Recheck[General]
Ranking Criteria states that if you use
non-standard slider velocity changes they
MUST be added in the beatmap description to advertise playhers the weird decimals some diffs manage.
[Easy]
I asked too many others BNs about the current size of the CS of this diff and we agreed
it should be, at least, 3. This goes to lead new players into a comfortable circle size that not confuse due the spacing this difficulty manages.
00:31:727 (1,2) - Despite you said: "
you weren't following vocals" the strong beats reside over the white ticks which should be emphasized to improve the rhythm. Ending the sliders on the red tick play a bit weird imo.
01:39:469 (1) - Remove NC here to have consistency with the way you managed the NC in this diff.[/list]
[Normal]
00:23:985 (8) - I still believe this object should have NC to keep consistency in the way you managed NC.
01:15:759 (4) - Ctrl + J to improve the flow in this segment.
01:31:001 (3,4) - I honestly believe starting the sliders in the red tick doesn't highlight properly the beats. Thus, it would be better if you kept consistency in the way the sliders started in the white tick throughout the kiai. Look how you placed the sliders over the kiai time
vsThis would have played better if you had done same here to don't break the way you built up the patterning on the start of the kiai. If the music and the instruments is the same through the kiai, what's the reason to make different rhythm flows? Consider doing an uniform rhythm in both kiais, this imply to give a look of these patterns. 00:52:292 (4,5) - 01:27:130 (3,4) - 01:31:001 (3,4) - [/list]
[Hard]
I'm honestly confused with the increasing of DS among the notes in the kiai. If there's no SV change, what's the reason of increasing the DS by 0.20x in the notes? It would be better if you increase the SV in the kiai to lead players the kiai will have bigger spacing and some harder patterns. Consider doing the same with both kiais.
[Arphimigon's For the Win!]
00:55:921 (3,4) -
http://puu.sh/m9jM5/7ecbe137da.png01:14:066 (5,6,1) - These should've been stacked as well as the upcoming triplets. Just for the sake of keeping consistency here.[/list]