Thank you for mod -w-
[ Shark ] wrote:Hello \:D/
From your M4M Queue ~
Generally it's looking really good, just a few things I noticed.. (Feel free to ignore some if you don't really like them)
In both Diff's!: 00:27:713 - 00:53:114 I don't think kiai time is required for the intro, Ctrl + Shift + A Opens AiMod it tells you there's more than a 1/3 of map in kiai time.. which isn't too good, try removing it < I still think it's appropriate (A lot of modders has remind me about this; I'm such a stubborn, lol xD) I mean the sound is still as big as the chorus which start here 01:56:180 and other part so I think it's good enough to add kiai (the ranked ver do that too) If it's intro, usually it's only small sound that uses piano or guitar, the "intro" in this song uses all instrument xD Furthermore, that more than 1/3 kiai stuff that AiMod say is not big deal imo; a lot of maps has it.
Everything looks great tbh. Great flow~~ < Thx~:3
00:40:851 (1) - Move to X:280 Y:236 Because jump from the previous note is unessecary at that point IMO < It'll overlap with (4) if I do ;-; I don't like overlap
00:41:289 (2) - Move to X:176 Y:336 So it flows with the previous slider ^ < Since I don't change above, I think I don't need to change this one .-.
01:23:771 (4) - Move to X:144 Y:92 Better flow < Overlapping ;-;
01:50:268 (2) - Try it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3405857 < Nah, flow weirdly that way imo.
03:04:939 (2) - Move it to X:384 Y:48 looks better tbh < Fine, I moved it around there (I DS-ed it so it not as close as you suggest)
04:04:501 (2) - If you move it upwards like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3405875 it'll have a better and different flow < Nah, I want symmetry with (5) and 04:02:311 (1,2) - furthermore, I think it make it even more pointy.
04:29:793 (5) - I don't think you need this note xD It would be fine if you used that throughout the whole map but since it's just once it feels weird, try removing it < fine, a lot of modder has remind me about this... Deleted.
That's pretty much all I found, it looks almost perfect man GL <3
Thank you for mod both of you -w-
Dronvir wrote:Hi there!
M4M request from your Q ~
Not much to say against. Really well made :3 < Thanks^^
You should remove Kiai Time from the beggining of the song. In my opinion it's not good to place it at start. < Same reason as above mod ^
01:56:180 (1) - I don't know why you have placed a new combo there. It feels weird to me that before was combo with just one slider. Well, at the beggining is simillar, but it doesn't feel weird. < Because it's the start of kiai and the sound is very big. It needs to be emphasized with NC
02:02:749 (7) - I would put here a short (1/4) slider. You can hear a beat after this 7 in the song, so a slider should do it. < I don't use 1/4 pattern at Normal (Except song with bpm<100) I do it at Hard tho.
03:37:786 (1) - Well, I know now why you put here (and before) another combo, but still it feels weird to me. :/ ^
03:51:362 (6) - I would put here a 1/4 slider. Again. ^
05:01:873 (1) - You know what I will say Same as two higher. This combo feels weird. ^
05:22:457 (6) - Yeah, a 1/4 slider I would put. (Yoda I am xD) < As above, the same. ^
Theese are not so important, map looks perfect to me. < Thankies :3
Again, Kiai at the beggining is not a godd idea. Too much Kiai. ^
01:23:771 (4) - You should move this a bit down. Better flow. < I tried to make (4)'s tail being blanketed by (2)... I changed the shape a bit for better flow tho.
01:50:487 (3) - Move it a bit up and rotate to the left. Better spacing.< Hmm, I kinda get the idea but maybe you could use picture next time .-. Anyway, from my assumption, I think it would ruin the flow to (1)
01:56:180 (1) - You know what i thing about theese combos Same to each one forward. ^
02:11:727 (5) - Move it out of stack, at first I thought you got to fast click here :3 < fix
That's actually it! Your map is ready for ranking in my opinion! Great job! ;D