Pokie wrote:

General

• - 前30秒的BPM應該是整數...126...offset為0的話稍快, 試試724左右 最后终于试出来了。。63.025 746
  - tags 那兩個可以拿掉了嗯
  - 關掉所有countdown我怎么老忘？

Normal

• 00:11:911 (1) - 00:12:387 whistle
  00:14:531 (3) - 開頭whistle
  00:16:675 (1) - ^
  00:17:390 (2) - ^
  00:24:299 (1) - 結尾whistle
  00:28:825 (2,3) - 音量上升幅度降低恩。。。
  00:30:016 (1) - 用whistle收尾
  00:34:515 (1) - 這段開始其實我覺得用N音效會比較適合...normal-whistle實在太fit了(捂臉鼓声有点恶心。蹦蹦蹦的。。
  01:07:306 (2) - 被蓋住了, 換換位置?打的时候还是看的见一点吧。。
  01:13:759 (5) - 加個折返, 把01:14:108 (1) - 刪掉我觉得这是下一段的开始
  01:16:550 (1,2,3,4) - ^同做法
  01:53:527 (1) - whistle
  02:28:237 (1) - finish?
  02:29:632 (1) - ^
  02:30:853 ~ 02:32:772 - 這裡空白了呢..放個spinner如何直接后面全放转圈了
  
  
  Hard
  [list:38ffc]- 音效部份請參考normal

00:28:110 (1,2,3) - 綠線不要放在note上, 請參考neethime在normal裡的做法...至於為什麼嘛~ 問neethime。。。。。。。
01:08:178 (5) - new combo
01:08:701 (1) - 取消new combo
01:18:992 (4) - new combo
01:19:341 (1) - 取消new combo
01:51:783 (8,9,10) - 疊在一起恩~
02:20:737 (6,7) - 向左移1 grid (至於效果是什麼._. 你可以按F5 試試這一段)犀利。。


Insane

• - 音效部份請參考normal

00:59:457 (3,5) - 向左移1 grid
00:59:805 (4,6,1,2) - 下移1 grid我还右移了一下，上面就不左移了。
01:08:178 (7) - new combo
01:08:701 (1) - 取消new combo
01:47:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 我相信你有能力把這堆連打換成其他東西._.我不想跟前面一样用滑条。。。
02:04:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 分開一點? 有點難讀啊D:

• Krisom wrote:

  Remod as requested
  
  I suppose the hitsounds are ok. Still kinda quiet imo...
  
  [Normal]
  00:30:016 (1) - I dont agree with this finish. The note where it lands is soft. Add a whistle here instead.
  00:35:212 (1) - Clap
  00:46:375 (1) - ^
  01:35:213 (3) - Allign?
  01:53:527 (1) - Loud notes like this one need a finish.
  
  [Hard]
  00:28:110 - Move this timing section 1/4 to the for the volume change (like in normal)
  00:28:825 - ^
  00:29:540 - ^
  00:30:016 (1) -Add a whistle here instead.
  00:35:212 (1) - Clap
  00:46:375 (1) - ^
  00:54:573 (1) - Finish
  
  [Insane]
  Look at the timing sections at 00:28:110 - and move them like in Hard.
  00:30:016 (1) -Add a whistle here instead.
  00:35:212 (1) - Clap
  00:40:794 (4) - ^
  00:46:375 (1) - Finish/Clap
  00:51:957 (1) - Finish
  00:57:538 (11) - ^
  01:08:701 (1) - ^
  02:06:783 (1) - ^?
  02:18:469 (1) - ^
  
  Good job. Still too quiet imo, but meh. Hey, you got a nice custom hitsound for the clap, I'd like to hear it more during the beatmap though...
  
  Star

Gabi wrote:

the title should be

nao.paradigm - Reincarnation

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
1) The first offset and BPM is wrong. Set the BPM to 126 and Offset to -428. Don't forget to resnap all notes very nice!!!!!!
2) You need an easier diff (below 3,00 Star Rating), so the begginer player can enjoy the diffok....
3) Your bg (regerneration.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 800x599)done
4) No tags?i don't know what to write
5) Delete OSBi did,maybe i forgot to do a full submission

[Normal]
00:10:265 (2) - Move 1 grid down?
00:40:824 (2) - Finish?
01:07:336 (2) - I don't like if this note place behind the repeating slider, please move another place, so this is looks pretty
all done

[Hard]
01:34:720 (5) - Move 1 grid left? done....
01:45:010 (5) - Clap at end is not fit, please remove it done......
02:20:767 (6,7) - Move 1 grid right?ah,it will looks strange when playing

[Insane]
Fine~

Good song
STAR

SadKangaroo wrote:

You could think of mixing Normal hitsounds with Soft,I think.Like start with Soft ones,and then make Normal from 00:35:242 (1).
Anyway,think of increasing volume a bit. umm....i think it is noisy,boom,boomboom,not fit for the rapid music...

[Normal]
02:15:185 (1,2,3) - Why don't you use NC like in this one:01:05:417 (1,1,1)?fixed

[Hard]
02:22:511 (3) - 1 grid left to stack?when you play,you'll find it is better to put note like I have.

[Insane]
No mistakes,but streams are annoying.maybe

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) normal的star rating是3.09，你應該需要一個低於3的難度，才能rankSOGA。。

[Normal]
00:26:238 (3) - 在這裏加whistle?
00:27:991 和 及後2個timing point, 這種半格的微秒音量變化，玩家是察覺不到的，能加大差距至1或1.5格嗎?
00:30:048 (1) - 用漸進式的方法，降低此spinner的音量?
00:49:021 (1) - 降低spinner的音量? (有點吵)
00:54:603 (1) - ^ABOVE ALL DONE
02:31:057 (1) - ^﹐且在 02:22:150終止?没看懂。。但是我觉得没必要改。

[Hard]
00:26:238 (2) - 加whistle?
00:27:872 和 及後2個timing point, 這種半格的微秒音量變化，玩家是察覺不到的，能加大差距至1或1.5格嗎?
00:30:048 (1) - 降低音量?
00:49:021 (1) - ^
00:54:603 (1) - ^
ALL DONE
[Insane]
00:27:991 和及後2個timing point, 加大音量差?
00:30:048 (1) - 用漸進式的方法，降低此spinner的音量?
01:43:615 (4,5) - 對稱一點?
01:58:964 (4) - 這note不要重疊較好，有點混淆 so,play twice then you will see clearly,not to hard
ALL DONE
star~

Lesjuh wrote:

Insane
The hitsounds you used are very hard to hear and I don't think they reall add anything to the song. You're better off with the default hitsounds. For example:
00:35:242 (1) - A finish sounds would be much better here
00:40:824 (4) - ^
If you do this on all difficulties, then delete soft-hitclap from your song folder and resubmit.

Then let's do some aligning!!~
00:10:286 (2) - Move one grid down
00:19:095 (4,5) - Move one grid up
00:22:905 (4,5) - Move one grid to the right
02:32:278 (3) - Move one grid to the left

Hard
01:32:801 (4) - Move one grid up
01:49:197 (4) - Move two grids to the left
02:20:767 (6,7) - Move one grid to the rightwhen play,it looks ok

That's all!

KuraiPettan wrote:

Star~~

• 
  Set BG.(Don't set only SB.)

• 
  There are many difficult pattern and formation for beginners.
  For example, 01:00:686 (1,2,3,4,5,1), 01:27:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6), and many more.
  I recommend you to make them easier.

1. 00:13:823 (1,2) - change them to slider.

• 
  AR +1?

1. 00:13:823 (1,2) - change them to slider?
2. 00:34:871 (3,1) - too close.
3. 01:08:186 (5) - new combo?

1. 00:13:823 (1,2) - change them to slider?
2. 00:36:092 (4) - stack it perfectly.
3. 00:44:639 (3) - add new combo because of changing slider speed?
4. 01:29:465 (6,7,1) - this formation is too hard to play imo...
5. 01:30:860 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 01:41:587 (T) - remove this green line.
7. 01:47:430 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hmm...very difficuly to play...
8. 01:49:175 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
9. 02:04:349 (1,2,3,5,6) - stack (5,6) perfectly. player can't read these note.
10. 02:24:756 (5,6,7) - this formation is too hard to play imo.

Suzully wrote:

Mod requested by chickgod.

[General]

• 
  Set BG.(Don't set only SB.)

[Normal]

• 
  There are many difficult pattern and formation for beginners.
  For example, 01:00:686 (1,2,3,4,5,1), 01:27:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6), and many more.NOPE
  I recommend you to make them easier.

1. 00:13:823 (1,2) - change them to slider. OK

[Hard]

• 
  AR +1?

1. 00:13:823 (1,2) - change them to slider?NO
2. 00:34:871 (3,1) - too close. fixed
3. 01:08:186 (5) - new combo? fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:13:823 (1,2) - change them to slider? no
2. 00:36:092 (4) - stack it perfectly. fixed
3. 00:44:639 (3) - add new combo because of changing slider speed?good suggestion
4. 01:29:465 (6,7,1) - this formation is too hard to play imo...
5. 01:30:860 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 01:41:587 (T) - remove this green line.fixed
7. 01:47:430 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hmm...very difficuly to play...yes....
8. 01:49:175 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
9. 02:04:349 (1,2,3,5,6) - stack (5,6) perfectly. player can't read these note.i make them farther
10. 02:24:756 (5,6,7) - this formation is too hard to play imo.

Good luck! Star~!