Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~
Remember that these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore

~All Diffs~
Skin:
- Fix section-pass, it has some blue stains at the bottom.

~Win XP~
00:09:649 (1,2,3,4) - Why not making this a copy of the previous pattern? Done~
00:14:177 (x) - Add a note here? So it sounds like the first one. Done~!
00:24:743 (2) - Extend to the white tick. Done
00:46:251 (x) - Map this break? It feels weird to me oxo Fixed.
01:14:739 (2) - Move to the white tick. Done~
01:30:021 (3) - Maybe... you'd want to move this note to the next white tick or leave it there and add a note on the next white tick- Up to you, both sound ok i think that it looks nice on the next white tick~
01:34:738 (3) - Fix Spacing. Done
01:34:927 (x) - Add a note here? i deleted the previous note and i replaced it by a slider, i think sounds nice
01:35:493 (1) - Move to the white tick. Done
01:36:248 (2) - ^ Done
01:37:191 (4) - Extend to the red tick. Done
01:41:719 (1) - Delete New Combo Done~

~Win 7~
- Decrease Drain Rate by 1-2 ticks? Done~

00:00:584 (1,1,1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17755 Wee~ Done.
00:10:960 (x) - Add a note here? Done
00:16:432 (1,2,1,2) - You could put these a bit more spaced, it feels a bit messy like that o.o Fixed.
00:34:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pretty original pattern, but maybe you could make the flower form a bit more pretty? x3 lol, i think is now more pretty, although it has more sense to me xD
00:42:279 (9) - Fix Spacing here. The spacing reduces when you have a slowdown but the spacing isn't intuitive here :/ ok, i've deleted that timming point and i remade the slider.
00:55:297 (2,3) - Maybe you can space (2) a bit more so (3) doesn't look overlapped by (1). Fixed~
01:00:202 (1) - This spinner is too short imo ;_; yeah, but its possible do 300 =p
02:10:387 (x) - Add a note here? Done!
02:19:254 (9) - Extend to the white tick. Done~!
02:30:480 (5) - Move to the red tick. Done~!
02:33:593 (4,5) - Invert the positions so there's a correct spacing between (3,4) Done
02:34:630 (2,4) - Move to the red tick. Done
03:22:646 (9) - Extend to the white tick. Done
03:24:156 (2) - ^ Done
03:25:665 (2) - ^ Done
03:28:778 (6) - Move back to the red tick. Done.
03:35:476 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Any form you can change this pattern? it looks really messy xwx. Fixed, and I had to fix the final part xD.

Pretty nice map, I somehow loved those weird wavy sliders, they're funny xD Also there are some pretty original patterns, so here's my star Finish the easy diff and go rank this!! Good Luck!

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's my mod~~

[Overall]
I suggest you stop mapping at 03:28:693, since the song is rather long. (Only applies to [Win XP] yeah, but someone told me that i should finish it

[Windows XP]
00:51:156 (1) - You should reverse the selection on this slider. Make sure the slider is highlighted and click edit -> Reverse selection. Done
02:20:584 (8) - New combo. Done
02:25:490 - Extremely long break is extremely long. Map some of this. hmm, ok i will map some there, but for easy looks good.
03:21:713 (4) - Move this one grid down on the current grid you have. (2) Done

[Windows 7]
You have some spacing inconsistancies with this difficulty. I suggest you go through and fix some spacing with level 3 grid. Ok, I will
02:55:101 - I suggest moving this one grid to the right, so it can line up with the other hit circles, INSTEAD of stacking it with (1). I personally think this looks better. Done

Nothing major to point out. You can have a star~
*star*

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Where's Vista? on the garbage xD

If you do make a third diffculty, make sure you take advantage of all the nice spinner opportunities that this song provices such as 00:28:893 - , 00:49:269 - , 01:01:910 - , 01:15:871 - , 01:38:700 - , 01:59:831 - , 03:15:298 -
but it happens that i dont have much time to spend on pc, editing a map, etc... but if you want to do a diff, i will thank you~ ;3

Win XP

00:28:893 - Add a spinner that ends here 00:30:591 - ? Done

00:36:817 (4) - Move this right until it is in the same position opposite of note 3. Phew, Done.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17787

01:05:495 (3) - Align this better under the end of note 2. Done

01:09:268 (8,9) - Move these right and down with the snap so that note 8 completes the diamond pattern. You might want to turn grid and distance snap off for this. (DS is glitched) Then turn grid 3 on. (optional) While you have grid snap off, might as well better align note 9 on note 8.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17789

01:14:362 (1,2,3,4) - I feel this would be hard to identify for a newbie since you cut out specific notes. If you reentered these beats and changed the pattern a little, it becomes much more intuitive. Done

If you add a note here 01:14:739 - and here 01:15:683 - and found a design that uses this beat it would work. i replaced that by a slider

I came up with this. xD looks some hard for an easy, hmm.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17791


Win 7

00:41:902 (8,9) - Align the end of 9 better on 8? Done

00:59:448 (2) - Make this slider look nicer. Done



This song is good, the beatmaps are good, this star is good.

choche wrote:

Hi! I'm going to start with the mod, I saw that you're colombian, so i'll mod in spanish ok? ^^

Cosas que debes hacer
Sugerencias (si no estas de acuerdo conmigo, no tienes porque cambiarlo)

[General]

Buen timing y uso de hitsound
Me gusta tu forma de mapear <3

[Win XP]

00:15:687 (1,2,3) - Has pensado en sustituirlos por sliders? Que empiecen en el lugar en el que está el circle y termine en el tic rojo siguiente. Seh, tienes razon. Se ve mucho mejor ademas de que suena mucho mejor
00:28:893 (1) - Este spinner deberia acabar en 00:30:780 Hecho
02:35:866 (1) - Añade sonido finish Hecho

[Win 7]

00:11:715 (7) - New Combo
00:17:752 (3) - ^ [/color] Hecho

Eso es todo ^^

Como puedes ver, los pocos "errores" que encontrado son cositas sin mucha importancia, creo que tu beatmap esta listo para ser rankeado.

Buena suerte con el map

*Star*

DiamondCrash wrote:

XP;

Can I suggest from now on you use grid level 3? It makes everything much neater, and leads to better spacing. ok, changed to grid lv 3
00:36:440 (3,4) - 3 covers 4's repeat. Fixed
01:56:435 (6) - This repeat doesn't really follow anything. How about something like this; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18150 instead? now sounds better
02:01:340 (1,2) - Spacing. Fixed~
02:52:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - If it were be, I'd have just claps here. Done.

Nothing on Win 7. Delete your .osb, and full submit. Nicely polished, fun to play map set.

Leorda wrote:

Hola

[General]
1) The BPM should be 159, not 159,01 Fixed
2) Your bg (nanami_2.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 800x641) Fixed
3) You need a section-fail not necesary, i just wanted the section-pass with a green color and the section-fail with a red color.
4) Since the Preferred Skin set to "Default", why don't this beatmap is skinned? Ok, changed to "User's Preferences"

[Win XP]
00:15:687 (1) - Too short for easy diff since the slider velocity by 1, there is nothing wrong with these slider
00:16:441 (2) - ^ ^
00:17:196 (3) - ^ ^
00:27:761 (6) - New combo, very long for easy diff Done
00:31:157 (1) - A bit too far for spinner Done
01:14:739 (2) - Too short for easy diff since the slider velocity by 1, there is nothing wrong with this slider
01:15:683 (4) - ^ i replaced it by slider longer
01:52:662 (1) - ^ replaced the slider and the next beats
01:56:435 (6) - ^ ehem, nothing wrong. it follows very well the rhythm
01:59:454 (4) - ^ ^
02:16:811 (7) - New combo, very long for easy diff Done
02:17:566 (1) - Remove new combo? Done
02:19:075 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff Done
02:25:112 (4) - Too short for easy diff replaced by a slider longer
02:57:186 (4) - New combo, very long for easy diff Done
03:09:827 (6) - ^ Done
03:28:505 (4) - Too short for easy diff replaced by slider longer

[Win 7]
03:28:684 (6) - Cut short this slider to red tick remade this slider cause i didnt like its result

Good song
STAR

1. comboburst-1.png the width of comboburst can't be higher than 500 pixels.
2. spinner-approachcircle.png only an approchcircle?

1. 00:57:197 (3) - the reserve arrow is covered
2. OD +2

1. 01:14:357 (T) - set this line at 01:14:168
2. 01:43:596 (T) - set this line at 01:43:414
3. 02:20:575 (T) - set this line at 02:20:395
4. 02:22:084 (T) - at 02:21:904
5. 02:23:791 (T) - at 02:23:602
6. 03:04:640 (T) - set a green line here with same volume and hitsound set with 03:04:734 but without KIAI.

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. comboburst-1.png the width of comboburst can't be higher than 500 pixels. Fixed.
2. spinner-approachcircle.png only an approchcircle?

added approachcircle.png too.

[Win XP]:

1. 00:57:197 (3) - the reserve arrow is covered Fixed.
2. OD +2

Done

[Win 7]:

1. 01:14:357 (T) - set this line at 01:14:168 Done~
2. 01:43:596 (T) - set this line at 01:43:414 Done~
3. 02:20:575 (T) - set this line at 02:20:395 Done!
4. 02:22:084 (T) - at 02:21:904 Done~!
5. 02:23:791 (T) - at 02:23:602 Done
6. 03:04:640 (T) - set a green line here with same volume and hitsound set with 03:04:734 but without KIAI.

Done

star~

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

XP:
Eso es una Normal diff para mi. En realidad es una Easy :3
00:57:197 (3) - La flecha es escondida por (2).
01:14:366 (1) - Es escondido por el spinner.[/color] uhm, no me parece, pero borré esa nota

7
Me parece bien :p

Star~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi!
General;
- Nice map~ Maybe one more diff ?? I will not make another diff for this song, cause i dont have much time to spend on my pc. However, I accept guest diff. So if you want to make a diff, i will thank you~ :3
- Star~ Thank you~ ñ_ñ
- Make the green for the notes color a bit more colorful but soft at the same time~ Done.

Win XP;
- 00:15:687 >> end at 00:16:064 Done!
- 00:16:442 >> end at 00:16:819 Done
- 00:17:197 >> end at 00:17:574 Done.
- 01:09:838 >> move to 01:09:649 but end at the same point as before you moved it Done.
- 01:14:744 >> move to 01:14:555 but end at the same point as before you moved it Done.
- 01:15:876 >> move to 01:15:687 but end at the same point as before you moved it Done.
- 01:34:744 >> move to 01:34:555 and end at 01:34:932 Done~
- 01:37:197 >> end at 01:37:574 Done~
- 01:56:442 >> end at 01:56:819 Done.
- 01:57:008 >> move to 01:57:197 Done.
- 01:59:461 >> end at 01:59:838 Done~!
- 02:08:895 >> end at 02:09:272 Done!!
- 02:48:706 >> start at 02:48:517 but end at the same point as before you moved it Done.
- 02:58:706 >> end at 02:59:083 Done.
- 03:01:536 >> move to 03:01:725 but end at the same point as before you moved it Done
- 03:12:291 >> end at 03:13:046 Done.
- 03:14:178 >> end at 03:14:932 Done
- 03:15:121 >> move to 03:15:310 Done.
- 03:28:706 >> end at 03:29:083 Done.
- 03:43:989 >> umm...ugly shape, I don't like it~ but that's my opinion~ Ok, changed shape like a mid moon xD

Win 7;
- Is okk ~

Eddotan wrote:

wee~ thank you for your modding~!! ^^ kudosu for you

No hay problema ~ Hahaha, recien me doy cuenta que eres de colombia xD // Buena suerte con tu mapa ~

• 02:48:517---03:04:640 : Use soft hitsound
  00:51:159 (1): Add finish at the end
  01:08:895 (7,8,9): Hard to read
  01:15:687 (3): End at 01:16:064 and Kiai Time ends here
  01:34:178 (2,3): Spacing,too far
  02:25:498 : Kiai time ends here
  02:35:310 (4,5,1): Set like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:04:744 (1): Finish
  03:16:819 (2): Finish

• 01:03:980 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  01:16:055 : Kiai time ends here
  02:22:282 (2): End at 02:23:225
  02:25:489 : Kiai time ends here
  02:13:414 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  03:16:810 (5): Add finish at the beginning
  03:28:885 : Kiai time ends here

impossiblexu wrote:

Sorry for the delay~

Only suggestions:

[Win XP]

• 02:48:517---03:04:640 : Use soft hitsound Done!
  00:51:159 (1): Add finish at the end Done!
  01:08:895 (7,8,9): Hard to read o_O?
  01:15:687 (3): End at 01:16:064 and Kiai Time ends here Done~!
  01:34:178 (2,3): Spacing,too far Fixed
  02:25:498 : Kiai time ends here Done!
  02:35:310 (4,5,1): Set like this: Done
  
  SPOILER

  [attachment=0:c1fe3]mod9.JPG[/attachment:c1fe3]
  03:04:744 (1): Finish Done!
  03:16:819 (2): Finish Done~!!

[Win 7]

• 01:03:980 (1): Add finish at the beginning Done
  01:16:055 : Kiai time ends here Done!
  02:22:282 (2): End at 02:23:225 Done
  02:25:489 : Kiai time ends here Done!
  02:13:414 (1): Add finish at the beginning Done.
  03:16:810 (5): Add finish at the beginning Done
  03:28:885 : Kiai time ends here Done.

Good map~

&STAR&

Krisom wrote:

Hola

[general]
Te sugiero que remuevas uno de los colores azules y pongas uno amarillo, para que la paleta de colores de los círculos sea la misma (o similar) a la del logo de windows Arreglado
Hay alguna razón por la que los backgrounds para ambas dificultades sea distinto? Es de mal gusto IMO, pero meh~ Ehh xD simplemente busqué imagenes rulz de Nanami Madobe ;3


[XP]
Tu maneta de poner las claps es inconsistente. Hay algunas secciones en las que le pones las clap a la 2da y 4ta nota (ej 02:52:291 (1,2,3,4)), y otras en las que le das clap a la 1ra y 3ra nota (ej: la mayor parte del mapa) Mi sugerencia es que mantengas los claps en la 2da y 4ta nota durante todo el mapa, a excepción de secciones que no necesiten claps. De esa manera va a sonar mucho más consistente. Hecho y arreglado cuidadosamente, ahora tiene mas sentido :3
00:13:800 (4) - Quita el finish. Pon un clap. Hecho
00:53:423 (3) - Abusar finish en una sección suena mal , abstente a usar los finish solo al cambiar un combo o para acentuar una nota del resto. Arreglado
00:56:064 (2) - No está bien apilado bajo (1). Apilalo bien porfavor ^^. Arreglado
00:57:197 (3) - ^ Arreglado~
01:04:366 (2,3) - Estos dos sliders tampoco están bien apilados. Arreglado
02:36:064 (1) - Pon un finish en este spinner. Hecho
02:48:517 (1) - ^ Hecho!
02:51:159 - Durante esta sección del mapa, te recomiendo usar whistles en vez de claps, ya que los clapsm son muy fuertes para esta sección que es más bien suave. Hecho, suena rulz :3
03:43:989 (3) - Sliencia el "cuerpo" de este slider. Hecho

[7]
Aplica acá las mismas sugerencias que te dije en [XP] sobre los hitsounds =x Arreglado!
00:03:602 (1) - Está muy cerca de (2) y (3). Muevelo un grid más arriba Hecho
00:48:885 (2) - Por que esto está tocando a (1) =X? Arreglado
01:11:338 (2) - El principio de este slider se ve feo =x, trata de arreglarlo de manera que vaya desd eun principio hacia abajo y que no se curve a la derecha. Si no parece que son 3 notas apiladas. hecho. c/p del anterior slider y flip horizontally xD
01:12:848 (2) - ^ hecho. c/p del anterior slider y flip horizontally xD
03:04:734 - Cuidado! Cuando hagas un cambio en los hitsounds, tienes que poner la timing section 1/4 más atrás para evitar que quienes clickeen la nota antes oigan un hitsound distinto. En este caso, crea un duplicado de esta sección (SIN KIAI TIME) en 03:04:640. hecho!

Veo mucho trabajo en algunos sliders, te falta aún para alcanzar una simetría perfecta, pero vas bien encaminado ;D. Esos sliders con forma de "serpiente" son geniales (y por suerte no están forzados). seh, trato que se vea mas organizado y limpio el mapa :3 (y a la vez, jugable xD)
Si te queda cualquier duda sobre lo que haya dicho en el mod, ya sabes donde encontrarme.

Star!

Lizbeth wrote:

Hola

No encontré problemas técnicos, en el mapa, pero aquí te doy unas cuantas sugerencias que considero mejoraran tu mapa, tu decides si las cambias o no.

Win 7
00:04:168 (1) - Haz que este spinner empiece medio beat después, y agrega una nota en este punto. Hecho.
00:06:621 - agrega nota aquí? o termina el spinner aquí suena mejor con el spinner
01:00:206 (1) - quita el spinner y agrega una nota... y luego agrega una uno aquí: 01:00:961 Hecho!
01:09:829 (9) - 01:11:338 (2) - 01:12:848 (2) - creo que suena mejor si terminas estos sliders medio beat despues, en el tick blanco (como hiciste mas adelante: 02:19:263 (9) - 02:20:772 (2) - 02:22:282 (2)) Hecho~
02:33:036 (2) - elimina esta nota Hecho
03:36:433 (1) - ^ Hecho

Win XP
00:17:197 (3) - agrega una repetición, si lo hacer recuerda arreglar el espacio suena mejor~
01:29:272 (1) - este new combo esta raro Arreglado
01:54:178 (3) - creo que el nuevo combo debería empezar aquí Hecho!
02:01:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - justo aquí empiezas a mapear siguiendo la voz, esta raro, porque todo lo anterior lo mapeaste siguiendo la música Re-mapeada esa parte, siguiendo la musica.
03:00:215 - agrega una nota Hecho!
03:05:310 - ohh aquí vuelve el mapeo siguiendo la voz, creo que debes elegir que vas a seguir, si la voz o la música, no me gusta esa inconsistencia pero es solo mi opinión. Re-mappeada esa parte, siguiendo la musica.

Es muy buena mapa, dejo mi estrella =3

karenying wrote:

a KD Star for you

banvi wrote:

Win XP
01:51:536 (6) 1 grid right Done.
02:56:064 (1,3) 2 grid left? Done.
02:56:442 (2) 4 grid left? Done.
03:43:989 (3) new combo Done.
Win 7
I suggest HP -1 & Circle Size -1 & OD -1
00:41:904 (8,9) stack problem?
00:55:867 (4) 1 grid up
I had to re-space (changing the DS to 0.9x) some notes on this Diff, cause i didnt like its result with new circle size

Hellzero's
HP +1 ? Done.
01:03:225 (4) new combo? Done.
01:40:018 (3) 1 grid right? Done.
02:36:621 (3) new combo? Done.
03:37:565 (9) ^ Done.

great! ~star

Mashley wrote:

Um... why did you name difficulties after operating systems???? because the song and the character are from OS-tan. Nanami Madobe is a character from Windows 7, the song "Nanairo Generator" is from Windows 7's commercial. ^^

Win XP
01:37:951 - I dislike empty spaces, put something here? Done!
01:42:102 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note Done

Win 7
00:03:791 (2,3) - Move each of these out 1 grid to stop the ugly overlap i tried to space this, but with distance snap, it isnt possible, so i deactive the distance snap to do it.

Hellzero's Win
Don't like all the 1/4 in this diff, it doesn't fit the music much... Nope~ it feels great the notes according to the music :3
00:08:319 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:39:451 (1) - This note seems really hidden, I didn't see it at first. Done
01:39:829 (1) - Remove new combo Done
02:36:244 (1,2) - Why is this jump here? There's nothing in the music to suggest a massive screen-wide jump.

Dusty wrote:

I think if you have a skinned approachcircle that the default hitcircle and overlay need to be in the folder also
I think I'll delete that files from osz, cause i didnt like it. It seems to be some unnecesary

Source: "OS-tan" with a lowercase "t"? Fixed
Tags: add "Windows"?... Done

[Hellzero's Win]
Overall Difficulty +1, please (the map's patterns overlap themselves so much that I think it's easier to play on OD 8) Done, but I dont notice the diference

[Win 7]
00:09:263 (2) - up a grid? I had to deactive the distance snap to do the simetry well
00:09:640 (3) - down 2 grids? that way it's symmetrical ^

[Win XP]
OD+2 maybe? Done
00:06:631 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - would be better if these patterns weren't all clustered near the center Done
03:44:083 (1) - shorten by 1/4? Done~

OS-tan's are a little weird...
"OS-tan" are characters from windows that microsoft made it for each operating system. and Nanami Madobe is from Windows 7... Just check out about more info in youtube

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi there! Let's start with the mod!

General
Make the first combo colour (yellow) a bit brighter? No, I don't like it
Offset sounds a tad late to me. Try 6623? lol, the only post that is refering about offset but thank you. it feels better now. (For Easy, obviously)
Check all your timing sections, some of them are not snapped

Win XP
Overall difficulty is pretty high for an easy ... OD-1 Done
00:11:725 (1) - Distance between (5), this and (2) isn't even. Move this one grid left
00:12:668 (1 - 5) - Spacing not equal to before. Move (2) one left and down, (3) two down and (4) one right and down? No, then (2) overlaps on (2 green) I don't like it.
00:31:159 (1) - Not sure beginners will be able to hit this note. Shorten the spinner? Done
00:38:329 (2 - 4) - Move one grid left (2) can't move due distance snap
00:56:064 (2) - Jump in easy? Fix spacing between this and end of (1)
01:04:366 (2) - Same here
01:36:819 (3, 4) - One grid left
01:40:593 (1 - 7) - Spacing not consistent here. (1) one right, (2) one down, (3) one left, (6) one up, (7) one right
02:12:291 (1) - Move one down and right
02:34:178 (3) - Unstack this
03:08:140 (1) - Move right one grid
03:43:989 (1) - How about making this a spinner instead? Hm, it doesnt make sense o.o

Win 7
00:26:999 (3) - How about stacking this on the end of (2) instead? lol, it looks bad
00:37:565 (4) - Jump intentional here? If not move (3) one up and (4) one down
01:30:395 (7) - Why 0.5xBPM here? I don't see a need for it because that slider follows the voice, and I like it short
01:34:923 (4) - Stack on end of (3) Nah
01:36:433 (3) - Stack on (2) Nah
01:42:470 (4) - Again, why the half speed? Again. It follows the voice
01:46:999 (4) - Stack
02:03:791 (6) - Move down one grid to align with (5)? it was aligned o.o
Hmm, I quite liked the ending

Hellzero's win
Hmm, I'll talk with my friend about this, cause this diff it isnt mine, but i think it's ok and is totally playable.
00:57:753 (9) - The slow down doesn't fit IMO
01:16:055 (3) - Don't think you need this Kiai time fountain spray
02:07:187 (7) - Same thing
02:25:867 (1) - I'm not too fond of the Kiai time fountain spray here ...
02:37:942 (1) - Same
02:56:999 (6) - Seriously, the 0.5xBPM spots are so random O_O
03:00:961 (2) - Move half a beat earlier to the red line (03:00:772)? I think it fits better
03:28:885 (4) - Same Kiai time fountain spray comment
Can't say much note / playing wise because I can't play stuff this hard, but just from watching ...


Mostly just small stuff, but the 0.5xBPM is kinda weird IMO, it doesn't fit at all o_O Same with the short Kiai times fountain sprays, I don't think they're necessary. Pretty solid mapset otherwise

+1 star for you :S