Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~
mod for your mania diff in my queue :3

[General]

This is only For Mania!
In the song setup -> Design -> Uncheck Widescreen Support and Letterboxing
er..... don't foget the Hitsounds
I suggest this diff is also custom named. cause you use "pepperoni" for 7K diff
Oh yeah, Uncheck the Widescreen support on standard mapset too. cause the BG is already 1280x720

[4K NM]
1|2|3|4

00:32:068 (32068|2) - low guitar sound, and why is it 2 presses?. delete this
00:32:758 (32758|2,32758|1) - move one column to left and move - 00:32:931 (32931|0) - to 3. So it wouldn't jacky.
00:33:103 (33103|2) - move to 1. if you follow above
00:36:206 (36206|2,36379|3) - ctrl+g So it wouldn't be jacky
00:36:724 (36724|2,36896|1) - move one column to left for hand balance
00:53:793 - For this drum sound, you use 2 presses. but why you use 3 presses here? delete neither those one LN or that short note
01:20:689 (80689|2,80862|1,81034|2) - ctrl + h for pitch relevancy
01:23:448 - one note only? but you use 2 notesfor this drum before. add one more note
01:24:137 - ^
01:24:827 - ^
01:28:965 (88965|3,89310|3,89655|3) - better to not make this 3 on the same column. so move - 01:29:310 (89310|3) - to 2
01:36:896 (96896|3,97068|2,97413|0,97586|1,97758|2) - maybe this could be hard for NM players. delete this
01:36:551 (96551|0,97241|3) - actually you can make this LN longer following the BG sound.
Suggestion
01:36:551 -


That's all
GL~

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~
mod for your mania diff in my queue :3

[General]

This is only For Mania!
In the song setup -> Design -> Uncheck Widescreen Support and Letterboxing
er..... don't foget the Hitsounds
I suggest this diff is also custom named. cause you use "pepperoni" for 7K diff
Oh yeah, Uncheck the Widescreen support on standard mapset too. cause the BG is already 1280x720

[4K NM]
1|2|3|4

00:32:068 (32068|2) - low guitar sound, and why is it 2 presses?. delete this
00:32:758 (32758|2,32758|1) - move one column to left and move - 00:32:931 (32931|0) - to 3. So it wouldn't jacky.
00:33:103 (33103|2) - move to 1. if you follow above
00:36:206 (36206|2,36379|3) - ctrl+g So it wouldn't be jacky
00:36:724 (36724|2,36896|1) - move one column to left for hand balance
00:53:793 - For this drum sound, you use 2 presses. but why you use 3 presses here? delete neither those one LN or that short note
01:20:689 (80689|2,80862|1,81034|2) - ctrl + h for pitch relevancy
01:23:448 - one note only? but you use 2 notesfor this drum before. add one more note
01:24:137 - ^
01:24:827 - ^
01:28:965 (88965|3,89310|3,89655|3) - better to not make this 3 on the same column. so move - 01:29:310 (89310|3) - to 2
01:36:896 (96896|3,97068|2,97413|0,97586|1,97758|2) - maybe this could be hard for NM players. delete this
01:36:551 (96551|0,97241|3) - actually you can make this LN longer following the BG sound.
Suggestion
01:36:551 -


That's all
GL~

• Each beatmap must have at least 2 difficulties and one of them must be Easy/Normal.

• Different key amounts within a mapset must be treated as different gamemodes and require a respective independent difficulty spread. Therefore each key amount must have an independent difficulty spread. For example if you want to add a 7K difficulty to your set, you must design a whole 7K spread. If you want to add an additional 4k difficulty to your set, you must also design a whole 4K spread.

bestza55567 wrote:

Hard

SPOILER

00:11:379 - Add a note Why? there's nothing here
00:56:896 (4) - move a slider's end to x:388 y:188 Make the approach circle touch the slider like this http://puu.sh/iskGQ/fe15b5b86b.jpg with that you mean fix blanket?If yes it's fixed
00:59:655 - Add a note Why? there's nothing here too
01:10:689 - Add a note ^

Normal size
00:11:551 - The slider's head should place at 00:11:379 And the end isn't changed Why??
00:15:862 (6) - This beat is so confusing. Try move it somewhere on the timeline. ^
You have same problem in the same part of the song try to fix. at where?
00:59:655 - Add a note Why??
01:10:689 - Add a note ^
01:27:241 (2,3) - This jump is too hard for normal. Fixed, btw fixed all the jumps, I mapped this song b4 I knew I couldn't :p

Small size

Try not to map a 1/4 note There isn't any 1/4 note at Small Size
The problem is as same as normal (the blue text) There's nothing blue ^^

http://puu.sh/islUZ/41745b66ff.jpg Fixed

And this one. From AIMod

Hope it ranked soon. Thank you! So do I

Uh oh! In the ranking criteria says
Difficulty Spread

• Each beatmap must have at least 2 difficulties and one of them must be Easy/Normal.

• Different key amounts within a mapset must be treated as different gamemodes and require a respective independent difficulty spread. Therefore each key amount must have an independent difficulty spread. For example if you want to add a 7K difficulty to your set, you must design a whole 7K spread. If you want to add an additional 4k difficulty to your set, you must also design a whole 4K spread.

Rivals_7 wrote:

GD as your req. Already Hitsounded 100%. Don't forget to add STYNGY and Rivals_7 to the tags as the Guest diff

Rivals_7's 4K HD "Cheese"

osu file format v14

[General]
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PreviewTime: 33103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 16
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Title:Heavy's Pizza Song
TitleUnicode:Heavy's Pizza Song
Artist:The Living Tombstone
ArtistUnicode:The Living Tombstone
Creator:LucaSA4
Version:Rivals_7's 4K HD "Cheese"
Source:
Tags:electronic rave nightcore party
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64,192,55775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55862,128,0,56206:0:0:0:0:
192,192,55862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56206,128,0,56551:0:0:0:0:
64,192,56551,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56551,128,0,56896:0:0:0:0:
448,192,56896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56896,128,0,57241:0:0:0:0:
320,192,57241,128,0,57586:0:0:0:0:
64,192,57586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57586,128,0,57931:0:0:0:0:
448,192,57931,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57931,128,0,58275:0:0:0:0:
320,192,58275,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58275,128,0,58620:0:0:0:0:
448,192,58620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58620,128,0,58965:0:0:0:0:
192,192,58965,128,0,59310:0:0:0:0:
320,192,58965,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59310,128,0,59655:0:0:0:0:
192,192,59655,128,0,60000:0:0:0:0:
64,192,60000,128,0,60344:0:0:0:0:
320,192,60000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60344,128,0,60689:0:0:0:0:
320,192,60689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60689,128,0,61034:0:0:0:0:
320,192,61034,128,0,61379:0:0:0:0:
64,192,61293,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61379,128,0,61724:0:0:0:0:
320,192,61724,128,0,62068:0:0:0:0:
64,192,61724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62068,128,0,62413:0:0:0:0:
192,192,62413,128,0,62758:0:0:0:0:
64,192,62758,128,0,63103:0:0:0:0:
448,192,62758,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63103,128,0,63448:0:0:0:0:
64,192,63448,128,0,63793:0:0:0:0:
448,192,63448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63793,128,0,64137:0:0:0:0:
192,192,63793,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64137,128,0,64482:0:0:0:0:
320,192,64482,128,0,64827:0:0:0:0:
64,192,64482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64827,128,0,65172:0:0:0:0:
448,192,64827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65172,128,0,65517:0:0:0:0:
192,192,65517,128,0,65862:0:0:0:0:
64,192,65517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65862,128,0,66206:0:0:0:0:
64,192,66206,128,0,66551:0:0:0:0:
192,192,66206,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66551,128,0,66896:0:0:0:0:
64,192,66810,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66896,128,0,67241:0:0:0:0:
192,192,66896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67241,128,0,67586:0:0:0:0:
320,192,67586,128,0,67931:0:0:0:0:
64,192,67586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67931,128,0,68275:0:0:0:0:
448,192,67931,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68275,128,0,68620:0:0:0:0:
64,192,68620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68620,128,0,68965:0:0:0:0:
64,192,68965,128,0,69310:0:0:0:0:
448,192,68965,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69310,128,0,69655:0:0:0:0:
320,192,69310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69655,128,0,70000:0:0:0:0:
448,192,69655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70000,128,0,70344:0:0:0:0:
320,192,70000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71034,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74482,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75172,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75862,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76206,128,0,76551:0:0:0:0:
64,192,76551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76551,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77586,128,0,77931:0:0:0:0:
448,192,77931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77931,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78275,128,0,78620:0:0:0:0:
320,192,78620,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78965,128,0,79310:0:0:0:0:
192,192,79137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79310,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79655,128,0,80000:0:0:0:0:
64,192,80000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80000,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80689,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81724,128,0,82068:0:0:0:0:
448,192,82068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82068,128,0,82413:0:0:0:0:
320,192,82413,128,0,82758:0:0:0:0:
64,192,82758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82758,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83103,128,0,83448:0:0:0:0:
192,192,83275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83448,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83793,128,0,84137:0:0:0:0:
448,192,84137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84137,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84482,128,0,84827:0:0:0:0:
320,192,84655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84827,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85172,128,0,85517:0:0:0:0:
320,192,85172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,85517,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87241,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87586,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87931,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88620,128,0,88965:0:0:0:0:
320,192,88965,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,89137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89310,128,0,89655:0:0:0:0:
320,192,89655,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90000,128,0,90344:0:0:0:0:
192,192,90172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,90344,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,90517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90689,128,0,91034:0:0:0:0:
320,192,91034,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,91724,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92758,128,0,93103:0:0:0:0:
320,192,92931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93103,128,0,93448:0:0:0:0:
64,192,93275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,93448,128,0,93793:0:0:0:0:
448,192,93448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93793,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94137,128,0,94482:0:0:0:0:
192,192,94310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94482,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94827,128,0,95172:0:0:0:0:
448,192,95172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95172,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,95344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95517,128,0,95862:0:0:0:0:
320,192,95689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95862,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,95862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96250,128,0,96551:0:0:0:0:
448,192,96551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96551,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,96724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97241,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97931,128,0,98275:0:0:0:0:
320,192,97931,128,0,98275:0:0:0:0:
192,192,97931,1,0,0:0:0:0:

PM or poke me in game if there is any mods on mine

Rangking Criteria wrote:

The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.

Rivals_7 wrote:

It is true that they're already in the mapset name but......

Rangking Criteria wrote:

The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.

gorgonzoler wrote:

hello! i m gorgonzoler for m4m request.
my mod is just advise
my puush is crash. so ask me when your not understand.
and sorry for the short mod.if this won't help ya.just

General

untick the widescreen support unless you plan to make a storyboard in this map Fixed
there is a problem in your AIMOD in each diff.watch that. Fixed, forgot to add tags in all diffs
the diff name is hard to recognize. is it easy,normal,hard.Or normal,hard,insane?Small, Normal, Margherita, it's obvious that small is easier than normal. Margherita is the hardest diff so can have different name
use the defalt diff name (normal size and 4K NM are fine)

Small size

00:27:586 (4,5) - blanket is better But it is one x.x
01:31:035 (1) - this one move to x：300 y：124 is better look Yes, it looks better
01:28:275 (1) - is this the rhythm on purpose? if not . shorten the slider. player in this level will release the button before end. This is the rhythm on purpose

Normal size

00:25:172 (2,3,1) - overlap Where? o.O
00:51:034 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
rest is okay to me

Margherita

00:11:637 (2,3) - regular stack is not good looking.try stack them in one arc I think it's fine
00:17:155 (2,3) - ^same ^
00:24:482 (1,1,2,3,4) - you can use "make a polygon circle " for a better shape. This is fine for me
00:35:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^same unless you do it on purpose(apply to the whole map) Same
00:50:689 (6,3) - overlap. rotate (6)counterclock for a bit Rotated 6º ^^

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Ohhh! I'm waiting for that hard. Good luck with your mapset. :'3

Troponoop wrote:

Howdy, M4M here

[Margherita]

00:13:448 (1,2,3) - make these have the same distance snap because it's an odd way to space ( it goes from .8 to 1,2 to ,5) True, fixed to 1.0 all

00:15:862 (4,5,1,2) - ^ again, make these cute little notes have the same distance between them Fixed

00:21:034 (8,1) - make these sliders not overlap so it's consistent with the rest of your sliders Fixed

00:22:068 (1,3,4) - the distance for these three are slightly off Fixed, also fixed the small overlap

00:33:103 (1,4) - since you stacked these properly, i think you should also stack 00:33:275 (2,5) - to keep it clean Fixed

00:32:758 (2,1) - this 2.3 jump is quite a big one, you should lower it to match the distance of this jump 00:33:793 (5,6) - Fixed, I think?!

00:34:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - moving this pattern so the 4 stacks onto the slider end of 00:34:137 (6) - would reduce the jump and make it smoother Changed

00:35:862 (1,3,4) - if you are going for symmetry with this part, the 1 is a tiny bit misplaced from the 3 and 4 and so is the (it's such a minor thing to point out ) 00:36:034 (2,5,6) wow, thank you

00:37:068 (8,1) - reduce this gap to 1.0 instead of having it at 1.6 This will break the pattern

00:38:620 (1,4) - perhaps stack this? or maybe put the 0.15 spacing you had on your previous notes like 00:22:672 (2,3) - Changed

00:39:310 (5,1,5,1) - make these jumps have the same distance Fixed, I think?!

00:44:827 (5,1) - this 3.4 jump really needs to be reduced Yeah, fixed

00:46:206 (2,3) - this gap is very very low considering the earlier jumps Fixed, I think?! Maybe it still low

00:47:241 (2,3) - this hits the 3.0, which is slightly higher than the norm Fixed, I think?!

00:52:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is all extremely cluttered, the other patterns were fine because there were not as many notes, but consider making the first half have more distance than the last half Did another pattern, more clear now, but not exacly that

00:56:551 (3,4) - make this match the distance snap with 00:55:862 (1,2) - Fixed

00:56:896 (4,1,2,3) - make this all one combo Made

01:02:413 (5,1) - this gap is too large (2.0) compared to the other 1.0 gaps Fixed

01:17:241 (1,2) - 4.6 is way too difficult of a jump for this part, it has to be lowered Fixed

01:22:068 (3,4,1) - make these have the same distance apart Fixed, 1,5x DS

01:22:758 (1,2) - 3.8 jump is a little too much Fixed

01:26:896 (1) - perhaps turn this into a small slider and stack it on 01:27:241 (2) - Fixed

01:27:241 (2,3,4,5,6) - move this pattern so the 4 stacks on the slider end of 01:28:275 (1) Fixed



[Normal]

00:11:034 (1,2,3,4) - the norm is .6 distance snap in your map, so you should make these all have precisely .6 distance snap Fixed

00:30:000 (5,1) - lower this to .6 Fixed

00:31:034 (2,3) - this overlap is well-done, but the following sliders soon after do not copy the same overlap. it's all or nothing in this case ? But I just overlapped this time, the others are mistake -.-

00:51:724 (2,1) - reduce this to .6 Fixed

01:09:310 (3,4) - this should be blanketed instead of overlapped I like this overlap



[Easy]

00:25:862 (3,4) - this should be put to 0.9 so it matches the jump with 00:20:689 (6,1) - and 00:29:310 (6,1) - Fixed

01:00:000 (3,2) - space these out a tiny bit so they don't overlap Fixed

01:08:620 (1,3) - this is some serious overlap, i recommend spacing these out so it doesnt look like they are mating Fixed

01:14:482 (4,6) - move 6 so its not overlapping with 4 Fixed

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Great mapset! i'm sorry that i cannot do much besides make adjustments to your spacing, but i hope i helped out

CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:

M4M~

[General]
Offset: 17 I already knew it was offbeat, ty This will take a while to change
Overall difficulty I feel bad. Make a Hard diff? Already comming

[Easy]
None...

[Normal]
SV is too fast. Please set up: 2.40.
01:10:000 (4) - Move this to here? x: 120 y: 72 And where the DS consistency fits?
01:28:275 (1) - slider end here 01:28:965 - Fixed this was a mistake

[Margherita]
None....

That's all. I can't mod more. Good luck~

1. AiMod: You haven't resnapped your notes for these difficulties: Easy
2. Metadata: The Artist, while it is: The Living Tombstone from this video link here the song is a collab between three artists: RubberFruit(?) The Living Tombstone, and 2007excalibur2007. So add these to the tags.
3. Folder: Good.
4. Offset & Timing: Good.

Your Flow

New Flow

Star

[ Space ] wrote:

Hey from my queue!



[General]

1. AiMod: You haven't resnapped your notes for these difficulties: Easy
2. Metadata: The Artist, while it is: The Living Tombstone from this video link here the song is a collab between three artists: RubberFruit(?) The Living Tombstone, and 2007excalibur2007. So add these to the tags.
3. Folder: Good.
4. Offset & Timing: Good.

[Easy]
00:13:465 (1) - I don't think this should end on the downbeat since they provide the most emphasis, I would do a note slider combo instead or a note note combo. Changed to note note

00:15:879 (5) - Move this to these co-ordinated to create a nice blanket with the upcoming slider: X:324 Y:136 Fixed

00:30:361 (1,2,3) - These hitsounds are quite overpowering in comparison to the music, I would quiet them down a touch. Fixed

00:49:672 (6) - NC here for a change in music and to prevent the combo getting too long. Fixed, this was actually a mistake

00:53:810 (3) - After this slider there is no need for all of the timing sections for this difficulty, you only need one. True

00:57:603 (2,1) - I think the flow is bad because it does this:

Your Flow

Why not try this instead?

New Flow

Fixed

01:03:465 (4) - After such a long gap shouldn't you NC to stop unnecessary HP drain for the easier diff? To tell the truth I didn't know that a new NC stops HP drain

01:08:637 (1,2) - This blanket falls off at the end of slider 2, curve it inward a bit more to complete the blanket Fixed

01:09:327 (2,3) - Remember to adjust this one if you do the above suggestion ofc

01:14:499 (4) - ^^^ (change in song aswell) Fixed blanket and added NC

01:37:603 (3) - Remove unnecessary timing points Sure

[Normal]

00:12:085 (3) - Move the end of the slider up a bit to make the blanket better. Fixed

00:22:603 (2) - Make it so the curve flows to the next note rather than to the slider after it. Did.

00:28:982 (4,1) - I think it would look better if you did a slider blanket rather than this, don't you think? Fixed

00:31:051 (2,3) - I would fix this overlap it looks extremely confusing for newer players to look at and will easily confuse them. Don't say bad things about this overlap!

00:53:810 (5) - I would make a triangle pattern with the last 3 notes such as to make it look better, move this note to (X:60 Y:160) to make the triangle. Fixed

00:55:879 (1) - These is an audiable beat here, I would place an note here to fill it. ??

01:09:327 (3,4) - I also don't agree with this overlap, in my opinion it's quite ugly. Why not try this:

It also improves flow within these two slider.

Fixed

01:35:879 (2) - Move the end of it up a tiny bit to make the curve more consistent around the slider and less touchy with the slider. Okay

[Margherita]

00:24:499 (1,6) - This needs to be further up to make the pattern more consistent, why not try this?:

Star

But's already this o.O

00:35:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this is all too cramped and ruins the scene of jumps from your previous ones, I would make this part more difficult. If you want

00:51:741 (5) - This is too far right, I would bring it back a little to make the star consistent. It's matching the other star on the opposite corner 00:49:672 (1,2,3,4,5) -

00:58:292 (3,4) - What? It has no correlation with the previous and forthcoming notes, why is it so close?

Nice fun map to play, good luck~

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo M4M from my modding Q~
Thanks for the mod before, pretty nazi tho.
But anyway I'll mod this (dem pizza tho *^*)

[General]

1. Only reminding it seems you haven't add hard guestmapper (jyu) to the tags. Be sure to add it to the tags later. I'll add when he deliver me his GD
2. There's an audio preview conflict, check it out.
3. It's kinda weird that you uses slow bpm (87) if it was me I would use the fast one (174) but it's doesn't matter. It would be too "costly" to change the bpm now xD The BPM was doubled b4, but I compared with another song that has 174 BPM and I easily found out that 174 was weird for this song
4. I like that hitsound Tanki u
5. And ohh, I read the previous mod and I think you changed the diffs name right? I think previously you used pizza size like small, medium, large, margherita or something like that. And I think that's good tho, pretty creative :3 I'm considering changing that, good idea of 'Medium' and 'Large'

[Easy]

1. 00:13:465 (4,6) - Overlapped °^° looks ugly imo. I prefer this http://puu.sh/iy62T/8f3541c656.jpg
2. 00:22:603 (2) - Actually this note causing polarity issue, but I don't know how to fix it since it follows the melody well... Changed to a single circle
3. 00:24:154 Maybe it's just my imagination, but I think I hear a sound here.... Add a note please. I'm following the stronger harp (if this is a harp)
4. 00:33:810 Dem dude, you need a hitsound here (clap, snare drum) and here 00:37:948 and on every 2 and 4 tick
5. 00:47:258 (2,4) - Naww, another overlap. Try this http://puu.sh/iy6jQ/b3d72e0a6b.jpg
6. 00:47:258 (2,5) - If you apply the mod above, stack (5) with (2)'s end. And 00:49:672 (1) - with (2)'s head. It'll looks way neater. http://puu.sh/iy6p1/db59c2ff4d.jpg http://puu.sh/iy6pM/4af526b8b9.jpg
7. 00:55:189 Wow, what a big sound to be ignored o-o I know :3
8. 01:02:775 ^ ^
9. 01:14:499 (1,2,3) - Repair the triangle shape.
10. 01:17:258 (2) - I would prefer to NC here instead of here 01:16:568 (1) - because it's the start of the chorus just like what you did on the first chorus. This was actually a mistake, it was supposed to be nc
11. 01:17:258 (2,4) - Overlapped x-x This : http://puu.sh/iy6DP/2cbaf29810.jpg
12. 01:20:016 (1,2,3) - This rhythm feels kinda weird. I personally prefer this http://puu.sh/iy6JE/761b27e965.jpg
13. 01:37:603 (3) - I think finish at tail would fit better.

Almost all applied

[Normal]

1. 00:05:534 (1) - woah, you add a spinner here o-o I think that's mean you also have to add it on easy for consistency purpose.
2. I agree, the SV is too high for normal. I'm surprised you used >2.0 SV for easier diff even though the bpm is slow. Idk yet, it will take alot of time to resnap everything and work on DS, I don't think it's that fast
3. Again, audio preview conflict and a kiai is not snapped.
4. 00:13:465 (1,2) - I think they are too far from each other... DS them
5. 00:21:396 (5,1) - This stack is kinda confusing. I highly suggest to avoid stacking on normal because it would be hard for new player to read. This would be better http://puu.sh/iy7gk/b8b30cb359.jpg PS. I remade the triangle shape. And good luck with DS.
6. 00:30:361 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like overlaps even if they are on purpose, it would make the map looks messy... and this one don't look that good as well. I prefer this http://puu.sh/iy7sv/4743d7f426.jpg And I rotate (4) like this http://puu.sh/iy7u3/2d7a0c6cde.jpg
7. 00:33:810 (2) - Simply blanket it would look better imo... http://puu.sh/iy7w6/72bc650669.jpg
8. 00:35:879 (1,2) - same shape, boring... http://puu.sh/iy7zo/dfba7d6224.jpg No :p
9. 00:37:258 (3) - If you apply the mod above, the DS http://puu.sh/iy7Dr/b4b94faa63.jpg though I said I'm against stacking but I think there's no other choice at this case. Unless you want to change the rhythm maybe http://puu.sh/iy7Hb/a53c538c4d.jpg play better. There's too much sliders on this song already
10. 00:48:637 (1,3) - Overlapped again .-. How should I fix this one... This maybe http://puu.sh/iy7Nm/70e2ec5c04.jpg or this http://puu.sh/iy7OG/f84761a988.jpg whichever. (I personally prefer the latter, easier to DS) Dude, there's no overlaps in this location
11. 00:50:706 (4,1) - If you apply the mod above (latter case) DS-ing... http://puu.sh/iy7S2/3a1c4692fa.jpg And I'm sure you can fix the rest yourself.
12. 00:51:741 (2) - I don't think the red anchor necessary. Remove it and you'll see that I need
13. 00:54:154 (1) - Woah. Very short spinner... Furthermore you put it on Normal, I doubt new player could spin that fast .-. I suggest to just delete it. And just add a note here 00:55:189 to fill the empty part. (At least just do it on normal, the insane one could keep this spinner.)
14. 01:10:016 (4) - Maybe try to adjust the place a bit so the tail would fall on 01:08:982 (2) - ? like this http://puu.sh/iy80m/db96eeb833.jpg Although it looks nice, it makes the blanket weird
15. 01:26:913 (1) - I don't think you need NC here...
16. 01:35:189 (1,2) - uhh, blanket the tail?
17. 01:36:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer to ctrl+h so the flow would be better. And ctrl+J for even better flow. Did something different, added sliders, looks prettier and makes you feel like I didn't just Ctrl C Ctrl Ved the other kiai '-'
18. Pretty good, I only suggest for you to avoid overlaps; you seems to like them... (yes ..) And another note, I think your flow is pretty pointy at some part. One more, avoid placing slider tail at big white tick like you did here 00:49:327 (2) - here 01:22:430 (3) - and many other places; use them only on certain places like before breaks, spinners, and something like that. I'll keep for now but I can change

[Margherita]

1. 00:30:361 (1,2,3) - For three sliders like this I prefer this pattern http://puu.sh/iy8oK/676e912e98.jpg or maybe add a little jumps http://puu.sh/iy8rf/be957ba010.jpg (switch (2) and (3)'s places) Second picture applied
2. 00:38:637 (1,2,3) - umm, make a triangle maybe This is a triangle x.x
3. 00:40:016 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
4. 00:42:085 (1,2,3,4) - I would prefer expanding jumps.... And maybe spins a little http://puu.sh/iy8wG/fb734f61cf.jpg
5. 00:49:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the star shape, use this compose -> create polygon circles -> 5 points, adjust DS and reposition the notes. http://puu.sh/iy8AA/5b5710590c.png THANK YOU SO MUCH I DIDN'T KNOW I COULD DO THAT :O
6. 00:51:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ and you better stack 00:52:085 (6) - with (5) Did something different
7. 00:52:430 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ and all of the star shape xD ^
8. 00:58:292 (3,4) - Maybe making them identical would look neater.
9. 01:03:120 (2) - umm, fix the shape maybe http://puu.sh/iy8Ir/5e665ae356.jpg
10. 01:10:016 (3) - overlap... BTW, this is a nice slider 01:09:327 (2) - I would like to make imitation of it and place it as (3) http://puu.sh/iy8LQ/76335eb0a9.jpg (I stack (1) with the head instead of with the tail)
11. 01:24:844 (4) - Same as before ^ http://puu.sh/iy8Ir/5e665ae356.jpg
12. 01:31:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah, fix the polygonal shape too, use the same technique to make star, use 6 points instead.
13. Wow, I like this one nice jumps, nice patterns ^^ Thanks ^^

Okay that's all :3
That background making me hungry x-x
Good luck anyway~

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Why? ;__; I liked the normal as it was. x'D

Modem wrote:

Hi~! From M4M~!

General

Your hitsound is super unique! I love it~!
Your background is 1280 x 720 while the criteria for rank is 1024 x 768.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

It would be best if you crop it into the rankable size
There is no storyboard in this map, so I suggest you to turn off the Widescreen Support
Others are pretty fine~!

Small

00:13:810 (5) I guess you need to add new combo colour here since 9 is too long for beginners
00:32:430 (4) You can improve your hitsound here by changing the sampleset into the drum, then add clap at the head on this slider's head
00:32:775 (4) Do that ^ for this slider's tail as well
00:33:120 (1) You really need to add finish at the head of this slider since the main music suggests it
00:38:637 (1) Add finish at the head of this slider to emphasize the the main music
00:44:154 (1) Here ^ too
00:49:672 (1) Here too. You need to add finish at the head o this slider to support the music
00:53:810 (3) Please add finish at this note as well
00:55:189 Add a note please~! Since you add a repeated slider at 00:55:879 (1) to map the music over there, then, it would be best if you also map the music at 00:55:189 right? Anyway, it feels a bit weird if you leave this part -> 00:55:189 empty while you add a repeated slider at 00:55:879 (1)
00:58:637 (2,3) This blanket is almost perfect. Just move 00:58:982 (3) to x:252 y:76 to improve the placement
01:13:120 (3) This slider's head is touching this slider's tail -> 01:11:741 a bit. Consider to remove it into x:120 y:92 to make it safe. It would also form a nice triangle-shaped flow and it won't cause any DS proble, so don't worry to move it over there
01:16:568 (1) Remove the new combo colour to keep it consistent with this slider -> 00:32:430 (4)
01:16:568 (1) Same as before, you could improve the histound here by changing the sampleset into the drum, then add clap at the head on this slider's head
01:16:913 (1) Do that ^ for this slider's tail as well~!
01:22:775 (1) Please add finish at the head of this slider since the music suggests it
01:33:810 (1) Do that ^ for this slider as well~!
Pretty neat diff <3

Medium

Hp Drain Rate should be at least 4 since this diff referred to Normal diff.
I guess CS should be 3 since you use 2 at the previous diff.
Ummmm...... Why did you use the same SV like the 'Small' diff? It isn't rankable. You should give SV the space for each diff. in the mapset. If you use 2.00 SV at 'Small' diff, then this diff's SV should be 2.20~2.40
00:18:637 ~ 00:20:706 It's a nice heptagon-shaped flow. But, in my opinion, this seven sustained notes is a bit too hard for beginner players, since they would definitely try to play this diff. It would be nice if you change it into another easier flow like changing 00:19:327 (3,4) and 00:20:016 (5,6) into 1/1 slider
00:24:499 (4,1) This note is almost covering the tail of this slider -> 00:23:810 (4) and it causing an overlap. That kind of flow isn't looks nice in normal diff. since the beginner players would absolutely try to play this diff. and they might click this note -> 00:24:499 (1) too early due to this overlap. So, it would be nice if you move this note to another safer place like x:119 y:71. Don't forget to fix the DS afterwards
00:31:396 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Just make this slider -> 00:31:051 (3) a bit more curvy
00:32:085 (4,5) This blanket too ^. But you can make it curvy in another way. Just copy and paste this slider -> 00:33:120 (1) then rotate it 90 degrees clockwise 3 times, then reverse selection
00:33:120 (1) Add finish at the head of this slider please
00:33:637 Add a note and put it at x:64 y:212 please~! It flows pretty nice along with the main music
00:34:154 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Just make this slider -> 00:34:499 (4) less curvy
00:36:568 (3,4) Please fix this blanket as well
00:38:637 (1) Please add finish at the head of this slider
00:44:154 (1) Here too ^
00:48:637 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Move the center point of the slider's frame one grid upper
00:49:672 (1) Same here, please add finish at the head of this slider
00:52:430 (1) Here too ^
00:53:120 (1) Here as well ^
00:53:810 (3) Same here ^
00:57:603 (5,1) Please fix this blanket. Move the center point of this slider -> 00:57:948 (1) two grids lower
00:57:948 ~ 01:04:844 Same suggestion as 00:18:637 ~ 00:20:706
01:15:534 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Make his slider -> 01:15:189 (3) a bit curvy
01:17:258 (1) Why no finish on head? :'( The music is strongly suggests it
01:22:775 (1) Here too ^
01:37:948 (3) Add finish at this note please~!

Large

Margherita

Not done yet~! Please wait~! (= w =)/

Modem wrote:

Hi~! From M4M~!

General

Your hitsound is super unique! I love it~!
Your background is 1280 x 720 while the criteria for rank is 1024 x 768.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

It would be best if you crop it into the rankable size
There is no storyboard in this map, so I suggest you to turn off the Widescreen Support in all diff. in this mapset
Others are pretty fine~!

Small

00:13:810 (5) I guess you need to add new combo colour here since 9 is too long for beginners (added on the note at 00:13:465 - )
00:32:430 (4) You can improve your hitsound here by changing the sampleset into the drum, then add clap at the head on this slider's head
00:32:775 (4) Do that ^ for this slider's tail as well
00:33:120 (1) You really need to add finish at the head of this slider since the main music suggests it
00:38:637 (1) Add finish at the head of this slider to emphasize the the main music
00:44:154 (1) Here ^ too
00:49:672 (1) Here too. You need to add finish at the head o this slider to support the music
00:53:810 (3) Please add finish at this note as well
00:55:189 Add a note please~! Since you add a repeated slider at 00:55:879 (1) to map the music over there, then, it would be best if you also map the music at 00:55:189 right? Anyway, it feels a bit weird if you leave this part -> 00:55:189 empty while you add a repeated slider at 00:55:879 (1)
00:58:637 (2,3) This blanket is almost perfect. Just move 00:58:982 (3) to x:252 y:76 to improve the placement
01:13:120 (3) This slider's head is touching this slider's tail -> 01:11:741 a bit. Consider to remove it into x:120 y:92 to make it safe. It would also form a nice triangle-shaped flow and it won't cause any DS proble, so don't worry to move it over there
01:16:568 (1) Remove the new combo colour to keep it consistent with this slider -> 00:32:430 (4)
01:16:568 (1) Same as before, you could improve the histound here by changing the sampleset into the drum, then add clap at the head on this slider's head
01:16:913 (1) Do that ^ for this slider's tail as well~!
01:22:775 (1) Please add finish at the head of this slider since the music suggests it
01:33:810 (1) Do that ^ for this slider as well~!
Pretty neat diff <3

Medium

Hp Drain Rate should be at least 4 since this diff referred to Normal diff.
I guess CS should be 3 since you use 2 at the previous diff.
Ummmm...... Why did you use the same SV like the 'Small' diff? It isn't rankable. You should give SV the space for each diff. in the mapset. If you use 2.00 SV at 'Small' diff, then this diff's SV should be 2.20~2.40 Fixed D: This was really tiring
00:18:637 ~ 00:20:706 It's a nice heptagon-shaped flow. But, in my opinion, this seven sustained notes is a bit too hard for beginner players, since they would definitely try to play this diff. It would be nice if you change it into another easier flow like changing 00:19:327 (3,4) and 00:20:016 (5,6) into 1/1 slider I did something different
00:24:499 (4,1) This note is almost covering the tail of this slider -> 00:23:810 (4) and it causing an overlap. That kind of flow isn't looks nice in normal diff. I stacked with (4) since the beginner players would absolutely try to play this diff. and they might click this note -> 00:24:499 (1) too early due to this overlap. So, it would be nice if you move this note to another safer place like x:119 y:71. Don't forget to fix the DS afterwards
00:31:396 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Just make this slider -> 00:31:051 (3) a bit more curvy
00:32:085 (4,5) This blanket too ^. But you can make it curvy in another way. Just copy and paste this slider -> 00:33:120 (1) then rotate it 90 degrees clockwise 3 times, then reverse selection
00:33:120 (1) Add finish at the head of this slider please
00:33:637 Add a note and put it at x:64 y:212 please~! It flows pretty nice along with the main music
00:34:154 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Just make this slider -> 00:34:499 (4) less curvy
00:36:568 (3,4) Please fix this blanket as well
00:38:637 (1) Please add finish at the head of this slider
00:44:154 (1) Here too ^
00:48:637 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Move the center point of the slider's frame one grid upper
00:49:672 (1) Same here, please add finish at the head of this slider
00:52:430 (1) Here too ^
00:53:120 (1) Here as well ^ No lol, feels horrible
00:53:810 (3) Same here ^
00:57:603 (5,1) Please fix this blanket. Move the center point of this slider -> 00:57:948 (1) two grids lower
00:57:948 ~ 01:04:844 Same suggestion as 00:18:637 ~ 00:20:706
01:15:534 (3,4) This blanket can be improved. Make his slider -> 01:15:189 (3) a bit curvy
01:17:258 (1) Why no finish on head? :'( The music is strongly suggests it
01:22:775 (1) Here too ^
01:37:948 (3) Add finish at this note please~!

Margherita

This diff is referred to insane diff right? So, the HP Drain Rate Should be 7 ~ 9
CS should be 4
OD should be 8 8 o.O????? Changed to 7, this is Light Insane
00:17:258 ~ 00:17:948 There is a noisy sound around this part. It somewhat like the sound of the slider ball's movement. I wonder what is that sound?
00:31:741 (3) Move this slider to x:152 y:204 for the better placement of this blanket
00:33:120 (1) Ad finish at this note please~!
00:38:637 (1) Here ^ too
00:43:120 (6) Here ^ please~!
00:43:465 (7) Here ^ as well
00:43:810 (8) Same here~! ^
00:49:672 (1) Here too^
00:52:430 (1) Here ^ please~!
00:53:120 (5) Here ^ as well + new combo colour
00:53:810 (1) Same here~! ^
00:55:879 ~ 01:16:223 Around here is a nice and calm part. How about slow down your SV like what you did in the previous diff during this part? 0.70~0.80 would be nice ^^
01:01:396 ~ 01:02:085 The same noisy sound like before. I wonder what is that sound?
01:09:327 ~ 01:10:361 ^
01:12:430 ~ 01:13:120 ^
01:17:258 (1) Add finish at this part please~!
01:22:775 (1) Here too ^
01:27:258 (2) Here as well~! ^
01:27:603 (3) Same here~! ^
01:27:948 (5) Same ^
01:28:292 (1) Same ^
There's some questionable noisy sound at some part that I told you before. Hopefully you can fix this, since those sounds are really doesn't fit with the main music and it kinda disturb the hitsound as well I'm really sorry, but I didn't hear anything

Well, I guess, that's all~!
Good luck on ranking this~! (> w <)

small_hins wrote:

Hi~!
from my modding queue

the pizza look delicious

I eat a small pizza first.

[Small]

00:22:085 (1) - move to 00:23:810 (4) circle (not the timeline) If I do that I'll break DS, I fixed the little overlap another way

00:42:775 (3) - do like this :

photo

Sorry but I didn't see too much difference, just noticed that your blanket is off -'

(if you don't know what I mean, basicly it need to move to 00:41:396 (1) circle [not the timeline])

taste good.
[Medium]

CS = 3

00:24:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - - try to do like this

photoS

Yes, but I've fixed the overlap on the old mod so it actually looks good now


ya, the pizza is yummyyYYYY.
[Margherita]

oh, the largest pizza is coming

AR = 7-8 , I guess.
OD = 7-8 Fixed that on the old mod, sorry :/

i have nothing to say this difficulty.
ya!

oh, the pizza is 100% good


thanks for using my modding queue!

goodbye!

oh, good luck with your map.

BerkZ wrote:

Hi, comming from your M4M queue!

General

1. I recommend to change the offset to 7. Looks good but I'll leave as 17 for now till someone point that the offset is wrong

Margherita

1. 00:42:765 (5) - NC
2. 01:23:110 (2) - Blanket with 01:23:455 (3) nah
3. 01:24:144 (1) - replace with 01:23:110 (2) but mirror it vertically
4. More space between 01:26:903 (1) and 01:27:248 (2)
5. 01:27:248 (2) - Put this to x:144 y:328 to have a blanket with 01:25:524 (1). Also, you have a good transition to 01:27:593 (3,4,5,6) .
6. 00:35:179 (5) - Maybe turn this around to have blanket with 00:34:662 (2) ? Looks nice but breaks the square jump pattern
7. The spinner at the end to 01:40:696 (Or maybe delete it completely?) Removed

HappyRocket88 wrote:

haha! A lot of changes jyu has to apply. Get Rekt!

/me runs

HappyRocket88 wrote:

As I promised my friend.
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S t a n d a r d

General

1. Margueritta diff has problems in the stack latency. I'd suggest to go to Song setup, then to Advaced and reduce the stack latency in this diff. please. Rather use the same stack latency of the other diffs I guess. fixed

Small

1. Increase the vol. section of the first inherited point. Please, I can't hear the hitobjects. 00:11:051 Lol, I can hear them without problems o.O, if someone else complain I'll change
2. 00:16:568 (1,3) Just a symmetric pattern here. The could be in the same place to improve the flow. Try this. I tried to do this but the DS just don't let me make a blanket on 00:15:879 (6,2) - if I make symmetric like this
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:327 (4,5) This isn't perfectly blanket. lol. Take it as a revenge of your mod. JKK x'D :3 fixed
4. 00:33:120 (1,3) They could use the same shape for improve the loof of this pattern. alright
5. 00:35:879 (1,2,3) The rhythmical flow here doesn't fit with the song. Starting from in this part 00:35:879 the song starts ti be catchy and repetitive. Try this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed
6. 00:41:396 (1,2) ^ Same reason. I'd suggest to put Ctrl+ G and fix the next blanket. Fixed I think?
7. 00:57:603 (1,2) Wat? Fix this flow. I mean try that the cursor follow each slider's tails properly. Try this:
   
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   Fixed I think?
8. 01:08:637 (1) Don't set a downbeat here. try putting two circles instead of the slider. Okay

Medium

1. 00:05:534 (1) What's the purpose of this spinner here? It doesn't seem to fit to any part of the song for me and also it doesn't sound. Listen to it again, there's a rhythm comming on 00:05:534 (1) -
2. 00:51:051 (3,4) Rthtymical issue. Weird flow. I'd rather do Ctrl + G on this part. Why?D:
3. 01:35:189 (3,4) ^ Did something here
4. 01:15:189 (3,4) Blanket. Fixed
5. 01:17:948 (2,4) They should be in the same place. I mean, the circle in the slider's tail. DS don't let me do that sry :p
6. 01:20:016 (1,2,3) Replace these three notes for 01:21:051 (4) this slider and replace this slider 01:21:051 (4) for these three notes 01:20:016 (1,2,3) Did something similar
7. 01:21:051 (4,5) They should have the same slider shape. Like this:
   
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   The changes I just did removed this actually
8. 01:36:568 (1,2,3,4) Well. this doesn't seem tobad but I'd suggest to put it more like this to emphisize the white ticks.
   
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   Did something a bit different :3

Margheritta

AMAZING JUMPS! Love this diff. c:

1. 00:11:568 (1) Same as hard, put it the bluw tick, please. It just seem to be a 1/8 note. lol
2. 00:17:172 (2) ^
3. 00:22:689 (2) ^
4. 01:01:310 (3) ^
5. 01:06:827 (2) ^ Sorry but they are all 1/8 notes :p Listen with 25% playback
6. 00:13:465 (1) Don't set a downbeat here. try putting two circles instead of the slider. Fixed
7. 00:44:844 (5) Same as hard. Remove the repetition of this slider and set a note here to imrpove the rhythmical flow
   
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   Fixed
8. 00:46:568 (3) Remove this slider and put a circle instead of it. And in that order, add a circle here 00:46:913. Fixed

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HappyRocket88 wrote:

haha! A lot of changes jyu has to apply. Get Rekt!

/me runs

Modem wrote:

Hi~! From M4M~!

Large

This diff. referred to hard diff, so HP Drain Rate should be at least 6 ~ 7 fix
Why... did you use different hitsound at this diff? . Oh well that doesn't really the matter anyway
Wait, why did the SV in this diff is getting lower? It's 1.50 while the 'Medium' diff is 2.00. It supposed to be, the higher the diff. the SV should be faster. So, if you follow my suggestion and you use 2.20 SV, then the SV in this diff. should be 2.40 ~ 2.60 mapped this diff when the BPM is still 200-ish. now i'm confused whether to change the sv or not
00:05:534 ~ 00:09:672 Add spinner like what you did at 'Medium' diff to keep the consistency between the diff fix
00:27:603 (1) This slider's end is off beat. Consider to shorten it to the blue tick (00:28:120) fix, changed the rhythm so yeah
00:28:292 (2) Move this slider to x:232 y:260 for the better placement ^
01:20:706 (5) Add new combo colour please~! fix
The rest is nice <3 Thanks!

small_hins wrote:

Hi~!
from my modding queue

[Large]

oh, so large

the AR skip too fast. I think AR = ~6 fix to AR 7
CS = 3.5 fix

00:36:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this patten is for Insane, I guess. Try to make it better fix

01:25:534 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ fix

ya, insane feel.

BerkZ wrote:

Hi, comming from your M4M queue!

General

1. I recommend to change the offset to 7. seems too early for me so idk

jyu's Large

1. 00:22:603 (2) - Should the rhythm be like this? yep, it's 1/6 beat
2. 00:44:672 (2) - Blanket with 00:44:154 (1) ; you probably have to move 00:44:844 (3) too fix
3. 01:04:154 (2) - Replace this with 01:03:465 (1) but flip it horizontally i think the current one is fine
4. 01:20:706 (5) - NC fix
5. 01:37:603 (4) - You could make some synergy here. In 01:36:568 (1,2) , you flipped the next slider, and you could make this with 01:37:258 (3,4) too fix, kinda

HappyRocket88 wrote:

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jyu's Large

1. 00:11:626 (2) Put it correctly in the bluw tick in timeline. nah, the beat is 1/6
2. 00:16:568 (1) - 00:27:603 (1) Slider's tails aren't snapped in the timeline properly. They should finish or start in the bluw tick depending on the case. ^
3. 00:35:189 (6) Do now set a downbeat in this jumpy part. I'd suggest to remove the repetition of that slider and put a single note here
   00:35:879 Like this fix
   
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4. 01:20:534 (4,5) Put them exactly under these objects 01:20:016 (1,2). This jumpy is kind of confusing if the pattern is not symmetric. changed the pattern

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