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[Mountain]
[Mountain]
- 00:17:364 (1,1) - This double spinner feels kind of jarring, there isn't enough change in the music to justify that first spinner so I think you should get rid of it. If you insist on keeping a spinner there though, then you could just merge the two spinners into one, plays better than having them separated into 2
- 00:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream has somewhat inconsistent spacing, some of the notes are touching each other and some of them aren't. Check each note and make sure that the distance between each one is the same; it would look and play better that way.
- 00:59:707 (5,1) - You could adjust the shapes of these sliders so that they complement each other somehow eg. having them slider-blanket. I think it would look nicer that way.
- 01:11:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it would be better if you made the shapes of these streams consistent. You'll notice that the first one is curved slightly, so if you made it straight it would look nicer. Alternatively, you could curve the second stream as well.
- 02:39:478 (4,5,6) - I'm not too fond of this shape. Either make it an equilateral triangle or move (6) to x:364 y:268 so at least two of it's sides are equal in length. It would look nicer that way.
- 02:51:992 (7,8) - I'm not fond of the hitsounds on these two sliders. Nothing in the music really changes to justify these, so it seems like they come out of nowhere. Keep the hitsounds the same as the ones on the previous sliders, it will sound nicer imo.
- 02:59:192 (1,3) - You should keep these two sliders the same shape. For instance, you could make (3) a mirrored version of (1) so the pattern is symmetrical. I think it would look nicer than having two sliders that don't relate to each other whatsoever.
- 03:32:107 (1,4) - If you look closely then you'll notice that these two sliders are not parallel. While only a small suggestion, I think it would look neater if they were parallel.
- 03:34:507 (6,7) - Make these sliders go at the same angle. Unlike my previous suggestion, this can easily be noticed and I think it would look much neater if this was fixed.
- 03:43:078 (1,2,3) - Not too sure what shape you're going for here, but make it a proper square where each side has the same length and angle.
- 04:00:992 (1) - I think this spinner can easily be turned into a stream, considering that this is an X diff the players should have no problem with it, and they'll likely enjoy it more than a spinner.
- 04:37:249 (4,5,6,7) - You can improve this shape by making sure each side is equal in length. I think it would look nicer and more organised.
- 05:19:163 (1) - The sound of this spinner doesn't fit at all. Add green lines to make it so the spinner gradually gets quieter with the music, ending at 5%, so the sound at the end of the spinner is nearly silent. This would fit the music a lot better.