00:03:505 (4) - I think, the middle of slider should be on x:404 y:140 and the end of slider - on x:448 y:188 00:53:294 (6) - it would be cool if there will be some sexy long slider, which will end on 00:53:959 02:20:066 (6) - very-very strange moment o_o try to start first slider from another point, like this http://puu.sh/kD3U9/f99d93d4d7.jpg (sorry for small resolution, at the moment I'm using laptop and can't use pc) 02:42:661 (6) - http://puu.sh/kD49F/ea4a193ea0.jpg
Not helpful, I guess
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its revived now! yay! Lets keep it that way! Now for the mod! _(:3_JL)_
00:06:748 (1,2) - blanket. please make it better 00:07:761 (1,2,3) - maybe use same DS? theres really no emphasis on this part so I don't see a reason to use increasing DS 00:23:674 (2,3) - might be just me, but I think the cymbal hitsounds are overdone. I wouldn't recommend this. 00:36:016 (1) - I think a normal curve slider should be enough. The slider as is looks weird. Also using a regular curve would bring blanket opportunities. 00:37:535 (1,2) - try to blanket? (if intentional, ignore) 00:40:383 (3,1) - would prefer to use same DS since no emphasis to indicate the extended jump. ctrl g maybe? 00:45:889 - you should map this. its a powerful beat. 00:46:459 (6,7) - blanket maybe? if intentional, make it so that the two object don't look like theyre supposed to blanket. 00:48:547 (6,7,1) - better to make distance from 7 to 1 larger than 6 to 7 because in object 7 to 1 there is emphasis, which isn't the case with 6 to 7. 01:06:490 (4) - overmap? 01:38:294 (6) - is the whistle hitsound intentional? 01:49:687 (5,6,1) - move this group to x222:y264. reason? so that entry from 1 to 2 looks neater.
01:58:801 (3,4) - intentional? 02:11:332 (1) - ctrl+g to support circular flow with 02:11:712 (2,3,4) - 02:23:104 (1) - end slider on red tick. as of now, the slider is ending on a non-existent beat, making it sound weird. I recommend shortening it. 02:26:997 (4) - overmap? 02:25:953 (1,2,3) - I recommend this
and for the stream:
02:33:358 (6,1) - might wanna blanket this properly bro 02:38:674 (1) - while this also works, try to do ctrl +g. maybe it works better for you? I say this because there is little emphasis in this part. rather the emphasis is on 02:39:054 (2) - instead of 1.
these two are mods that is supposed to help support the flow of this part: 03:51:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:51:396 (2) - ctrl g 03:51:775 (3) - ctrl g
03:58:326 (2,3) - place them abit lower. like x299 y86. looks better?
its a good diff overall. just some weird blankets and patterning is all. Good luck for rank