cold snap nagi☆ original comiket 87 c87

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Artist : FELT v
Title : Freedom v
Source : none (it's original so...)
Tags :
Cold Snap (album)
NAGI☆ (composer)
original track (defining it's an original track)
comiket 87 (the even when the album released)
c87 (abb for comiket 87)

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cold snap nagi☆ original comiket 87 c87

also you maybe want to change the hardest diff to "Free"

i might can't find my freedom, but this freedom make me happy

NISSAN001 wrote:

Hi from #Modreqs

Map is pretty good i can't see any problems :D

Easy:
00:24:811 (1) - Can you extend this to white line? Nope because it sounds weird
01:06:513 (2) - Change this to that-https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3284686 Done!

Normal:
00:24:811 (1) - Again ↑ ^
01:05:237 (7,1) - Change this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3284699 Done

Free:
00:24:811 (1) - Again ↑ ^ ^
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - Maybe use this pattern?-https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3284715 Done!

Cool map Get this ranked! I hope ^.^

Kinshara wrote:

OMG Yes, Someone actually mapped thisss!! Good luck! <3

1. I think you should make the soft hitfinish a bit louder in audacity. it gets kinda lost and it shouldn't be more quiet than a soft whistle

1. 00:24:812 (1) - I think you should add a drum hitfinish here to support the music
2. 00:43:535 - add a hitsound to support that scratch?
3. 00:45:450 - I think you shold not ignore that sound with that big slider. this difficulty is the hardest of your set so maybe you should map this stuff out. just make the slider end before and add some circles
4. 00:49:493 (3) - if you blanket like this don't fully blanket and then suddenly change direction. This will always end up in looking sloppy. I suggest you make it like this to look better:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:59:706 (3) - again for looks and also for nice play i would put this slider a bit down. maybe stack it with 00:58:642 (9) - ? it wouldn't looks so... uhm... unclean i guess. stuck together. tight. you know?

1. 00:24:811 (1) - again maybe add a drum finish here?
2. 00:41:833 (1,2,3) - how about you change this into a straight line for looks?
3. 00:54:599 (7) - to support the vocal here add a soft hitfinish on the sliderened

1. 00:24:811 (1) - same as normal and freed
2. 00:48:216 (4,1) - fix the blanket
3. hm okay diff

Hard wrote:

Hi. I think your map is kinda good but I guess you should pn some bn now.

Well let's do some nazi-modding and polishing, shall we? Okay :3

(m4m from your queue)

[General]

1. I think you should make the soft hitfinish a bit louder in audacity. it gets kinda lost and it shouldn't be more quiet than a soft whistle I can't because of saturation :/

[Freed]

1. 00:24:812 (1) - I think you should add a drum hitfinish here to support the music Done & for the other diffs
2. 00:43:535 - add a hitsound to support that scratch? No hitsounds goes correctly here :/
3. 00:45:450 - I think you shold not ignore that sound with that big slider. this difficulty is the hardest of your set so maybe you should map this stuff out. just make the slider end before and add some circles Done
4. 00:49:493 (3) - if you blanket like this don't fully blanket and then suddenly change direction. This will always end up in looking sloppy. I suggest you make it like this to look better:
   SPOILER

   
   Done
5. 00:59:706 (3) - again for looks and also for nice play i would put this slider a bit down. maybe stack it with 00:58:642 (9) - ? it wouldn't looks so... uhm... unclean i guess. stuck together. tight. you know? I've tried stuff but nothings works :/

[Normal]

1. 00:24:811 (1) - again maybe add a drum finish here?
2. 00:41:833 (1,2,3) - how about you change this into a straight line for looks? No
3. 00:54:599 (7) - to support the vocal here add a soft hitfinish on the sliderened hitsounds :/

[Easy]

1. 00:24:811 (1) - same as normal and freed
2. 00:48:216 (4,1) - fix the blanket Done
3. hm okay diff

good luck with ranking this. have a nice day~

I don't even need to write some "offending and stuff" text here, because you're one of our mapping team~
I don't even need the banner, but who cares. xD

General

Easy

Normal

Freed

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

I don't even need to write some "offending and stuff" text here, because you're one of our mapping team~ :D
I don't even need the banner, but who cares. xD lol

General

● The hitsounds are really well done! Thanks
● Instead of that yellow-green colour I'd like a light-yellow colour~ Reason of this: link. The color on the middle is the main colour of the background

Easy

● 00:51:194 (4) - I used a extra circle to check that blanket. I improved it, I think. (First node: X208 Y84, Middle node: X168 Y116, Last node: X148 Y180) Done



● 00:58:003 (3) - Move to X231 Y241 for perfect stack. Done
● 00:58:854 (1) - Change Y80 to Y81 for perfect staaack~ Done
● 00:59:705 (2) - Y241 as 3. Done
● 01:05:662 (1) - X328 Y265 for perfect stack. (Use CTRL+G on the slider you want to stack with, so you can see the XY grid) Done
● 01:05:662 (1,2) - This looks weird, 'cuz the first slider is round and the second one straight~ I'll keep this because the (1) makes a blanket with the (3)

Normal

● 00:46:514 (4,5) - I really didn't excepted these to be snapped correclty, good job! c: Thanks
● 00:56:726 (2,4) - How about making these two symmetrical to the slider? Done
● That difficulty is perfect. Wow~ I'm pretty good at mapping Normal diffs. ^^ (btw, you are like the 3rd mod on this diff!)

Freed

● 00:41:834 (1,2) - I like symmetry more, but that's a matter of opinion. I was playing on unsymmetrical stuff here, so no changes
● 00:48:642 (1,2) - ^ ^
● 00:49:493 (3,4) - You could improve that blanket just a bit~ Done!
● 00:52:472 (2) - Move the last node one to the right, for better blanket. Done!
● 00:57:578 (6,7) - The slider pointing downwards makes the flow bad for me. :c I was playing with the (3) ^^

It's a solid neat map. Please get it ranked! :3
I hope so xD

inspectorscout wrote:

Overall I think this map is ready to get ranked, but since I feel like being autistic I will try to find some things that can even make it that little bit better. ♥
First: great song, nice little SB. Good work! :D

Easy: Spot on. I don't like the weird sliders, but they fit the song, so it's fine.
Normal: Exactly the same, nice diff.
Hard:
01:09:067 (1) - I dont see why you would start a new combo here. I know that it fits the song, but it's kinda ugly to have that last note in a different colour. Because of a new measure, but it's not consistent with the other diffs, so I've deleted this one
01:00:344 (4,5) - Kinda a brutal jump that slightly disturbs the serenity of the map. I know it would cost a lot of work, but maybe resize it just that little bit? Done
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - every stream in your map is a line, this one is a curve. Is there a reason to? if not, make it fit the rest of the song. Because of a jump, but I have tried to adjust it ^^

That was my small (and maybe a bit brutal) mod, but i really like to see this map get ranked. Good luck

inspectorscout wrote:

Since you took my advise, even though I just started modding, merci beaucoup! Have a star and get this stuff ranked!
Edit: i have enough, take 2 instead :p

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Z e r s s! I'll be modding in English since I write and type more in this language. Okay, no problem

SB

1. This is my personal preferences, but when the credits appears, I honestly dislike the transition. Maybe the fast movement is causing this to make me dislike this. I think a slower one would fit better because the music is calm and slow. From the start to the end having a distance of 20 on the x axis. Right now it starts on x:534, it would end on x:345. I have slowed A BIT the credits, actually, the credits goes on the same speed as the title text
2. The y axis of the credits is not straight. It's little off, but can be fine-tuned. Yup, I was correcting it
3. I guess you changed the offset, but you haven't changed for the SB. If you click on the tab Design -> Move all elements in time..., you can shift it by -30ms to have everything accurate. Wow, I don't remember that I have changed the offset, well, done anyway xD

General

1. Nitpicking I guess, but soft-sliderslide.wav kind of have a tiny tiny silence, but it could make issues to soundcards. Replace it with this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Done
2. 00:29:067 to 00:38:216 - I'd map this section to rid of the break. Currently there's nothing unrankable; the amp uses 83% of the audio, so it's okay. But I think it's tiring to wait some seconds before the the objects popping out.
   This section is calm so rhythms like 1/1 and a little of 1/2 (depending on the difficulty) would go well. For Freed, starting from 00:35:024 you can some beats on the blue ticks, like 00:35:343 - 00:36:194 - and more. In my opinion, having 4 3/4 repeat sliders would go well.
3. 00:24:811 - If you're going to map the section I mentioned above, you can keep the green point because I think the calm part would need a low SV. But you're not going to, the point is useless because you only added spinners between 00:24:811 to 00:41:833 . And SV doesn't affect the spinner. Also you cannot have two timing and / or inherited points at the same time, unless for this reason. I won't map this part because of reasons

Easy

1. 00:52:896 (3) - How about you make a blanket pattern with the head of 00:54:599 (4) ? It's only for aesthetic. Yup, done!

Hard

1. Some of the streams have inconsistent distances with their predecessors.
   
   1. 00:47:365 (6,7) is 0.78x apart
   2. 00:51:195 (8,9) is a 1/2 rhythm and is 1.74x apart
   3. 00:54:600 (7,8) has a distance of 0.83x
   4. 00:57:578 (6,7) becomes 1.0x                                    Everything's corrected!
   5. 01:00:982 (6,7) is 1.41x
   6. 01:04:812 (7,8) is the same as one before.
   I recommend you use a same distance around 1.00x ~ 1.40x to avoid inconsistency and "confusion", as there's only one 1/2 rhythm with a following stream.
2. 00:46:514 (4) - Nazi. Move this more up, like x:115 y:189 to just have a distance of 1.0x between this and its previous circle. Done
3. 00:50:132 (4,5) - I think you should switch the places of these circles (Ctrl + G). The current flow goes all weird and "unnatural". I also suggest you to move 00:50:557 (6) to somewhere like x:52 y:117 if you switched the circles. In my opinion, the flow would be better. Actually, it's doing a star pattern, well, it doesn't feels really unnatural, because I've asked testplays and no-one told me about this pattern
4. 00:59:706 (3) - The overlap with 00:58:854 (1) -'s head is kind of ugly to me. Try stacking the slider to 00:58:642 (9) ? Don't forget to move 01:00:344 (4) if you stacked the slider. Actually, it's doing an overlap with (10) because of the flow, but I've tried to adjust the flow to stack with the (9) without doing a jump. (4) moved too.

I guess this should be it. If you have questions, don't hesitate asking them! Good luck with your map!

1. The spacing in Hard diff is messed up, there is a lot of clunky patterns. I don't get your logic and you must tidy up patterns on Hard diff.
2. Issues with timing points in all diffs : 00:24:812 - , they are at the same time but they don't have the same sampleset and volume, just fix it please.
   

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello, I have to bubble pop your map for this/these following reason(s).

1. The spacing in Hard diff is messed up, there is a lot of clunky patterns. I don't get your logic and you must tidy up patterns on Hard diff.
2. Issues with timing points in all diffs : 00:24:812 - , they are at the same time but they don't have the same sampleset and volume, just fix it please. Done
   

Hard

1. 00:45:663 (2) - Even if it's a few pixels, the spacing difference is clearly noticeable and that's a little messy. it could be better if you clean up this pattern for a better impression. Done
2. 00:46:940 (5) - Same as ^, the flow is a little broken, there is twice the same motion between 00:46:514 (4,5) - and 00:46:940 (5,6) - but the spacing between the previous and next is different and that is confusing in term of visual. You mean that this is broken?
3. 00:51:621 (9,10,11) - This is really confusing, the distance between 00:51:195 (8,9) - and 00:51:834 (11,1) - is not the same, and this is also counter intuitive. If you want to emphasize the strongest note here 00:52:046 - the jump should be between 00:51:834 (11,1) - and not between 00:51:195 (8,9) - because there is nothing powerful between them. But i saw that there is almost the same spacing between the triple and the next combo. If you apply what i said, you should make it consistent everywhere. I'm agreeing with you, THIS is CONFUSING, but BNs doesn't wanted to keep what I have done, before, I had a 5-objects streams (4 circles and 1 slider), aaaaaand, the BN that have bubbled this doesn't wanted to have it, because the players can do ZXZ and not ZXZX (only ZXZX because you can wait a bit for the next Z and you can still have a 300), I was actually forced to delete the fourth note because of "beauty", except that the "beauty" was killed by flow, by real "beauty" (I mean, how the objects are placed, and how they look like), by rhythm (it wasn't fun anymore to play). Now that the BN isn't part of the rankability anymore (he said that if he was part of rankability, he doesn't want to bubble this because of these sliders), I have restore these streams, I'll talk with you if it's not the end of the world just for one circle.
4. 00:52:897 (3,4) - Between them, there should be the same distance as 00:52:472 (2,3) - because there is no reason to change the spacing. Corrected while checking the map xD
5. 01:09:067 (10) - Add NC here to respect each measures. I was asking if there's not too much of HP here, but here you go Added it in Easy too (for normal, it's a slider end)

Hard diff needs more improvements, other diffs are fine and ready.
Call me back after getting more mods for Hard diff.

Z e r s s wrote:

You mean that this is broken?

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Z e r s s wrote:

You mean that this is broken?

I mean, broken due to the spacing difference that makes the player hit the third slider too early.

Wafu wrote:

Actually Cherry Blossom is right in my opinion. But about the streams, you were not forced, but I cannot bubble something what's wrong in my opinion - doesn't have to be in other's opinion, but do I have to agree with everyone or can I have my opinion either? Choice was yours, opinion was mine, that's all about it :3

Cherry Blossom wrote:

To Wafu : If you don't believe that a map can be ranked because you have doubts, just don't take the risk to push it forward. When a BN is not confident with himself, the bubble pop will be unavoidable.

Hullahopp wrote:

short mod, idk, yolo

16:30 Hullahopp: Fek
16:30 Hullahopp: I mod it
16:30 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717690 FELT - Freedom [Freed]]
16:30 Hullahopp: Just bubble this
16:30 Hullahopp: Otherwise you suck
16:31 Z e r s s: only buble?
16:31 Z e r s s: no rank?
16:31 Hullahopp: Both
16:31 Hullahopp: I don't care
16:31 Hullahopp: If you don't rank this, I kill you
16:31 Hullahopp: And tell everyone you failed
16:31 Hullahopp: Ok
16:31 Hullahopp: Now
16:31 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717690 FELT - Freedom [Freed]]
16:31 Hullahopp: Freed
16:31 Z e r s s: only freed
16:32 Hullahopp: 00:37:577 - Idk what's the point of having this 2 seconds of nothingnes
16:32 Z e r s s: -> Wafu mod
16:34 Hullahopp: 00:45:663 (2,3) - 00:46:514 (4,5) - Distance is changing, I'm not sure if it's meant to be like that
16:34 Hullahopp: Wait one
16:34 Hullahopp: I see you used 2 kinda of distance in your map, that looks fine
16:34 Z e r s s: http://i.t.zz.mu/199114624 <- the flow at 4,5 must be like that
16:35 Hullahopp: 00:56:089 (2,3) - Jump? Nah
16:36 Hullahopp: At the end of the map, the distance changed
16:36 Z e r s s: ok, reduced
16:36 Hullahopp: 01:00:982 - After like this one, you used a bit higher (maybe with 0,1) DS for the map
16:37 Hullahopp: 01:07:791 (6,8) - Stack pls
16:37 Hullahopp: 00:44:812 (8,2) - Blanket pls
16:38 Z e r s s: 01:07:791 - Stack leniency plz
16:38 Hullahopp: Dang it
16:38 Z e r s s: and corrected
16:39 Hullahopp: 00:58:855 (1,2,3) - Changing distance, unless it meant to be like that
16:39 Hullahopp: 01:03:110 (3,6) - Stack pls
16:40 Z e r s s: 00:58:855 - All the modders don't like if I stack the (3) on (10), so I'm stacking on (9)
16:40 Z e r s s: 01:03:110 - done
16:40 Hullahopp: 01:07:791 (6,8) - This can be corrected by modifying the slider, you know
16:41 Z e r s s: which points? because everytime I change it, it's not overlapping correctly
16:42 Hullahopp: I managed to do it, lol
16:43 Hullahopp: It is possible
16:43 Z e r s s: "which points?"
16:43 Hullahopp: http://puu.sh/j65U8/022647ed67.jpg
16:43 Hullahopp: Amm, both second and third points?
16:43 Z e r s s: lol, I mean the coordonates of the points xD
16:43 Z e r s s: yeah
16:44 Hullahopp: 2nd point x356 y228
16:44 Hullahopp: Third x412 y320
16:45 Z e r s s: it's not working for me lol
16:45 Hullahopp: 00:52:046 (1,3) - Better overlap pls
16:45 Hullahopp: Idk, it did worked for me
16:45 Hullahopp: I'm just being an asshole here XD
16:46 Hullahopp: 00:52:897 (3,6) - Better stack again
16:46 Z e r s s: 00:52:046 - this overlap is actually good (I've remember that I've changed stuff without updating, maybe I've corrected it xD)
16:46 Hullahopp: oh ok
16:48 Hullahopp: Why not add a clap on this? 01:09:067 (1) - 
16:48 Z e r s s: because of the inherited point
16:48 Hullahopp: Oh well, it doesn't have a sound anyways..
16:49 Hullahopp: I also don't get the point of writing "Map & Storyboard by Z e r s s"
16:50 Hullahopp: i mean, you made the map, so it's kinda pointless..
16:50 Z e r s s: because of time, the first play, the player will read it, and won't be annoyed by the break
16:50 Z e r s s: (with the title text just before)
16:50 Hullahopp: That title text before, yeah, you can skip it
16:51 Hullahopp: But still, players with 100% dim will be still bored
16:51 Hullahopp: Meh, maybe it's just me
16:52 Hullahopp: 00:45:237 (1,2) - If this is the normal DS, than 00:43:961 (6,7) - has a bigger one
16:52 Hullahopp: But it's because of the grid
16:52 Hullahopp: Oh well
16:52 Hullahopp: Shift place it, maybe?
16:53 Z e r s s: Actually, I don't see any DS problem, in my version, they have the same DS
16:53 Hullahopp: Oh yeah, the DS was changed from 1,1 to 1,0 during development
16:53 Hullahopp: Oh ok
16:53 Hullahopp: Than you just forgot to update it .-.
16:53 Hullahopp: Well, I think that's all
16:53 Z e r s s: (I made this map without DS xD)
16:53 Hullahopp: THAT would explain
16:54 Hullahopp: HUGE mistake by you
16:54 Hullahopp: >:(
16:54 Hullahopp: Don't do that again!
16:54 Z e r s s: xD
16:54 Z e r s s: Yeah, I know now xD

Z e r s s wrote:

That's your third mod and that's the first time that you want to post it xD

1. 00:43:536 (5,6) - make them have the same shape, literally ctrl+c ctrl+v the first into the second (then reposition / rotate)
2. 00:46:514 (4,5,6) - spacing should be consistent, use 1.2x spacing between 00:46:940 (5,6) -
3. 00:52:472 (2,3) - this should be 1.1x spacing like 00:52:046 (1,2) - , then 00:52:897 (3,4) - should have the same spacing too, but here is not as important because the pattern changed
4. 00:54:174 (6) - move to around ~x:306 y:243, so that the pattern looks cleaner, and the slider should have the same "height" between 5 and 7
5. 00:55:451 (1,2,3) - spacing is not consistent here
6. 00:58:855 (1,2) - use 1.2x spacing here, that way you can make spacing consistent with 00:59:281 (2,3) - and keep the blanket
7. 00:59:706 (3) - imo an "S" shape would fit in this slider, because the current shape creates a bit of anti flow, this is purely a suggestion though
8. 01:02:259 (1,2,3) - spacing not consistent
9. 01:04:387 (6,7) - I think you should use 1.0x spacing here
10. 01:05:557 (11,1) - move both 1 or 2 "y" values up, the stream is not completely straight and is curving a bit on these notes
11. 01:05:663 (1,2,3) - I think spacing should be consistent here as well
12. 01:09:173 (1) - this is merely a suggestion but I think this would be a perfect opportunity for a long art slider instead of a spinner, then add the spinner later

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, here as a request by inspectorscout ^^ I'll only mod the freedom diff because the rest is ready and it's the diff needing mods according to the BN's c: 'scout will never leave my map xD I only want mods for Freed, so welp :p

[Freed]

1. 00:43:536 (5,6) - make them have the same shape, literally ctrl+c ctrl+v the first into the second (then reposition / rotate) Done
2. 00:46:514 (4,5,6) - spacing should be consistent, use 1.2x spacing between 00:46:940 (5,6) - it is
3. 00:52:472 (2,3) - this should be 1.1x spacing like 00:52:046 (1,2) - , then 00:52:897 (3,4) - should have the same spacing too, but here is not as important because the pattern changed you should play it like this
4. 00:54:174 (6) - move to around ~x:306 y:243, so that the pattern looks cleaner, and the slider should have the same "height" between 5 and 7 I first though that it'll looks ugly with (3), but it looks really cooler!
5. 00:55:451 (1,2,3) - spacing is not consistent here Done
6. 00:58:855 (1,2) - use 1.2x spacing here, that way you can make spacing consistent with 00:59:281 (2,3) - and keep the blanket it looks really weird :/
7. 00:59:706 (3) - imo an "S" shape would fit in this slider, because the current shape creates a bit of anti flow, this is purely a suggestion though You mean a sliderwave? done.
8. 01:02:259 (1,2,3) - spacing not consistent it is
9. 01:04:387 (6,7) - I think you should use 1.0x spacing here Done
10. 01:05:557 (11,1) - move both 1 or 2 "y" values up, the stream is not completely straight and is curving a bit on these notes I've checked everything, and it is
11. 01:05:663 (1,2,3) - I think spacing should be consistent here as well it is
12. 01:09:173 (1) - this is merely a suggestion but I think this would be a perfect opportunity for a long art slider instead of a spinner, then add the spinner later No, for the reason of Normal & Easy diff: I can't change slider velocity, and the slider will looks really ugly

I get the point of Cherry Blossom, some spacing inconsistencies here and there, barely noticeable, but they make a difference. They are the only things keeping the map from beeing ranked, so just go for it man, the map is really good ^^

NolanM wrote:

Mod as requested by inspectorscout :3

Freed
00:43:961 (6) - You may want to move this up a bit so the previous slider can merge with it to create a smooth path for the cursor. Of course, you will then need to shift up 00:44:812 (8) - , and move 00:44:387 (7) - correspondingly. Done, but without moving the (8) for two reasons: 1. It's making a neat overlap ; 2. The (1,2,3) part will be broken
00:48:217 (7,8,9,10) - I do not really understand the need for this stream. Sure, it may make gameplay more exciting, but keep in mind that there is nothing in the music itself that signifies itself that much for a stream such as this. Explained, like... 10 times?
00:49:493 (3) - The distance needed to go with the end of this slider to the next circle 00:50:131 (4) - has greatly increased. Perhaps you should consider fixing that, or you could keep it, as everything is so delicately placed for neatness. :3 I already know this, and I currently wanted to do it xD
00:51:621 (9,10,11,12) - Same thing, about referring to the streams.
00:52:471 (2) - There's nothing substantially wrong about this -- it's just the way it looks. It is awkwardly close to 00:52:046 (1) - . I think you should change this, unless you're completely fine with it from the phenomenal placement and blanketing. Okay, removed the overlap between (1) and (2)
00:53:536 (4,5) - These circles are placed slightly above the end of the previous slider, which does not give a nice and smooth path for the cursor. I would suggest lowering this a bit. Corrected
00:54:174 (6) - I do not know the purpose of this. It's not that neat, and instead it overlaps without stacking. I would recommend moving this slider in a totally different direction. The problem with this part is that, if I change the slider's direction, there will be a big jump and the flow will be broken. And for the overlap, it was asked on a mod. I've just removed a bit of "overlapping".
00:54:600 (7) - Also, this. I see you tried to place this circle on the previous slider head to maintain editor quality, but it just plays very weird and I don't think it should be used in this occasion. If you fix the previous suggestion, this will not be a problem. I don't know why it plays weird, I have no problem with playing it and I don't feel that really weird.
00:55:025 (8,9,10,11) - Above about streams.
00:56:089 (2) - This is slightly overlapping 00:56:301 (3) - . Try to fix this in a way where this won't happen. Maybe you could stretch out the DS by a pixel or so. It would not drastically affect gameplay, only the way it looks, so I think it wouldn't be breaking any rules. If you don't trust me, feel free to keep it the way it is. Everybody was killing me because the DS wasn't the same and that the map looks ugly because of that. So, I've made a little overlap, but, I've corrected it with moving the (3) sliders with the objects after, a bit in the bottom.
00:56:940 (4,5) - Refer to what I said earlier about the cursor not having a smooth path to move it. Shift this down a bit. Also, why aren't these circles perfectly stacked? Was it intentional? I think not, because you haven't done this previously before. You have kept it neat in the past. Actually, I really feel this one pretty good.
00:57:578 (6) - I do not particularly enjoy how this slider is directed toward offscreen and the next notes are behind the direction. This is just preference, though. I actually like this.
00:58:429 (7,8,9,10) - Stream.
00:59:706 (3) - Mildly adjust this slider to create the smooth path from the end of the slider for the cursor.. Right now, it is dragging down. Corrected
01:00:344 (4) - Awkward placement. These seem placed in a way where everything is slightly shifted, so when playing, it feels very weird. Done
01:01:834 (7,8,9,10) - Stream
01:03:748 (4,5) - Refer Actually, the same, I feel it pretty good, the flow is a bit broken to go with the (6), if I move this to the bottom, you'll see the same problem with the (6)
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - I wouldn't really point this out anymore. Since you do it quite often, I guess you wouldn't change it, and that's okay. You've got your own beat going.
01:08:429 (7) - Really neat, but I just don't like it how the slider is curved, and this circle is placed in a shifted-up position. If I curve the slider more, it'll be too much curved (in my opinion) :/

I hope you notice that I wrote a lot. When it comes to short songs, I must be super precise and picky. So, don't feel bad, and yes, I was very picky with my preference. Well done map, You will make it as long as you don't give up!
Good luck. A bubble pop is never the time to give up forever. Actually, if my map gets a bubble pop, he needs first a bubble, and it's proving that my map has an opportunity to be ranked :3

Squarey wrote:

No Kd

Shorten your mp3 since theres more that 25% of it unused before the map starts