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Utawa Sakura feat. Hatsune Miku - Dear

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poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月6日 at 下午 10:27:19

Artist: Utawa Sakura feat. Hatsune Miku
Title: Dear
Source: 19's Sound Factory
Tags: Vocaloid
BPM: 135
Filesize: 16656kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.27 stars, 67 notes)
  2. Hard (4.77 stars, 616 notes)
  3. Normal (3.57 stars, 342 notes)
Download: Utawa Sakura feat. Hatsune Miku - Dear
Download: Utawa Sakura feat. Hatsune Miku - Dear (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first beatmap. I hope everything works fine.

- Easy 100%
- Normal 100%
- Hard 100%

2011 / 01 / 04 Source changed to 19's Sound Factory. Vocaloid added to tags.

- Special Thanks to Baka_Hideyoshi
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Reiyoru-
109 posts
Joined September 2009
Reiyoru-
線的部份....放的挺亂的
放在NOTE上就好了，不必提前放
當然，結束也請在NOTE上 :)
也設置一些KIAI吧@@~挺少的
樓主可以按CTRL+SHIFT+A
檢查自己哪裏又問題=ˇ=

STAR~ :)
Reiyoru-
109 posts
Joined September 2009
Reiyoru-
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60
另外，這地方是MOD的地方@@~
你可以把你的MAP給別人MOD
不過，每個人都有每個人的規則
最好都看看吧~"~都英文有點苦惱
可以給很多人MOD~這就樣=ˇ=
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

cscs3158 wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60
另外，這地方是MOD的地方@@~
你可以把你的MAP給別人MOD
不過，每個人都有每個人的規則
最好都看看吧~"~都英文有點苦惱
可以給很多人MOD~這就樣=ˇ=
唔... 謝謝, 雖然我之前就知道了="=a
我是想把全部作完以後再去找人mod.
先po出來只是想知道我哪些地方做得不好, 哪裡做的好.
後面作圖才有一個大方向.
這幾天也都一直在蒐集資料 (就是在玩嘛 爆
大概知道該怎麼做了.

不過還是感謝拉~
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
EZ:
为什么不从00:16:561开始map……
00:30:784 (1) - EZ怎么会有跳……会死人的(喂)
00:30:784 (1) - 加一个圈
00:34:563 (2) - isn't snapped
00:51:228 - 没有必要留空白
01:37:006 (2,3,4) - whistle下的很乱 请修正

NM:
01:09:451 (4) - spacing
02:12:672 (3) - 往后拖1/4 并延长1/4
02:14:450 (4) - ^


good work!

PS:我想拿个GD……
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

yangzd88 wrote:

SPOILER
EZ:
为什么不从00:16:561开始map……
00:30:784 (1) - EZ怎么会有跳……会死人的(喂)
00:30:784 (1) - 加一个圈
00:34:563 (2) - isn't snapped
00:51:228 - 没有必要留空白
01:37:006 (2,3,4) - whistle下的很乱 请修正

NM:
01:09:451 (4) - spacing
02:12:672 (3) - 往后拖1/4 并延长1/4
02:14:450 (4) - ^


good work!

PS:我想拿个GD……
感謝modding
全部都已修正。
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Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

I will mod this map in a while. I've got some things to do first, and then I will get right to it!! (yay for you!)

But to let you know...Since your map still isnt fully made, I will not Star it...But I will mod it before and after, and if I like it...You'll get my STAR!!! (Since I prefer to look at the whole entire mapset completed...But don't worry, I'll mod the stuff you have now, and then the others later!)

Thanks...Just hold out for a bit :P
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

SPOILER
Hey.

I will mod this map in a while. I've got some things to do first, and then I will get right to it!! (yay for you!)

But to let you know...Since your map still isnt fully made, I will not Star it...But I will mod it before and after, and if I like it...You'll get my STAR!!! (Since I prefer to look at the whole entire mapset completed...But don't worry, I'll mod the stuff you have now, and then the others later!)

Thanks...Just hold out for a bit :P
Thanks a lot. In fact, I prefer to get some comments rather than a star :p
Because comments makes the map better, but stars doesn't really do the same thing.

So can you please also have a look at my Hard if you don't mind?
I really need some comments on that, since it's my first map and I'm a bit lost atm.
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Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi there :)
This is still wip so I'll just give you some tips
[General]
Kiai is better on the down beat (long white tick). so for example, you should start kiai in 01:14:783. Kiai will emphasize the music/lyric more better if you put it on down beat

[Easy]
In easy it's preferable to start every note on 1/1 beat (white tick). Of course it's okay to start note at 1/2 beat (red tick) but try to make them into slider first, for example 00:17:895 (2,3) - make these into slider and then when you come again into a similar beat (00:19:672 (1,2) - ), make it into circle. This is so that novice player can predict if it is 1/1 or 1/2 beat. Basically slider first then circle (for me anyway xD)
For the difficulty setup easy, overall difficulty and hp drain usually not more than 3 so you might want to check this again

[Normal]
As the difficulty rise you should also increase the slider velocity (SV).
The distance between notes will increase as you rise the SV, so instead of rising the distance snap (DS) increase the SV and keep the DS.
DS that's usually used are 0.8 and 1 but this will change depending on the SV and BPM of the song
The break in 01:00:117 and 00:51:339 are not good, the lyric is still continuing so why the break?

I can still going on and on but I'll stop here xD
Anyway if you need help just PM me, I can even make you a diff if you want ;)
Well keep working on it and good luck
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Sallad4ever wrote:

SPOILER
Hi there :)
This is still wip so I'll just give you some tips
[General]
Kiai is better on the down beat (long white tick). so for example, you should start kiai in 01:14:783. Kiai will emphasize the music/lyric more better if you put it on down beat

[Easy]
In easy it's preferable to start every note on 1/1 beat (white tick). Of course it's okay to start note at 1/2 beat (red tick) but try to make them into slider first, for example 00:17:895 (2,3) - make these into slider and then when you come again into a similar beat (00:19:672 (1,2) - ), make it into circle. This is so that novice player can predict if it is 1/1 or 1/2 beat. Basically slider first then circle (for me anyway xD)
For the difficulty setup easy, overall difficulty and hp drain usually not more than 3 so you might want to check this again

[Normal]
As the difficulty rise you should also increase the slider velocity (SV).
The distance between notes will increase as you rise the SV, so instead of rising the distance snap (DS) increase the SV and keep the DS.
DS that's usually used are 0.8 and 1 but this will change depending on the SV and BPM of the song
The break in 01:00:117 and 00:51:339 are not good, the lyric is still continuing so why the break?

I can still going on and on but I'll stop here xD
Anyway if you need help just PM me, I can even make you a diff if you want ;)
Well keep working on it and good luck
Thanks for the advices, they are very helpful.
Working on them at the moment.
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Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey! :P Finally got time!

[Easy]
Appears fine to me...
Suggestion: Maybe map out the entire song? It would appear better than just the first minute...Since with the vid and all...

[Normal]
00:22:117 (6) - move 1 grid left so its alligned with 5
00:31:228 (2) - extend this slider to end at 00:31:672 (this sounds better to me)
00:51:450 (x) - add a spinner here...the break here seems ugly! Add a spinner that starts at 00:51:450 and ends at 00:53:006
01:11:228 - 01:13:339 - this seems to hard for normal...make these into repeating sliders or just sliders (or even replace this with a spinner at 01:11:228 and make it end at 01:13:006) Choose which ever one you want to do, sliders or a spinner.
01:27:894 (5) - move 2 grids down and 2 right...So that it is alligned with the 3
02:33:894 (2) - unstack this note and space it out (resnap afterwards)
02:39:672 (2) - ^ same thing
02:50:783 - 02:52:894 - this also seems to hard for normal...do as i mentioned before above.
03:22:783 (x) - add a note here
03:23:006 (6) - OW MY EARS! Lol...remove the clap, the finish itself is fine
03:24:783 (4) - ^ same thing
03:42:783 (3) - unstack this and space it out...(resnap afterwards)
03:53:894 (1,1) - space these last 2 notes out properly

[Hard]
Hmm...OH! YOUR MAPS NOT FINISHED! THERES YOUR PROBLEM! LOL :D
00:45:450 (x) - add a note here
00:49:117 (1,2) - move back 1 tick so it starts at 00:49:006
00:50:894 (5,6) - ^ same thing, and remove the repeat on 6
00:55:450 (4) - move this slider back to start at 00:55:006 and extend it to end at 00:55:561
Looking good so far...Just finish up the rest of it!

Overall...Its looking good so far! Keep it up! Finish off Hard and Insane, and get back to me Via PM or online :P

GOOD LUCK!
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

SPOILER
Hey! :P Finally got time!

[Easy]
Appears fine to me...
Suggestion: Maybe map out the entire song? It would appear better than just the first minute...Since with the vid and all...

[Normal]
00:22:117 (6) - move 1 grid left so its alligned with 5
00:31:228 (2) - extend this slider to end at 00:31:672 (this sounds better to me)
00:51:450 (x) - add a spinner here...the break here seems ugly! Add a spinner that starts at 00:51:450 and ends at 00:53:006
01:11:228 - 01:13:339 - this seems to hard for normal...make these into repeating sliders or just sliders (or even replace this with a spinner at 01:11:228 and make it end at 01:13:006) Choose which ever one you want to do, sliders or a spinner.
01:27:894 (5) - move 2 grids down and 2 right...So that it is alligned with the 3
02:33:894 (2) - unstack this note and space it out (resnap afterwards)
02:39:672 (2) - ^ same thing
02:50:783 - 02:52:894 - this also seems to hard for normal...do as i mentioned before above.
03:22:783 (x) - add a note here
03:23:006 (6) - OW MY EARS! Lol...remove the clap, the finish itself is fine
03:24:783 (4) - ^ same thing
03:42:783 (3) - unstack this and space it out...(resnap afterwards)
03:53:894 (1,1) - space these last 2 notes out properly

[Hard]
Hmm...OH! YOUR MAPS NOT FINISHED! THERES YOUR PROBLEM! LOL :D
00:45:450 (x) - add a note here
00:49:117 (1,2) - move back 1 tick so it starts at 00:49:006
00:50:894 (5,6) - ^ same thing, and remove the repeat on 6
00:55:450 (4) - move this slider back to start at 00:55:006 and extend it to end at 00:55:561
Looking good so far...Just finish up the rest of it!

Overall...Its looking good so far! Keep it up! Finish off Hard and Insane, and get back to me Via PM or online :P

GOOD LUCK!
Thanks heaps! here's your kd~
I'll be working on yours after I finish the one before.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
revived
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hello~
[Easy]
Why it hasn't the same lenght as the other diff D:

[Normal]
01:47:895 (6) - This slider sounds weird o.o
02:10:228 (2) - Move 1/4 later

[Hard]
00:27:894 (5,6) - Offscreen
01:09:117 (3) - Sounds wrong
02:41:006 (4) - Finish at the beginning
You must add a tming section to end the kiai time

*Shoot a star* :)
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hello~
[Easy]
Why it hasn't the same lenght as the other diff D: I thought it would be easier for beginners, wouldn't it? Working on it anyways.

[Normal]
01:47:895 (6) - This slider sounds weird o.o any ideas to fix it?
02:10:228 (2) - Move 1/4 later changed to sliders

[Hard]
00:27:894 (5,6) - Offscreen done
01:09:117 (3) - Sounds wrong done
02:41:006 (4) - Finish at the beginning a whistle is used instead
You must add a tming section to end the kiai time done

*Shoot a star* :)
thx for modding, here's your kd. :3
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wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Refers to grid lv 4

[Hard]
0:11:672 (2,3) (2) up 1 grid, (3) left 1 grid
0:16:117 delete break
0:38:561 (3,5) (3) right 1 grid, (5) left 1 grid
0:53:450 (2,3) stack properly
0:56:450 (10) up 1 grid
1:06:783 (4,6) (4) down 1 grid, (6) left 1 grid
1:08:006 (2) left 1 grid
1:37:672 (8) right 1 grid
1:39:450 (6) down 1 grid+right 2 grids
2:11:006 (4,5,6) stack properly


nice to see someone so map with grid lv4, but the precision of spacing can be improved~
Try to snap some notes like the above in hard, as well as other diffs :D

star~
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

wmfchris wrote:

SPOILER
Refers to grid lv 4

[Hard]
0:11:672 (2,3) (2) up 1 grid, (3) left 1 grid
0:16:117 delete break
0:38:561 (3,5) (3) right 1 grid, (5) left 1 grid
0:53:450 (2,3) stack properly
0:56:450 (10) up 1 grid
1:06:783 (4,6) (4) down 1 grid, (6) left 1 grid
1:08:006 (2) left 1 grid
1:37:672 (8) right 1 grid
1:39:450 (6) down 1 grid+right 2 grids
2:11:006 (4,5,6) stack properly


nice to see someone so map with grid lv4, but the precision of spacing can be improved~
Try to snap some notes like the above in hard, as well as other diffs :D

star~

Thx for modding!
It was mapped in lv 3 tho, I didn't notice lv 4's available until few weeks ago lol.


All done. Reviewing all diffs for position snapping.
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Aria
174 posts
Joined September 2010
Aria
Hi~ :)
Overall
Nothing

Hard
softclap1是个finish音. interesting
00:11:006 (10) - 建议设置一个来回slider, 长度缩短一半 来回一次 时间轴不变
00:13:672 (16) - 也是建议设置一个往返slider 头尾压在红线上 然后00:14:228 (17) add note
00:21:006 (2) - whistle?
00:22:561 (7) - ^?
00:23:673 (1) - ^?
00:27:449 (4) - ^?
00:44:561 从这个时间开始歌曲的感觉相对于前面就像奔跑和行走 建议大胆的加速 体现这个感觉 保持住连贯性..中间少了note是很不舒服的事情 (大胆3连 或在slider中间加note什么的>.>/) 毕竟整首歌都缓缓的 会不会........无聊>.>?
01:27:228 (8,9,10) - 不够激情啊...加大snap divisor 放点跳感试试>?
以下是个组合change
03:47:450 (11) - remove finish
03:47:672 (12) - add a note and add finish
03:47:728 (1) - open 1/8 and spin starts here 注意尾部缩短一点
03:50:117 (3) - fin?
超好听啊超好听

Normal
01:14:783 (1) - amazing hitsound choose starts here 为啥 hard没有?
质量很高的normal 没什么好说的

Easy
你消声了slidertick和lide? 找MAT和BAT的时候小心点...很多MAT不让这么做...2的人挺多什么的,
质量也很高 不说什么废话了.

Star~
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Clickz wrote:

Hi~ :)
Overall
Nothing

Hard
softclap1是个finish音. interesting
00:11:006 (10) - 建议设置一个来回slider, 长度缩短一半 来回一次 时间轴不变 done
00:13:672 (16) - 也是建议设置一个往返slider 头尾压在红线上 然后00:14:228 (17) add note done
00:21:006 (2) - whistle? done
00:22:561 (7) - ^? a whistle is added on 00:22:783 instead
00:23:673 (1) - ^? done
00:27:449 (4) - ^? done
00:44:561 从这个时间开始歌曲的感觉相对于前面就像奔跑和行走 建议大胆的加速 体现这个感觉 保持住连贯性..中间少了note是很不舒服的事情 (大胆3连 或在slider中间加note什么的>.>/) 毕竟整首歌都缓缓的 会不会........无聊>.>? 這裡當初作的時候也是很苦惱阿...All done, distance changed to x1.5
01:27:228 (8,9,10) - 不够激情啊...加大snap divisor 放点跳感试试>? done. snap distance changed to x1.90
以下是个组合change
03:47:450 (11) - remove finish
03:47:672 (12) - add a note and add finish
03:47:728 (1) - open 1/8 and spin starts here 注意尾部缩短一点
03:50:117 (3) - fin?
done
超好听啊超好听
:3

Normal
01:14:783 (1) - amazing hitsound choose starts here 为啥 hard没有?
cause I think the hitsound doesn't really fit the rythm in hard. I tried it once, and screwed the whole map lol.
质量很高的normal 没什么好说的

Easy
你消声了slidertick和lide? 找MAT和BAT的时候小心点...很多MAT不让这么做...2的人挺多什么的,
考慮了一下還是不打算放了... 很破壞歌的美感
质量也很高 不说什么废话了.

Star~
感謝modding, kd發射。

All done.
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Grid level: 4
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Hard:

01:25:450 (4) - New combo
03:51:339 (1) - This slider finish in 03:58:339 :?:

Normal:

Change the name to Normal+ D:

02:16:561 (5) - 2 grids up
02:50:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Very hard for a normal, better replace with a slider.
02:57:006 (5) - New combo
03:00:561 (4) - ^
03:04:117 (4) - ^

Easy:

00:49:894 (4) - New combo
01:04:117 (3) - ^
01:09:450 (4) - ^
01:25:450 (4) - ^


-3-
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Verdisphena wrote:

Grid level: 4
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Hard:

01:25:450 (4) - New combo
03:51:339 (1) - This slider finish in 03:58:339 :?:
Something else is done instead. I don't really like to have spinners that are too long.

Normal:

Change the name to Normal+ D:

02:16:561 (5) - 2 grids up
02:50:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Very hard for a normal, better replace with a slider.
I think the HP drain is low enough for players to miss the whole bunch of notes but not get failed instantly. What do you think?
02:57:006 (5) - New combo
03:00:561 (4) - ^
03:04:117 (4) - ^

Easy:

00:49:894 (4) - New combo
01:04:117 (3) - ^
01:09:450 (4) - ^
01:25:450 (4) - ^


-3-
Thx for modding.

All done.
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena

poorguyorz wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

02:50:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Very hard for a normal, better replace with a slider.
I think the HP drain is low enough for players to miss the whole bunch of notes but not get failed instantly. What do you think?
I think this is very hard for new players >_>
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz
ok, I will think of a better way to replace.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
[hard]

fine

[normal+]

00:28:562 (2,3,4) - fix triangle
03:06:339 (2) - stack on 1


[easy]

fine

good map, star
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

SPOILER
[hard]

fine

[normal+]

00:28:562 (2,3,4) - fix triangle
03:06:339 (2) - stack on 1


[easy]

fine

good map, star
all done.
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
Remove Vocaloid Hatsune Miku from tags, it's already in the artist and sources

Easy
Good

Normal+
00:32:783 (6) - add whistle
Don't sure that it's normal+, i think it's normal..

Hard
Didn' see smth bad

Good map, star
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove Vocaloid Hatsune Miku from tags, it's already in the artist and sources

Easy
Good

Normal+
00:32:783 (6) - add whistle
Don't sure that it's normal+, i think it's normal..
I agree with you. Let's see if someone else think it's too hard as a normal.

Hard
Didn' see smth bad

Good map, star
Thanks for modding.

all done.
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LesTrucsRoses
271 posts
Joined July 2010
LesTrucsRoses
Normal
SPOILER
01:20:117 (5) - Add the FINISH hitsound to this beat.

Very good.

Hard
SPOILER
01:37:006 (5,7) - Add the FINISH hitsound to 5 and 7.
01:44:561 - End the Kiai time here.
03:09:672 (2) - Move this beat back by 1 tick.
03:09:894 (x) - Add a beat here.

Nice beatmap. Good job.
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal
SPOILER
01:20:117 (5) - Add the FINISH hitsound to this beat.

Very good.

Hard
SPOILER
01:37:006 (5,7) - Add the FINISH hitsound to 5 and 7.
01:44:561 - End the Kiai time here.
03:09:672 (2) - Move this beat back by 1 tick.
03:09:894 (x) - Add a beat here.

Nice beatmap. Good job.
all done.
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone

Clickz wrote:

超好听啊超好听
Cuuuuri
315 posts
Joined April 2009
Cuuuuri
awesome song ad map!★
* 2 osb in the folder :shock:
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz

Qrool wrote:

awesome song ad map!★
* 2 osb in the folder :shock:
Thxx.


Honestly, I don't know why there are two. :O

Can I just delete both of them? It seems like it's fine to remove them from the folder.
Cuuuuri
315 posts
Joined April 2009
Cuuuuri

poorguyorz wrote:

Thxx.


Honestly, I don't know why there are two. :O

Can I just delete both of them? It seems like it's fine to remove them from the folder.
Yes u can delete 2 osb.
Unless a special reason, put out a osb.

Eric
1 post
Joined June 2010
Eric
Really nice song~
I love it!
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Hey~~
Here my mod
request by wmfchris~
===============================
BluE=Suggestion only
ReD=I think You should fix this
*Major issue are in Blod

[General]
Try offset 2783..Please resnap all note after change(please do this after reading my mod)
silence slider+silence tick=unrankale

[Easy]
01:00:561(1)-whistle here
01:02:339(2)-^
01:05:894(2)whistle at the beginning and end of the slider
01:07:672(1~3)It is hard to read for newbie because the rhythm is uneven
01:09:450(1~3)^
01:21:006(4)Remove whistle at the brginning

[Normal]
00:46:672(3)-2 grid left
01:00:339(1~8)-Missing hitsound?
01:21:006(7)-Remove whistle
01:28:117(x)-add a note here
01:35:450(4-2.3)-3grid up
01:53:894(3.4)-New combo in (3) and Finish(3.4)
02:12:339(2.3)-add a note at 02:12:561 and move 1/4 forward of (3)yo the red tick slider finish at 02:13:006
02:13:783(2.3.4)-^
02:37:894(8)-5 grid up
03:28:117(4)-New combo


[Hard]
AR+1
00:12:783(8)-New combo
00:36:561(3~8)-Sounds bad of these notes
00:41:672(2)-horizontally with(1) and make it more symmetrical
00:45:006(2~6)-Sudden Jump..Replace it and Don't change the DS suddenly
01:10:339(x)-add a note here
01:13:450(1~3.1~3)-t is no need to use X2BPM here
02:38:339(6)-New combo here
02:43:561(6.1)swap new combo
I think DS change is too chaos in this diff
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
By Mod Request:

Easy
01:00:561 (1,2,1,2) - finish on each of the ends of the sliders

Normal
02:33:672 (3) - left one grid and right one grid

Hard
hmmmm, it looks a little randomly placed, but it's good enough...

Star!

don't even kudosu this
MoonShade
487 posts
Joined February 2010
MoonShade
General
- The video could be easily rebuild as a storyboard If you would like that.
- It feels like the Timing is sometimes not accurate, but I can't help it either.

Easy
01:11:228 (1) - nazi, kinda overlaps with the last 3 circles, maybe change the slider
01:33:450 - remove whistle sound
01:35:228 - ^

Normal
00:53:451 (1,2,3,4) - this part doesn't look as nice as others, maybe think of something else here if you want
01:13:340 (10) - place this more to the bottom?
01:21:006 - remove whistle
01:54:229 (4) - make this more in a line with the previous objects (1-3)
03:40:561 (9,1) - distance spacing (too nearby)

Hard
00:11:672 (5,6,8) - overlapping
00:45:894 (4,5) - i suggest x1,50 distance spacing here

Nice Map, I would love to see it ranked. Star :3
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
very good for first map
poorguyorz
24 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
poorguyorz
kanpakyin's mod

kanpakyin wrote:

Hey~~
Here my mod
request by wmfchris~
===============================
BluE=Suggestion only
ReD=I think You should fix this
*Major issue are in Blod

[General]
Try offset 2783..Please resnap all note after change(please do this after reading my mod)
Sorry I'm not gonna change the offset since I wanna keep every first beat on the long tick.
silence slider+silence tick=unrankale Fixed

[Easy]
01:00:561(1)-whistle here
01:02:339(2)-^
01:05:894(2)whistle at the beginning and end of the slider
01:07:672(1~3)It is hard to read for newbie because the rhythm is uneven
01:09:450(1~3)^
01:21:006(4)Remove whistle at the brginning
All Fixed

[Normal]
00:46:672(3)-2 grid left
01:00:339(1~8)-Missing hitsound?
01:21:006(7)-Remove whistle
01:28:117(x)-add a note here
01:35:450(4-2.3)-3grid up
01:53:894(3.4)-New combo in (3) and Finish(3.4)
02:12:339(2.3)-add a note at 02:12:561 and move 1/4 forward of (3)yo the red tick slider finish at 02:13:006
02:13:783(2.3.4)-^
02:37:894(8)-5 grid up
03:28:117(4)-New combo
All Fixed


[Hard]
AR+1 Fixed
00:12:783(8)-New combo Fixed
00:36:561(3~8)-Sounds bad of these notes It's your personal preference imo.
00:41:672(2)-horizontally with(1) and make it more symmetrical Fixed
00:45:006(2~6)-Sudden Jump..Replace it and Don't change the DS suddenly I think it fits to the song.
01:10:339(x)-add a note here Sorry, but this note doesn't feel right to me.
01:13:450(1~3.1~3)-t is no need to use X2BPM here Fixed
02:38:339(6)-New combo here Fixed
02:43:561(6.1)swap new combo Fixed
I think DS change is too chaos in this diff
You know, the "chaos" word you use really makes people think I'm randomly puting notes in DS x0.1 and x2.0. But I have to say that none the DS changes is meanless, every DS change I use was following the pace of the song.
chamelepeace710's mod

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

Easy
01:00:561 (1,2,1,2) - finish on each of the ends of the sliders Fixed

Normal
02:33:672 (3) - left one grid and right one grid Fixed

Hard
hmmmm, it looks a little randomly placed, but it's good enough... Hmmm..

Star!

don't even kudosu this
MoonShade's mod

MoonShade wrote:

General
- The video could be easily rebuild as a storyboard If you would like that. I'd really love that, but it's beyond my ability.
- It feels like the Timing is sometimes not accurate, but I can't help it either.

Easy
01:11:228 (1) - nazi, kinda overlaps with the last 3 circles, maybe change the slider
01:33:450 - remove whistle sound
01:35:228 - ^
All Fixed

Normal
00:53:451 (1,2,3,4) - this part doesn't look as nice as others, maybe think of something else here if you want
01:13:340 (10) - place this more to the bottom?
01:21:006 - remove whistle
01:54:229 (4) - make this more in a line with the previous objects (1-3)
03:40:561 (9,1) - distance spacing (too nearby)
All Fixed

Hard
00:11:672 (5,6,8) - overlapping Fixed
00:45:894 (4,5) - i suggest x1,50 distance spacing here x1.60 is used instead.

Nice Map, I would love to see it ranked. Star :3

Thx very much for the stars and mods.

Problems in the mods should be all fixed.
I've been working on the storyboarding for the last few days and still having trouble with it.
So can anyone please give me a hand or tell me where to find help?
I'll be very grateful for that.
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nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
sorry for the delay T-T
I wonder why there are 2 results for this in direct (both of the maps are yours) here's a ss of it http://puu.sh/K7V. Check this later :P
Alright, going to the mod now~

Easy
01:09:450 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:228 (3) - I guess this will be a little hard to click for newbies D: maybe move it to the red tick?
01:27:228 (2) - uguu this slider >_< why don't you change this shape making a curve on it?

Normal
00:36:006 (5) - remove finish D:
02:17:006 (x) - add a note here

Hard
01:14:561 (x) - add a note here
02:32:561 (x) - ^

That's all ^_^ *shoots star*
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