AK & LINX ft. Veela - Virtual Paradise · forum

SrSkyPlayer

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-06-21T23:28:19+00:00

LucaSA4 wrote:
Hello , you are the next from my modding queue! If you want a GD just ask!!!

Insane
00:26:235 (1,4) - blanket? Isso era pra ser um blanket desde o começo, só dei uma ajustada no "ângulo"
00:32:270 (3,1) - ^ Arrumei um pouco... com que fique de forma boa para acertar o próximo slider
00:33:994 (3,1) - ^ Arrumei, also arrumei a distancia dos objetos anteriores.
00:41:408 (1,2) - ^ Arrumei e dei uma ajustada no "ângulo" sdiufvbsdoiufv
01:07:614 (1,2) - DS inconsistente comparado com 01:07:097 (2,3) - Arrumei
01:04:856 (1) - faz um pouco mais curvado pra melhorar o flow com 01:05:373 (2,3,4) - ? Arrumei, also achei um bom conselho
01:24:166 (1,4) - Melhora o blanket Arrumei
01:25:976 (1) - que tal mapear essa parte, apesar de não ter vocal tem o mesmo rítmo do kiai. Então você poderia inserir o spinner à partir de 01:28:304 - que é quando o som começa a dar fade out Sim sim concordo com você, apesar de não ter vocal, tem o mesmo ritmo, então apenas terminei o mapa até o fim do do kiai, mas acho que depois disso a musica não pede um spinner.

Foi mal por não ter sido um mod grande, suas patterns estão excelentes, não há o que falar, só achei a música muito curta, tem uma grande parte do mp3 em brancoEu falei sério no spoiler :3 Se quiser um exemplo de como eu mapeio veja https://osu.ppy.sh/s/325217

Muito obrigado =w= e eu te mando pm in-game pra GD

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-06-22T02:17:08+00:00

EASY READY TO GO!

LucaSA4's Easy

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Lazer

417 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2015-06-25T21:04:17+00:00

Lets make it happen~!

micchi_chi

764 posts

Joined July 2013

micchi_chi 2015-06-27T10:56:35+00:00

Yo, a mod from my modding Q~
Thank you for waiting =~=

Let's mod~
I'll skip the extra since it's WIP, okay? ^^

[General]

Check AiMod, there's a tag conflict.
You don't need to add "Veela" and "Virtual Paradise" to the tags because they are already mentioned on artist and title.
You don't need to add your own username as well, so remove "SrSkyPlayer" from the tags.
I don't know who Necroh is, but I don't think he participated in this map (as a guest mapper) Furthermore, you have to add all participants to tags so I think you have to add Pappy (normal guest mapper [well it seems he haven't finished yet?]) and Lazer (Insane guest mapper) to the tags
Lastly, disable widescreen support (Song setup -> Design) since it was only used for storyboard and I don't think you have any.
Ah, forgot, did you set combo colors? If you don't I highly suggest to set one, to support the background. Try to use shade of blue because the background colors is mainly blue :3

[LucaSA4's Easy]

Okay, I don't know why, but for this diff the beginning part seems off >.< because the only sound we can clearly hear at the beginning is the vocal, try to stick at following the vocal.
00:24:856 (4) - This, shorten this here 00:25:718 the "thing" from "something" fall there. After that, move this 1/2 tick forward to follow the "special" vocal. Would be better (following the vocal better and better polarity) if you add a note here 00:26:925 but I doubt you'll do it since this is easy... So, just like this is fine http://puu.sh/iEqVe/0e665f5373.jpg
00:28:994 (2) - This doesn't fit well, placing the reverse at red tick causing the rhythm goes off vocal... place the reverse at the white tick (1/1 reverse slider) and add a note here 00:30:028 http://puu.sh/iEr2l/793a914c48.jpg
00:31:408 (5,6) - Like this : http://puu.sh/iEr6s/73ce8cc7f2.jpg
Umm have you add hitsound? the claps are very loud at the chorus and you add nothing...
00:51:752 (3) - Well I think you try to blanket this with (4) so changing this the way I said would kinda ruin it but currently the flow from (2) is very pointy and it don't look that nice with (2) as well so I suggest to change it anyway, like this http://puu.sh/iErgB/d6695d288b.jpg or maybe http://puu.sh/iEriX/f572ab6781.jpg but I kinda against it since (3) is stacked with (1)'s tail; avoid stacking in Easy.
00:54:856 (3,5) - Overlapped.... Like this? http://puu.sh/iErnh/947acf17df.jpg
00:56:580 (5,1) - But even if you do so, these two would still overlap anyway, so you still have to change it.... Move (6) and (1) to the right http://puu.sh/iErpU/27e1068f4e.jpg DS afterwards.
01:03:476 (3,1) - If you still have other choice, like I said, avoid stacking on Easy. New players might have hard time reading them. Would be better if you just put (1) at (4)'s blanket.
01:11:752 (1) - Avoid wiggle shape on easy as well, furthermore, I don't really think the vocal support wiggle sound... Just use normal curve slider on this.
01:11:752 (1) - Again, avoid double reverse too, just use 1/1 single reverse slider and a circle.
01:17:270 (1) - No, don't place the reverse at red tick, it make the rhythm seems off. Shorten it so the reverse would fall on white tick and simply add a note here 01:18:994 http://puu.sh/iErCU/b96a9aca7c.jpg Furthermore, remake the sliderwave shape, it looks imperfect.
01:21:408 (3,4) - ctrl+g (swap) these two places, it'll follow the vocal better.
Okay, still, I saw some imperfect blanket, maybe you can find and fix them yourself :3

[Hard]

I think the hitsound is too loud at the beginning.... There's barely sound there so I think you have to reduce it (Don't use same volume with the chorus >.<) try 30%
Okay, the kiai seems different from the Easy... Make the consistent please, use the same kiai place for all diff. And the same thing apply for slider tick rate. Easy uses 1, Hard uses 2, try to be consistent, choose one of them (personally, I prefer 1 for high speed bpm song)
00:25:373 (3,1) - I think it'll looks better if you just blanket (3)'s head with (1)
00:27:614 (1,2) - Umm, blanket.
00:30:890 (3,4) - These two almost overlapped, it don't look nice. Maybe move (4) kinda upward to avoid overlap.
00:36:580 (3,4) - Feels unpleasant because the vocal fall on slider's tail... I think you have to remake the rhythm a bit... Well, maybe not really "a bit", it's a total new rhythm xD http://puu.sh/iEs46/91e3c0e047.jpg
00:42:442 (3,5) - Stack (5)'s tail with (3) properly.
00:46:063 (2,3,4,5) - Umm, bad overlap. And this is hard to read... http://puu.sh/iEs8F/c6fc9f2890.jpg or anyway else you like, just move (5) somewhere else.
01:16:408 (2,3,1) - Like this would look better imo http://puu.sh/iEseH/428ea59fcd.jpg
01:19:511 (3,1) - Stack (1)'s end properly.
01:20:545 (2) - This would fit better actually http://puu.sh/iEshT/8daa02f88b.jpg
01:21:925 (2) - ^
01:28:304 Well, the guest mapper add spinner here at Easy... I think you have to be consistent about it too.

[Insane]

Same audio problem as hard, reduce the audio at the beginning a bit.
00:26:925 (3,2) - Maybe try to make an invisible slider bow with these two. http://puu.sh/iEsqv/eefeb381a1.jpg
00:41:925 (2,4) - Stack the tails properly
00:42:442 (3,5) - Stack properly, or on purpose?
00:44:166 (1,1) - ^
00:46:925 (1) - This slider wave don't look that appealing... Maybe kinda like this http://puu.sh/iEsvu/89209f95e0.jpg
00:50:545 (6,4) - Stack
00:52:097 (4,5,1) - Uuhh, this is a pretty bad overlap x-x I think you did it on purpose but it don't look good; it's just make it hard to read... I prefer this http://puu.sh/iEsA5/49701e79a5.jpg or something else, just exterminate that overlap.
01:08:994 (1) - Maybe move it kinda downward http://puu.sh/iEsCB/fd41f532ae.jpg to make it looks like an increasing jumps.
Well, pretty jumpy imo... Good, but need improvement at placing.

[Lazer's Insane]

Same as above, about volume.
00:22:097 (2,5) - Mini overlap... don't look that good.
00:23:304 (6) - Just place this at (5)'s blanket http://puu.sh/iEsL8/12f763ac97.jpg
00:25:373 (3,4) - Ctrl+g (swap) these two. It'll follow the vocal better
00:29:339 (1,2) - Wow, pretty far jump for 1/4 interval ehh? Don't place them too far, it'll hard to read http://puu.sh/iEsO0/bf454ca572.jpg
00:38:649 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+g these. 00:39:511 (4,5) - And these too. They should look like this now http://puu.sh/iEsRs/e630f3b093.jpg
00:56:235 (1) - Why NC? I don't think it's necessary.
01:19:166 (2) - Actually it would be good to use wiggle slider here, the vocal sound "wigglish"
01:23:821 (4,3,4,5,6) - Make this into star shape?
Okay that's all. Very jumpy x-x

Good map. Again, try to improve the placement so the map would look neater.
Sorry for a poor mod for the Insanes, I'm sleepy -,-
Good luck~

Lazer

417 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2015-06-27T13:45:11+00:00

Applied everything in the above mod and made alot of changes myself, thank you nanodesu~!

Lazer's Insane

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SrSkyPlayer

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-06-28T05:40:41+00:00

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Yo, a mod from my modding Q~
Thank you for waiting =~=

Let's mod~
I'll skip the extra since it's WIP, okay? ^^ ok =w=

[General]
Check AiMod, there's a tag conflict.
You don't need to add "Veela" and "Virtual Paradise" to the tags because they are already mentioned on artist and title.
You don't need to add your own username as well, so remove "SrSkyPlayer" from the tags.
I don't know who Necroh is, but I don't think he participated in this map (as a guest mapper) Furthermore, you have to add all participants to tags so I think you have to add Pappy (normal guest mapper [well it seems he haven't finished yet?]) and Lazer (Insane guest mapper) to the tags
Lastly, disable widescreen support (Song setup -> Design) since it was only used for storyboard and I don't think you have any.
Ah, forgot, did you set combo colors? If you don't I highly suggest to set one, to support the background. Try to use shade of blue because the background colors is mainly blue :3 fixed everything

[LucaSA4's Easy]
Okay, I don't know why, but for this diff the beginning part seems off >.< because the only sound we can clearly hear at the beginning is the vocal, try to stick at following the vocal.
00:24:856 (4) - This, shorten this here 00:25:718 the "thing" from "something" fall there. After that, move this 1/2 tick forward to follow the "special" vocal. Would be better (following the vocal better and better polarity) if you add a note here 00:26:925 but I doubt you'll do it since this is easy... So, just like this is fine http://puu.sh/iEqVe/0e665f5373.jpg
00:28:994 (2) - This doesn't fit well, placing the reverse at red tick causing the rhythm goes off vocal... place the reverse at the white tick (1/1 reverse slider) and add a note here 00:30:028 http://puu.sh/iEr2l/793a914c48.jpg
00:31:408 (5,6) - Like this : http://puu.sh/iEr6s/73ce8cc7f2.jpg
Umm have you add hitsound? the claps are very loud at the chorus and you add nothing...
00:51:752 (3) - Well I think you try to blanket this with (4) so changing this the way I said would kinda ruin it but currently the flow from (2) is very pointy and it don't look that nice with (2) as well so I suggest to change it anyway, like this http://puu.sh/iErgB/d6695d288b.jpg or maybe http://puu.sh/iEriX/f572ab6781.jpg but I kinda against it since (3) is stacked with (1)'s tail; avoid stacking in Easy.
00:54:856 (3,5) - Overlapped.... Like this? http://puu.sh/iErnh/947acf17df.jpg
00:56:580 (5,1) - But even if you do so, these two would still overlap anyway, so you still have to change it.... Move (6) and (1) to the right http://puu.sh/iErpU/27e1068f4e.jpg DS afterwards.
01:03:476 (3,1) - If you still have other choice, like I said, avoid stacking on Easy. New players might have hard time reading them. Would be better if you just put (1) at (4)'s blanket.
01:11:752 (1) - Avoid wiggle shape on easy as well, furthermore, I don't really think the vocal support wiggle sound... Just use normal curve slider on this.
01:11:752 (1) - Again, avoid double reverse too, just use 1/1 single reverse slider and a circle.
01:17:270 (1) - No, don't place the reverse at red tick, it make the rhythm seems off. Shorten it so the reverse would fall on white tick and simply add a note here 01:18:994 http://puu.sh/iErCU/b96a9aca7c.jpg Furthermore, remake the sliderwave shape, it looks imperfect.
01:21:408 (3,4) - ctrl+g (swap) these two places, it'll follow the vocal better.
Okay, still, I saw some imperfect blanket, maybe you can find and fix them yourself :3

[Hard]
I think the hitsound is too loud at the beginning.... There's barely sound there so I think you have to reduce it (Don't use same volume with the chorus >.<) try 30% fixed
Okay, the kiai seems different from the Easy... Make the consistent please, use the same kiai place for all diff. And the same thing apply for slider tick rate. Easy uses 1, Hard uses 2, try to be consistent, choose one of them (personally, I prefer 1 for high speed bpm song) fixed
00:25:373 (3,1) - I think it'll looks better if you just blanket (3)'s head with (1) fixed
00:27:614 (1,2) - Umm, blanket. fixed
00:30:890 (3,4) - These two almost overlapped, it don't look nice. Maybe move (4) kinda upward to avoid overlap. fixed
00:36:580 (3,4) - Feels unpleasant because the vocal fall on slider's tail... I think you have to remake the rhythm a bit... Well, maybe not really "a bit", it's a total new rhythm xD http://puu.sh/iEs46/91e3c0e047.jpg fixed
00:42:442 (3,5) - Stack (5)'s tail with (3) properly. fixed
00:46:063 (2,3,4,5) - Umm, bad overlap. And this is hard to read... http://puu.sh/iEs8F/c6fc9f2890.jpg or anyway else you like, just move (5) somewhere else. fixed
01:16:408 (2,3,1) - Like this would look better imo http://puu.sh/iEseH/428ea59fcd.jpg
01:19:511 (3,1) - Stack (1)'s end properly. fixed
01:20:545 (2) - This would fit better actually http://puu.sh/iEshT/8daa02f88b.jpg fixed
01:21:925 (2) - ^ fixed
01:28:304 Well, the guest mapper add spinner here at Easy... I think you have to be consistent about it too. fixed

[Insane]
Same audio problem as hard, reduce the audio at the beginning a bit.
00:26:925 (3,2) - Maybe try to make an invisible slider bow with these two. http://puu.sh/iEsqv/eefeb381a1.jpg naah, I didn't change anything on this part, I think it's good
00:41:925 (2,4) - Stack the tails properly fixed
00:42:442 (3,5) - Stack properly, or on purpose? fixed
00:44:166 (1,1) - ^ fixed
00:46:925 (1) - This slider wave don't look that appealing... Maybe kinda like this http://puu.sh/iEsvu/89209f95e0.jpg fixed
00:50:545 (6,4) - Stack fixed
00:52:097 (4,5,1) - Uuhh, this is a pretty bad overlap x-x I think you did it on purpose but it don't look good; it's just make it hard to read... I prefer this http://puu.sh/iEsA5/49701e79a5.jpg or something else, just exterminate that overlap. fixed
01:08:994 (1) - Maybe move it kinda downward http://puu.sh/iEsCB/fd41f532ae.jpg to make it looks like an increasing jumps. fixed
Well, pretty jumpy imo... Good, but need improvement at placing. ok, thank you =w=

[Lazer's Insane]
Same as above, about volume.
00:22:097 (2,5) - Mini overlap... don't look that good.
00:23:304 (6) - Just place this at (5)'s blanket http://puu.sh/iEsL8/12f763ac97.jpg
00:25:373 (3,4) - Ctrl+g (swap) these two. It'll follow the vocal better
00:29:339 (1,2) - Wow, pretty far jump for 1/4 interval ehh? Don't place them too far, it'll hard to read http://puu.sh/iEsO0/bf454ca572.jpg
00:38:649 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+g these. 00:39:511 (4,5) - And these too. They should look like this now http://puu.sh/iEsRs/e630f3b093.jpg
00:56:235 (1) - Why NC? I don't think it's necessary.
01:19:166 (2) - Actually it would be good to use wiggle slider here, the vocal sound "wigglish"
01:23:821 (4,3,4,5,6) - Make this into star shape?
Okay that's all. Very jumpy x-x

Good map. Again, try to improve the placement so the map would look neater.
Sorry for a poor mod for the Insanes, I'm sleepy -,- naah np
Good luck~ Ty ~.~

Lumael

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Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-06-28T16:01:14+00:00

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
[LucaSA4's Easy]
Okay, I don't know why, but for this diff the beginning part seems off >.< because the only sound we can clearly hear at the beginning is the vocal, try to stick at following the vocal. It's clearly easy to hear the drums
00:24:856 (4) - This, shorten this here 00:25:718 the "thing" from "something" fall there. After that, move this 1/2 tick forward to follow the "special" vocal. Would be better (following the vocal better and better polarity) if you add a note here 00:26:925 but I doubt you'll do it since this is easy... So, just like this is fine http://puu.sh/iEqVe/0e665f5373.jpg I'm not following the vocals ;x
00:28:994 (2) - This doesn't fit well, placing the reverse at red tick causing the rhythm goes off vocal... place the reverse at the white tick (1/1 reverse slider) and add a note here 00:30:028 http://puu.sh/iEr2l/793a914c48.jpg ^^ following the drums as always
00:31:408 (5,6) - Like this : http://puu.sh/iEr6s/73ce8cc7f2.jpg No need imo
Umm have you add hitsound? the claps are very loud at the chorus and you add nothing... Yes, Whistle
00:51:752 (3) - Well I think you try to blanket this with (4) so changing this the way I said would kinda ruin it but currently the flow from (2) is very pointy and it don't look that nice with (2) as well so I suggest to change it anyway, like this http://puu.sh/iErgB/d6695d288b.jpg or maybe http://puu.sh/iEriX/f572ab6781.jpg but I kinda against it since (3) is stacked with (1)'s tail; avoid stacking in Easy.
00:54:856 (3,5) - Overlapped.... Like this? http://puu.sh/iErnh/947acf17df.jpg Where? o.O
00:56:580 (5,1) - But even if you do so, these two would still overlap anyway, so you still have to change it.... Move (6) and (1) to the right http://puu.sh/iErpU/27e1068f4e.jpg DS afterwards.
01:03:476 (3,1) - If you still have other choice, like I said, avoid stacking on Easy. New players might have hard time reading them. Would be better if you just put (1) at (4)'s blanket. This one isn't a problem at all, very used at Easy diffs
01:11:752 (1) - Avoid wiggle shape on easy as well, furthermore, I don't really think the vocal support wiggle sound... Just use normal curve slider on this.
01:11:752 (1) - Again, avoid double reverse too, just use 1/1 single reverse slider and a circle. not sure about that but I'll leave with double reverse because I really don't think it is a problem since I've seen ranked easy with so
01:17:270 (1) - No, don't place the reverse at red tick, it make the rhythm seems off. Shorten it so the reverse would fall on white tick and simply add a note here 01:18:994 http://puu.sh/iErCU/b96a9aca7c.jpg Furthermore, remake the sliderwave shape, it looks imperfect.
01:21:408 (3,4) - ctrl+g (swap) these two places, it'll follow the vocal better. I'm not following the vocals D:
Okay, still, I saw some imperfect blanket, maybe you can find and fix them yourself :3

Thanks for mod dude

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Pappy 2015-07-09T22:45:35+00:00

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VINXIS 2015-07-12T21:48:56+00:00

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01:11:752 (1) - 2 repeats on a 1/1 slider for an easy is rlly sinister and can be unintuitive for easy players cuz ppl r used to 1 repeat only even at higher difficulties but yea

NM

00:22:442 (2) - lol this slider dude the p o i n ts. Looks better if u just made it symmetrical honestly cuz it looks clustered even without looking at the points

00:35:890 (1) - u missed dis important note xd
00:53:304 (3) - u missed teh snare xd
01:05:718 (2,3,4,1) - wow this is rlly op compared to the rest of the map actually lmfao. consider making it a 1 repeat slider and a note or 2 sliders hoenstl y
01:11:925 (2) - bad sliderend on stronger beat aka the snar which isn't as intuitive as 01:11:235 (3) - because there actualyl isn't a circle right ebefore it and it's basically polarization at that part from the slider ebfore so lol. Make 01:11:752 (1,2) - into a 1/2 slider and then another slider on teh snare because that is actually more rhythmically intuitive and more rhythmically intuitive and more rhythmically intui OK (this is a possible dq but u dont kno cuz QAT's dq subjectively almost half the time or so)
01:22:787 (1,2) - J

HD

00:33:821 (3,4) - bad rhythm slider sud be at white tick actually cuz its sTRONGER THE re and it's moRE INTUITIVE TO pla y tyea and this is also a DQ reason since it's actually bad (not Pap's problems tho, tho they might DQ for that too ok)
01:24:856 (4,5,6,1) - this looks rEALLY AWKSSSSSS THEy'RE SO CLOSE ANFSDIFHDJFGDSC esrhnjMKFDTHGSDV

sphaget

00:52:614 (2) - snare on sliderend okdad
00:57:442 (3,1) - snare stacked under a weak beat okdad
spacing emphasis and structure is partly wonky throughout the map okdad

INs

00:23:821 (2,3,4) - u see how the spacing is visually the same length but the rhythm si different?/?? / / yhjea
00:26:235 (1) - special stx look nic but this is unintuitive it's not a strong note at all and it's spaced so far u feel
00:29:339 (2,3) - if u brign them closer it'll look nicer trust
00:38:649 (1,2,3) - skystar gone wrong. do u think the stack is justified and the exessive spacing difference or
00:42:614 (4,5) - people will expect dis 2 be a 1/2 spacing ok dad
actually throughout most of the diff it has the same kinda problemz. I can see wot ur tryna do but ur not conveying it properly/well enough. It's just lacking in strcture mostly but u got the aesthetics down rlly well

lazr

00:23:476 (1,2,3) - yfw stronger beat on 2 but greater spacing between 2 and 3 o
00:26:580 (2,3,4,5) - look how closely spaced they are doubled and then how theYRE SO FA r away from each other y do u do dis
00:30:373 (1,3,5) - the is there a reason 5 is so far cuz it looks ugly imo
00:36:063 (2,3,1) - p sure the emphasis is the same for all of them
00:38:132 (4,5) - u didnt do this int he parts before and it's kinda random and inconsistent uh
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

uh from spaghet's to lazer's diff i didnt say a llot of shti i thot was dum so ya they're smaller than i actually would've made them tahts y i just made a comment instead xd

SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-12T22:23:07+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
asss

read this if any of u haven't

general
add to tagz:
n
and
dance
music
edm
electronic_dance_music
K done.

HD
00:33:821 (3,4) - bad rhythm slider sud be at white tick actually cuz its sTRONGER THE re and it's moRE INTUITIVE TO pla y tyea and this is also a DQ reason since it's actually bad (not Pap's problems tho, tho they might DQ for that too ok) fixed
01:24:856 (4,5,6,1) - this looks rEALLY AWKSSSSSS THEy'RE SO CLOSE ANFSDIFHDJFGDSC esrhnjMKFDTHGSDV fixed (I guess ~.~)
INs
00:23:821 (2,3,4) - u see how the spacing is visually the same length but the rhythm si different?/?? / / yhjea fixed
00:26:235 (1) - special stx look nic but this is unintuitive it's not a strong note at all and it's spaced so far u feel fixed
00:29:339 (2,3) - if u brign them closer it'll look nicer trust fixed
00:38:649 (1,2,3) - skystar gone wrong. do u think the stack is justified and the exessive spacing difference or fixed (I guess ~.~)
00:42:614 (4,5) - people will expect dis 2 be a 1/2 spacing ok dad fixed
actually throughout most of the diff it has the same kinda problemz. I can see wot ur tryna do but ur not conveying it properly/well enough. It's just lacking in strcture mostly but u got the aesthetics down rlly well I will try to improve it

THANK YOU FOR THE MOD

uh from spaghet's to lazer's diff i didnt say a llot of shti i thot was dum so ya they're smaller than i actually would've made them tahts y i just made a comment instead xd

Last edited by SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-12T22:28:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lazer

417 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2015-07-12T22:24:18+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
00:23:476 (1,2,3) - yfw stronger beat on 2 but greater spacing between 2 and 3 o
00:26:580 (2,3,4,5) - look how closely spaced they are doubled and then how theYRE SO FA r away from each other y do u do dis
00:30:373 (1,3,5) - the is there a reason 5 is so far cuz it looks ugly imo
00:36:063 (2,3,1) - p sure the emphasis is the same for all of them
00:38:132 (4,5) - u didnt do this int he parts before and it's kinda random and inconsistent uh
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
uh from spaghet's to lazer's diff i didnt say a llot of shti i thot was dum so ya they're smaller than i actually would've made them tahts y i just made a comment instead xd

Applied everything...

u thot my map was dum ;w;?

EDIT: i re-read it and am dum myself

InsaneLazer

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Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-12T22:46:44+00:00

Applied VINXIS's Mod and fixed some patterns and HS

Update

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Spaghetti

1,118 posts

Joined August 2014

Spaghetti 2015-07-12T22:52:59+00:00

Canadian Tire xddd

VINXIS wrote:
00:52:614 (2) - snare on sliderend okdad f
00:57:442 (3,1) - snare stacked under a weak beat okdad i think it's fine it compliments the bass sliding up
spacing emphasis and structure is partly wonky throughout the map okdad if u want reasonings behind itp,m me l o l

end ur life ty for the mod

osu file format v14

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VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-07-13T05:14:01+00:00

Spaghetti wrote:
if u want reasonings behind itp,m me l o l

WTF THAT TAKES E F F FO R T RTWER HRFADHJXYDNBfx

Bastionior

560 posts

Joined January 2013

Bastionior 2015-07-14T20:41:28+00:00

Olá lets do it

Hard

SPOILER

00:44:683 (2,3,4) - , 00:46:063 (2,3,4) - , 00:47:442 (2,3,4) - , 00:51:580 (2,3,4) - , 00:52:959 (2,3,4) - , 00:57:442 (3,4,5) - , 00:59:856 (2,3,4) - , 01:08:476 (4,5,6) - , 01:17:787 (2,3,4) - , 01:25:287 (5,6) - , esses tripletes estão muito dificil para um hard ,sinceramente está para um light insane ,sugiro colocar um slider 1/4 com reverse arrow.
00:46:580 (6) - que tal um blanket com 00:46:925 (1) - ?
01:01:408 (3,4,5,6) - Mude a localização é bem confuso essa parte (pra um Hard) .
01:26:580 (3) - Move para x288 y264
Só isso no hard.

Insane

SPOILER

00:23:821 (2,3) - do jeito que está ,nao vai ficar bom pensei em 2 coisas. 1 ideia > http://puu.sh/iZd3C.jpg .2 ideia > http://puu.sh/iZd72.jpg , se tiver algo melhor para aplicar de acordo
00:36:408 (2) - Blanket com 00:35:890 (1) - ?
00:37:787 (5) - os pontos desse slider está errado,lembra-se simetria para ficar com a forma exata >http://puu.sh/iZdsU.jpg.
01:13:994 (6) - muito distante lol ?
01:28:304 (1) - que tal colocar no meio da estrela ?
Enfim isso no insane.

Lazer's Insane.

SPOILER

00:26:925 (4,5) - what about that ? http://puu.sh/iZdXC.jpg
00:32:270 (3) - arranges this . one blanket for example
00:34:856 (1) - Rotate "123º" move x370 y160 like that http://puu.sh/iZecK.jpg damn its really good dunno ?
00:36:753 (2) - arrange ,00:36:408 (1) - copy and paste here 00:36:752 - rotate in 90 º like that http://puu.sh/iZepK.jpg
00:58:649 (5,6) - Lol remap this , it is very irregular
01:00:028 (5) - move to x472 y262
01:18:132 (5) - move to x232 y280
only this

só isso boa sorte.

SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-14T22:41:03+00:00

Kalindraz wrote:
Olá lets do it

Hard

00:44:683 (2,3,4) - , 00:46:063 (2,3,4) - , 00:47:442 (2,3,4) - , 00:51:580 (2,3,4) - , 00:52:959 (2,3,4) - , 00:57:442 (3,4,5) - , 00:59:856 (2,3,4) - , 01:08:476 (4,5,6) - , 01:17:787 (2,3,4) - , 01:25:287 (5,6) - , esses tripletes estão muito dificil para um hard ,sinceramente está para um light insane ,sugiro colocar um slider 1/4 com reverse arrow. Não acho que esteja tão dificil assim, alias, acho que ficou muito bom, pois é o que a musica pede.
00:46:580 (6) - que tal um blanket com 00:46:925 (1) - ? Esse slider esta fazendo blanket com a nota a seguir, acho que não entendi o que você sugeriu :s
01:01:408 (3,4,5,6) - Mude a localização é bem confuso essa parte (pra um Hard) . fixed
01:26:580 (3) - Move para x288 y264 fixed
Só isso no hard.
Insane
00:23:821 (2,3) - do jeito que está ,nao vai ficar bom pensei em 2 coisas. 1 ideia > http://puu.sh/iZd3C.jpg .2 ideia > http://puu.sh/iZd72.jpg , se tiver algo melhor para aplicar de acordo fixed
00:36:408 (2) - Blanket com 00:35:890 (1) - ? naah, isso ficou ótimo na minha opinião, vou deixar como está.
00:37:787 (5) - os pontos desse slider está errado,lembra-se simetria para ficar com a forma exata > http://puu.sh/iZdsU.jpg fixed
01:13:994 (6) - muito distante lol ? fixed
01:28:304 (1) - que tal colocar no meio da estrela ? tbm acho melhor deixar do jeito que esta D:
Enfim isso no insane.

só isso boa sorte. Valeu

Lazer

417 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2015-07-15T11:42:20+00:00

Lazer's sane

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Kalindraz wrote:
Lazer's Insane.

00:26:925 (4,5) - what about that ? http://puu.sh/iZdXC.jpg Good one, changed
00:32:270 (3) - arranges this . one blanket for example wtf was i doing here ;w;
00:34:856 (1) - Rotate "123º" move x370 y160 like that http://puu.sh/iZecK.jpg damn its really good dunno ? Have changed, I suppose it does play better like this
00:36:753 (2) - arrange ,00:36:408 (1) - copy and paste here 00:36:752 - rotate in 90 º like that http://puu.sh/iZepK.jpg rotating in 90 degrees doesnt exactly do anything good, however i've changed it into something else
00:58:649 (5,6) - Lol remap this , it is very irregular wouldn't say remap, just re-positioning for those 2, which i have done :^D
01:00:028 (5) - move to x472 y262 changed
01:18:132 (5) - move to x232 y280 changed
only this

Very helpful mod~ thank you! also, new hitsounds

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-07-15T22:14:24+00:00

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Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-07-16T16:36:32+00:00

Hello! From my queue

General

It's better to have a 1366x768 version of the BG, so here you are (just click the image to download)
Combo color transition 3->4 looks very similar, You could make combo 3 darker and combo 4 lighter to fix this

Lazer's Insane

This diff will need more work
Ik probeer je map niet af te breken, maar er moet veel aan veranderd worden voordat het echt rankable is.

00:21:925 (1) - Please move this up, the current movement is not really nice
00:22:787 (5,6,1) - Consistent spacing, or make the distance to the (1) bigger, but not this
00:26:235 (1,2) - This jump doesn't really make sense. There is nothing in the song that could be represented by this. My suggestion is to ctrl+H the slider and then fix an equal spacing between 00:26:235 (1,2,3) -
00:31:752 (1) - A normally curved slider that would be blanketed by 00:32:270 (3) - would look better
00:32:787 (4,5) - Same as 00:26:235 (1,2) - , the jump here doesn't fit. It would make more sense if it was a jump towards the downbeat. You could stack 00:32:959 (5) - beneath the slider-head for example, and then Ctrl+j 00:33:132 (1) - for a better flow
00:36:408 (1) - Move further away from 00:36:235 (3) - in order to make the next jump make sense
00:39:855 (5,1) - This jump is really overkill compared to the other ones in the intro. Consider lowering the distance
00:41:408 (5) - NC to stay consistent with the ending
00:47:959 (6,1) - There is a small distance here, while spacing increases here 00:48:304 (1,2) - . But there is nothing to be emphasized on (2), however, there is on (1). Make sure the distance between the downbeat and (6) is higher than the next distance
00:48:649 (3) - Let this blanket 00:49:339 (6) - Instead. It will look better and create a better flow
00:50:028 (3) - Rotating it clockwise (so the next slider will look like it's rotated the other way compared to now) will create a way better flow, and it will look better. this is somewhat what I'm talking about
00:50:718 (6,1,2) - Same as 00:32:787 (4,5) -
00:51:752 (4,5,6) - Move up for a better movement
00:54:166 (2) - Curve the other way, it's not like the slider is pointing towards a circle far away, so this will create some sort of sharp turn to move to the next slider-head
00:55:201 (1) - Curve this the other way as well (and make sure the flow is alright between 00:55:028 (4,1) -
00:57:270 (4) - Curve this less so the slider-tail will be pointed in the exact direction the triple is going
00:58:994 (6,1,2) - Same as 00:32:787 (4,5) -
01:00:373 (6,7,8,9) - As nice as it might feel, this is overmapped, so I recommend you to remove the stream
01:03:994 (3) - I suggest stacking this on 01:03:476 (1) - 's head because a higher distance towards 01:04:166 (4) - Makes more sense
01:08:821 (4) - Move this above the slider for a nice jump towards the downbeat and a better use of spacing
01:09:339 (2,3) - This distance is very small compared to the average spacing you are using throughout the kiai, consider increasing it.
01:10:373 (1) - Don't use an extended slider here, the voice is on the red tick so your slider ignores that
01:11:580 (6,1) - This is really overkill compared to the rest of the map
01:12:097 (3,4) - Again, you used a certain distance here, but to 01:12:270 (4,5) - is smaller, which doesn't make sense because there is nothing to be emphasized on 01:12:270 (4) -
01:14:856 (2,3) - This distance is also very small, please increase
01:16:925 (6) - Don't use an extended slider here either, there is an obvious bass-kick in the background
01:18:649 (1) - Circle+1/2 slider would represent the vocals better
01:19:683 (3,4) - there is no reason for these huge jumps

Insane

The soft hitnormal you used is already hard to hear, so consider increasing the volume
The triples are actually overmapped, because there is not constant 1/4 sound going on the in the background, but they do play nicely

00:47:959 (6) - I have no idea what the heck you did here, but I hear like, 5 claps at the same time (even without the object) Did you mess around with sample import
00:50:545 (6) - This offbeat slider doesn't have a purpose, and it cause the clap and the vocals to be on the slider-end. 00:50:545 (6,7) - Consider switching these objects (and re-position them).
00:52:442 (1) - Considering there are 2 words of the vocalist in the slider, I suggest making it a slider+circle for example
00:53:821 (1) - Such a strong beat on the slider-end D: Consider using a slider+circle here as well
00:56:063 (5) - Same as 00:50:545 (6) -
00:58:304 (2) - This confuses me a little. There are 2 vocal notes and a bass-kick in the song, but you used a 1/1 slider. Consider replacing by something that would represent these ticks
01:00:373 (6) - Add a clap
01:02:614 (2) - Kinda the same thing here, consider using a circle+1/2 slider to represent the voice better
01:04:856 (1) - Consider moving further away and rotating it a little anti-clockwise so you can emphasize the downbeat (and reduce the very larger distance here 01:04:856 (1,2,3,4) - )
01:08:994 (1) - Please stack this on 01:08:132 (3,4,5) - . The sudden smaller spacing here doesn't fit
01:11:752 (1) - add a clap to the slider return
01:19:683 (4) - You could let it blanket the slider-tail instead of head, so you can emphasize the downbeat and vocals (and you did that here as well 01:21:235 (4,1) - )
01:24:166 (1) - Add a clap on the slider-tail

Spaghetti's Light Insane

01:13:132 (1,2,3,4) - Reusing this pattern over and over again makes this diff rather boring. i'm not going to tell you to change it though

00:28:994 (1,2) - Big spacing here and 00:29:166 (2,3) - small spacing here doesn't really make sense. Why not make a triangle by stacking 00:29:166 (2) - on the slider-tail of 00:28:304 (3) - for example
00:34:856 (1,2) - No overlap here but an overlap here 00:29:339 (3,4) - ?
00:54:856 (5,6,1) - Same weird spacing thingy as 00:28:994 (1,2) -
00:56:408 (6) - Move it so it will be blanketed by 00:55:890 (4) - ? It will create a nice jump, because that larger spacing is now between 00:56:235 (5,6) - which doesn't really fit
01:11:752 (1) - Remove the normal sampleset from the slider-body
01:28:304 (7) - Circle instead? I can here the sound in the background it's supposed to represent, but since it's only one of those sounds it's a little weird to end with a 1/2 slider like this

Hard

Nice hard, the use of triples really makes it fit the spread towards the insane

00:58:821 (4) - This offbeat slider doesn't have a purpose, consider switching these rhythms 00:58:649 (3,4) -
01:00:201 (5) - Same thing here, it's fine if you use it for variety I guess, but don't let vocals and claps land on slider-ends at the same time
01:11:752 (1) - Clap on the slider-end
01:15:373 (2) - I highly recommend you to not ignore the clap and the voice by using this slider, use a circle+1/2 slider instead for example
01:16:408 (2) - Same thing here
01:15:890 (1) - add clap on tail

Pap's Normal

00:22:442 (2) - This slider could be improved, some curve points make it look sloppy
00:35:890 - There is nothing wrong with adding a circle here, it's still a normal
00:38:649 (1,2) - Why not try a rhythm like this. Idk but the first slider sound really meh
01:08:132 - Add a circle?

LucaSA4's Easy

00:31:752 (5) - This slider-return goes through the healthbar. Move it down if you care about this
00:38:649 (1,2) - Why not do this here instead, I think it will represent the song a lot better
00:45:545 (3) - Remove the whistle from the slider-body

Good luck with the mapset! Have a star

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-16T23:53:42+00:00

A Mystery wrote:
LucaSA4's Easy

00:31:752 (5) - This slider-return goes through the healthbar. Move it down if you care about this Fixed!
00:38:649 (1,2) - Why not do this here instead, I think it will represent the song a lot better Changed to another pattern, but good suggestion
00:45:545 (3) - Remove the whistle from the slider-body Fixed!

Thanks for mod!

Update

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Pappy

1,020 posts

Joined August 2013

Pappy 2015-07-17T23:15:27+00:00

VINXIS

VINXIS wrote:
00:22:442 (2) - lol this slider dude the p o i n ts. Looks better if u just made it symmetrical honestly cuz it looks clustered even without looking at the points man this is simmetrical, u should look at this slider before looking at points

very readable mod 10/10 would spend an hour trying to understand it again :')

A Mystery

A Mystery wrote:
00:22:442 (2) - This slider could be improved, some curve points make it look sloppy wtf leave this slider alone it's cool why nobody likes it /me cri

Ty for mods guys

mmapp

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SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-23T17:40:42+00:00

A Mystery wrote:
Hello! From my queue

General

It's better to have a 1366x768 version of the BG, so here you are (just click the image to download) fixed
Combo color transition 3->4 looks very similar, You could make combo 3 darker and combo 4 lighter to fix this fixed
Insane

The soft hitnormal you used is already hard to hear, so consider increasing the volume fixed
The triples are actually overmapped, because there is not constant 1/4 sound going on the in the background, but they do play nicely fixed most of them
00:47:959 (6) - I have no idea what the heck you did here, but I hear like, 5 claps at the same time (even without the object) Did you mess around with sample import fixed
00:50:545 (6) - This offbeat slider doesn't have a purpose, and it cause the clap and the vocals to be on the slider-end. 00:50:545 (6,7) - Consider switching these objects (and re-position them). fixed
00:52:442 (1) - Considering there are 2 words of the vocalist in the slider, I suggest making it a slider+circle for example fixed
00:53:821 (1) - Such a strong beat on the slider-end D: Consider using a slider+circle here as well fixed
00:56:063 (5) - Same as 00:50:545 (6) - fixed
00:58:304 (2) - This confuses me a little. There are 2 vocal notes and a bass-kick in the song, but you used a 1/1 slider. Consider replacing by something that would represent these ticks fixed
01:00:373 (6) - Add a clap fixed
01:02:614 (2) - Kinda the same thing here, consider using a circle+1/2 slider to represent the voice better fixed
01:04:856 (1) - Consider moving further away and rotating it a little anti-clockwise so you can emphasize the downbeat (and reduce the very larger distance here 01:04:856 (1,2,3,4) - ) fixed
01:08:994 (1) - Please stack this on 01:08:132 (3,4,5) - . The sudden smaller spacing here doesn't fit fixed
01:11:752 (1) - add a clap to the slider return fixed
01:19:683 (4) - You could let it blanket the slider-tail instead of head, so you can emphasize the downbeat and vocals (and you did that here as well 01:21:235 (4,1) - ) fixed
01:24:166 (1) - Add a clap on the slider-tail fixed

Hard

Nice hard, the use of triples really makes it fit the spread towards the insane
00:58:821 (4) - This offbeat slider doesn't have a purpose, consider switching these rhythms 00:58:649 (3,4) - fixed
01:00:201 (5) - Same thing here, it's fine if you use it for variety I guess, but don't let vocals and claps land on slider-ends at the same time fixed
01:11:752 (1) - Clap on the slider-end fixed
01:15:373 (2) - I highly recommend you to not ignore the clap and the voice by using this slider, use a circle+1/2 slider instead for example fixed
01:16:408 (2) - Same thing here fixed
01:15:890 (1) - add clap on tail fixed

Good luck with the mapset! Have a star Thank you <3

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-25T15:55:37+00:00

Hi! Could you change my diff name to Lumael's Easy since I changed my username? >.*
Also add Lumael to tags :3

Come[Back]Home

1,785 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-07-26T10:17:21+00:00

Here i am

LucaSA4's Easy

00:28:994 (2) Why does this slider repeat on nothing? Its weird, there is no sound here 00:29:511 . Let it repeat here 00:29:339 it fits more
00:31:752 (5) ^
00:51:752 (3) I'd move this one here 156/232 for a perfect triangle and it wont be so close too 00:50:718 (2) which looked weird
01:03:476 (3) This one should have a NC for consistency

Pap's Normal

00:22:442 (2) This slider is a bit too curved, and 1,2 sv is a bit fast for a normal (but still okay) but its hard to follow this slider because of the shape. Make it less curvy
00:40:201 (4) Since you were mapping to the vocals all this time, shouldnt this slider end here 00:40:545 ?
00:46:925 (1,2) This should be like 00:49:683 (1,2) it fits way better with the song
00:57:959 (1) There were unranks because of sliders shaped like this in a Easy and Normal. Maybe you shouldnt use it here
01:08:132 (2) This feels random, since theres not really a strong sound or anything
01:20:545 (2) same as 00:57:959 (1)
01:21:925 (2) ^

Hard

00:21:925 - 00:44:166 i think you can increase the Volume a bit. I can barely hear it. 40-50% maybe
00:26:580 (2,3,4) I dont really like what you did here. Maybe this?

SPOILER

00:28:994 (1) You could delete this slider since it doesnt fit. It would be awesome if you could just place a single circle here 00:28:649 and here 00:29:339 fits more with the song
00:40:028 (1) I think 1/2 and a circle after it would fit more instead of this random 1/1
01:01:408 (3,4) Overlap intended? Looks not so good

Spaghetti's Light Insane

00:30:373 (1,2) A better blank here would make it look better
00:38:132 (3,4) There's nothing in the song to suggest such a jump
00:44:166 (2) A NC on this one would be cool, as a lead-in for the kiai
I think this Insane could be better. Starting from here 01:07:614 it felt mostly random to me.01:09:683 (4,1) Like this for example. It could be like this

SPOILER

so there wont be a "This was placed random" feeling. I hope you know what i mean.
In general i dont like this Insane. It was good at the beginning. But it gets more and more random, and i dont like that sry :c (I could be wrong though, you should ask some experienced people about that if you dont agree)

Insane

00:25:373 (2) This slider would look cooler without the red sliderpoint
00:33:132 (1,2) I dont like this flow here, ive tried a lot of things, but i dont know what to do instead... :c
00:35:890 (1,2) This is really weird to play because of the shape of (2). You really should do something else instead, (2) is just outta place, i didnt expect a slider like that in this map lol
01:21:408 (1) I'd ctrl+g this for a cool flow

Lazer's Insane

00:22:614 (4,5) Improve blank
00:25:373 (3) ctrl+g for a better flow
00:54:166 (2,3) You should blank those so it wont look weird
I dont really like this Insane...Sliders feel random like this 00:58:649 (5,6) they dont fit, and are still placed close to each other which looks weird. 00:53:821 (1,2) This looks boring since its a jump, but both sliders are going in the same direction, its not really popular since the flow is mostly weird
01:04:511 (6,1) (6) looks randomly made and doesnt fit with (1)
01:09:339 (2,3) Random ds change is unnecessary and weird to play
01:12:787 (6,7) ^
01:14:856 (2,3) ^

Ill stop here, i really dislike this Insane

Overall its a good mapset, it just feels like most of the jumps ive seen are forced to make it "challenging" but, it doesnt fit the song, its not bad mapped, i just dont like the way it is mapped.
Good Luck though

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-26T14:39:45+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Here i am Oh >.*

LucaSA4's Easy

00:28:994 (2) Why does this slider repeat on nothing? Its weird, there is no sound here 00:29:511 . Let it repeat here 00:29:339 it fits more I'm not following vocals at all on this song
00:31:752 (5) ^ ^
00:51:752 (3) I'd move this one here 156/232 for a perfect triangle and it wont be so close too 00:50:718 (2) which looked weird I don't think it looks weird since 00:50:028 (1) - completely fade out b4 00:51:752 (3) - appear. But change same way
01:03:476 (3) This one should have a NC for consistency Fixed

Thx for modding Please change my diff name to Lumael's Easy

Update

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SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-26T17:22:03+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Here i am

Hard

00:21:925 - 00:44:166 i think you can increase the Volume a bit. I can barely hear it. 40-50% maybe fixed
00:26:580 (2,3,4) I dont really like what you did here. Maybe this? fixed

SPOILER

00:28:994 (1) You could delete this slider since it doesnt fit. It would be awesome if you could just place a single circle here 00:28:649 and here 00:29:339 fits more with the song fixed
00:40:028 (1) I think 1/2 and a circle after it would fit more instead of this random 1/1 fixed
01:01:408 (3,4) Overlap intended? Looks not so good fixed

Insane

00:25:373 (2) This slider would look cooler without the red sliderpoint I don't know how to fix it, because the tick rate is 2 for the hitsound D:
00:33:132 (1,2) I dont like this flow here, ive tried a lot of things, but i dont know what to do instead... :c fixed
00:35:890 (1,2) This is really weird to play because of the shape of (2). You really should do something else instead, (2) is just outta place, i didnt expect a slider like that in this map lol fixed
01:21:408 (1) I'd ctrl+g this for a cool flow fixed

Overall its a good mapset, it just feels like most of the jumps ive seen are forced to make it "challenging" but, it doesnt fit the song, its not bad mapped, i just dont like the way it is mapped.
Good Luck though Thank you so much! and I will improve it, believe!

George

George 2015-07-26T23:03:43+00:00

---Easy---
00:34:511 (2) - I would move this slider right more so the two sliders make a symmetrical shape
00:52:442 (4) - I would move this slider left more so it is blanketed by 00:51:752 (3)

---Normal---
idk

---Hard---
idk

---Light Insane---
00:23:132 (4,5,1,2) - Overmapped, I would suggest only overmapping on Insane and Extra, try doing what you did at 00:35:890 (4,5,6,7) -
00:27:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:28:304 (7) - I would replace this with a single circle

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-27T18:43:11+00:00

Fixed second suggestion

update

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Thanks for modding!

Spaghetti

1,118 posts

Joined August 2014

Spaghetti 2015-07-27T19:36:26+00:00

A Mystery wrote:
Spaghetti's Light Insane

01:13:132 (1,2,3,4) - Reusing this pattern over and over again makes this diff rather boring. i'm not going to tell you to change it though I purposefully made the map simple and repetetive since the song is the same.
00:28:994 (1,2) - Big spacing here and 00:29:166 (2,3) - small spacing here doesn't really make sense. Why not make a triangle by stacking 00:29:166 (2) - on the slider-tail of 00:28:304 (3) - for example Fixed.
00:34:856 (1,2) - No overlap here but an overlap here 00:29:339 (3,4) - ? Sv Change bb
00:54:856 (5,6,1) - Same weird spacing thingy as 00:28:994 (1,2) -
00:56:408 (6) - Move it so it will be blanketed by 00:55:890 (4) - ? It will create a nice jump, because that larger spacing is now between 00:56:235 (5,6) - which doesn't really fit Ehh nah.
01:11:752 (1) - Remove the normal sampleset from the slider-body Fixed.
01:28:304 (7) - Circle instead? I can here the sound in the background it's supposed to represent, but since it's only one of those sounds it's a little weird to end with a 1/2 slider like this I wanna compliment both of the ending notes, not just one.

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Spaghetti's Light Insane

00:30:373 (1,2) A better blank here would make it look better Such a small detail to mod x-x
00:38:132 (3,4) There's nothing in the song to suggest such a jump Wrong, listen to whatever kind of chime comes in there.
00:44:166 (2) A NC on this one would be cool, as a lead-in for the kiai I agree it's cool but idk if people will bug it about me later >>
I think this Insane could be better. Starting from here 01:07:614 it felt mostly random to me.01:09:683 (4,1) Like this for example. It could be like this
SPOILER
so there wont be a "This was placed random" feeling. I hope you know what i mean.
In general i dont like this Insane. It was good at the beginning. But it gets more and more random, and i dont like that sry :c (I could be wrong though, you should ask some experienced people about that if you dont agree) Wut, this is probably the most consistant map I've ever made.

George wrote:
---Light Insane---
00:23:132 (4,5,1,2) - Overmapped, I would suggest only overmapping on Insane and Extra, try doing what you did at 00:35:890 (4,5,6,7) - Not overmapped, you can perfectly hear the music that's playing there. Also, it's never okay to overmap, map what the song gives you.
00:27:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:28:304 (7) - I would replace this with a single circle nope

Thanks guys!

:::

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Lazer

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Joined July 2012

Lazer 2015-07-28T12:52:58+00:00

I've applied A Mystery's mod sry that took long l o l

insaaane

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304,104,36063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,36235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,212,36408,2,0,P|92:212|52:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,36752,2,0,P|252:64|292:92,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,312,37097,6,0,P|246:313|288:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,284,37442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,37614,2,0,P|292:172|280:124,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,37959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,248,38476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,180,38649,5,0,0:0:0:0:
198,270,38822,2,0,P|238:275|276:264,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,48,39167,2,0,P|254:87|232:120,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,181,39511,2,0,P|243:200|204:196,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,119,39855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,232,40028,6,0,P|408:268|412:312,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,72,40545,2,0,B|304:96|304:96|284:212,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,164,41063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,72,41235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,254,41408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41580,12,2,43821,3:0:0:0:
100,108,44166,6,0,P|136:168|132:220,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,124,44511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,244,44683,1,0,1:0:0:0:
203,124,44856,2,0,P|211:77|240:39,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,244,45201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,40,45373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,172,45545,6,0,B|375:204|375:204|427:240,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,45890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,268,46063,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,88,46235,2,0,B|360:104|360:104|280:100,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,168,46580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,40,46752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,68,46925,6,0,B|120:99|120:99|180:100,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,47270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,288,47442,1,0,1:0:0:0:
100,256,47614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,47787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,168,47959,2,0,P|192:120|212:56,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,132,48304,5,0,1:0:0:0:
468,220,48476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,132,48649,2,0,P|272:134|208:178,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,132,48994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,60,49166,1,0,1:0:0:0:
301,239,49339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,52,49511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,52,49597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,49683,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,116,49856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,50028,2,0,P|269:288|224:306,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,172,50373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,50545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,280,50718,2,0,P|385:321|349:352,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,51063,5,0,1:0:0:0:
108,244,51235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,124,51408,2,0,P|359:110|408:92,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,120,51752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,120,51839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,120,51925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,52097,2,0,P|264:288|320:288,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,52442,5,0,1:0:0:0:
472,192,52614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,52787,2,0,P|188:312|184:360,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,53132,2,0,P|360:120|364:72,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,53476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,300,53649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,191,53821,6,0,P|455:146|472:88,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,108,54166,2,0,P|178:145|196:189,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
114,249,54511,2,0,P|174:273|280:212,1,191.999994140625,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,108,55028,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,72,55201,6,0,P|368:72|408:112,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,215,55545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,312,55718,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,164,55890,2,0,P|472:120|468:60,1,95.9999970703126
367,235,56235,2,0,B|307:235|307:235|267:207,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,68,56580,6,0,P|136:68|160:44,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,152,56925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,196,57097,1,0,1:0:0:0:
141,63,57270,2,0,P|196:64|236:88,1,95.9999970703126
196,240,57614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,288,57701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,57787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,264,57959,5,0,1:0:0:0:
236,156,58132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,148,58304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,240,58476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,72,58649,2,0,P|236:71|252:72,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,201,58994,2,0,P|109:202|153:139,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,72,59339,5,0,1:0:0:0:
476,176,59511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,124,59683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,312,59855,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,262,60028,2,0,B|480:330|480:330|468:386,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,60373,1,0,1:0:0:0:
346,327,60459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,332,60545,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,305,60718,6,0,P|164:276|80:276,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,160,61063,2,0,P|112:189|196:189,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,212,61408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,68,61580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,160,61752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,296,61925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,244,62097,6,0,B|456:292|456:292|446:348,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,163,62442,2,0,B|231:115|231:115|241:59,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
452,244,62787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,60,62959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,188,63132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,88,63304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,140,63476,6,0,P|300:188|348:208,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,216,63821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,72,63994,1,0,1:0:0:0:
76,172,64166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,64339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,196,64511,2,0,B|152:244|152:244|112:244,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,316,64856,6,0,P|300:316|344:292,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,65201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,301,65373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,65545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,116,65718,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,232,65890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,66063,1,0,1:0:0:0:
436,344,66235,5,2,0:0:0:0:
436,344,66580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,260,66925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,84,67614,6,0,B|168:68|168:92|248:76,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,68132,2,0,B|172:184|172:160|92:176,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,68649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,84,68821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,312,68994,6,0,B|240:328|240:328|304:320,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,69339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,184,69511,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,240,69683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,196,69856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,70028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,70373,6,0,P|316:48|352:56,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,70718,2,0,P|440:124|420:176,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,71063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,71235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,71408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,184,71580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,56,71752,6,0,L|144:152,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,127,72011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,127,72097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,208,72270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,152,72442,2,0,P|288:140|320:152,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,216,72787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,146,72959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,73132,6,0,B|352:92|396:132|396:132|416:80,1,160,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,73649,2,0,B|160:316|116:356|116:356|102:322,1,160,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,74166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,180,74339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,74511,6,0,P|388:208|380:252,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,294,74856,2,0,P|256:230|264:186,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,75201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,180,75373,1,0,1:0:0:0:
335,186,75545,6,0,P|356:248|282:292,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,184,76063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,256,76235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,128,76408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,56,76580,2,0,P|344:68|344:116,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,128,76925,2,0,P|100:136|64:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,77270,6,0,L|356:260,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,132,77614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,328,77787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,77959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,280,78132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,280,78304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,176,78476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,136,78649,6,0,P|101:110|119:20,1,160,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,52,79166,2,0,P|103:109|176:160,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,79683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,240,79856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,80028,6,0,P|368:180|300:144,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,120,80373,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,264,80545,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,144,80718,2,0,P|88:176|84:228,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,112,81063,2,0,P|86:138|139:144,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,81408,6,0,B|284:196|284:196|340:264,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,284,81752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,120,81925,1,0,1:0:0:0:
400,144,82098,2,0,P|428:168|448:216,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,296,82442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,324,82614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,164,82787,6,0,P|413:224|417:256,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,83132,2,0,P|224:296|216:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,244,83476,2,0,P|462:229|482:177,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,83821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,244,83994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,96,84166,6,0,P|396:144|372:168,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,84511,2,0,P|204:24|168:36,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
148,192,84856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,85028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,85201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,282,85373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,312,85545,6,0,P|416:280|392:176,1,160,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,111,86063,2,0,P|320:172|352:242,1,160,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,84,86580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,36,86752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,86925,5,0,1:0:0:0:
392,260,87097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,204,87270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,248,87442,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,332,87614,2,0,L|250:350,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,336,87959,2,0,L|402:356,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,60,88304,5,4,0:0:0:0:

so i done this in slowly within week and forgot what i applied but that doesnt m atter does it??

almost e ve r ything

SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-28T16:57:54+00:00

Lazer wrote:
I've applied A Mystery's mod sry that took long l o l

so i done this in slowly within week and forgot what i applied but that doesnt m atter does it??

almost e ve r ything

Now apply the other mods D: please saygiauyeg

iHatePeople

142 posts

Joined April 2015

iHatePeople 2015-07-28T19:52:14+00:00

[Easy]

00:45:545 (3) - Ajusta http://prntscr.com/7y2za5

[Normal]

00:33:476 (2) - Move this 2 squares to right http://prntscr.com/7y3dkt
00:35:890 (1,2) - Same Position
00:40:200 (4) - weird, try a long slide curved or this http://i.imgur.com/BBdo8IY.png
00:49:166 (3) - weird move to 00:49:339 - and re-position
01:06:063 (2,1) - Same position, X= 156 Y = 279 and remove NC
01:15:201 - Slide with 1 return?

[Hard]

O mapa ta lindo, a jogabilidade ta um verdadeiro terror para 3,30. Quando você pensa que não da pra piorar me aparece as stacks no final do slide e puff.

Dificil pra %$#@! http://prntscr.com/7y3jqg > Recomendo remover os triplet dessa parte e só deixar Single Tap
Os triplets sozinhos sem outro circulo depois você pode manter (E ainda acho Hardist, até o Light Insane ta melhor que seu map (Pronto falei (cof cof))).
E mantenha os Slides com triplet no começo.

Bem mais gostoso de jogar.

01:02:873 (3) - remove
01:08:476 (4,5,6,7,8) - Mesmo removendo o 5 acho que ainda está uma pattern mt hard (REMAP)
01:23:218 (2) - remove
01:24:597 (2) - remove
01:25:287 (4) - remove

[Light Insane]

00:34:856 (1,2) - more close

[Insane]

00:49:511 (5) - Circle

[The other Insane]

00:22:614 (4) - Whistle
01:00:373 (6,7,8) - Hitsound awkward
01:12:011 (2) - remove

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-28T20:17:11+00:00

Fixed. Update enviado para o criador via PM

Sobre o Hard eu discordo com você. Os triplets se encaixam perfeitamente no jogo, muito boa diff, não é o fato de ter algumas patterns difíceis que fará a diff um "verdadeiro terror", "Dificil pra %$#@!"

SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SrSkyPlayer 2015-07-28T20:27:11+00:00

iHatePeople wrote:
[Hard]

O mapa ta lindo, a jogabilidade ta um verdadeiro terror para 3,30. Quando você pensa que não da pra piorar me aparece as stacks no final do slide e puff.

Dificil pra %$#@! http://prntscr.com/7y3jqg > Recomendo remover os triplet dessa parte e só deixar Single Tap
Os triplets sozinhos sem outro circulo depois você pode manter (E ainda acho Hardist, até o Light Insane ta melhor que seu map (Pronto falei (cof cof))).
E mantenha os Slides com triplet no começo. Arrumei uma parte dos triplets, mas não tirei todos.

Bem mais gostoso de jogar.

01:02:873 (3) - remove fixed
01:08:476 (4,5,6,7,8) - Mesmo removendo o 5 acho que ainda está uma pattern mt hard (REMAP) Isso esta muito bom anyway.
01:23:218 (2) - remove Isso ficou muito bom, prefiro não remover!
01:24:597 (2) - remove ^
01:25:287 (4) - remove ^

[Insane]

00:49:511 (5) - Circle Esse slider fica bem melhor ai, ja tentei de tudo D:

iHatePeople

142 posts

Joined April 2015

iHatePeople 2015-07-28T21:25:27+00:00

Lumael wrote:
Fixed. Update enviado para o criador via PM

Sobre o Hard eu discordo com você. Os triplets se encaixam perfeitamente no jogo, muito boa diff, não é o fato de ter algumas patterns difíceis que fará a diff um "verdadeiro terror", "Dificil pra %$#@!"

Eu vou tentar traduzir o que eu quis dizer com meu MOD em uma imagem

Você está utilizando uma pattern insana no Hard, (Sim, triplet com circle em 220 BPM é avançado)
Por isso eu disse pra você mudar isso, e vi que você gosta de abusa disso e de cara eu vi a mesma pattern no Insane. A diferença entre os dois é praticamente o DS deles. Não seria melhor fazer algo mais leve pro hard e que vai continuar com o mesmo flow e é deliciosamente melhor de joga? Esse monte de Triplet em Map 3 stars é chato acredite, Isso é praticamente um Mapa pra quem ja está jogando no Insane (3,5+) e por estar abaixo do filtro de 4 stars, vai perder o valor da diff por besteira pq quem realmente precisa dos mapa nesse nivel, não vai conseguir jogar o seu.

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-07-28T22:08:37+00:00

iHatePeople wrote:
Lumael wrote:
Fixed. Update enviado para o criador via PM

Sobre o Hard eu discordo com você. Os triplets se encaixam perfeitamente no jogo, muito boa diff, não é o fato de ter algumas patterns difíceis que fará a diff um "verdadeiro terror", "Dificil pra %$#@!"
Eu vou tentar traduzir o que eu quis dizer com meu MOD em uma imagem

Você está utilizando uma pattern insana no Hard, (Sim, triplet com circle em 220 BPM é avançado)
Por isso eu disse pra você mudar isso, e vi que você gosta de abusa disso e de cara eu vi a mesma pattern no Insane. A diferença entre os dois é praticamente o DS deles. Não seria melhor fazer algo mais leve pro hard e que vai continuar com o mesmo flow e é deliciosamente melhor de joga? Esse monte de Triplet em Map 3 stars é chato acredite, Isso é praticamente um Mapa pra quem ja está jogando no Insane (3,5+) e por estar abaixo do filtro de 4 stars, vai perder o valor da diff por besteira pq quem realmente precisa dos mapa nesse nivel, não vai conseguir jogar o seu.

BPM é 174 não 220..
Olha outros mapas de DnB.

Se o star rating diz que é 3.37 significa que os tripplets estão no padrão da dificuldade, já que se não fosse o caso, a star rating cresceria para além de 3.75

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-08-04T22:44:35+00:00

Please, I'll be a bit a inactive until the next month, please if I didn't answer a mod in 24 hours I let you, the owner of the beatmap ofc, apply mods for me because I don't wan't to slow down the next mods just because of me..
I'll try my best to answer mods but school is driving me crazy this month..

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