M2U - Placebo Dying (Speed Up Ver.)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 19 June, 2015 at 8:56:36 PM

Artist: M2U
Title: Placebo Dying (Speed Up Ver.)
Source: O2JAM ANALOG
Tags: dnb drum n bass trance opera
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3970kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 125 notes)
  2. Extra (5.5 stars, 600 notes)
  3. Hard (2.62 stars, 247 notes)
  4. Insane (4.88 stars, 498 notes)
  5. Light Insane (3.87 stars, 335 notes)
  6. MeMoRiA (6.17 stars, 714 notes)
  7. Normal (1.86 stars, 153 notes)


Download: M2U - Placebo Dying (Speed Up Ver.)
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- Castaway -
Hello, my mod (normal-insane only)

All my suggestions, feel free to ignore but i strongly recommend these changes

General
Make sure to make more NC (new combo). some colours reach 69 which is too big. I also get confused with Nc's so get some1 to check them for u :D.
More consistent sliders in Normal and Intermediate.
Good luck!

Normal
consistent sliders throughout pls..i dont think there should be too many fancy shaped sliders in normal00:18:014 (1) - 00:37:909 (1) - etc
there are many pointed sliders followed by curved or straight ones. i would make them all curved or straight and ctrl+h/j (these flip horizontally and vertically) 00:06:330 (7,8) - this is a good example u used

00:03:172 (2) - less curve
01:05:698 (1,2,3,4) - no overlap in normal (or easy), its confusing
00:18:962 (3,2) - ^
00:21:488 (3,4) - make these flow better
00:23:067 (1,1) - these spinners are off beat
00:37:909 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2) - more consistently shaped sliders throughout
01:15:804 (1,2) - ^
01:23:698 (1) - this spinner...01:23:383 (1) - starts here..same with the other diffs
01:40:751 (3,4) - blanket better
01:43:593 (6,7,8,9) - overlapping and dont have the 'return' sliders
02:01:277 (20) - curveyyyyy more

i didnt list all of the sliders which need more consistency, so pls fix them :DDD

Intermediate
try using DS as some of the spacing is a bit off
00:05:383 (6,7) - i think this is to hard for intermediate, maybe place it at the end of (6) instead
01:08:225 (1,2,3) - space more consistently (same with the other ones) since its only intermediate
01:10:751 (5,6) - ^
00:12:488 - i would make the slider end here
01:25:277 (25) - i would make this a slider and 3 circles but meh...
01:44:856 (16,17) - Blanket better
01:45:488 (17) - move to x:79 y:204
01:47:383 (20,21,22) - its a bit confusing here...maybe just have circles on the beat
01:53:698 (30,31,32,33) - ^ and space more consistently
02:03:014 (55,56,57,58,59) - too hard, i would make them sliders
02:05:541 (64,65,66,67,68,69) - ^
01:42:330 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^

Hard
00:06:172 (11,12) - Blanket better
00:21:488 (41,42,43,44) - inconsistent spacing
00:25:593 (1) - take this circle out
00:51:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - more consistent shapes. maybe just make them curve. same sounds so make them the same shape
00:55:593 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:03:172 (7) - make the spinner start here 01:05:383 - and end here
01:05:698 - first beat starts here, so place the first circle here
00:47:698 (1,2) - place in x:252 y:292
01:13:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same beat apart, make them the same space apart
01:09:488 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - sliders in here should be the same spaces apart and maybe just have straight and curved sliders

Insane
(im pretty bad at making insane maps so yea...)
Nice beginning
00:25:119 (13) - a bit off the others
01:14:541 (1) - should be connected to the stream after it
01:38:541 (1) - the same slider as on hard, the beat starts at the end of the spinner so make sure the circle is there
01:54:330 (1,2,3,4) - is this meant to make a square shape??
01:55:593 (1,2) - make the same shape as 01:56:067 (1,2) -
01:56:541 (1) - aline this with the stream plz
02:01:751 (2) - move to x:376 y:200 i think is better
02:06:804 (2,3) - make the same shape as 02:06:172 (1,2) -
many errors are repeated. Make sure to go through and check them plz
Topic Starter
D e s
General
Make sure to make more NC (new combo). some colours reach 69 which is too big. I also get confused with Nc's so get some1 to check them for u :D.
More consistent sliders in Normal and Intermediate. Haha I forgot about the NC xD
Good luck!

Normal
consistent sliders throughout pls..i dont think there should be too many fancy shaped sliders in normal00:18:014 (1) - 00:37:909 (1) - etc
there are many pointed sliders followed by curved or straight ones. i would make them all curved or straight and ctrl+h/j (these flip horizontally and vertically) 00:06:330 (7,8) - this is a good example u used

00:03:172 (2) - less curve
01:05:698 (1,2,3,4) - no overlap in normal (or easy), its confusing
00:18:962 (3,2) - ^
00:21:488 (3,4) - make these flow better
00:23:067 (1,1) - these spinners are off beat
00:37:909 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2) - more consistently shaped sliders throughout
01:15:804 (1,2) - ^
01:23:698 (1) - this slider...01:23:383 (1) - starts here..same with the other diffs
01:40:751 (3,4) - blanket better
01:43:593 (6,7,8,9) - overlapping and dont have the 'return' sliders
02:01:277 (20) - curveyyyyy more
I will Remap

i didnt list all of the sliders which need more consistency, so pls fix them :DDD

Intermediate
try using DS as some of the spacing is a bit off
00:05:383 (6,7) - i think this is to hard for intermediate, maybe place it at the end of (6) instead ok
01:08:225 (1,2,3) - space more consistently (same with the other ones) since its only intermediate ok
01:10:751 (5,6) - ^ ok
00:12:488 - i would make the slider end here ok
01:25:277 (25) - i would make this a slider and 3 circles but meh... ok
01:44:856 (16,17) - Blanket better remap
01:45:488 (17) - move to x:79 y:204 re-positioned
01:47:383 (20,21,22) - its a bit confusing here...maybe just have circles on the beat ok
01:53:698 (30,31,32,33) - ^ and space more consistently ok
02:03:014 (55,56,57,58,59) - too hard, i would make them sliders
02:05:541 (64,65,66,67,68,69) - ^
ok
01:42:330 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^ i think it suits kiai and its just 1/2 beat. i will confirm it with my friend

Hard
00:06:172 (11,12) - Blanket better
00:21:488 (41,42,43,44) - inconsistent spacing
00:25:593 (1) - take this circle out
00:51:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - more consistent shapes. maybe just make them curve. same sounds so make them the same shape
00:55:593 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:03:172 (7) - make the spinner start here 01:05:383 - and end here
01:05:698 - first beat starts here, so place the first circle here
00:47:698 (1,2) - place in x:252 y:292
01:13:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same beat apart, make them the same space apart
01:09:488 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - sliders in here should be the same spaces apart and maybe just have straight and curved sliders
Remap

Insane
(im pretty bad at making insane maps so yea...)
Nice beginning thanks w
00:25:119 (13) - a bit off the others ok
01:14:541 (1) - should be connected to the stream after it ok
01:38:541 (1) - the same slider as on hard, the beat starts at the end of the spinner so make sure the circle is there ok
01:54:330 (1,2,3,4) - is this meant to make a square shape?? re-positioned
01:55:593 (1,2) - make the same shape as 01:56:067 (1,2) ok
01:56:541 (1) - aline this with the stream plz ok
02:01:751 (2) - move to x:376 y:200 i think is better nice
02:06:804 (2,3) - make the same shape as 02:06:172 (1,2) nice
many errors are repeated. Make sure to go through and check them plz noted ~
Thanks for mod ~
Topic Starter
D e s
Normal, Intermediate, Hard - Remap done
Bara-
Timing check:
BPM 190 (correct)
Offset feels off, try using 2571 (+30), to me, that feels better
JJ Rie
General

I think the source is O2JAM U. Not sure

put O2JAM in tag

Normal difficulty

00:21:992 - here should add circle

00:19:465 - ^

00:22:623 - ^

01:48:676 (3) - here look confuse

01:06:360 (2) - move a bit right

01:07:623 (2) - move a bit up

00:44:255 (2) - change location

01:39:834 (1,2) - change

Hard difficulty

00:55:939 - slider?

01:48:676 - here why not put fast stream

Light insane difficulty

00:25:149 (7) - here is weird

01:11:413 (3) - same ^

01:48:676 (1) - here is confuse

01:53:728 (1) - mirror?

mod by me and my friend :)
Narcissu


  • [Easyl]
  1. i suggest use " tick rate 1 " …… too many tick in slider in my opinion
  2. 00:05:097 (3) - m..m…… DS 0.66 → 0.58 a little big …… try grid 4 ?
  3. 00:13:939 (3) - stack and change DS is ok , but …… change ds should when colour change , “ ctrl + shift + A ” check DS
  4. 00:51:834 (1) - too many spinner …… maybe is unrankable
  5. 01:43:307 (2,3,4,1) - 01:50:886 (2,4,1,2,3) - avoid too many overlap , newplayer can’t read it = =
    [Light Insane]
  6. “ ctrl+a ” to see whole layout , try change to like ↓↓↓


    ↓↓↓
  7. 00:49:623 (1,2,3,1) - i know you DS 1.0 …… but insane diff need't DS , you can try ↓↓↓ …… avoid bad overlap for better read and add jump follow music



    [MeMoRiA]
  8. fine Hitsound and have fun map ~
  9. 00:06:834 (2,1) - need't 5.5DS jump here ……
  10. 00:22:465 (2) - you add N:C2 here , you can change it to stream make different with 00:22:149 (1) -
  11. 00:50:571 (1,2,3) - follow voice …… i think 00:51:202 - 00:51:834 - here should be slider head
  12. 01:23:965 - a ……why skip here , music is triplet


all diff need more work …… your map good but you lack experience for rankable , try to pay more attention to Neat and logical , avoid overlap (especially low difficulty)and jump when downbeat …… i suggest you map other short song or APP map , then to do this
Topic Starter
D e s
all diff need more work …… your map good but you lack experience for rankable , try to pay more attention to Neat and logical , avoid overlap (especially low difficulty)and jump when downbeat …… i suggest you map other short song or APP map , then to do this
i think i will map new song. thanks a lot! ~
Luna-
mmm tell me do you still want a mod for this map ore prefer to keep a ticket for later?

Sorry for the late I have been a bit busy
Topic Starter
D e s

Dark Accelerator wrote:

mmm tell me do you still want a mod for this map ore prefer to keep a ticket for later?

Sorry for the late I have been a bit busy
np :) hmm i prefer mod for my other map later ~ i will pm you
Luna-
ok :)
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