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Konnichiwa, Frim-sensei
here is my mod. Feel free to not use them XD
Ini mod ya?
[Dek Dodog]
01:59:517 (119517|1) - Consider delete this...
01:59:860 (119860|2) - ...and extend this LN so that it starts from 01:59:517
02:01:060 - Consider make a new LN here
02:03:117 - ^
02:05:688 - ^
02:07:231 - ^
03:20:774 - i think it'll be good to make a note for vocal here since it's somewhat a little boring
03:33:117 - ^
Anyway, good map
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Etdah wrote:

Konnichiwa, Frim-sensei
here is my mod. Feel free to not use them XD
Ini mod ya?
[Dek Dodog]
01:59:517 (119517|1) - Consider delete this... keep
01:59:860 (119860|2) - ...and extend this LN so that it starts from 01:59:517 keep
02:01:060 - Consider make a new LN here
02:03:117 - ^ no
02:05:688 - ^ no
02:07:231 - ^
03:20:774 - i think it'll be good to make a note for vocal here since it's somewhat a little boring why ?
03:33:117 - ^ ^
Anyway, good map
and do some irc with kaito
Little Chit Chat
00:14 Kaito-kun: Hi frim o/
00:14 Frim4503: hi
00:15 Kaito-kun: if you are not busy, can we do the mod an iirc?
00:15 Kaito-kun: if you have no problem of course
00:15 Frim4503: im mod your map ?
00:15 Frim4503: in irc
00:15 Kaito-kun: no, yours XD
00:16 *Kaito-kun is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717150 Sawai Miku - Colorful (Asterisk DnB Remix) [Greget]]
00:16 Frim4503: oh...
00:16 Frim4503: xD
00:16 Frim4503: wait a minute
00:16 Kaito-kun: sure
00:22 Frim4503: s
00:23 Kaito-kun: Ok
00:23 Kaito-kun: first thing first: What does "Greget" has to do with the song?
00:23 Frim4503: hmm....
00:23 Kaito-kun: I couldn't find any relationship between the song and the name of the diff
00:23 Frim4503: you know greget mean ?
00:24 Kaito-kun: I looked on google and only found some memes I couldn't understand XD
00:25 Frim4503: try wacht movie "the raid : Berandal" maybe you will konw what the meaning about that word
00:25 Kaito-kun: I'll watch it later then
00:26 Kaito-kun: 00:41:003 (41003|1,41003|4) - Add a note in here
00:27 Kaito-kun: there's the beat and the weird faint sound you map, but you didn't applied 3 notes this time
00:27 Frim4503: what do you mean ?
00:27 Frim4503: i think it's sound same
00:27 Frim4503: like the prev. one
00:28 Kaito-kun: what I mean is that you add 3 notes everytime that there is a strong beat+another sound that is sort of faint
00:29 Kaito-kun: but in here, there are both, but you didn't applied a chord
00:29 Kaito-kun: sorry if I'm not too understandable
00:29 Frim4503: i think i'm just following the drum song
00:30 Frim4503: sound i mean
00:30 Kaito-kun: then you only mapped drum in here 00:40:317 (40317|2,40317|4,40317|0) - ?
00:31 Frim4503: i think all my pattern is follow drum IMO
00:32 Kaito-kun: they follow drum, but everytime you apply a 3-note chord, there's this background sound
00:32 Frim4503: 3-note is just for cymbal
00:32 Frim4503: 2-1-2-1-1-2-2
00:33 Kaito-kun: oh well
00:33 Frim4503: whistle-hithat-snare-hithat-hithat-whistle-snare
00:33 Frim4503: ^something like that maybe :/
00:34 Kaito-kun: yeah, I understood
00:34 Kaito-kun: it's just that it confused easily, because cymbal appears at the same time of the sound I tell you
00:34 Kaito-kun: so I got confused
00:35 Frim4503: try listen carefully and you will understand :)
00:35 Kaito-kun: yeah, already noticed it
00:36 Kaito-kun: 00:53:860 - Maybe add some LNs or make them doubles to emphasize the strong sound there
00:37 Kaito-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267258
00:37 Kaito-kun: Something like this probably
00:37 Frim4503: oh...
00:37 Frim4503: i see
00:37 Frim4503: what about this part 00:54:888 - ?
00:38 Kaito-kun: you mean the background sound that appears there?
00:39 Frim4503: yep
00:39 Kaito-kun: well, you apply something similar with these 01:04:831 (64831|4,64831|0) -
00:40 Kaito-kun: so it should be no problem
00:40 Frim4503: just make it single LN ?
00:41 Kaito-kun: yeah, it's only one prolonged sound
00:41 Kaito-kun: I'm sending you a pic now
00:41 Frim4503: y
00:41 Frim4503: i'm just need some opinions, to make this map more interesting and fun :)
00:42 Kaito-kun: that's what mods are for :P
00:42 Kaito-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267274
00:42 Kaito-kun: ^I simply added LN and made moved the notes on column 1
00:43 Kaito-kun: and did a little rearrange to avoid some unintended jacks
00:43 Frim4503: oh... ;o
00:44 Kaito-kun: 01:16:317 (76317|2,76317|1,76660|0,76660|4,77003|1,77003|3,77174|0,77174|4) - Why not move them all to the same 2 columns?
00:45 Kaito-kun: they are the same sound being repeated
00:45 Frim4503: you mean this 01:16:317 (76317|2,76317|1) - on 1 and 5 ?
00:45 Kaito-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267290
00:45 Kaito-kun: ^Something sort of like this
00:46 Kaito-kun: doesn't exactly need to be columns 1 and 5
00:46 Kaito-kun: but you get what I mean
00:46 Frim4503: ok
00:46 Frim4503: make somre re-arange
00:47 Kaito-kun: 01:17:346 - There's the same sound we just added a LN on
00:48 Frim4503: like the 3 LN or just 1 ?
00:48 Kaito-kun: just 1
00:48 Kaito-kun: I'm doing some re-arranging to send you a pic
00:49 Kaito-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267309
00:50 Kaito-kun: ^something like this probably
00:53 Kaito-kun: 01:32:088 - You following vocals or the twinkle background sound in this part?
00:54 Frim4503: bgm
00:54 Frim4503: not vocal
00:54 Frim4503: cuz dk whta to follow there xD
00:54 Kaito-kun: XD
00:55 Kaito-kun: then it's ok, because following vocals would feel weird gameplay-wise
00:56 Kaito-kun: 01:40:660 - Same sound as before, add a LN (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267331)
00:58 Frim4503: ok
00:59 Kaito-kun: 02:24:546 - Same here (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267337)
01:00 Frim4503: y
01:00 Kaito-kun: Starting here 02:45:117 -, do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267342
01:01 Kaito-kun: I simply made the same thing as the last time, same sound, same column
01:01 Kaito-kun: but I also moved the double before it, to avoid unintended jack
01:01 Frim4503: done
01:01 Kaito-kun: unintended unbalancing* lol
01:01 Frim4503: make some
01:02 Frim4503: new pattern
01:03 Kaito-kun: 02:46:488 - Same prolonged sound, add LN
01:04 Kaito-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267365
01:05 Kaito-kun: 03:09:803 - Same here
01:06 Kaito-kun: I'll look to see if I can change a pattern or create a new one
01:07 Kaito-kun: but first, in 03:33:117 -, the SV is too slow
01:07 Kaito-kun: it's uncomfortable overall
01:07 Kaito-kun: (not the vocal SV, I'm talking about the one which makes the next section go slower)
01:08 Kaito-kun: at least increase it to 55% of speed
01:08 Frim4503: you mean starting there 03:33:117 -
01:08 Kaito-kun: yeah
01:09 Kaito-kun: And maybe add a LN in here 03:42:031 (222031|2) -, ending in the same moment as the other 2
01:11 Frim4503: 03:43:746 - 03:44:088 - hre ?'
01:12 Kaito-kun: what I meant is that the section starting on 03:33:117 - is way too slow
01:14 Kaito-kun: there's nothing wrong with the other SV changes, tho I feel it can be done smoother (maybe look for someone to help you with that, because idk much about SV changes)
01:14 Frim4503: ^ fix
01:14 Frim4503: i'm increase it
01:14 Kaito-kun: ok
01:15 Kaito-kun: 03:55:060 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267414
01:17 Kaito-kun: as for the some new patterns, I tried doing something in 04:06:031 -
01:17 Kaito-kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267422
01:18 Frim4503: ok
01:18 Kaito-kun: you mostly did asymetrical patterns throught the song, so maybe some symmetrical patterns is what you are looking for
01:18 Kaito-kun: asymmetrical*
01:19 Frim4503: idk much about pattern
01:19 Frim4503: what i'm looking for is make the map more fun and not monoton
01:19 Frim4503: using same pattern over and over
01:22 Frim4503: are we done here ?
01:22 Kaito-kun: 04:17:003 - Add LN https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267448
01:22 Kaito-kun: almost :P
01:23 Kaito-kun: and do Ctrl+J to 04:18:546 (258546|4,258717|3) -
01:23 Frim4503: :0
01:25 Kaito-kun: 04:22:488 - Re-arranged https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267461
01:26 Frim4503: y
01:26 Kaito-kun: and we are done :P
01:26 Frim4503: great :)
01:26 Kaito-kun: sorry if I took more time than you had planned XD
01:26 Frim4503: post this chat n thread, so i can give you kudosu ":_
01:26 Frim4503: no problem

Raediaufar
Mod for mod

Column: l1l2l3l4l

Buka gue oy




[General]
Kalo diliat dari beatmap ini dalam tagnya nggak ada judul animenya, cuma sebagai source aja, kalo bisa ini diskusiin sama bn aja

[Greget]
00:22:146 – tambah lagi note disini
00:44:088 - ^
01:06:031 - ^
01:07:746 (67746|4,67746|0) – jadiin 2 dan 4
02:12:203 (132203|3,132203|2) – hapus, gak ada suaraya kecuali hs kamu
03:12:031 – gimana kalo gini? http://puu.sh/itbjJ/cf0b1a7c1c.jpg

03:20:774 – sampai - 03:30:374 – gimana kalo pakai dua LN daripada satu + single note? Lebih asik sih menurutku, tapi disini - 03:20:774 – tetap taroh satu single note

03:39:974 – sampai - 03:41:346 – taroh satu LN lagi di 5

03:46:317 – http://puu.sh/itbmS/f6abd33fd7.jpg

Jujur aja, aku ngarep kamu overmap drum sound disini - 03:54:717 – jadi kayak gini http://puu.sh/itboe/4bcdee68d1.jpg hs nya pake hit whistle yang ku beri biru itu, gak masalah sih overmap ini asal masih match sama musiknya, tapi ini up to you ya. Bagian yang disini juga - 04:16:660 – http://puu.sh/itbpx/9fc1e0b076.jpg
lenpai
Lolololol conflicting mods :(
waaa patterns + 5k x_x

m4m
OC compels me to throw in a lot of LN suggestions and note additions to most strong sounds but i choose not to
any affected note after the screenshot suggestions could need some redo
00:19:746 check this out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269328
02:25:574 idk lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269343
00:41:688 looks like my first suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269347
02:07:060 OP 2121 trill
02:09:117 ^ 1212
02:10:831 dat sudden density raise tho
04:47:003 DAMN! BRACKETS! Never seen them since the 1900s (loool)
Ok, there are a couple of long trills here and there. No sweat with those. Problem is, you started using 1/2 jack in climactic parts of the song. That being said, you should use 1/2 jacks (that only repeat once) every now and then.
Also, not the kind of thing i can mod really. Heavily beat based. Barely see any vocal or other non-beat based notes besides those long LNs.
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Raediaufar wrote:

Mod for mod

Column: l1l2l3l4l

Buka gue oy




[General]
Kalo diliat dari beatmap ini dalam tagnya nggak ada judul animenya, cuma sebagai source aja, kalo bisa ini diskusiin sama bn aja ok

[Greget]
00:22:146 – tambah lagi note disini keep for now. i need more opinion
00:44:088 - ^
01:06:031 - ^
01:07:746 (67746|4,67746|0) – jadiin 2 dan 4 ok
02:12:203 (132203|3,132203|2) – hapus, gak ada suaraya kecuali hs kamu nice
03:12:031 – gimana kalo gini? http://puu.sh/itbjJ/cf0b1a7c1c.jpg udh di fix di mod sebelumnya

03:20:774 – sampai - 03:30:374 – gimana kalo pakai dua LN daripada satu + single note? Lebih asik sih menurutku, tapi disini - 03:20:774 – tetap taroh satu single note keep. saya lebih suka seperti ini

03:39:974 – sampai - 03:41:346 – taroh satu LN lagi di 5 ok

03:46:317 – http://puu.sh/itbmS/f6abd33fd7.jpg

Jujur aja, aku ngarep kamu overmap drum sound disini - 03:54:717 – jadi kayak gini http://puu.sh/itboe/4bcdee68d1.jpg hs nya pake hit whistle yang ku beri biru itu, gak masalah sih overmap ini asal masih match sama musiknya, tapi ini up to you ya. Bagian yang disini juga - 04:16:660 – http://puu.sh/itbpx/9fc1e0b076.jpg keep. no change

Lenfried- wrote:

Lolololol conflicting mods :(
waaa patterns + 5k x_x x_x

m4m
OC compels me to throw in a lot of LN suggestions and note additions to most strong sounds but i choose not to
any affected note after the screenshot suggestions could need some redo
00:19:746 check this out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269328
02:25:574 idk lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269343 you mean 01:25:574 - i saw in that SS xD
00:41:688 looks like my first suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269347
02:07:060 OP 2121 trill
02:09:117 ^ 1212
02:10:831 dat sudden density raise tho
04:47:003 DAMN! BRACKETS! Never seen them since the 1900s (loool)
Ok, there are a couple of long trills here and there. No sweat with those. Problem is, you started using 1/2 jack in climactic parts of the song. That being said, you should use 1/2 jacks (that only repeat once) every now and then.
Also, not the kind of thing i can mod really. Heavily beat based. Barely see any vocal or other non-beat based notes besides those long LNs.
^fix note and make re-pattern
Kruzon
Hi, m4m request, and my 5k modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5
this map is modded with 0% playback to avoid confusion with the hit-sounds

greget

00:11:517 (11517|2,11517|4,11517|0) - this belong to the right side of the column, my suggestion:
00:11:517 (11517|0) - move to 4, this will give more emphasize to the current sound with notes 3 l 4 l 5

00:15:288 (15288|0,15288|2) - give wider gap for better flow, you may move 00:15:288 (15288|2) - to 5
00:15:631 (15631|4) - this belong to the left column, move to 1
00:16:488 (16488|0) - move to 5

00:21:288 (21288|1,21288|3,21460|4,21460|0,21631|3,21631|1) - a form of pattern variation, but not fitting with the rhythm. apparently, the momentum is going down and down, i suggest plot your notes flowing to the left sides. suggestion:
00:21:288 (21288|3,21288|1) - shift 1 time to the right
00:21:460 (21460|4) - move to 4
00:21:460 (21460|0) - move to 2
00:21:631 (21631|3,21631|1) - shift 1 time to the left
reference: 00:21:288 (21288|4,21288|2,21460|3,21460|1,21631|0,21631|2) - this flow will later followed up by upcoming sn stream 00:21:803 (21803|4,21888|3,21974|2,22060|1,22146|0) -

00:25:403 (25403|4,25574|3,25746|2,25917|1,26088|0) - this stair is not fitting with the rhythm, my suggestion:
00:25:917 (25917|1) - move to 1
00:26:088 (26088|0) - move to 3, 00:25:574 (25574|0,25746|2,25917|0,26088|4,26088|2) - displays better pattern which fit along the rhythm

00:30:717 (30717|3,30717|2,30888|4,31060|0,31060|3,31231|2,31403|1,31574|0) - same reason as above, re-pattern it like the above statement

00:36:374 (36374|3,36546|4,36546|2,36717|1,36888|0) - follow this = 00:33:803 (33803|4,33803|0,33974|3,34146|1,34317|4,34317|0) -

starting at this timing 00:38:088 (38088|0) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/ittiN/fadffa286d.png

00:39:288 (39288|1,39288|3,39631|4,39631|0) - wrong gap length, 00:39:288 (39288|3,39288|1) - should has wider gap than 00:39:631 (39631|0,39631|4) - , consider to re-pattern (tips: you can also use pitch direction to allocated the notes besides gap length)

01:16:317 (76317|3,76317|1,76660|0,76660|4,77003|1,77003|3) - i think better you follow rhythm for this part, align them on same column, perhaps 2 and 4

01:22:488 (82488|2,82488|1) - meaningless dual note, suggestion:
01:22:488 (82488|2) - move to 4
01:22:660 (82660|3) - move to 3
01:22:831 (82831|2) - move to 4

pattern variation:
01:23:174 (83174|0) - move to 3
01:23:346 (83346|1) - move to 1
01:23:517 (83517|4) - move to 2
01:23:860 (83860|2) - move to 2
01:24:031 (84031|1) - move to 3
01:24:203 (84203|2) - move to 4
01:24:374 (84374|3) - move to 3
01:24:546 (84546|4) - move to 1
01:24:888 (84888|0) - move to 5
01:25:060 (85060|4) - move to 1
01:25:403 (85403|0) - move to 5
it is recommended to use the above pattern statements for the second chorus/ second part of the song (similar rhythm) pattern variation + consistency
-

02:32:946 (152946|1,152946|2) - shift 1 time to the right

02:46:317 (166317|3,166488|4,166660|3,166831|1,166831|4,167003|0,167174|1,167346|3,167346|0,167517|4,167517|1,167688|3,167860|4) - if you're following these instrument, then you need to map this part as well 02:45:974 (165974|2) - because the instrument start here 02:45:803 (165803|3) - , you need to fill up the missing beat

02:48:203 (168203|0,168203|4,168374|3,168546|2,168717|1,168717|4,168888|0,168888|3) - you might need to re-pattern or ctrl H some of the notes because 02:48:717 (168717|4,168717|1) - belong to left side (low pitch) and 02:48:888 (168888|3,168888|0) - belong to right side (end pitch)

pattern flow:
02:50:774 (170774|2) - move to 5
02:50:946 (170946|4) - move to 2 or 3, either way will do, but i suggest 2 because pattern repetition due to similar sound 02:50:946 (170946|1,170946|0,171631|0,171631|1) -

02:53:003 (173003|0,173003|1) - does not belong to 02:51:974 (171974|3,171974|4,172317|1,172317|0,172660|3,172660|4) - flow, suggest:
02:52:831 (172831|2) - move to 2
02:53:003 (173003|1) - move to 3

good luck with your map c:
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, m4m request, and my 5k modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5
this map is modded with 0% playback to avoid confusion with the hit-sounds

greget

00:11:517 (11517|2,11517|4,11517|0) - this belong to the right side of the column, my suggestion:
00:11:517 (11517|0) - move to 4, this will give more emphasize to the current sound with notes 3 l 4 l 5

00:15:288 (15288|0,15288|2) - give wider gap for better flow, you may move 00:15:288 (15288|2) - to 5
00:15:631 (15631|4) - this belong to the left column, move to 1
00:16:488 (16488|0) - move to 5

00:21:288 (21288|1,21288|3,21460|4,21460|0,21631|3,21631|1) - a form of pattern variation, but not fitting with the rhythm. apparently, the momentum is going down and down, i suggest plot your notes flowing to the left sides. suggestion:
00:21:288 (21288|3,21288|1) - shift 1 time to the right
00:21:460 (21460|4) - move to 4
00:21:460 (21460|0) - move to 2
00:21:631 (21631|3,21631|1) - shift 1 time to the left
reference: 00:21:288 (21288|4,21288|2,21460|3,21460|1,21631|0,21631|2) - this flow will later followed up by upcoming sn stream 00:21:803 (21803|4,21888|3,21974|2,22060|1,22146|0) -

00:25:403 (25403|4,25574|3,25746|2,25917|1,26088|0) - this stair is not fitting with the rhythm, my suggestion:
00:25:917 (25917|1) - move to 1
00:26:088 (26088|0) - move to 3, 00:25:574 (25574|0,25746|2,25917|0,26088|4,26088|2) - displays better pattern which fit along the rhythm

00:30:717 (30717|3,30717|2,30888|4,31060|0,31060|3,31231|2,31403|1,31574|0) - same reason as above, re-pattern it like the above statement

00:36:374 (36374|3,36546|4,36546|2,36717|1,36888|0) - follow this = 00:33:803 (33803|4,33803|0,33974|3,34146|1,34317|4,34317|0) -

starting at this timing 00:38:088 (38088|0) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/ittiN/fadffa286d.png

00:39:288 (39288|1,39288|3,39631|4,39631|0) - wrong gap length, 00:39:288 (39288|3,39288|1) - should has wider gap than 00:39:631 (39631|0,39631|4) - , consider to re-pattern (tips: you can also use pitch direction to allocated the notes besides gap length)

01:16:317 (76317|3,76317|1,76660|0,76660|4,77003|1,77003|3) - i think better you follow rhythm for this part, align them on same column, perhaps 2 and 4

01:22:488 (82488|2,82488|1) - meaningless dual note, suggestion:
01:22:488 (82488|2) - move to 4
01:22:660 (82660|3) - move to 3
01:22:831 (82831|2) - move to 4

pattern variation:
01:23:174 (83174|0) - move to 3
01:23:346 (83346|1) - move to 1
01:23:517 (83517|4) - move to 2
01:23:860 (83860|2) - move to 2
01:24:031 (84031|1) - move to 3
01:24:203 (84203|2) - move to 4
01:24:374 (84374|3) - move to 3
01:24:546 (84546|4) - move to 1
01:24:888 (84888|0) - move to 5
01:25:060 (85060|4) - move to 1
01:25:403 (85403|0) - move to 5
it is recommended to use the above pattern statements for the second chorus/ second part of the song (similar rhythm) pattern variation + consistency
-^next time give me the pic. it's make me confuse to follow without pic

02:32:946 (152946|1,152946|2) - shift 1 time to the right

02:46:317 (166317|3,166488|4,166660|3,166831|1,166831|4,167003|0,167174|1,167346|3,167346|0,167517|4,167517|1,167688|3,167860|4) - if you're following these instrument, then you need to map this part as well 02:45:974 (165974|2) - because the instrument start here 02:45:803 (165803|3) - , you need to fill up the missing beat im following drum. not follow that intrument

02:48:203 (168203|0,168203|4,168374|3,168546|2,168717|1,168717|4,168888|0,168888|3) - you might need to re-pattern or ctrl H some of the notes because 02:48:717 (168717|4,168717|1) - belong to left side (low pitch) and 02:48:888 (168888|3,168888|0) - belong to right side (end pitch)

pattern flow:
02:50:774 (170774|2) - move to 5
02:50:946 (170946|4) - move to 2 or 3, either way will do, but i suggest 2 because pattern repetition due to similar sound 02:50:946 (170946|1,170946|0,171631|0,171631|1) -

02:53:003 (173003|0,173003|1) - does not belong to 02:51:974 (171974|3,171974|4,172317|1,172317|0,172660|3,172660|4) - flow, suggest:
02:52:831 (172831|2) - move to 2
02:53:003 (173003|1) - move to 3

good luck with your map c:
fix all with some self pattern. maybe

thank for mod and sorry cuz idk how to make good pattern. what i know is just make it solid

Rinzler
heyo m4m as requested

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |


DON'T OPEN!! MADDOG INSIDE!!
00:05:174 (5174|2) - move this to 2, more comfortable to play

00:06:203 (6203|0,6374|2,6374|1,6546|3) - http://puu.sh/iz8tC/d4dc3c4860.jpg this looks better

00:15:974 (15974|3,16146|4,16317|3,16488|2,16488|4,16660|1,16660|3) - http://puu.sh/iz8NL/261c42e6d8.jpg

00:26:603 - http://puu.sh/iz98O/708b2fb83d.jpg more balance, and fit the pitch

00:31:917 - http://puu.sh/iz9nd/f8caf60652.jpg

00:38:431 (38431|4) - move this to 2, and remove this 00:38:603 (38603|1) -

00:39:460 (39460|2,39631|3,39803|2) - http://puu.sh/iz9BP/13a40efb9b.jpg

00:42:031 (42031|2,42717|2) - move this to 5, and 00:42:888 (42888|4) - to 3

00:47:860 (47860|3,48031|2,48203|3) - http://puu.sh/iz9Qs/2c330ba805.jpg

00:53:003 - http://puu.sh/izag4/0902cdc910.jpg

00:54:888 (54888|4,54888|2) - if you applied mod above, move this 1x to left, and this 00:55:060 (55060|3) - to 5

00:58:488 (58488|2) - move to 5

01:25:403 (85403|4) - ^ to 3

01:26:946 - http://puu.sh/izaF3/093a052194.jpg more fun instead of 123454321

01:32:774 (92774|3,92946|4,93117|3,93288|4,93460|3) - http://puu.sh/izaON/f7c204acbe.jpg

01:59:174 (119174|4,119346|2) - Ctrl + J, some people might play the 3rd key with their thumb, i would suggest to move the jack to 5 instead

03:01:574 (181574|1) - move to 5

03:12:203 (192203|3,192203|2,192374|1,192374|2,192546|0,192546|1) - this kind of pattern is kinda hard to hit, make it [13][24][35] or something like that owait this is Greget diff :P

03:36:203 (216203|3,216374|2,216546|1) - http://puu.sh/izbgB/e6877120f0.jpg

03:37:231 (217231|3) - if you applied above, move it to 3

05:10:317 (310317|1) - move to 1
that's just my suggestion
good luck ~~
schwarzvgrune
M4M

general. your current pattern is very heavy on the middle. try to redistribute them more on left and right side.
i give this suggestions on the assumption that this is not 3k+2k, but rather 2 - 1 - 2 (1 being the thumbs of right, or left hand)

at the moment your pattern is the same from the beginning until the end.
utilising mostly a
2 1 1 2 2 1 3 pattern. (note count)
vary a bit by including other highlighting instruments


00:43:574 (43574|2) - move to 4 hand balance

00:53:860 (53860|4,54031|3,54203|2) - continue this
00:54:374 - 00:54:546 - add LN. current placement is not complete. and also your pattern is very simple across the whole song so try and vary them a bit, by utilising these parts for example.
and also LN placement is incorrect, there is not a lot of note, thus random placement is not justified imo, PR should also be taken into consideration.
here is an example of what it could be arranged into
00:53:860 - until 00:55:403 - http://puu.sh/izgNo/082ef7dc78.jpg

01:32:088 (92088|4,92260|3,92431|2) - should be reversed, current placement is incorrect in terms of PR. but this is optional imo since this section is a bit crowded already

01:43:060 (103060|0,103231|2,103231|3,103403|1,103403|4,103403|0,103574|3,103746|0,103746|1,103917|3,103917|2,104088|1,104088|4) - it should at least be something like this. but vary the pattern for the previous section mentioned above for PR consideration
01:51:631 (111631|3) - wrong, should be 2 LNs, split this into half
01:54:374 (114374|2) - wrong as well, should be split here 01:54:717 - and ends 01:55:060 -
add a short LN here (2/4) or use SN instead because the pitch is the same with 01:55:231 (115231|3) -

02:02:603 (122603|4) - wrong as well, should be 2 lns split in half of the length of this ln
02:05:346 (125346|0) - same as point mentioned above

and your LN placement is random. PR is ignored, doesn't look neat to me, if you agree to take PR into consideration, then readjust the whole section.

03:36:203 (216203|3,216374|2,216546|1) - optional, reverse this to 2 3 4. looks more logical because the pitch is the same with earlier pattern

04:19:403 (259403|2,259574|3,259574|0,259746|4,259746|2,259746|0,259917|1,260088|3,260088|2,260088|0,260260|4,260260|1,260431|2,260431|3) - you can vary the pattern here.
453 231 for example, you only use stream pattern for hte whole phase of the song. 5 mins with repetitive patterns doesn't look nice imo.
04:27:974 - until 04:49:574 - also wrong LN snap, see reason mentioned above.

in conclusion, this diff, although is very well made, still lacks details and pattern variability. you should try and rearrange some section to make it varied, it could be done by incorporating more small LNs to express that 2/4 sustained high pitched synthetic instrument for example.
there are a lot of incorrect LN snap, please recheck them carefully.
this is only a 3 star marathon, yet LN placement does not incorporate and consider PR, which is imo, unreasonable, since the note density is not so high to justify to not taking PR into consideration.

note that the things i mentioned above are not all of the issue. since there are too many repetitions in the map, you can readjust and rearrange by yourself based on general suggestions given above.


good luck :)

i'm so sad that you only mod lower diffs on my map
Topic Starter
Frim4503
ok
almost all applied and fixed. cuz is too many and make me confused

sorry for that bad note placement

also for schwarzvgrune i'm just mod your lower dif cuz i cant mod hard dif. it's always make me confused to see too many notes

schwarzvgrune
fair enough.
but your diff is already good. some people might argue that the pattern is not varied enough though (idk, who knows)
good luck :)
MEGAtive
Yo Juna~
Mod dri req PM (?)

Sawai Miku - Colorful (Asterisk DnB Remix)


Column
|1|2|3|4|5|

[Greget]
Mods
00:02:603 - Coba patternny jdiin kyk http://puu.sh/iFreS/c9cc67ed54.png . Lebih seimbang dan enak mencetnya.
00:04:317 - Coba pattern kyk http://puu.sh/iFrho/02d2f3f0dd.png . Lebih seimbang dan enak dibacanya.
00:10:488 - Coba repattern jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iFrlR/7ebef8cb34.png . Sama2 enak dibaca, tpi lebih seimbang.
00:26:603 - Coba pattern kyk http://puu.sh/iFrFi/b35aa7de7b.png . Lebih enak.
00:38:603 - D sini ad snare loh. Knp cuman 1 not? (1 LN kan buat String)
00:59:517 - Coba patternny jdiin kyk http://puu.sh/iFs0o/605c536465.png . Lebih relevan sm instrumen2nya.
01:02:431 (62431|4) - Delete. Sebelumny gk d map. Liat 01:01:060
01:56:431 (116431|1,116603|3) - Coba tuker kolom. Lebih pas sm instrumen dan pitchnya.
01:57:460 - Coba http://puu.sh/iFsaO/9b989e2c38.png . Lebih enak mencetnya.
02:03:460 (123460|2) - Coba pindah k 2. Lebih relevan sm instrumennya.
02:04:317 (124317|2) - Pindah k 2. Lebih relevan sm instrumennya.
02:05:346 - Tambah not lg. Kan 1 buat kick, 1 buat snare, 1 LN buat string, 1 lg buat tinggal Cymbal.
02:15:288 (135288|1) - Pindah k 1. Relevan sm instrumennya.
02:28:660 - Coba patternny jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iFsnK/06780e8ed8.png . Relevan sm model instrumennya.
02:33:288 - Gk triple? Kan d 01:04:146 Triple suarany sama.
02:36:031 - D sini kok ad not yg Jack, ad yg alternating dah? Model suarany sama padahal. Coba dibikin lebih konsisten.
03:35:517 (215517|1,215688|2,215860|3,216203|2,216374|3,216546|4) - Delete? Biar konsisten ngikutin suara pad doang.
04:28:831 - Model2 gini juga gk konsisten. Ad yg Jack, ad yg alternating. Coba dibikin konsisten.
04:59:860 (299860|4,300546|3) - Pianony gk bunyi. Delete aja.

Seenggakny ganti Diffnameny jdi "Colorful", "Vibrant", atau "Vivid" gitu.... Masa "Greget" :v
Anyway, Yay for an Asterisk DnB lel
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Frim4503
okay
fix all with some repairing with pattern

kagiii
here Mod Ready , M4M :3

Mods Greget Ver
[Gregets]
00:12:717 (12717|2,12888|1) - swap col? make it balance
00:20:946 (20946|2) - move ke col 1
00:27:460 - kek nya aku denger ny di sini deh ? buka di sini :3 00:27:631 (27631|0) - iykwim
00:38:603 (38603|2) - del , cukup 2 note kek ny lain
00:55:403 (55403|1) - del ^
01:00:031 (60031|2) - ke 4 balance ?
01:17:517 (77517|0) - ghost note
01:28:060 (88060|2,88146|3,88231|4) - swap col ? , agak bosen si stairs ny :'v , just opini
01:36:888 (96888|2) - move ke 2 balance
02:03:631 (123631|2,123631|4) - wut ?? del satu?
02:05:346 - same reason ama yg di atas"
02:06:203 - del 1 , gk keras
02:15:460 (135460|2,135631|1) - swap col?
03:43:746 - add note , clap?
03:48:888 (228888|0) - move ke 3
03:57:974 - how but dis ? http://puu.sh/iFScS/d3fc9e6de7.png lebih ke baca meybeh?
04:14:431 (254431|1) - move ke 4 , balance
04:27:974 (267974|3) - del ?
04:31:574 - dis??
04:55:317 (295317|3) - gagal paham ;w;
04:59:603 (299603|1,300288|4) - this too
05:05:260 (305260|1,305517|4,305774|2,306031|4,306288|1) - meybeh ?
05:09:117 - and all xD

ok done :3 , good luck Frim :)
Topic Starter
Frim4503

ExKagii- wrote:

here Mod Ready , M4M :3

Mods Greget Ver
[Gregets]
00:12:717 (12717|2,12888|1) - swap col? make it balance no. following prev. pattern 00:12:203 (12203|1,12374|2) -
00:20:946 (20946|2) - move ke col 1 nanti jdi mr. jack
00:27:460 - kek nya aku denger ny di sini deh ? buka di sini :3 00:27:631 (27631|0) - iykwim already fix from prev. mod
00:38:603 (38603|2) - del , cukup 2 note kek ny lain bukannya udh 2 ?
00:55:403 (55403|1) - del ^ for cymbal sound
01:00:031 (60031|2) - ke 4 balance ? keep for pitch and sound better
01:17:517 (77517|0) - ghost note ada suara hithat om. coba dengerin pake playback 50%
01:28:060 (88060|2,88146|3,88231|4) - swap col ? , agak bosen si stairs ny :'v , just opini keep for now
01:36:888 (96888|2) - move ke 2 balance ok
02:03:631 (123631|2,123631|4) - wut ?? del satu? why? it's same sound as 02:02:946 (122946|3,122946|1) -
02:05:346 - same reason ama yg di atas" cymbal
02:06:203 - del 1 , gk keras ^^
02:15:460 (135460|2,135631|1) - swap col? nice idea
03:43:746 - add note , clap? maksudnya 3 note ? no
03:48:888 (228888|0) - move ke 3 keep. to many note in 3 03:47:860 (227860|2,228203|2,228546|2) -
03:57:974 - how but dis ? http://puu.sh/iFScS/d3fc9e6de7.png lebih ke baca meybeh? ok
04:14:431 (254431|1) - move ke 4 , balance ok
04:27:974 (267974|3) - del ? cymbal
04:31:574 - dis?? dat whistle and clap (2-2)
04:55:317 (295317|3) - gagal paham ;w; coba dengerin lagi pake playback 50%. dijamin bakalan paham
04:59:603 (299603|1,300288|4) - this too dat tho
05:05:260 (305260|1,305517|4,305774|2,306031|4,306288|1) - meybeh ? absolutely
05:09:117 - and all xD learning again :v

ok done :3 , good luck Frim :) thank you
thank you for mod


AlisceaSparku
Hiiii~ Frim!
Very sorry for late mod :(

mod
00:36:203 (36203|2) - move to 5, " blast " effect for cymbals
00:36:031 (36031|4) - move to 3, to avoid ^
00:38:603 (38603|1) - move to 1, for comfortable play
02:29:517 (149517|0) - move to 2, opposite pattern of 01:00:374
04:44:431 - add note at 3? reference 04:41:688

Only a few mod :))
Nice map :D Good luck with your map!
Hanabira-
Hello!

Very good song and very good pattern!

But, one Thing, I think the title is wrong...
The ED title is カラフル。, so the title must have '.'

(https://osu.ppy.sh/s/299454)

so the perfect title is ' sawai miku - colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)'
Topic Starter
Frim4503
ok
will mod your map soon :) :D

JamesHappy
Sorry for the late mod. I was supposed to post this last week, but got busy because exams so i didn't make it.

anyway this is some little mods for this map

column |1|2|3|4|5

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo)

01:17:346 (77346|1) - what is this ln for?

01:32:603 (92603|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for balance

01:56:774 (116774|0) - if not intended, make the start of ln move to 01:57:117 and add some (2) 1/2 lns starting here 01:56:774

03:47:517 - missing note (?)

04:09:117 (249117|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for pattern and balance

04:30:717 (270717|4) - cut this ln up to 04:31:060 and add another ln starting 04:31:060 up to 04:31:574

04:35:860 (275860|1) - cut this too up to 04:36:203 and add another ln starting 04:36:203 up to 04:37:403

no kds for this

that's all. GL
Topic Starter
Frim4503

JamesHappy15 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod. I was supposed to post this last week, but got busy because exams so i didn't make it.

anyway this is some little mods for this map

column |1|2|3|4|5

00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo) idk what you mean

01:17:346 (77346|1) - what is this ln for? hard to explain but it's follow some sound >.<

01:32:603 (92603|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for balance ok

01:56:774 (116774|0) - if not intended, make the start of ln move to 01:57:117 and add some (2) 1/2 lns starting here 01:56:774 keep

03:47:517 - missing note (?) forgot

04:09:117 (249117|1) - prefer to move this to 5 for pattern and balance ok

04:30:717 (270717|4) - cut this ln up to 04:31:060 and add another ln starting 04:31:060 up to 04:31:574 keep

04:35:860 (275860|1) - cut this too up to 04:36:203 and add another ln starting 04:36:203 up to 04:37:403 ^

no kds for this sorry but i can't. i'm always respect other mod by giving kudosu

that's all. GL

JamesHappy
00:54:717 (54717|2,54888|3,54888|1,55060|2,55060|0,55231|4,55231|1,55403|2) - try this (easier imo) idk what you mean

i forgot to put the screenshot



or just ignore this if you don't want.
DJ Profetti
m4m

column:0~4

mod

good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Frim4503

Taiwan_CDZ wrote:

m4m

column:0~4

mod

good luck ;)
thank you for mod
will mod your map soon
other is ok

Adtw_
Hai mz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

|1|2|3|4|5|


kotak
01:33:288 - add note 4, ada kick sound, reference 03:58:660 -
01:44:260 - add note 1, ada kick saran k sih kyk gini http://puu.sh/iXdmS.png
02:05:346 - delete salah 1 note? , soalnya ditempat lain cmn 3 buat sound itu, contoh 02:02:603 - 02:08:088 -
02:49:574 (169574|0,169746|1) - ctrl+h for balance
02:56:174 - smpai 02:57:374 - coba pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/iXcR8.png
03:00:888 (180888|3,181060|2) - http://puu.sh/iXer0.png
03:02:431 - add note 4, ada kick
03:13:403 - add note 4, ada kick
03:47:688 - add note 5, ada kick, lalu 03:47:860 (227860|4) - pindah ke 4
04:06:546 (246546|3,246717|1) - ctrl+h for balance
04:09:631 - add note 1, ada kick
04:20:603 - add note 5, ada kick
04:38:260 (278260|2) - move ke 1

Overall, well mapped :D
Lagunya enak :3
Good luck mz ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Topic Starter
Frim4503
fix all

thank you for mod dk (>.<)


SpectorDG
Спе's MOD FOR MOD
Click Me >.<
00:13:746 (13746|1,13746|4,13917|3,13917|0) - FOCUS THIS
00:13:917 (13917|3,13917|0) - Add note 3 (More loud music)
00:15:288 (15288|4,15288|0) - ^ (Add Note 3)
00:15:974 (15974|4,15974|2) - ^ (Add Note 1)
Listen to More Loud Music, It's 5K Okay ?
00:43:231 (43231|3,43231|2) - Move to 1,2
00:43:403 (43403|1,43403|0) - Move to 2,3
01:00:374 (60374|3,60374|2) - Move to 4,5
01:00:546 (60546|1,60546|0,60717|3,60717|4) - and add notes 3

02:13:146 (133146|1,133231|2) - Ctrl + G
03:19:574 (199574|4,199574|2,199746|1,199746|3,199917|0,199917|2) - O.O Remember for Down

04:26:774 (266774|1,266774|3,266946|1,266946|3,267117|3,267117|1) - Again, but change this play style, Add notes for Column
MOD End, Again check for Strong Beats okay
GL ~ Go For RANKED ! :3 :)
Topic Starter
Frim4503
thank you for mod but i just fix this cuz your mod is not make any sense
02:13:146 (133146|1,133231|2) - Ctrl + G

cuz that's the style it use 2-1-2-1-1-2-2

Harbyter
http://puu.sh/iZU3E/2576605319.rar

swith those hitsound with your , cutted useless lenght that only increase the file size


no kudosu

[sv]

suggest to change the formula cause those are quite bad done x.x

i understand what you wanted to do with those sv but if you noticed for average player that use 23 24 scroll the first effect of the sv like here 01:28:660 - doesn't display on the screen lol and then the last one after a big jump of the 1.5 is unpredicable so if you wanna change try those

01:28:317 - change in 0.10

01:28:660 - change in 0.70

01:28:703 - add in 1/8 0.10

01:28:746 - remove

01:29:003 - change in 0.80

01:29:046 - add 0.10 always in 1/8

01:29:088 - remove

01:29:346 - change in 0.7

01:29:431 - remove

01:29:474 - dd 0.80 in 1/8

01:29:603 - add 0.90

those formula for the other 2 section like this too here 02:57:460 - here 03:31:746 -

here 03:42:717 - we should apply different formula due to this additional crash here 03:43:746 -

so 03:42:717 - 0.50

03:43:060 - change in 0.10

03:43:146 - change in 0.60

03:43:403 - change in 0.10

03:43:488 - change in 0.70

03:43:746 - change in 3.00

03:43:788 - add in 1/8 0.75

03:43:831 - remove




[modderino]

01:54:203 (114203|4) - move in 3 ,avoid the jack at this point that is unconfortable

01:54:717 (114717|3,114888|0) - switch column for a better transition

02:06:546 (126546|3) - col 1 ^

02:06:717 (126717|0) - col 2 ^

04:31:746 (271746|3,271917|4) - switch column

04:39:117 (279117|0) - col 5

04:41:517 (281517|2) - col 2

04:41:860 (281860|1) - col 5

04:42:203 (282203|4) - col 2

04:42:717 (282717|4,282888|3,283060|4) - switch column

04:55:317 (295317|3) - sound here seems like an eco from this 04:55:060 (295060|1) - so i think it feels better if you move in 2

05:06:288 (306288|1) - ^ move in 5 and 05:06:374 (306374|4) - this in 2

05:09:117 (309117|2,309374|3,309631|2) - same pitch so move the second note in 3?

05:09:888 (309888|1) - suggest to remove, this echo is really poor ,don't suggest to map it

05:10:317 (310317|0,310574|2,310831|4) - move all in col 2?
Topic Starter
Frim4503
thank you for mod Harby

you ask me for not give kudos, but i cant do that. cuz that's the way i respect other people mod

Harbyter

Frim4503 wrote:

thank you for mod Harby

you ask me for not give kudos, but i cant do that. cuz that's the way i respect other people mod


don't worry for the kudo :>



EDIT>


after a testplay


dat random miss ;w;


i think is better reduce the formula here

03:32:774 - --> 0.60
03:32:903 - --> 0.70
03:33:031 - --> 0.80

this because we played this section with a low speed already so those low speed change suits better for this section

fix this and is oky xd
Topic Starter
Frim4503
thank you for the fix and testplay :)

i hope i can rank this map one day


Harbyter
Sure why not lol 1#bubz
Topic Starter
Frim4503
thank you for the bubble :)

let's rank this lmao
troke
semangat mas frim :)
Topic Starter
Frim4503
oke makasih :)
lagi nyri BN lain nih
Kamikaze
5K marathon dude nice
that actually may be a first if I'm not mistaken, go go!
Rinzler
oh yesssss, a 5K Marathon, can't wait for this
Verniy_Chan
Huehue
5K Marathon Nice Desu..

Ikke Ikke~
Deep Sea
fine 2#
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Frim4503
thank you :)
and sorry to rsuh you

let's find some flame
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