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Mr.Kitty - Night Terror

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Kuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 8 June 2015 at 6:18:38 PM

Artist: Mr.Kitty
Title: Night Terror
Tags: Eternity, Synthpop, Gothic, New Wave
BPM: 150
Filesize: 7938kb
Play Time: 01:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Nightmare (3.49 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Rizen's Daydream (1.84 stars, 90 notes)
Download: Mr.Kitty - Night Terror
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mr.Kitty

Night Terrors

mrkittydm.bandcamp.com

looks like graveyard

Rizen's Daydream by Rizen
Mortem
hi.


General:
• Artist: Mr.Kitty without space between dot and K
• Add tags: eternity, synthpop, gothic, new wave
• This is optional but you should think about the BG. This BG is from album "LIFE" but you took the song from album "ETERNITY", there should be other picture. (It should be this one. But the resolution will be problem with this picture so I'm suggesting to use other BG than this. Also the BG quality is bad.
• Inconsistency in preview time. In a "Dream" difficulty isn't preview set.
• Add custom colors.
• Remove countdown.
• 00:31:283 - No need to spam with kiais.


Dream:
If this should be a Normal diff, it really doesn't look like it.
Distance snap in Normal difficulty should be constant, so no jumps like that!
• Set SV to at least 1.00x.
• 00:06:483 (1,2,3) - No, definetly no. This isn't good for a Normal players. You shouldn't map everything you hear in this case (Normal & Easy diffs). Suggestion: Make a simple slider that ends on 00:06:883 - and make a reverse arrow there. Apply the same technique here: 00:08:083 (1,2,3) -
• 00:09:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent DS. (I hope you are smart enough to figure out, where the DS problems are. Don't forget, DS must be constant).
• 00:12:883 (1,4) - Also this pattern isn't really suitable for Normal difficulty. (4) shouldn't be under the (1). It's really messed up pattern.
• 00:13:283 (2,3,2,3) - Fix blankets.
• 00:22:483 (1) - Please use different pattern. (Not two reverse arrows, one is enough).
• 00:25:683 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - These notes keeps overlaping each other.


I stop the mod for a Dream here, because there is much you should fix. You can check a ranked beatmap to get some inspiration. This isn't a Normal difficulty. After you fix major things like DS and patterns and you will be convinced, that this diff is playable, you can poke me and I'll take a look once again.


Nightmare:
Ah...if this is an Insane difficulty, then you have really bad spread between those two difficulties. This song isn't actually suitable for making an overmapped beatmap. You should map it in Hard style.
• 00:36:283 (4,5,6) - These patterns doesn't follow anything. There are lot of them in this difficulty, not just here.


This mapset needs to be remapped/reworked. As I said earlier, after YOU consider this playable/rankable, then poke me again and I'll mod it.
Rizen
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Mr. Kitty - Night Terrror (Short Ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31683
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12883,19283,25683
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Night Terror
TitleUnicode:Night Terror
Artist:Mr. Kitty
ArtistUnicode:Mr. Kitty
Creator:Kuki
Version:Rizen's Daydream
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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