M4M
[Storyboard]
I'm looking forward to see it ranked
Good luck!
[Storyboard]
- 00:26:617 - bigger circles should move faster to give a nice visual effect
- 00:35:102 - It would also look nice if these mountains would be getting bigger slowly
- 01:11:490 - These dots flying from the bottom should fade away because they disappear in an instant and it looks unsightly
- 01:30:988 - For white.png you should use additive-color blending to give a nice effect. If you dont know how to do that, check this tutorial: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Storyboard_Scripting_Commands
- 01:50:702 - Very nice effect! I love it
- 02:12:045 - Why not continue this chain of red circles to the end of the stream?
- 00:20:445 (1) - I would start this spinner from 00:20:702 -
- 00:28:759 (4) - I cant see reason why is this curved that way. Straight line flows better imo
- 00:30:645 (4) - Try to move it to (333,203)
- 00:37:502 (8) - Ctrl + G because you made these sliders similar to the previous ones except this one
- 00:47:788 (1) - Red tick is more audible than the blue one imo
- 01:41:959 (3) - It needs more emphasize. 01:41:617 (1,2) - It so extreme but you suddenly slow down 01:41:788 (2,3) - here
01:48:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The second jump should be more spaced than the first because the intensiveness of the song raises here - 02:17:959 - Weird snapping here, im pretty sure there is a new BPM point but im bad at setting them
- 02:19:073 (1) - Reverse arrow is quite unexpected here and you didn't use it on further similar patterns which made me confusing when plaing
- 02:48:474 - Why slow down here? The tempo is pretty constant from 02:48:131 - this part. Also applies to next sliders
- 02:54:302 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part should use the same DS. The change of intensiveness between 02:54:559 (4,1) - these notes is barely noticeable if even.
- 03:17:274 (1,2) - The SV is sooo small compared to the tempo of the previous stream. It looks unsightly
- 04:15:731 (6) - Move to (151, 370)
I'm looking forward to see it ranked
Good luck!