Jeff Williams - Mirror Mirror (Featuring Casey Lee Williams) · forum

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-04-14T12:39:39+00:00

As requested.

[TestApple's Easy]
Your spinners at 01:27:844 (1) - and 02:41:712 (1) - are extremely long. For some newbie players, spinner may be the hardest thing, it's not appropriate to place spinners with tremendous length.

00:21:310 - This green line should be snapped to 00:21:313

00:21:210 (1) - I'd suggest enhancing the spacings in the beginning part to avoid slight overlaps between notes.

01:45:926 (1,1) - Better to remove them, sudden two notes feel quite weird.

02:18:803 (1,1) - 02:19:625 (2,2) - You have to change this pattern, such overlaps are not allowed.

[Normal]
01:45:926 (1) - There are two timing lines.

01:05:036 (2,3) - Uhm not sure about this but better not to place 1/4 rhythms in Normal Same for latter sections.

02:41:712 (1) - This is just long. For some newbie players, spinner may be the hardest thing, it's not appropriate to place spinners with tremendous length.

01:53:734 (1) - Enhancing spacings from here is reasonable but you've done it exaggeratedly.

01:59:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why suddenly follow plain 1/2 here? :< You should continue following instrument that you followed at 01:53:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .

02:06:474 (1) - This feels quite weird. Actually I suggest removing the previous slider for it's weird to have a slider ending at where there are both strong beat and vocal.
And you could start a slider at where you've placed the spinner end to follow the vocal instead.

[Rtyzen's Hard]
00:47:041 (1,1) - Not enought time for spinner recovery. (Hard)

00:31:043 (4) - Ah this is overmapped. Overmap in such a soft and calm part of a song is quite inappropriate.

00:51:690 (5,6) - There is no 1/8s at all!
00:56:611 (1,2,3) - Dont quite get your idea why suddenly enhanced the spacings here compared to other similar notes like 00:54:145 (3,4,5) - where their spacings are not enhanced at all.

01:51:680 (1) - Too sudden and short.

02:02:981 (2,3) - Spacing just too large.

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Good Luck for this map!

Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2016-04-17T09:54:52+00:00

Regraz

Regraz wrote:
[Rtyzen's Hard]
00:47:041 (1,1) - Not enought time for spinner recovery. (Hard)

00:31:043 (4) - Ah this is overmapped. Overmap in such a soft and calm part of a song is quite inappropriate.

00:51:690 (5,6) - There is no 1/8s at all! theres no 1/8s tho
00:56:611 (1,2,3) - Dont quite get your idea why suddenly enhanced the spacings here compared to other similar notes like 00:54:145 (3,4,5) - where their spacings are not enhanced at all.

01:51:680 (1) - Too sudden and short.

02:02:981 (2,3) - Spacing just too large.

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Good Luck for this map!

Fixed the rest

map

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Mirror_Mirror.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 20975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Mirror Mirror (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
TitleUnicode:Mirror Mirror (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Artist:Jeff Williams
ArtistUnicode:Jeff Williams
Creator:neonat
Version:Rtyzen's Hard
Source:RWBY
Tags:Ruby Weiss Schnee Red White Black Yellow Monty Oum Jinxyjem Jinxy Rtyzen aplstepitaslast TestApple
BeatmapID:712986
BeatmapSetID:320418

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2016-04-22T04:44:02+00:00

Regraz wrote:
As requested.

[TestApple's Easy]
Your spinners at 01:27:844 (1) - and 02:41:712 (1) - are extremely long. For some newbie players, spinner may be the hardest thing, it's not appropriate to place spinners with tremendous length. adjusted former spinner, ending spinner should not be an issue, they can spin enough to clear it, they do not have to go any further

00:21:310 - This green line should be snapped to 00:21:313 k

00:21:210 (1) - I'd suggest enhancing the spacings in the beginning part to avoid slight overlaps between notes. made some changes to make them not overlap but still be as close as possible to the spacing

01:45:926 (1,1) - Better to remove them, sudden two notes feel quite weird. made some adjustments here

02:18:803 (1,1) - 02:19:625 (2,2) - You have to change this pattern, such overlaps are not allowed. changed the last section

[Normal]
01:45:926 (1) - There are two timing lines. k

01:05:036 (2,3) - Uhm not sure about this but better not to place 1/4 rhythms in Normal Same for latter sections. they don't hit like 1/4s though

02:41:712 (1) - This is just long. For some newbie players, spinner may be the hardest thing, it's not appropriate to place spinners with tremendous length. drain doesn't affect and as long as they can clear the spinner it will not affect their score badly

01:53:734 (1) - Enhancing spacings from here is reasonable but you've done it exaggeratedly.

01:59:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why suddenly follow plain 1/2 here? :< You should continue following instrument that you followed at 01:53:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - . change in music, the music picked up paced and had more of the 1/2 rhythm that became more prominent

02:06:474 (1) - This feels quite weird. Actually I suggest removing the previous slider for it's weird to have a slider ending at where there are both strong beat and vocal.
And you could start a slider at where you've placed the spinner end to follow the vocal instead.kinda messes the rhythm, I changed the slider to circles instead

====================
Good Luck for this map!

Thanks~

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-09-13T00:20:39+00:00

Solitude

00:28:900 (3,4,5) - Spacing is rather uneven here...
01:24:145 (11,1) - I think you can space these closer together. The jump doesn't seem necessary imo, especially since even tho this section is rhythmically dense, there isn't a lot of emphasis being put onto these notes.
01:24:967 (5,6) - ^01:25:789 (10,1) - ^
01:26:611 (2,3) - Especially. I think jumping from an 1/8 slider hold is especially difficult.

Jinxy's Insane

00:29:354 (4,5) - Blanketting would be nice.
00:33:203 (1,2) - These would look nicer if you made the blankets more even.
01:20:858 (12) - I don't think you should end the slider with that strong note. You should try to make it clickable imo since so much emphasis is put onto it in the instruments.
01:22:913 - ^
02:09:556 (2) - I would remove the repeat and map something else here to get rid of the awkward 02:10:481 (3) - , i mean just look at the NC xp.

This rhythm works

Rtyzen's Hard

00:51:690 (5,6) - I would remove 1 repeat from each slider. This is a Hard, and 1/4 jumps are really hard to catch when they are spaced like this, especially since from 5>6 the last repeat is going leftward not rightward.
01:09:351 (8,1) - Blanket can be better. Also try and integrate the placement with 01:10:584 (3) - 's slider-end if you can.
01:26:200 (1,2) - Remove one repeat from each xP. 1/4 of a gap is enough for Hard.
01:55:378 (5) - Ctrl+G flows better.
02:05:652 (1,3) - This placement doesn't look nice honestly xP Can you find a better place for 3 that doesn't overlap or ruin the symmetrical pattern of 1 and 2

Normal

01:05:036 (2,3) - I don't think this rhythm is appropriate for a normal... Can you just use 1/2 sliders with red-anchors in the middle instead?

The bump follows the 1/4

[]
Actually hmm... After considering the whole set, I think using "Normal" for this difficulty is a bit inaccurate. The diff uses a lot of 1/4 repeat rhythms. Advanced/Hard is a better diff name for this. Also considering how dense the Easy's rhythm is, Renaming TestApple's Easy to a Normal would be more accurate to the difficulties they actually represent.

TestApple's Easy

02:15:310 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm felt a bit too simple compared to other rhythms you used in the kiai. Maybe add a circle or two on the white ticks to make the rhythm denser?

[]

That's about it. Can you give me a link or pick to an official metadata source?

neonat

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Topic Starter

neonat 2016-09-14T18:13:29+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Solitude

00:28:900 (3,4,5) - Spacing is rather uneven here... might have been due to the timing change, should look more decent now
01:24:145 (11,1) - I think you can space these closer together. The jump doesn't seem necessary imo, especially since even tho this section is rhythmically dense, there isn't a lot of emphasis being put onto these notes.
01:24:967 (5,6) - ^01:25:789 (10,1) - ^ I placed these closer but
01:26:611 (2,3) - Especially. I think jumping from an 1/8 slider hold is especially difficult. I want to place the emphasis here as well, also the gap is between them is like the rest, so they do not really have to worry about the 1/8

Jinxy's Insane

00:29:354 (4,5) - Blanketting would be nice. made it look more even
00:33:203 (1,2) - These would look nicer if you made the blankets more even. shifted the shape slightly
01:20:858 (12) - I don't think you should end the slider with that strong note. You should try to make it clickable imo since so much emphasis is put onto it in the instruments. adjusted the streams
01:22:913 - ^ this section is emphasizing the hold, so keeping the slider
02:09:556 (2) - I would remove the repeat and map something else here to get rid of the awkward 02:10:481 (3) - , i mean just look at the NC xp. changed the rhythm of the pattern here, hopefully it's less awkward now
This rhythm works

Rtyzen's Hard

will update by this weekend

Normal

01:05:036 (2,3) - I don't think this rhythm is appropriate for a normal... Can you just use 1/2 sliders with red-anchors in the middle instead?
The bump follows the 1/4
[]
Actually hmm... After considering the whole set, I think using "Normal" for this difficulty is a bit inaccurate. The diff uses a lot of 1/4 repeat rhythms. Advanced/Hard is a better diff name for this. Also considering how dense the Easy's rhythm is, Renaming TestApple's Easy to a Normal would be more accurate to the difficulties they actually represent. I shall rename them then

TestApple's Easy

02:15:310 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm felt a bit too simple compared to other rhythms you used in the kiai. Maybe add a circle or two on the white ticks to make the rhythm denser? a circle was added

[]

That's about it. Can you give me a link or pick to an official metadata source?

Reference shall be:

SPOILER

Thanks!

Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2016-09-17T11:16:43+00:00

@Monstrata: Fixed everything

xd

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64,264,147844,2,0,P|64:208|68:152,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,48,148255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,112,148460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,148666,6,0,L|328:36,7,56.25,0|0|0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,72,149488,2,0,L|440:72,7,56.25,0|0|0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,156,150310,38,0,L|336:152,3,56.25
304,188,150721,2,0,L|224:188,3,56.25,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,148,151132,2,0,L|148:144,3,56.25,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,180,151543,2,0,L|36:180,3,56.25,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,144,151954,22,0,P|53:61|214:91,1,270
244,196,153770,2,0,P|292:208|400:144,1,180
228,0,155675,2,0,L|236:276,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,360,157468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,157985,12,2,160115,0:0:0:0:
256,192,161712,12,0,169893,0:0:0:0:

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2016-09-28T08:27:35+00:00

Aaah, forgot about this, sorry! Here's your bubble lol.

pishifat

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pishifat 2016-12-29T23:50:28+00:00

tfw you post a mod on the wrong map

hardest diff
01:26:200 (1,2) - 1/6 tho
02:02:365 (1) - this buildup is balls lol. like you doubled sv before the song changned, tehn when the song does change at 02:05:652 (1) - it's the exact smae

can you like make it scale better or something
01:19:830 (2,3) - 01:21:474 (2,3) - 01:23:118 (1,2) - cant hear feedback cuz of the cymbal crash right before this zzz
the 20% is okay for 01:20:139 (5) - onwards, but like right after each crash, should increase it to compensate

jinx
the hitsound and snapping stuff above applies here too
02:34:761 - why the 5% volume when every other vocal like this is 30%

hard
same as jinx
01:36:474 (8,9) - what are you following lolz the bass drum thing is like https://i.gyazo.com/56ee9921ae0ed6b6990 ... 66dee0.png

advanced
same hitsound/snapping things from highest diff
00:53:324 (1,3) - 02:07:091 (3,1) - could easily be neater:(

normal
if you're ognna have a normal as the lowest diff, density is gonna need to be lower

id rather not be vague about it, so like the easiest way to do this would be to change consecutive 1/2 sliders into consecutive 1/1 circles or somethingelselessdense. so like 01:05:652 (5,6) - 01:09:762 (1,2) - 01:12:228 (3,4) - 02:03:597 (3,4,5) - these
and a similar thing for the long chains of 1/2 objects at 01:52:502 (1) - like zzz. basically inserting gaps cuz scrubs need breaks
(or you could make an easy, but what i recommended is pretty ez to adjust)

when ur ready ill take a look again!!

neonat

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neonat 2017-01-17T17:55:30+00:00

pishifat wrote:
tfw you post a mod on the wrong map

hardest diff
01:26:200 (1,2) - 1/6 tho ok
02:02:365 (1) - this buildup is balls lol. like you doubled sv before the song changned, tehn when the song does change at 02:05:652 (1) - it's the exact smae can you like make it scale better or something used 0.75x sv here instead then lol
01:19:830 (2,3) - 01:21:474 (2,3) - 01:23:118 (1,2) - cant hear feedback cuz of the cymbal crash right before this zzz
the 20% is okay for 01:20:139 (5) - onwards, but like right after each crash, should increase it to compensate increased it to 35

jinx
the hitsound and snapping stuff above applies here too
02:34:761 - why the 5% volume when every other vocal like this is 30%

hard
same as jinx
01:36:474 (8,9) - what are you following lolz the bass drum thing is like https://i.gyazo.com/56ee9921ae0ed6b6990 ... 66dee0.png

rhythm was changed

advanced
same hitsound/snapping things from highest diff
00:53:324 (1,3) - 02:07:091 (3,1) - could easily be neater:( ok, changed positions

normal
if you're ognna have a normal as the lowest diff, density is gonna need to be lower
id rather not be vague about it, so like the easiest way to do this would be to change consecutive 1/2 sliders into consecutive 1/1 circles or somethingelselessdense. so like 01:05:652 (5,6) - 01:09:762 (1,2) - 01:12:228 (3,4) - 02:03:597 (3,4,5) - these
and a similar thing for the long chains of 1/2 objects at 01:52:502 (1) - like zzz. basically inserting gaps cuz scrubs need breaks
(or you could make an easy, but what i recommended is pretty ez to adjust)

most of the longer consecutives were considered, density reduced

when ur ready ill take a look again!!

Thanks!

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-01-20T09:08:48+00:00

pishifat wrote:
hard
same as jinx

this included the 5% volume thing too lul

also u didnt respond to this

pishifat wrote:
advanced
same snapping things from highest diff

i can see using 1/4 as acceptable cuz a low diff with 1/6 is too mlg, so if you're keeping it for that reason, that's fine with me

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-01-21T01:31:15+00:00

^neonat changed the first thing and kept the second thing for the reason i said

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2017-02-13T05:59:02+00:00

General.
Can you make the black comco color a little brighter? Even I understand the concept of RWBY, using such a dark color didn't felt good along the dark BG.

Advanced.
01:13:460 - Clap.
02:37:468 (2) - grid left? even the snaps weren't 100% equal each, I don't think the current spacing would indicate that. Just using the same spacing would be better.

Hard.
02:06:885 (3) - spacing.

Insane.
01:27:844 - There's a strong sound here. Just starting the spinner without expressing this didn't felt natural to reflect the song.
01:46:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Can you use a bigger spacing on 1/2 please? Even the concept itself could make sense in this section, using an overlapped 1/2 along a 1/4 felt to be a lot confusing to happen.

neonat

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neonat 2017-02-13T17:37:26+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
General.
Can you make the black comco color a little brighter? Even I understand the concept of RWBY, using such a dark color didn't felt good along the dark BG.

Advanced.
01:13:460 - Clap.
02:37:468 (2) - grid left? even the snaps weren't 100% equal each, I don't think the current spacing would indicate that. Just using the same spacing would be better.

Hard.
02:06:885 (3) - spacing.

Insane.
01:27:844 - There's a strong sound here. Just starting the spinner without expressing this didn't felt natural to reflect the song.
01:46:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Can you use a bigger spacing on 1/2 please? Even the concept itself could make sense in this section, using an overlapped 1/2 along a 1/4 felt to be a lot confusing to happen.

Changes were made for all of them, thanks!

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2017-04-02T15:19:53+00:00

IRC mod

18:30 neonat: yeh
18:31 neonat: I updated it so it popped
18:31 neonat: sonny came after the bubble but just modded it in general
18:31 neonat: ok
18:33 neonat: p/5479097
18:40 *Kyubey is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/879243 Jeff Williams - Mirror Mirror [White Trailer] (Featuring Casey Lee Williams) [TestApple's Normal]]
18:40 Kyubey: 01:09:762 (1,2) - this hurts my eyes, make them symmetric please
18:41 Kyubey: 01:12:228 (3) - 1/2 repeating sliders with more than 1 repeat shouldn't appear in lower difficulties, they are not readable by beginners, change it
18:41 Kyubey: 01:22:913 (4) - i believe music requires NC here
18:42 Kyubey: 01:24:556 (1,3) - and those should be swapped as well
18:43 Kyubey: 01:45:926 (1) - i fail to understand why is this slider faster than sliders in 01:52:502 - this section when the part in music is more calm there
18:44 Kyubey: 02:21:269 (2,2) - this overlap is visually painful
18:45 *Kyubey is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/712985 Jeff Williams - Mirror Mirror [White Trailer] (Featuring Casey Lee Williams) [Advanced]]
18:46 Kyubey: 01:08:734 (5,6,1) - having visually same spacing between then will look much better
18:49 *Kyubey is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/712986 Jeff Williams - Mirror Mirror [White Trailer] (Featuring Casey Lee Williams) [Rtyzen's Hard]]
18:50 Kyubey: this diff has good visuals
18:50 Kyubey: 01:13:050 (1,3) - but this blanket could be better for that
18:50 Kyubey: ok visuals got worse later
18:51 Kyubey: 01:23:118 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - i just don't want what to say
18:51 Kyubey: it looks like 2010
18:52 Kyubey: could you try to change the pattern in some way to it won't at least have such a random shape? like adding 90° angles or something
18:52 Kyubey: it just breaks the visuals of the whole diff
18:54 neonat: I could add curves
18:54 Kyubey: you can make it look like 02:28:666 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
18:54 Kyubey: this pattern looks neat
18:55 Kyubey: just add some spaces like here, keep only one-two placement angle
18:55 Kyubey: if you're out of opinions i can edit that part myself
18:56 *Kyubey is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/712984 Jeff Williams - Mirror Mirror [White Trailer] (Featuring Casey Lee Williams) [Jinxy's Insane]]
18:57 Kyubey: 01:12:228 (1) - i understand it's an insane and it can have harder patterns but doublerepeats is just a painful pattern almost noone likes
18:57 Kyubey: it could be changed to two 1/2 sliders without making the map worse and making it more pleasant to play
18:59 Kyubey: 02:11:817 (9,1) - no reason to make such a low spacing for 1/1 gap when previously 1/2 patterns used the same spacing
19:00 Kyubey: probably turning the stream backwards could help
19:01 Kyubey: 02:23:734 (1) - doublerepeat again, could be changed into something more pleasant to play
19:02 Kyubey: 02:31:132 - adding a note here as well and moving the spinner 1/4 further would sound and play better
19:04 *Kyubey is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/712983 Jeff Williams - Mirror Mirror [White Trailer] (Featuring Casey Lee Williams) [Solitude]]
19:05 Kyubey: 02:05:652 (1,2) - using 1/1 sliders would follow vocals in more interesting way
19:05 Kyubey: 02:07:091 - and you could start a 1/1 slider here as well to follow the vocals again
19:05 Kyubey: 02:07:913 - and here
19:05 Kyubey: vocals are kinda dominant in this part
19:06 Kyubey: well, same goes for rest of part
19:06 Kyubey: thats all
19:07 Kyubey: will you reply or i can post it already?
19:10 neonat: well for the 1/1 vocals I find that emphasis on the instrumentals there are just as important too
19:11 Kyubey: it's just weird to follow vocals with sliders but still leave a repeat for instrumentals imo
19:11 Kyubey: following two layers in same pattern
19:16 neonat: if it's sliders like 02:07:296 (1) - they are following the violin
19:17 Kyubey: hm
19:17 neonat: the rest of the points I edited them
19:17 Kyubey: it's kinda unaudible for me
19:17 Kyubey: you mean the whole mod?
19:18 neonat: yeh
19:18 Kyubey: good, i'll post it then so it would be easier to recheck

Also, regarding title:

SPOILER

18:37:01 <Kyubey> so
18:37:03 <Kyubey> talked to kwan
18:37:10 <Kyubey> [White Trailer] should be deleted from title
18:37:25 <Kyubey> it's not needed, it's not a part of title and just a note about where the song appeared

neonat

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neonat 2017-04-02T15:21:50+00:00

Updated

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2017-04-02T15:33:41+00:00