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Plasmagica - Seishun wa Non-Stop! (Asterisk DnB Remix)

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chucentry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 21 de junio de 2015 at 2:06:08

Artist: Plasmagica
Title: Seishun wa Non-Stop! (Asterisk DnB Remix)
Source: Show By Rock!!
Tags: Show By Rock!! drum n and bass
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8367kb
Play Time: 04:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. =A= (5,54 stars, 1336 notes)
Download: Plasmagica - Seishun wa Non-Stop! (Asterisk DnB Remix)
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.mp3 by Fort

Show be rock!!

i miss laurier T.T

=A=

The end most fun in the world
Yuii-
Metadata check (NO KUDOS):

According to: http://nakama-ost.blogspot.com.ar/2015/ ... -stop.html

The title should be: Seishun wa Non-Stop!
-Visceral-
Hi! Yuii- requested some mods in a group chat so here I am ;w;

[General]
Your NCs seem very random. Try to NC around large white ticks as a start or at least have some consistency with them.
Add to tags: drum, n, and, bass
Disable letterbox (no storyboard)
Unrankable background by 2 pixels. Needs to be 1367x768
Unrankable bitrate on song MP3. Reduce to 192kbps.
You have some unused hitsounds I believe. Go back and delete all of the ones you didn't use. (Might be wrong)

[=A=]
00:03:513 (6) - I would either go with one of two things here. http://i.imgur.com/yv3Nu0C.jpg forms a perfect triangle with 5 and 1 and fits nicely between 3 and 4 (equidistant), or at the very least you should move 6 so its equidistant from 3 and 4. It's ever so slightly off right now ;~;

00:09:170 (1,3,5) - Form an equal. triangle with these 3 and move 6 to ~x:215, y:6

00:21:426 (6,1) - This played well. I'm predicting people will ask you to change it so I'm pointing it out that I like it how it is.

00:30:427 (3,5,1,2) - Form a square with these 4. REMEMBER TO USE THE TOOL TO MAKE SQUARES (Create Polygon Circles). If it is imperfect it will be unrankable.

00:40:970 - Unmapped drum hit. Consider making it a stream of 5 notes here instead of 3

01:05:398 (2,3,4) - Space these out more. Pretty impossible to read otherwise.

01:08:484 (1) - Not a fan of this slider ending on that white tick. Consider shortening it to the red tick and starting a new slider the same distance where it once ended. As it stands, it ends on a tick that has a kind of *punch* to it, if you understand what I'm saying.

01:39:170 - It would be best to have a note here.

01:41:313 - Same situation as 00:40:970

01:48:256 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/04VlWaD.png This flows better.

01:48:770 (5,7) - I don't like the way these overlap. Consider http://i.imgur.com/WXgCrjs.png for cleaner flow and better looks

02:34:113 - Feels rather empty here. Consider filling this in with a slider instead of a circle (3)

03:21:341 (7,2) - The reverse slider isn't perfectly in the middle of the circular slider.

03:34:798 (4,5) - I think you can stretch these out a bit. Also, try to have them lead into 03:35:056 (6) for better flow

04:08:141 (3,4,5) - Move 4 down a bit to make it more linear. Looks sloppy otherwise.

04:28:198 (4,6) - Have these mirror each other. Looks and plays awkward otherwise.

04:48:770 (2) - Not a fan of sliders this long reversing more than once. Extremely difficult to read and are boring to play.

04:44:827 (1,2,3) - Equal. triangle
Topic Starter
chucentry

Smoothie World wrote:

Hi! Yuii- requested some mods in a group chat so here I am ;w;

[General]
Your NCs seem very random. Try to NC around large white ticks as a start or at least have some consistency with them.
Add to tags: drum, n, and, bass
Disable letterbox (no storyboard)
Unrankable background by 2 pixels. Needs to be 1367x768
Unrankable bitrate on song MP3. Reduce to 192kbps.
You have some unused hitsounds I believe. Go back and delete all of the ones you didn't use. (Might be wrong)

[=A=]
00:03:513 (6) - I would either go with one of two things here. http://i.imgur.com/yv3Nu0C.jpg forms a perfect triangle with 5 and 1 and fits nicely between 3 and 4 (equidistant), or at the very least you should move 6 so its equidistant from 3 and 4. It's ever so slightly off right now ;~;

00:09:170 (1,3,5) - Form an equal. triangle with these 3 and move 6 to ~x:215, y:6

00:21:426 (6,1) - This played well. I'm predicting people will ask you to change it so I'm pointing it out that I like it how it is.

00:30:427 (3,5,1,2) - Form a square with these 4. REMEMBER TO USE THE TOOL TO MAKE SQUARES (Create Polygon Circles). If it is imperfect it will be unrankable.

00:40:970 - Unmapped drum hit. Consider making it a stream of 5 notes here instead of 3

01:05:398 (2,3,4) - Space these out more. Pretty impossible to read otherwise.

01:08:484 (1) - Not a fan of this slider ending on that white tick. Consider shortening it to the red tick and starting a new slider the same distance where it once ended. As it stands, it ends on a tick that has a kind of *punch* to it, if you understand what I'm saying.

01:39:170 - It would be best to have a note here.

01:41:313 - Same situation as 00:40:970

01:48:256 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/04VlWaD.png This flows better.

01:48:770 (5,7) - I don't like the way these overlap. Consider http://i.imgur.com/WXgCrjs.png for cleaner flow and better looks

02:34:113 - Feels rather empty here. Consider filling this in with a slider instead of a circle (3)

03:21:341 (7,2) - The reverse slider isn't perfectly in the middle of the circular slider.

03:34:798 (4,5) - I think you can stretch these out a bit. Also, try to have them lead into 03:35:056 (6) for better flow

04:08:141 (3,4,5) - Move 4 down a bit to make it more linear. Looks sloppy otherwise.

04:28:198 (4,6) - Have these mirror each other. Looks and plays awkward otherwise.

04:48:770 (2) - Not a fan of sliders this long reversing more than once. Extremely difficult to read and are boring to play.

04:44:827 (1,2,3) - Equal. triangle
Thanks for modding
Marawishka
Nice
benjacala
please rank
Alisson
Any chance of this being ranked? This map is so fun!!!! Easily one of my favorites
Livia
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3966362
is offset worng? i think 00:00:278
Topic Starter
chucentry

sougekka wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3966362
is offset worng? i think 00:00:278
I changed the mp3 so i think you need delete the map and them dowload it
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