might be clipping in the hud in some skins.
Normal - 00:47:300 (6) - make that note closer? prev 1.79 is too much.
Normal - 00:47:540 (7,1) - No anti jump plz,, I'll stop telling you for each one but please fix them.
Normal - 00:55:940 (2) - Pos snap on the slider plz
Normal - 01:12:980 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Nope.
Normal - 01:20:660 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe try to stay under prev 1.50, this is too much for meh ><
Easy - This is weird... Maybe you should try to distance snap a bit more, godd easy maps are boring. No seriously, that's a way to say things, but you should try to make your map interesting more by using cool sliders patterns and not anti-jump. Easy is harder to map than it seems ^^'
Your spinner placement are a bit off, I think long sliders shoild be better. Also thing should not be approximative, like this slider 02:21:620 (3) - height </troll>.
Anyways. This looks like a mod in the end... >> I guess that's what I get for wandering around on the internet ... ^^'