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Beomsan

Doyak wrote:

no kds

범산님 어제도 말씀드렸지만 이지에서 그리드 스냅 크기 조금 줄여서 디스턴스가 1.40 에서 ±0.05 이상씩은 안 벗어나게 해주시고(01:07:416 (1,2) - 00:30:083 (1,2) - 등등) 01:03:416 (3,4) - 이런 거 넣으시면 안 됩니다. 01:13:416 (2,3) - 갑자기 줄어드는 것도 안 돼요.

사실 이게 처음부터 sv랑 ds를 너무 높게 잡으셔서 그런 건데 추천드리는 건 이지에서 이 정도 bpm이면 슬라 속도 0.8 이하에 디스턴스는 1.0~1.2 정도로 해주시는 게 적당합니다. 단순하고 긴 박자들을 주로 쓰기 때문에 이 정도로 거리가 멀면 화면 구석에서 구석으로 왔다갔다밖에 할 수 없어서 배치가 제한돼요.

거의 리맵하다시피 했습니다. 도약님이 지적해주신 이런 부분들 이해가 너무 늦었네요..
Len
recheck


insane:

01:08:749 (3,4) - 이 두개 01:08:083 (1,2) - 이것처럼 바꿔보시는건 어떠십니까

01:15:416 (7) - , 01:16:749 (3) - 뉴콤

01:18:083 (1,2) - 이부분 이렇게 만드시는건 어떠실지 라고 제안하고 싶었던 것입니다.


01:19:749 (2) - 이거하구 01:20:249 (2) - 이거 안겹치게끔 01:20:083 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 전체 배치를 다시해보시는건 어떠십니까

01:22:083 (9) - 이거하고 01:22:249 (1) - 이거 두개 뉴콤 자리가 바뀐듯합니다. (9)에 뉴콤, (1)제거


긴 모딩 읽어주시고, 반영해주신거 감사합니다. 이건 쿠도스 주지마세용
Euny
UnLock's request!


  • UnLock's Insane
  1. 뉴콤이 2자였다 1자였다 왔다갔다하네요 되도록 통일해주세요
  2. 00:02:083 (4) - 쫌만 왼쪽으로 옮겨주세요
  3. 00:15:416 (8) - NC넣어주세요
  4. 00:18:083 (8) - ^
  5. 00:20:749 (8) - 새로운 음이 시작되죠? NC
  6. 00:21:749 (11) - 이거 이렇게 두는게 훨씬 흐름이살겠네용
  7. 00:47:416 (4) - 모양 쫌만 더 이쁘게 해보세요 물결인데 뭔가 되다만거같아요
  8. 01:18:083 (2) - 배치 쫌만 아래로..01:17:416 (7) - 얘랑 너무 붙는거같아요
  9. 01:20:750 (10) - 뉴콤스팟아닌가요
이외엔 없네요 랭크응원할게요~
Kawashiro
@Euny
모딩 쓰다가 팅겼네요, 내일 피방에서 마무리 하겠습니다
Topic Starter
Beomsan

Euny wrote:

랭크응원할게요~
감사합니다 ㅠ^ㅠ
Kawashiro
Thanks Euny, All fixed
Fix
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88,80,40749,38,8,L|84:168,1,80
132,244,41083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,168,41250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,41417,2,8,L|84:168,1,80
164,264,41750,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,152,41916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,42083,2,8,L|84:168,1,80
192,284,42417,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,136,42583,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,80,42749,2,8,P|79:120|84:159,1,80
216,384,43083,2,0,P|223:345|219:306,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
10,217,43417,6,8,P|49:222|88:212,1,80
248,172,43750,1,10,0:0:0:0:
156,144,43917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
10,217,44083,2,8,P|49:222|88:212,1,80
252,204,44417,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,120,44583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,44749,6,0,P|356:216|346:158,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,124,45083,2,0,P|367:144|425:134,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,100,45416,2,0,P|440:156|450:214,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,252,45750,2,0,P|429:232|371:242,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,46083,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,324,46749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,47249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,47416,2,0,B|127:240|132:168|132:168|136:97|85:58,1,240.000009155274
264,84,48583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,48666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,92,48749,38,0,P|388:104|444:88,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,68,49249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,148,49416,2,0,L|496:208,1,60.0000022888184
408,296,49749,2,0,L|408:236,1,60.0000022888184
296,248,50083,21,0,0:0:0:0:
176,220,50416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,176,50749,2,8,L|468:172,1,80
426,82,51083,2,0,L|346:78,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,64,51417,5,8,0:0:0:0:
100,152,51583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,136,51749,2,0,L|292:144,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,52083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,240,52249,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,136,52416,2,0,L|292:144,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,190,52750,38,0,P|372:133|347:79,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,53083,2,0,L|400:52,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,132,53417,2,0,P|432:189|456:243,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,271,53750,2,0,L|404:271,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,264,54083,21,2,0:0:0:0:
240,316,54250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,54417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,360,54583,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,372,54750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,264,54917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,268,55083,2,0,P|106:260|73:237,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,55417,6,2,P|243:293|196:355,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,320,55917,2,2,P|44:242|91:180,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,56417,1,10,0:0:0:0:
232,216,56583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,131,56750,38,0,P|382:124|422:131,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,188,57083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,244,57250,2,0,P|385:251|345:245,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,308,57583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,352,57750,2,0,P|149:344|117:320,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,308,58083,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,348,58250,1,4,0:0:0:0:
430,315,58416,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,32,58750,38,0,B|224:72|256:112|256:112|288:152|264:198,1,180.000006866455,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,276,59416,2,0,P|233:296|273:298,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,316,59749,2,0,P|361:276|342:241,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,260,60083,2,0,P|176:352|271:298,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,284,60749,2,0,P|39:323|56:360,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,187,61083,2,0,P|52:148|36:112,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,61417,38,2,P|257:231|294:136,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,157,62083,2,0,P|104:196|115:235,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,229,62416,2,4,P|379:191|379:151,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,248,62749,2,0,P|201:286|210:325,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,367,63083,2,8,P|308:329|298:290,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,63417,6,0,P|258:128|255:88,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,40,63750,2,0,P|149:79|152:119,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,119,64083,2,0,P|363:79|356:40,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,64417,38,0,L|372:196,2,53.3333333333333,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,64749,6,0,L|160:204,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,160,64972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,65083,70,0,L|180:353,1,53.3333333333333,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,371,65306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,65416,6,0,L|299:262,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,288,65639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,65749,70,0,L|180:353,1,53.3333333333333,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,371,65972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,268,66083,6,0,P|64:212|80:152,1,106.666666666667,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,66417,2,0,P|212:125|263:113,1,106.666666666667,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,72,66750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,120,67083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,204,67416,69,8,0:0:0:0:
388,252,67528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,283,67639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,67750,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,288,67861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,308,67972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,212,68083,69,8,0:0:0:0:
300,168,68194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,116,68305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,204,68416,6,0,P|385:253|428:283,1,106.666666666667,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,308,68749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,116,69083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
428,283,69417,5,10,0:0:0:0:
443,260,69500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
455,234,69583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
462,207,69666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,179,69750,1,10,0:0:0:0:
460,151,69833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,125,69916,1,10,0:0:0:0:
439,100,70000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,78,70083,6,0,P|316:91|244:67,1,160,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,48,70583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,80,70749,2,0,P|104:184|32:292,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,71417,2,0,L|228:304,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,341,71749,2,0,L|288:348,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,304,72083,6,0,P|432:240|460:144,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,64,72583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,76,72750,2,0,L|312:78,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,125,73083,2,0,L|228:128,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,184,73417,2,0,L|368:190,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,73749,2,0,L|123:218,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,332,74083,2,0,P|384:268|372:240,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,74417,2,0,P|192:120|204:148,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,100,74750,2,0,P|360:92|332:104,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,276,75083,2,2,P|212:284|240:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,220,75417,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,272,75528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,324,75639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,360,75749,1,10,0:0:0:0:
156,364,75860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,344,75971,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,304,76083,2,4,B|296:308|296:308|336:268|336:268|386:274,1,160,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,72,76750,37,2,0:0:0:0:
432,52,76861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,56,76972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,88,77083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
312,136,77194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,156,77305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,144,77416,2,4,B|168:144|168:144|116:104|116:104|65:104,1,160,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,188,77917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,78083,2,0,P|140:224|179:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,340,78416,2,0,P|260:304|260:264,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,204,78749,2,8,P|340:184|300:183,1,80
240,68,79082,2,0,P|220:104|219:143,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,265,79416,2,0,P|259:305|240:340,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,181,79749,2,0,P|340:183|375:203,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,142,80082,2,8,P|220:102|240:68,1,80
177,225,80416,2,0,P|138:223|103:203,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,265,80750,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80833,12,2,82417,0:0:0:0:
321,158,82750,6,0,P|314:251|260:176,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,83,83417,2,0,P|332:321|210:118,2,640,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Akiyama Mizuki
Sangz's Hard - Sang's Hard나 SZ's Hard가 보기 좋을 것 같습니다. Sangz는 뭔가 끊긴 느낌이에요
00:06:527 (2) - >>>스페이싱 오류<<<
00:07:083 (4,5) - 이 둘이서 모양이 어울리는 것 같지가 않습니다. 00:07:083 (4) - 를 이런 식으로 바꾸는 건 어떨까요? (덤으로 간격도 맞춰주고요)

00:11:416 ~ 00:12:749 - 이 부분에 스피너를 넣거나 Break time을 넣는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:15:916 (2) - 이것도 간격 맞춰주세요
00:16:416 (4) - 블랭킷 오류
332,200,16416,2,0,P|371:255|355:320,1,112.5
위 사진과 코드는 고친 슬라이더입니다.
그리고 슬라이더 끝에 샘플셋을 Soft로 해놓으시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. (덤으로 볼륨도 줄이신다면 더 좋습니다!) 밑받침 해주는 리듬이나 소리가 없네요.
00:19:083 (5) - ^
00:20:749 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 솔직히 말해서 이 부분 귀갱입니다 ;_;
00:22:416 (2,3,4) - 스페이싱 오류가 심합니다. 왜 갑자기 간격을 줄이셨는지도 모르겠고 왜 슬라이더에 점프가 있는지도 모르겠습니다.
00:27:749 (1) - 슬라이더 모양이 괴상합니다. 굳이 각지게 놓으신다면 이런 식으로 하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:32:416 (4) - 슬라이더 끝에 샘플셋을 Soft로 해놓으시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. (덤으로 볼륨도 줄이신다면 더 좋습니다!)
00:37:416 (6) - 블랭킷 오류
100,184,37416,2,0,P|166:217|243:171,1,150
00:39:416 (4) - ^
36,148,39416,2,0,P|35:216|113:256,1,150
01:00:749 (1) - 블랭킷 오류가 있긴 한데 간격이 벌어지게 되네요.. 일단 적어놓기는 하겠습니다.
01:07:305 (1) - 그리 필요해 보이지는 않네요, 뒷받침해주는 보컬도 없을 뿐더러 오히려 맵을 읽기에도 헷갈릴 것 같습니다.
01:08:083 (4,5) - 사이 간격이 갑자기 벌어지네요
01:09:305 (8) - 두 줄 위에랑 같습니다
01:19:972 (6) - ^
01:21:416 (3,4) - 이 두개 다 하나씩 Ctrl+G 눌러주시는 게 더 보기도 하기도 좋아보입니다.
굳이 드릴 말씀이 있다면 히트사운딩에 더욱 신경을 써주셨으면 합니다.

UnLock's Insane
하이픈 어디 감? ㅋㅋㅋ
OD가 7.4이니 HP를 6.9로 놓으심이.. :^)
00:00:750 (2) - 블랭킷도 안 맞는데다가 이거... 어디서 많이 봤는데 원류회고!?
00:05:749 - 보컬 중심 매핑인데 여기에 노트가 빠지네요
00:06:083 (1,2,3,4) - 간격 너무 넓습니다; 이런 식으로 바꾸시는 건 어떤가요? 참고로 00:07:416 (1,2,3) - 와 완전히 겹칩니다

445,131,6083,38,0,P|451:105|448:79,2,53.3333333333333
343,224,6416,2,0,P|363:241|388:252,2,53.3333333333333
318,88,6749,2,0,P|293:95|272:112,2,53.3333333333333
445,131,7083,2,0,P|451:105|448:79,2,53.3333333333333
00:11:416 (2) - 여기서는 토도'케에에에에' 말고는 아예 조용한 부분인데... 피니시가 곡에 맞는 부분이 전혀 아닙니다.
01:00:083 (4) - 블랭킷...
01:04:749 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 다음 패턴으로 넘어가는게 노트 - 슬라이더라서 치기 굉장히 불편한 패턴입니다. 대체적인 걸 생각하시는 게 좋을 것 같아요.
01:07:750 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 여기는 그냥 슬라이더를 쓰는게 곡에도 맞아보이고 치기도 편할 것 같습니다.
01:23:417 (2) - 슬라이더 헤드를 기준으로 x333 y85로 옮겨야 01:22:750 (1) - 를 완벽히 감쌉니다.

Insane - AR은 9로 해주세요. 언락님 인세인보다 낮으면 이상해보입니다
00:00:750 (1) - 이런 모양을 의도하신 게 아닐까 예상해봅니다. 이전 거보다 훨씬 깔끔해보이네요

348,38,750,6,0,B|340:6|292:-2|268:38|280:82|328:90|340:94|340:146,1,191.999994140625
00:08:638 (7) - 1/3입니다.
00:16:083 (4,5) - 간격 맞춰주세요.
00:16:416 (6) - 현재 모양이 너무 어색해보입니다! 이런 식으로 바꾸셔도 좋을 것 같습니다.

60,372,16416,2,0,B|32:340|40:296|40:296|48:252,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:29:083 (2,3,4) - 갑자기 간격이 좁아져서 어색합니다.
00:32:416 (5,6) - 뒷받침 해주는 리듬이 없습니다. 최소한 리듬이라도 이렇게 바꾸시는 걸 추천드립니다.

00:35:083 (5) - 3줄 위랑 같습니다
00:35:583 (6) - NC를 여기다가 하시는 게 나아보입니다.
00:38:416 (1,2) - 둘이 위치를 바꾸는 게 어떤가요? 00:37:749 (4,1) - 둘 사이 간격이 너무 좁습니다.
01:02:083 (3,1,2,3) - 복붙의 이유를 모르겠습니다. 괜히 어색해지기만 합니다.
01:04:416 (2) - 1/3입니다.
01:07:083 (5) - 01:06:749 (4) - 와 간격 좀 벌려주세요.
01:07:972 (9,1) - 너어어어엉어ㅓ어ㅓㅓㅓㅇㅇㅇ무 멉니다.
01:09:416 (1) - 모양 좀 바꿔 주세요

456,207,69416,6,0,B|468:276|468:276|480:344|380:368|360:292,1,240
01:12:083 (5) - 1/2로 바꿔주세요.
01:14:083 (3,4) - ^ 1/3이 전혀 없는 부분입니다.
01:16:083 (1) - 평범한 3점 슬라이더가 나아보이네요
01:17:416 (1) - ^
01:23:416 (1) - 스피너 시작점을 1/8로 한칸 정도 뒤에 놓은 다음에 노트를 주가 하시는 편이 나아보입니다. (스피너 길이 1/8만큼 줄이는 것도 잊지 마세요)

ceramics2's Expert
솔직히 말하면 짚을 점이 너무 너무 너무 많아서 어디서부터 짚어야 할지도 모르겠습니다. 랭크와는 거리가 멀어 보입니다.
게다가 오버매핑도 너무 심합니다. 고의적으로 간격을 떼어놓아 리딩이 힘들게 해놓은 부분도 있고요.
그래도 몇몇 부분은 정돈되고 마지막 부분처럼 괜찮은 패턴도 있었지만 전체적으로는 문제점이 많은 맵입니다.
Topic Starter
Beomsan
*공지

6월 22일 현재 일정이 꼬여서 모딩 처리가 늦을 수도 있습니다.
(겟난요청 밀린 것과 일상에서의 문제 등등..)

Fast님 리체크와 bbj님 모딩까지는 금일 수정하겠습니다.

그 이후는 밀릴 수도 있으니 양해 부탁드릴게요.

계속 WIP상태인 이유는 세라믹님이 맵셋 관련해서 아직 갈피를 못잡으셔서..
Sonnyc
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:416 (2,3,4) - 간격 가까운 점을 고려하셔서 (1,2)도 충분히 가까울 수 있도록 (2,3,4) 모두 선택하셔서 (368,320)으로 옮기시면 보기 좋아지고 일관성도 생깁니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3285189
  2. 00:24:666 - 노트 넣는게 자연스러울것 같네요.
  3. 00:50:083 (3,4,5) - (3,4)의 점프는 너무 갑작스러워서 읽기 힘듭니다. (4)를 (3)에 더 가깝게 두시고 (4,5)에 점프를 넣는게 더 어울릴 거라고 봅니다.
  4. 00:58:749 (3) - 가사가 00:59:249에 명백히 존재하는데 굳이 이걸 질질 끌어서 1/4 박자로 두셔서 음악과 어울리지 않습니다. 1/4 줄여주세요.
  5. 01:01:416 (1,3,1) - 콤보가 좀 이상하네요. 콤보를 풀고 넣고 푸셔서 (5,1,2)가 되게 해주세요.
  6. 01:03:749 (1,1) - 불필요한 뉴콤으로 생각되고, 리버스에 들어간 휘슬 소리도 어울리지 않아 보입니다.
  7. 01:12:083 (5) - 1/2로 스냅 다시해주세요.
  8. 01:07:083 (5) - 간격 구별을 위해서 뉴콤을 넣어주세요.
  9. 01:07:972 (5,1) - 아무리 인센이라고 해도 클릭하는 점프에서 이정도 간격은 무리수입니다.
Topic Starter
Beomsan

Fast wrote:

recheck


insane:

01:08:749 (3,4) - 이 두개 01:08:083 (1,2) - 이것처럼 바꿔보시는건 어떠십니까

01:15:416 (7) - , 01:16:749 (3) - 뉴콤

01:18:083 (1,2) - 이부분 이렇게 만드시는건 어떠실지 라고 제안하고 싶었던 것입니다.


01:19:749 (2) - 이거하구 01:20:249 (2) - 이거 안겹치게끔 01:20:083 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 전체 배치를 다시해보시는건 어떠십니까

01:22:083 (9) - 이거하고 01:22:249 (1) - 이거 두개 뉴콤 자리가 바뀐듯합니다. (9)에 뉴콤, (1)제거


긴 모딩 읽어주시고, 반영해주신거 감사합니다. 이건 쿠도스 주지마세용

all fix. thank you :)
Topic Starter
Beomsan

bbj0920 wrote:

Insane - AR은 9로 해주세요. 언락님 인세인보다 낮으면 이상해보입니다
00:00:750 (1) - 이런 모양을 의도하신 게 아닐까 예상해봅니다. 이전 거보다 훨씬 깔끔해보이네요

348,38,750,6,0,B|340:6|292:-2|268:38|280:82|328:90|340:94|340:146,1,191.999994140625
00:08:638 (7) - 1/3입니다.
00:16:083 (4,5) - 간격 맞춰주세요.
00:16:416 (6) - 현재 모양이 너무 어색해보입니다! 이런 식으로 바꾸셔도 좋을 것 같습니다.

60,372,16416,2,0,B|32:340|40:296|40:296|48:252,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:29:083 (2,3,4) - 갑자기 간격이 좁아져서 어색합니다.
00:32:416 (5,6) - 뒷받침 해주는 리듬이 없습니다. 최소한 리듬이라도 이렇게 바꾸시는 걸 추천드립니다.

00:35:083 (5) - 3줄 위랑 같습니다
00:35:583 (6) - NC를 여기다가 하시는 게 나아보입니다.
00:38:416 (1,2) - 둘이 위치를 바꾸는 게 어떤가요? 00:37:749 (4,1) - 둘 사이 간격이 너무 좁습니다.
01:02:083 (3,1,2,3) - 복붙의 이유를 모르겠습니다. 괜히 어색해지기만 합니다.
01:04:416 (2) - 1/3입니다.
01:07:083 (5) - 01:06:749 (4) - 와 간격 좀 벌려주세요.
01:07:972 (9,1) - 너어어어엉어ㅓ어ㅓㅓㅓㅇㅇㅇ무 멉니다.
01:09:416 (1) - 모양 좀 바꿔 주세요

456,207,69416,6,0,B|468:276|468:276|480:344|380:368|360:292,1,240
01:12:083 (5) - 1/2로 바꿔주세요.
01:14:083 (3,4) - ^ 1/3이 전혀 없는 부분입니다.
01:16:083 (1) - 평범한 3점 슬라이더가 나아보이네요
01:17:416 (1) - ^
01:23:416 (1) - 스피너 시작점을 1/8로 한칸 정도 뒤에 놓은 다음에 노트를 주가 하시는 편이 나아보입니다. (스피너 길이 1/8만큼 줄이는 것도 잊지 마세요)



ALL FIX! 감사합니다
Topic Starter
Beomsan

Sonnyc wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:416 (2,3,4) - 간격 가까운 점을 고려하셔서 (1,2)도 충분히 가까울 수 있도록 (2,3,4) 모두 선택하셔서 (368,320)으로 옮기시면 보기 좋아지고 일관성도 생깁니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3285189
  2. 00:24:666 - 노트 넣는게 자연스러울것 같네요.
  3. 00:50:083 (3,4,5) - (3,4)의 점프는 너무 갑작스러워서 읽기 힘듭니다. (4)를 (3)에 더 가깝게 두시고 (4,5)에 점프를 넣는게 더 어울릴 거라고 봅니다.
  4. 00:58:749 (3) - 가사가 00:59:249에 명백히 존재하는데 굳이 이걸 질질 끌어서 1/4 박자로 두셔서 음악과 어울리지 않습니다. 1/4 줄여주세요.
  5. 01:01:416 (1,3,1) - 콤보가 좀 이상하네요. 콤보를 풀고 넣고 푸셔서 (5,1,2)가 되게 해주세요.
  6. 01:03:749 (1,1) - 불필요한 뉴콤으로 생각되고, 리버스에 들어간 휘슬 소리도 어울리지 않아 보입니다.
  7. 01:12:083 (5) - 1/2로 스냅 다시해주세요.
  8. 01:07:083 (5) - 간격 구별을 위해서 뉴콤을 넣어주세요. 여긴 앞선 모딩 따라서 띄웠어요
  9. 01:07:972 (5,1) - 아무리 인센이라고 해도 클릭하는 점프에서 이정도 간격은 무리수입니다.
전부 고쳤습니다 감사해요~
Kawashiro
빨리 랭되라고 쿠도스 하나 드리고 갑니다
Topic Starter
Beomsan

UnLock- wrote:

빨리 랭되라고 쿠도스 하나 드리고 갑니다
무다무다
Sangzin
Sangz's Hard - Sang's Hard나 SZ's Hard가 보기 좋을 것 같습니다. Sangz는 뭔가 끊긴 느낌이에요
00:06:527 (2) - >>>스페이싱 오류<<<
00:07:083 (4,5) - 이 둘이서 모양이 어울리는 것 같지가 않습니다. 00:07:083 (4) - 를 이런 식으로 바꾸는 건 어떨까요? (덤으로 간격도 맞춰주고요)
Image
00:11:416 ~ 00:12:749 - 이 부분에 스피너를 넣거나 Break time을 넣는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:15:916 (2) - 이것도 간격 맞춰주세요
00:16:416 (4) - 블랭킷 오류 Image
Code:
332,200,16416,2,0,P|371:255|355:320,1,112.5

위 사진과 코드는 고친 슬라이더입니다.
그리고 슬라이더 끝에 샘플셋을 Soft로 해놓으시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. (덤으로 볼륨도 줄이신다면 더 좋습니다!) 밑받침 해주는 리듬이나 소리가 없네요.
00:19:083 (5) - ^
00:20:749 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 솔직히 말해서 이 부분 귀갱입니다 ;_;
00:22:416 (2,3,4) - 스페이싱 오류가 심합니다. 왜 갑자기 간격을 줄이셨는지도 모르겠고 왜 슬라이더에 점프가 있는지도 모르겠습니다.
00:27:749 (1) - 슬라이더 모양이 괴상합니다. 굳이 각지게 놓으신다면 이런 식으로 하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
Image
00:32:416 (4) - 슬라이더 끝에 샘플셋을 Soft로 해놓으시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. (덤으로 볼륨도 줄이신다면 더 좋습니다!)
00:37:416 (6) - 블랭킷 오류 Image
Code:
100,184,37416,2,0,P|166:217|243:171,1,150

00:39:416 (4) - ^ Image
Code:
36,148,39416,2,0,P|35:216|113:256,1,150

01:00:749 (1) - 블랭킷 오류가 있긴 한데 간격이 벌어지게 되네요.. 일단 적어놓기는 하겠습니다.
01:07:305 (1) - 그리 필요해 보이지는 않네요, 뒷받침해주는 보컬도 없을 뿐더러 오히려 맵을 읽기에도 헷갈릴 것 같습니다.
01:08:083 (4,5) - 사이 간격이 갑자기 벌어지네요
01:09:305 (8) - 두 줄 위에랑 같습니다
01:19:972 (6) - ^
01:21:416 (3,4) - 이 두개 다 하나씩 Ctrl+G 눌러주시는 게 더 보기도 하기도 좋아보입니다.
굳이 드릴 말씀이 있다면 히트사운딩에 더욱 신경을 써주셨으면 합니다.
대부분 다 고쳤습니다! :D

Sz's Hard
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408,224,23416,6,0,P|384:300|292:316,1,150
224,284,23916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,185,24083,2,0,P|259:181|316:228,2,150,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,68,25083,6,0,P|64:128|68:160,1,75
108,216,25416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,25583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,147,25749,2,0,P|202:135|239:143,1,75
304,208,26083,2,0,P|328:164|296:72,1,150
239,143,26583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,143,26749,2,0,P|212:224|268:292,2,150,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,208,27749,6,0,B|433:264|433:264|428:312|428:312|368:352,1,150
288,340,28249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,308,28416,2,0,P|156:312|116:340,1,75
48,348,28749,2,0,P|32:280|64:204,1,150
160,208,29249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,29416,2,0,P|224:240|304:208,1,150
368,164,29916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,164,30083,6,0,P|456:264|400:292,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,30583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,30749,2,0,L|252:136,1,150
144,132,31249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,132,31333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,132,31416,6,0,P|148:200|108:276,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,344,31916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,296,32083,2,0,P|296:276|344:276,1,75
392,316,32416,2,0,P|400:260|376:208,1,112.5,0|0,2:0|2:2,2:0:0:0:
336,188,32749,6,0,B|284:192|284:192|236:224|168:224,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,33249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,120,33416,2,0,P|124:116|168:140,1,75
104,204,33749,2,0,L|96:284,1,75
112,304,33999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,34083,6,0,L|240:320,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,268,34416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,268,34583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,192,34749,6,0,L|332:192,1,75
240,196,35083,2,0,P|204:244|224:328,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,265,35749,6,0,P|402:207|415:170,1,75
392,100,36083,2,0,P|316:124|240:88,1,150
168,132,36583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,132,36749,2,0,P|164:80|188:32,1,75
88,20,37083,2,0,P|92:72|68:120,1,75
100,184,37416,2,0,P|166:217|243:171,1,150
303,131,37916,2,0,P|320:184|314:210,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,78,38416,6,0,P|119:96|106:109,1,75
46,57,38749,2,0,P|93:105|111:110,1,75
100,184,39083,2,0,P|118:119|113:101,1,75
36,148,39416,2,0,P|35:216|113:256,1,150
276,212,40083,2,0,P|364:212|404:288,1,150
272,292,40583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,292,40749,6,0,P|216:260|220:156,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,104,41249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,40,41416,2,0,P|340:67|344:103,1,75
340,192,41749,2,0,P|325:226|335:261,1,75
352,284,41999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,42083,6,0,L|280:304,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,344,42416,2,0,L|96:344,1,75
56,292,42749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,200,42916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,43083,2,0,L|212:136,1,75
268,172,43416,6,0,B|324:172|324:172|380:184|380:184|432:184,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,43916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,340,44083,2,0,P|408:308|388:272,1,75
316,268,44416,2,0,L|232:268,1,75
216,268,44666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,44749,6,0,P|144:240|104:144,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,45249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,56,45416,2,0,B|277:48|277:48|307:60|336:60,1,75
348,144,45749,2,0,B|315:152|315:152|285:140|255:140,1,75
184,144,46083,1,4,0:0:0:0:
440,72,51416,6,0,P|472:140|456:216,1,150
384,264,51916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,52083,2,0,P|240:212|224:180,1,75
160,160,52416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,52583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,272,52749,6,0,P|48:320|88:340,1,75
156,340,53083,2,0,P|136:292|96:272,1,75
80,200,53416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,112,53583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,53749,2,0,P|232:52|248:64,1,75
328,64,54083,5,8,0:2:0:0:
328,64,54249,2,0,P|364:136|328:200,1,150,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
268,136,54749,2,0,P|240:202|276:265,1,150,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
228,340,55249,1,0,0:2:0:0:
136,340,55416,5,8,0:2:0:0:
136,340,55583,2,0,L|44:200,1,150,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
92,132,56083,2,0,L|184:272,1,150,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
228,340,56583,2,0,L|320:340,1,75,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
256,192,56916,12,2,58749,0:0:0:0:
144,320,59416,6,0,B|192:328|244:280|244:280|244:216,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,59916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,124,60083,2,0,P|160:184|188:224,1,75
320,176,60416,2,0,P|316:116|288:76,1,75
240,152,60749,6,0,P|248:212|320:259,1,150
396,216,61249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,232,61416,2,0,L|496:320,1,75
396,216,61749,2,0,L|384:128,1,75
332,68,62083,6,0,P|240:100|176:92,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,24,62583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,24,62749,2,0,P|160:88|148:156,1,150
72,200,63249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,63416,2,0,P|132:244|208:220,1,150
280,180,63916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,188,64083,2,0,P|392:264|344:328,1,150
220,320,64638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,320,64749,6,0,P|176:272|176:216,1,100
176,200,65083,2,0,L|212:100,1,100
248,72,65416,2,0,B|300:64|300:64|360:84,1,100
388,104,65749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,104,65861,2,0,P|410:132|406:160,2,50
340,264,66416,2,0,L|292:360,1,100
252,320,66749,2,0,P|244:220|288:172,1,150
188,96,67416,6,0,L|108:168,1,100
92,196,67749,2,0,P|96:284|128:308,1,100
136,308,68083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,256,68305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,256,68416,2,0,P|296:280|352:280,1,100
396,276,68749,2,0,P|432:328|348:352,1,150
236,348,69305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,348,69416,6,0,L|172:320,3,37.5
160,316,69749,2,0,L|132:260,3,37.5
128,240,70083,6,0,P|156:156|220:168,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,70583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,173,70749,2,0,P|362:245|303:287,1,150
212,276,71249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,71416,2,0,P|84:184|88:152,1,75
124,104,71749,2,0,P|168:160|164:192,1,75
248,204,72083,6,0,P|311:198|358:124,1,150
267,113,72583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,113,72749,2,0,P|176:140|156:208,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,276,73249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,73416,2,0,L|408:308,1,150
428,228,73916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,228,74083,2,0,P|392:148|236:232,1,300
332,224,75083,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,224,75416,2,0,L|320:312,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,75749,2,0,L|284:132,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,76083,2,0,P|144:220|200:152,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,76638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,76749,2,0,L|260:-8,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,77082,2,0,L|296:172,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,77416,2,0,P|436:84|380:152,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,216,77972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,216,78083,6,0,P|216:212|180:244,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,78638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,78749,2,0,B|344:324|344:324|384:304,1,100
404,260,79083,2,0,L|452:164,1,100
408,124,79416,2,0,L|256:84,1,150
144,96,80083,6,0,L|144:133,3,37.5
168,172,80416,2,0,L|168:209,3,37.5
182,255,80749,6,0,B|212:316|212:316|248:304|304:312,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,81249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,305,81416,2,0,B|444:288|440:237,1,75
371,161,81749,2,0,B|343:146|301:174,1,75
356,244,82083,6,0,P|248:248|212:200,1,150
140,192,82583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,82749,2,0,P|112:288|160:348,1,150
216,360,83249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,83416,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83583,12,0,86083,0:0:0:0:
HabiHolic
왜 제난이도는 모딩이 없죠?ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Kawashiro

HabiHolic wrote:

왜 제난이도는 모딩이 없죠?ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
제 인세인과는 다르게 고칠게 없는듯ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Topic Starter
Beomsan

HabiHolic wrote:

왜 제난이도는 모딩이 없죠?ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
고칠게 없어서?!
Line-
Insane만 봤습니다.

뭣도모르기에 모양새만 봤습니다

00:07:916 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296599 박자 이렇게잡는게 더 맞을듯합니다. 만 잘 모르겠네요 ㅋㅋ

00:13:999 (4,1) - 스페이싱하지말고 그냥 부드럽게 붙여주시면 어떤지..

00:58:083 (1,2) - 차라리 리버스슬라이더 하나로 배치해주시는건..?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296624 이런느낌으로

00:46:083 (3) - 바로 뒷부분이랑 통일성을 위해 뉴콤을 넣어주세요
Lami
1.콤보색 불일치 및
언락's Insane 제외한 모든 난이도 콤보 색 사용하지않음.
2.Audio Leadin 불일치 (언락's 인센만 0)
3.인센에 언스냅 초록선 있음 + 안쓰는 초록선 정리필요

ex) 00:25:089 - 언스냅
00:01:916 - and 00:03:916 - and 00:04:083 - etc.... 다 같은 선이라 필요없음.

[Insane]

00:16:416 (6) - 큰소리가 나는데 힛사가 없을 이유가 없음.. @클랩
00:29:416 (3) - 끝에 클랩
00:34:749 (3,4,5) - 이유없는 지나치게 큰 점프
00:35:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - 개인적인 생각, 여기 배치가 안깔끔해보임 (00:36:083 (3,5) - 이런거)
00:38:583 (2,3) - ^
00:56:083 (4,6) - ^
00:40:749 - 여기부터 뉴콤수정 필요
1) 00:41:416 (1) - 불필요한 NC 지우세요 (00:30:083 (1,2,3,4) - 에는 NC가 없음)
2) 00:42:083 (5) - 여기도 앞부분과 nc배치가 달라요
2) 00:43:416 (9) - 주기상 여기에 NC가 와야 될거같음
00:48:583 (3,1) - 앞부분 에는 점프가 있는데 여기는 점프가 없음. 큰 박자가 나오는 것도 있으니 점프 넣으세요.
00:50:083 (3,4) - 위와 동일
00:51:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 패턴이 1/1박자 쉬는걸로 인해 별로 지루해보임..
00:54:083 (6,1) - NC 잘못넣음
00:57:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 배치모양이 안깔끔
00:58:749 (3) - 변속에는 뉴콤
01:01:749 (1,2) - NC틀린듯
01:09:416 (3) - 스트림
01:12:083 - ~ 음이 커져서 넣으신거같은데 제 생각엔 여기 변속넣으면 이상함....
01:14:749 (5,6) - 키아이 피크타임인데 흐름이 끊김
01:18:083 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - 맞는박자?????..... 음.. 잘 모르겠는데..
01:20:749 (1) - nc필요해보임
01:22:749 (4) - 앞과 마찬가지로 변속에 NC
-[ Kami ]-
[general]
패턴과 힛사는 안봤습니다
모든 난이도 모딩 그대로 바꾸셔도 되고 안바꾸셔도 되고 그렇습니다
[Easy]
슬라이더 틱을 1로 해주세요
노말보다 콤보수가 많으면 어쩌잖거죠
전 플라를 하고싶다고요(투덜투덜)

불필요한 초록색 선(타이밍 포인트)은 지우시는게 좋을듯?

00:27:416 (4) - 뉴콤
00:32:749 (3) - 뉴콤
00:40:749 (3) - 뉴콤
00:43:416 (5) - 뉴콤
01:07:416 (4) - 뉴콤
01:07:416 (4,5) - 이거 사이에 서클 하나 더 넣어도 되겠는데..
01:09:416 (6) - 좀 애매한 뉴콤 부분이다.. 다음꺼랑..
01:20:749 (3) - 뉴콤
[Habi's Normal]
모딩할게 없네요
[Sz's Hard]
01:09:305 (7) - 애매한듯 애매하지 않은듯 끼여있는 서클
[UnLock's Insane]
힛사크기카 너무 작군요 저는 큰걸 원합니다
저는 맨 마지막에 스피너 넣는걸 좋아해서 그러니 스피너는 마지막에 넣어주시죠
[Insane]
슬라이더 틱을 1로 해주세요
불필요한 초록색 선(타이밍 포인트)은 지우시는게 좋을듯?

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모딩끗!
Ujimatsu Chiya
As request from PM

모딩하기에 앞서서 힛사 모딩 않했습니다. 힛사 넣으시는 법을 몰르시는거 같은데 슬라이더 같은 경우 헤드와 테일 각각 눌러서 히트사운드를 넣어주셔야 합니다. 슬라이더 자체를 클릭하고 힛사넣으시면 슬라이더끄는 소리 부터 헤드 테일 전부 클렙소리로 설정되기 때문에 절대로 조심하셔야 할 부분입니다.
언락님 난이도와 하비님 난이도 보시면서 힛사 어떻게 넣는지 아실겁니다.


[General]
  1. 위에서 인툰님이 설명하신거 전부 고치시고 커스텀 컬러에 대해서 말씀드리고 안쓰시는편보단 쓰시는 편이 더 좋습니다. 쓰실거면 모든 맵셋에 존재하는 난이도가 똑같은 컬러를 똑같은 순서로 쓰셔야합니다.
  2. 애니송인만큼 비디오 쓰시면 휠씬 좋겠네요.

[Easy]
  1. HP > 2.5 추천드립니다.
  2. 평균 DS 1.1로 바꾸시는 편이 좋을거 같네요. 1/1노트간격인데도 서로 끝이 조금씩 스텍되어 있는거 별로 보기 좋지도 않고 플레이할떄도 별로에요.
  3. 00:09:416 (2) - 흐름 이상하네요. 사진 참고하셔서 바꾸세요.
  4. 00:20:083 (2,3) - 연속 2서클은 이지에서 별로 좋은 선택이 아닙니다. 2서클 함쳐서 1/1 슬라로 바꿔주세요.
  5. 00:24:749 - 노래가 전환되는 첫번째 다운비트인데 리듬이 없네요? 저 위치부터 1/1 슬라 넣으시는편이 좋겠네요. 물론 00:25:083 (1) - 이건 지워주시고
  6. 00:31:749 (2) - 00:31:749 - 여기서부터 시작하지마시고 00:32:083 - 여기서부터 시작하는 1/1 슬라이더사용해주세요.(노 리핏) 그러시는 편이 보컬 강조 더 좋습니다.
  7. 00:32:749 (3) - 모양 휘는게 안쪽이 아니라 바깥쪽으로 휘게 해주세요.
  8. 00:38:083 - 첫 다운비트인데 노트 비면 어색합니다.
  9. 00:50:083 (3) - 이노트 지우시고 00:50:749 (4) - 이 리버스 슬라이더를 00:50:083 (3) - 이쪾까지 끌고와보세요. 그게 더 리듬 맞습니다. 후에 00:51:083 - 이쪽에 노트를 넣으시든 마시든 하고싶은대로 하시면 됩니다.
  10. 00:56:749 (1,2,3) - 뭐에 맞추신건지 몰르곘네요.. 아래 사진 처럼 1번 서클 있는 위치부터 리버스 슬라이더 쓰셔서 리듬 다시 해보세요.
  11. 00:59:416 (1,2) - 뭐에 맞추신건지 도통 이해가 안되네요. 4/1 한 비트자체를 슬라 하나로 도배하는건 퀼 망치는 행위라고 보시면 될거같네요..
  12. 01:13:416 (2) - 이거 리버스 한번 추가해보세요. 그게 보컬 끄는 소리까지 잡아서 휠씬 자연스럽습니다


[Habi's Normal]

HabiHolic wrote:

왜 제난이도는 모딩이 없죠?ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
제가 해드림(?)
  1. 블랭킷 보시는거 시러하니 그냥 안볼게요.
  2. AR5가 더 적합할듯 싶네요. 스프레드로 봐도 그렇고 난이도자체만으로 두고 봐도 그렇고
  3. 00:07:972 (5) - 노멀에서 1/6박자는 부담이 너무 클듯 싶네요. 1/4조차도 사용빈도가 적은데 1/6박자는 좀...
  4. 00:09:305 (2) - 위랑 마찬가지
  5. 00:42:749 (5,6,7) - 1/1 리버스 슬라쓰는 편이 노래상 더 부드럽게 플레이 될 것 같네요. 무엇보다 굳이 노멀에서 00:42:916 (6) - 이거 강조 해야하나 싶기도하고..
  6. 01:21:416 (2,3) - 아래 사진처럼 리듬 바꾸시는 편이 01:22:083 - 이쪽 다운비트 살릴 수 있어서 좋을듯 피니쉬 소리가 들리니 끝으로 시작하기엔 좀 아쉬운 감이 있음

[Sz's Hard]
  1. 위에서 언급한것처럼 하비님이랑 언락님이 힛사 사용하신거 참고해보세요. 지금 N:C1 이구간은 클렙소리랑 노멀히트 소리랑 별반 치이를 못느끼겠네요.
    지금 상태는 디퀼 먹어도 이상하지 않은 상태입니다. 힛사 필히 수정하시길 바랍니다.
  2. 유일하게 브레이크 타임이있는데 티비사이즈에서 브레이크 저렇게 길게 넣는건 별로 좋은 선택이 아닙니다. 충분히 매핑도 가능하고요. 오브젝트 추가하시는 방향으로 해주세요.
  3. 00:09:749 - 이쪽부터 시작해서 00:09:972 - 여기서 끝나는 슬라이더를 넣어주세요. 지금 리듬보단 슬라로 대처하는편이 더 자연스럽습니다.
  4. 00:38:416 (1,2,3) - 안티 패턴에 일종이네요. 가능하면 그냥 테일 스텍 전부 해체하셔서 점프 넣는 방향도 좋습니다. 지금이 큰 문제는 아니기에 그냥 고려만 해보세요.
  5. 01:09:305 (7) - 지우시는편이 플레이나 노래 자체에 휠씬 더 부드럽습니다. 이러한 리듬은 넣는 쪽이 오히려 민폐(?)가 되기 십상입니다.

[UnLock's Insane]
  1. 00:07:416 - ~ 00:11:416 - 드럼 소리보단 소프트 휘슬로 하시는 편이 잔잔한 파트 강조하기에 좋습니다. 노래랑도 잘어울리니 고려해보세요.
  2. 00:14:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 재배치하세요. 이런 패턴 정말 좋지 않습니다. 간단히 설명 드리면 지루한 패턴일뿐더러 리딩 자체도 힘듭니다.
  3. 00:16:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 위와 마찬가지
  4. 00:19:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  5. 00:27:749 (1) - 테일 클렙 지우시는 편이 2번슬라에서 힛사 더 부각 할 수 있어서 좋습니다.
  6. 00:28:750 (4) - 클렙추가
  7. 00:29:249 (7) - 클렙 지우세요
  8. 00:29:583 (9) - ^
  9. 01:00:083 (4) - 블랭킷 확인해주세요.

    전체적으로 그냥 ctrl+c ctrl+v 라는 느낌말고는 느껴지지가 않네요. 너무 스텍에만 위존하지마시고 다른 패턴을 사용해보시면 어떨까요?
    전체적으로 맵은 좋았네요.

[Insane]
  1. 위에서 말한거처럼 힛사 제외하고 모딩합니다.
  2. 00:06:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - 최고 난이도기도 하니 겹치지마세요. 그러는 편이 모양도 이쁘고 플레이할떄도 더 재밌습니다.
  3. 00:08:583 (7,1,2) - 마찬가지
  4. 00:14:083 (1) - 스트림 마무리부분에서 이런식으로 거리 벌리는거 진짜 별로에요. 그냥 붙이세요. 이전 노트에다가
  5. 00:16:083 (4,5) - 재배치 해주셔서 점프 만드시는편이 좋습니다. 갑자기 DS 줄어드니 어색하네요.
  6. 00:18:749 (4,5) - 위와 마찬가지
  7. 01:01:083 (3,4,5) - 흐름이 직선적이네요. 이런 패턴이 괜찮으신줄 아시겠지만 여러 노트들이 큰 DS로 직선을 이루는 이런 패턴은 좋지않습니다.

    흐름 조금 다듬는편이 좋곘네요.

굳럭
Topic Starter
Beomsan

eINess wrote:

내일중으로 이 포스트에 에딧해서 나머지 난이도 모딩 할태니 아직 쿠도스 주지마세요.

에고 이거 보고도 휴대폰 조작미스로 실수로 드려버렸네요 ;_;
HabiHolic
eINess

1/6비트 사용한거 수정했습니다.

00:42:749 (5,6,7) - 저는 리듬 무시를 굉장히 싫어하는 편이라 좀 크게 들리는 음은 강조하고 있어요...
01:21:416 (2,3) - 굳이 그렇게 안해도 리듬에는 지장 없을듯 합니다...

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Beomsan wrote:

eINess wrote:

내일중으로 이 포스트에 에딧해서 나머지 난이도 모딩 할태니 아직 쿠도스 주지마세요.

에고 이거 보고도 휴대폰 조작미스로 실수로 드려버렸네요 ;_;
제가 쿠도스 디나이 시켰습니다.
GimBab
halo~ i saw your pm for mod request.
is just NM, not M4M
No kds

Insane
[Compose]

00:10:749 (6) - NC, 모양 바꾸기

00:12:749 (1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4) - 디스턴스 교정
1234 - 0.50~0.54
1234 - 0.63~0.70 여기까지는 변화가 미비하다가
1234 - 1.24~1.33 여기서 갑자기 디스턴스 두배가까이 넓어지며
1234 - 1.26~1.31 여기선 앞에와 달리 늘어나지 않군요.

일관성있게 조금씩 넓어지는게 좋다고 생각하며, 확실하게 넓어지는것을 어필하는게 좋다고 생각해요.

00:15:416 (1, 2, 3) - 앞의 패턴과 같게 슬라-서클-서클 채보로 맞춰주시는게 더 좋은것 같습니다.

00:18:083 (1, 2, 3) - 요부분은 00:15:416 (1, 2, 3) 과는 다르게 음악이 이 채보가 어울리게 들리는군요.
요부분은 채보수정 없이 그대로 가셔도 좋을듯

00:26:083 (1, 2) - 개인적으로 어색하다고 생각해요

요런식의 채보로 바꿔주시면 좋을듯 해요

00:28:749 (1) - ^와 유사. 숏리버스 슬라를 1/2 슬라로 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아용.

00:31:416 (1) - UnNC
00:34:083 (1) - ^
00:35:583 (1) - 서클 없애기
00:37:249 (1) - UnNC
00:41:416 (1) - UnNC
00:42:749 (7) - NC
00:43:416 (3) - NC
00:43:416 (3, 1, 2, 3) - 채보가 약간 어색하게 보이네요.

요런식으로 짜주시는게 어울릴것 같아요

00:44:916 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2) - 00:43:416 을 바꾼다면 해당되는 사항입니다만.

채보변경하기

00:45:916 (2, 3) - 디스턴스 약간만 줄여보시는게..?
00:47:249 (5, 1) - ^
00:47:416 (1) - 슬라이더 전개방향 y축반전 시켜주시는게 좋을것 같습니당 (오른쪽 > 왼쪽)
00:49:416 (2) - 요것도 좀.. 거슬리는데 잘 모르겠네요

00:50:916 (4) - NC
00:54:083 (6) - NC
00:52:249 (1) - UnNC
00:58:749 (3) - NC
01:01:749 (1) - UnNC
01:02:083 (2) - NC
01:07:972 (4, 5) - 디스턴스 줄이기. 1/3이나 1/6은 디스턴스 유지시키는게 보기 이뻐용
01:06:084 (2) - NC
01:08:083 (5) - ^
01:09:416 (3) - 모양바꾸기
01:12:083 (5) - NC
01:12:749 (1) - UnNC
01:17:416 (1) - 앞의 같은 채보에선 NC 안넣으셨는데 요기는 넣으셨네요. 둘중하나 통일시켜주세용
01:18:083 (3) - NC
01:19:083 (1) - UnNC
01:20:749 (5) - NC

[Hitsound + Timing]

* 전체적으로 헤드, 테일 따로 구분해서 넣은게아니라 슬라이더 자체에 힛사를 넣으신것이 보임.
너무많아서 전체적으로 손보셔야 할것같슴다.. 힛사는 던질께욥! ㄱㅇㄷ!!

00:03:916 - 초록선 빼기
00:04:083 - ^
00:05:416 - ^
00:13:749 - 요 초록선 00:14:083에 스냅.
00:16:708 - 사용하지않는 선. 1/8에 스냅되어있네요.
00:16:749 - 초록선 빼기

00:21:999 - 슬라 tail이므로 변속주지 마시고 그냥 음량조절만 하시기
00:22:083 - 위에서 변속준거 냅두시고 음량조절 하신듯.
서클배치인데 슬라변속이 들어가 있고, 바로뒤의 슬라에서 변속 원상복구 해주시니 난감하군요..
변속 21:999와 22:083의 속도를 1.0으로 같게 해주세용
00:22:583 - 위에서 속도 1.0 해주시면 없애도 되는 선.

00:25:089 - 요선 00:25:083에 스냅해주세요. 아마 00:25:083 (1)이 변속을 받지 않았을겁니다
00:43:374 - 사용안하는선. 1/8에 스냅되있음
00:43:516 - 사용안하는선. 스냅이 되어있지 않음
00:44:583 - 불필요한 선
00:59:333 - ^
01:03:583 - ^
01:03:833 - 앞의 패턴과 같은 양상인데 음량조절을 안하셨네욤. 일부러 안하신건가..
01:04:666 - 01:04:749에 스냅
01:09:416 - 불필요. 변화없음
01:12:166 - ^ . 슬라이더 틱 없음
01:12:416 - ^ . 위에거 없애면 불필요.
01:12:499 - ^ . 슬라이더 틱 없음
01:12:749 - ^ . 갑작스러운 변속은 어울리지 않는다고 생각합니다.
01:12:833 - ^
01:13:083 - ^

01:15:416 ~ - 뒷노트에 비해 sv가 느려보입니당. 조절해주세요
01:16:083 - 변속 너무 빨라용..
이거 냅두실거면 01:16:416 을 1.20정도로 약간 줄여주시는게 좋을듯
01:16:749 ~ - ^ 2개

01:18:083 - 요기는 변속이 괜찮아보이지만 01:18:416 요기는 느려보이네요.
둘다 약간 빠르게 조절해주시던가, (4)만 약간 빠르게 조절해주셔용

01:18:638 - 안쓰는선. 음량조절이라면 01:18:749에 스냅해주세요

ENH 안찍는 바보매퍼라서 난이도 하나만 모딩했슴다.. 너무오래걸리네요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ
앞에분들 모딩한거 안보고 작성하는거니 중복되는건 배제해주시구.. 제 모딩은 크게 신경 안쓰셔도 될듯.
3th mod
Sangzin
[Sz's Hard]
01:09:305 (7) - 애매한듯 애매하지 않은듯 끼여있는 서클 - 뒷부분 패턴이랑 똑같이 만들기 위해 지웠습니다.
[Sz's Hard]
위에서 언급한것처럼 하비님이랑 언락님이 힛사 사용하신거 참고해보세요. 지금 N:C1 이구간은 클렙소리랑 노멀히트 소리랑 별반 치이를 못느끼겠네요.
지금 상태는 디퀼 먹어도 이상하지 않은 상태입니다. 힛사 필히 수정하시길 바랍니다.
00:09:749 - 이쪽부터 시작해서 00:09:972 - 여기서 끝나는 슬라이더를 넣어주세요. 지금 리듬보단 슬라로 대처하는편이 더 자연스럽습니다. - 수정
힛사 다 조정했습니다. 소프트힛사만 사용하는거 같아서 노멀을 좀 넣었더니 이상해진 것 같네요.

Sz's Hard
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Topic Starter
Beomsan
Insane 힛사공사 하겠습니다 @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Insane만 봤습니다.

뭣도모르기에 모양새만 봤습니다

00:07:916 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296599 박자 이렇게잡는게 더 맞을듯합니다. 만 잘 모르겠네요 ㅋㅋ no

00:13:999 (4,1) - 스페이싱하지말고 그냥 부드럽게 붙여주시면 어떤지.. 2때문에 no 였는데 지적 2번받아서 바꿨습니다

00:58:083 (1,2) - 차라리 리버스슬라이더 하나로 배치해주시는건..?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296624 이런느낌으로

00:46:083 (3) - 바로 뒷부분이랑 통일성을 위해 뉴콤을 넣어주세요
피드백 없는건 수정한거에요 감사합니다!
Kawashiro
힛사 개고생입니다
힘내세요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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Topic Starter
Beomsan

intoon wrote:

1.콤보색 불일치 및
언락's Insane 제외한 모든 난이도 콤보 색 사용하지않음. (콤보색은 매우 성가신 어떤 문제로 인해서 시간이 좀 걸릴 거 같습니다.)
2.Audio Leadin 불일치 (언락's 인센만 0)
3.인센에 언스냅 초록선 있음 + 안쓰는 초록선 정리필요

ex) 00:25:089 - 언스냅
00:01:916 - and 00:03:916 - and 00:04:083 - etc.... 다 같은 선이라 필요없음.

[Insane]

00:16:416 (6) - 큰소리가 나는데 힛사가 없을 이유가 없음.. @클랩
00:29:416 (3) - 끝에 클랩
00:34:749 (3,4,5) - 이유없는 지나치게 큰 점프

00:35:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - 개인적인 생각, 여기 배치가 안깔끔해보임 (00:36:083 (3,5) - 이런거)
00:38:583 (2,3) - ^
00:56:083 (4,6) - ^

일단 깔끔하게 만들려고 한건 아니라서 바꿀려면 전체적인 수정이 필요할 거 같습니다.
지적을 더 받는다면 공사해볼게요


00:40:749 - 여기부터 뉴콤수정 필요
1) 00:41:416 (1) - 불필요한 NC 지우세요 (00:30:083 (1,2,3,4) - 에는 NC가 없음)
2) 00:42:083 (5) - 여기도 앞부분과 nc배치가 달라요
2) 00:43:416 (9) - 주기상 여기에 NC가 와야 될거같음
00:48:583 (3,1) - 앞부분 에는 점프가 있는데 여기는 점프가 없음. 큰 박자가 나오는 것도 있으니 점프 넣으세요.
00:50:083 (3,4) - 위와 동일
00:51:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 패턴이 1/1박자 쉬는걸로 인해 별로 지루해보임..
00:54:083 (6,1) - NC 잘못넣음
00:57:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 배치모양이 안깔끔
00:58:749 (3) - 변속에는 뉴콤
01:01:749 (1,2) - NC틀린듯
01:09:416 (3) - 스트림
01:12:083 - ~ 음이 커져서 넣으신거같은데 제 생각엔 여기 변속넣으면 이상함.... 변속을 없애기는 싫어서 줄여봤는데 그래도 이상하다면 바꾸는쪽으로 생각을 해보겠습니다
01:14:749 (5,6) - 키아이 피크타임인데 흐름이 끊김
01:18:083 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - 맞는박자?????..... 음.. 잘 모르겠는데.. 저도 이건 잘 모르겠습니다
01:20:749 (1) - nc필요해보임
01:22:749 (4) - 앞과 마찬가지로 변속에 NC



피드백 없는건 수정한거에요! 감사합니다
Topic Starter
Beomsan

eINess wrote:

111111111
As request from PM

모딩하기에 앞서서 힛사 모딩 않했습니다. 힛사 넣으시는 법을 몰르시는거 같은데 슬라이더 같은 경우 헤드와 테일 각각 눌러서 히트사운드를 넣어주셔야 합니다. 슬라이더 자체를 클릭하고 힛사넣으시면 슬라이더끄는 소리 부터 헤드 테일 전부 클렙소리로 설정되기 때문에 절대로 조심하셔야 할 부분입니다.
언락님 난이도와 하비님 난이도 보시면서 힛사 어떻게 넣는지 아실겁니다.

슬라이더 끝점마다 힛사 바꿀 수 있는걸 이제야 알았네요 어휴,... 죄송합니다


[General]
  1. 위에서 인툰님이 설명하신거 전부 고치시고 커스텀 컬러에 대해서 말씀드리고 안쓰시는편보단 쓰시는 편이 더 좋습니다. 쓰실거면 모든 맵셋에 존재하는 난이도가 똑같은 컬러를 똑같은 순서로 쓰셔야합니다.
  2. 애니송인만큼 비디오 쓰시면 휠씬 좋겠네요.

[Easy]
  1. HP > 2.5 추천드립니다.
  2. 평균 DS 1.1로 바꾸시는 편이 좋을거 같네요. 1/1노트간격인데도 서로 끝이 조금씩 스텍되어 있는거 별로 보기 좋지도 않고 플레이할떄도 별로에요.
  3. 00:09:416 (2) - 흐름 이상하네요. 사진 참고하셔서 바꾸세요.
  4. 00:20:083 (2,3) - 연속 2서클은 이지에서 별로 좋은 선택이 아닙니다. 2서클 함쳐서 1/1 슬라로 바꿔주세요.
  5. 00:24:749 - 노래가 전환되는 첫번째 다운비트인데 리듬이 없네요? 저 위치부터 1/1 슬라 넣으시는편이 좋겠네요. 물론 00:25:083 (1) - 이건 지워주시고
  6. 00:31:749 (2) - 00:31:749 - 여기서부터 시작하지마시고 00:32:083 - 여기서부터 시작하는 1/1 슬라이더사용해주세요.(노 리핏) 그러시는 편이 보컬 강조 더 좋습니다.
  7. 00:32:749 (3) - 모양 휘는게 안쪽이 아니라 바깥쪽으로 휘게 해주세요. 이 부분은 앞선 모딩 적용하다보니 모양이 아예 바뀐 거 같습니다.
  8. 00:38:083 - 첫 다운비트인데 노트 비면 어색합니다.
  9. 00:50:083 (3) - 이노트 지우시고 00:50:749 (4) - 이 리버스 슬라이더를 00:50:083 (3) - 이쪾까지 끌고와보세요. 그게 더 리듬 맞습니다. 후에 00:51:083 - 이쪽에 노트를 넣으시든 마시든 하고싶은대로 하시면 됩니다.
  10. 00:56:749 (1,2,3) - 뭐에 맞추신건지 몰르곘네요.. 아래 사진 처럼 1번 서클 있는 위치부터 리버스 슬라이더 쓰셔서 리듬 다시 해보세요.
  11. 00:59:416 (1,2) - 뭐에 맞추신건지 도통 이해가 안되네요. 4/1 한 비트자체를 슬라 하나로 도배하는건 퀼 망치는 행위라고 보시면 될거같네요..
  12. 01:13:416 (2) - 이거 리버스 한번 추가해보세요. 그게 보컬 끄는 소리까지 잡아서 휠씬 자연스럽습니다

[Insane]
  1. 위에서 말한거처럼 힛사 제외하고 모딩합니다.
  2. 00:06:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - 최고 난이도기도 하니 겹치지마세요. 그러는 편이 모양도 이쁘고 플레이할떄도 더 재밌습니다.
  3. 00:08:583 (7,1,2) - 마찬가지
  4. 00:14:083 (1) - 스트림 마무리부분에서 이런식으로 거리 벌리는거 진짜 별로에요. 그냥 붙이세요. 이전 노트에다가
  5. 00:16:083 (4,5) - 재배치 해주셔서 점프 만드시는편이 좋습니다. 갑자기 DS 줄어드니 어색하네요.
  6. 00:18:749 (4,5) - 위와 마찬가지
  7. 01:01:083 (3,4,5) - 흐름이 직선적이네요. 이런 패턴이 괜찮으신줄 아시겠지만 여러 노트들이 큰 DS로 직선을 이루는 이런 패턴은 좋지않습니다. 이 부분은 제 이해력이 좀 달리네요.. 일단 바꿔보긴 했습니다만

    흐름 조금 다듬는편이 좋곘네요.

굳럭
피드백 없는건 수정한거에요!! 시간 내주셔서 감사합니다
Topic Starter
Beomsan

-[ Kami ]- wrote:

[general]
패턴과 힛사는 안봤습니다
모든 난이도 모딩 그대로 바꾸셔도 되고 안바꾸셔도 되고 그렇습니다
[Easy]
슬라이더 틱을 1로 해주세요
노말보다 콤보수가 많으면 어쩌잖거죠
전 플라를 하고싶다고요(투덜투덜)

불필요한 초록색 선(타이밍 포인트)은 지우시는게 좋을듯?

00:27:416 (4) - 뉴콤
00:32:749 (3) - 뉴콤
00:40:749 (3) - 뉴콤
00:43:416 (5) - 뉴콤
01:07:416 (4) - 뉴콤
01:07:416 (4,5) - 이거 사이에 서클 하나 더 넣어도 되겠는데.. 그렇게 하면 안된다고 하시네욤
01:09:416 (6) - 좀 애매한 뉴콤 부분이다.. 다음꺼랑.. 어..
01:20:749 (3) - 뉴콤

[Insane]
슬라이더 틱을 1로 해주세요
불필요한 초록색 선(타이밍 포인트)은 지우시는게 좋을듯?

----------

모딩끗!
감사합니다!
Kawashiro
힛사 조금 수정

번거롭죠? ㅈㅅ
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104,157,62083,2,0,P|104:196|115:235,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,229,62416,2,4,P|379:191|379:151,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,248,62749,2,0,P|201:286|210:325,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,367,63083,2,8,P|308:329|298:290,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,63417,6,0,P|258:128|255:88,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,40,63750,2,0,P|149:79|152:119,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,119,64083,2,0,P|363:79|356:40,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,64417,38,0,L|372:196,2,53.3333333333333,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,64749,6,0,L|160:204,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,160,64972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,65083,70,0,L|180:353,1,53.3333333333333,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,371,65306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,65416,6,0,L|299:262,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,288,65639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,65749,70,0,L|180:353,1,53.3333333333333,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,371,65972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,268,66083,6,0,P|64:212|80:152,1,106.666666666667,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,66417,2,0,P|212:125|263:113,1,106.666666666667,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,72,66750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,120,67083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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388,252,67528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,283,69416,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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136,296,71417,2,0,L|228:304,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,341,71749,2,0,L|288:348,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,360,75749,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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480,72,76750,37,10,0:0:0:0:
432,52,76861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,56,76972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,88,77083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
312,136,77194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,156,77305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,144,77416,2,4,B|168:144|168:144|116:104|116:104|65:104,1,160,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,188,77917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,78083,2,0,P|140:224|179:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,340,78416,2,0,P|260:304|260:264,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,204,78749,2,8,P|340:184|300:183,1,80
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301,181,79749,2,0,P|340:183|375:203,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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261,265,80750,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80833,12,2,82417,0:0:0:0:
321,158,82750,6,0,P|314:251|260:176,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,83,83417,2,0,P|332:321|210:118,2,640,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
LQA20Ans
mod request incoming

[General]

-태크에 Hige Driver 추가 좀(작곡가)


[Easy]

-00:00:750 (1) - 시작부분에 피니쉬 추가

-00:03:416 (1) - ^

-00:15:416 (1) - NC 제거

-00:27:416 (4) - NC 추가

-00:40:083 (2) - 끝부분에 클랩 추가

-00:40:749 (3) - NC 추가

-00:47:416 (1) - NC 제거

-00:52:749 (2) - 한번 반복 추가하고 뒤에 스핀을 1/2만큼 줄이시면 될듯

-00:59:416 (1) - 시작부분에 피니쉬 추가

-01:00:749 (2) - 1번슬라랑 모양 맞춰서 배치해주셨으면 좋겠어요.

-01:07:416 (4) - NC 추가

-01:14:749 - 여기에 서클하나 추가

-01:20:749 (3) - NC 추가

-01:22:083 (5) - 한번 반복 추가하고 뒤에 스핀 1/2만큼 줄이세요.


[Normal]

-00:42:749 (5,6) - 여기도 딴 곳처럼 슬라로 맞춰주는게 나을거 같음.



[Hard]

-00:00:750 ~ 00:06:083 - 여기까진 커스텀 휘슬 쓰지 않는게 더 좋을 것 같아보이네요. 일단 소프트 휘슬이 나을거 같음.

-00:00:750 (1) - 시작부분에 클랩대신 피니쉬

-00:27:749 (1) - 그냥 3점 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는게 더 좋을거 같아요.

-00:56:916 (1) - 슬라 끝부분에 휘슬대신 피니쉬로 바꾸고 음량 50에서 30으로 내려주세요.

-01:16:083 (4) - 슬라 끝부분에 피니쉬 추가

-01:17:416 (4) - ^


[Insane]

- 00:17:916 (3,4) - 사이에 서클 하나넣어서 3연타 하는게 좋아보임.
딴 곳도 그렇고 그 브래스라고 해야되나 전주 멜로디에 보면 3연타 넣기 좋은 부분을 몇개 놓치신거 같아서...

-00:35:583 (1) - 되게 주관적인 견해인데 이거 서클 없애는게 더 좋아보임.

-00:38:749 (3) - 2번 서클이랑 안겹치게 배치해줬으면 좋겠음.

-01:14:749 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이거 y축으로 좀더 내려줬으면 좋겠음. x축은 고정

-01:23:416 - 서클 추가. 플레이상 느낌 살리려면 이전 슬라이더랑 거리 좀 벌려서 배치하는게 좋을듯.


힘내세요.
Topic Starter
Beomsan

GimBab wrote:

halo~ i saw your pm for mod request.
is just NM, not M4M
No kds

Insane
[Compose]

00:10:749 (6) - NC, 모양 바꾸기

00:12:749 (1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4) - 디스턴스 교정
1234 - 0.50~0.54
1234 - 0.63~0.70 여기까지는 변화가 미비하다가
1234 - 1.24~1.33 여기서 갑자기 디스턴스 두배가까이 넓어지며
1234 - 1.26~1.31 여기선 앞에와 달리 늘어나지 않군요.

일관성있게 조금씩 넓어지는게 좋다고 생각하며, 확실하게 넓어지는것을 어필하는게 좋다고 생각해요.

00:15:416 (1, 2, 3) - 앞의 패턴과 같게 슬라-서클-서클 채보로 맞춰주시는게 더 좋은것 같습니다.

00:18:083 (1, 2, 3) - 요부분은 00:15:416 (1, 2, 3) 과는 다르게 음악이 이 채보가 어울리게 들리는군요.
요부분은 채보수정 없이 그대로 가셔도 좋을듯

00:26:083 (1, 2) - 개인적으로 어색하다고 생각해요

요런식의 채보로 바꿔주시면 좋을듯 해요

00:28:749 (1) - ^와 유사. 숏리버스 슬라를 1/2 슬라로 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아용.

00:31:416 (1) - UnNC
00:34:083 (1) - ^
00:35:583 (1) - 서클 없애기
00:37:249 (1) - UnNC
00:41:416 (1) - UnNC
00:42:749 (7) - NC
00:43:416 (3) - NC
00:43:416 (3, 1, 2, 3) - 채보가 약간 어색하게 보이네요.

요런식으로 짜주시는게 어울릴것 같아요

00:44:916 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2) - 00:43:416 을 바꾼다면 해당되는 사항입니다만.

채보변경하기

00:45:916 (2, 3) - 디스턴스 약간만 줄여보시는게..?
00:47:249 (5, 1) - ^
00:47:416 (1) - 슬라이더 전개방향 y축반전 시켜주시는게 좋을것 같습니당 (오른쪽 > 왼쪽)
00:49:416 (2) - 요것도 좀.. 거슬리는데 잘 모르겠네요

00:50:916 (4) - NC
00:54:083 (6) - NC
00:52:249 (1) - UnNC
00:58:749 (3) - NC
01:01:749 (1) - UnNC
01:02:083 (2) - NC
01:07:972 (4, 5) - 디스턴스 줄이기. 1/3이나 1/6은 디스턴스 유지시키는게 보기 이뻐용
01:06:084 (2) - NC
01:08:083 (5) - ^
01:09:416 (3) - 모양바꾸기
01:12:083 (5) - NC
01:12:749 (1) - UnNC
01:17:416 (1) - 앞의 같은 채보에선 NC 안넣으셨는데 요기는 넣으셨네요. 둘중하나 통일시켜주세용
01:18:083 (3) - NC
01:19:083 (1) - UnNC
01:20:749 (5) - NC

[Hitsound + Timing]

* 전체적으로 헤드, 테일 따로 구분해서 넣은게아니라 슬라이더 자체에 힛사를 넣으신것이 보임.
너무많아서 전체적으로 손보셔야 할것같슴다.. 힛사는 던질께욥! ㄱㅇㄷ!!

00:03:916 - 초록선 빼기
00:04:083 - ^
00:05:416 - ^
00:13:749 - 요 초록선 00:14:083에 스냅.
00:16:708 - 사용하지않는 선. 1/8에 스냅되어있네요.
00:16:749 - 초록선 빼기

00:21:999 - 슬라 tail이므로 변속주지 마시고 그냥 음량조절만 하시기
00:22:083 - 위에서 변속준거 냅두시고 음량조절 하신듯.
서클배치인데 슬라변속이 들어가 있고, 바로뒤의 슬라에서 변속 원상복구 해주시니 난감하군요..
변속 21:999와 22:083의 속도를 1.0으로 같게 해주세용
00:22:583 - 위에서 속도 1.0 해주시면 없애도 되는 선.

00:25:089 - 요선 00:25:083에 스냅해주세요. 아마 00:25:083 (1)이 변속을 받지 않았을겁니다
00:43:374 - 사용안하는선. 1/8에 스냅되있음
00:43:516 - 사용안하는선. 스냅이 되어있지 않음
00:44:583 - 불필요한 선
00:59:333 - ^
01:03:583 - ^
01:03:833 - 앞의 패턴과 같은 양상인데 음량조절을 안하셨네욤. 일부러 안하신건가..
01:04:666 - 01:04:749에 스냅
01:09:416 - 불필요. 변화없음
01:12:166 - ^ . 슬라이더 틱 없음
01:12:416 - ^ . 위에거 없애면 불필요.
01:12:499 - ^ . 슬라이더 틱 없음
01:12:749 - ^ . 갑작스러운 변속은 어울리지 않는다고 생각합니다.
01:12:833 - ^
01:13:083 - ^

01:15:416 ~ - 뒷노트에 비해 sv가 느려보입니당. 조절해주세요
01:16:083 - 변속 너무 빨라용..
이거 냅두실거면 01:16:416 을 1.20정도로 약간 줄여주시는게 좋을듯
01:16:749 ~ - ^ 2개

01:18:083 - 요기는 변속이 괜찮아보이지만 01:18:416 요기는 느려보이네요.
둘다 약간 빠르게 조절해주시던가, (4)만 약간 빠르게 조절해주셔용

01:18:638 - 안쓰는선. 음량조절이라면 01:18:749에 스냅해주세요

ENH 안찍는 바보매퍼라서 난이도 하나만 모딩했슴다.. 너무오래걸리네요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ
앞에분들 모딩한거 안보고 작성하는거니 중복되는건 배제해주시구.. 제 모딩은 크게 신경 안쓰셔도 될듯.
3th mod
why no kds
시간이 없어서 내일 피드백 올리겠습니다 ㅠ^ㅠ
Sangzin
유일하게 브레이크 타임이있는데 티비사이즈에서 브레이크 저렇게 길게 넣는건 별로 좋은 선택이 아닙니다. 충분히 매핑도 가능하고요. 오브젝트 추가하시는 방향으로 해주세요. - 추가했습니다.
00:38:416 (1,2,3) - 안티 패턴에 일종이네요. 가능하면 그냥 테일 스텍 전부 해체하셔서 점프 넣는 방향도 좋습니다. 지금이 큰 문제는 아니기에 그냥 고려만 해보세요. - 큰 문제는 아니시라고 하니 이대로 두겠습니다.
01:09:305 (7) - 지우시는편이 플레이나 노래 자체에 휠씬 더 부드럽습니다. 이러한 리듬은 넣는 쪽이 오히려 민폐(?)가 되기 십상입니다. -지웠습니다.


Sz's Hard
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58666
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24739,35406,46073,51406
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.200001

[Metadata]
Title:FUBUKI
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Beomsan
Version:Sz's Hard
Source:Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
Tags:ending TV Size kantai 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ HabiHolic Sangzin UnLock- ceramics2
BeatmapID:718866
BeatmapSetID:322218

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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308,84,77082,2,0,L|296:172,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,77416,2,0,P|436:84|380:152,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,216,77972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,216,78083,6,0,P|216:212|180:244,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,78638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,78749,2,0,B|344:324|344:324|384:304,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,260,79083,2,0,L|452:164,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,124,79416,2,0,L|256:84,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,80083,6,0,L|144:133,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,172,80416,2,0,L|168:209,3,37.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,255,80749,6,0,B|212:316|212:316|296:316,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,81249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,305,81416,2,0,B|444:288|440:237,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,161,81749,2,0,B|343:146|301:174,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,82083,6,0,P|248:248|212:200,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,82583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,82749,2,0,P|112:288|160:348,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,360,83249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,83416,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83583,12,0,86083,0:0:0:0:
Arooma
recheck
리체크라 쿠도스 안 주셔도 될 듯?
뒤에 사람들 있어서 BG 삭제했습니다 :3

Insane


  1. 00:10:749 (1) - 개인적으로 슬라 시작,끝끼리 안 붙어있는게 더 깔끔하지 않을까..하는
  2. 00:11:416 (2) - 조용한 부분이라 클랩 안 넣어도 될 듯
  3. 00:18:416 (2,4) - 다른건 다 떨어져있는데 이 부분만 붙어있길래 찝어봤습니다.
    의도하신거라면 상관없겠지만 깔끔히 찍으려면 수정하는게 좋을 것 같네요.
  4. 00:20:583 (3,2) - ^ (요건 슬라라인에 붙어있네요)
  5. 00:35:749 (2,4) - ^
  6. 00:36:083 (3,5) - ^
  7. 00:36:416 (5,2) - ^
  8. 00:38:583 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:38:749 (3,4) - 클랩 제거
  10. 00:41:083 (2,4) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음 (의도?)
  11. 00:42:749 (5,1) - ^
  12. 00:43:416 (1)
  13. 00:43:916 (2,3,4) - 박자가 좀 어색한데 3슬라보다는 서클-슬라-슬라-서클이 더 자연스러운 듯
  14. 00:45:249 (3) - 클랩 제거
  15. 00:45:749 (4) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음
  16. 00:52:749 (1) - 피니쉬?
  17. 00:54:749 (4) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음
  18. 01:03:749 (2,4) - 첫부분에 클랩빠짐
  19. 01:14:083 (1,2) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음
  20. 01:18:972 (2) - 박자가 01:18:958 이 쯤인 것 같음 or 슬라한개를 01:18:958 에 끝나게
  21. 01:19:083 (1,2) - 그냥 슬라한개를 01:19:249 이 쯤에 끝나게 하는게 깔끔할 듯
  22. 01:22:749 (1) - 변속푸시고 슬라-서클-서클

UnLock's Insane


  1. 처음에는 무음슬라가 낫지않을까요
  2. 00:15:333 (7) - 약간 직선으로 되있는데 곡선형태가 플레이하기 좋았습니다.
  3. 00:18:000 (7) - ^
  4. 00:20:667 (7) - ^
  5. 00:40:749 (1,4,7) - 서서히 각도가 휘어지는 슬라는 어떤지..
  6. 00:44:083 (4) - ^
  7. 01:22:750 (1) - 슬라 시작하고 끝이 안 붙어있는게 깔끔할 듯

더 보고 수정하려고 했는데 딱 집어 고칠만한건 없는듯
Topic Starter
Beomsan

GimBab wrote:

halo~ i saw your pm for mod request.
is just NM, not M4M
No kds

Insane
[Compose]

00:10:749 (6) - NC, 모양 바꾸기

00:12:749 (1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4) - 디스턴스 교정
1234 - 0.50~0.54
1234 - 0.63~0.70 여기까지는 변화가 미비하다가
1234 - 1.24~1.33 여기서 갑자기 디스턴스 두배가까이 넓어지며
1234 - 1.26~1.31 여기선 앞에와 달리 늘어나지 않군요.

일관성있게 조금씩 넓어지는게 좋다고 생각하며, 확실하게 넓어지는것을 어필하는게 좋다고 생각해요.

00:15:416 (1, 2, 3) - 앞의 패턴과 같게 슬라-서클-서클 채보로 맞춰주시는게 더 좋은것 같습니다.

00:18:083 (1, 2, 3) - 요부분은 00:15:416 (1, 2, 3) 과는 다르게 음악이 이 채보가 어울리게 들리는군요. 이건 통일성을 지키는쪽으로 갈게요
요부분은 채보수정 없이 그대로 가셔도 좋을듯

00:26:083 (1, 2) - 개인적으로 어색하다고 생각해요

요런식의 채보로 바꿔주시면 좋을듯 해요

00:28:749 (1) - ^와 유사. 숏리버스 슬라를 1/2 슬라로 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아용.

00:31:416 (1) - UnNC
00:34:083 (1) - ^
00:35:583 (1) - 서클 없애기
00:37:249 (1) - UnNC
00:41:416 (1) - UnNC
00:42:749 (7) - NC
00:43:416 (3) - NC
00:43:416 (3, 1, 2, 3) - 채보가 약간 어색하게 보이네요.

요런식으로 짜주시는게 어울릴것 같아요

00:44:916 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2) - 00:43:416 을 바꾼다면 해당되는 사항입니다만.

채보변경하기

00:45:916 (2, 3) - 디스턴스 약간만 줄여보시는게..?
00:47:249 (5, 1) - ^
00:47:416 (1) - 슬라이더 전개방향 y축반전 시켜주시는게 좋을것 같습니당 (오른쪽 > 왼쪽)
00:49:416 (2) - 요것도 좀.. 거슬리는데 잘 모르겠네요

00:50:916 (4) - NC
00:54:083 (6) - NC
00:52:249 (1) - UnNC
00:58:749 (3) - NC
01:01:749 (1) - UnNC
01:02:083 (2) - NC
01:07:972 (4, 5) - 디스턴스 줄이기. 1/3이나 1/6은 디스턴스 유지시키는게 보기 이뻐용
01:06:084 (2) - NC
01:08:083 (5) - ^
01:09:416 (3) - 모양바꾸기
01:12:083 (5) - NC
01:12:749 (1) - UnNC
01:17:416 (1) - 앞의 같은 채보에선 NC 안넣으셨는데 요기는 넣으셨네요. 둘중하나 통일시켜주세용
01:18:083 (3) - NC
01:19:083 (1) - UnNC
01:20:749 (5) - NC

[Hitsound + Timing]

* 전체적으로 헤드, 테일 따로 구분해서 넣은게아니라 슬라이더 자체에 힛사를 넣으신것이 보임.
너무많아서 전체적으로 손보셔야 할것같슴다.. 힛사는 던질께욥! ㄱㅇㄷ!!

00:03:916 - 초록선 빼기
00:04:083 - ^
00:05:416 - ^
00:13:749 - 요 초록선 00:14:083에 스냅.
00:16:708 - 사용하지않는 선. 1/8에 스냅되어있네요.
00:16:749 - 초록선 빼기

00:21:999 - 슬라 tail이므로 변속주지 마시고 그냥 음량조절만 하시기
00:22:083 - 위에서 변속준거 냅두시고 음량조절 하신듯.
서클배치인데 슬라변속이 들어가 있고, 바로뒤의 슬라에서 변속 원상복구 해주시니 난감하군요..
변속 21:999와 22:083의 속도를 1.0으로 같게 해주세용
00:22:583 - 위에서 속도 1.0 해주시면 없애도 되는 선.

00:25:089 - 요선 00:25:083에 스냅해주세요. 아마 00:25:083 (1)이 변속을 받지 않았을겁니다
00:43:374 - 사용안하는선. 1/8에 스냅되있음
00:43:516 - 사용안하는선. 스냅이 되어있지 않음
00:44:583 - 불필요한 선
00:59:333 - ^
01:03:583 - ^
01:03:833 - 앞의 패턴과 같은 양상인데 음량조절을 안하셨네욤. 일부러 안하신건가..
01:04:666 - 01:04:749에 스냅
01:09:416 - 불필요. 변화없음
01:12:166 - ^ . 슬라이더 틱 없음
01:12:416 - ^ . 위에거 없애면 불필요.
01:12:499 - ^ . 슬라이더 틱 없음
01:12:749 - ^ . 갑작스러운 변속은 어울리지 않는다고 생각합니다.
01:12:833 - ^
01:13:083 - ^

01:15:416 ~ - 뒷노트에 비해 sv가 느려보입니당. 조절해주세요
01:16:083 - 변속 너무 빨라용..
이거 냅두실거면 01:16:416 을 1.20정도로 약간 줄여주시는게 좋을듯
01:16:749 ~ - ^ 2개

01:18:083 - 요기는 변속이 괜찮아보이지만 01:18:416 요기는 느려보이네요.
둘다 약간 빠르게 조절해주시던가, (4)만 약간 빠르게 조절해주셔용

01:18:638 - 안쓰는선. 음량조절이라면 01:18:749에 스냅해주세요

ENH 안찍는 바보매퍼라서 난이도 하나만 모딩했슴다.. 너무오래걸리네요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ
앞에분들 모딩한거 안보고 작성하는거니 중복되는건 배제해주시구.. 제 모딩은 크게 신경 안쓰셔도 될듯.
3th mod

아무래도 업데이트를 하다보니 해결된 부분이 많은 거 같습니다. nc를 비롯해서 대부분 수정됐습니다.
타이밍은 선 정리를 아예 날잡고 해버려서 볼 수가 없겠네요
Topic Starter
Beomsan
[quote="Arooma"]recheck
리체크라 쿠도스 안 주셔도 될 듯?
뒤에 사람들 있어서 BG 삭제했습니다 :3

Insane


  1. 00:10:749 (1) - 개인적으로 슬라 시작,끝끼리 안 붙어있는게 더 깔끔하지 않을까..하는
  2. 00:11:416 (2) - 조용한 부분이라 클랩 안 넣어도 될 듯
  3. 00:18:416 (2,4) - 다른건 다 떨어져있는데 이 부분만 붙어있길래 찝어봤습니다.
    의도하신거라면 상관없겠지만 깔끔히 찍으려면 수정하는게 좋을 것 같네요.
  4. 00:20:583 (3,2) - ^ (요건 슬라라인에 붙어있네요)
  5. 00:35:749 (2,4) - ^
  6. 00:36:083 (3,5) - ^
  7. 00:36:416 (5,2) - ^
  8. 00:38:583 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:38:749 (3,4) - 클랩 제거
  10. 00:41:083 (2,4) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음 (의도?)
  11. 00:42:749 (5,1) - ^
  12. 00:43:416 (1)
  13. 00:43:916 (2,3,4) - 박자가 좀 어색한데 3슬라보다는 서클-슬라-슬라-서클이 더 자연스러운 듯
  14. 00:45:249 (3) - 클랩 제거
  15. 00:45:749 (4) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음
  16. 00:52:749 (1) - 피니쉬?
  17. 00:54:749 (4) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음
  18. 01:03:749 (2,4) - 첫부분에 클랩빠짐
  19. 01:14:083 (1,2) - 슬라이더 전체에 클랩 들어가있음
  20. 01:18:972 (2) - 박자가 01:18:958 이 쯤인 것 같음 or 슬라한개를 01:18:958 에 끝나게
  21. 01:19:083 (1,2) - 그냥 슬라한개를 01:19:249 이 쯤에 끝나게 하는게 깔끔할 듯
  22. 01:22:749 (1) - 변속푸시고 슬라-서클-서클 no 일단은 이대로 밀고가볼게요


슬라전체클랩 의도한거도 있고 아닌거도 있었습니다
힛사는 넣어보고 어울리는거만 수용했어요

감사합니다 :33
Kawashiro
힛사모딩중에 피방시간이 다됬습니다
내일 처음부터 다시 제대로 모딩해서 여기 올려드림
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