Hi~Mod from my queue~:3
Very nice map and nice song~~:3
So just write some very tiny personal suggestions~
Normal diff is fine imo, nothing to point out~:3
And what I really want to say is, you may try to use more kinds of patterns in your map in the future, not just only use blanket XD. Blanket is a good pattern but it is not a good pattern if you use it too many times, especially in Hard/Insane/Extra diff.
Anyway~This is still a nice map~Good job~
GL for rank~:D
Very nice map and nice song~~:3
So just write some very tiny personal suggestions~
[Hard]
- 00:32:314 (2) - Move this slider to x450|y80 to make 00:31:000 (3,2) - a blanket. That looks better imo~:3
- 00:48:300 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe you can make this pattern into a square like this:
- 00:58:811 (2,3) - I think you'd better ‘exchange’ these two sliders. I mean, change 00:58:811 (2) - to a normal slider and 00:59:468 (3) - to a reverse slider is better. Because here's a long vocal from 00:59:249 - to 00:59:687 - , which is a better position to use a reverse slider. Also, it could increase the distance between 00:59:249 (3) - and 00:59:906 (1) - , which is also a nice way to emphasize the stress in 00:59:906 (1) -
- 01:01:657 (1) - Move this slider to x280|y152. That could make a rhombic shape like this:
And if you decide to change like that, you may need some little changing for the following objects as well~~ - 01:16:548 (3,4,5,6) - Make this 4 notes into a smooth arc could be a good choice imo~like this:
- 01:36:256 (4) - Stack this slider tail to the head of 01:34:942 (1) - ~That looks neater imo. So you may change 01:35:599 (2,3,4) - like this:
- 01:46:329 (3,4,1) - Flow is a bit strange here. You may rotate 01:46:329 (3) - by 15° (anti-clockwise, Selection Centre Origin); Then ctrl+g 01:47:205 (1) - for a better flow & better shape~:D
- 01:59:468 (1,2,3,4) - ewww this pattern looks a little weird imo, why not change to a symmetric pattern? For example:
- 02:01:219 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Also you could make this part neater by just a little change, like this:
- 02:19:176 (2) - Maybe ctrl+j this slider could be better?
- 02:25:526 (5,4) - Stack them maybe? That looks neater, so you may need to move 02:25:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole part slightly
- 02:38:008 (1,2,3) - Flow is a bit strange here. Change like this?
- 02:51:146 (3,4,5) - Move this part slightly like this could get a better flow~
- 02:57:059 (5) - Move to x57|y219 for better shape?
- 03:27:716 (2,3,5) - Blanket?
- 03:45:453 (3,4,5,1) - Flow is strange. (I find you prefer using Blanket patterns everywhere XDD) Try something different maybe?
- 03:50:708 (3) - Move 03:50:708 (3) - to x70|y316 to make 03:50:708 (3,4,5) - a straight line
- 04:11:949 (3) - Stack this slider's tail to 04:10:198 (3) -
- 04:19:614 (1) - Ctrl+g could make a better flow imo~
- 04:25:745 (4,5,1) - Also, flow is strange here。 Move 04:26:183 (5) - to x225|y248
Normal diff is fine imo, nothing to point out~:3
And what I really want to say is, you may try to use more kinds of patterns in your map in the future, not just only use blanket XD. Blanket is a good pattern but it is not a good pattern if you use it too many times, especially in Hard/Insane/Extra diff.
Anyway~This is still a nice map~Good job~
GL for rank~:D